you cant have pure white or black combo colours, change combos 1 and 3
also combo colours should compliment eachother rather than be conflicting
- 00:18:645 (4,5,6,7) - you use angular jumps for most of the map but stick a trapezoid here than is completely wide angle
- 00:19:545 (2,4) - these are 1/2 sliders why? you used hit circles as clickable objects to emphasize everything so far but this just is the complete opposite using small spacing and 1/2 sliders... its not good rhythm choice imo, just use like hit circles or like a hit circle and a 1/2 slider
- 00:26:895 (4,5) - 00:27:645 (4,5) - same with these, doesnt really make much since why you use small spacing on these? is it as emphasis because it doesn't really work imo this early on in the map
- 00:35:895 (1,2,3) - you switch from clockwise to 00:36:295 (1,2,3) - counter clockwise here for no real reason, adds emphasis where there isnt any
- 00:40:561 (4) - not really a nice overlap, move it over
- 00:42:295 (1,2,3,4) - its a calm part of the song but the mapping makes it feel just as intense as the part before, reduce spacing and rhythm choice should be lighter, include more 1/2 sliders
- 01:15:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think these would do better as 1/6 repeat sliders because its a calmer part in the song
- 01:21:814 (3,4,5) - you need to have consistent spacing between objects or else it just looks messy
- 01:29:014 (1,2,3) - using large spacing on streams like this and then having small jumps just doesnt work, probably should reduce spacing on this triple and the rest as well
- 01:35:014 (1) - add another repeat and change 01:35:314 (2) - to a 1/4 slider
- 01:36:214 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - mehhhhhhhh, spacing streams like this so early on is just so... feels like your trying to make the map harder rather than reflect the song
- 02:16:714 (3) - 02:20:614 (3) - 02:22:114 (3) - 02:23:614 (3) - 02:24:214 (5) - 02:24:814 (7) - 02:33:214 (3) - i would nc all of these
- 02:30:214 (1,2,1,2,1) - why is this part so easy compared to 02:18:514 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - or rather why is this part before it so much harder than the rest of the section?
- 02:34:114 (4) - nc please because song is building up
- 03:00:514 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i should see these streams getting more and more spaced as the guitar stream gets more intense, as is just doesnt feel like its following it
- 03:03:514 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - please dont make all of these clockwise
- 03:11:614 (1) - this guitar stream after is good shit
- 03:14:614 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - beautiful
rest of it is a repeat of previous sections of the music and have the same problems as the one before it