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nameless x toa - Patchwork Staccato

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victorfernando
292 posts
Joined October 2016
Topic Starter
victorfernando
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on quarta-feira, 15 de agosto de 2018 at 01:50:30

Artist: nameless x toa
Title: Patchwork Staccato
Source: 初音ミク -Project DIVA- X
Tags: Japanese Pop とあ toa Tsugihagi nameless patchwork staccato victorfernando Sandrew Marianna Bariton MkGuh tv edit 212
BPM: 139
Filesize: 10504kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bariton's Insane (3,11 stars, 185 notes)
  2. Insane (3,45 stars, 230 notes)
  3. Marianna's Winter (3,76 stars, 266 notes)
  4. Mk's Normal (1,61 stars, 100 notes)
  5. Sandrew's Hard (2,33 stars, 167 notes)
Download: nameless x toa - Patchwork Staccato
Download: nameless x toa - Patchwork Staccato (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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That was my first map thanks for the help <3
Metadata
Title: ツギハギスタッカート
Romanised Title: Patchwork Staccato
Source:初音ミク -Project DIVA- X
title: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm23827894
romanised title: http://karent.jp/album/1580 (official release of song on an english webpage, just the feat miku stuff wouldn't be included since this isn't miku's version obviously).
source field: http://miku.sega.jp/ http://info.miku.sega.jp/category/x/page/7
this song is not the original cover that nameless uploaded on niconico , it's a new cover which is used in toa x nameless's album named "212" http://mikudb.moe/album/212/
it's the 4th track
and here is its official website: http://www.subcul-rise.jp/nameless_toa/212

Redownload 12/08/2018
Last edited by victorfernando , edited 128 times in total.
Sandrew
543 posts
Joined March 2014
Sandrew
really like this song, can I make a gd? enh any diff is ok :)
victorfernando
292 posts
Joined October 2016
Topic Starter
victorfernando

Sandrew wrote:

really like this song, can I make a gd? enh any diff is ok :)
of course <3
Mekki
1,794 posts
Joined November 2014
Mekki
great!
Cheri
1,770 posts
Joined November 2014
Cheri
k NM from my q (if ya wanna drop 1 or 2 suggestions https://osu.ppy.sh/s/675527 (modv2) on this map that would be awesome but ya don't have to)

  • Insane
  1. 00:30:144 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I think this jumpy part need to have slightly reduce spacing imo since this is part of the song is quite calm imo compare to the kiai
  2. 00:40:504 (2,3,4,5) - same ^
  3. 00:57:878 (2) - I don't see why this is a 1/4 slider since there isn't any noticable sound here 00:57:878 - so I suggest remove both 00:57:770 (1,2) - and just make this part a 1/2 slider starting at 00:57:770 -
  4. 00:58:418 (2) - this beat is stronger along with the vocals than 00:58:634 (3) - so I suggest giving it higher spacing and while we at it give (3) lower to give (2) more emphasis
  5. 00:59:497 (3) - there is also a strong note so give it more distance to show that
  6. 01:01:547 (2) - 01:01:979 (4) - 01:02:411 (6) - all of these have no beat to support them (not the vocals either since the vocals hold out from 01:01:439 (1) - to 01:01:763 - ,here 01:01:871 - to 01:02:195 - , etc if you were trying to follow them) I suggest remove them and think of a different pattern

  • Marianna's Winter
  1. 00:30:144 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - since this is focusing on a different sound - I think it is fair if it was down a bit away from this pattern
    00:29:497 (5,6,7) -
    didn't find anything else
Bariton's Insane
[*]I don't hear a sound here and I didn't see the other diffs map this either - May just be me though so it might be fine
wow I failed didn't even put the timestamp of what I was talking about so just ignore -.-


  • Sandrew's Hard
  1. 00:05:972 (1) - think this would flow better like this https://imgur.com/a/jBDao (if ya use this - oh course you will need to reblanket with this 00:06:619 (2) - and this is minor if ya don't change)
K I hope I was of any help - GL :)

Gave a star!
Last edited by Cheri , edited 1 time in total.
Bariton
296 posts
Joined October 2012
Bariton

Insane


00:06:619 (2,3) - essas notas tão tipo MUITO longes uma da outra pra uma parte tão lenta da música
00:03:166 (2,3) - essa curva deixa o spacing entre o círculo e o slider muito pequeno e vc faz isso várias vezes durante a música tipo aqui 00:11:152 (2,3) - e eu acho que não é muito bom ter um spacing tão pequeno seguido de um jump
00:17:411 - tem um som importante aqui
00:24:317 - ^
00:28:418 - ^ não ignora a strong beat da música
00:26:907 (1) - esse kickslider pode ser substituído por um circle
00:30:144 - a partir daqui era pra ser a sessão mais "calma" da música mas vc usa um spacing muito alto tipo aqui 00:30:144 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
00:45:792 (6,7,8) - VITO PRA QUE ISSO overmap fudido >:(
00:57:878 (2) - transforma esse kickslider num circle no red tick (no caso aqui 00:57:986 - )
01:02:734 (1,2,3) - redução muito repentina de spacing, pode confundir o player
tem umas partes da música que tão meio overmappadas (cof cof 01:01:439 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - )
also deixa o AR 8,5 - 8,7 pq 9 tá muito alto pra 139 BPM

Marianna's Winter


AR 9,2 tá muito alto, acho que 9 seria o ideal!! (eu provavelmente vou moddar essa diff depois)
victorfernando
292 posts
Joined October 2016
Topic Starter
victorfernando

Bariton wrote:

Insane


00:06:619 (2,3) - essas notas tão tipo MUITO longes uma da outra pra uma parte tão lenta da música
00:03:166 (2,3) - essa curva deixa o spacing entre o círculo e o slider muito pequeno e vc faz isso várias vezes durante a música tipo aqui 00:11:152 (2,3) - e eu acho que não é muito bom ter um spacing tão pequeno seguido de um jump
00:17:411 - tem um som importante aqui
00:24:317 - ^
00:28:418 - ^ não ignora a strong beat da música
00:26:907 (1) - esse kickslider pode ser substituído por um circle
00:30:144 - a partir daqui era pra ser a sessão mais "calma" da música mas vc usa um spacing muito alto tipo aqui 00:30:144 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
00:45:792 (6,7,8) - VITO PRA QUE ISSO overmap fudido >:(
00:57:878 (2) - transforma esse kickslider num circle no red tick (no caso aqui 00:57:986 - )
01:02:734 (1,2,3) - redução muito repentina de spacing, pode confundir o player
tem umas partes da música que tão meio overmappadas (cof cof 01:01:439 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - )
also deixa o AR 8,5 - 8,7 pq 9 tá muito alto pra 139 BPM
ok , fixed all nenem
victorfernando
292 posts
Joined October 2016
Topic Starter
victorfernando

DJ Lucky wrote:

k NM from my q (if ya wanna drop 1 or 2 suggestions https://osu.ppy.sh/s/675527 (modv2) on this map that would be awesome but ya don't have to)

  • Insane
  1. 00:30:144 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I think this jumpy part need to have slightly reduce spacing imo since this is part of the song is quite calm imo compare to the kiai
  2. 00:40:504 (2,3,4,5) - same ^
  3. 00:57:878 (2) - I don't see why this is a 1/4 slider since there isn't any noticable sound here 00:57:878 - so I suggest remove both 00:57:770 (1,2) - and just make this part a 1/2 slider starting at 00:57:770 -
  4. 00:58:418 (2) - this beat is stronger along with the vocals than 00:58:634 (3) - so I suggest giving it higher spacing and while we at it give (3) lower to give (2) more emphasis
  5. 00:59:497 (3) - there is also a strong note so give it more distance to show that
  6. 01:01:547 (2) - 01:01:979 (4) - 01:02:411 (6) - all of these have no beat to support them (not the vocals either since the vocals hold out from 01:01:439 (1) - to 01:01:763 - ,here 01:01:871 - to 01:02:195 - , etc if you were trying to follow them) I suggest remove them and think of a different pattern
    Green - I understand and fixed all
    Red - I fixed some things
    No color - I fixed but don't know if it's right :3
Bae Suzy
34 posts
Joined January 2014
Bae Suzy
Coming from my M4M queue!


00:17:842 (6) - You can probably stack this on the (7), it isn't the biggest change and you might not like it but it could make flow a little easier to hit the note and the slider, it seems easy as it is already but it can probably be adjusted to that.

00:31:008 (1,2) - I noticed that at 00:30:144 (1,2) you have the flow going up and down, I feel that you can make the same happen for 00:31:008 (1,2). It just looks better to be following the same pattern you initially started rather than changing it up randomly, even though it's only for 2 notes.

I also see that you LOVE to hog up the left side of the screen, for example: 00:58:202 to 01:02:734 most of the notes are basically on the left of the screen. It also happens on some occurrences of the map but you should definitely consider putting the notes to around the screen more rather than keeping them on the left most of the time.


Sorry about the horrible mod! The map definitely has a lot of potential and it's up to you if you'd like to give Kudosu or not!


P.S I found the source image for you while I was modding: https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php ... d=65336338
Sandrew
543 posts
Joined March 2014
Sandrew
fixed
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49353
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 77195
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Patchwork Staccato
TitleUnicode:Patchwork Staccato
Artist:nameless
ArtistUnicode:nameless
Creator:victorfernando
Version:Sandrew's Hard
Source:
Tags:Japanese Pop Vocaloid nameless patchwork staccato victorfernando Sandrew Marianna Bariton MkGuh
BeatmapID:1408339
BeatmapSetID:663385

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I have fixed that point, thx for modding :)
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
All fixed, thank you all

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Peter
786 posts
Joined June 2016
Peter
Normal
00:05:324 (4) - this is weird if you can't fit it bcs of height place 00:02:519 (1,2,3) lower
00:50:864 (5) - NC maybe

Hard
00:05:540 (8) - i would ctr + j this
00:12:015 (7) - too sharp
00:13:742 (3) - look a little bit off move a little bit to the right
00:14:605 (6,7) - shapes are not the same
00:26:907 (6) - place it higher looks better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9279216
00:31:871 (5) - NC here
00:38:778 (5) - ^

Bariton Insane
No issues

Insane
I've found only one issue that you should fix
00:11:799 (3,4) - tbh those circles feels really weird here and since 00:11:799 (3) - isnt really loud I would do blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9279264 and then place 00:12:231 (5) - far cause 00:12:015 (4,5) - pretty strong sound here which mean NC for 00:12:015 (4)

Winter
01:15:684 (6) - NC
Marianna
1,392 posts
Joined July 2015
Marianna
Sorry, I do not see the need for this NC
victorfernando
292 posts
Joined October 2016
Topic Starter
victorfernando

M Flat wrote:

Coming from my M4M queue! (hey i didn't mod your map , but i'm making a guest diff and the hitsounds ok ?)


00:17:842 (6) - You can probably stack this on the (7), it isn't the biggest change and you might not like it but it could make flow a little easier to hit the note and the slider, it seems easy as it is already but it can probably be adjusted to that.

00:31:008 (1,2) - I noticed that at 00:30:144 (1,2) you have the flow going up and down, I feel that you can make the same happen for 00:31:008 (1,2). It just looks better to be following the same pattern you initially started rather than changing it up randomly, even though it's only for 2 notes.

I also see that you LOVE to hog up the left side of the screen, for example: 00:58:202 to 01:02:734 most of the notes are basically on the left of the screen. It also happens on some occurrences of the map but you should definitely consider putting the notes to around the screen more rather than keeping them on the left most of the time.


Sorry about the horrible mod! The map definitely has a lot of potential and it's up to you if you'd like to give Kudosu or not!
Green - I fixed all and understand :)


P.S I found the source image for you while I was modding: https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php ... d=65336338 THANK YOU <3
victorfernando
292 posts
Joined October 2016
Topic Starter
victorfernando

PeterEU wrote:

Insane
I've found only one issue that you should fix
00:11:799 (3,4) - tbh those circles feels really weird here and since 00:11:799 (3) - isnt really loud I would do blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9279264 and then place 00:12:231 (5) - far cause 00:12:015 (4,5) - pretty strong sound here which mean NC for 00:12:015 (4)
Green - fixed
Red - maybe
Caporal
1 post
Joined June 2013
Caporal
Hi, i'm sorry to put my nose where maybe i shouldn't but i couldn't surpass my envy to say

Aren't the diff name a bit wrong ?

Mk's Normal > Mk's Easy ?

Sandrew's Hard > Sandrew's Advanced

Bariton's Insane > Bariton's Hard

Insane > Maybe Light Insane ?

Marianna's Winter > Good like this

Map are really good tho :)
Can't wait for it to be ranked !
victorfernando
292 posts
Joined October 2016
Topic Starter
victorfernando

Caporal wrote:

Hi, i'm sorry to put my nose where maybe i shouldn't but i couldn't surpass my envy to say

Aren't the diff name a bit wrong ?

Mk's Normal > Mk's Easy ?

Sandrew's Hard > Sandrew's Advanced

Bariton's Insane > Bariton's Hard

Insane > Maybe Light Insane ?

Marianna's Winter > Good like this

Map are really good tho :)
Can't wait for it to be ranked !
The name's aren't wrong it's just because has a huge star jump , we gonna fix it <3 , thank's for suggestions
Bariton
296 posts
Joined October 2012
Bariton

Caporal wrote:

Hi, i'm sorry to put my nose where maybe i shouldn't but i couldn't surpass my envy to say

Aren't the diff name a bit wrong ?

Mk's Normal > Mk's Easy ?

Sandrew's Hard > Sandrew's Advanced

Bariton's Insane > Bariton's Hard

Insane > Maybe Light Insane ?

Marianna's Winter > Good like this

Map are really good tho :)
Can't wait for it to be ranked !
139 BPM

also eu quero o antigo BG na minha diff ;A; (e AR 8.3)
jas
541 posts
Joined August 2016
jas
m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m4m

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/672681

general

check ai mod

mkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

00:24:101 (2) - maybe make it like this:https://puu.sh/xV6DN/c07775d910.png so it's symmetrical with (1) on a tilted axis

00:25:828 (5,6,1) - line this up better?

sandrew

to have good structure, you should make most things on your map visually similar, ie jump organization, similar curves when mapping, etc, you're lacking in the curve department. most of your sliders have different shapes and different curves when the song is doing nothing. I would understand if the song changed and you decided to change the type of slider, but it doesn't, so the map kinda looks messy. for example. you have 00:03:382 (3) - 00:06:835 (3) - and 00:12:015 (7) - these are essentially the same sound, but different sliders portray that they're different sounds. i understand if you say variety is the reason, but it should be the same when the song isn't doing anything special

00:05:108 (7,8) - maybe rotate (8) a bit so that it looks like they're in continuing flow

00:36:188 (7) - this slider shape is pretty ugly imo, you should flatten out the curve a tiny bit, if you want an example go to my m4m map and go to the "easy" diff and go to this object: 00:31:887 (3) - it has a better aestheitc and i think that's what you should try to achieve

bariton

i like the concept this diff uses, it's super cool :D

in the first 16 seconds you map the beginning with only circles and symmetry, but why dont you use the bottom 2 quadrants?

01:10:720 (1,1) - the overlap this has is kinda ugly when look at your other overlaps where the slider is perfectly within the other slider, maybe make 01:11:583 (1) - slider end inside the slider body of 01:10:720 (1) - ?

insane that isnt winter

00:25:828 (2,3) - make this the same spacing as 00:25:612 (1,2) - ?

00:37:914 (3,4) - i dont understand this jump, the song is still in the calm state and this random jump is here and it doesn't represent the music, so you should just make it like the other 1/2 rhthyms

00:46:331 (1) - shouldn't this end on 00:47:842 -

00:58:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think it would look better if this was a perfect star

01:16:116 (4) - this sv change is random, to make it noticable, maybe add an nc?

01:16:547 (5) - if you do above, also nc this

mariana

nothing wrong imo :shrug:

nice mapset, gl :))

Caporal wrote:

Hi, i'm sorry to put my nose where maybe i shouldn't but i couldn't surpass my envy to say

Aren't the diff name a bit wrong ?

Mk's Normal > Mk's Easy ?

Sandrew's Hard > Sandrew's Advanced

Bariton's Insane > Bariton's Hard

Insane > Maybe Light Insane ?

Marianna's Winter > Good like this

Map are really good tho :)
Can't wait for it to be ranked !
no because that icon you see when you look at the diffs doesn't represent the actual difficulty presented in the diff, ie that "insane" with the "hard icon" will have "insane" difficulty concepts, not "hard" difficulty concepts. take a look at https://osu.ppy.sh/s/644642 , youll notice the "normal" (novice) plays like a normal, but has a "hard" icon, so sometimes that difficulty icon is misrepresentetive of the actual difficulty mapped. the difficulty icon purely comes from the star rating, not how hard the level is. dont blame the game blam peppy




kappa
Sandrew
543 posts
Joined March 2014
Sandrew

PeterEU wrote:

Hard
00:05:540 (8) - i would ctr + j this I copy the previous shape
00:12:015 (7) - too sharp
00:13:742 (3) - look a little bit off move a little bit to the right
00:14:605 (6,7) - shapes are not the same
00:26:907 (6) - place it higher looks better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9279216
00:31:871 (5) - NC here
00:38:778 (5) - ^
others all fixed, or I took a remap, thx for modding :)

CraEZy wrote:

sandrew

to have good structure, you should make most things on your map visually similar, ie jump organization, similar curves when mapping, etc, you're lacking in the curve department. most of your sliders have different shapes and different curves when the song is doing nothing. I would understand if the song changed and you decided to change the type of slider, but it doesn't, so the map kinda looks messy. for example. you have 00:03:382 (3) - 00:06:835 (3) - and 00:12:015 (7) - these are essentially the same sound, but different sliders portray that they're different sounds. i understand if you say variety is the reason, but it should be the same when the song isn't doing anything specialok I haven't noticed that so this time I try to use more similar patterns to make them in connect

00:05:108 (7,8) - maybe rotate (8) a bit so that it looks like they're in continuing flow

00:36:188 (7) - this slider shape is pretty ugly imo, you should flatten out the curve a tiny bit, if you want an example go to my m4m map and go to the "easy" diff and go to this object: 00:31:887 (3) - it has a better aestheitc and i think that's what you should try to achieve
all fixed
thx for modding :)

remapped as said before, now 2.32
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50,122,34461,1,2,0:0:0:0:
183,222,34893,1,2,0:0:0:0:
187,86,35324,2,0,P|202:63|238:49,1,56,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,39,35756,2,0,P|331:39|370:45,1,56,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,64,36188,2,0,B|432:106|432:106|441:125|441:125|436:174,1,112,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,162,37051,6,0,L|278:284,1,112,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,343,37699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,343,37915,2,0,L|450:343,1,112,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,271,38562,1,0,0:0:0:0:
461,271,38778,6,0,P|472:214|459:145,1,112,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,98,39641,2,0,P|310:155|323:224,1,112,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,161,40505,5,2,0:0:0:0:
318,207,40936,1,2,0:0:0:0:
458,134,41368,1,2,0:0:0:0:
325,234,41800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
321,98,42231,2,0,B|309:72|309:72|268:88|219:75,1,112,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,135,43094,2,0,P|434:139|467:129,2,56,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,130,43957,6,0,P|215:126|182:136,2,56,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,98,44605,1,6,0:0:0:0:
323,254,45036,2,0,P|325:284|317:317,1,56,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,333,45468,2,0,P|191:342|110:325,1,112,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,344,46116,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,46331,12,0,48058,0:0:0:0:
359,133,49353,5,0,0:0:0:0:
359,133,49569,2,0,B|351:97|351:97|362:63,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
445,148,50001,6,0,P|468:210|467:297,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,345,50648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,345,50864,2,0,P|389:283|390:196,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,133,51511,2,0,L|206:125,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,60,52159,2,0,P|128:43|79:40,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,117,52590,1,2,0:0:0:0:
70,117,52806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
70,117,53022,2,0,P|107:134|156:137,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,125,53454,6,0,P|228:195|219:283,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,335,54101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,335,54317,2,0,P|108:343|38:338,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,267,54965,2,0,P|152:258|222:263,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,313,55612,2,0,P|302:280|302:222,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,186,56044,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,102,56260,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,102,56475,1,8,0:0:0:0:
83,267,56907,6,0,P|60:205|61:118,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,70,57554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,70,57770,2,0,P|139:132|138:219,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,282,58417,2,0,L|322:290,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,355,59065,2,0,P|400:372|449:375,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
458,298,59496,1,2,0:0:0:0:
458,298,59712,1,8,0:0:0:0:
458,298,59928,2,0,P|421:281|372:278,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,289,60360,6,0,P|299:219|308:131,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,79,61007,1,2,0:0:0:0:
349,79,61223,2,0,P|418:70|488:75,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,155,61871,1,2,0:0:0:0:
460,155,62087,2,0,P|425:152|390:156,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,79,62519,2,0,P|317:64|283:57,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,123,62950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,44,63166,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,44,63382,1,8,0:0:0:0:
66,147,63813,6,0,P|43:209|44:296,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,344,64460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
99,344,64676,2,0,P|122:282|121:195,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,132,65323,2,0,L|305:124,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,60,65972,2,0,P|384:43|433:40,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,117,66403,1,2,0:0:0:0:
442,117,66619,1,8,0:0:0:0:
442,117,66835,2,0,P|405:134|356:137,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,124,67267,6,0,P|282:194|291:282,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,334,67914,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,334,68130,2,0,P|402:342|472:337,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
427,266,68778,2,0,P|358:257|288:262,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,312,69425,2,0,P|208:279|208:221,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,185,69857,1,2,0:0:0:0:
250,101,70073,1,8,0:0:0:0:
250,101,70288,2,0,P|279:73|319:66,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,99,70720,6,0,P|369:163|382:249,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,289,71367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,289,71583,2,0,P|458:224|445:138,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,99,72230,2,0,L|233:100,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,48,72878,2,0,P|142:37|107:37,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,119,73309,1,2,0:0:0:0:
97,119,73525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
98,120,73742,2,0,P|131:130|166:130,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,99,74173,6,0,P|253:169|244:257,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,309,74820,1,2,0:0:0:0:
203,309,75036,2,0,P|134:318|64:313,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,233,75684,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,233,75900,2,0,P|127:236|162:232,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,309,76332,2,0,P|235:324|269:331,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,265,76763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,346,76979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,285,77195,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77626,12,0,79353,0:0:0:0:
well I'm still a newbie mapper so if my diff is a drag on this set pls delete it with no hesitation, I really like this song and set, don't want it to be my fault :(
one star for you, almost forgot it ;)
oh，btw you'd better not change the diff name because there is a bug in osu website now, if you change all the diff name the set may become a mess, when players update a diff it may become a blank diff(my heart signal set has become that and I had to wait for 30 days to delete it and reupload :cry:
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