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Nanahira - Petals [Taiko]

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iloveyou4ever
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018年5月31日 at 下午 11:15:58

Artist: Nanahira
Title: Petals
Tags: secretale confetto cametek camellia かめりあ
BPM: 192
Filesize: 8727kb
Play Time: 05:34
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Download: Nanahira - Petals
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Nanahira is LOVE❤

reason for dkdk and kddk 1/6
Though there're no such 1/6 sound at that part,my point is that the intensity of the song can support that.
And I want to emphasize and highlight the piano sound and make the map more challenging as that's the last part of the song,
putting 1/6 can show the progression as well as reflect the intensity of the music.
Kazaze
Really happy to help ~
IRC mod
12:10 iloveyou4ever: Hey,are you free to do irc mod >_< ?
12:10 iloveyou4ever: want some advices for consistency issue again/flow
12:11 Kazaze: Hey! Yes of course :3
12:11 iloveyou4ever: Thanks!!
12:11 iloveyou4ever: Let me submit the map first XD,just got supporter from my fds
12:11 Kazaze: oh c:
12:14 *iloveyou4ever is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1418603 Nanahira - Petals [Fragment]]
12:14 iloveyou4ever: Here it's
12:14 Kazaze: Another map with very long streams? :3
12:15 iloveyou4ever: short stream
12:15 iloveyou4ever: but with 1/6 burst
12:15 iloveyou4ever: (dddkkkkkkkd) 1/6 XD
12:15 iloveyou4ever: *dddkkkkkkd
12:16 Kazaze: Ok, I should be able to help a lot more than with your previous map I modded, where there was huuuuuge streams x)
12:17 iloveyou4ever: but this song is a bit faster than last song
12:17 iloveyou4ever: 192bpm
12:17 Kazaze: Change 00:03:582 (15) - to a d since it's lower pitched than the previous note and would emphasize 00:04:051 (16) -
12:18 Kazaze: it's fine :3
12:18 iloveyou4ever: hmm I think 00:03:113 (14,15,16) - have similar pitches
12:19 iloveyou4ever: tried changing it to d but sound a bit weird imo
12:20 Kazaze: 00:02:801 (12,13,14,15,16) - are all k and it could bring some variation though
12:20 Kazaze: changing 00:02:801 (12) - to a d could work too
12:21 iloveyou4ever: yeah you're right
12:21 iloveyou4ever: changed!
12:21 Kazaze: don't forget to change 00:07:801 (34) - too :3
12:23 Kazaze: I feel like something is missing on 00:25:301 - ; I would recommand moving 00:24:988 (83) - to 00:25:301 -
12:24 iloveyou4ever: changed 00:07:801 - too
12:25 iloveyou4ever: I map to piano sound here but I don't think 00:25:301 - is so obvious
12:25 Kazaze: A 5 note 1/2 piano "melody" clearly begins on 00:25:145 - so it would emphasize that
12:25 Kazaze: 00:25:301 - sounds just as loud to me as 00:25:145 (84) -
12:27 iloveyou4ever: hmm I have to think about that..
12:27 iloveyou4ever: I'll leave it first currently
12:27 Kazaze: Ok
12:31 Kazaze: what are you following here exactly? 03:09:051 (294,295,296) - I don't feel like it fits anything really
12:32 iloveyou4ever: following drum+piano
12:33 iloveyou4ever: I feel strange when I follow only one of the elements,so I follow both
12:33 Kazaze: Oh I see now ok
12:33 iloveyou4ever: the part sucks in your opinion?
12:33 iloveyou4ever: or unclear
12:33 iloveyou4ever: if yes,please tell me o.o
12:33 Kazaze: I was only focusing on the drums here and didn't understand why it was that way
12:34 Kazaze: lol i don't know I would personally focus on the drums here, so 03:09:051 (294) - change to d and remove 03:09:363 (296) -
12:35 Kazaze: felt pretty weird when I first saw this part, but maybe it's just maybe
12:35 Kazaze: me*
12:35 iloveyou4ever: but I feel strange if 03:09:363 - has space
12:35 iloveyou4ever: that'll leave a 3/2 space there
12:36 iloveyou4ever: but the music is progressing
12:36 iloveyou4ever: leaving a space doesn't fit the music imo
12:36 Kazaze: yeah it's pretty weird
12:37 Kazaze: just change 03:09:051 (294) - to a d then so it highlights the drums better
12:37 iloveyou4ever: I'll ask for others' opinion about this part cuz I am a little bit confused
12:37 iloveyou4ever: too
12:37 Kazaze: ok x)
12:37 iloveyou4ever: hmm would it be better to change 03:09:676 - to d instead?
12:37 iloveyou4ever: a bit bored 03:08:426 (291,292,293,294,295,296) - dkd dkd
12:38 Kazaze: that's a good compromise
12:39 iloveyou4ever: ok then I'll change in that way!
12:40 Kazaze: ok! keep an eye on that part, maybe it can be even more improved
12:40 iloveyou4ever: yeah
12:42 iloveyou4ever: I removed 05:16:316 - this and changed 05:16:395 (590,591,592,593) - to ddkk btw
12:42 iloveyou4ever: also 05:13:582 (572,573,574,575,576) - to ddkkk for consistency
12:43 Kazaze: any reasons why 04:04:520 (2,3,4,5) - is k d k d and 04:09:520 (11,12,13,14) - is k k k d? these parts sound the same to me
12:44 iloveyou4ever: oh my mistake...
12:44 iloveyou4ever: it should be d k k k d fot both parts
12:44 iloveyou4ever: changed
12:44 Kazaze: 05:15:145 (582) - change to a k also?
12:44 Kazaze: I think it would just follow the piano pitch a bit better
12:45 iloveyou4ever: hmm keep to remain consistency for 00:21:395 -
12:45 Kazaze: or you could change on both :b
12:46 iloveyou4ever: keeping d here can emphasize outstanding high-pitched piano for 00:21:551 (63,67) -
12:47 Kazaze: both options work fine, no need for a change then :p
12:48 iloveyou4ever: oh wait
12:48 iloveyou4ever: changed a little bit
12:49 Kazaze: oh
12:49 iloveyou4ever: changed 05:20:145 - to k
12:49 Kazaze: works nicely
12:50 iloveyou4ever: 05:21:238 (617,618) - also invert these
12:50 iloveyou4ever: keep consistency again
12:50 Kazaze: nice nice
12:51 Kazaze: I'm afraid that's all I have to suggest
12:51 iloveyou4ever: nothing about the stream or other issues?
12:52 iloveyou4ever: not pushing you XD
12:53 Kazaze: I didn't really check the streams in details but looks fine to me, the kiai time follow a structure
12:53 Kazaze: Looks fine to me :3
12:54 Kazaze: I would probably only have minor suggestions for the streams if I really looked into it but I'm not sure if it is necessary at all :b
12:54 iloveyou4ever: working on minor stuffs is enough :D
12:55 iloveyou4ever: I'll leave the stream to skilled players
12:55 Kazaze: yeah xD
12:55 Kazaze: hope I helped anyway :>
yuzu__rinrin
hi~ M4M req from my queue.

[Fragment]
  1. 01:03:895 (66) - k
    vocal pitch.
    and 01:01:082 (60,61,62) - consistency color.

  2. 01:15:457 (18) - delete
    Especially there is no sound.
    01:15:145 (17,19) - It is better to arrange this vocal consciously.

  3. 01:20:457 (32) - ^ same as.

  4. 01:25:145 (47) - d
  5. 01:28:113 (61,62) - ctrl+g
    01:23:895 (43,45,47,50,53,56,58,62) - It is possible to colorize with consciousness of Drum which has a constant rhythm.

  6. 02:29:988 (516,517,518) - kkd
    02:30:145 (518) - bass Drum, 02:29:988 (516,517) - vocal long tone, 02:30:301 (519) - high tone sound.
    I think there are quite a few advantages.

  7. 03:08:426 (291,292,293,294,295,296) -
    for example,
    line 03:08:738 -




    03:08:738 - 03:08:816 - 03:08:895 - triplet sound here,
    03:09:051 (296,297) - 296 drum, 297 Strong hat sound. d-k is better.

  8. 03:10:066 - add k,
    hat sound here.

  9. 04:47:488 (337,338,339,340) - ddk(1/4)
    why 1/6? There is no sound similar to that.

  10. 04:57:488 (447,448,449,450) - kdk(1/4)
    ^ same as
overall good.
nice song, good luck Ranked~ :3
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

hi~ M4M req from my queue.

[Fragment]
  1. 01:03:895 (66) - k
    vocal pitch.
    and 01:01:082 (60,61,62) - consistency color.
    but it has similar pitches as 01:02:332 (63,64) -
  2. 01:15:457 (18) - delete
    Especially there is no sound.
    01:15:145 (17,19) - It is better to arrange this vocal consciously.

  3. 01:20:457 (32) - ^ same as.
    both deleted,also deleted 01:19:520 -
  4. 01:25:145 (47) - d
    hmm quite personal,but I prefer keeping as d
  5. 01:28:113 (61,62) - ctrl+g
    ok!
    01:23:895 (43,45,47,50,53,56,58,62) - It is possible to colorize with consciousness of Drum which has a constant rhythm.

  6. 02:29:988 (516,517,518) - kkd

    02:30:145 (518) - bass Drum, 02:29:988 (516,517) - vocal long tone, 02:30:301 (519) - high tone sound.
    I think there are quite a few advantages.
    I see your points,but I am focusing on outstanding sound effects like 02:29:832 (512,515,516,519,520) - to make it more variate
    remap this part myself instead
  7. 03:08:426 (291,292,293,294,295,296) -
    for example,
    line 03:08:738 -




    03:08:738 - 03:08:816 - 03:08:895 - triplet sound here,
    03:09:051 (296,297) - 296 drum, 297 Strong hat sound. d-k is better.

  8. 03:10:066 - add k,
    hat sound here.
    yeah that's good but it'll have higher note density compared to 03:12:645 - this part,which I think it's not suitable as the music is getting more and more intense
  9. 04:47:488 (337,338,339,340) - ddk(1/4)
    why 1/6? There is no sound similar to that.

  10. 04:57:488 (447,448,449,450) - kdk(1/4)
    ^ same as
yeah but the intensity of the music supports that imo,I try to overmap a bit for this because I want to highlight the outstanding piano sound

overall good.
nice song, good luck Ranked~ :3
Thanks for modding :) will mod yours tmr
Ozu

iloveyou4ever wrote:

Nanahira is LOVE❤
Cinnamon_54
Hello

00:50:145 (34) - change to d,low sound effect
01:05:770 - here i think should add a spinner,01:08:270 - you have spinner too.or delete both for rest
01:23:895 (40) - add finisher,the drum sound is higher
02:37:176 (12) - delete?i heard no sound here,and be more easy to play
03:09:051 (294) - change to d,same as 03:08:426 (291) -
03:10:145 (300,301,302,303) - ddkk?
03:11:551 (307) - d
03:45:770 (6,7,8,9) - d d kk,follow the vocal sound
03:55:770 (25,26,27,28) - ^
04:13:895 (18) - finisher
04:23:426 (87) - delete,reason same as above
04:26:863 (123) - d?
04:47:488 (339,340,341,342) - kkkk

i suck,gl for rank. :)
davidminh0111
Hello ily4, from discord DM:

[Fragment]
01:08:270: I don't think this spinner fit the music, delete it pls

01:13:270: How about ddk?

01:28:113 (58, 59): Ctrl + G? Plays better imo. 01:28:270 Pitch is high

01:32:020: Pitch is high, change to k

01:36:863: Change to k to make this flow better

01:59:441: Move to 01:59:598 to emphasize better

02:16:707: No melody here, delete?

03:09:051: dkd? Because 03:09:051 has a stronger and lower pitch

04:47:488: kkdk?

Good luck ily4. :)
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

Consified wrote:

Hello

00:50:145 (34) - change to d,low sound effect
01:05:770 - here i think should add a spinner,01:08:270 - you have spinner too.or delete both for rest fixed!
01:23:895 (40) - add finisher,the drum sound is higher beat is not strong enough imo
02:37:176 (12) - delete?i heard no sound here,and be more easy to play
03:09:051 (294) - change to d,same as 03:08:426 (291) -
03:10:145 (300,301,302,303) - ddkk? ok!
03:11:551 (307) - d
03:45:770 (6,7,8,9) - d d kk,follow the vocal sound
03:55:770 (25,26,27,28) - ^
04:13:895 (18) - finisher
04:23:426 (87) - delete,reason same as above
04:26:863 (123) - d?
04:47:488 (339,340,341,342) - kkkk

i suck,gl for rank. :)

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello ily4, from discord DM:

[Fragment]
01:08:270: I don't think this spinner fit the music, delete it pls ok!

01:13:270: How about ddk?

01:28:113 (58, 59): Ctrl + G? Plays better imo. 01:28:270 Pitch is high following drum here,not the vocal

01:32:020: Pitch is high, change to k want to emphasize clap sound on 01:31:707 (84,92) -

01:36:863: Change to k to make this flow better

01:59:441: Move to 01:59:598 to emphasize better

02:16:707: No melody here, delete? there's drum sound here

03:09:051: dkd? Because 03:09:051 has a stronger and lower pitch

04:47:488: kkdk?

Good luck ily4. :)
no reply or red comment=no change(no reply=subjective things and I'll rather keep it)
Thanks for modding dogsified and david :)
Cinnamon_54
TAKE MY STAR BAKA4EVER :)
[R]
yo

[Fragment]
00:20:457 - move 00:20:613 - sounds more fit here
01:53:348 - change kat, its a bit hard to hit at this point
02:57:098 - ^
03:00:926 - add note, the 3/4 break feels sudden
03:01:629 - delete ?
03:36:980 - maybe just snap in 1/4 blue tick
03:36:941 - the spiner should end 03:42:957 - as the melody stop here
04:57:488 - kddk change kkkd

that's all from me
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

[R] wrote:

yo

[Fragment]
00:20:457 - move 00:20:613 - sounds more fit here nice!
01:53:348 - change kat, its a bit hard to hit at this point ok
02:57:098 - ^ ^
03:00:926 - add note, the 3/4 break feels sudden add d here
03:01:629 - delete ? emm keep because there's sfx
03:36:980 - maybe just snap in 1/4 blue tick hmm I want to fit the vocal
03:36:941 - the spiner should end 03:42:957 - as the melody stop here I want to make a rest for fade out vocal
04:57:488 - kddk change kkkd hmm keep

that's all from me
Thanks for modding [R] :)
_yu68
Hello~ sorry to be late><

mod
[Fragment]
  1. 00:10:145 (1) - change to D? Not feeling very much the height of the pitch, it might be better to map as a heavy sound.
  2. 00:32:645 (1) - This could be mapped gracenote for consistency with 00:35:145 (3,4,5) - 00:37:645 (8,9,10,11) - .
  3. 00:55:223 - add 1/4 dd like as 00:50:145 (34,35,36) - ?
  4. 01:31:707 (84) - 01:31:707 (84) - change to k? there are same sounds as 01:32:645 (96,98,99) - etc
  5. 01:36:941 (137,138,139) - change to kkk? The kick at 01:37:176 (140) - would be emphasized.
  6. 01:46:941 (226,227,228) - ^
  7. 01:42:098 (182) - change to k? same reason as the above
  8. 01:52:098 (273) - ^
  9. From 02:13:895 - to 02:17:332 -

    • Considering that part from 02:17:645 - is following drums, it's weird a bit to follow vocals here.
    1. 02:14:520 (451) - move to 02:14:207 - ?
    2. 02:14:676 - add 1/2 dk?
    3. 02:15:613 - add k?
    4. 02:17:332 (458) - move to 02:17:176 - ?
  10. About 1/6 ddkkkkkkkd, Because it's demanding enough due to the density, I think that you can change 02:37:280 (14) - to d and make the rhythm easier to understand.
  11. 04:23:530 (89) - ^
  12. 02:45:066 (93) - remove to represent the vocal at 02:44:988 - ?
  13. 03:08:738 (294,295) - ctrl+g to fit d to the kicks?
  14. 03:09:676 (298) - change to d? same reason as the above
  15. 03:11:551 (308) - 03:12:176 (315) - 03:12:488 (318) - ^
  16. 03:36:980 (403) - move to 03:37:020 - ? Judging from waveform of the song, this note is misplaced out of the vocal.

Good luck for approval! :3
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

_yu68 wrote:

Hello~ sorry to be late><

mod
[Fragment]
  1. 00:10:145 (1) - change to D? Not feeling very much the height of the pitch, it might be better to map as a heavy sound.
    ok!
  2. 00:32:645 (1) - This could be mapped gracenote for consistency with 00:35:145 (3,4,5) - 00:37:645 (8,9,10,11) - . the sound effects seem to be like 1/8,but I don't want to map it as 1/8 here...so no change :3
  3. 00:55:223 - add 1/4 dd like as 00:50:145 (34,35,36) - ? ok!
  4. 01:31:707 (84) - 01:31:707 (84) - change to k? there are same sounds as 01:32:645 (96,98,99) - etc it already was?
  5. 01:36:941 (137,138,139) - change to kkk? The kick at 01:37:176 (140) - would be emphasized. yeah I see your point but seems it violates my mapping style. I want to emphasize 01:37:488 (142) - instead of the kick,that's why I put all d in between. The things we want to emphasize are different in this case,so rejected sorry :c
  6. 01:46:941 (226,227,228) - ^
  7. 01:42:098 (182) - change to k? same reason as the above
  8. 01:52:098 (273) - ^ same
  9. From 02:13:895 - to 02:17:332 -

    • Considering that part from 02:17:645 - is following drums, it's weird a bit to follow vocals here.
    1. 02:14:520 (451) - move to 02:14:207 - ?
    2. 02:14:676 - add 1/2 dk?
    3. 02:15:613 - add k?
    4. 02:17:332 (458) - move to 02:17:176 - ?
    but seems the drum starts at 02:16:395 - instead of 02:13:895 (450) - ,there're no drum sound for 02:13:895 (450) - to 02:16:395 - ,I also tried your suggestion,but the hitsound doesn't fit...I'll ask for others tho :D
  10. About 1/6 ddkkkkkkkd, Because it's demanding enough due to the density, I think that you can change 02:37:280 (14) - to d and make the rhythm easier to understand.
  11. 04:23:530 (89) - ^ Let me ask BNs about this part...
  12. 02:45:066 (93) - remove to represent the vocal at 02:44:988 - ? ok!
  13. 03:08:738 (294,295) - ctrl+g to fit d to the kicks? mapped to piano here
  14. 03:09:676 (298) - change to d? same reason as the above same as above
  15. 03:11:551 (308) - 03:12:176 (315) - 03:12:488 (318) - ^ map to the outstanding ''clap'' sfx for 03:11:551 (307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319) - ,that's why I put most of them as d
  16. 03:36:980 (403) - move to 03:37:020 - ? Judging from waveform of the song, this note is misplaced out of the vocal. I tried but I hit too early if I move this note,but I'll ask others tho!

Good luck for approval! :3
Thanks for modding :)
TKS
hihi

[ General]
  1. delete some unnecessary green sections like 01:33:348 - 01:33:504 - 01:33:582 - ...
  2. metadata is fine as it is. maybe add C91 (also comiket 91 comic market), its up to you.
[ Fragment]
  1. 01:37:098 (139) - this one should be changed to k to emphasize the bassdrum sound in the same way as 01:35:848 (127) -
  2. 01:42:254 (184) - ^ same as above.
  3. 01:47:098 (228) - ^ also the same, however it may be a bit boring so you can fix in your own way. well i will omit the same suggestion anymore.
  4. 01:38:113 (148,149) - swap them to follow the bell sound correctly.
  5. 02:13:191 (442) - remove this? not bad pattern but its quite long even though this part is not a chorus part.
  6. 02:29:441 (508) - , 02:30:613 (517) - remove them to make some rest because here is a bit calm part. works well to also emphasize 02:31:395 - ~ by adding notes gradually.
  7. 02:37:228 (13) - fakku you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  8. 02:59:754 (230) - hihat sound is really quiet. remove this one or more nerf.
  9. 03:43:895 - ~ 04:01:395 - i think that you should change how to use don sound in this part because its really, really quiet part so you could focus on kat sound here.
    e.g. 03:46:395 (7) - d, 03:46:863 (8) - k, 03:52:020 (19) - k, 03:56:863 (27,28) - k, 03:58:582 (30) - k, 03:59:207 (32) - k
  10. 04:23:478 (88) - xxxlish

nice DnB mapping.
i hope that my mod helpful.
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

TKS wrote:

hihi

[ General]
  1. delete some unnecessary green sections like 01:33:348 - 01:33:504 - 01:33:582 - ... I use 1.005x/1.015x sth like this,but the timing panel only appears 1.01x/1.02x,but actually there're slightly sv changes
  2. metadata is fine as it is. maybe add C91 (also comiket 91 comic market), its up to you. I think it's only the event name,no need to put.
[ Fragment]
  1. 01:37:098 (139) - this one should be changed to k to emphasize the bassdrum sound in the same way as 01:35:848 (127) - ok
  2. 01:42:254 (184) - ^ same as above. instead change 01:42:098 -
  3. 01:47:098 (228) - ^ also the same, however it may be a bit boring so you can fix in your own way. well i will omit the same suggestion anymore. ok!
  4. 01:38:113 (148,149) - swap them to follow the bell sound correctly. ok!
  5. 02:13:191 (442) - remove this? not bad pattern but its quite long even though this part is not a chorus part. emm I prefer keep to express the intensity of the sfx here
  6. 02:29:441 (508) - , 02:30:613 (517) - remove them to make some rest because here is a bit calm part. works well to also emphasize 02:31:395 - ~ by adding notes gradually. wtf lol,awesome suggestion!
  7. 02:37:228 (13) - fakku you!!!!!!!!!!!!!! say something plssssssss
  8. 02:59:754 (230) - hihat sound is really quiet. remove this one or more nerf. removed
  9. 03:43:895 - ~ 04:01:395 - i think that you should change how to use don sound in this part because its really, really quiet part so you could focus on kat sound here.
    e.g. 03:46:395 (7) - d, 03:46:863 (8) - k, 03:52:020 (19) - k, 03:56:863 (27,28) - k, 03:58:582 (30) - k, 03:59:207 (32) - k apply few,will check later!
  10. 04:23:478 (88) - xxxlish sky

nice DnB mapping.
i hope that my mod helpful. MAPPING LEGEND
Thanks for modding TKS :)
Todotrucks
:o Nice map :3
Here is my modding
SPOILER
  • delete 00:16:082 (31) -
    add k on 00:16:395
    change 00:16:551 (33) - to d
    delete 00:16:707 (34) -
    change 00:16:551 (33) - to d
    delete 00:16:707 (34) -
    delete 00:17:176 (35) -
    00:19:832 (48,49,50,51,52) - this sounds good but music is still 1/2, I don't know if you wan't to keep it
    00:20:457 add d
    change 00:21:395 (58) - to k
    00:22:645 (66) - ^
    00:23:738 (71,72) - ctrl + g
    change 00:24:363 (75) - to k
    00:24:676 (77,78) - ctrl + g
    delete 00:24:988 (79) -
    00:25:301 (80) - add k
    change 00:25:613 (82) - to k
    delete 00:25:770 (83,84,85) -
    00:27:645 (91) - ctrl + g
    00:28:270 add d
All this are just suggestions, what you accept or reject is up to you
I've loved the map :3 good luck with getting it ranked :D
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

Thousand wrote:

:o Nice map :3
Here is my modding
SPOILER
  • delete 00:16:082 (31) -
    add k on 00:16:395
    change 00:16:551 (33) - to d
    delete 00:16:707 (34) -
    change 00:16:551 (33) - to d
    delete 00:16:707 (34) -
    delete 00:17:176 (35) -
    00:19:832 (48,49,50,51,52) - this sounds good but music is still 1/2, I don't know if you wan't to keep it
    00:20:457 add d
    change 00:21:395 (58) - to k
    00:22:645 (66) - ^
    00:23:738 (71,72) - ctrl + g
    change 00:24:363 (75) - to k
    00:24:676 (77,78) - ctrl + g
    delete 00:24:988 (79) -
    00:25:301 (80) - add k
    change 00:25:613 (82) - to k
    delete 00:25:770 (83,84,85) -
    00:27:645 (91) - ctrl + g
    00:28:270 add d
All this are just suggestions, what you accept or reject is up to you
I've loved the map :3 good luck with getting it ranked :D
Accept most of them!
Thanks for modding :)

*also change od to 6.3 and adjust +1ms offset
Marm
boo, mod from my queue.

petals
  1. 01:21:864 (34) - wouldn't this note be better at 01:21:708 - ? both covers a vocal note and drums but the note on the white line flows better with the previous and next notes.
tbh the map looks really good the way it is right now for me ._.

Sorry for the short mod (only 1 suggestion orz), I don't even know if kudosu is needed for that. get some stars from me woowoo wooo
Good luck on this map, I want to see it ranked soon c:
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

Marm wrote:

boo, mod from my queue.

petals
  1. 01:21:864 (34) - wouldn't this note be better at 01:21:708 - ? both covers a vocal note and drums but the note on the white line flows better with the previous and next notes.
emm but I am mapping to vocal here and the vocal sound is on 01:21:864 (34) -
tbh the map looks really good the way it is right now for me ._. Thanks!!!!!!!!

Sorry for the short mod (only 1 suggestion orz), I don't even know if kudosu is needed for that. get some stars from me woowoo wooo
Good luck on this map, I want to see it ranked soon c:
Thanks for modding and starsss :)
Axer
from my queue ~

smol mod because map too good already ;;
This map is already pretty solid and looks almost flawless, I love the structure and I have to say you have a very nice taste in music :^)

02:17:333 (458) - the beat you're trying to follow isn't there, move this d 02:17:177 - here, that's where the beat is. I also suggest this because you mapped 02:22:177 (476,477) - these two correctly.

03:25:614 (372) -This sound is too low to be mapped alone, I recommend moving the d to 03:25:458 -
You can also make it a dddk (1/3) like this:

And it follows the rhythm pretty well.

05:23:114 (628,629,630,631,632,633,634,635,636,637) - these would fit better as ddkkddkddk but changing it means algo changing 03:16:864 (339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348) - these ones

Very nice map, I love the 1/6 patterns, very smart decision to make them that way.
Again, very nice taste in music :^)
Good luck! :)
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