00:08:242 (8242|1,8456|2) - end snap should be at 00:08:563 i think.
00:08:670 (8670|3) - ghost note ? cant really hear any significant sound for it when i listened at 25%.
00:08:777 - from here up to 00:10:277 you only used 2 single notes between the transitions of every LN, however from 00:10:492 onward you used 3 notes for each transitions between the LN's , i suggest you either follow what you did in the first parts wherein you used 2 short notes for each LN transition or you can also imitate what you did in the rest of this part in which you will have to add another short note on the time points i mentioned.
00:14:884 - add a note here, preferably on the 2nd column.
00:15:420 - you should probably add another note here to emphasize the heavy sound represented at this part of the song.
00:16:813 (16813|3) - should probably end the LN at 00:17:027 then add a note on column 3.
00:20:242 - add a note here on a column of your preference.
00:23:242 - I suggest you add another note here because you seem to follow that certain prolonged part of the song like in this part 00:16:063 (16063|2,16170|1,16277|2,16277|3,16384|1,16492|2,16599|1,16706|2,16706|0,16813|3) - however it is also possible that you were following the beats only in which case i suggest that you follow what you did in the part I pointed out because I think it would make the map go more smoothly.
00:24:956 - same as above ^.
00:33:634 (33634|0,33849|1) - make them double notes for the heavy beat.
00:39:634 - add a note
00:39:742 - same as above ^
00:43:063 (43063|2,43170|2,43492|2,43599|2,43920|2,44027|2,44349|2,44456|2,44777|2,44884|2,45206|2,45313|2,45634|2,45742|2,46063|2,46170|2,46492|2,46599|2,46920|2,47027|2,47349|2,47456|2,47777|2,47884|2,48206|2,48313|2,48634|2,48742|2,49063|2,49170|2,49492|2,49599|2) - errrr, i guess this is just my personal preference but in my case i find this pattern quite annoying
hmm i think doing those mini jacks are allright but putting it all on a single finger might be a little too much? maybe spread them out a bit? like the first minijack is in column 3 while the second minijack would be in column 4, i highly suggest you do it for diversity
00:56:670 up to 01:03:206 - well... i don't really know what to say here, umm you should probably remove the LN's here and make it into a full blown single note stream map. i think as it is right now , (no offence but) its quite ridiculous? i mean in patterning, i'm not saying its impossible to play it or something but lemme tell you it can get annoying pretty fast, fixing this should probably be your top priority for now.
01:10:277 up to 01:11:456 - probably should remove the LN at column 1 and replace it with a single note, while removing the doubles here then put an LN at 01:10:492 that extends up to 01:10:706
01:10:706 (70706|2,70706|1,71134|1,71134|2,71456|2,71456|1) - assuming that you removed the LN i mentioned above i suggest doing the following pattern instead
https://puu.sh/xj7Q2/289fe714a6.png from 01:10:702 to 01:11:349
01:11:884 - add a note at column 1.
01:15:742 - you missed a beat here, add a note.
01:16:599 - ^
01:19:170 - ^
01:20:027 - ^
01:20:456 - ^
01:20:884 - ^
01:21:742 - ^
01:22:599 - ^
01:23:027 - ^
01:23:456 - ^
01:23:777 - ^ err just listen to the song at a slower pace (50% or 25% up to you) and listen closely because you sort of missed a lot of sounds that could have been mapped.
01:51:420 (111420|3,111420|2,111634|3,111634|2,111849|3,111849|2,112063|3,112063|2,112277|3,112277|2,112492|3,112492|2,112706|3,112706|2,112920|3,112920|2,113134|3,113134|2) - suggest you just remove the LN at the side to make more room for a waaay more diverse pattern xD this is too repetitive in my opinion.
01:55:170 - missed a sound here.
Mod here as requested~
