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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, July 28, 2017 at 10:56:57 PM

Artist: R3 Music Box
Title: All Star
Tags: shrek smash mouth cookiebite
BPM: 92
Filesize: 2939kb
Play Time: 00:45
Difficulties Available:

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pile of D

general
add silent sliderslide pls

cookiebite
check aimod pls
00:02:692 (1) - no finish on head should have one for consistency
00:09:214 (7,8) - dont really like how these ended up like this after 00:03:997 (3,4) - being normally aligned. consider changing things up a bit to get it out more consistently
00:17:040 (3,4) - swap finish hs?
00:22:257 (3,4) - wait why suddenly make the rhythm differently from 00:01:388 (3,4) - ? music sounds the same to me
00:24:866 (3) - finishonhead
00:35:301 (3) - same
00:37:910 (3) -
00:33:997 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - personally dislike how everything here rotates in the same direction, maybe get a direction change on 00:39:214 (1,2,1,2) -

this is my swamp
check aimod
00:02:692 (3) - missingfinish on head
00:07:910 (3,2) - is this overlap avoidable? perhaps angling 00:08:888 (1) - up more would be able to solve the issue
00:11:660 (3,4) - map with stacking view on pls, you can see that (3) has a different overlap with 00:11:170 (2) - than 00:10:518 (1,2) - making it visually inconsistent
00:14:431 (3,4,5) - why not make this a triangle and put 00:15:410 (6) - in the middle? pattern looks a little unpolished atm
00:17:040 (3,5) - switch hs? consistency yaknow
00:18:018 (6) - i disagree with the emphasis that this note gets due to its current spacing. it isnt much stronger than 00:17:040 (3,4,5) - but explodes noticably now due to the spacing used. consider making it way less (in fact it has more impact than 00:18:344 (1) - )
00:22:910 (4,1,2,3) - first time this isnt in a circular motion, weird
00:25:518 (4) - ctrl+H this slider? i dont see a reason for it to break movement thats gonna be broken again at 00:26:170 (1) - anyways
00:34:649 (2) - i think ctrl+g would fit better here so that 00:33:997 (1,2) - feel more synchronised like the song gives it
00:35:301 (3) - should have finish on it

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General
  • turn off widescreen and countdown
  • add combocolours
  • too strong hitsounds tbh, make them husher or contact with me, I'll try to make better ones.
  • timing at the end is actually shitty so I made a better one for you. Try this:
    timing
    Code:
    [TimingPoints]
    84,652.173913043478,4,2,1,60,1,0
    40504,697.674418604651,4,2,1,50,1,0
    41201,659.340659340659,4,2,1,40,1,0
    41530,705.882352941176,4,2,1,30,1,0
    41882,714.285714285714,4,2,1,20,1,0
    42624,722.89156626506,4,2,1,20,1,0
    43402,722.89156626506,4,2,1,20,1,0
    43853,926.076923076923,4,2,1,20,1,0
    44804,926.076923076923,4,2,1,20,1,0

    Also placed circles on a new diff so you can be sure that my timing represents the sounds better:
    diff
    Code:
    osu file format v14

    [General]
    AudioFilename: audio.mp3
    AudioLeadIn: 0
    PreviewTime: 10437
    Countdown: 1
    SampleSet: Soft
    StackLeniency: 0.7
    Mode: 0
    LetterboxInBreaks: 0
    WidescreenStoryboard: 1

    [Editor]
    DistanceSpacing: 1.5
    BeatDivisor: 6
    GridSize: 8
    TimelineZoom: 1.5

    [Metadata]
    Title:All Star
    TitleUnicode:All Star
    Artist:R3 Music Box
    ArtistUnicode:R3 Music Box
    Creator:InternalLight
    Version:timing
    Source:Shrek
    Tags:smash mouth cookiebite
    BeatmapID:0
    BeatmapSetID:639740

    [Difficulty]
    HPDrainRate:5
    CircleSize:4
    OverallDifficulty:5
    ApproachRate:7.5
    SliderMultiplier:1.6
    SliderTickRate:1

    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"im sorry for this map.png",0,0
    //Break Periods
    //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
    //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
    //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
    //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
    //Storyboard Sound Samples

    [TimingPoints]
    84,652.173913043478,4,2,1,60,1,0
    40504,697.674418604651,4,2,1,50,1,0
    41201,659.340659340659,4,2,1,40,1,0
    41530,705.882352941176,4,2,1,30,1,0
    41882,714.285714285714,4,2,1,20,1,0
    42624,722.89156626506,4,2,1,20,1,0
    43402,722.89156626506,4,2,1,20,1,0
    43853,926.076923076923,4,2,1,20,1,0
    44804,926.076923076923,4,2,1,20,1,0


    [HitObjects]
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    176,128,40852,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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    176,128,41530,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    176,128,41882,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    176,128,42239,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    176,128,42624,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    176,128,42985,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    176,128,43402,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    176,128,43853,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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    176,128,44958,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    176,128,45112,5,0,0:0:0:0:


Normal
  • IRC
    Code:
    13:55 *Shmiklak is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1356810 R3 Music Box - All Star [CookieBite's Normal]]
    13:55 Shmiklak: you have unsnapped objects
    13:56 Shmiklak: 00:40:518 (1) - also this is placed further than is should be
    13:56 Shmiklak: it's 1.5
    13:56 Shmiklak: should be 1.4
    13:56 Shmiklak: that's all
    13:56 CookieBite: i want to keep the distance the sane
    13:56 CookieBite: *same
    13:56 Shmiklak: okay
    13:56 Shmiklak: though better to change
    13:56 CookieBite: i mean using 1.4 will be overlapped
    13:56 Shmiklak: but it's up to you
    13:56 Shmiklak: it won't
    13:57 CookieBite: ok
    13:57 Shmiklak: it won't be overlapped lol
    13:57 CookieBite: too near
    13:57 CookieBite: lol
    13:57 Shmiklak: idk 
    13:57 Shmiklak: great for me
    13:57 CookieBite: yea as always
    13:57 Shmiklak: you didn't break ds anywhere in this diff
    13:57 Shmiklak: so i don't think it's really usefull
    13:58 CookieBite: it's ok
    13:58 CookieBite: i think
    13:58 Shmiklak: it's okayish
    13:58 Shmiklak: oh btw
    13:58 CookieBite: alright
    13:58 Shmiklak: not all
    13:58 Shmiklak: 00:02:692 (1) - 
    13:58 Shmiklak: remove nc
    13:58 Shmiklak: or place here
    13:58 Shmiklak: 00:07:910 (5) - 
    13:58 Shmiklak: idk which logic you used
    13:58 Shmiklak: just fix one of them
    13:58 Shmiklak: you know they are wrong
    13:58 CookieBite: 8 combo chain?
    13:59 Shmiklak: you placed ncs every tact
    13:59 Shmiklak: so
    13:59 CookieBite: ok then
    13:59 Shmiklak: 00:07:910 (5) - 
    13:59 Shmiklak: here should be nc
    13:59 CookieBite: oh i see
    13:59 CookieBite: ok fixed
    14:00 Shmiklak: 00:40:518 (1) - would be removed nc here too btw
    14:00 Shmiklak: because it's like
    14:00 Shmiklak: 4 objects everywhere
    14:00 Shmiklak: ups to you
    14:00 Shmiklak: now lemme save the log


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HighTec wrote:
pile of D

general
add silent sliderslide pls

cookiebite
check aimod pls // fixed
00:02:692 (1) - no finish on head should have one for consistency // fixed
00:09:214 (7,8) - dont really like how these ended up like this after 00:03:997 (3,4) - being normally aligned. consider changing things up a bit to get it out more consistently // it seems ok for me tho, no change for now
00:17:040 (3,4) - swap finish hs? // fixed
00:22:257 (3,4) - wait why suddenly make the rhythm differently from 00:01:388 (3,4) - ? music sounds the same to me // at the beginning i want to have easier part since i want the player to get used to the rhythm, after that i added more red ticks for more challenging so i would keep it instead
00:24:866 (3) - finishonhead // fixed
00:35:301 (3) - same // fixed
00:37:910 (3) -
00:33:997 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - personally dislike how everything here rotates in the same direction, maybe get a direction change on 00:39:214 (1,2,1,2) - // fixed

cya


thanks for modding!

@InternalLight help me fix shmiklak's general part thx

Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 10355
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 20939
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:All Star
TitleUnicode:All Star
Artist:R3 Music Box
ArtistUnicode:R3 Music Box
Creator:InternalLight
Version:CookieBite's Normal
Source:Shrek
Tags:smash mouth cookiebite
BeatmapID:1356810
BeatmapSetID:639740

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:2.5
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"im sorry for this map.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
84,652.173913043478,4,2,0,60,1,0
10518,-100,4,2,0,80,0,1
18344,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
31388,-100,4,2,0,80,0,1
39214,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
40504,697.674418604651,4,2,0,50,1,0
41201,659.340659340659,4,2,0,40,1,0
41530,705.882352941176,4,2,0,30,1,0
41882,805.369127516779,4,2,0,20,1,0


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HighTec wrote:
pile of D b

general
add silent sliderslide pls Ye

this is my swamp no it isnt
check aimod orly
00:02:692 (3) - missingfinish on head yhe
00:07:910 (3,2) - is this overlap avoidable? perhaps angling 00:08:888 (1) - up more would be able to solve the issue yep
00:11:660 (3,4) - map with stacking view on pls, you can see that (3) has a different overlap with 00:11:170 (2) - than 00:10:518 (1,2) - making it visually inconsistent fix
00:14:431 (3,4,5) - why not make this a triangle and put 00:15:410 (6) - in the middle? pattern looks a little unpolished atm fix
00:17:040 (3,5) - switch hs? consistency yaknow ye
00:18:018 (6) - i disagree with the emphasis that this note gets due to its current spacing. it isnt much stronger than 00:17:040 (3,4,5) - but explodes noticably now due to the spacing used. consider making it way less (in fact it has more impact than 00:18:344 (1) - ) decreased
00:22:910 (4,1,2,3) - first time this isnt in a circular motion, weird really lol fixed
00:25:518 (4) - ctrl+H this slider? i dont see a reason for it to break movement thats gonna be broken again at 00:26:170 (1) - anyways yh
00:34:649 (2) - i think ctrl+g would fit better here so that 00:33:997 (1,2) - feel more synchronised like the song gives it yh
00:35:301 (3) - should have finish on it yh

cya


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2017-07-14 20:33 InternalLight: Heyo
2017-07-14 20:33 InternalLight: can u plz tak a short look on a tiny meme 2 diff 40 set? :V
2017-07-14 20:35 InternalLight: i need sp ;v
2017-07-14 20:35 StarrStyx: g
2017-07-14 20:35 InternalLight: Boyz
2017-07-14 20:36 StarrStyx: all star?
2017-07-14 20:36 InternalLight: yea xd
2017-07-14 20:38 StarrStyx: first things first
2017-07-14 20:38 StarrStyx: why tf is the hitsound volume so loud
2017-07-14 20:38 StarrStyx: for a slow music box song
2017-07-14 20:39 InternalLight: ffs is it just me deaf
2017-07-14 20:39 StarrStyx: tbh idk
2017-07-14 20:39 StarrStyx: but u could go lower
2017-07-14 20:39 StarrStyx: by 10-20% ish
2017-07-14 20:39 InternalLight: k
2017-07-14 20:40 InternalLight: did
2017-07-14 20:40 InternalLight: done
2017-07-14 20:40 StarrStyx: 00:19:975 (4,5) - looks too far
2017-07-14 20:40 StarrStyx: 00:24:540 (1,2) - swap ncs
2017-07-14 20:41 StarrStyx: tbh the map isnt "bad" or "good"
2017-07-14 20:41 StarrStyx: but i feel like it would benefit from using ds
2017-07-14 20:41 StarrStyx: cuz it does feel a bit messy
2017-07-14 20:42 StarrStyx: and since its a slow song, using a more ds-oriented style would be more suitable
2017-07-14 20:42 StarrStyx: (ofc these are just my own views on mapping this song so feel free to deny
2017-07-14 20:42 InternalLight: na i agre
2017-07-14 20:43 StarrStyx: (but gidz said that to me for seal.mp4 and it turned out nicer
2017-07-14 20:45 InternalLight: u cna post log
2017-07-14 20:45 InternalLight: cuz whynot Lo
2017-07-14 20:45 StarrStyx: u fixed the other 2 did u
2017-07-14 20:45 StarrStyx: just askin
2017-07-14 20:45 InternalLight: yh
2017-07-14 20:45 StarrStyx: g
2017-07-14 20:45 InternalLight: :gStarr:
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Rizen - Today at 3:44 AM
well
can just use whistles
but i recommend not using that cymbal
source can't be shrek, not really from the movie
InternalLight - Today at 3:45 AM
well eh
it's like a
cover
i remember that covers use original source too
idk
Rizen - Today at 3:46 AM
.-.
inconsistent preview time
check pls
InternalLight - Today at 3:46 AM
o
yea
Rizen - Today at 3:46 AM
inconsistent countdown
InternalLight - Today at 3:46 AM
yea
Rizen - Today at 3:47 AM
tell cookiebite to go thru his timing points
cos he has a lot of duplicates
InternalLight - Today at 3:47 AM
ok i deleted em
Rizen - Today at 3:48 AM
(cookiebite)
00:40:518 (1) - unsnapped
00:40:518 (1) - unsnapped sliderened
00:41:882 (1) - unsnapped spinner
InternalLight - Today at 3:48 AM
fixed
Rizen - Today at 3:49 AM
custom combo colours??
InternalLight - Today at 3:49 AM
are they really needed
:((((((((((((((((
Rizen - Today at 3:49 AM
won;'t make it look old
InternalLight - Today at 3:49 AM
if you can make ones for me :^)
im colorblind
Rizen - Today at 3:50 AM
i'm colourblind too
also my screen is fucked
00:18:018 - i would make this clickable becaue music box twinkle
also because current rhythm is rather static i.e. boring and can really 'fit into any song'
apply same to 2nd kiai part
ur diff
00:08:562 (4,1) - reduce spacing? too much imo
especiailly compared to 00:03:344 (4,1) -
InternalLight - Today at 3:51 AM
seems fin
o
Rizen - Today at 3:52 AM
00:10:518 (1) - why extend? :frowning:
audible twinkle sound on the red tick
InternalLight - Today at 3:53 AM
eeeeeeeeee
im also deaf
then
Rizen - Today at 3:54 AM
00:41:971 (1) - spinner unsnapped
InternalLight - Today at 3:55 AM
it is actually
in 1/16
i need to add timing point there
ff
Rizen - Today at 3:55 AM
ff
00:34:649 (2,3) - any way to rearrange this?
cos bigger than usual spacing
and flow obstructed
InternalLight - Today at 3:56 AM
i'll try
Rizen - Today at 3:56 AM
ok
that's alllll
good luck
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01:14 *InternalLight is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1356755 R3 Music Box - All Star]
01:14 InternalLight: :)
01:14 InternalLight: :weary:
01:14 Akitoshi: o
01:14 Akitoshi: i memorized the lyrics whne iwos edgy hughskool kidz
01:17 InternalLight: Broz
01:19 *Akitoshi is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1356755 R3 Music Box - All Star [King of This Swamp]]
01:19 Akitoshi: sliderslider sound :weary:
01:19 InternalLight: sliderslider
01:19 Akitoshi: slide*
01:19 Akitoshi: fucc
01:19 InternalLight: =)
01:19 Akitoshi: 00:17:040 (3,5,6) - a
01:20 Akitoshi: would u mind to space them equally for structure shits
01:20 InternalLight: b
01:20 InternalLight: but 00:18:018 (6) -
01:21 Akitoshi: 00:20:953 (1,2) - also why this 2 looks close than others tho
01:21 InternalLight: is stronkk
01:21 Akitoshi: i meant u can move 00:18:018 (6) -  leftward a bit
01:22 Akitoshi: 00:31:388 (1,2) - if u did dis then y not on 00:10:518 (1,2) - :b:
01:22 InternalLight: oh i forgot to fix 2nd one
01:22 InternalLight: there's cant be extend
01:22 InternalLight: im deaf fuck
01:23 Akitoshi: 00:34:649 (2) - remove finishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhHHh
01:23 Akitoshi: 00:41:882 (1) - no whistle lole
01:23 InternalLight: yea that's cuz ctrl+G
01:23 InternalLight: o ye
01:23 Akitoshi: ok im done
01:23 Akitoshi: give me kds kappa
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Hi

Combo colors pleeease

King of This Swamp
  • 00:19:649 (3,4,5,6) - I think making those a lil lower on spacing will be good, because they are slightly lower tone than other notes.
  • 00:35:301 (3) - NC not that necessary, but imo will fit and make sense. But then NC will be needed here 00:14:431 (3) - and it will not look that good visually for that pattern.. you decide.
    00:13:127 (1,2) - You seem to make every slider noticeably curved, but these are almost straight. why not making a bit bigger bend?
  • Also i agree on what Akitoshi said about 00:31:388 (1) - I think it will be good to start kiai (lol kiai for a song like this) with a sharp-angled slider.


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  • You have set sampleset S instead of S:C1, like InternalLight did. Either fix this, or:
    Try this > https://den0saur.s-ul.eu/6tMJwP7S < hitsound, it has been standing for default soft-hitfinish in my skin, but i think it fits very nice for this map!

And general suggestion: if you guys agree on this new hitsound i gave, then i think it will be even better to use it through all non-kiai sections. Kinda makes sense?
Other than that, i can't seem to find any other problems. Have some kd stars and good luck
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Combo colors pleeease ffs i forgot about them again

King of This Swamp
  • 00:19:649 (3,4,5,6) - I think making those a lil lower on spacing will be good, because they are slightly lower tone than other notes. alright i lowered spacing abit
  • 00:35:301 (3) - NC not that necessary, but imo will fit and make sense. But then NC will be needed here 00:14:431 (3) - and it will not look that good visually for that pattern.. you decide. not really necessary, yeah; i dont want to be 2 sliders in combo a thing lols
    00:13:127 (1,2) - You seem to make every slider noticeably curved, but these are almost straight. why not making a bit bigger bend? k
  • Also i agree on what Akitoshi said about 00:31:388 (1) - I think it will be good to start kiai (lol kiai for a song like this) with a sharp-angled slider.


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  • You have set sampleset S instead of S:C1, like InternalLight did. Either fix this, or:
    Try this > https://den0saur.s-ul.eu/6tMJwP7S < hitsound, it has been standing for default soft-hitfinish in my skin, but i think it fits very nice for this map! but he had s:c1 too(? lol

And general suggestion: if you guys agree on this new hitsound i gave, then i think it will be even better to use it through all non-kiai sections. Kinda makes sense? thanks, fits in greatly
Other than that, i can't seem to find any other problems. Have some kd stars and good luck thanks <3
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InternalLight wrote:

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  • You have set sampleset S instead of S:C1, like InternalLight did. Either fix this, or:
    Try this > https://den0saur.s-ul.eu/6tMJwP7S < hitsound, it has been standing for default soft-hitfinish in my skin, but i think it fits very nice for this map! but he had s:c1 too(? lol

sorry i forgot to clarify, he had S sampleset on 00:18:344. So, exactly this got my attention and turned me on this idea. Now i see it is fixed
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really short mod cus decent set i guess lol


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hd

did you request this song just so you could map it you dirty rank farmer :^)
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really short mod cus decent set i guess lol


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did you request this song just so you could map it you dirty rank farmer :^)


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Title:All Star
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Artist:R3 Music Box
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Creator:InternalLight
Version:CookieBite's Normal
Source:Shrek
Tags:smash mouth cookiebite
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  • Combo colours are still not set for the guest difficulty. Looks like you forgot to add some.

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    My main issue with the rhythm is that it feels too overgeneralized and ignores certain instrument peaks. For instance, 00:04:323 - here, the beat is unclickable, yet a much weaker beat on 00:03:997 - has a clickable object. Something like this would work a lot better. Same applies to 00:09:214 (3,4) - and something similar happens to 00:17:040 (3,4) - and later in the song.

    The best way to explain that is to focus more on the instrument itself and the fact that it sort of varies throughout the song, so, using the same variationless rhythm does not fit the music at all. The song is so much different from a consistent 1/2 rhythm.

Hard
    I'd probably argue with the rhythm choice you have, and let me explain why. As there is a single instrument it would make a lot more sense to get the most out of it. And that's exactly what you do with patterns like 00:01:062 (1,2,3), however, there is a number of beats like 00:00:410 - which are unstressed yet sound pretty strong. As a matter of fact, I percieve the song as something that utilizes a number of 1/2 doubles. So, for the first two patterns, I would probably pick a rhythm like this.

    There are more rhythm issues of the same kind, 00:08:888 (1,2,3,4) - for instance in this combo Ctrl+G'ing 00:08:888 (1,3,4) - would make more sense as 00:09:214 - is a really weak beat.

    Additionally, some patterns like 00:13:779 (2,3) - lack jumps. Compare it with 00:16:388 (2,3) - which has a nice dynamic and flows well. Just be sure that the jumps are consistent and placed on the beats which are actually strong.

I can't say that I agree with the rhythm you use for both difficulties as it feels sort of oversimplified and bland. Given that it is a 40 seconds long song it really feels like there is a lot of room for improvement.

Edit: there's also an unsnapped note in Hard, somewhere in the end of the song. AiMod detects that.
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  • Combo colours are still not set for the guest difficulty. Looks like you forgot to add some. really lol

Hard
    I'd probably argue with the rhythm choice you have, and let me explain why. As there is a single instrument it would make a lot more sense to get the most out of it. And that's exactly what you do with patterns like 00:01:062 (1,2,3), however, there is a number of beats like 00:00:410 - which are unstressed yet sound pretty strong. As a matter of fact, I percieve the song as something that utilizes a number of 1/2 doubles. So, for the first two patterns, I would probably pick a rhythm like this.

    There are more rhythm issues of the same kind, 00:08:888 (1,2,3,4) - for instance in this combo Ctrl+G'ing 00:08:888 (1,3,4) - would make more sense as 00:09:214 - is a really weak beat.

    Additionally, some patterns like 00:13:779 (2,3) - lack jumps. Compare it with 00:16:388 (2,3) - which has a nice dynamic and flows well. Just be sure that the jumps are consistent and placed on the beats which are actually strong.

I can't say that I agree with the rhythm you use for both difficulties as it feels sort of oversimplified and bland. Given that it is a 40 seconds long song it really feels like there is a lot of room for improvement.

rearranged 50% of map, i hope all those issues are fixed

Edit: there's also an unsnapped note in Hard, somewhere in the end of the song. AiMod detects that. fixed


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