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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Minggu, 15 Oktober 2017 at 22.07.35

Artist: Yasuda Rei
Title: Mirror
Source: 魔法科高校の劣等生
Tags: 林奈津美 Hayashi Natsumi 玉井健二 Tamai Kenji 釣俊輔 Tsuri Shunsuke Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei ending the irregular at magic high school
BPM: 127
Filesize: 11234kb
Play Time: 03:53
Difficulties Available:
  • Advanced (2,61 stars, 460 notes)
  • Easy (1,26 stars, 215 notes)
  • Hard (2,96 stars, 560 notes)
  • Mirror (3,93 stars, 746 notes)
  • Normal (1,67 stars, 324 notes)

Download: Yasuda Rei - Mirror
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Onii-sama

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Yeaaahhhhh.... Suuureeee

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17:57 Modem: Hi again Evening owo/
17:57 Evening: haii
17:57 Modem: \:D/
17:58 Modem: May I ask your help to check the timing in my mappu again? >v<
17:58 Evening: oh oki o wo)b
17:58 Modem: Yayay >w<
18:01 Modem: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/649225
18:01 Modem: owo/
18:03 Evening: i would put like around 492 for offset
18:03 Evening: 494*
18:05 Modem: Omg that's right you're awesome owo
18:05 Modem: Thank youuu <33
18:05 Evening: o wo)bbbb 
18:05 Modem: Please put it on the thread so that I could give you kudosu owo/
18:05 Modem: I wanna give you
18:06 Evening: lol ok :d
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started: 2:47pm

Easy


00:28:840 (1) - I don't think you should use a reverse slider here. 3 back to back in the pattern makes it a bit boring in my opinion. 1/1 slider + circle instead?
00:36:399 (1,2) - Same as ^. Feels a bit too repetitive.
I noticed this is the pattern throughout the entire map so for every instance of it just pretend I marked it down with a timestamp. Nothing wrong with using that many reverse sliders, just feels boring to me.
01:42:541 (1) - This is too difficult to read for new players. They won't know where to follow the circle.
01:46:320 (1) - Same as ^, but not as bad...
Nice map difficulty overall.

Insane


00:38:761 (2) - This is too hard to play and doesn't flow well, overlap it with sliderend?
00:52:934 (3) - Any reason why this isn't touching the previous slider?
Not much to say with this one either, nice map!
finished: 3:17pm
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q,nice song and skin, one star for you

normal
00:01:202 (2,3) - you can stack here as there are no heavy beats here like 00:03:328 (3) -
00:30:021 (2,3,1) - this overlap looks not so nice
00:53:407 (3) - why not make slider's head and tail have same spacing with 00:52:462 (2) - 's tail
02:15:612 (3,4) - this two pattern have less relation in shape than your previous similar rhythem
03:19:864 (6) - maybe adjust its shape to improve the flow

hard
00:49:155 (4,5) - change a slider will be easier for players to read as there are 1/3 withe normal spacing and stack before
01:51:517 (4,5) - ^
02:50:572 (1) - why use different shapes of sliders for same drum

insane
01:00:494 (4,5,1) - too big spacing here for normal beats, I will understand it if you use it in patterns with finish hitsounds
please forgive my limited experience, GL :)
BTW, well you map songs yaoi related, next time if you need mod on any maps related to yaoi and you don't mind my poor experience, pls ask me for NM, I'm willing to mod those maps ww
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00:07:580 (1,2,3,4,1) - https://gyazo.com/71a21d89c4d0314a78316fb9fb1d8128
00:37:816 (3,2) - don't place this two in the same place
00:54:824 (1,2,3,4,1) - https://gyazo.com/4826e76d362b0ad054310d8d2a7175b5
00:56:714 (1,2,3,4,1) - same, change it in every next pattern like this
01:11:832 (1,2,3,4) - - shape of this stream is kinda hard to aim
02:13:958 (5,6,1,2) - strange spacing, try to place the second stream lower
02:17:383 (4,5,6,7) - same as 01:11:832 (1,2,3,4)
02:22:934 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as 01:11:832 (1,2,3,4)
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here is your mod

Before I go into difficulty specific things, the slider ticks blend in with the slider end circles and the follow points blend in with the bg.

Easy
01:38:761 (1) - Really unfitting slider shape


Advanced
00:17:029 (3,4) - These two beats should probably not be stacked
00:21:990 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow


Hard
00:55:297 (1) - 1/4 jump in a hard?
02:46:084 (4,5) - Don't stack unless there is an "irregular rhythm" (Watch pishi's video xd)


Mirror
00:08:053 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow?
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Botan wrote:
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started: 2:47pm

Easy


00:28:840 (1) - I don't think you should use a reverse slider here. 3 back to back in the pattern makes it a bit boring in my opinion. 1/1 slider + circle instead? Nope sorry ;w; I still think that this reversed slider is more readable considering the previous slider is also a reversed slider
00:36:399 (1,2) - Same as ^. Feels a bit too repetitive.
I noticed this is the pattern throughout the entire map so for every instance of it just pretend I marked it down with a timestamp. Nothing wrong with using that many reverse sliders, just feels boring to me. Well yup, the purpose of this easiest diff is for the beginner players to be able to learn the basic rhythm of this song. It might be a bit too boring, but it is one of the easier ways to teach the beginner players about the basic rhythm of this song through this kind of consistent pattern after all ;)
01:42:541 (1) - This is too difficult to read for new players. They won't know where to follow the circle. Not really. There's an obvious 1.5 gaps after 01:38:761 (1) which is filled by 01:40:651 (2) so that there's enough time for the previous slider -> 01:38:761 (1) to disappear completely before 01:42:541 (1), so it is still very easy to read it ;)
01:46:320 (1) - Same as ^, but not as bad...^ Moreover, the flow is very obvious and clear, so there wouldn't be a problem for this section
Nice map difficulty overall. Thank youuuu >v<

Insane


00:38:761 (2) - This is too hard to play and doesn't flow well, overlap it with sliderend? It isn't that hard to be read in my opinion, since the distance snap I used for the placement of this circle is very close to the previous slider, which makes it pretty easy for the players to recognize that this is the 3/4 rhythm. Moreover, it flows pretty nicely, considering that the next slider is right at the bottom right of this circle
00:52:934 (3) - Any reason why this isn't touching the previous slider? Because the distance snap I used for this circle is pretty much the same as 00:38:761 (2)
Not much to say with this one either, nice map! Thank youuu \>w</
finished: 3:17pm


Thanks for the mod~! >w</
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Sandrew wrote:
q,nice song and skin, one star for you OMG Thank youuu >v<

normal
00:01:202 (2,3) - you can stack here as there are no heavy beats here like 00:03:328 (3) - Nope sorry >v< I want to make it kinda symmetric with 00:02:383 (1,2,3)
00:30:021 (2,3,1) - this overlap looks not so nice That isn't an overlap owo/
00:53:407 (3) - why not make slider's head and tail have same spacing with 00:52:462 (2) - 's tail Because the gap between them is different ;)
02:15:612 (3,4) - this two pattern have less relation in shape than your previous similar rhythem Yep. For variation ;)
03:19:864 (6) - maybe adjust its shape to improve the flow The flow is pretty fine in my opinion :3

hard
00:49:155 (4,5) - change a slider will be easier for players to read as there are 1/3 withe normal spacing and stack before Nope sorry ;w; I wanna keep those two stacked notes
01:51:517 (4,5) - ^ ^
02:50:572 (1) - why use different shapes of sliders for same drum For variations ;)

insane
01:00:494 (4,5,1) - too big spacing here for normal beats, I will understand it if you use it in patterns with finish hitsounds Fixed~!
please forgive my limited experience, GL :) Thank youuu >v</
BTW, well you map songs yaoi related, next time if you need mod on any maps related to yaoi and you don't mind my poor experience, pls ask me for NM, I'm willing to mod those maps ww OMG I FIND A NEW COMRADE OWO Thank youuuuu <333


Thanks for the mod~! >w</
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Mirror
00:07:580 (1,2,3,4,1) - https://gyazo.com/71a21d89c4d0314a78316fb9fb1d8128 Nope sorry ;w; I still prefer mine because I purposely placed it like this in order to make a kind of small stream jump to emphasize the downbeat and make it consistent with the rhythm at 00:04:273 (1,2,3,4,1) and 00:06:163 (1,2,3,4,1)
00:37:816 (3,2) - don't place this two in the same place That's fine, since the difference in the term of rhythm between these two sections is very obvious since the distance snap that I used for them is different
00:54:824 (1,2,3,4,1) - https://gyazo.com/4826e76d362b0ad054310d8d2a7175b5 Same reason as 00:07:580 (1,2,3,4,1)
00:56:714 (1,2,3,4,1) - same, change it in every next pattern like this ^
01:11:832 (1,2,3,4) - - shape of this stream is kinda hard to aim Not really I guess owo
02:13:958 (5,6,1,2) - strange spacing, try to place the second stream lower Nope sorry ;w;
02:17:383 (4,5,6,7) - same as 01:11:832 (1,2,3,4) The pattern of this stream is very clear and obvious, so no change sorry ;w;
02:22:934 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as 01:11:832 (1,2,3,4) ^


Thanks for the mod~! >w</
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here is your mod

Before I go into difficulty specific things, the slider ticks blend in with the slider end circles and the follow points blend in with the bg. Not really. The slider tick and the follow point are pretty visible

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Easy
01:38:761 (1) - Really unfitting slider shape It fits the vocals pretty well in my opinion


Advanced
00:17:029 (3,4) - These two beats should probably not be stacked It is fine to stack two notes once in a while to give the variation in the rhythms
00:21:990 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow Nope sorry ;w; I don't want to make any jumps in this diff


Hard
00:55:297 (1) - 1/4 jump in a hard? Yep ;)
02:46:084 (4,5) - Don't stack unless there is an "irregular rhythm" (Watch pishi's video xd) I want to make them consistent with 02:44:194 (4,5) , 0247:974 (4,5) , and 02:49:864 (4,5)


Mirror
00:08:053 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow? Nope sorry ;w; I wanna make it consistent with 00:04:273 (1) and 00:06:163 (1)


Thanks for the mod~! >w</
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Updated~! >w</
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Hello from modding queue for M4M

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At least I know your song choices are good because I listen to a lot of music 8-)


Mirror
01:08:997 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Even though vocals wasn't really emphasized as much in kiai, I feel that this could be pretty well represented if it was mapped to the vocals. Maybe these rhythms check it out https://puu.sh/xglu4/a1bd03964d.png -----> https://puu.sh/xglvg/c38113194e.png -----> https://puu.sh/xglxm/36a6192419.png Feel they hit vocals pretty strongly to keep them balance to one another as well as building the emphasis as the song gets stronger after this portion. Instead of just doing a 5 note stream like the rest with a slider and call it good. Sort of like 01:14:194 (1,2) - Just take them into consideration for more variety
01:34:509 (4,5,1) - Quite a lot more emphasis with spacing than previously. Maybe it's to progressively harder but could also be similar in spacing wise for consistency. No issues here just some thoughts
01:38:761 (1) - Feels underwhelming stacked under this, sure it's great visually and provides a great rhythm to the repeat but I don't feel it's interpreting her vocals well enough. Quite a strong emotion during this part with her falsetto. It's just strange to have spacing like this to play a little triplet snare 01:37:580 (3,4) - but then backs down on her unique vocals. Up to you though
01:55:533 - Quite a powerful place to create the build up with a note here. It's ok regardless
02:13:604 - This part just feels strange without anything on it. Sounds like a stream should start here but it's a different time signature. Maybe a 1/4 slider? It'll null over that part yet still feel rhythmically correct to your stream. Ignore the spacing just like https://puu.sh/xglY9/16b7ff560e.png and well as increasing the stream since 01:11:360 (3) - was a lot stronger build up than having small spacing into a little big spacing rather than big into progressively larger spacing. Feels inconsistent. Up to you because you're letting that small build up stream get beat by a 5 note flower pattern stream 02:15:375 (3,4,5,6,7) -
02:16:793 (2,3) - Tell me about Ctrl+G rhythm here it'll be different from your other rhythm in the previous kiai because the vocals aren't exactly the same
02:22:934 (3,4,5,6,7) - Feels quite jagged compared to your usual smoother streams


Not a bad set. Rest is aight trust me I know. Call it future BN intuition
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mirror
00:07:934 (4,1) - weird flow?
00:18:919 (4) - ctrl g for better flow.
00:20:336 (3,4) - I don't know why you added jump in here even if this part doesn't have any emphasis.
00:54:352 (4,5,1) - difficult flow lol
01:12:659 - add a beat here like 00:57:541 (2) -
01:18:682 (3) - change it into stream as you did?
01:38:289 (4,1) - I suggest unstacking, 00:35:927 (4,1) -
02:13:722 (3,4,5,6) - Increase DS, you set same DS at 01:11:360 (3,4,5,6) -
02:37:226 (8,1) - DS is too big................
03:07:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - really hard to play and read.

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hi, from queue

Hard
01:26:478 (3,4) - flows weirdly, people will probably just abuse slider leniency and move in a straight line from 3 to 4 instead of following the slider so might as well make it more accommodating

01:52:698 (2) - the weird shape makes it look the same length as 1/2 sliders, which may make reading into 01:53:289 (3,4) awkward

01:55:769 (4) - players will abuse slider leniency again and just sit in the slider as it completes because there's way too much unnecessary movement needed to follow the slider. since there's suddenly little no movement, it causes unwarranted contrast

03:24:116 (6) - again, slider leniency, and the no movement = contrast again. if following the slider adds extra difficulty but is unnecessary to get to the next object without breaking, people won't follow it


Mirror
01:08:997 (2,3,4,5,6) - why stack this? the music is the same as with the unstacked ones

02:11:360 (2,3,4,5,6) - again, why stack? maybe its just me missing something, sorry if that's the case

02:13:722 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this is musically the same as 01:11:360 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4), why have you chosen to map them differently?

01:38:289 (4,1) - un stack?


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