1. ADVANCED (2.61 stars, 292 notes)
2. BEGINNER (1.7 stars, 157 notes)
3. Cookie M i N's EXTREME (5.35 stars, 628 notes)
4. FINAL DESTINATION (5.8 stars, 693 notes)
5. Kenterz's ANOTHER (4.71 stars, 513 notes)
6. ShiroyraxAdventure's HYPER (3.56 stars, 314 notes)
7. STANDARD (2.32 stars, 206 notes)

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ㅤWARNING: SPOILER AHEADㅤ

(Arrangement of Dialga's Fight to the Finish! from Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Time / Darkness / Sky)

UNUSUAL SLIDER VELOCITY CHANGES IN THE EXTRA DIFFS

Difficulties
BEGINNER by me
STANDARD by me
ADVANCED by me
HYPER by Shiroi Hiroshi*, SyraxAxoJaxco and KittyAdventure*
ANOTHER by Kenterz*
EXTREME by A r M i N* and me
FINAL DESTINATION by me

*Since they decided not to reply mods so I will help them handle all the mods. (aka CookieBite edit xdd)

ezek | Hobbes2

"sak" or "sak respect for Arata Iiyoshi"?

http://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cgi?action=More_def&num=13&event=107

KittyAdventure wrote:

Can I taken Insane or Hyper diff? (If hyper, i want try collab with my friend)

SyraxAxoJaxco wrote:

Kitty, aku aja yang ambil Hypernya, boleh gak?? *puppyeyes

May I fill the Hyper slot, Cookie? :3

HabiHolic wrote:

Hello!

[FINAL DESTINATION]

00:01:904 (3) - This shape is be dislocated. i think better this. // applied

SPOILER

00:04:746 (4) - need for this note move. i think.. 448:220? // i don't want square d
00:08:219 (3) - same for first shape problem. 00:01:904 (3) - This. // applied
00:11:061 (4) - same 00:04:746 (4) -this. // same with what i mentioned before
00:31:478 (2,3) - better for this 1/1 slider. your think? // there are 3 important notes i can see no reason of replacing it by a 1/1 slider

SPOILER

[Cookie M i N's EXTREME]

00:31:478 (5,6) - better for this 1/1 slider. // there are 3 important notes i can see no reason of replacing it by a 1/1 slider

[Kenterz's ANOTHER]

00:31:478 (2,3) - better for this 1/1 slider. // there are 3 important notes i can see no reason of replacing it by a 1/1 slider
00:36:953 (2) - 00:38:532 (1,2) - 01:39:479 (2) - this overlap is very very harder patten for imo.. // will consider about it in the future maybe

that all GL! annother diff is fine!

leo16834 wrote:

水伊貝前來支援了xd 摸一下

能知道這款神奇寶貝不可思議迷宮是是最好的一件事情了~


BEGINNER

00:21:166 (5,2) - 這兩個要不要疊在一起呢? // 好
00:51:164 (4,4) - 這個也要不要疊一起呢? 不過如果有改的話 這個00:53:059 (4,2) - 可能也要動一下 // 好


STANDARD

01:57:163 (3) - 這裡給我的感覺 好像變成點應該會比較好 // 好
01:58:110 (1) - 比照BEGINNER的滑條音效 這個移動的滑條聲音比較大聲耶 有什麼特殊的緣故嗎? // 沒有啊???




高難度我看了一下 我不太想破壞原本的感覺 所以我覺得不要摸好了
我覺得做的真的很好xd 每次都是來學習的~

很抱歉這次我真的摸不出甚麼來

順便給一顆星好了


VS Primal Dialga

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Standard]
00:35:725 (5,1) - could you avoid overlap? You changed offset, so DS was inconsistent in here. // applied

[Final]
00:17:376 (6,1) - I suggest using Just 1/2 sliders, since you didn't try 3/4 well and this has too big DS, so playing can be hard. // revamped
01:10:427 (1,2,3) - Could you increase DS little bit? Comparing with 01:08:533 (1,2,3,4) - , DS looks similar, so players can read it as 1/4. // hope nc can help d

well, Good map., GL

BlakeBestWaifu wrote:

From my modding Q

BEGINNER

Beginners are normally below an easy but yours is a normal? Weird // for the map spread it is the easiest diff no problem here
00:00:010 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Do you need to spam NC? // every section is new
01:01:269 (4,5) - Sliders should overlap like this on lower difficulys because it makes it hard for new players to read // you mean shouldn't overlap? applied anyway
01:14:532 (1) - Ctrl + H // why?
01:23:374 (3,1) - Another maybe confusing overlap // not really it's clear enough
01:54:321 (1) - That is way too confusing right before the circle it is a big mush // i dont think so

Sorry for only modding the one difficulty, didn't have know what to say about the others. Good luck with mapset!

• 00:13:588 (1,1) - In my opinion this is a very unexpected moment, it is better to remove it 00:00:010 (1,1,1,1,1) - ?
  00:13:903 (1) - remove nc
  00:24:639 (2,1) - fix blanket
  00:25:271 (1,2,3,1) - To make the same even diamond as here? 00:21:481 (1,2,3,1) -
  01:02:216 (5) - end slider here 01:02:690 -
  01:23:374 (3,1) - i think better avoid overlap in Easy
  01:42:005 (5,2) - ^
  01:51:479 (4,2) - ^

• 00:13:903 (1) - nc?
  00:35:073 (2) - This note here is very poor in rhythm, it is not felt when playing! can try so?
  00:50:848 (1) - hmm try this?

• 01:01:901 (2) - fix blanket
  01:19:268 (1,2,3) - It is very strange that in kiai before that you used a circular flow, and here you decided not to do it, but after that the pattern starts to do it again
  looks good for me

• 00:06:325 (1,1,1) - you can blaket it?
  00:20:850 (1) - can nc here, have new sound
  00:27:639 (4,5) - I think it's better to map so. You have already done this pattern, and in my opinion it's better to have a flow of 3 to 4
  00:28:113 (1) - nc?
  00:28:666 (1,2) - little fix blanket
  00:38:532 (1,2,3) - I do not think that this is the best pattern, it is very strange for the game! Can try so?
  00:46:111 (1,2) - blanket it?
  00:49:269 (2,3) - copypast? 00:48:795 (5,1) -
  00:50:059 (2,3) - try blanket?
  01:42:321 (5) - nc?

• 00:32:899 (1,2) - Same music, why did you decide to make a stack? 00:29:110 (1,2) -
  00:43:901 (1,2,3,4) - Because they are stack, it's very difficult to read this moment! better to do unstack
  00:51:164 (2,3) - It is better to make a small space here, because there is not much sound, and to express this sound 00:51:480 (4) - more strongly! you can try to do so

• in my opinion ar 9.6 and od 8,5 better
  00:05:062 - hmm you can pute here 1 more note
  00:11:377 - ^
  00:34:915 (2,4) - Stack? And it seems, as if the stream begins where 2, and I intensively put the cursor on 2
  01:10:427 (1,1,1,1) - Something like this
  02:02:859 (1) - hmm put note x217 y173?

• final destination

1. why ar 9 od 8? this is 6 stars and fast, make it atleast .5 higher on both
2. 00:01:904 (3) - could be tweaked to blanket 00:00:957 (2) - like so, same at 00:08:219 (3) -
3. 00:03:799 (1,2,3,4) - remake this with the polygon creator tool? same at 00:10:114 (1,2,3,4) -
4. 00:14:376 (3) -, 00:16:271 (3) -, 00:18:166 (3) - and 00:20:060 (3) - nc like in extra?
5. 00:16:587 (4) - shoudl be spaced less imo
6. 00:32:583 (1,2) - swap nc
7. 00:21:481 (1) - could space like 00:36:638 (1) -
8. 00:42:244 (12,1) - pretty big compared to the spacing you usually use at the end of streams, at 01:31:505 (6,1) - its fine cause everything is more spaced here
9. 00:40:349 (12,3) - blanket better :^)
10. 00:45:480 (3) - nc to introduce different snap with this stream?
11. 00:59:374 (1) - this should be less spaced, like 00:29:110 (1) -
12. 00:59:374 (1) - add finish on head?
13. 01:06:560 (5,6) - slow part and then a 1/4 jump like this?
14. 01:12:323 (1,2,3,4,1) - sounds distorted, can make it look like that too
15. 01:44:295 - i dont think there's a sound here
    
    good diff
    
    cookiemin extra
    
16. 00:35:725 (8) - silence tail, sounds bad
17. 00:35:725 (8) - nc
18. 00:37:585 (5) - nc
19. 00:43:901 (1,2,3,4) - hard to read, also 00:44:138 (4,1) - is hard to reach. flip the slider stream maybe?
20. 00:44:295 (1) - wrong snap lmao
21. 01:02:216 (1,4) - inconsistent nc
22. 01:26:532 (4,5) - 4 should be spaced more than 5 to emphasise the sound better, could change to something like so
23. 01:37:505 (2,3) - no need to space these 2, stack is just fine
    
    
    quick look through beginner, map looks good, but ncs seem kinda scattered, double check them to make sure they're consistent
    
    overall solid mapset, dont have time for any other diffs rn, might check later (probably not)
    
    gl!

makisokk wrote:

Hello from my que

[BEGINNER]

• 00:13:588 (1,1) - In my opinion this is a very unexpected moment, it is better to remove it 00:00:010 (1,1,1,1,1) - ? // it's the beginning i can't remove it (for me i want to map the beginning of the song)
  00:13:903 (1) - remove nc // it's the beginning of a new section so no
  00:24:639 (2,1) - fix blanket // sure
  00:25:271 (1,2,3,1) - To make the same even diamond as here? 00:21:481 (1,2,3,1) - // that way new players may get confused, i want to make them clear
  01:02:216 (5) - end slider here 01:02:690 - // end at white tick
  01:23:374 (3,1) - i think better avoid overlap in Easy
  01:42:005 (5,2) - ^
  01:51:479 (4,2) - ^
  
  // These overlap aren't really hard to read i think

[STANDARD]

• 00:13:903 (1) - nc? you mean remove nc? new section so no apply
  00:35:073 (2) - This note here is very poor in rhythm, it is not felt when playing! can tryso? // applied
  00:50:848 (1) - hmm try this? // why? it plays much smoother/comfortable when using reserve slider

[Kenterz's ANOTHER]

• 00:06:325 (1,1,1) - you can blaket it? // sure
  00:20:850 (1) - can nc here, have new sound // applied
  00:27:639 (4,5) - I think it's better to map so. You have already done this pattern, and in my opinion it's better to have a flow of 3 to 4 // revamped
  00:28:113 (1) - nc? // applied
  00:28:666 (1,2) - little fix blanket // sure (tho no one cares)
  00:38:532 (1,2,3) - I do not think that this is the best pattern, it is very strange for the game! Can try so? // applied
  00:46:111 (1,2) - blanket it? // applied
  00:49:269 (2,3) - copypast? 00:48:795 (5,1) - // i don't want repetitive patterns
  00:50:059 (2,3) - try blanket? // applied
  01:42:321 (5) - nc? // applied

[Cookie M i N's EXTREME]

• 00:32:899 (1,2) - Same music, why did you decide to make a stack? 00:29:110 (1,2) - // unstacked
  00:43:901 (1,2,3,4) - Because they are stack, it's very difficult to read this moment! better to do unstack // applied

[FINAL DESTINATION]

• in my opinion ar 9.6 and od 8,5 better // ar 9.6 is too high so i adjust it to 9.1 and the od had been set to 8.5
  00:05:062 - hmm you can pute here 1 more note // applied
  00:11:377 - ^ // applied
  00:34:915 (2,4) - Stack? And it seems, as if the stream begins where 2, and I intensively put the cursor on 2 // applied
  01:10:427 (1,1,1,1) - Something like this // revamped
  02:02:859 (1) - hmm put note x217 y173? // i prefer center

okay good mappset
Please next time write who what part did, so it's easier to address the mapper // may do that some time

bite you death wrote:

hello, from my queue

• final destination

1. why ar 9 od 8? this is 6 stars and fast, make it atleast .5 higher on both // adjusted in previous mod
2. 00:01:904 (3) - could be tweaked to blanket 00:00:957 (2) - like so, same at 00:08:219 (3) - // tried
3. 00:03:799 (1,2,3,4) - remake this with the polygon creator tool? same at 00:10:114 (1,2,3,4) - // i prefer stars (i made it using polygon tool but i did some circle swap thing)
4. 00:14:376 (3) -, 00:16:271 (3) -, 00:18:166 (3) - and 00:20:060 (3) - nc like in extra? // applied
5. 00:16:587 (4) - shoudl be spaced less imo // adjusted
6. 00:32:583 (1,2) - swap nc // applied
7. 00:21:481 (1) - could space like 00:36:638 (1) - // applied
8. 00:42:244 (12,1) - pretty big compared to the spacing you usually use at the end of streams, at 01:31:505 (6,1) - its fine cause everything is more spaced here // adjusted
9. 00:40:349 (12,3) - blanket better :^) // applied
10. 00:45:480 (3) - nc to introduce different snap with this stream? // applied
11. 00:59:374 (1) - this should be less spaced, like 00:29:110 (1) - // applied
12. 00:59:374 (1) - add finish on head? // applied
13. 01:06:560 (5,6) - slow part and then a 1/4 jump like this? // revamped
14. 01:12:323 (1,2,3,4,1) - sounds distorted, can make it look like that too // what that
15. 01:44:295 - i dont think there's a sound here // there is
    
    good diff
    
    cookiemin extra
    
16. 00:37:585 (5) - nc // applied
17. 00:43:901 (1,2,3,4) - hard to read, also 00:44:138 (4,1) - is hard to reach. flip the slider stream maybe? // revamped
18. 00:44:295 (1) - wrong snap lmao // help armin fixed d
19. 01:02:216 (1,4) - inconsistent nc // fixed
20. 01:37:505 (2,3) - no need to space these 2, stack is just fine // applied
    
    
    quick look through beginner, map looks good, but ncs seem kinda scattered, double check them to make sure they're consistent
    
    overall solid mapset, dont have time for any other diffs rn, might check later (probably not)
    
    gl!

im still a newbie modder, kinda, so sorry if this didnt help much