2017-07-23 11:02 Rizen: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1363333 cillia - Donor Song]
2017-07-23 11:06 Rizen: how's it?
2017-07-23 11:06 HappyRocket88: Not bad :o
2017-07-23 11:06 HappyRocket88: I'd raise the HP though; I felt it a bit low
2017-07-23 11:06 Rizen: ah ok
2017-07-23 11:07 HappyRocket88: There were really brilliant patterns I'd like to highlight
2017-07-23 11:07 Rizen: -> 6
2017-07-23 11:07 HappyRocket88: 01:40:729 (1,2,3) - 
2017-07-23 11:07 HappyRocket88: This was so coooool
2017-07-23 11:07 HappyRocket88: >w<
2017-07-23 11:08 HappyRocket88: 01:51:318 (1,2,3) - 
2017-07-23 11:08 HappyRocket88: This played great!
2017-07-23 11:08 Rizen: oh thanks! :>
2017-07-23 11:09 HappyRocket88: 01:59:847 (3,4,1,2,3) - I missed in this part 
2017-07-23 11:09 HappyRocket88: I don't think it was due to the density of clicks the player would do here
2017-07-23 11:09 Rizen: ah yeah the overlaps
2017-07-23 11:09 HappyRocket88: but rather the spacing from (4) to 1 and 2 made it a bit uncomfortable
2017-07-23 11:11 Rizen: ok i did something prettier
2017-07-23 11:11 HappyRocket88: 00:55:729 - I know you were following vocals in this segment, but leaving this spot empty made the transition to be somewhat weird. 
2017-07-23 11:12 HappyRocket88: 01:30:141 (1) - Perhaps a Ctrl + g would fit here? :o just to keep the flow you've managed in the similar patterns
2017-07-23 11:14 HappyRocket88: 01:33:524 (1,2) - I think doing ctrol + g here will highlight better the instruments :o
2017-07-23 11:14 HappyRocket88: and it wouldn't skip the vocal arrangemente you followed there
2017-07-23 11:15 Rizen: 00:55:729 - i'll have to think a little more on cos i think it's fine.. will think about it mroe tho
2017-07-23 11:15 Rizen: 01:30:141 (1) - yip, done
2017-07-23 11:16 Rizen: 01:33:524 (1,2) - sure
2017-07-23 11:16 HappyRocket88: 01:24:455 (1,2,3) - Ayyy >w<
2017-07-23 11:17 HappyRocket88: Rhythmically talking, they emphasize the beat greatly
2017-07-23 11:17 Rizen: yeah.. that's a woosy
2017-07-23 11:17 HappyRocket88: but i'm afraid the transition between 1/4 and 1/3 would ebcome a bit too sudden :o
2017-07-23 11:17 HappyRocket88: would it be more approachable if
2017-07-23 11:18 HappyRocket88: we could change 1 and 2 for a slider instead?
2017-07-23 11:18 Rizen: repeat 1/3 slider?
2017-07-23 11:18 Rizen: hmm
2017-07-23 11:18 Rizen: i really want to make those vocals/guitar clickable
2017-07-23 11:18 HappyRocket88: Yeah and it's fine 
2017-07-23 11:19 HappyRocket88: i was just hmmm
2017-07-23 11:19 HappyRocket88: how to say it 
2017-07-23 11:19 HappyRocket88: a bit surprised
2017-07-23 11:19 HappyRocket88: they were 1/3 
2017-07-23 11:19 HappyRocket88: because when i played it the spacing and the momentum of the song
2017-07-23 11:19 HappyRocket88: suggested me to follow the regular 1/4 rhythm the song suggested before
2017-07-23 11:20 HappyRocket88: But yeah, it mught just be me XDDD
2017-07-23 11:20 HappyRocket88: Sorry for nitpicking Q__Q
2017-07-23 11:20 Rizen: what no
2017-07-23 11:20 Rizen: your feedback is very valuable to me
2017-07-23 11:20 Rizen: 01:23:965 (5,6,7,1) - i did try make the flow uncomfortable here
2017-07-23 11:20 Rizen: for that transition
2017-07-23 11:21 HappyRocket88:  /u\
2017-07-23 11:22 Rizen: hey happy, can u read japanese characters?
2017-07-23 11:22 HappyRocket88: NUUUUU
2017-07-23 11:22 HappyRocket88: XDD
2017-07-23 11:22 Rizen: oh ok
2017-07-23 11:23 Rizen: what do u think about
2017-07-23 11:23 Rizen: 00:57:200 (1,2,3,4,1) - ?
2017-07-23 11:23 HappyRocket88: Hmmm this is like
2017-07-23 11:24 HappyRocket88: a dualityyyyy xDDD
2017-07-23 11:24 HappyRocket88: The vocals are amazing there
2017-07-23 11:24 Rizen: the meaning behind those sliders
2017-07-23 11:24 HappyRocket88: so covering with a slider fits the best
2017-07-23 11:25 Rizen: [https://image.shutterstock.com/z/stock-photo-japanese-kanji-character-for-heart-72034378.jpg heart]
2017-07-23 11:25 Rizen: 01:01:906 (1) - is also a heart
2017-07-23 11:25 HappyRocket88: OHHHH
2017-07-23 11:25 HappyRocket88: :O
2017-07-23 11:25 Rizen: cos the song is about donating uhhhh
2017-07-23 11:25 Rizen: body parts
2017-07-23 11:25 Rizen: that sounds weird
2017-07-23 11:25 Rizen: but
2017-07-23 11:25 Rizen: the song/lyrics is quite touching
2017-07-23 11:26 HappyRocket88: I should've guessed with the tittle
2017-07-23 11:26 Rizen: http://vocaloidlyrics.wikia.com/wiki/%E3%83%89%E3%83%8A%E3%83%BC%E3%82%BD%E3%83%B3%E3%82%B0_(Donor_Song)
2017-07-23 11:26 Rizen: o damn that link
2017-07-23 11:26 HappyRocket88: That expplains the slider shape
2017-07-23 11:26 HappyRocket88: Brilliant Rizen XD
2017-07-23 11:26 Rizen: no one will get it tho LOL
2017-07-23 11:27 HappyRocket88: You'll have to explain to each modder
2017-07-23 11:27 Rizen: not as obvious as skystar with 'megumi' in their asterisk remix map
2017-07-23 11:27 Rizen: ya
2017-07-23 11:27 HappyRocket88: XD
2017-07-23 11:27 HappyRocket88: But it's great
2017-07-23 11:27 Rizen: only one person got it LOL
2017-07-23 11:27 HappyRocket88: I did find it questionable like
2017-07-23 11:28 HappyRocket88: "why that slider shape"
2017-07-23 11:28 HappyRocket88: "rizen knows how to do more pretty things"
2017-07-23 11:28 Rizen: o lol
2017-07-23 11:28 HappyRocket88: but there's always a purpose behind each thing
2017-07-23 11:29 HappyRocket88: So I'll leave it and the motion is calm and soothe the transition :3
2017-07-23 11:29 HappyRocket88: *left 
2017-07-23 11:29 HappyRocket88: *passed xD
2017-07-23 11:29 HappyRocket88: I left it or passed omg 
2017-07-23 11:29 HappyRocket88: My grammar is getting hurt
2017-07-23 11:30 Rizen: left it
2017-07-23 11:30 Rizen: xdd
2017-07-23 11:30 HappyRocket88: Looking forward to see it complete! \^^/
2017-07-23 11:30 HappyRocket88: Best of success with this! .o.
2017-07-23 11:31 Rizen: thanks!
2017-07-23 11:31 HappyRocket88: I know you don't need sp
2017-07-23 11:31 HappyRocket88: but posting the log would help? 
2017-07-23 11:31 HappyRocket88: XD
2017-07-23 11:32 Rizen: yeah sure :)

15:02 Rizen: r u free for
15:02 Rizen: testplays?
15:02 _DT3: Yep
15:02 Rizen: :o
15:02 *Rizen is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1363333 cillia - Donor Song [Insane]]
15:03 _DT3: Ok wait a sec
15:05 _DT3: Wait lemme try again lol
15:08 _DT3: Ok better
15:08 Rizen: nic e
15:09 _DT3: Now some things I noticed lol
15:10 _DT3: 00:14:847 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These 3 1/4 slider patterns feel like they accelerate the movement since the rhythm gets minorly sped up in a way, it feels kinda unfitting :o
15:10 _DT3: Oh, and I'm kinda confused about 00:17:200 (1) - why it's a 1/4 slider
15:11 Rizen: vocal mappin
15:12 _DT3: Maybe then a hitcircle + 1/4 repeat slider instead? It is weird that that vocal is on a slider tail
15:14 Rizen: i'll do that for 00:14:847 (1,2) -
15:14 _DT3: Ok
15:15 _DT3: I actually had some issues with the 8 1/4 hitcircle patterns in the end
15:15 _DT3: They were pretty hard to hit :o
15:17 _DT3: 01:23:965 (3,5) - Triggered about this triangle-looking pattern zzz
15:17 Rizen: o i'll nerf those a bit
15:19 Rizen: o how so
15:19 _DT3: It looks kinda off :O
15:20 _DT3: Because it looks like it's gonna be a triangle
15:20 Rizen: which triangle?
15:20 Rizen: 01:24:455 (1,2,3) - ?
15:20 Rizen: or 01:23:965 (3,4,5) -
15:20 _DT3: 01:23:965 (3,4,1) - 
15:21 _DT3: Sorry, my mistake
15:21 Rizen: ok adjusted a little
15:21 Rizen: huhhh?
15:21 _DT3: Wrong timestamp first time xd
15:21 Rizen: xd
15:21 _DT3: 01:28:377 (3,4,1) - Tbh, slider leniency plays pretty underwhelming for this strong vocal imo
15:22 _DT3: Also 01:37:788 (3,4,1) - feels a bit underwhelming
15:25 Rizen: ok changed both
15:26 _DT3: 01:41:024 (2) - The slider kinda covers up the drumroll, maybe add a sliderwhistle? :o
15:26 Rizen: the reason i didn';t map the drumroll there is because it's offtimed ;c
15:26 Rizen: hmmm
15:27 Rizen: not fond of slider whistles tbh
15:27 _DT3: Oky
15:28 _DT3: 02:14:259 (3,4,5,6) - Felt like too much for a calm section
15:29 _DT3: Could replace 02:14:553 (5,6) - with a 1/4 slider
15:30 Rizen: what if I just overlapped them a bit?
15:30 Rizen: https://puu.sh/wSEX0/a66f211a6c.png
15:31 _DT3: Should make it better yeah
15:31 _DT3: But please also reduce the distance to the next object by a little bit
15:31 _DT3: 02:14:847 (1) - 
15:32 Rizen: https://puu.sh/wSEZH/74236a2502.png
15:32 _DT3: Mhmm
15:32 Rizen: oh, nerfed 02:17:200 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - to [https://puu.sh/wSF17/93fe2d6f65.png this]
15:33 _DT3: Wait what changed? :o
15:34 Rizen: spacing
15:34 Rizen: reduced
15:34 _DT3: Ah ok
15:34 Rizen: what do u think about the sb?
15:34 _DT3: It fits the song really well owo
15:34 Rizen: owo
15:35 Rizen: what do u think about 00:57:200 (1,2,3,4) -
15:35 _DT3: Hmm, I didn't think it was too bad
15:35 _DT3: But now that I look at it
15:35 _DT3: What is it? x)
15:36 Rizen: 心
15:36 _DT3: Ah
15:36 Rizen: kokoro
15:36 Rizen: and then
15:36 Rizen: 01:01:906 (1) -
15:36 Rizen: is a heart too
15:37 _DT3: Yep, I figured
15:38 _DT3: So, that's all I found while playing
15:38 Rizen: being a donor
15:38 Rizen: heh
15:38 Rizen: cos the song is about
15:38 Rizen: http://vocaloidlyrics.wikia.com/wiki/%E3%83%89%E3%83%8A%E3%83%BC%E3%82%BD%E3%83%B3%E3%82%B0_(Donor_Song)
15:38 _DT3: Ah ok
15:38 Rizen: post log for cheeky kd? x)
15:38 _DT3: Yes x)