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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, October 20, 2017 at 11:16:15 PM

Artist: ClariS
Title: SHIORI -TV size mix-
Source: 終物語
Tags: Fii -wwwww Spectator Owarimonogatari Ougi
BPM: 176
Filesize: 2569kb
Play Time: 01:27
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Collab by Kaitlin and Spectator

Hitsounds from kunka's set
Owari Season 1 ED


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Last edited by Sinnoh on , edited 16 times in total.
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M4M
from your queue
these are all suggestions

Kaitlin & Spec's Rain
beautiful

Rain
Yay

Platter below is my weakness.
Good luck with the map!
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Hi_Hello wrote:
M4M
from your queue
these are all suggestions

Rain
  • 00:05:799 - add note here, maybe? Didn't hear that till now, but can't add since 00:07:077 (5) - would also need and 1/4 hyper to antiflow is a bit much
  • 00:08:611 (1) - this slider is too long. move the tail on to the red tick and add note at 00:09:293 -? It sounds better. yes
  • 00:27:191 (4,5,6) - move 5 at x:392, then move 6 at x:232 and make it slighty diagonal. done
  • 00:45:089 (4) - move 4 at x:392 seems good, but always give a reason for why
  • 00:48:668 (2,3) - hdash seems not recommended at this moment. 1/4 violin is interesting so i added + better flow
Yay

Platter below is my weakness.
Good luck with the map!

thanks, I'll get to your set this week
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General
  • Colours where
  • 01:09:975 (1) - There's a distinguishable cymbals in the song here, should add a finish to show that. Same goes for 01:11:339 (1) - .


Kaitlin & Spec's Rain
  • 00:02:645 (3,1) - Distance feels abnormally low compared to 00:00:259 (1,1) - , would increase the distance.
  • 00:05:884 (1,2) - The vocals at this point is the weaker compared to notes like 00:09:123 (4,5) - , so only having a clear dash here doesn't make sense to me. Personally I would remove the dash here and add dashes on the later notes, but you can consider to also keep this current dash at add it on the later notes as well.
  • 00:15:089 (1,2) - Slider is angled at a weird angle, that when it requires the player to dash to (2), which is further than the previous 2 dashes, they are forced to stop a little bit in the middle due to how vertical it is. Would try to make this more horizontal or just go with a more vertical slider, or reduce the distance between these 2 notes.
  • 00:21:907 (4,1) - Feels underwhelming as a walk compared to 00:27:532 (6,1) - , would rather make this a dash for the downbeat emphasis.
  • 00:38:100 (7,8,1) - Consecutive hypers of different snaps are unrankable in a Rain. To fix this, (7) > (8) can be a dash instead.
  • 01:24:123 (2,3) - Don't really think a wiggle is suitable here as the snare isn't anything too special - a clearer 'special' snare sounds are at 01:24:293 (3) - instead imo. Would just flip (2) horizontally.


Rain
  • 00:03:839 (3,1) - Pretty sure this is intended to be a dash ain't it? Feels quite short for it being 1 if so. Increase the distance.
  • 00:12:020 (3,4,5,6,1) - Tbh this movement's very tight and precise to pull off. With the stopflow created by (1) and (2), a dash needs to be made towards (3) and (4) - then a set of hypers need to be carried out, which is increasing in distance everytime. For players just starting out on Rain, missing 1 note here can be quite punishing as it will mean missing all the other notes, which would most probably lead to a fail due to the long pause after this. I would just use 1/1 sliders to simplify this, but make it simple as you see fit.
  • Is it just me or the kiai feels lacking in dashes? All I see much of are hypers and there are a very few clear dashes, and from 01:14:066 - it feels like there are none at all. it might be just me playing bad What I suggest to do is tone down some hypers which could have easily been dashes (say 01:18:498 (2,3) - ) or add in places to emphasize anything further (say 01:21:395 (4,5) - as a part of build-up), but hey, I might be off the wrong foot here xd


Platter
  • Difficulty has too much hypers - it's fine on paper but having it on every measure is just overdoing it. Say for example from 00:27:702 - to 00:38:611 - , while that bell sound should be emphasized consistently, it doesn't necessarily have to mean every one of those have to be hypers - they can just be dashes. Besides, the song feels more calm during this part so having hypers regularly just doesn't seem to fit. Even in build-ups like 00:05:884 - to 00:11:339 - could have been toned down on the earlier parts by using dashes at 00:07:077 (4,1) - and etc.. In the kiai there's a possibility to have dashes on non-important downbeats (like 01:04:520 (1) - , 01:05:884 (1) - ) and have hypers only on downbeats with special instruments/vocals (like 01:07:248 (1) - , 01:08:611 (1) - , 01:09:975 (1) - ) which will reduce the amount of hypers used.
    Tl;dr reduce those hypers, it's making everything much more harder than it should be.
  • 00:15:430 (1,2) - Dash where
  • That's all tho, other than that long ass first point which is major


Salad
  • 00:28:895 (3,4) - Dash distance feels abnormally lower than others, would increase a bit.
  • 00:49:520 (1) - Da hell is this slider
  • 01:00:941 (4,5) - (5)'s head doesn't land on anything really, would rather make (4) 1/1 slider than follow it up with a circle instead.
  • 01:18:157 (4,5) - The bell's sound is increasing, so just overlapping 2 same sliders feels plain. Would use 2 circles in place of (5) and increase their distance a bit compared to (4)'s gap between head and tail.


Cup

Good luck :)
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General
  • Colours where
  • 01:09:975 (1) - There's a distinguishable cymbals in the song here, should add a finish to show that. Same goes for 01:11:339 (1) - .


Rain
  • 00:03:839 (3,1) - Pretty sure this is intended to be a dash ain't it? Feels quite short for it being 1 if so. Increase the distance. small buff
  • 00:12:020 (3,4,5,6,1) - Tbh this movement's very tight and precise to pull off. With the stopflow created by (1) and (2), a dash needs to be made towards (3) and (4) - then a set of hypers need to be carried out, which is increasing in distance everytime. For players just starting out on Rain, missing 1 note here can be quite punishing as it will mean missing all the other notes, which would most probably lead to a fail due to the long pause after this. I would just use 1/1 sliders to simplify this, but make it simple as you see fit. did that
  • Is it just me or the kiai feels lacking in dashes? All I see much of are hypers and there are a very few clear dashes, and from 01:14:066 - it feels like there are none at all. it might be just me playing bad What I suggest to do is tone down some hypers which could have easily been dashes (say 01:18:498 (2,3) - ) or add in places to emphasize anything further (say 01:21:395 (4,5) - as a part of build-up), but hey, I might be off the wrong foot here xd removed dash at 1:18, but i prefer not using dashes in dense/fast sections because they're much harder to read compared to hypers.


Platter
  • Difficulty has too much hypers - it's fine on paper but having it on every measure is just overdoing it. Say for example from 00:27:702 - to 00:38:611 - , while that bell sound should be emphasized consistently, it doesn't necessarily have to mean every one of those have to be hypers - they can just be dashes. Besides, the song feels more calm during this part so having hypers regularly just doesn't seem to fit. Even in build-ups like 00:05:884 - to 00:11:339 - could have been toned down on the earlier parts by using dashes at 00:07:077 (4,1) - and etc.. In the kiai there's a possibility to have dashes on non-important downbeats (like 01:04:520 (1) - , 01:05:884 (1) - ) and have hypers only on downbeats with special instruments/vocals (like 01:07:248 (1) - , 01:08:611 (1) - , 01:09:975 (1) - ) which will reduce the amount of hypers used.
    Tl;dr reduce those hypers, it's making everything much more harder than it should be. wip on that and applied
  • 00:15:430 (1,2) - Dash where k
  • That's all tho, other than that long ass first point which is major


Salad
  • 00:28:895 (3,4) - Dash distance feels abnormally lower than others, would increase a bit. fixed
  • 00:49:520 (1) - Da hell is this slider cancer droplets
  • 01:00:941 (4,5) - (5)'s head doesn't land on anything really, would rather make (4) 1/1 slider than follow it up with a circle instead. vocal
  • 01:18:157 (4,5) - The bell's sound is increasing, so just overlapping 2 same sliders feels plain. Would use 2 circles in place of (5) and increase their distance a bit compared to (4)'s gap between head and tail. yes


Cup
  • 00:02:475 (2) - Distance here feels a little too low compared to the notes after, would increase this a bit.
  • 00:08:100 (3,1) - Increase the distance here so that you are following the build-up. not too much since also antiflow
  • 00:15:600 (2,3) - Compared to 00:14:066 (1,2) - , the intensity of the movement here doesn't seem to fit the song here too much. Try to increase the distance a bit to reflect the energy of the song. adjusted
  • 00:24:293 (5,1) - More emphasis here would be great for the vocals. i'm just going to say ok for the rest here
  • 00:35:202 (5,1) - Here too, for the downbeat instead. Srsly most of the important beats are not emphasized strongly enough lol
  • 00:36:736 (2,3) - You get the idea
  • 00:41:339 (5,1) - NC should be swapped. Cause of this, later the NC becomes kinda messy lul fix
  • 00:50:202 (2,3) - Increase distance blablabla, same goes for 00:51:907 (4,1) - , 01:06:907 (3,4) - , 01:21:566 (4,1) - , 01:22:930 (2,3) - (last 2 for build-up).
  • 01:18:839 (6,7) - Instead of increasing distance here, I would put (7) on the left of (6) so that the emphasis on the strongest sound of the bell is there. Also while at it you can increase the distance too heh prefer current pattern

Good luck :)
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Hello! M4M
It`s all. I think you skiped a lot of vocal part which you can mapped but it`s your map. Good luck.
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Shirokane Rinko wrote:
Hello! M4M

    Cup
  • 00:20:543 - How I saw - you mapped a lot of ticks and skipped it, why? It`s strong beat, You can added note Added a note since it was the only 2/1 gap
  • 00:24:975 (1) - Strong beat and start of vocal, maybe increase spacing? increased a little, but it's already further than previous gap
  • 00:27:020 (4,1) - ^ beat how ^ but spacing lower, why? changed slider angle to emphasize 1
  • 01:02:305 - You can mapped lyrics but it only my opinion no need on cup
  • 01:08:270 (6,1) - Increase spacing, strong beat but low spacing increased a bit
    Good cup, it`s all

    Salad
  • 00:02:816 - why you skip this sound? no strong sound to follow, eg vocal drum unique sounds
  • 00:06:907 - ^
  • 00:16:111 (2,1) - reduce spacing. Song have a lot of sounds with loudy sound but they moments have lower distance did a little
  • 00:24:634 (6,1) - ^ this is low enough
  • 00:39:805 (3,4) - reduce distance, it`s can be hard for newbie player applied
  • 01:17:475 (3,4) - ^
    I think on salad a lot of moments with far distance on quiet sound

    Platter
  • 00:07:077 (4,1) - Added HDash strong beat would add too many hypers, check sc4v's mod
  • 00:08:441 (4,1) - ^
  • 00:09:464 (2,3) - ^
  • 00:09:464 (2,3) - You can mapped vocal part vocal is background here, drums are more important
  • 00:37:930 (5,1) - HDash maybe? too many
  • 01:02:475 - 01:02:816 - you can added short spiner if you not mapped vocal part too much for platter
  • 01:27:702 (1) - added here note how on lower diff there's a spinner though lol
It`s all. I think you skiped a lot of vocal part which you can mapped but it`s your map. Good luck.
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Hi_Hello wrote:
M4M
from your queue
these are all suggestions

Kaitlin & Spec's Rain
beautiful thank you <3

Rain
Yay

Platter below is my weakness.
Good luck with the map!


Sc4v4ng3r wrote:
zzz forum logs me out once i finished my mod aaaaaaa
Will get the mod done later in the day


General
  • Colours where
  • 01:09:975 (1) - There's a distinguishable cymbals in the song here, should add a finish to show that. Same goes for 01:11:339 (1) - .


Kaitlin & Spec's Rain
  • 00:02:645 (3,1) - Distance feels abnormally low compared to 00:00:259 (1,1) - , would increase the distance.
  • 00:05:884 (1,2) - The vocals at this point is the weaker compared to notes like 00:09:123 (4,5) - , so only having a clear dash here doesn't make sense to me. Personally I would remove the dash here and add dashes on the later notes, but you can consider to also keep this current dash at add it on the later notes as well.
  • 00:15:089 (1,2) - Slider is angled at a weird angle, that when it requires the player to dash to (2), which is further than the previous 2 dashes, they are forced to stop a little bit in the middle due to how vertical it is. Would try to make this more horizontal or just go with a more vertical slider, or reduce the distance between these 2 notes.
  • 00:21:907 (4,1) - Feels underwhelming as a walk compared to 00:27:532 (6,1) - , would rather make this a dash for the downbeat emphasis.
  • 00:38:100 (7,8,1) - Consecutive hypers of different snaps are unrankable in a Rain. To fix this, (7) > (8) can be a dash instead.
  • 01:24:123 (2,3) - Don't really think a wiggle is suitable here as the snare isn't anything too special - a clearer 'special' snare sounds are at 01:24:293 (3) - instead imo. Would just flip (2) horizontally.


all fixed from my part, thanks for the mod!

Code:
osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 62305
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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Title:SHIORI -TV size mix-
TitleUnicode:SHIORI -TV size mix-
Artist:ClariS
ArtistUnicode:ClariS
Creator:Sinnoh
Version:Kaitlin & Spec's Rain
Source:終物語
Tags:Kaitlin Fii -wwwww Spectator Owarimonogatari Monogatari
BeatmapID:1385265
BeatmapSetID:653495

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:9.1
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SliderMultiplier:2.08
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Hi_Hello wrote:
Kaitlin & Spec's Rain
  • 00:02:134 (2) - This slider is awkward. May be make this 1/2 reverse slider to emphasize the voice on this timeline 00:02:305
  • 00:13:725 (2,3,4,5) - make this curver to fit with the violin sound
  • 00:27:020 (3,4,5,6) - this is weird. try ctrl+g then move to x:216 moved them, didn't ctrl g. i don't think it's that weird at all.
  • 00:27:617 - i feel there should be a note here. added
  • 00:45:430 (1,2) - awkward distance between these two. make 2 a little distant from 1. ? distance seems fine
  • 00:52:930 (1,2) - i prefer circles than sliders. what do you think? i really prefer sliders. i think they have a nice aesthetic and aren't totally ruined by hardrock
  • 01:08:526 - add note here. similar with 01:05:714 (4) -
beautiful

thank you for the mod and compliment :D

Sc4v4ng3r wrote:

Kaitlin & Spec's Rain
  • 00:02:645 (3,1) - Distance feels abnormally low compared to 00:00:259 (1,1) - , would increase the distance.
  • 00:05:884 (1,2) - The vocals at this point is the weaker compared to notes like 00:09:123 (4,5) - , so only having a clear dash here doesn't make sense to me. Personally I would remove the dash here and add dashes on the later notes, but you can consider to also keep this current dash at add it on the later notes as well.
  • 00:15:089 (1,2) - Slider is angled at a weird angle, that when it requires the player to dash to (2), which is further than the previous 2 dashes, they are forced to stop a little bit in the middle due to how vertical it is. Would try to make this more horizontal or just go with a more vertical slider, or reduce the distance between these 2 notes.
  • 00:21:907 (4,1) - Feels underwhelming as a walk compared to 00:27:532 (6,1) - , would rather make this a dash for the downbeat emphasis. you're right, this was unintentional. fixed!
  • 00:38:100 (7,8,1) - Consecutive hypers of different snaps are unrankable in a Rain. To fix this, (7) > (8) can be a dash instead.
  • 01:24:123 (2,3) - Don't really think a wiggle is suitable here as the snare isn't anything too special - a clearer 'special' snare sounds are at 01:24:293 (3) - instead imo. Would just flip (2) horizontally. ur right. fixed!

thanks for the mod!

@sinnoh: use this .osu code as it contains spectator's updated parts as well. also, "kaitlin" doesn't need to be in the tags

Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: bg.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62305
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 558,16921,27830,38739,55103,74194,89194
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:SHIORI -TV size mix-
TitleUnicode:SHIORI -TV size mix-
Artist:ClariS
ArtistUnicode:ClariS
Creator:Sinnoh
Version:Kaitlin & Spec's Rain
Source:終物語
Tags:Kaitlin Fii -wwwww Spectator Owarimonogatari Monogatari
BeatmapID:1385265
BeatmapSetID:653495

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:9.1
ApproachRate:9.1
SliderMultiplier:2.08
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"audio.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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if you're using Kaitlin in the diff name then it should really be in the tags, removed anyway
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Kaitlin is in the diff name, therefore it can be searched without it being a tag. So she's right :P
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I was planning on completing the mod but studying got the best of me so I'll post what I did yesterday. If in a week or two I'm less busy I could always come back and mod both rains.

add "opening op second season 2" to tags


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Sorry the platter mod had to be cut a bit short ): I'm a bit too busy. Hopefully I was still of some help
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celerih wrote:
I was planning on completing the mod but studying got the best of me so I'll post what I did yesterday. If in a week or two I'm less busy I could always come back and mod both rains.

add "opening op second season 2" to tags I really don't think anyone is going to specifically search for season two to find this set


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  • 00:00:430 (1,2) - Maybe give these a small angle to make it more interesting low movement good for slow part
  • 00:04:520 (3) - Have this as a 1/1 reverse like 00:01:793 (3) - ?
  • 00:17:986 (3,4) - Increase distance here so some more contrast. Same can be done on similar things in the map bit overdoing it for salad, keeping basic spacing + snares aren't too important here
  • 00:22:248 (1) - Move this a bit to the left since it's easy to hit the wall dashing not sure how but ok
  • 00:53:057 (4,5) - Shouldn't this just be snapped to 1/3? I might be wrong tho yup, snapping issue when changing offset
  • 01:16:793 (1,2,3) - 2-3 should have a higher spacing than 1-2 adjusted



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  • 00:02:134 (2) - Shouldn't this mapped as a 1/1? vocal has more variation here
  • 00:11:680 (2,3) - and 00:12:020 (3,4) - should increase the 2-3 is walkable and 3-4 feels pretty week increased a little
  • 00:59:748 (2,3) - With the vocals joining in here it would be nice to have a dash that's too many dashes for platter


Sorry the platter mod had to be cut a bit short ): I'm a bit too busy. Hopefully I was still of some help thanks for help :)
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a free moddd cos i liek the song
  • Hmmm you arent gonna colorhax dis? xd
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00:09:975 (3) - Pretty sure this should end here 00:10:486 - sounds like it ends a bit too early imo
00:16:282 (4,5,6,7,8) - hmmm movement here feels a little bit too stacked here maybe move to x:303?
00:16:793 (1) - and if u took my suggestion earlier move this to x:173 to trigger the h-dash
00:17:305 (2) - annnnd this one to make the spacing a little bit equal between 00:16:793 (1,3) -
00:52:248 (1) - feels a little bit too hard to catch in a platter imo. maybe reduce the distance here a little bit here and move it to x:383?
00:52:759 (2) - if you took my suggestion above move this to x:284 so it would still continue the flow and would not be stacked
00:52:930 (3) - also this one by x:185 00:53:270 (4) - annnddd lastly 00:53:270 (4) - x:268

aaa i like this diff has that smooth flow that i would look for and enjoy pleyin.
So far dont really have that much to say since there isnt any other detectable issues i could find here xd


Rain
00:53:270 (4) - wouldctrl j and ctrl h then ofc replace cos the it kinda plays awkardly here imo

nicc pp map probs gonna be my fav rain from u here xd

Collab Rain dessss
Would suggest to point out ur parts so it can be easier for me and you to manage but e xd

00:02:134 (2) - Undermapped imo since theres still sounds that can be mapped in 00:02:305 - which can be both the vocals and piano here
00:27:020 (3,4,5) - not sure if having h-dash then go with a sort of a stacked pattern here is a good idea in movement imo maybe moving 00:27:191 (4) - to x:76 would atleast make the pattern a little bit more comfortable to play here

not much to say but imo the other sort of stream patterns in the 2nd calm section in the song needs a little bit more movement imo
but overall guddd



gl bud
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JeirYagtama wrote:
a free moddd cos i liek the song
  • Hmmm you arent gonna colorhax dis? xd
Platter
00:09:975 (3) - Pretty sure this should end here 00:10:486 - sounds like it ends a bit too early imo oops
00:16:282 (4,5,6,7,8) - hmmm movement here feels a little bit too stacked here maybe move to x:303? pattern seems fine tbh
00:16:793 (1) - and if u took my suggestion earlier move this to x:173 to trigger the h-dash
00:17:305 (2) - annnnd this one to make the spacing a little bit equal between 00:16:793 (1,3) - There's a stronger sound on 3, so the gap is slightly larger. Spacing doesn't need to be 100% exact
00:52:248 (1) - feels a little bit too hard to catch in a platter imo. maybe reduce the distance here a little bit here and move it to x:383? yup, fixed
00:52:759 (2) - if you took my suggestion above move this to x:284 so it would still continue the flow and would not be stacked i can adjust stuff ty
00:52:930 (3) - also this one by x:185 00:53:270 (4) - annnddd lastly 00:53:270 (4) - x:268 I just changed slider shape instead of moving the whole pattern,
easier to apply


aaa i like this diff has that smooth flow that i would look for and enjoy pleyin.
So far dont really have that much to say since there isnt any other detectable issues i could find here xd


Rain
00:53:270 (4) - wouldctrl j and ctrl h then ofc replace cos the it kinda plays awkardly here imo this is my go to pattern for small 1/3 sections

nicc pp map probs gonna be my fav rain from u here xd




gl bud ty


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00:27:361 (5,6) - There's too much of a spacing increase on the slider tail, increase the distance of 5,6 to make this flow better
00:37:248 (4) - NC? Usually done on downbeats
01:14:748 (4,5) - This is pretty much an edge dash
01:20:543 (4) - In the last section, all 1/2 sliders are facing towards the center, which is a bit repetitive. Could you change one or two of them so that there's slider shape variety?
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