This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年1月9日 at 11:49:42

Artist: Kami Nomi zo Shiri-tai
Title: Ai no Yokan
Source: Kami Nomi zo Shiru Sekai II
BPM: 160
Filesize: 6658kb
Play Time: 03:58
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.7 stars, 507 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 675 notes)
3. Normal (3 stars, 250 notes)

Download: Kami Nomi zo Shiri-tai - Ai no Yokan
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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9th
MOE! MOE! MOE!

沒有甚麼我能幫忙的

star

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Please Check and put into beatmap!!

Download: Kami Nomi zo Shiri-tai - Ai no Yokan (Neptunus) [Hard].osu

[A u t o] wrote:

Hard diff has Completed
Please Check and put into beatmap!!

Thanks , but sorry since no guest diff is considered.

Normal
00:10:327 (1) - Shortest spinner length(AI mod)
01:54:577 (4) - remove new combo
01:54:952 (1) - new combo
02:21:764 (1) - Kinda soon after a spinner ? (AI mod)
03:09:764 (1) - ^
03:50:452 (x) - Add a slider like 03:49:702 (2) and then spinner ?

Hard
00:32:639 (10) - new combo
00:32:827 (1) - remove new combo
02:04:702 (5) - new combo
02:14:077 (3) - (我个人很容易少按一个折返的时间..
02:37:327 (7) - new combo
02:42:577 (5) - ^
03:12:202 (8) - ^
03:15:952 (4) - ^
03:19:327 (1) - spinner提前到03:21:202结束吧

Insane
- 我对叠在一起的note+slider 突然换色有点不习惯 T.T
- 适当的加一点1/4的3连可能会更好~ ^^
00:34:327 (1) - remove new combo
01:01:139 (10) - new combo
01:01:327 (1) - remove new combo
03:12:577 (4) - I'm not sure whether it is rankable or not.

I'm noob and sorry for this new combo mod...

Good song ,good map and here is my star~

S h i o n wrote:

Normal
00:10:327 (1) - Shortest spinner length(AI mod)
01:54:577 (4) - remove new combo
01:54:952 (1) - new combo
02:21:764 (1) - Kinda soon after a spinner ? (AI mod)
03:09:764 (1) - ^
03:50:452 (x) - Add a slider like 03:49:702 (2) and then spinner ?

Hard
00:32:639 (10) - new combo
00:32:827 (1) - remove new combo
02:04:702 (5) - new combo
02:14:077 (3) - (我个人很容易少按一个折返的时间..
02:37:327 (7) - new combo
02:42:577 (5) - ^
03:12:202 (8) - ^
03:15:952 (4) - ^
03:19:327 (1) - spinner提前到03:21:202结束吧

Insane
- 我对叠在一起的note+slider 突然换色有点不习惯 T.T
- 适当的加一点1/4的3连可能会更好~ ^^
00:34:327 (1) - remove new combo
01:01:139 (10) - new combo
01:01:327 (1) - remove new combo
03:12:577 (4) - I'm not sure whether it is rankable or not.

I'm noob and sorry for this new combo mod...

Good song ,good map and here is my star~

基友来mod了啊哈哈~~
等我晚上改改~~吃饭先。。。

Neptunious
03:22:139 (1) or 03:34:139 (2) choose one timing point to re-kiai here. if you agree, try to apply in all diff.
00:24:764 (4,5,6) - make them closer to 1.0x distance snap please

Hard
01:47:077 (2) - Ctrl+R
01:48:202 (1) - NC
02:14:077 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/162384
02:28:702 (5) - suggest 2 ways: 02:28:889 (6) - NC or move (5) to (160,232)
03:46:327 (1) - osu.ppy.sh/ss/162395
03:50:639 (6) - I try to suggest the shape of slider to be more related with something...I think about pink-clothes-shaped slider (I don't know her name.) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/162391 I'm not sure if it works or not in your point of view. Just try to suggest

Easy
01:36:014 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/162397

9/10. Wish your map ranked. Good luck.

Sorry for the long delay time to get started

Normal:
00:02:845(4) - NC
00:10:327(1) - Extend this till 00:11:827
00:56:639(4) - NC
01:18:577(6) - ^
01:25:327(7) - ^
01:50:827(3) - 1 grid left for the 2nd point and 1 grid up for the end point
02:07:327(5) - NC
02:14:077(2) - x:248 y:72 for the end point
02:29:639(4) - NC
03:16:327(3) - ^
03:30:577(4) - ^

Hard:
00:29:639(4) - NC
00:31:514(4) - ^
00:35:639(4) - ^
00:38:827(5) - ^
00:41:639(6) - ^
01:06:952(5) - Stack it on (1) at 01:05:827
01:28:514(5) - NC
01:36:577(5) - ^
01:41:639(4) - ^
02:04:702(5) - ^
02:31:889(4) - ^
02:37:327(7) - ^
02:42:577(5) - ^
03:03:577(2) - 1 grid right
03:04:327(4) - NC
03:11:639(7) - ^
03:16:514(5) - ^
03:25:327(6) - ^
03:28:514(4) - ^
03:28:702(2) - i suggest u put that circle above the slider so that people won't get confused
03:31:327(5) - NC
03:50:639(6) - i don't like the look of this slider. make it like this http://puu.sh/6YaY

Neptunus:
I swear i've seen that character on the left when i was playing Happy Crescent or is it just me lol
00:11:733 - Add a spinner and end it at 00:13:327
01:13:327(6) - NC
01:16:327(4) - ^
02:56:452(6) - x:360 y:272

This is the best i can do. GL

Requested mod.
Since 249 already did a Combo check, I'll just take a look at random things.

[Normal]
03:47:452 > Space (4) properly from (3), but keep (4,5) stacked.
03:48:952 > If you did ^, then you'll see that you need to fix the spacing of (1,2).

[Hard]
01:13:327 > Add a clap at the end of this slider?
01:14:077 > ^
02:25:327 > ^
02:26:077 > ^
03:25:327 > ^
03:50:639 > I suggest doing what 249 said about this slider. (Take a look at loops here to get it just right.)

[Neptunious]
Don't have any suggestions here.

Nice map.

Thanks guys, fixing now, I think I will spending sometime on that slider, lol

General:
Add some tags? I don't know who is the vocal but add that character in tags? (Like if it was Elsie's seiyuu, add Elsie to tags etc etc)
Start your kiai at 01:10:327, 02:22:327, 03:10:327 ? It's on a downbeat and I feel like kiai starting there feels more logical.
Your NCing patterns are kinda random at chorus. Try to make sure they match. I'm not good at NC mods though so I'll point out some basics.
Normal:
00:01:139 (3) - Shorten this slider by 1/2? It sounds odd to me since the slider ends between two words. Making the slider end on one vocal sounds better.
00:10:327 (1) - Spinner might be short for beginners. Maybe extending it to the next white tick would be better.
00:36:577 (4) - Make your slider the other way so it won't touch the next slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/166223
00:56:639 (4,5,6,1) - These overlaps are not pretty ;_; Perhaps you could rearrange this pattern to make it look more visually appealing?
01:24:014 (4) - NC here for consistency with your previous pattern at 01:12:014 (1) -
01:30:952 (5) - Space this? You've been stacking 1/2s a lot so stacking a 1/1 would confuse beginners.
01:37:327 (1,3) - The slider blankets could be made better, I could make it if you want.
01:40:327 (1) - The overlap with 3 is kinda annoying. Perhaps move this slider somewhere else?
01:50:827 (3) - Move the second to the last point one grid right.
01:54:952 (1) - Space these? You've been stacking 1/2s and stacking 1/1 now would confuse beginners.
02:02:077 (1) - Overlap. Maybe make a different slider? Or make it face somewhere else?
02:08:639 (6) - NC for new verse?
02:28:327 (2) - NC because you NC'd at 02:40:327? It may be only one slider but it's because you're mapping it so differently for the both of the chorus.
02:31:327 (6) - This slider doesn't blanket 5 too well, perhaps remake this slider?
03:16:327 (3) - NC here to keep it consistent at and 02:28:327 02:40:327?
03:25:327 (3) - The blanket could be better. Use approach circle as a guide. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/166226

Hard:
00:03:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think it might be too hard for hard o.o Since like you stacked some and then you didn't stack some. Maybe just space them out?
00:10:327 (1) - Extend till big white tick?
00:44:077 (10) - Space this? Seems rather flow breaking to wait for the time to hit the next note when we could be moving D:
00:55:327 (1) - Make it like this instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/166229 It feels awkward to move your cursor back after the last repeat, but making it like the picture makes you move smoothly after the repeat.
01:12:577 (3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern might be too hard for hard since it might be hard to know how long this back and forth combo is. Perhaps some different pattern would be better?
01:13:889 (8) - The overlap looks weird here.
01:18:577 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same note about back and forth notes.
01:31:327 (3) - Perhaps use .75x slowdown? You were doing 1x during the whole chorus and tell it switches to .5x all of a sudden.
02:10:889 (2,5) - This doesn't look too nice orz
02:14:827 (4) - Ctrl+H and space? It looked confusing since I thought there was only one repeat cause you stacked it. If you do, space it, you also get rid of the overlap at 02:15:577 (6)
02:24:014 (8) - NC should be at this spot, but it's a slider end. Maybe add two notes and NC at 02:24:014?
02:36:014 (6) - Same note. NC should be right here, but slider ends here. Maybe add two notes?
03:12:014 (7) - ^
03:21:764 (1) - I think this note may be too fast after a spinner. Perhaps shorten the spinner by 1/2?
03:24:014 (7) - Same note as 02:24:014 (8)
03:32:264 (7) - Please don't put a note under slider. It's very confusing sometimes. Please move this note somewhere else.
03:36:014 (7) - Same note as 02:24:014 (8)
03:50:639 (6) - Here.

136,240,230639,6,0,B|316:268|388:144|256:-8|124:144|196:268|376:240,1,520

Neptunious:
00:10:327 (1) - Extend till big white tick?
01:31:327 (5) - Change it to .75x? Change won't be as drastic and unpredictable imo.
01:43:702 (1,1) - I don't think you need these NCs at all. Remove it?
Nothing much to say.

Overall:
I think you should try to avoid overlaps orz. I didn't mention it in Neptunious since I don't know if it was intentional. It's just my opinion. I kinda like maps better if they don't bad overlaps.

來自AIR315's Modding Queue
[Normal]
00:26:452 (2,3) - 間距
00:36:577 (4,1) - [nazi]碰在一起了 有些MAT很care這些事情
01:23:264 (3) - 下一格grid(size 3)

[Hard]
01:12:577 (3,4,5,6,7) - 這真的很瞎眼
01:18:577 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:24:014 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:28:327 (3,4,5,7) - 這應該會被挑 原因:易造成玩家困惑
很多NC該加的地方沒加...

[Neptunious]
Neptunious? 故意的嗎??
00:10:327 (1) - 這節奏錯了對吧
01:21:764 (1,2) - stack是否會好一些?
01:24:014 (1,2,3,4) - ...random jump?
01:39:389 (4,5,6) - 不均勻間距...看了很難受阿...
01:42:389 (3,4) - stack

有些小細節必須多注意些阿 例如:stack部分 NC部分...

Sorry for the delay, I was too busy this week.

[General]

- Please change the Audio lead-in to 2000. Kinda forever orz.

[Normal]

00:07:889 (2) Sounds better if you end the slider in the previous red tick. Also you can add a note here 00:09:202.
00:10:327 - Very short spinner to be a normal difficulty, please extend the spinner to here 00:13:327. Also add a finish.
00:22:327 - Considering the slider velocity, the notes feels really tight, is not a big problem, but if you have time you can fix it.
01:18:014 (5) To be consistent you need a new combo here.
01:24:952 (6) ^ Same as above.
01:54:952 (1) The second repeat of this slider is temporally hidden, you should change it. Just unstack (4).
02:07:327 (5) Needs a new combo here.
02:21:764 (1) The repeat of this slider is hidden by the spinner hit-burst. Please move this slider in other direction.
02:30:577 (5) Needs a new combo here, also you can change (6) for a few notes to extend the combo.

[Hard]

00:10:327 (1) Please extend this slider to the next big white tick, feels odd.
00:30:952 (6) A new combo here would be okay.
00:32:639 (10) It's better if you add a new combo here and remove in the next slider.
00:42:952 (9) New combo. Also you can add a few notes instead these slider and keep the next new combo.
01:11:827 (8) New combo here and remove in the next slider.
01:13:327 (7) Needs a new combo here.
01:44:077 - You should remove break here or add the break in the normal difficulty.
02:04:702 (5) New combo.
02:28:889 (6) This slider is kinda hidden, I suggest to change the position of this slider.
02:37:327 (7) New combo.
02:42:577 (5) ^
02:43:327 - Same like the other diffs you can add a spin here.
03:12:202 (8) New combo.
03:16:514 (5) ^
03:25:327 (6) ^
03:37:327 (6) Kinda hidden repeat, please unstack (5).

[Neptunious]

Overjumped in my opinion, don't fit with the song really, but is fine.
00:09:577 (7) New combo here and remove in the next slider. Also same like the hard difficulty, extend that slider.
01:13:327 (6) New combo.
02:37:327 (6) ^
02:52:327 - I can't hear the stream men, this is unrankable, also that don't fit with the song. You should use the same volume for the stream.

Everything else looks ok to me. Star !

All clear, thanks guys, more mods plz

hi~
I like this song

~my mod~

[Normal]

1. 01:05:827 (1) - spacing too far. I think that difficult in normal.
2. 01:40:327 (1) - stack 01:37:327 (1)slider end better ?
3. 01:54:952 (5) - remove NC and 01:56:639 - add NC
4. 02:13:327 (1,2) - Symmetry plz
5. 03:04:327 (1,2,3,4) - try like this
   

   336,112,184327,6,0,B|288:72|248:64,1,89.9999999999999,2|0
   184,96,185077,2,0,B|128:120|104:152,1,89.9999999999999,2|0
   160,208,185827,2,0,B|184:248|240:272,1,89.9999999999999,2|0
   304,240,186577,2,0,B|352:224|384:176,1,89.9999999999999,2|0

6. 03:47:452 (4) - spacing too far.
7. 03:57:014 (4) - grid x208,y168
8. 03:57:389 (1) - spinner start 03:58:139. and 03:57:389 add kick slider. http://puu.sh/80NF

[Hard]

1. 01:00:952 (7) - stack with 01:00:764 (6)
2. 01:24:952 (5) - stack 01:24:577 (4) slider end
3. 01:27:952 (4) - remove slider. and add circle here and 01:28:327
4. 02:08:639 (1,2) - Spacing includes sense of incongruity
5. 02:19:139 (4) - stack with 02:18:952 (3)
6. 02:28:702 (5) - overlap and am hard to look a little. plz move. grid x152,y232 . and with grid move 02:28:889 (6) - x224,y200
7. 03:27:202 (1,2) - I think that I do not fit 03:27:202 (1) - slider end 03:27:389 and 03:27:577 (2) - slider end 03:27:764

[Insane]

1. 00:05:827 (1,2) - I think that I do not fit 00:06:202 (2) - remove slider and 00:05:827 (1) - slider end 00:06:202 ( and 00:06:389 add circle? )
2. 00:25:514 (7) - remove NC and 00:25:702 - add NC
3. 02:32:827 (4) - NC
4. 03:08:639 (4) - ^
5. 03:24:952 (1) - remove NC and 03:25:327 - add NC
6. 03:33:764 (1) - remove NC and 03:34:139 - add NC
7. 03:36:952 (1) - remove NC and 03:37:327 - add NC

nice map Star~☆

from my queue

[General]
fine

[Normal]
00:00:764 (1,2) - change this 2 circles to slider ? it is kinda too hard in a Normal imo
00:07:889 (2) - try end at 00:08:639 ? music is soft in this part , I think follow vocal is much better than follow music here
01:16:514 (3) - move to 01:16:702 and stack on 4 , much better to fit the song
03:05:827 (3,4) - this spacing is not 0.9x..
03:57:389 (1) - reduce volume smoothly

[Hard]
00:44:639 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern near an Insane diff.. I suggest change some circles to slider
01:04:889 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:06:389 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ , or reduce the spacing , if you don't want to change to sldier
01:12:014 (1,2) - I suggest circle first then slider later , it play well when a sldier start at a white line , slider start at a red line is kinda odd to play
01:20:452 (8,4) - this 2 repeat slider sound kinda odd.. seems they don't fit the song well..
01:24:577 (4,5) - stack better plz
03:09:202 (8) - hard to know when it end.. I think many people will release it too early
03:58:139 (1) - reduce volume smoothly , and silence the end plz

[Insane]
00:26:827 (4) - ctrl + r , flow better if fix this
01:18:577 (1,2,3) - this jump is too huge , and I don't know why jump here.. this jump don't fit the song at all
01:33:952 (9,1) - spacing too small..
01:42:389 (3,4) - stack better plz
02:24:014 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - jump too huge..
02:30:952 (3,4) - ^
02:58:327 - silence the spinner here.. or at least use soft hitsound
03:36:202 (1,2) - jump too huge
03:58:139 (1) - reduce volume smoothly

that's all
good luck

Thanks Kosiga and Wcx
your mods helped

Mod Request

Normal:
00:02:264 (3,4): Spacing
00:02:827 (4): Move this note to 00:02:452 and New Combo here
00:24:764 (4): Clap in Reverse Arrow
00:30:764 (4): ^^
00:32:639 (2,3): Don't Stack
00:56:639 (4): New Combo
01:02:827 (3): This slider looks weird. Can you make anotehr form??
01:18:014 (5): New Combo
01:44:077 (3): Replace whistle to hitfinish
01:48:764 (4): Clap in Reverse Arrow
02:29:639 (4): New Combo
02:36:389 (x): Add a Note
03:47:077 (3,4): Spacing

Hard:
00:11:827 (1): Hitfinish at the end
00:24:764 (6): Clap at the end
00:31:514 (7): New Combo

TOMORROW (GMT-3) I'LL EDIT THIS POST AND I'LL CONTINUE WITH MOD!!

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