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[Insane]
You have red and green line on the 03:59:000 with different volume lvl (10 and 13%)
00:50:875 (7) - mm, it will looks better if you make it with the same curve like you did on 6
01:00:228 (4,5) - I guess you can move it a bit left for better flow
01:05:345 (4,1) - I'm not a big fun of such small spacing on the vocal, but okay
01:08:169 (2,1) - same here
01:08:345 (1) - looks not very nice, better make it as a usual wave slider
01:14:698 (3) - this follow point trigger me, put nc here please
01:15:404 (1,2) - too small spacing for this clap sound imo
01:18:228 (1,2) - ^
01:51:228 (3) - you can improve this wave a bit
02:18:051 (4) - move it to X:332 Y:164 for creating cool Elvis' pattern
02:18:933 (1) - too curve x_x
02:49:639 (1) - I would like to put soft sliderwhistle on this slider, not a normal one
03:35:698 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream looks not very beautiful for me :c
03:42:228 (1,2) - stack note with slider's end, please
[iyasine's Hard]
00:05:522 (5,1) - personally I don't like this kind of overlaps, it looks dirty, but it's not really a problem
00:10:110 (4,5,6) - these sliders dosen't follow piano in right way imo, try cirlce+1/2 slider+1/2 reverse slider instead
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/879587500:49:992 (4,5) - why you put it sooo close, make it as 00:49:110 (2,3)
01:24:228 (5) - better make this slider straight and this 01:24:580 (7) - curve like 5, because of vocal on 6
02:49:992 (1,1,1) - wtf is that nc spam o.o
03:07:639 (2,3) - will be better to continue follow piano here, as you did before 03:05:169 (2,3,4)
03:27:228 (3) - maybe make it as a 2 notes?
[Normal]
You use ds here in the way I can't understand D:
00:09:051 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm here is a bit confuse me, also I don't like how you missed strong piano sound on 00:11:169 (5), but I have no idea how to make it better >_<
00:24:051 (2,3) - will be better to stack them
00:29:698 (3) - mm, why you didn't make it as a 2 note? o.o
00:32:522 (3) - same. I want to see your
selfie consistency.
01:30:228 (6,7) - better make here the same thing as you did here 01:28:816 (2,3,4)
01:51:051 (1,2) - too hard to understand for newbies imo, I would recommend you to stack them
02:06:228 (2) - move it to X:272 Y:188 for aesthetic. Then move 02:07:639 (1) - somewhere
03:14:698 (2,3) - can you stack please thanks
03:38:698 (4,5,6) - note+1/2 slider was better. Or reverse slider, yes.
[Easy]
00:17:522 (1,2) - can you have better flow here?
00:37:286 (1,2) - and here
Sorry for useless nazi mod, good luck with this map, take my star ~