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JumpTwiice

Joined March 2015

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JumpTwiice 2017-08-22T08:28:17+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 17. maj 2018 at 16:27:08

Artist: Shiggy Jr.
Title: oyasumi
Source: LISTEN TO THE MUSIC
BPM: 200
Filesize: 6927kb
Play Time: 02:04
Difficulties Available:

1st remap (5,82 stars, 511 notes)
2nd remap (5,32 stars, 155 notes)
Half of the original map (5,55 stars, 370 notes)
Mari Ohara's oyasumi (6,76 stars, 572 notes)

Download: Shiggy Jr. - oyasumi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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ten thousand remaps
2nddddddddddd remap sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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lidlddidl
lidl
LIDL

Last edited by JumpTwiice 2018-05-17T14:27:31+00:00, edited 55 times in total.

YukiZura-

762 posts

Joined October 2015

YukiZura- 2017-09-22T01:18:39+00:00

hi~~ mod from my q

[Mari Ohara's oyasumi]

00:01:040 (2,3,4) - better if you did this all in same distance .. use the coordinate on the top of your screen on the right.. it will help you
00:03:440 (2,3,4) - same as above
00:07:340 (3,4,1) - hmm why the distance suddenly reduce? .. the sound is just the same tho ..
00:18:740 - no need nc here
00:19:040 - and here too
00:18:890 (7) - better here
00:19:340 (1) - delete nc
00:19:640 (1) - here instead
00:37:640 (1) - are you sure this? there is no sound at here 00:37:790 - .. i give you my suggestion

00:38:840 - i prefer not to put break at this to this 00:48:440 - .. you should map the instrument .. that would be fun xD
01:18:290 - hmm apparently at this part you map it lmao ..
01:20:840 (1) - too be honest.. this is ugly lol ..
01:22:340 (1) - delete nc
01:24:290 (6,1,2,3) - you map this wrongly .. let me help you .. so firsly,you already did all the mapping at this part according to voice .. so pretty much this not 01:24:290 (6) - is unnecessary because that note is an intrument .. delete it and this slider 01:24:440 (1) - move it to 01:24:290 - here instead
01:24:665 (2) - and also this note .. move to 01:24:590 - here .. if you dont get it what i mean use the image i give you

01:50:240 (1,2,3,4,5) - urm oke .. this all look random to me lol

i give you the look .. you tried make it a little bit better..i mean the slider shape and so on

01:58:040 (1,2) - blanket can be better
02:12:440 (1) - sorry but this is ugly xD .. tried look on other people map .. see how they did there slider art

that all .. goodluck

terratropic

69 posts

Joined November 2015

terratropic 2017-09-24T23:19:11+00:00

nm from queue

General

audio file is 320kbps, bit rate has to be 192kbps or less according to ranking criteria
add custom combo colours, it'll improve the atmosphere and visuals of the map.

extra
00:11:090 (6) - you could remove this note, its not heard in the song
01:10:040 (1,3) - blanket isn't perfect
01:13:640 (1) - slider is off the screen in play mode
01:23:840 (1,3) - NC should be on 01:24:440 (3) instead
01:39:739 (4) - slider isn't snapped to timeline correctly, you may need to run a resnap for all notes
01:40:790 (7,8) - these notes should be a stacked triple, drum pattern is unique to this kiai
01:52:940 (5,6,1) - overlaps look sloppy imo, leave some space in between

Mari Ohara's oyasumi
00:07:490 (4) - looks better if you make this a triangle pattern with the last 2 notes
00:30:440 (1) - make this blanket 00:30:140 (4)
00:31:940 (2,5) - these are very close to touching, space these apart
00:50:540 (1) - NC isnt consistent with 00:52:940 (4) even though they are both the same sound
01:22:340 (1) - remove this NC, its pretty redundant
01:28:640 (1) - NC should start at 01:29:240 (3) -
01:40:865 - like extra diff, there should be a note here
01:50:390 (2,4) - you might as well stack these if they're so close together
02:01:640 (1) - you could blanket this better
02:09:440 (1,2,3,4,1) - jumps are too small in contrast to the previous notes and ruins the flow imo

good luck!

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