1. easy - 4Key (1.4 stars, 361 notes)
2. hard - 4Key (2.45 stars, 770 notes)
3. insane - 4Key (3.21 stars, 922 notes)
4. normal - 4Key (2.04 stars, 654 notes)

FadillSan wrote:

NM req fro my queue~
Feel free to reject~
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Normal

01:46:754 (106754|2) - add note I'm avoiding these to focus vocals + lower normal density
01:54:496 (114496|2) - ^
01:57:076 (117076|2) - ^
01:59:657 (119657|2) - ^
02:01:109 (121109|2) - here too
03:25:786 (205786|2,205786|0) - should be triple adjusted pattern instead
03:26:431 (206431|3,206431|0,206431|1) - and this should be double imo this is way stronger + better finish

Hard

01:34:657 (94657|1) - move to 3 this is an intentional pattern
02:40:302 (160302|2) - double that sound alone isn't worth two, contrasting with other sounds
02:41:270 (161270|3) - ^
02:41:592 (161592|3) - ^
02:44:872 (164872|1) - unsnapped ? fix

Sorry just mod 2 diff...
Good Luck :3

atian540 wrote:

hii Sinnoh NM req from Illusionary Border Queue

free for reject
1|2|3|4

skip section is so loong,why you don't add note for that ?? i think add note is better,and you can add note for breaktime section

insane

PLEASE give a small reason as to why you think I should do each thing, it really improves your mod quality D:

1. 01:36:270 (96270|3) - col 3 i use jacks on this sound
2. 01:36:431 (96431|2) - col 1 i think it follows PR well
3. 01:49:496 (109496|0) - col 4 I don't know why this is going to improve, I personally think it's fine
4. 01:49:657 (109657|3) - col 2
5. 01:50:141 (110141|1,110463|1,110786|1,111109|1) - anchor maybe you can try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9078335 move 1-2 things to avoid jack
6. 02:39:980 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9078352 "ctrl-h this section for PR", imo flow is more important here
7. 02:54:818 - 3 note fix
8. 02:47:238 (167238|3,167399|3) - col 3 there's the bass thingy, so i'm using jack here
9. 02:47:721 (167721|2) - col 4 i prefer not having jacks after 3/4 slider, noticed 02:58:367 (178367|0) - was doing it so fix
10. 02:50:141 (170141|1) - ghost note ? general pitch has a shift on this snap

Hard

1. 01:42:076 (102076|2,102238|1) - move right why tho
2. 01:42:399 (102399|1,102560|0) - ctrl+J wut
3. 01:42:721 (102721|1) - col 1 ok just screenshot the pattern next time

sory short mod, i hope this helpful
Good Luck~

Abraxos wrote:

:eyes:

intentional tbh blame shiirn

keep in mind i mod without looking out for SVs or HS so youll have to keep that in mind

insane

few intro thoughts

01:22:560 - to 01:43:205 - i personally dont think this part really should include anything more than a jump (double)
just because the music itself is kinda snaking around at this point in time and to me, the triples feel a bit artificially forced
01:43:205 - past this point however you can hear a pretty obvious change in the music which to me indicates an increase in intensity so triples after this should work fine will probably apply, but at that point 1/4s and LNs are also introduced so might be a bit much

there are a lot of places where you can place down a few polyrhythms to vary things a little but idk if youre comfortable with it so ill just leave a few timing points here and there as a start yeah no
01:26:592 - sounds like rocks being thrown, think theyre on 1/6
01:29:657 - to 01:30:786 - sounds like the click of the mouse, think theyre also on 1/6
etc. etc.

you can definitely be more obnoxious with your wub bursts; theyre wubs for a reason after all
01:42:963 (102963|2,103044|1,103125|0) - could be 1/8 jacks or trills, ditch the LN trills are way cooler
01:53:286 (113286|2,113367|1,113447|0) - check this part again, p.sure its 1/6 after 01:53:367 - also ditch the LN again used a roll since 1/12
02:03:528 (123528|3,123609|2,123689|1,123770|0) - same as before, 1/8 stuff; you can also double at 02:03:689 - for emphasis on the gong sound yup

e.g.

if youre uncomfortable with the jacking then



is also viable (btw 02:03:850 - idk why this is tripled, no snare/crash so)

ok to the mod

01:30:947 (90947|3,91109|3,91270|3) - intentional? very
01:31:431 (91431|2) - you should put more emphasis on this part of this wub done

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01:32:238 (92238|0,92560|3) - seems a bit disingenuous to me:

1) 01:32:238 - should be tripled? yes
01:32:883 (92883|1,92883|0,92883|2) - somewhat get why this is tripled, but i don't believe it should cause ok fix

2) the music here kinda should be a break from your typical 1/4 shenanigans from before, so the LNs dont exactly cut it

would suggest removing 01:32:560 (92560|3) - 01:32:238 (92238|0) - and making 01:32:238 - a proper triple, and then stacking 01:32:399 (92399|2) - on it
01:32:721 - 01:32:560 - given how these basically have the same snare sound you can keep the stack apply all

now if you look (or hear same thing idc) closely at 01:32:721 - there's a pretty obvious sudden wub that you can capitalize on i'm a big boy i'll use the strong one

if you feel like the wub starts weak and tapers off strongly then you can probably do

if you feel like the wub itself already has enough impact the whole way (but ends just shy of the white tick) then you can probably do

and so on so forth, think you should get the logic here

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01:25:786 (85786|2,85786|3,85947|2) - its neat that you placed emphasis on the higher tone by stacking but
01:27:399 (87399|2,87560|1) - it died here sadly
you could possibly use a short LN just exclusively for that high pitched tone but idk thought id bring this up to you nah

&& 01:38:044 (98044|2,98689|2,99334|1) - these wouldve been fine if there werent other LNs emphasizing other things
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9084910 there are other ways to go about representing the sounds here, maybe you should look into that idk how though

01:44:334 (104334|2,104496|2) - not sure what this is for
01:45:463 (105463|0,105463|3) - doubled?
01:46:431 - should be tripled no
if you think 212 or 343s look ugly then try

this

01:47:076 (107076|0) - ditch the LN, theres so much more going on the music here that id prefer you focus on removed al lof them
01:47:076 - 01:47:399 - has those 1/8 hihats, which can be differentiated yes
01:48:205 - ending dense wub is left untouched too can't hear any wub D:

more stuff

if you look close the wub at 01:47:399 - utilizes only 1 hand while the other doesnt (and is easier to hit); i felt that the second 1/8 should deserve a bit more kick since its a little feistier than the last one applied

ending LN is for the wub, i didnt cut it like the one i mentioned beforehand because it now actually goes all the way

BTW if you chose to do the 1/8 stuff then 01:44:818 - 01:46:270 - look out for the other wubs outside that part to make sure what youre doing is actually consistent

01:48:367 (108367|3,109012|3,109657|0) - think you should know by now, you can very easily apply the old principle (&&) here and add on some more emphasis given how the music now gives those 1/8 hihat things

same applies for the next section, hope you now know what to do

breaktime is fine btw but reset the breaktime button in the section again pls the non-breaktime parts are too long

02:06:431 (126431|3,127076|2,127721|1,128367|0) - are you sure these exist idk i cant here them except for that echo which are all the same pitches

02:40:302 (160302|0,161270|0,161592|0) - why are these single

kiai--------------------------------------------------

first off id rather you keep to just tripling snares in this whole section, youll see why with the few things imma suggest

the kiai a little bit iffy to me, playability wise yeah the kiai is fine but

02:45:947 - 02:46:109 - 02:46:270 - if you look at these parts there are pretty succinct wubs on all three of them, but the pattern seems to be structured in such a way that it ignores the triplet somewhat

suggestion

id be perfectly fine if you were to at least take into account all of the wubs in question like so, and i feel like if 02:46:431 - wasnt a triple youd have a bit more creative freedom to do stuff to this part (and all other similar ones)
02:51:109 (171109|3,171270|0,171324|1,171377|2,171431|3) - this is something id be willing to accept, it gets the job done

02:47:076 (167076|3,167238|3,167399|3) - not quite sure why the wub is lumped together with the percussion, will assume its because its a victim of circumstance due to 02:47:721 - triple

02:48:044 - wub has a pretty defined wobble which you can use 1/8s to capture here oh god

02:59:980 - should be triple, dont be afraid of 1/8s its 93 bpm kk, can't really for second part unless 1/8 jack but can't with LN spams

03:05:141 (185141|1,185141|2,185141|0,185302|3,185463|1,185463|0,185463|2) - 03:04:496 (184496|2,184496|1,184496|3,184657|0,184818|1,184818|2,184818|3) - structurally speaking these are one and the same (only discernible difference is just the transition between these two structurally similar parts), and its easy to lose on the player what a triple is supposed to mean if you allow it to represent two different entities at the same time

i think the mod of the first part can very easily apply to the second, so ill leave you be for that then

ok im tired ill get back to you in 2 days i think i have another mod schedule idm if you kds or dont

1. 01:27:721 (87721|1,87721|3) - This seems to be the only time you have 2 notes on a normal kick besides for during the buildup here 01:31:592 (91592|0,91592|1) - so I think you should remove the note in 2
2. 02:39:980 (159980|0,160302|1,160625|3,160947|3,161270|0,161592|1,161915|3,162238|3) - This part seems weird, because the two ascending notes are represented with a jack and the two kicks are represented with ascending notes. I feel like you should change this so that 02:39:980 (159980|0,160302|1) - are both in 1 and 02:40:625 (160625|3,160947|3) - are in 3 and 4 to match the song (and same for 02:41:270 (161270|0,161592|1,161915|3,162238|3) )

1. 01:24:496 (84496|1,84496|0,84818|2) - At least to me, it sounds like there should be something in between here yet theres no note. (this applies to all of these parts) just imo
2. 03:05:786 (185786|3,185786|1,186109|0,186270|1,186431|0,186431|2) - Patterns like these might be a little too hard for people who play normals, but I think it might be okay

Ultima Fox wrote:

Hey!

First of all, you can add Blood Orange EP to the tags because that is the album the song is from added some tags

Just some quick thoughts on easy

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1. 01:27:721 (87721|1,87721|3) - This seems to be the only time you have 2 notes on a normal kick besides for during the buildup here 01:31:592 (91592|0,91592|1) - so I think you should remove the note in 2 fixed!
2. 02:39:980 (159980|0,160302|1,160625|3,160947|3,161270|0,161592|1,161915|3,162238|3) - This part seems weird, because the two ascending notes are represented with a jack and the two kicks are represented with ascending notes. I feel like you should change this so that 02:39:980 (159980|0,160302|1) - are both in 1 and 02:40:625 (160625|3,160947|3) - are in 3 and 4 to match the song (and same for 02:41:270 (161270|0,161592|1,161915|3,162238|3) ) woops meant to be other way around since i did that on other diffs lol

also on normal

1. 01:24:496 (84496|1,84496|0,84818|2) - At least to me, it sounds like there should be something in between here yet theres no note. (this applies to all of these parts) just imo if multiple people ask to add then i will then, had 1/1s to be better for spread
2. 03:05:786 (185786|3,185786|1,186109|0,186270|1,186431|0,186431|2) - Patterns like these might be a little too hard for people who play normals, but I think it might be okay I tried to keep roughly same density as this set https://osu.ppy.sh/b/778353

lol sorry for bad mod, but hope it helped thanks! clearly explained + all were valid points

1. I would definitely cut the MP3 to save a bit on file size. 1:21 minutes + 21 seconds = 1:42 total of no playing time, while we have 1:44 seconds of playing time.
2. Either map more or cut cause 50:50 ratio is pretty staggering

Botan wrote:

M4M Req: t/641620
columns: 0|1|2|3

1. I would definitely cut the MP3 to save a bit on file size. 1:21 minutes + 21 seconds = 1:42 total of no playing time, while we have 1:44 seconds of playing time.
2. Either map more or cut cause 50:50 ratio is pretty staggering

EZ01:31:270 (91270|2) - LN this. Would help add some kind of pause/bounce effect on 01:31:592 (91592|0,91592|1) I think it is okay to leave 01:31:431 empty since the sound happens only once during the intro and noting it along with this LN suggestion might be too hard. added LN
01:32:560 (92560|1) - I would use a single note here instead + a note 01:32:721 - to 1) match the structure 01:24:173 (84173|3,84334|2,84496|1,84496|0) and 2) to map that snare on the blue tick. first one ends on a clap, second one ends on a downbeat, adding note too dense for EZ + maps wub
01:38:689 - Add second note here for the claps. Example) 01:34:818 (94818|2,94818|3) Good idea, but here I wanted to focus horn more. Makes the LNs more distinct and better emphasis on the change at 01:41:270 (101270|1) -
01:39:657 - Add note
01:39:980 (99980|0) - Add second note here for the claps.
>>
01:29:334 (89334|3,89496|2,89657|0,89657|1) - Maybe have this one ascending and...
01:34:496 (94496|0,94657|1,94818|2,94818|3) - descending...
That way the 3 patterns will be --> descend, ascend, descend instead of descend, descend, ascend. good idea, changed first instead so ascend, descend, ascend
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01:37:883 - Note? fits but would mess with the horn emphasis i mentioned before
01:41:915 (101915|2) - Maybe make this an 1/1 LN for the rising synth? The synth is sidechained at 01:42:560 and then recovers at 01:42:883 so if we add the LN here it feels cool. fits, but compare how LNs are used, they're only on really unique sounds + horn
01:48:205 - Note? doesn't fit before large downbeat
01:50:947 (110947|1,110947|0,111270|3) - These both should be the same, either both chords or a single note. Take your pick. one has the horn, they aren't the same
01:58:528 - Note? in future mods, just paste the timestamp like this below
(not a mod) 01:37:883 - 01:48:205 - 01:58:528 - takes less space since it's the same thing + easier for both people to read
02:03:850 - Personally, and I don't play mania so I don't know if it's acceptable or not, but I'd use a really long ass LN here for the entire break section. xD lmao no
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03:10:141 - How about this? https://imgur.com/a/EJ16D 1/4 LN is too much for ez
02:49:496 and 03:10:141 are mapped differently. yea noticed i missed a note on the snare with previous point
I would do my suggestion because I don't believe the LN 03:10:302 (190302|0) works best for that particular moment and also 2-note chord to represent the snare.

NM01:26:109 - Would it be too weird to put a 1/2 LN here for that air noise? nah, some might but personal style I only like to follow the clearest melody
01:36:431 - Same as ^
01:32:560 - What's the difference between this and 01:42:883 for the first one to not have an LN? used a jack in first one to follow drum, adding LN would be too much for NM. In second there is no drum, so I used two LN to highligh the wub sound
01:45:786 (105786|0) - Shouldn't one of these be an LN? Example) 01:45:786 (105786|0) - 01:48:367 (108367|3) - 01:50:947 (110947|2) yea missed those lul, ty
01:51:592 - One of these should be an LN, whistle sound whistle isn't dominant yet
01:51:915 - LN, whistle sound
02:03:850 - Same as EZ
03:15:463 (195463|3) - No LN needed here. Every LN in the kiai so far have either been strings or squelchy bass thingy, this is neither of them. changed pattern to be same as other one

Good luck. will finish up your mod soon, thank you!

Weber wrote:

respond to THIS *unzips mod very soon*

11 days ago

Litharrale wrote:

Weber wrote:

respond to THIS *unzips mod very soon*

11 days ago

Not gonna check SVs because I'm assuming you've already averaged them and got them under control. They play fine, kiai is a bit weird but meh

Your offsets negative, don't do this. Bubbles get popped because of this no they don't

Leaving the first third of the song unmapped is kind of weird. I get why you did it and it's not against the RC because it's the intro but it's still weird. Adds almost 2MB to the folder size which is pretty significant for poor connections like me. You could easily cut out the first 60 seconds and start it where the quiet section is around 1:05

Some hitsound inconsistencies between diffs for example here, also don't double hitsound like this fixed

softclap.wav blends in way too much with the song. I can barely hear it at all when it's used and I generally have my effects volume pretty high up. Swap it out for something a little more noticeable replaced with a higher pitched/louder version

Tags conflict between diffs fixed

Not sure why there's an .osb when there's no storyboard i don't think there's one, but it's gone

There's a nosv.osu in the folder which is not visible in game, no idea how this happened but it needs to go. Plop it in the map description or something also gone

Hitsounds in general are very simplistic. For example 01:37:399 (97399|2) - a very different sound here but only the basic clap is used and is hence pretty much invisible this is drum-hitclap, all others are soft-hitclap

Some weird hitsound choices that i'm not sure are intentional or not (for the insane) you swap to the second soft sample set at 2:24:657 and then proceed to use whistles randomly despite them having no hitsound file attached to them, so it's just a blank sound which is definitely unrankable. As far as I can tell this is the only time you use the second sampleset and I dont know why its included. i'm using the default soft-hitwhistle

drum-hitclap.wav seems to be unused, remove it. it's used for the whole kiai

Not going to delve into the patterns because I think this is toodeepforme. Lots of ghost notes like 02:49:980 (169980|1,170141|1) - (in the insane) that dont make much sense at all. there's a really audible sound on that

Seems like a solid map that's had a lot of thought put into the patterning but not much else. most of those "not much else" issues are addressed here though so it's not a difficult fix. Good luck!