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Artist: DJ Command
Title: True Blue [DJ Command Mix] (Full Ver.)
Source: REFLEC BEAT VOLZZA
Tags: dj TAKA AiMEE REFLEC BEAT VOLZZA's Pastel-kun to Gakkii-hakase no dokidoki rhythm kenkyujou パステルくんとガッキー博士のドキドキリズム研究所 Earth DE mic アースDEマイク eurobeat REFLEC BEAT 悠久のリフレシア+VOLZZA ORIGINAL SOUNDTRACK
BPM: 164
Filesize: 9771kb
Play Time: 05:17
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True Blue

Blue, the color that represents sadness...

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First memory and Last memory
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沉浸在上一张黄漫ed,268塞满太暴力了。。。所以耳朵可能不太灵。。。究竟是哪个聋子测出来的268。。。

00:06:152 (6) - k
01:02:925 (261) - k
01:23:870 (457) - k?
02:05:394 (785,786) - k k?
02:43:443 - 这里感觉很含混感觉可以跟一下电子音的音高
03:15:456 (614) - k
04:09:602 - 这个黄条感觉很吵
04:56:614 - ^
04:36:217 (462) - k
04:39:876 (500) - k
05:14:175 - spinner instead
04:59:541 - 可以跟个1/6或者1/8 k 后面同理
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沉浸在上一张黄漫ed,268塞满太暴力了。。。所以耳朵可能不太灵。。。究竟是哪个聋子测出来的268。。。

00:06:152 (6) - k
音高沒00:06:518 - 那麼高
01:02:925 (261) - k 想突出01:03:656 - 的高音
01:23:870 (457) - k? 想突出像01:23:321 (452,457,463) - 2/4拍的特別sound effect,所以我放d
02:05:394 (785,786) - k k? 02:05:394 - 這轉了k,但下一個沒轉
02:43:443 - 这里感觉很含混感觉可以跟一下电子音的音高 我想想...
03:15:456 (614) - k 想突出03:15:638 - 這個藍音
04:09:602 - 这个黄条感觉很吵 刪了並加了一些音
04:56:614 - ^ 這個黃條我是用來連接兩個music parts的
04:36:217 (462) - k 不了
04:39:876 (500) - k ^
05:14:175 - spinner instead 可是兩個spinner有點重複o.o
04:59:541 - 可以跟个1/6或者1/8 k 后面同理


謝謝摸 :)
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2017-07-24 08:52 iloveyou4ever: Hello,can you test a map?
2017-07-24 08:52 zigizigiefe: Hey ily :3/
2017-07-24 08:52 zigizigiefe: Why not? xD
2017-07-24 08:53 iloveyou4ever: Thanks XD
2017-07-24 08:53 iloveyou4ever: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1364659 DJ Command - True Blue [DJ Command Mix] (Full Ver.)]
2017-07-24 08:53 iloveyou4ever: True Blue 2 ;w;
2017-07-24 08:53 zigizigiefe: dj TAKA o:
2017-07-24 08:54 iloveyou4ever: *Command
2017-07-24 08:54 zigizigiefe: Isn't original artist TAKA
2017-07-24 08:54 iloveyou4ever: eurobeat master
2017-07-24 08:54 iloveyou4ever: yes XD
2017-07-24 08:54 zigizigiefe: xD
2017-07-24 08:55 zigizigiefe: my keyboard grip is like garbage atm
2017-07-24 08:55 zigizigiefe: sorry if i play like a shit .w.
2017-07-24 08:56 iloveyou4ever: emm if you cant play nvm :D
2017-07-24 08:57 zigizigiefe: oops
2017-07-24 08:57 zigizigiefe: uncommon patterns and low bpm makes it harder to me :"v
2017-07-24 08:57 iloveyou4ever: 1/6 lwl
2017-07-24 08:58 zigizigiefe: they're not that hard imo
2017-07-24 09:01 zigizigiefe: yes, i suck atm
2017-07-24 09:02 zigizigiefe: you didn't see this play :(
2017-07-24 09:02 iloveyou4ever: rip acc XD
2017-07-24 09:02 zigizigiefe: pretty solid
2017-07-24 09:02 zigizigiefe: well-mapped
2017-07-24 09:02 iloveyou4ever: at least not 30 misses ;w;
2017-07-24 09:02 iloveyou4ever: yes solid map
2017-07-24 09:02 zigizigiefe: time to dt to make more challenging xD
2017-07-24 09:02 iloveyou4ever: pretty straight forward maybe
2017-07-24 09:02 zigizigiefe: inb4 i will choke
2017-07-24 09:02 iloveyou4ever: go XD
2017-07-24 09:03 zigizigiefe: i can't play
2017-07-24 09:03 zigizigiefe: kill me
2017-07-24 09:03 iloveyou4ever: sad :c
2017-07-24 09:03 iloveyou4ever: DT is 8*
2017-07-24 09:03 iloveyou4ever: so hard ;w;
2017-07-24 09:03 zigizigiefe: it seems overrated
2017-07-24 09:03 zigizigiefe: like free pp XD
2017-07-24 09:04 iloveyou4ever: a bit ;w;
2017-07-24 09:04 iloveyou4ever: no long stream and only few 1/6
2017-07-24 09:04 iloveyou4ever: kddkddk 1/6 XD
2017-07-24 09:04 zigizigiefe: if that wasn't that slow, i could fc it
2017-07-24 09:04 zigizigiefe: kddkddk 1/6 patterns are too easy for me since i am ddkk 
2017-07-24 09:04 zigizigiefe: rip kddk players .w.
2017-07-24 09:04 iloveyou4ever: any comment for improvement?
2017-07-24 09:04 iloveyou4ever: oh you're ddkk :o
2017-07-24 09:04 iloveyou4ever: I didnt know that XD
2017-07-24 09:05 zigizigiefe: actually there are some parts that i might have concerns 
2017-07-24 09:05 iloveyou4ever: please tell me about that detaily ;w;
2017-07-24 09:06 zigizigiefe: 00:44:907 - i think there's an offset issue
2017-07-24 09:06 zigizigiefe: i felt notes come a little bit early when play 
2017-07-24 09:07 iloveyou4ever: emm should I + or - the offset?
2017-07-24 09:07 iloveyou4ever: I always mess up with that..
2017-07-24 09:07 zigizigiefe: 00:44:917 - offset doesn't change here imo
2017-07-24 09:08 zigizigiefe: i hear metronome sound and drum sound seperately, metronome sound comes first. so removing this timing point better
2017-07-24 09:09 iloveyou4ever: so maybe I move the timing point to 1. Offset: 1,031ms    BPM: 164.00
2017-07-24 09:09 iloveyou4ever: * 00:46:370 -
2017-07-24 09:10 zigizigiefe: 00:46:370 - i feel like offset doesn't change here as well
2017-07-24 09:11 iloveyou4ever: emm..
2017-07-24 09:11 iloveyou4ever: I'll ask Skylish to check timing later maybe
2017-07-24 09:11 iloveyou4ever: cuz we are unsure about that
2017-07-24 09:11 zigizigiefe: i can do irc mod or quick check if you want xD
2017-07-24 09:12 zigizigiefe: since i have much free time
2017-07-24 09:13 iloveyou4ever: just some brief idea is ok :D
2017-07-24 09:13 zigizigiefe: let's start then xD
2017-07-24 09:13 zigizigiefe: 00:13:819 (23) - i didn't hear certain sound, it's a bit questionable
2017-07-24 09:14 zigizigiefe: 00:16:197 (34) - there's also no sound, 00:16:380 - i heard a sound here but it's pretty weak
2017-07-24 09:15 iloveyou4ever: dj command should put piano sound on 00:13:818 - XD
2017-07-24 09:15 iloveyou4ever: I'll just keep it first in terms of flow
2017-07-24 09:15 zigizigiefe: true lolol
2017-07-24 09:16 iloveyou4ever: and here 00:16:196 - I think I will keep it cuz it feel strange to put k k k d d d only
2017-07-24 09:16 iloveyou4ever: I prefer keeping 7 notes here
2017-07-24 09:17 zigizigiefe: 00:38:880 - why no note :U
2017-07-24 09:17 iloveyou4ever: ok added XD
2017-07-24 09:18 zigizigiefe: 00:46:827 (125,130) - i beg you change these and other notes like that as k due to high pitch sound, that's why i choked here :"V
2017-07-24 09:18 zigizigiefe: i believe it would make flow better
2017-07-24 09:20 iloveyou4ever: will think about it///
2017-07-24 09:21 zigizigiefe: by the way when you poked me, i was studying chinese characters xD
2017-07-24 09:21 iloveyou4ever: currently I just put k at 00:47:101 - to emphasize the outstanding high pitch sound
2017-07-24 09:21 iloveyou4ever: :o
2017-07-24 09:21 zigizigiefe: kinda complex tbh
2017-07-24 09:22 iloveyou4ever: harder than alphabet letters XD
2017-07-24 09:22 zigizigiefe: yup
2017-07-24 09:23 zigizigiefe: people tell that languages like chinese, japanese or korean are easy to learn for turkish people
2017-07-24 09:23 zigizigiefe: and tell grammars are similar, idk if it's true :v
2017-07-24 09:23 iloveyou4ever: no
2017-07-24 09:23 zigizigiefe: btw 01:16:736 (395) - high pitch sound doesn't stop here
2017-07-24 09:24 zigizigiefe: not sure about chinese but japanese is pretty easy except kanjis xD
2017-07-24 09:24 zigizigiefe: as i said, kinda complex to me lelel
2017-07-24 09:25 iloveyou4ever: you can clearly hear 01:16:369 - 01:16:644 - 01:16:918 - three sound effect here
2017-07-24 09:25 iloveyou4ever: and I want to emphasize them by putting other notes as d
2017-07-24 09:25 iloveyou4ever: yes 01:16:735 - is high pitched,but I think the k hitsound doesnt suit here o.o
2017-07-24 09:26 zigizigiefe: yes, i just realized :v
2017-07-24 09:26 zigizigiefe: 01:23:321 - did you follow vocal and drum here
2017-07-24 09:26 iloveyou4ever: yes vocal and eurobeat here
2017-07-24 09:27 iloveyou4ever: and also some special sound effect on some 2/4 beat like 01:23:321 (453,458,464) -
2017-07-24 09:27 zigizigiefe: 01:23:687 (455) - vocal is strong to add k imo, as you did at 01:35:394 (546) - 
2017-07-24 09:28 zigizigiefe: 01:37:590 (563) - this, too
2017-07-24 09:29 iloveyou4ever: ok changed :D
2017-07-24 09:29 zigizigiefe: 01:47:376 - 3/4 vocal 
2017-07-24 09:29 zigizigiefe: i love 3/4 snapped sounds because they give me reason to add my fav. pattern, dkd xd
2017-07-24 09:31 iloveyou4ever: dkd seems weird to me
2017-07-24 09:31 zigizigiefe: 02:09:236 (4) - there is no sound you tried to emphasize
2017-07-24 09:31 zigizigiefe: for 01:47, 3/4 snapped notes would work well
2017-07-24 09:32 zigizigiefe: if you didn't like dkd here
2017-07-24 09:32 iloveyou4ever: fuck dj command again
2017-07-24 09:32 zigizigiefe: why o.o
2017-07-24 09:32 iloveyou4ever: 02:09:235 - there's soft sound here
2017-07-24 09:32 iloveyou4ever: not a strong sound compared to 02:09:327 - yeah
2017-07-24 09:32 zigizigiefe: not that strong to emphasize looool
2017-07-24 09:33 iloveyou4ever: but it'd be strange if I only put 4 notes here...
2017-07-24 09:33 zigizigiefe: blame song, not who remixed xD
2017-07-24 09:33 iloveyou4ever: want to connect 02:09:052 (3,1) -
2017-07-24 09:33 zigizigiefe: not at all, notes go 3/4 from 02:08:504 - 
2017-07-24 09:33 iloveyou4ever: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8669369
2017-07-24 09:33 iloveyou4ever: these two finishers
2017-07-24 09:33 zigizigiefe: how about dkddd
2017-07-24 09:34 zigizigiefe: since 02:09:236 (4) - is too weak
2017-07-24 09:36 iloveyou4ever: d hitsound on 02:09:235 - feels strange imo
2017-07-24 09:36 iloveyou4ever: I put ddd on 02:09:418 (6,7,8) - to emphasize the low pitched drum sounds
2017-07-24 09:36 iloveyou4ever: but 02:09:235 (4,5) - these two are quite high pitched
2017-07-24 09:37 zigizigiefe: fuck dj command
2017-07-24 09:37 zigizigiefe: why are these sounds such questionable
2017-07-24 09:37 iloveyou4ever: yes...
2017-07-24 09:38 zigizigiefe: :v
2017-07-24 09:39 zigizigiefe: 04:13:809 (341) - sounds like pitch gets higher suddenly
2017-07-24 09:40 zigizigiefe: even if it's not as high as 04:14:175 (342) -, kat might be better for 341
2017-07-24 09:40 iloveyou4ever: I put k here in my original version
2017-07-24 09:40 iloveyou4ever: but it feels strange
2017-07-24 09:40 iloveyou4ever: compared to 04:15:272 - , 04:13:809 - this is lower pitch
2017-07-24 09:41 zigizigiefe: my logic is hard to explain for here
2017-07-24 09:42 zigizigiefe: in a simple way, 04:13:809 (341) - is the highest sound in its measure
2017-07-24 09:43 iloveyou4ever: in terms of consistency 04:13:260 (339,341,345,347) - ,I should put k on them yeaj
2017-07-24 09:43 zigizigiefe: 04:14:175 - in new measure, sound pitches are similar to 04:12:711 -, just a bit higher
2017-07-24 09:43 iloveyou4ever: changed first :3
2017-07-24 09:43 zigizigiefe: that's what i think about mapping slow parts xD
2017-07-24 09:43 iloveyou4ever: oh I understand your point
2017-07-24 09:45 iloveyou4ever: but I feel strange if 04:12:711 - and 04:14:174 - are the same
2017-07-24 09:45 iloveyou4ever: kddk dk kddk dk
2017-07-24 09:45 zigizigiefe: dd is weirder to me 
2017-07-24 09:45 iloveyou4ever: then I changed first :D
2017-07-24 09:46 iloveyou4ever: also changed 05:00:638 - to k
2017-07-24 09:46 zigizigiefe: i generally use d for weak, k for strong sounds for fast parts
2017-07-24 09:46 zigizigiefe: for slow parts, i use them by following pitches with this logic
2017-07-24 09:46 iloveyou4ever: I just put d/k by pitch usually
2017-07-24 09:47 zigizigiefe: when i map a song like true blue, i follow pitch too
2017-07-24 09:48 zigizigiefe: if pitch got higher suddenly i use kat, even if it's lower than next note?
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11:19 iloveyou4ever: Hello,can you do a quick mod on the map true blue remix?
11:19 iloveyou4ever: I can't find mod in the modding queue forum...
11:19 DarkVortex: umm sure
11:20 iloveyou4ever: irc mod ok?
11:20 DarkVortex: yeah 
11:20 DarkVortex: gimme a second
11:20 iloveyou4ever: ok!
11:22 *DarkVortex is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1364659 DJ Command - True Blue [DJ Command Mix] (Full Ver.) [Inner Oni]]
11:22 DarkVortex: let's go
11:22 iloveyou4ever: ok
11:27 DarkVortex: 01:18:657 - here could be another kat
11:27 DarkVortex: damn your patterns make so much sense xD
11:27 DarkVortex: hard to find something
11:28 iloveyou4ever: emm applied temporarily
11:28 iloveyou4ever: I think it's quite optional XD
11:28 DarkVortex: yeah it is :P
11:29 DarkVortex: this could be a kat for the pitch 01:37:590 (443) - 
11:29 DarkVortex: or even a finisher if you feel like it
11:29 iloveyou4ever: emm I think it's better no add k for 01:18:657 -
11:29 DarkVortex: okay then leave it
11:29 iloveyou4ever: kdddk kkddk kkkdk
11:29 iloveyou4ever: ok
11:30 iloveyou4ever: I map to both vocal and sound effect for this bar
11:30 iloveyou4ever: you can hear low-high-high-high-low for the background sound effect pitches
11:31 iloveyou4ever: that's why I put d for the first note
11:31 DarkVortex: at 01:37:590 (443) - ?
11:31 DarkVortex: ah
11:31 iloveyou4ever: 01:37:590 (445,448,451,454,458) - dkkkd
11:34 DarkVortex: 02:03:931 (658) - finisher? that sound seems quite strong to me
11:34 DarkVortex: for consistency 02:03:840 (657) - should be deleted if you add one
11:35 iloveyou4ever: I want to put 02:03:017 (650,651,652,653,654,655,656,657,658,659,660) - these as stream because the music is getting more and more intense here
11:35 iloveyou4ever: and act as a challenge for the calm section
11:36 iloveyou4ever: also 02:03:840 - this sound effect is quite obvious imo
11:36 DarkVortex: 02:03:931 - this one as well imo
11:36 DarkVortex: but yeah up to you
11:37 DarkVortex: 02:05:578 - btw why is here a gap?
11:37 DarkVortex: vocals are building up there (at least slightly)
11:37 iloveyou4ever: the vocal starts 02:05:944 (666) -
11:38 iloveyou4ever: the ''you'' sound last from 02:04:480 - to 02:05:395 -
11:38 iloveyou4ever: oh I get your point
11:39 iloveyou4ever: but I want to give break to player and also leaving the gap here can match the vocal sound
11:39 DarkVortex: okay then
11:39 iloveyou4ever: like the ranked version one
11:40 DarkVortex: uhhh i don't have the ranked version on my mind atm
11:40 DarkVortex: but you should know right? :D
11:40 iloveyou4ever: yes XD
11:40 DarkVortex: anyway
11:41 DarkVortex: 02:07:590 - this should be a kat imo
11:41 DarkVortex: gives the ddddddk stream more emphasis
11:41 DarkVortex: and connects better with the kats before
11:42 iloveyou4ever: make sense :D changed
11:42 DarkVortex: what's that "meow" sound there though xD
11:43 DarkVortex: 02:16:096 - here could be a kat as well
11:44 DarkVortex: the synth starts playing 1/4 earlier, i think you should cover it
11:44 iloveyou4ever: want to show progression for the kiai parts
11:44 iloveyou4ever: 02:09:785 - 02:21:492 - 02:33:200 -
11:45 iloveyou4ever: by putting fewest note for the first part,more notes for the second part,the most note for the third part
11:45 iloveyou4ever: that's why I cut the stream there
11:46 DarkVortex: how about this then?
11:46 DarkVortex: https://puu.sh/wSxj7/e78e9ea564.jpg
11:46 DarkVortex: just moved 59 around
11:46 DarkVortex: imo it covers the synth better like this
11:47 iloveyou4ever: that'd be note identical to 02:17:102 (70,71,72,73,74) - o.o
11:47 iloveyou4ever: in terms of structure
11:48 iloveyou4ever: *not
11:49 DarkVortex: okay
11:50 DarkVortex: 02:21:492 (114) - finisher here?
11:50 DarkVortex: It would mark the next kiai part
11:50 DarkVortex: and be consistent with 02:09:785 (1) - 
11:51 DarkVortex: same here 02:33:200 (230) - 
11:52 iloveyou4ever: somehow I feel strange if 02:21:401 - is missing and looks like the stream is incomplete imo
11:52 iloveyou4ever: but yeah adding a finisher will be better in terms of identifying distinctive music parts
11:53 iloveyou4ever: :thinking:
11:53 iloveyou4ever: added first :D
11:58 DarkVortex: 04:28:078 (396,397,398,399,400,401,402,403) - 
11:58 DarkVortex: shouldn't this be k ddddddk instead?
11:59 DarkVortex: especially because 04:28:810 (403,404,405,406) - are the same sounds?
12:00 iloveyou4ever: nice catch!
12:00 iloveyou4ever: changed
12:02 DarkVortex: 04:44:907 (565,566,567,568,569) - and 04:45:456 (570,571,572,573,574) - 
12:02 DarkVortex: these should be kkdkk patterns
12:02 DarkVortex: like here 01:14:175 (250,251,252,253,254) - 
12:03 DarkVortex: i think they are the same sounds
12:03 DarkVortex: and you use the same build-up patterning here
12:03 DarkVortex: kdddk then kkddk and finally kkdkk
12:04 iloveyou4ever: nice catch!
12:04 iloveyou4ever: I didnt even notice the consistency issue
12:04 iloveyou4ever: changed :D
12:04 DarkVortex: good thing you asked me XD
12:05 iloveyou4ever: yep XD
12:05 iloveyou4ever: and I dont know if 05:06:035 - this offset sounds strange to you
12:05 DarkVortex: 05:06:035 (695) - 
12:05 DarkVortex: lel was about to say that
12:05 iloveyou4ever: yes
12:05 DarkVortex: it fits the vocals
12:05 iloveyou4ever: fuck dj command again
12:06 DarkVortex: but somehow it will play weird
12:06 iloveyou4ever: yes
12:06 iloveyou4ever: it also fits the piano sound too
12:06 DarkVortex: yeah
12:06 DarkVortex: i'd leave it like this
12:06 DarkVortex: even if the offset is strange
12:07 iloveyou4ever: leave it like this=keep?
12:07 DarkVortex: yes
12:07 iloveyou4ever: ok
12:08 DarkVortex: that's it i think
12:08 DarkVortex: didn't find more
12:09 DarkVortex: just stuff i might have done differently but are totally optional
12:09 iloveyou4ever: Thanks so much for helping me :D
12:09 DarkVortex: you're welcome :D
12:09 iloveyou4ever: yeah different mappers have different mapping styles XD
12:09 iloveyou4ever: post log please
12:09 DarkVortex: yeah i will
12:10 iloveyou4ever: do you think it's rankable at this point?
12:10 iloveyou4ever: objectively
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00:45:006 - add spinner?i think here is empty and it suits the song
00:48:474 (17,18) - ctrl+g,the sound is from low to high
00:54:785 - add k?follow sound effect
01:16:736 - change to k?follow sound effect
02:08:505 (1,2,3) - change to big D?我聽到呢三粒都係重音


其實真係好難穩到邊度錯lol,mod得甘少真係唔好意思。
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YO

00:45:006 - add spinner?i think here is empty and it suits the song
leaving a bar empty here can give a better emphasizing on what's going to happen in the next stanza
00:48:474 (17,18) - ctrl+g,the sound is from low to high I want to add variation here,since dd d dk repeat for 3 times will be boring
00:54:785 - add k?follow sound effect Yes indeed there's sound effect here,but quite small imo. And also I want to put fewer notes here to emphasize 7-plets 00:55:608 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82) -
01:16:736 - change to k?follow sound effect three distinctive high pitch sound effect was found on 01:16:370 (274,276,279) - , and I want to emphasize them by only putting them k
no change here but change 04:47:468 - to d instead to keep the consistency
02:08:505 (1,2,3) - change to big D?我聽到呢三粒都係重音 the pitches for these four notes 02:08:322 (685,686,687,688) - are the same,and the first one is k,so I also put the finishers as K to keep the consistency


其實真係好難穩到邊度錯lol,mod得甘少真係唔好意思。
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18:00 iloveyou4ever: Hello,do you mind to do a testplay?
18:00 iloveyou4ever: it's a 6* map(not really 6* but few 1/6)
18:00 Kazaze: Hey! It will be my pleasure!
18:01 Kazaze: I'll try :3
18:01 iloveyou4ever: Thanks :D
18:01 *iloveyou4ever is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1364659 DJ Command - True Blue [DJ Command Mix] (Full Ver.)]
18:01 iloveyou4ever: it'd be great if you can do a quick irc mod with me too >_<
18:02 Kazaze: Yeah! I'll help :3
18:02 iloveyou4ever: cuz I cant figure out anymore errors..and I hope modders can spot sth that I can't
18:02 iloveyou4ever: Thanks a lot!
18:02 Kazaze: That would be my first irc c:
18:02 Kazaze: You're welcome
18:03 Kazaze: Hope I will be able to help
18:08 iloveyou4ever: sorry for such a hard map o.o
18:09 Kazaze: It's ok haha it's just me and my sucky skills
18:10 iloveyou4ever: focus on stream is ok :D
18:10 iloveyou4ever: if you cant play it then check some patterns of non-kiai time is also ok XD
18:11 Kazaze: I feel like 00:13:817 (23) - is unnecessary : It isn't mapped on any major sound
18:11 Kazaze: I'll do my best :')
18:12 iloveyou4ever: someone also said that before
18:12 iloveyou4ever: however I find it strange that keeping 00:14:000 (24,25,26,27) - as only kd kd
18:12 iloveyou4ever: seems a little boring
18:12 iloveyou4ever: also for flow purpose
18:14 Kazaze: You're right kd kd is a bit boring but still
18:14 Kazaze: I looks and sounds a bit odd
18:14 iloveyou4ever: I'll consider that..
18:14 Kazaze: ok
18:16 Kazaze: Any reasons why 00:26:805 (65,66,67,68) - is not hitsounded the same way as 00:15:098 (27,28,29,30) - I would personally make them the same since these two parts are mapped on the same melody
18:18 iloveyou4ever: nice catch!
18:18 iloveyou4ever: I cant spot that...
18:18 iloveyou4ever: changed!
18:19 Kazaze: Thx :b
18:19 Kazaze: Minor point I guess : 00:43:268 (116) - I would change to a d to highlight the vocals going lower on that note
18:21 iloveyou4ever: the distance from this and next note is quite far
18:21 iloveyou4ever: 2.5 beats
18:21 iloveyou4ever: I think need not highlight that
18:22 Kazaze:  Ok that makes sense, no need for a change then
18:22 iloveyou4ever: ok!
18:24 Kazaze: I think you could add a note on 00:47:742 - according to the melody you're following, that would also create a great graduation from the doubles to a quadruple 1/4 and then to the streams a bit later - Kinda like a build-up 
18:24 iloveyou4ever: there's already a note there o.o
18:24 Kazaze: No?
18:25 iloveyou4ever: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8695197
18:25 Kazaze: Oh sorry
18:25 Kazaze: That's 00:47:742 (12) - 
18:25 Kazaze: I was refering to 00:47:651 - 
18:25 Kazaze: Sowy
18:26 iloveyou4ever: check this part 03:08:322 -
18:26 Kazaze: Ah that makes sense now, ok!
18:30 iloveyou4ever: and I need to sleep 30 min later :c
18:30 iloveyou4ever: but nvm keep going :D
18:31 Kazaze: What about moving 01:56:523 (598) - to 01:56:706 - and then adding a note on 01:56:889 - / I feel like this structure would follow the melody better
18:31 Kazaze: Oh :v
18:32 iloveyou4ever: that'd be too dense I think
18:33 iloveyou4ever: I want to leave 1/2 space like 01:56:706 - and 01:56:889 -
18:34 Kazaze: 02:53:139 (416) - sound the same as 02:53:322 (417) - I would change it to a d / the repetition of d would emphasize even better the following 1/6 which is k sounds in majotity
18:34 Kazaze: Ok
18:34 iloveyou4ever: 02:53:139 - is still following the background ''clap'' sound
18:35 Kazaze: but there's a very distinct drum sound on there too, the same one that 02:53:322 (417) -  is following so idk, I guess it's up to you
18:36 iloveyou4ever: I'd say clap sound is more dominant here
18:37 iloveyou4ever: and also following the consistent music element here(sry for bad english)
18:37 iloveyou4ever: the clap sound
18:38 Kazaze: Don't you worry about your english, mine is bad too :D
18:38 Kazaze: I get you
18:38 Kazaze: clap sound it is then! :3
18:38 iloveyou4ever: ok!
18:39 Kazaze: 04:09:236 (321,322,323,324,325,326,327) - Should be the same as 00:15:098 (28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - shouldn't it?
18:39 Kazaze: so change 04:10:334 (327) -  to k
18:40 Kazaze: same for 04:56:066 (659,660,661,662,663,664,665) - (Is there a reason for that then?)
18:40 iloveyou4ever: I changed this 00:16:195 - to d
18:41 Kazaze: Ok that's consistent now
18:41 iloveyou4ever: yes
18:42 Kazaze: Aaaand I guess that's all I would have to say :v
18:43 iloveyou4ever: any other consistency issue?
18:43 iloveyou4ever: you really help me a lot on that :D
18:43 Kazaze: Oh thanks :D
18:43 Kazaze: I'm looking :b
18:44 iloveyou4ever: Thx :D
18:44 Kazaze: Minor stuff : Change 05:01:370 (684) -  to a d?
18:44 Kazaze: so 05:01:005 (682,683,684,685) -  will be hitsounded just like 04:59:541 (676,677,678,679) - 
18:44 Kazaze: since they're following the same melody
18:46 iloveyou4ever: OK!
18:46 Kazaze: Also 00:28:268 (70,71,72,73) -  should be like 00:16:561 (35,36,37,38) - ?
18:47 iloveyou4ever: is following vocal here
18:47 Kazaze: Oh ok
18:47 iloveyou4ever: also want to highlight 00:29:548 (74) - this
18:47 Kazaze:  ok!
18:49 Kazaze: 04:10:883 (328,329,330) - you could change this a bit so it's more similar to 00:16:561 (35,36,37,38) - 
18:50 Kazaze: kkd or add a note so it's the exact same
18:50 iloveyou4ever: emm but the artist sucks
18:50 iloveyou4ever: he didnt put a piano sound on 04:10:700 -
18:50 Kazaze: Oh you're right
18:50 iloveyou4ever: also here is a calm part after kiai time,I want to leave more breaks here
18:50 Kazaze: kdk is a nice fit then
18:51 Kazaze: yeah ok
18:51 iloveyou4ever: ye
18:51 Kazaze: kkd wouldn't have this notion of up-down-up melody kdk has
18:52 iloveyou4ever: yeah
18:55 Kazaze: 00:25:158 (62,63) - Ctrl+g ? in all the other similar parts : 04:07:590 (317,318,319,320) - and 04:54:419 (655,656,657,658) - it "k   d  dk"
18:56 iloveyou4ever: I think the vocal are different
18:56 iloveyou4ever: also does this pitch
18:57 iloveyou4ever: the ''ha'' sound on 00:25:890 - is obviously high pitch
18:57 iloveyou4ever: I want to highlight that
18:57 Kazaze: Hum ok
18:57 iloveyou4ever: 04:08:322 - ''did'' sound in here is not that obvious and strong imo
18:58 Kazaze: I agree
18:59 Kazaze: I think that's it then!
19:00 iloveyou4ever: Thanks so much at all :D
19:00 iloveyou4ever: I couldn't spot out consistency issue at all XD maybe I should pay more attention on that
19:00 Kazaze: you're welcome! I'm so glad I helped!
19:00 iloveyou4ever: post the log and take kudos?
19:00 Kazaze: Ok ! :3

Thank you again for asking for my help, it was a pleasure. :b
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From what I saw the map looks quite solid, the long streams fits very well to the nature of the song "extending" the rhythm and generally the other elements such as 1/6 are properly used. Haven't really went in-depth since.. well, you haven't asked for it. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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00:15:829Maybe delete this, I don't hear anything
00:28:634Delete this
00:48:474Maybe dk, the pitch is rising up?
01:37:590k here?
01:19:023Missing note?
02:50:761Kiai stopped here, why don't you lower the SV?
03:46:005Do d? Pitch is low

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Hey ily4, from my queue:


Inner Oni
00:15:829Maybe delete this, I don't hear anything
there's soft piano sound here
00:28:634Delete this there's soft piano sound here too
00:48:474Maybe dk, the pitch is rising up? yes but I want to add variation here cuz repeating dd d dk would be boring
01:37:590k here? nice!
01:19:023Missing note? I want to show a kind of progression compared to 03:04:389 - ,that's why I didnt put a note here
02:50:761Kiai stopped here, why don't you lower the SV? the music is still quite intense imo,that's why I didnt decide to lower the SV here
03:46:005Do d? Pitch is low I want to put k here to highlight the low pitch guitar sound on 03:46:370 -

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#1 mapper, nice stream.
GL on ranking :)


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petition to stop mappers from not placing notes in the middle of the playfield.

Also my part of m4m


General

00:01:034 - Recheck offset? Seems like the notes are placed pretty early compared to where the notes are.

Would generally boost the SV a little bit because 1.04 is... really nothing. Also causes some green lines to be redundant (like 00:58:992 - ). Suggestion would be to boost the 1.04x kiais to 1.07x and the 1.07x kiai to... something higher. Then the SV changes become actually noteworthy and apparent to the player.

>I generally don't understand why 02:56:614 - has a higher SV than 04:30:273 - anyway. Especially the 2nd half of last kiai is pretty much the same as 2:56


Mappu

01:18:657 - 01:19:023 - Would suggest to add notes here because the song kinda calls for it and it sounds a little bit rough without them. Don, and kat respectively. (01:19:114 (298) - And then change this to don). I know the difference to the next kiai becomes smaller - perhaps only adding 01:18:657 - is enough!

01:31:645 - To me it feels like vocals want a don added here. Plays more fluent as well imo

01:37:224 (444,445,446) - Same, feels like something is missing here. Compared to the rest of this part it's too much 1/2.

01:38:322 (451,452,454) - You're following vocals, correct? Then I would try to make these three notes be don, kat, don to emphasize the off-beat vocals.

03:03:474 (510) - Move this note 03:03:840 - here. There's a break 03:03:474 - here and a note 03:03:840 - here so it would make more sense to map them accordingly.


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petition to stop mappers from not placing notes in the middle of the playfield.

Also my part of m4m


General

00:01:034 - Recheck offset? Seems like the notes are placed pretty early compared to where the notes are.
change to 1040 (confirmed by using NC and it fits the most imo)

Would generally boost the SV a little bit because 1.04 is... really nothing. Also causes some green lines to be redundant (like 00:58:992 - ). Suggestion would be to boost the 1.04x kiais to 1.07x and the 1.07x kiai to... something higher. Then the SV changes become actually noteworthy and apparent to the player.

>I generally don't understand why 02:56:614 - has a higher SV than 04:30:273 - anyway. Especially the 2nd half of last kiai is pretty much the same as 2:56
change to 1.06,1.11,1.06,1.06 and 1.11 respectively for each kiai times

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01:18:657 - 01:19:023 - Would suggest to add notes here because the song kinda calls for it and it sounds a little bit rough without them. Don, and kat respectively. (01:19:114 (298) - And then change this to don). I know the difference to the next kiai becomes smaller - perhaps only adding 01:18:657 - is enough! what I want to emphasize here is the highest pitch of this music part,which is 01:19:297 - ,and I want to emphasize it by putting fewer notes before and put a 9-note stream there. Also,01:17:102 (280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294) - kdddk kkddk kkkdk is pretty solid imo,so I don't want to add a note on 01:18:657 - to make it looks less solid.

01:31:645 - To me it feels like vocals want a don added here. Plays more fluent as well imo
sure!
01:37:224 (444,445,446) - Same, feels like something is missing here. Compared to the rest of this part it's too much 1/2.
add d here
01:38:322 (451,452,454) - You're following vocals, correct? Then I would try to make these three notes be don, kat, don to emphasize the off-beat vocals.
I try to highlight the background sound effect especially for this bar,cuz that's quite outstanding imo.
03:03:474 (510) - Move this note 03:03:840 - here. There's a break 03:03:474 - here and a note 03:03:840 - here so it would make more sense to map them accordingly.
emm want to add a kind of variation here,and kkddkdkkd seems fit the music here too.
changed

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