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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年10月4日 at 15:15:22

Artist: A-Lin
Title: Gei Wo Yi Ge Li You Wang Ji
Tags: 黄丽玲 邬裕康 游政豪 给我一个理由忘记 寂寞不痛 avex 爱贝克斯 愛貝克思 Chinese Geiwo Yige Liyou Wangji
BPM: 67
Filesize: 3199kb
Play Time: 01:59
Difficulties Available:
  • Easy (0.76 stars, 47 notes)
  • Normal (0.94 stars, 68 notes)

Download: A-Lin - Gei Wo Yi Ge Li You Wang Ji
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33rd.
All diffs are done by me.
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http://www.avex.com.tw/artist/artist_di ... D90135%2FA
Background from: https://arsenixc.deviantart.com/
Awesome artist!
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Hi there o/
I'm a new mapper from your queue, I hope my mod helps

Beginner:
00:27:893 (1) - I think this should be a 1 beat slider with a reverse

00:40:430 (2) - Maybe something here to represent the different sound (NC or different slider shape)

00:45:803 - I think this should be a 1 beat slider with a reverse too, but you could ignore it since the music is calm

01:39:534 - I think you should do something like this, as I think that this sound 01:40:430 - is stronger than this 01:40:878 - sound, so you should ignore the second one rather than the first one. I noticed that you didn't want to use time gaps less than 1 beat (aside from the beginning), but I'd say this is the most intense part of the song (Vocals and drums), so you could do that and use a new combo and different slider shape to indicate the change, or you could just do something similar to this and ignore this 01:41:773 - sound

01:59:596 - Lower the volume for the spinner end


Easy:
00:27:445 - You can add a circle here

00:35:057 - 1/2 slider with a reverse(?)
00:36:848 - ^

01:20:504 (6) - I think placing something on a blue tick is hard to read for new players(?)
01:44:683 (2) - ^ you can start this on the red tick before it

01:59:596 - Lower the volume for the spinner end


That's all I could find, if I said something wrong, I'd appreciate it if you explain to me why you did it like that, as I'm a new mapper, so this would help me improve

Good luck with the map ^-^
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hey, really cute song you mapped!


General

  • Make widescreen support consistent across diffs
  • The (unmapped) outro is a bit more than 20% of the entire map, to fix this you could remove the silence starting 02:21:854 - from the mp3.
  • The song has more rhythm to offer than just 1/2, wouldn't it be cool to make a third diff, maybe around 2 stars to map to the full rhythm? A lot of piano melodies are covered under sliders in your current diffs so i think another difficulty would definitely be a valuable addition to the set



Beginner

  • 00:31:475 (3) - The slidershape felt a bit unfitting for the sounds this covers.. perhaps if you make the slider's direction change on the slidertick, it'll feel better
  • 00:39:534 - hmm this note (start of the piano melody) goes ignored while a much less stronger sound is clickable here 00:40:430 - , perhaps extend that slider or add a note in between?
  • 00:49:385 (2) - perhaps end this on the red tick so you can make this 00:51:176 - clickable. The note seems much stronger here. You can even make 00:45:803 (1) - just a note for a nice little break that'll go well with the calm section here.
  • 01:11:773 - could you add a note here too? You did it for the vocal here too 01:06:400 - , and this one is considerably stronger



Easy

  • 00:27:445 - in this diff, since it is the highest difficulty of your set, you could easily follow these kind of notes to be more rhythmically accurate with what the song offers
  • 01:40:877 (5,6) - wat XD


Call me back when you're done with mods/sp and all that shizzle \o/
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hi m4m
拯救华语乐坛

general
beginner's widescreen support is on

beginner
00:35:057 (1) - there are sliders with angles before and after, a striaght slider without any radian is a little abrupt( just advice
01:35:952 (1) - blanket

easy
01:40:877 (5,6) - ???
01:18:041 (4) - blanket
第二次m4m的图bpm更慢了,我摸得好像也更水了 :? 射一发
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returning m4m

the timing is a beat off for the whole song; 00:17:146 (2) - is a downbeat
(if you care piano intro has 00:01:027 - as a downbeat which is 2 beats off from ^)
also people said this but there's widescreen support on beginner

Beginner:
00:20:729 (1) - ctrl+j this can help avoid overlap since rest of map doesn’t have them
01:18:042 (3) - hm i would make the end a circle for sudden intensity there
01:21:624 (1,2) - maybe two 1/1 sliders for different vocal phrasing

Easy:
00:39:534 - it would be nice if this were clickable since piano line starts here
01:26:549 (5) - move this 1/2 beat later since that’s where the important sound is
01:40:877 (5,6) - ye gotta hit both keys for special emphasis

good luck!
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我的马这个ar sv肾疼
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01:39:534 (3) - 这个 我觉得折返的那个时间点上没有音 1/1吧
easy
00:15:355 - 如果可以的话从这里到第一次break结束的slidertick给消掉 感觉跟弦乐有这玩意很别扭
01:40:877 (5,6) - ??????

摸不出什么啊sad
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WA! M4M~


beginner
00:31:923 - 稍微重拉下滑条,使光球经过时正好在红色转点那
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Image

01:35:952 (1,2) - 目测blanket不太到位
01:55:967 (1) - 觉得转盘结束的位置还有待 可以接受


easy
01:19:832 (5,6) - 我觉得完全可以做成这样
2
Image
空1/2在图里也多得很啊
01:44:683 (2,3,4) - 摆的有点迷惑性

扑通!我是真的摸不出来啊,可以随时来找我要摸
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拯救华语乐坛系列

就很尴尬,什么都摸不出来,就很尴尬,很尴尬,尴尬......
大部分都是nazi(不要问我为什么怎么做的那种)啊选点改就好....
我不知道近几年来有没有改,不过以前来讲有要求说一首曲子不能空20%上下不map,然后这张图前后加起来空了近30%没map....所以要不要考虑把最后的尾巴给咔嚓一下?如果需要的话我可以帮忙
Widescreen Support关掉

Beginner
00:39:534 (x) - 我觉得这里可以加个spinner就很酷
01:55:967 (1) - 拉到下一个红线结尾感觉比较好


Easy
01:41:549 (x) - 这个音很重哦不考虑加上么
01:44:460 (x) - ^
01:46:699 (5) - NC一发
01:55:967 (1) - 拉到下一个红线结尾感觉比较好

没了...感觉摸这么少很对不起你,给几个星星聊表歉意
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Moh_Magdy wrote:
Hi there o/
I'm a new mapper from your queue, I hope my mod helps Yeah! Thank you!

Beginner:
00:27:893 (1) - I think this should be a 1 beat slider with a reverse Consider this is a Beginner diff, it might not be a good idea to map all the beats out.

00:40:430 (2) - Maybe something here to represent the different sound (NC or different slider shape)

00:45:803 - I think this should be a 1 beat slider with a reverse too, but you could ignore it since the music is calm yeah calm music, so keep this

01:39:534 - I think you should do something like this, as I think that this sound 01:40:430 - is stronger than this 01:40:878 - sound, so you should ignore the second one rather than the first one. I noticed that you didn't want to use time gaps less than 1 beat (aside from the beginning), but I'd say this is the most intense part of the song (Vocals and drums), so you could do that and use a new combo and different slider shape to indicate the change, or you could just do something similar to this and ignore this 01:41:773 - sound

01:59:596 - Lower the volume for the spinner end


Easy:
00:27:445 - You can add a circle here

00:35:057 - 1/2 slider with a reverse(?) Don't want to add too many 1/2s
00:36:848 - ^

01:20:504 (6) - I think placing something on a blue tick is hard to read for new players(?) I think 1/3 is okay, considering this BPM
01:44:683 (2) - ^ you can start this on the red tick before it

01:59:596 - Lower the volume for the spinner end


That's all I could find, if I said something wrong, I'd appreciate it if you explain to me why you did it like that, as I'm a new mapper, so this would help me improve

Good luck with the map ^-^


@Amamiya Kanade: :cry:
00:15:355 - 如果可以的话从这里到第一次break结束的slidertick给消掉 感觉跟弦乐有这玩意很别扭 不好,因为已经消音了sliderslide

@rs_fadeaway
01:19:832 (5,6) - 我觉得完全可以做成这样 还是不了 其他地方的被我删了

@tutuhaha:
Beginner:
00:39:534 (x) - 我觉得这里可以加个spinner就很酷 鉴于难度限制 还是不了
01:55:967 (1) - 拉到下一个红线结尾感觉比较好 后面的位置比较模糊 这里刚好有乐器 感觉还是这里比较好

Easy:
01:41:549 (x) - 这个音很重哦不考虑加上么 这里的节奏重新改了,下同。现在更符合Easy的难度要求
01:44:460 (x) - ^
01:46:699 (5) - NC一发 不了,会破坏整体的NC结构

Thanks for modding!
Other all fixed!

I cut the mp3 to meet the RC.
I am not planning to add higher diffs since I think they do not match with the style of the song and will sound quite overmapped.
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Thanks a lot! :D
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BG by Everlasting Summer lol
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general

  • 00:49:384 (2) - some slider ticks like this one sounds too loud compared to the music, specially when there is no piano sound, would be cool if you reduce the volume of those a bit

normal

  • 00:51:624 - don't you think that the pianos at the red tick are too loud to being ignored a 1/2 repeat slider would fit the music a lot better
  • 00:59:235 (3) - same

easy

  • 00:40:430 (3) - you better remove that tiny break, tbh it will take everyone offguard and miss the next note xd
  • 01:54:758 (4,5) - a slider would work better for an easy diff
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