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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 24 septembre 2017 at 20:36:49

Artist: Unlucky Morpheus
Title: Black Pentagram
Tags: satan 666 touhou demetori introduction double dealing drums above all
BPM: 92
Filesize: 24694kb
Play Time: 05:31
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Download: Unlucky Morpheus - Black Pentagram
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Introduction is Demetori - Introduction ~ Double Dealing
(Thx to Kyuukai for the audio edit)

09/09 New mp3, please delete and re dl

USE CUSTOM HITSOUNDS !

Hitsounds are from GoldenWolf's maps

Enjoy ~
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cool map 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-)
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thx for the mod mr ricard
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first mod k.


00:56:113 (1,2,3,4) - ce pattern me semble plus adapté comme tu l'as fait la 01:16:920 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - http://i.imgur.com/efiFprx.png
02:16:436 (1,2,3) - un peu dur a read
03:30:199 (3,1) - pourquoi mettre un espace inutilement, si c'etait voulu alors il faut faire pareil avec 03:30:522 (3,1) -
03:44:015 (3,1,2) - l'ecart me semble trop grand et fait que cela semble "vide" un truc comme ceci devrait le faire. http://i.imgur.com/J3qd1KC.jpg
03:44:499 (1,2) - pas symétrique avec 03:44:177 (1,2) -
03:50:628 (1,2,3,4) ce stream visuellement est bizarre

le reste me semble pas trop mal.
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realy0_ wrote:
first mod k.


00:56:113 (1,2,3,4) - ce pattern me semble plus adapté comme tu l'as fait la 01:16:920 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - http://i.imgur.com/efiFprx.png La musique étant différente, j'ai changé le patern, mais gardé la meme idée en changeant de direction sur les drums
02:16:436 (1,2,3) - un peu dur a read J'ai changé, je pense que c'est mieux maintenant
03:30:199 (3,1) - pourquoi mettre un espace inutilement, si c'etait voulu alors il faut faire pareil avec 03:30:522 (3,1) - Corrigé
03:44:015 (3,1,2) - l'ecart me semble trop grand et fait que cela semble "vide" un truc comme ceci devrait le faire. http://i.imgur.com/J3qd1KC.jpg Corrigé !
03:44:499 (1,2) - pas symétrique avec 03:44:177 (1,2) - Corrigé !
03:50:628 (1,2,3,4) ce stream visuellement est bizarre Je ne trouve pas

le reste me semble pas trop mal. Merci pour le mod !
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00:28:932 (1) - I don't think this nc is necessary
00:57:726 (1) - maybe have a sharp angle or larger spacing here? It's a lot more intense than the previous 2 notes
01:49:662 (2) - this is pretty unreadable since the body is overlapped by 01:49:339 (1) -
02:02:242 (1) - end this slider 1/4 earlier and add a note? In general it seems like you're picking and choosing which triples you map, which I don't like
02:34:823 (3,1) - this is way to big of a jump imo
03:00:145 (7) - I'd move this closer to 02:59:904 (6) - to put more emphasis on 03:00:307 (1) -
04:14:176 (1) - unnecessary nc
04:37:967 (1,1) - these are the only ones that are nc'd
05:24:176 (1,2) - too big I think
05:25:789 (1,2) - ^
good map
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Vacuous wrote:
00:28:932 (1) - I don't think this nc is necessary Yup, it's an error of copy paste
00:57:726 (1) - maybe have a sharp angle or larger spacing here? It's a lot more intense than the previous 2 notes I didn't want to have a large spacing in this part, so i stacked the 2 first to show the change
01:49:662 (2) - this is pretty unreadable since the body is overlapped by 01:49:339 (1) - Changed
02:02:242 (1) - end this slider 1/4 earlier and add a note? In general it seems like you're picking and choosing which triples you map, which I don't like I totally agree with you, so i change these sliders in the whole part. I first wanted to focus vocals on the chorus, but i will make a compromise with drums
02:34:823 (3,1) - this is way to big of a jump imo I don't agree, it's like the star jump paterns for me, in term of spacing
03:00:145 (7) - I'd move this closer to 02:59:904 (6) - to put more emphasis on 03:00:307 (1) - Yup good idea
04:14:176 (1) - unnecessary nc Again, error of copy pasta
04:37:967 (1,1) - these are the only ones that are nc'd ^
05:24:176 (1,2) - too big I think decreased it
05:25:789 (1,2) - ^ ^
good map Thx for your mod and return ! :)
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late mod from Queue


  • 01:09:097 - 01:09:742 - why didn't ya map these sound - ya map the other blue ticks and this right here shouldn't make a difference
    if it because ya want more emphasis on the others 1 - you can stacks the ones that I pointed out
  • 01:43:694 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream can be curve better
  • 02:39:016 (4,5,6) - I understand the reason of this pattern but at the same time - those 3 notes are stronger than 02:38:533 (1,2,3) - and I feel needs to be spaced out while having (6) the biggest spacing due to the strong vocals
  • 03:17:887 (8,9,10) - this is imo way too space out in made it more difficult than it really should be - I suggest reducing it

I can't play this map so I can't mod much but I say it look pretty cool so I am giving a star

GL
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DJ Lucky wrote:
late mod from Queue


  • 01:09:097 - 01:09:742 - why didn't ya map these sound - ya map the other blue ticks and this right here shouldn't make a difference
    if it because ya want more emphasis on the others 1 - you can stacks the ones that I pointed out I mapped this part way before the rest of the map, so that's way it don't follow the rythme here. Changed it
  • 01:43:694 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream can be curve better I think it's better now
  • 02:39:016 (4,5,6) - I understand the reason of this pattern but at the same time - those 3 notes are stronger than 02:38:533 (1,2,3) - and I feel needs to be spaced out while having (6) the biggest spacing due to the strong vocals I think the vocals are the same here, and for the rest of the map,
    I used a star patern for these jump. The only changes are drums using cymbals, but yeah I understand your pointment, so I spaced this a little more.
  • 03:17:887 (8,9,10) - this is imo way too space out in made it more difficult than it really should be - I suggest reducing it Yep, it's a little overdone, reduced the spacing

I can't play this map so I can't mod much but I say it look pretty cool so I am giving a star Thanks for your help ! :)

GL
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Hi! from #modreqs
Divine Sacrifice


I hope this was helpful in some way. I don't usually mod maps, but this song encouraged me to do that. =D
I can say that we have a really cool map here. I liked the song and the map a lot, you did a really good job!

Good luck with this map! ^^

ps: sorry, my english is really bad ;x
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Gat wrote:
Hi! from #modreqs


I hope this was helpful in some way. I don't usually mod maps, but this song encouraged me to do that. =D
I can say that we have a really cool map here. I liked the song and the map a lot, you did a really good job! I'm glad you liked it ! Thanks for the mod !

Good luck with this map! ^^

ps: sorry, my english is really bad ;x
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14:28 lazyboy007: alors
14:29 lazyboy007: 00:01:762 (1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - 
14:29 lazyboy007: ca c'est moche
14:29 lazyboy007: jk
14:29 lazyboy007: (punaise mon ordi lag maintenant a cause de ca xD)
14:29 Ayzer: mddrrrrrrr
14:30 lazyboy007: alors
14:30 lazyboy007: 00:18:196 (2) - 
14:30 lazyboy007: pq ca c'est différent d'avant
14:30 lazyboy007: meme ici 00:22:020 (2) - 
14:30 Ayzer: de ?
14:30 Ayzer: ce slider ?
14:30 lazyboy007: 00:16:206 (2,3,4) - 
14:30 lazyboy007: meme son
14:30 lazyboy007: mais c'est différent
14:31 Ayzer: effectivement
14:31 Ayzer: mais gw a fait pareil pour une instru comme ça je crois
14:31 Ayzer: ou tout est pareil
14:31 Ayzer: intro*
14:31 lazyboy007: pour counter-clock?
14:31 lazyboy007: il a une logique
14:31 lazyboy007: constante
14:31 Ayzer: le truc c'est que tout est pareil ici, donc on risque de se faire chier
14:31 lazyboy007: et il alterne les patterns
14:31 lazyboy007: ici aussi
14:32 lazyboy007: alterne le patterne
14:32 Ayzer: oui sans doute
14:32 lazyboy007: plutot que de changer subitement
14:32 Ayzer: okey
14:32 lazyboy007: aussi change la slider shape pour indiquer la différence
14:32 lazyboy007: ^^
14:32 Ayzer: du genre quoi du coup
14:32 lazyboy007: je screen un truc
14:32 Ayzer: ou alors je tej les cercles du début et c'est bon
14:33 lazyboy007: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9101897
14:33 lazyboy007: ca
14:33 lazyboy007: ca serait cool
14:33 lazyboy007: peut-être une courbe plus forte
14:34 lazyboy007: après faut aussi orienter d'un sens ou de l'autre et garder le flow correct
14:34 lazyboy007: la j'ai juste plop la shape comme ca :P
14:34 Ayzer: ouais je vois
14:35 lazyboy007: de meme imo le break devrait s'arrêter ici 00:44:729 - 
14:38 lazyboy007: tu me dis quand je continue ;9
14:39 Ayzer: je voulais l'arreter là à la base
14:39 Ayzer: mais je savais pas comment continuer
14:39 Ayzer: vasi continue tkt
14:39 lazyboy007: tu répètes la meme
14:39 lazyboy007: haha
14:40 lazyboy007: ici ca serait cool mais pas nécessaire de change le flow un peu pour insister sur les 1
14:40 lazyboy007: 00:55:791 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 
14:40 lazyboy007: genre
14:40 lazyboy007: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9101959
14:40 lazyboy007: c'est léger mais visuellement ca donne plus d'intensité a ces changements
14:41 lazyboy007: tu pourras bouger le 00:55:629 (3) - pour passer mieux avec
14:41 Ayzer: un peu comme sur le stream d'après
14:41 Ayzer: 01:16:920 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
14:41 lazyboy007: ye
14:41 lazyboy007: ^^
14:42 lazyboy007: une sec je bouge en haut
14:42 lazyboy007: je change de wifi m'écris pas en attendant
14:42 lazyboy007: xD
14:43 lazyboy007: re
14:44 lazyboy007: 01:14:016 (5) - triplet? 
14:44 lazyboy007: c'est le meme son que 01:13:210 (1,2,3) - 
14:45 lazyboy007: 01:15:307 (7,8) - un bo triangle équilatéral serait mieux imo mais tu as peut-être des raisons pour ce pattern jsp
14:45 lazyboy007: 01:18:371 (7) - N              C                  M                O                  D kappa
14:46 Ayzer: jpensais NC
14:47 Ayzer: mais ça risque d'etre galere pr les jumps nn
14:47 lazyboy007: ouais je préfère avec le NC
14:47 lazyboy007: nan
14:47 lazyboy007: c'est un first beat
14:47 Ayzer: avec ça
14:47 lazyboy007: 01:22:565 (1,1,1,2) - ici le snapping convient pas imo
14:47 Ayzer: faut que je refasse tout mon colorhax
14:47 Ayzer: hmm
14:48 lazyboy007: ah
14:48 lazyboy007: laisse alors xD
14:48 lazyboy007: ca ne vaut pas l'effort
14:48 lazyboy007: sur pas mal de tes triplets y'a du clean up visuel a faire d'ailleurs 
14:48 lazyboy007: comme ici 01:29:016 (2,3,4) - 
14:48 lazyboy007: ca aligne mal avec le slider
14:49 Ayzer: en fait
14:49 Ayzer: j'ai aucune idée de comment faire un triplet après un curve
14:49 Ayzer: faut continuer la shape ?
14:49 Ayzer: jtrouve ça fait bizarre avec les cercles
14:49 lazyboy007: ouais tu peux continuer la shape
14:49 lazyboy007: en général je place une note
14:50 lazyboy007: je blanket le slider et le triplet dessus
14:50 lazyboy007: comme ca ca suit la meme curve
14:50 lazyboy007: sinon tu fais un s
14:50 lazyboy007: ca passe aussi mais flow différemment
14:50 lazyboy007: donc cas par cas
14:50 lazyboy007: parfois tu peux utiliser des triplets droits avec slider curve aussi
14:50 lazyboy007: mais la je déconseille d'aligner
14:50 Ayzer: ouais
14:50 lazyboy007: un angle est plus beau
14:51 Ayzer: ok
14:51 lazyboy007: 01:56:436 (5,6,7) - ce pattern et les autres 3/4 sont pas hyper intuitifs comme ils utilisent le meme spacing que les 1/2
14:51 lazyboy007: mais bon
14:52 lazyboy007: y'a pas grand chose que je vois que tu puisse y changer sauf aligner les sliders en flow continu
14:52 lazyboy007: ce qui serait meh
14:53 lazyboy007: (d'ailleurs ton slider design en général est nice dans cette section)
14:53 Ayzer: 02:01:597 (5,6,7) - jpeux faire comme ça sinon
14:53 lazyboy007: oui
14:53 lazyboy007: ca c'est plus facile a read
14:53 lazyboy007: ^^
14:53 lazyboy007: parce que ca saute a l'oeuil
14:53 lazyboy007: mais alors soit consistent avec
14:53 Ayzer: ouais
14:53 lazyboy007: mets ce pattern partout ou il y a du 3/4
14:53 Ayzer: faudrait le mettre partout ou ya ce son du coup
14:53 Ayzer: :x
14:53 Ayzer: bon jverrai
14:53 Ayzer: c'est ptet pas mal
14:53 lazyboy007: ouais a voir
14:54 lazyboy007: 02:13:855 (1,2) - flow bizarre + spacing visuel un peu off imo
14:54 lazyboy007: au fait ici 02:14:339 (3,4,5,6) - pq des kicks?
14:55 lazyboy007: tu peux mettre un 2+4+1 en stream
14:55 lazyboy007: ca passe mieux ^^
14:55 Ayzer: jsp j'aimais bien les kicks ici, ya pas de réelle raison en fait
14:55 lazyboy007: hehe
14:55 Ayzer: mais jpeux changer si ça fit pas
14:55 lazyboy007: ca passe moins bien qu'un stream c'est plus genre
14:56 lazyboy007: inconsistent
14:56 lazyboy007: avec le reste
14:56 lazyboy007: seul ca serait bon mais pas avec le reste de la map telle qu'elle est
14:57 Ayzer: après ici aussi j'ai mis des kicks 01:06:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
14:57 lazyboy007: ah ouais
14:57 lazyboy007: j'avais zappé
14:57 lazyboy007: mais la y'a la guitarre
14:57 lazyboy007: hmm
14:57 lazyboy007: en fait la dessus ce qui passerait le mieux ca serait de remplacer les 4 premiers kicks par un stream 4+4
14:57 lazyboy007: les deux derniers sont bons a cause du bruit de la guitarre
14:58 lazyboy007: genre ca 01:06:920 (1,2) - c'est un son de guitarre
14:58 lazyboy007: 01:07:243 (3,4) - ca aussi
14:59 lazyboy007: ici tu skip un triplet sur la fin 02:47:081 (5) - 
15:00 lazyboy007: 03:12:726 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ici p.ex. des kicks seraient nice a cause de la guitarre
15:00 lazyboy007: tu l'as d'ailleurs fait partout sinon dans la section
15:01 lazyboy007: la section 1/3 est :ok_hand:
15:01 Ayzer: oui
15:01 Ayzer: sinon pour 02:47:081 (5) -
15:01 Ayzer: je sais que je skip
15:01 lazyboy007: oke
15:01 lazyboy007: pas de soucis alors
15:01 Ayzer: mais jle trouvais trop cool le patern
15:01 lazyboy007: ^^
15:01 Ayzer: :'(
15:01 lazyboy007: nan ca va
15:02 lazyboy007: j'ai vu 2-3 autres points ou tu skip 
15:02 lazyboy007: donc c'est cohérent
15:02 lazyboy007: ca passe
15:02 lazyboy007: ^^
15:02 lazyboy007: 03:43:209 (1) - 
15:02 Ayzer: ok nice
15:02 lazyboy007: un peu lent vu l'intensité
15:02 lazyboy007: fin
15:02 lazyboy007: le slider fit pas spécialement
15:02 lazyboy007: tu pourrais map comme avant avec low spacing
15:02 Ayzer: c'était pour suivre la distortion de la guitare + la baisse de sv
15:02 lazyboy007: 03:45:306 - trop intense pour être un sliderend
15:03 lazyboy007: ouais je sais mais ca undermine un peu le reste
15:03 Ayzer: ouais je vois
15:03 lazyboy007: 03:55:790 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 
15:03 lazyboy007: ca c'est
15:03 lazyboy007: bo
15:03 lazyboy007: mais un truc 
15:03 lazyboy007: ajoute le flaire des streams du début
15:03 lazyboy007: 01:16:920 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 
15:03 lazyboy007: les angles
15:03 lazyboy007: ;3
15:04 Ayzer: le flaire ?
15:04 lazyboy007: la beauté
15:04 Ayzer: hmm
15:04 lazyboy007: les angles quoi pour le jump hehe
15:04 lazyboy007: ca passe super bien ici
15:04 Ayzer: du coup ça fera plus un beau triangle
15:04 Ayzer: mais ça fit bien ouais
15:04 lazyboy007: tu peux t'arranger 
15:04 lazyboy007: pour garder le triangle
15:04 lazyboy007: mais il sera plus spécial
15:04 Ayzer: yep
15:05 lazyboy007: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9102165
15:05 lazyboy007: vite fait mal fait
15:05 lazyboy007: (TRES mal fait)
15:06 lazyboy007: 04:00:366 (1,2) - ici je vois pas ce que tu snap
15:06 Ayzer: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9102170 un truc comme ça nn
15:06 Ayzer: ah bah
15:06 Ayzer: LUL
15:06 lazyboy007: exact hehe
15:06 lazyboy007: 04:04:176 (1,2) - doublets c'est mieux ici on lirait pas le 3/4 sinon
15:07 Ayzer: alors ici
15:07 lazyboy007: meme pour la suite
15:07 Ayzer: 04:00:366 (1,2) -  la guitare est pas sur les temps
15:07 lazyboy007: ouais je sais la guitarre est off
15:07 lazyboy007: ^^
15:07 Ayzer: et mappé sur les temps je trouve ça awkward
15:07 lazyboy007: mais mets les red lines p'tet
15:07 Ayzer: du coup j'ai snap sur du 1/16
15:07 lazyboy007: ah
15:07 lazyboy007: xD
15:07 lazyboy007: oke
15:07 lazyboy007: ca me va
15:07 Ayzer: mdr
15:08 lazyboy007: 04:29:660 (1) - un peux trop extrême
15:08 lazyboy007: 04:28:047 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ne cole pas avec ton pattern d'avant sur le meme son
15:08 lazyboy007: 02:40:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
15:09 Ayzer: ils sont tous différents en fait ces streams là
15:09 Ayzer: jsp si c'est bon ou pas
15:09 Ayzer: (sauf au début où les 2 sont pareil)
15:09 lazyboy007: ouais mais la logique n'est pas similaire
15:10 lazyboy007: au fait
15:10 lazyboy007: comme le premier jump de 8 à 1
15:10 lazyboy007: le deuxième non
15:10 lazyboy007: :P
15:10 lazyboy007: sinon reste de la map c'est cool
15:10 Ayzer: le premier jump de 8 à 1 ?
15:10 Ayzer: et vraiment rien à redire sur la 1/3 ? genre c'est pas trop dur à jouer ?
15:10 lazyboy007: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9102202
15:11 lazyboy007: prev 2.41
15:11 lazyboy007: http://puu.sh/xB6zj/7e5e39add6.jpg
15:11 lazyboy007: prev 0.49
15:11 lazyboy007: ^^
15:11 lazyboy007: dur a jouer?
15:11 lazyboy007: par pour moi non
15:11 lazyboy007: le reste est pas moins dur
15:11 lazyboy007: :P
15:11 Ayzer: 04:00:366 (1,2) -  ici aussi du coup
15:11 lazyboy007: ca c'est déroutant mais ca passe
15:11 Ayzer: ouais jsp des gens ont bien insisté sur la 1/3 quoi
15:12 Ayzer: merde
15:12 Ayzer: mauvais
15:12 lazyboy007: ah haha
15:12 Ayzer: 01:46:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
15:12 Ayzer: jvoulkais dire là
15:12 lazyboy007: ah
15:12 lazyboy007: oui
15:12 lazyboy007: ^^
15:14 Ayzer: du coup j'ai un peu décalé
15:14 Ayzer: jsp si ça va suffir
15:14 lazyboy007: j'espère
15:14 lazyboy007: :3
15:15 lazyboy007: ok je post le log sur le forum
15:15 Ayzer: en gros faut quoi, juste un mini jump ?
15:15 lazyboy007: ouais
15:15 Ayzer: pour la consistancy avec le reste
15:15 Ayzer: k
15:15 lazyboy007: 2.41 spacing
15:15 lazyboy007: ^^


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14:28 lazyboy007: alors
14:29 lazyboy007: 00:01:762 (1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - 
14:29 lazyboy007: ca c'est moche
14:29 lazyboy007: jk
14:29 lazyboy007: (punaise mon ordi lag maintenant a cause de ca xD)
14:29 Ayzer: mddrrrrrrr
14:30 lazyboy007: alors
14:30 lazyboy007: 00:18:196 (2) - 
14:30 lazyboy007: pq ca c'est différent d'avant
14:30 lazyboy007: meme ici 00:22:020 (2) - 
14:30 Ayzer: de ?
14:30 Ayzer: ce slider ?
14:30 lazyboy007: 00:16:206 (2,3,4) - 
14:30 lazyboy007: meme son
14:30 lazyboy007: mais c'est différent
14:31 Ayzer: effectivement
14:31 Ayzer: mais gw a fait pareil pour une instru comme ça je crois
14:31 Ayzer: ou tout est pareil
14:31 Ayzer: intro*
14:31 lazyboy007: pour counter-clock?
14:31 lazyboy007: il a une logique
14:31 lazyboy007: constante
14:31 Ayzer: le truc c'est que tout est pareil ici, donc on risque de se faire chier
14:31 lazyboy007: et il alterne les patterns
14:31 lazyboy007: ici aussi
14:32 lazyboy007: alterne le patterne
14:32 Ayzer: oui sans doute
14:32 lazyboy007: plutot que de changer subitement
14:32 Ayzer: okey
14:32 lazyboy007: aussi change la slider shape pour indiquer la différence
14:32 lazyboy007: ^^
14:32 Ayzer: du genre quoi du coup
14:32 lazyboy007: je screen un truc
14:32 Ayzer: ou alors je tej les cercles du début et c'est bon
14:33 lazyboy007: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9101897
14:33 lazyboy007: ca
14:33 lazyboy007: ca serait cool
14:33 lazyboy007: peut-être une courbe plus forte
14:34 lazyboy007: après faut aussi orienter d'un sens ou de l'autre et garder le flow correct
14:34 lazyboy007: la j'ai juste plop la shape comme ca :P
14:34 Ayzer: ouais je vois
14:35 lazyboy007: de meme imo le break devrait s'arrêter ici 00:44:729 - 
14:38 lazyboy007: tu me dis quand je continue ;9
14:39 Ayzer: je voulais l'arreter là à la base
14:39 Ayzer: mais je savais pas comment continuer
14:39 Ayzer: vasi continue tkt
14:39 lazyboy007: tu répètes la meme
14:39 lazyboy007: haha
14:40 lazyboy007: ici ca serait cool mais pas nécessaire de change le flow un peu pour insister sur les 1
14:40 lazyboy007: 00:55:791 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 
14:40 lazyboy007: genre
14:40 lazyboy007: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9101959
14:40 lazyboy007: c'est léger mais visuellement ca donne plus d'intensité a ces changements
14:41 lazyboy007: tu pourras bouger le 00:55:629 (3) - pour passer mieux avec
14:41 Ayzer: un peu comme sur le stream d'après
14:41 Ayzer: 01:16:920 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
14:41 lazyboy007: ye
14:41 lazyboy007: ^^
14:42 lazyboy007: une sec je bouge en haut
14:42 lazyboy007: je change de wifi m'écris pas en attendant
14:42 lazyboy007: xD
14:43 lazyboy007: re
14:44 lazyboy007: 01:14:016 (5) - triplet? 
14:44 lazyboy007: c'est le meme son que 01:13:210 (1,2,3) - 
14:45 lazyboy007: 01:15:307 (7,8) - un bo triangle équilatéral serait mieux imo mais tu as peut-être des raisons pour ce pattern jsp
14:45 lazyboy007: 01:18:371 (7) - N C M O D kappa
14:46 Ayzer: jpensais NC
14:47 Ayzer: mais ça risque d'etre galere pr les jumps nn
14:47 lazyboy007: ouais je préfère avec le NC
14:47 lazyboy007: nan
14:47 lazyboy007: c'est un first beat
14:47 Ayzer: avec ça
14:47 lazyboy007: 01:22:565 (1,1,1,2) - ici le snapping convient pas imo
14:47 Ayzer: faut que je refasse tout mon colorhax
14:47 Ayzer: hmm
14:48 lazyboy007: ah
14:48 lazyboy007: laisse alors xD
14:48 lazyboy007: ca ne vaut pas l'effort
14:48 lazyboy007: sur pas mal de tes triplets y'a du clean up visuel a faire d'ailleurs 
14:48 lazyboy007: comme ici 01:29:016 (2,3,4) - 
14:48 lazyboy007: ca aligne mal avec le slider
14:49 Ayzer: en fait
14:49 Ayzer: j'ai aucune idée de comment faire un triplet après un curve
14:49 Ayzer: faut continuer la shape ?
14:49 Ayzer: jtrouve ça fait bizarre avec les cercles
14:49 lazyboy007: ouais tu peux continuer la shape
14:49 lazyboy007: en général je place une note
14:50 lazyboy007: je blanket le slider et le triplet dessus
14:50 lazyboy007: comme ca ca suit la meme curve
14:50 lazyboy007: sinon tu fais un s
14:50 lazyboy007: ca passe aussi mais flow différemment
14:50 lazyboy007: donc cas par cas
14:50 lazyboy007: parfois tu peux utiliser des triplets droits avec slider curve aussi
14:50 lazyboy007: mais la je déconseille d'aligner
14:50 Ayzer: ouais
14:50 lazyboy007: un angle est plus beau
14:51 Ayzer: ok
14:51 lazyboy007: 01:56:436 (5,6,7) - ce pattern et les autres 3/4 sont pas hyper intuitifs comme ils utilisent le meme spacing que les 1/2
14:51 lazyboy007: mais bon
14:52 lazyboy007: y'a pas grand chose que je vois que tu puisse y changer sauf aligner les sliders en flow continu
14:52 lazyboy007: ce qui serait meh
14:53 lazyboy007: (d'ailleurs ton slider design en général est nice dans cette section)
14:53 Ayzer: 02:01:597 (5,6,7) - jpeux faire comme ça sinon
14:53 lazyboy007: oui
14:53 lazyboy007: ca c'est plus facile a read
14:53 lazyboy007: ^^
14:53 lazyboy007: parce que ca saute a l'oeuil
14:53 lazyboy007: mais alors soit consistent avec
14:53 Ayzer: ouais
14:53 lazyboy007: mets ce pattern partout ou il y a du 3/4
14:53 Ayzer: faudrait le mettre partout ou ya ce son du coup
14:53 Ayzer: :x
14:53 Ayzer: bon jverrai
14:53 Ayzer: c'est ptet pas mal
14:53 lazyboy007: ouais a voir
14:54 lazyboy007: 02:13:855 (1,2) - flow bizarre + spacing visuel un peu off imo
14:54 lazyboy007: au fait ici 02:14:339 (3,4,5,6) - pq des kicks?
14:55 lazyboy007: tu peux mettre un 2+4+1 en stream
14:55 lazyboy007: ca passe mieux ^^
14:55 Ayzer: jsp j'aimais bien les kicks ici, ya pas de réelle raison en fait
14:55 lazyboy007: hehe
14:55 Ayzer: mais jpeux changer si ça fit pas
14:55 lazyboy007: ca passe moins bien qu'un stream c'est plus genre
14:56 lazyboy007: inconsistent
14:56 lazyboy007: avec le reste
14:56 lazyboy007: seul ca serait bon mais pas avec le reste de la map telle qu'elle est
14:57 Ayzer: après ici aussi j'ai mis des kicks 01:06:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
14:57 lazyboy007: ah ouais
14:57 lazyboy007: j'avais zappé
14:57 lazyboy007: mais la y'a la guitarre
14:57 lazyboy007: hmm
14:57 lazyboy007: en fait la dessus ce qui passerait le mieux ca serait de remplacer les 4 premiers kicks par un stream 4+4
14:57 lazyboy007: les deux derniers sont bons a cause du bruit de la guitarre
14:58 lazyboy007: genre ca 01:06:920 (1,2) - c'est un son de guitarre
14:58 lazyboy007: 01:07:243 (3,4) - ca aussi
14:59 lazyboy007: ici tu skip un triplet sur la fin 02:47:081 (5) - 
15:00 lazyboy007: 03:12:726 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ici p.ex. des kicks seraient nice a cause de la guitarre
15:00 lazyboy007: tu l'as d'ailleurs fait partout sinon dans la section
15:01 lazyboy007: la section 1/3 est :ok_hand:
15:01 Ayzer: oui
15:01 Ayzer: sinon pour 02:47:081 (5) -
15:01 Ayzer: je sais que je skip
15:01 lazyboy007: oke
15:01 lazyboy007: pas de soucis alors
15:01 Ayzer: mais jle trouvais trop cool le patern
15:01 lazyboy007: ^^
15:01 Ayzer: :'(
15:01 lazyboy007: nan ca va
15:02 lazyboy007: j'ai vu 2-3 autres points ou tu skip 
15:02 lazyboy007: donc c'est cohérent
15:02 lazyboy007: ca passe
15:02 lazyboy007: ^^
15:02 lazyboy007: 03:43:209 (1) - 
15:02 Ayzer: ok nice
15:02 lazyboy007: un peu lent vu l'intensité
15:02 lazyboy007: fin
15:02 lazyboy007: le slider fit pas spécialement
15:02 lazyboy007: tu pourrais map comme avant avec low spacing
15:02 Ayzer: c'était pour suivre la distortion de la guitare + la baisse de sv
15:02 lazyboy007: 03:45:306 - trop intense pour être un sliderend
15:03 lazyboy007: ouais je sais mais ca undermine un peu le reste
15:03 Ayzer: ouais je vois
15:03 lazyboy007: 03:55:790 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 
15:03 lazyboy007: ca c'est
15:03 lazyboy007: bo
15:03 lazyboy007: mais un truc 
15:03 lazyboy007: ajoute le flaire des streams du début
15:03 lazyboy007: 01:16:920 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 
15:03 lazyboy007: les angles
15:03 lazyboy007: ;3
15:04 Ayzer: le flaire ?
15:04 lazyboy007: la beauté
15:04 Ayzer: hmm
15:04 lazyboy007: les angles quoi pour le jump hehe
15:04 lazyboy007: ca passe super bien ici
15:04 Ayzer: du coup ça fera plus un beau triangle
15:04 Ayzer: mais ça fit bien ouais
15:04 lazyboy007: tu peux t'arranger 
15:04 lazyboy007: pour garder le triangle
15:04 lazyboy007: mais il sera plus spécial
15:04 Ayzer: yep
15:05 lazyboy007: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9102165
15:05 lazyboy007: vite fait mal fait
15:05 lazyboy007: (TRES mal fait)
15:06 lazyboy007: 04:00:366 (1,2) - ici je vois pas ce que tu snap
15:06 Ayzer: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9102170 un truc comme ça nn
15:06 Ayzer: ah bah
15:06 Ayzer: LUL
15:06 lazyboy007: exact hehe
15:06 lazyboy007: 04:04:176 (1,2) - doublets c'est mieux ici on lirait pas le 3/4 sinon
15:07 Ayzer: alors ici
15:07 lazyboy007: meme pour la suite
15:07 Ayzer: 04:00:366 (1,2) - la guitare est pas sur les temps
15:07 lazyboy007: ouais je sais la guitarre est off
15:07 lazyboy007: ^^
15:07 Ayzer: et mappé sur les temps je trouve ça awkward
15:07 lazyboy007: mais mets les red lines p'tet
15:07 Ayzer: du coup j'ai snap sur du 1/16
15:07 lazyboy007: ah
15:07 lazyboy007: xD
15:07 lazyboy007: oke
15:07 lazyboy007: ca me va
15:07 Ayzer: mdr
15:08 lazyboy007: 04:29:660 (1) - un peux trop extrême
15:08 lazyboy007: 04:28:047 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ne cole pas avec ton pattern d'avant sur le meme son
15:08 lazyboy007: 02:40:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
15:09 Ayzer: ils sont tous différents en fait ces streams là
15:09 Ayzer: jsp si c'est bon ou pas
15:09 Ayzer: (sauf au début où les 2 sont pareil)
15:09 lazyboy007: ouais mais la logique n'est pas similaire
15:10 lazyboy007: au fait
15:10 lazyboy007: comme le premier jump de 8 à 1
15:10 lazyboy007: le deuxième non
15:10 lazyboy007: :P
15:10 lazyboy007: sinon reste de la map c'est cool
15:10 Ayzer: le premier jump de 8 à 1 ?
15:10 Ayzer: et vraiment rien à redire sur la 1/3 ? genre c'est pas trop dur à jouer ?
15:10 lazyboy007: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9102202
15:11 lazyboy007: prev 2.41
15:11 lazyboy007: http://puu.sh/xB6zj/7e5e39add6.jpg
15:11 lazyboy007: prev 0.49
15:11 lazyboy007: ^^
15:11 lazyboy007: dur a jouer?
15:11 lazyboy007: par pour moi non
15:11 lazyboy007: le reste est pas moins dur
15:11 lazyboy007: :P
15:11 Ayzer: 04:00:366 (1,2) - ici aussi du coup
15:11 lazyboy007: ca c'est déroutant mais ca passe
15:11 Ayzer: ouais jsp des gens ont bien insisté sur la 1/3 quoi
15:12 Ayzer: merde
15:12 Ayzer: mauvais
15:12 lazyboy007: ah haha
15:12 Ayzer: 01:46:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
15:12 Ayzer: jvoulkais dire là
15:12 lazyboy007: ah
15:12 lazyboy007: oui
15:12 lazyboy007: ^^
15:14 Ayzer: du coup j'ai un peu décalé
15:14 Ayzer: jsp si ça va suffir
15:14 lazyboy007: j'espère
15:14 lazyboy007: :3
15:15 lazyboy007: ok je post le log sur le forum
15:15 Ayzer: en gros faut quoi, juste un mini jump ?
15:15 lazyboy007: ouais
15:15 Ayzer: pour la consistancy avec le reste
15:15 Ayzer: k
15:15 lazyboy007: 2.41 spacing
15:15 lazyboy007: ^^


some irc modding tho OKE
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Hi! A low-level mod from a random dude.

As a big fan of this song, I really do hope you'll end up making it into a great map. The map has potential, yet is quite flawed at the moment. Please do consider checking out what I think is bad, and try to improve on them.

PS: These are my thoughts, if you agree, then change the map accordingly, if not then perhaps an idea for a different time.

Things that should be improved on
Your map has this random thing where there are suddenly big jumps yet in the same part where song isn't less intense the jumps become suddenly so small. I believe similar sections should have similar spacing. What's more, I feel most of this map has pretty bad flow. I have brought up various offenders that really caught my eye, but you should also consider at least reviewing the parts that I didn't mark as 'the good parts'.

You also like to use various sliders, I believe you should use certain types of slider for certain noises, otherwise it just makes reading a struggle. Basically, the random sliderart is an unnecessary hustle you've had.


01:31:113 (7,1) - The distance is too small and it feels awful to play. It also doesn't fit with the song, as she's on the loudest syllable of the word at that timing.
01:37:404 (5,6) - Weird to play, also pretty much the only part where you use kick slider before 1/2 slider instead of two circles.
01:41:597 (1,2) - Weird to play, distance is too small, it doesn't really flow well either.
01:58:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern doesn't feel good to play at all.
02:28:049 (1,2) - Weird to play, distance is too small, it doesn't really flow well either. I'll stop mentioning similar things from now on.
02:29:662 (2,3) - Yet again you have a random kick slider placed here. I'll stop mentioning these as well (I also skipped one iirc).
02:47:081 (5) - Why this? Why not 1/2 slider and two circles (making it into a triple with the slider that starts with the Kiai time) instead?
03:27:404 (1) - What's this? I really don't understand this one. Even the last one made sense, but this is just random.
03:37:738 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - How about making these kicksliders into 4x repeat sliders? Something like this: https://i.imgur.com/LwLgws5.png You'd have to fix green lines etc., obviously, but it should be better once you're done.
04:35:789 (1) - What happened to this entire chorus? Literally one of the most intense pats of the song (Kiai time even) and you just map it into such a slow thing. Please do consider re-doing it!
05:06:434 (6,1) - This transition is quite hard to play (it's not bad! just difficult for the likes of me to play), I'd make it a little smoother (as in not making a <- -> movement in , more like <- and then down perhaps). Something similar to this: https://i.imgur.com/jh0S8Dx.jpg
05:19:015 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - this is pretty awkward to play.
05:22:241 (1) - Why isn't this a proper stream? These repeaters feel so random in this really intense part.
05:28:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This triangle is pretty bad, please consider redoing it.


Things that are really good/should be kept/should be minimally edited
00:55:146 (1) - from here to 01:07:161 (4) - here. This section is pretty well done. Am not a fan of the four kick sliders following this section, but they are quasi-acceptable.
01:16:920 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This stream is good.
01:20:952 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,1) - This section is good.
01:43:694 (3) - from here to 01:54:178 (5) - here, this section is really well done.
02:02:242 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This feels good to play.
02:12:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
02:15:307 (8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
02:37:081 (1) - from here to 02:46:999 (4) - here, this section looks good.
02:56:436 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This feels good to play.
03:05:468 (1) - from here to 03:27:296 (3) - here, this section is really well done.
03:27:834 (1) - from here to 03:36:006 (3) - here, this section is pretty good. The latter part of this slow stream is quite okay as well, but a bit too much for my fancy (especially the sliders).
03:48:370 (2) - from here to 03:59:580 (4) - - here, this section is really well done (especially the 1/8 sliders).
04:00:951 (1) - this whole stream looks good.
04:25:628 (1) - from here to 04:35:467 (5) - here, this section is pretty well done.
04:44:821 (1) - this stream is good.
04:55:144 (1) - from here to 05:18:692 (2) - here, quite a fan of this part.

Basically, you're really good at streams. I hope you'll get better at other parts as well. x)
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Hi! A low-level mod from a random dude.

As a big fan of this song, I really do hope you'll end up making it into a great map. The map has potential, yet is quite flawed at the moment. Please do consider checking out what I think is bad, and try to improve on them.

PS: These are my thoughts, if you agree, then change the map accordingly, if not then perhaps an idea for a different time.

Things that should be improved on
Your map has this random thing where there are suddenly big jumps yet in the same part where song isn't less intense the jumps become suddenly so small. I believe similar sections should have similar spacing. What's more, I feel most of this map has pretty bad flow. I have brought up various offenders that really caught my eye, but you should also consider at least reviewing the parts that I didn't mark as 'the good parts'.

You also like to use various sliders, I believe you should use certain types of slider for certain noises, otherwise it just makes reading a struggle. Basically, the random sliderart is an unnecessary hustle you've had.


01:31:113 (7,1) - The distance is too small and it feels awful to play. It also doesn't fit with the song, as she's on the loudest syllable of the word at that timing. Changed

01:37:404 (5,6) - Weird to play, also pretty much the only part where you use kick slider before 1/2 slider instead of two circles. Changed

01:41:597 (1,2) - Weird to play, distance is too small, it doesn't really flow well either. Changed

01:58:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern doesn't feel good to play at all. Changed

02:28:049 (1,2) - Weird to play, distance is too small, it doesn't really flow well either. I'll stop mentioning similar things from now on. Changed

02:29:662 (2,3) - Yet again you have a random kick slider placed here. I'll stop mentioning these as well (I also skipped one iirc). Changed

02:47:081 (5) - Why this? Why not 1/2 slider and two circles (making it into a triple with the slider that starts with the Kiai time) instead? Uhh. I know i'm missing the snare here, but i really wanted to make a "break" before the kiai. Also, even if i follow the drums 90% of the time, there is a guitare sound here, which makes this slider justified. And i really like the patern lol

03:27:404 (1) - What's this? I really don't understand this one. Even the last one made sense, but this is just random. What ? There is a 1/3 rythm at the drums which is perfectly audible. Maybe you say that because the guitare is playing something totally different, but this slider makes sence,
at least for me.


03:37:738 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - How about making these kicksliders into 4x repeat sliders? Something like this: https://i.imgur.com/LwLgws5.png You'd have to fix green lines etc., obviously, but it should be better once you're done. I really like how it looks actually. Your idea is not bad, musically speaking, but in esthetic i prefer how it is now. But thanks for the suggestion !

04:35:789 (1) - What happened to this entire chorus? Literally one of the most intense pats of the song (Kiai time even) and you just map it into such a slow thing. Please do consider re-doing it! Hmm. Yeah. I don't like how it plays either, so i think i'll remap the whole section in short times. You are totally right, it's boring asf to play when the music isn't

05:06:434 (6,1) - This transition is quite hard to play (it's not bad! just difficult for the likes of me to play), I'd make it a little smoother (as in not making a <- -> movement in , more like <- and then down perhaps). Something similar to this: https://i.imgur.com/jh0S8Dx.jpg I changed it a little,
it should be easier now.


05:19:015 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - this is pretty awkward to play. Well, it's just some 1212 here, i dont really think it plays bad

05:22:241 (1) - Why isn't this a proper stream? These repeaters feel so random in this really intense part. Hell yeah, you're right. I entirely remapped this section. I was missing one of the most epic part of the song, thx for pointing me that !

05:28:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This triangle is pretty bad, please consider redoing it. Yep, remade this. (I guess you just pointed how bad the triangle was made, and not how bad this patern was ?


Things that are really good/should be kept/should be minimally edited
00:55:146 (1) - from here to 01:07:161 (4) - here. This section is pretty well done. Am not a fan of the four kick sliders following this section, but they are quasi-acceptable.
01:16:920 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This stream is good.
01:20:952 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,1) - This section is good.
01:43:694 (3) - from here to 01:54:178 (5) - here, this section is really well done.
02:02:242 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This feels good to play.
02:12:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
02:15:307 (8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
02:37:081 (1) - from here to 02:46:999 (4) - here, this section looks good.
02:56:436 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This feels good to play.
03:05:468 (1) - from here to 03:27:296 (3) - here, this section is really well done.
03:27:834 (1) - from here to 03:36:006 (3) - here, this section is pretty good. The latter part of this slow stream is quite okay as well, but a bit too much for my fancy (especially the sliders).
03:48:370 (2) - from here to 03:59:580 (4) - - here, this section is really well done (especially the 1/8 sliders).
04:00:951 (1) - this whole stream looks good.
04:25:628 (1) - from here to 04:35:467 (5) - here, this section is pretty well done.
04:44:821 (1) - this stream is good.
04:55:144 (1) - from here to 05:18:692 (2) - here, quite a fan of this part.

Basically, you're really good at streams. I hope you'll get better at other parts as well. x) Thanks a lot for this mod ! I haven't yet received feedbacks like that. I knew some parts had bad flow, or construction (mostly the older ones), and needed to be remap. I really want to push this map forward, to possibly make a good clean map.


PS : I remapped a lot of parts, so i want to know if it's better than before. I still kept the old .osu, if there are bad parts now
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