hi nowa o3o
[ur diff]
00:18:814 (3,4) - minor but u could improve stack here
00:21:990 (1,2,3) - would u mind making spacing higher for those? the song intensity is clearly higher there so (1) could use a little of emphasys~
00:31:167 (4) - the shape could become clearer if you move (4) head a bit up like that
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/906986500:44:314 (2,3,4,5,6) - DS used here is wrong, u used the same spacing for 1/4 and 1/2 (check (5) and (6) for reference) which gets kinda hard to read and understand.
01:44:578 (1,2) - why u suddenly started to follow the beats instead of the melody, as usual?
01:58:519 (6) - maybe just 1/2 stack instead of using a 1/4 slider?
02:41:402 (2) - having this note going up like that sounds a really bad idea for map's flow. you could find another placement for it maybe like that
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/906989202:46:696 (1,2,3) - minor but for a visual stabilization, I'd recommend having those both sliders with the same shape.
03:57:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i dont think that the transiction to the new part of the song was made well here. u was following vocals with (1) and then suddenly started to follow the background instrumentals which will make hard for the player to differenciate both. I would start following the background sounds since 03:57:814 (1) - this slider tbh.
03:59:402 (3,4,5,6,7) - really weird stream pattern. you could move (3) a bit left so you can create a linear stream, and not with that weird curve that (3) makes with (4).
04:03:284 (1,2) - spacing here should be slighty bigger, to follow your pattern concept of making higher spacing based on song intensity.
04:10:519 (3,1,2,3) - doesn't play really well if you ask me, the flow is kinda weird with song especially with map. 04:11:049 (2) - is not stacked correctly also, and I think u should move 04:11:225 (3) - lower in the grid so the movement gets better. like here maybe
https://puu.sh/xxpNr/ea4ae5c434.png04:14:049 (6,1) - why did u use a 1/4 slider here though, there is no different sound in the song to do that.
04:17:578 (2) - how about stacking under (1) instead of doing a ugly overlap and also not play friendly like that?
04:23:049 (2,3) - i kinda think that the position of those makes a bad flow in the pattern overall. the placement is weird and creates an odd movement. i found this to be more intuitive
https://puu.sh/xxpw9/819ad5ce99.png05:17:755 (1,2,3,4) - why you don't make the rhythm just like here 05:29:049 (1,2,3,4) - i found it better because (3) and (4) in the second linked pattern emphasizes the start of the vocals better than the first.
good luck with the map~