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Garalulu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018년 2월 5일 월요일 at 오후 10:34:07

Artist: Kucchi-
Title: Remilia ~Kyuuketsuki no Tame no Kyousoukyoku
Source: BMS
Tags: Wonki jakads Reba - R e b a - Lass BOF2009 THE BMS OF FIGHTERS 2009 - revolutionary battles - おとなのらくがきちょう PIANO CONCERTO ZUN Touhou Project 東方紅魔郷 ~ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil Virkato Wakhmaninov
BPM: 146
Filesize: 5977kb
Play Time: 02:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another - 7Key (4.69 stars, 1650 notes)
  2. Beginner - 7Key (1.48 stars, 468 notes)
  3. Bloodthirsty Vampirekads' White Another - 7Key (5.09 stars, 1872 notes)
  4. Concerto Cruento - 7Key (7.08 stars, 2432 notes)
  5. Normal - 7Key (2.23 stars, 769 notes)
  6. Rebanada's Black Another - 7Key (5.81 stars, 2001 notes)
  7. Wonki's Hyper - 7Key (3.49 stars, 1192 notes)
Download: Kucchi- - Remilia ~Kyuuketsuki no Tame no Kyousoukyoku
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We have a bad case of chuunibyou
MrDorian
mod owo/
Bloody Concerto
a bit subjective, but maybe diff name to Concerto Cruento. It means exactly the same, but it's Italian.

mod is mostly pitch based because of piano

00:13:047 (13047|4,13047|6) - this should be like 00:10:765 (10765|4,10797|6) -, you can hear a little shift

00:23:819 (23819|2,23819|3,23900|5,23900|4,23981|1,23981|2,24062|4,24062|3,24143|1,24143|0,24224|2,24224|3,24305|6,24305|0,24305|4,24386|2,24386|5,24467|3,24467|4,24548|2,24548|1,24629|5,24629|4,24711|2,24711|3,24792|5,24792|6,24873|3,24873|4,24954|2,24954|6,24954|0) - you could ctrl+h this, because 00:23:738 (23738|4,23738|1,23819|2,23819|3,23900|4,23900|5,23981|2,23981|1,24062|3,24062|4,24143|1,24143|0,24224|2,24224|3) - here pitch is going up and in second part of it pitch is going down

00:28:521 (28521|2,28521|4,28521|1,28521|3,28684|3,28684|4,28684|5,28684|2) - ctrl+j for pitch perhaps? owo

00:41:259 (41259|5,41259|2,41598|1,41937|3,41937|6,42276|2,42615|1,42615|4) - maybe something like this for pitch?

01:02:626 (62626|6) - maybe you could do this section like this for pitch?

01:21:239 (81239|6,81239|0,81322|5,81322|1) - maybe make these 35 and 26, it would give a nicer effect than just normal 17 26 35

02:22:425 (142425|6,142425|2,142425|0,142425|4) - maybe make these 12 67, different pitch from 02:22:060 (142060|2,142060|6,142060|0,142060|4) -
Topic Starter
Garalulu

MrDorian wrote:

mod owo/
Bloody Concerto
a bit subjective, but maybe diff name to Concerto Cruento. It means exactly the same, but it's Italian. Oh thx! I'm searching it xD

mod is mostly pitch based because of piano

00:13:047 (13047|4,13047|6) - this should be like 00:10:765 (10765|4,10797|6) -, you can hear a little shift Good point

00:23:819 (23819|2,23819|3,23900|5,23900|4,23981|1,23981|2,24062|4,24062|3,24143|1,24143|0,24224|2,24224|3,24305|6,24305|0,24305|4,24386|2,24386|5,24467|3,24467|4,24548|2,24548|1,24629|5,24629|4,24711|2,24711|3,24792|5,24792|6,24873|3,24873|4,24954|2,24954|6,24954|0) - you could ctrl+h this, because 00:23:738 (23738|4,23738|1,23819|2,23819|3,23900|4,23900|5,23981|2,23981|1,24062|3,24062|4,24143|1,24143|0,24224|2,24224|3) - here pitch is going up and in second part of it pitch is going down I think it already have good harmony with melody progress

00:28:521 (28521|2,28521|4,28521|1,28521|3,28684|3,28684|4,28684|5,28684|2) - ctrl+j for pitch perhaps? owo It's mirror pattern of 00:25:927 (25927|3,25927|5,25927|4,25927|2,26089|4,26089|3,26089|2,26089|1)

00:41:259 (41259|5,41259|2,41598|1,41937|3,41937|6,42276|2,42615|1,42615|4) - maybe something like this for pitch? Good suggestion!

01:02:626 (62626|6) - maybe you could do this section like this for pitch? I wanna keep this

01:21:239 (81239|6,81239|0,81322|5,81322|1) - maybe make these 35 and 26, it would give a nicer effect than just normal 17 26 35 Nicee

02:22:425 (142425|6,142425|2,142425|0,142425|4) - maybe make these 12 67, different pitch from 02:22:060 (142060|2,142060|6,142060|0,142060|4) - I put them on same col intentionally cuz of SV
Thx for modding and enjoy do kudosu farm!
Greatvictory
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18:40 *Garalulu is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1350666 Kucchi- - Remilia ~Kyouketsuki no Tame no Kyousoukyoku]
18:40 greatvictory: 이건
18:41 greatvictory: 내가 그냥 못잡겠다
18:41 Garalulu: D:
18:41 greatvictory: 함 볼게 한번
18:41 greatvictory: 솔직히 루루 잘만들어서
18:41 greatvictory: 초보모더는 잘 못잡는다
18:43 greatvictory: 01:03:626 (63626|3) -
18:43 greatvictory: 의도야?
18:43 greatvictory: 계단음은 2번정도밖에 안들리는뎅
18:43 greatvictory: 빠라람 빰 하는 느낌이랄까
18:43 Garalulu: 01:02:960 (62960|6,62960|5,62960|0) - 이와 같이
18:44 Garalulu: 1/1에 3개씩 넣었으
18:44 Garalulu: 없다 해도
18:44 Garalulu: 3개씩 맞추는게 깔금
18:44 greatvictory: dk
18:44 greatvictory: 3개씩 넣은거 말고
18:44 greatvictory: 1/2박 사이에 1/4박
18:45 greatvictory: 01:03:682 (63682|2,63793|3,63904|4) -
18:45 greatvictory: 이거에서 아래는 잘 들리는데
18:45 greatvictory: 중간과 위는 솔직히 잘 모르겠다
18:45 Garalulu: 그럴땐
18:45 Garalulu: 1배속으로 들어봐서
18:45 Garalulu: 이어지는거같으면
18:45 Garalulu: 패스
18:46 greatvictory: 그 뒤쪽이면
18:46 greatvictory: 딜레이 파트인데
18:46 greatvictory: 솔직히 딜레이는 잘 못잡겠음
18:47 Garalulu: 칠때
18:47 Garalulu: 불편한점같은거라도
18:47 Garalulu: 말해주면 굳
18:47 Garalulu: 나는 이걸 소화 못하기 때문에
18:47 Garalulu: 실제 칠때 느낌을 모르거덩
18:49 greatvictory: 00:43:971 (43971|0) -
18:49 greatvictory: 여기서부터 시작되는
18:49 greatvictory: 롱놋들 있ㅎ잖아
18:49 greatvictory: 너무 길어서
18:49 greatvictory: 조금 모르겠다
18:50 greatvictory: 조금 뗄때 애매하게 뗀달까
18:50 greatvictory: 박자를 잘 모르겠어
18:51 Garalulu: 음
18:51 Garalulu: 뭔가 현악기의 긴 느낌을 표현하고 싶었는데
18:51 Garalulu: 저게 또 딱딱 맞으면 너무 식상해 보여서
18:51 Garalulu: 그랬즘
18:51 Garalulu: 일단 보류
18:51 greatvictory: 00:47:022 (47022|6,47022|3,47135|4,47248|6,47361|5,47361|4) -
18:51 greatvictory: 특히 이런 패턴 손 엄청꼬이는데
18:52 greatvictory: 패턴적인 부분은 저기 빼곤 괜찮은듯
18:52 Garalulu: 나도 치니깐
18:52 Garalulu: 쉬울거야
18:52 greatvictory: 미안
18:52 greatvictory: 못쳐서
18:52 greatvictory: 01:59:253 (119253|5) -
18:53 greatvictory: 01:59:459 (119459|2) -
18:53 greatvictory: 여기네
18:53 greatvictory: 노트 2개 놔야하지 않나
18:53 Garalulu: 저 파트는
18:53 Garalulu: 아래 조용한 멜로디와
18:53 Garalulu: 주 멜로디 노트를 하나씩 둔거야
18:54 greatvictory: 그럼 ㅇㅋ
18:54 greatvictory: 못해서 미안
18:54 Garalulu: why
18:57 greatvictory: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8603684
18:57 greatvictory: 이런느낌 괜찮지 않나
18:57 greatvictory: 02:17:115 (137115|2) -
18:57 greatvictory: 여긴데
18:57 greatvictory: 안쪽으로 모이는 느낌이긴 한데
18:57 greatvictory: 치는데 느낌이 이상하달까
18:58 greatvictory: 02:38:724 (158724|5) -
18:58 Garalulu: dma
18:58 greatvictory: 여기 노트 소리 하나 비는데
18:59 greatvictory: 위쪽 2/3
18:59 greatvictory: 1/3 로 2칸위
18:59 Garalulu: 02:39:004 -
18:59 Garalulu: 여기?
19:00 greatvictory: ㅇㅇ 거기
19:00 greatvictory: 음 하나 있지 않나 해서
19:00 Garalulu: 흠
19:00 Garalulu: 굉장히 애매하네
19:00 Garalulu: 02:40:126 (160126|5) - 여기와 비해선
19:00 Garalulu: 소리가 거의 들리지 않는다시피 하거든
19:00 Garalulu: 그래서 그냥 바이올린 소리가 이어지는 게 아닐까 생각해서
19:00 Garalulu: 안넣었어
19:02 greatvictory: 아냐 은근히 큰거같은데?
19:02 greatvictory: 잠만
19:03 greatvictory: 흠
19:04 greatvictory: 난 여기까진가 보다
19:04 greatvictory: 이거말고 찾지를 못하겠음
19:04 greatvictory: 루루가 잘만드는것도 있고
19:05 Garalulu: thx
19:06 Garalulu: 02:17:115 - 여기에 대해선 좀더 생각해볼게
19:06 Garalulu: 굳굳
19:06 greatvictory: 고마워
19:06 greatvictory: 쿠도수 필요한곳 있어?
19:06 Garalulu: 없즘
19:06 Garalulu: 포스트나 올려서
19:06 greatvictory: 저런
19:06 Garalulu: 쿠도수나 먹어라
Topic Starter
Garalulu

greatvictory wrote:

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모딩모딩
18:40 *Garalulu is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1350666 Kucchi- - Remilia ~Kyouketsuki no Tame no Kyousoukyoku]
18:40 greatvictory: 이건
18:41 greatvictory: 내가 그냥 못잡겠다
18:41 Garalulu: D:
18:41 greatvictory: 함 볼게 한번
18:41 greatvictory: 솔직히 루루 잘만들어서
18:41 greatvictory: 초보모더는 잘 못잡는다
18:43 greatvictory: 01:03:626 (63626|3) -
18:43 greatvictory: 의도야?
18:43 greatvictory: 계단음은 2번정도밖에 안들리는뎅
18:43 greatvictory: 빠라람 빰 하는 느낌이랄까
18:43 Garalulu: 01:02:960 (62960|6,62960|5,62960|0) - 이와 같이
18:44 Garalulu: 1/1에 3개씩 넣었으
18:44 Garalulu: 없다 해도
18:44 Garalulu: 3개씩 맞추는게 깔금
18:44 greatvictory: dk
18:44 greatvictory: 3개씩 넣은거 말고
18:44 greatvictory: 1/2박 사이에 1/4박
18:45 greatvictory: 01:03:682 (63682|2,63793|3,63904|4) -
18:45 greatvictory: 이거에서 아래는 잘 들리는데
18:45 greatvictory: 중간과 위는 솔직히 잘 모르겠다
18:45 Garalulu: 그럴땐
18:45 Garalulu: 1배속으로 들어봐서
18:45 Garalulu: 이어지는거같으면
18:45 Garalulu: 패스
18:46 greatvictory: 그 뒤쪽이면
18:46 greatvictory: 딜레이 파트인데
18:46 greatvictory: 솔직히 딜레이는 잘 못잡겠음
18:47 Garalulu: 칠때
18:47 Garalulu: 불편한점같은거라도
18:47 Garalulu: 말해주면 굳
18:47 Garalulu: 나는 이걸 소화 못하기 때문에
18:47 Garalulu: 실제 칠때 느낌을 모르거덩
18:49 greatvictory: 00:43:971 (43971|0) -
18:49 greatvictory: 여기서부터 시작되는
18:49 greatvictory: 롱놋들 있ㅎ잖아
18:49 greatvictory: 너무 길어서
18:49 greatvictory: 조금 모르겠다
18:50 greatvictory: 조금 뗄때 애매하게 뗀달까
18:50 greatvictory: 박자를 잘 모르겠어
18:51 Garalulu: 음
18:51 Garalulu: 뭔가 현악기의 긴 느낌을 표현하고 싶었는데
18:51 Garalulu: 저게 또 딱딱 맞으면 너무 식상해 보여서
18:51 Garalulu: 그랬즘
18:51 Garalulu: 일단 보류
18:51 greatvictory: 00:47:022 (47022|6,47022|3,47135|4,47248|6,47361|5,47361|4) -
18:51 greatvictory: 특히 이런 패턴 손 엄청꼬이는데
18:52 greatvictory: 패턴적인 부분은 저기 빼곤 괜찮은듯
18:52 Garalulu: 나도 치니깐
18:52 Garalulu: 쉬울거야
18:52 greatvictory: 미안
18:52 greatvictory: 못쳐서
18:52 greatvictory: 01:59:253 (119253|5) -
18:53 greatvictory: 01:59:459 (119459|2) -
18:53 greatvictory: 여기네
18:53 greatvictory: 노트 2개 놔야하지 않나
18:53 Garalulu: 저 파트는
18:53 Garalulu: 아래 조용한 멜로디와
18:53 Garalulu: 주 멜로디 노트를 하나씩 둔거야
18:54 greatvictory: 그럼 ㅇㅋ
18:54 greatvictory: 못해서 미안
18:54 Garalulu: why
18:57 greatvictory: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8603684
18:57 greatvictory: 이런느낌 괜찮지 않나
18:57 greatvictory: 02:17:115 (137115|2) -
18:57 greatvictory: 여긴데
18:57 greatvictory: 안쪽으로 모이는 느낌이긴 한데
18:57 greatvictory: 치는데 느낌이 이상하달까
18:58 greatvictory: 02:38:724 (158724|5) -
18:58 Garalulu: dma
18:58 greatvictory: 여기 노트 소리 하나 비는데
18:59 greatvictory: 위쪽 2/3
18:59 greatvictory: 1/3 로 2칸위
18:59 Garalulu: 02:39:004 -
18:59 Garalulu: 여기?
19:00 greatvictory: ㅇㅇ 거기
19:00 greatvictory: 음 하나 있지 않나 해서
19:00 Garalulu: 흠
19:00 Garalulu: 굉장히 애매하네
19:00 Garalulu: 02:40:126 (160126|5) - 여기와 비해선
19:00 Garalulu: 소리가 거의 들리지 않는다시피 하거든
19:00 Garalulu: 그래서 그냥 바이올린 소리가 이어지는 게 아닐까 생각해서
19:00 Garalulu: 안넣었어
19:02 greatvictory: 아냐 은근히 큰거같은데?
19:02 greatvictory: 잠만
19:03 greatvictory: 흠
19:04 greatvictory: 난 여기까진가 보다
19:04 greatvictory: 이거말고 찾지를 못하겠음
19:04 greatvictory: 루루가 잘만드는것도 있고
19:05 Garalulu: thx
19:06 Garalulu: 02:17:115 - 여기에 대해선 좀더 생각해볼게
19:06 Garalulu: 굳굳
19:06 greatvictory: 고마워
19:06 greatvictory: 쿠도수 필요한곳 있어?
19:06 Garalulu: 없즘
19:06 Garalulu: 포스트나 올려서
19:06 greatvictory: 저런
19:06 Garalulu: 쿠도수나 먹어라
Thx 머승이 녀석
qodtjr
모딩왔오 호호

Concerto Cruento
00:19:797 - 이부분에 좀더 임팩트가있는데 2col에 추가해보시는건어떨지

00:26:900 - 여기에 밑부분을보면 피아노소리 한개있는거로 3노트찍으신거같은데 이건2노트고
00:26:981 - 여긴 3노트네요 바뀐건가요?

00:31:116 (31116|2,31116|1,31197|4,31197|3,31278|1,31278|0,31359|2,31359|3) - 들어보면 음이 올라갔다가 내려가는데 그걸 표현해서 오른쪽->왼쪽으로 매핑해보시면 위에 딜레이도 좀더편하게칠수있을거같네요

00:58:627 - 이부분부터있는 잭을 바깥쪽에다 두지말고 안쪽으로해서 둬보는게 좀더 치기쉬울거같네요 예를들면
00:58:627 (58627|4,58627|5,58627|6,58738|6,58738|5,58849|6,58849|5) - 이거는 567 | 67 | 67 으로되어있는데 567 | 56 | 56 처럼

01:14:175 (74175|0,74351|0,74528|0) - 여기매핑되어있는 노트의음이 뭔가 임팩트가 부족하다는생각이드네요 2노트씩해보는게어떨까요

01:24:454 - 여기노트 한개 빼먹으신거같네요

02:19:093 - 여기한곳만음이 약간변해서 4col에있는 노트를 3col으로 옮겨주는게어떨까요

02:21:950 - ^
Topic Starter
Garalulu

qodtjr wrote:

모딩왔오 호호

Concerto Cruento
00:19:797 - 이부분에 좀더 임팩트가있는데 2col에 추가해보시는건어떨지 good

00:26:900 - 여기에 밑부분을보면 피아노소리 한개있는거로 3노트찍으신거같은데 이건2노트고
00:26:981 - 여긴 3노트네요 바뀐건가요? 띠요옹? 수정 완료

00:31:116 (31116|2,31116|1,31197|4,31197|3,31278|1,31278|0,31359|2,31359|3) - 들어보면 음이 올라갔다가 내려가는데 그걸 표현해서 오른쪽->왼쪽으로 매핑해보시면 위에 딜레이도 좀더편하게칠수있을거같네요 rearranged

00:58:627 - 이부분부터있는 잭을 바깥쪽에다 두지말고 안쪽으로해서 둬보는게 좀더 치기쉬울거같네요 예를들면
00:58:627 (58627|4,58627|5,58627|6,58738|6,58738|5,58849|6,58849|5) - 이거는 567 | 67 | 67 으로되어있는데 567 | 56 | 56 처럼
바깥이 좋다.


01:14:175 (74175|0,74351|0,74528|0) - 여기매핑되어있는 노트의음이 뭔가 임팩트가 부족하다는생각이드네요 2노트씩해보는게어떨까요 이곳은 그 다음 덮칠 노트들을 대기하는 곳으로, 같은 col에 노트를 배치해 낮은 음이 쿵쿵쿵 하는 소리를 표현했소.

01:24:454 - 여기노트 한개 빼먹으신거같네요 good

02:19:093 - 여기한곳만음이 약간변해서 4col에있는 노트를 3col으로 옮겨주는게어떨까요 rearranged

02:21:950 - ^ ^
아주 고맙다.
Niks
halo
in this mode, meant to pay the value of my sin...
sorry dont play starcraft with you lulu...

플레이성 위주로 체크하러 왔습니다~

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    [Epochal Adventure]
  2. 00:23:657 - 빵빵 터질곳이 한두곳이 아닌데 처음부터 너무 빡세게 나오는게 치기가 좀 부담되네요 노트들을 하나씩 빼는방법은 어떨까요?
  3. 00:31:602 (31602|5) - 제거하는편이 치기 수월해집니다
  4. 00:30:711 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8858406 이런패턴은 어떤가요 딱히 패턴에 규칙성이라던가 의도가 안느껴져서 저가 느낌가는대로 찍어봤습니다
    아니면 00:30:792 - 00:30:954 - 00:31:116 - 00:31:278 - 이부분들에 노트를 하나씩 추가해서 새로운 패턴을 만드는것도 나쁘지 않은방법...
  5. 01:00:960 (60960|3) - 잔인합니다.. 2번으로 이동
  6. 01:01:627 (61627|6,61627|3,61627|5) - 위치 변경해주세요
    이전 패턴들은 2개가 똑같은라인 1개가 다른라인으로 규칙성있게 나오는게 어울리네요
  7. 01:10:626 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8858448 저에게는 이런패턴이 확 와닿네요 호호
  8. 01:24:454 (84454|3) - 2번라인이 좋을듯합니다\
  9. 02:13:974 - ~ 02:18:598 - 2번라인에 너무 몰려있습니다
  10. 02:28:350 - 10배속 실화? 제거부탁합니다 호호
Topic Starter
Garalulu

Niks wrote:

halo
in this mode, meant to pay the value of my sin...
sorry dont play starcraft with you lulu...

플레이성 위주로 체크하러 왔습니다~

  1. Offset :: 515 510도 충분히 맞다고 생각합니다.

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    [Epochal Adventure]
  2. 00:23:657 - 빵빵 터질곳이 한두곳이 아닌데 처음부터 너무 빡세게 나오는게 치기가 좀 부담되네요 노트들을 하나씩 빼는방법은 어떨까요? 제 생각에는 이 정도 밀도면 부담되지 않게 칠 수 있다고 느낍니다.
  3. 00:31:602 (31602|5) - 제거하는편이 치기 수월해집니다 이 부분은 생각해 볼 필요가 있어보이네요.
  4. 00:30:711 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8858406 이런패턴은 어떤가요 딱히 패턴에 규칙성이라던가 의도가 안느껴져서 저가 느낌가는대로 찍어봤습니다
    아니면 00:30:792 - 00:30:954 - 00:31:116 - 00:31:278 - 이부분들에 노트를 하나씩 추가해서 새로운 패턴을 만드는것도 나쁘지 않은방법... 적용
  5. 01:00:960 (60960|3) - 잔인합니다.. 2번으로 이동 적용
  6. 01:01:627 (61627|6,61627|3,61627|5) - 위치 변경해주세요
    이전 패턴들은 2개가 똑같은라인 1개가 다른라인으로 규칙성있게 나오는게 어울리네요 rearranged
  7. 01:10:626 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8858448 저에게는 이런패턴이 확 와닿네요 호호 오 좋네용
  8. 01:24:454 (84454|3) - 2번라인이 좋을듯합니다\ 굳굳
  9. 02:13:974 - ~ 02:18:598 - 2번라인에 너무 몰려있습니다 Rearranged.
  10. 02:28:350 - 10배속 실화? 제거부탁합니다 호호 bpm 고려 변속 수정 완료.
굳굳 모딩일세
MapleSyrup-
Nothing to do so I'll mod this map rip

Beginner
00:56:648 (56648|3) - 00:58:627 - The 7th column is practically empty, why not rearrange some of the patterns? example(https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8938488)
01:18:602 (78602|2) - Move to the 1st column so it follows 01:16:953 (76953|6,77283|5,77943|1) -
01:24:536 (84536|2,85195|4,85855|3) - move to the 1st, 7th, and 5th column respectively(this is a nitpick you can ignore)
01:26:874 - add a note here to make it less awkward to release the LN
01:28:801 (88801|6) - move to the 7th column so it follows the rhythm like 01:27:844 (87844|4,88163|0) -
01:34:865 (94865|5) - make this an LN just like what you did in 01:33:588 (93588|0) -

Normal
Pattern Suggestion: Change this 00:32:089 (32089|2,32089|6,32413|4,32413|0,32738|6,32738|1,32900|2,33062|1,33062|5,33224|4,33386|5,33386|0,33386|3) - to http://puu.sh/xjU7s/defcd3d20d.png
00:34:035 (34035|6,34035|0) - Move to 3rd and 5th column respectively then move 00:34:359 (34359|5,34359|1) - to the 1st and 7th column
01:26:874 - you forgot to add a note here?
01:47:825 (107825|6,107825|0,107825|3) - probably better if the notes in 1 and 7 are LNs instead of the note in 4

Concerto smth
I don't like modding high sr stuff but in 02:28:350 - to the end, you should probably add the LNs you made in in Beginner and Normal cause the violins(or whatever that sound is) is more ear-catching than the piano sounds
Topic Starter
Garalulu

MapleSyrup- wrote:

Nothing to do so I'll mod this map rip

Beginner
00:56:648 (56648|3) - 00:58:627 - The 7th column is practically empty, why not rearrange some of the patterns? example(https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8938488) :o rearranged
01:18:602 (78602|2) - Move to the 1st column so it follows 01:16:953 (76953|6,77283|5,77943|1) - idk what you mean
01:24:536 (84536|2,85195|4,85855|3) - move to the 1st, 7th, and 5th column respectively(this is a nitpick you can ignore) it's intention
01:26:874 - add a note here to make it less awkward to release the LN I wanna keep this flow
01:28:801 (88801|6) - move to the 7th column so it follows the rhythm like 01:27:844 (87844|4,88163|0) -
From a macro perspective, mirror thing

01:34:865 (94865|5) - make this an LN just like what you did in 01:33:588 (93588|0) - oki

Normal
Pattern Suggestion: Change this 00:32:089 (32089|2,32089|6,32413|4,32413|0,32738|6,32738|1,32900|2,33062|1,33062|5,33224|4,33386|5,33386|0,33386|3) - to http://puu.sh/xjU7s/defcd3d20d.png Im satisfied with current pattern
00:34:035 (34035|6,34035|0) - Move to 3rd and 5th column respectively then move 00:34:359 (34359|5,34359|1) - to the 1st and 7th column o nice
01:26:874 - you forgot to add a note here? I resize my LN to 01:26:887. don want to add more something here
01:47:825 (107825|6,107825|0,107825|3) - probably better if the notes in 1 and 7 are LNs instead of the note in 4 nice suggestion

Concerto smth
I don't like modding high sr stuff but in 02:28:350 - to the end, you should probably add the LNs you made in in Beginner and Normal cause the violins(or whatever that sound is) is more ear-catching than the piano sounds cause of my piano and teleport sv fettish, they're sacrificed :p
thx for modding!
Lude
Lude's M4M
1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5 / 6 / 7


[Concerto Cruento]
  1. 00:26:251 - 6번에 노트 추가 (00:28:846 - )
  2. 00:26:738 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8981188 요점은 여기에 00:26:819 - 세개를 두는것
  3. 00:28:197 (28197|2) - 2번으로, 00:28:278 - 3번에 추가
  4. 01:00:404 - 01:00:738 - 2개와 3개의 차이가 명확하게 나타날만 한 이유가 있나요? 01:08:071 - 이곳이라면 좀 더 강한 소리니까 이해가 갑니다
  5. 01:05:071 - 01:05:182 - 이 두곳에 4번 노트 추가로 베이스를 좀 더 강력하게 표현 할수 있을것 같네요
  6. 01:32:152 - 이곳은 딱히 트리플 코드여야 할 이유가 없는것 같네요
  7. 01:39:040 - 노트 하나 삭제
[Reba's Black Another]
  1. 00:31:765 - 1번에 노트추가
  2. 00:34:359 - 00:33:711 - 이런 더블들과 차이를 두는게 좋을것같아요. 노트 추가
  3. 00:53:352 (53352|2,53846|1) - 이거 두개 00:54:670 - 여기까지 늘려보는건?
  4. 01:17:860 - 3번이나 6번에 추가. 피아노가 명확합니다. 01:19:014 - 이걸 표현하신것과 같은 논리
  5. 01:20:497 - 01:20:333 - 이 두곳도 마찬가지
  6. 01:35:384 (95384|3,95503|3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8981268
  7. 02:20:411 (140411|6) - 5번으로
[jakads' White Another]
  1. 01:28:123 (88123|3,88243|3,88442|3,88562|3) - Too hard
  2. 01:32:950 (92950|0,93110|0,93429|0,94227|6,94386|6) - 굳이 나눠야할 이유가 보이질 않네요
  3. 02:12:760 - 겹계단이 아닌 적어도 하나정도는 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8981327 이렇게 놔도 될거같네요.
딱히 잡을게 없네요 호호
Reba

Lude wrote:

Lude's M4M
1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5 / 6 / 7


[Reba's Black Another]
  1. 00:31:765 - 1번에 노트추가 A Chicken no le gusta niñas de primaria
  2. 00:34:359 - 00:33:711 - 이런 더블들과 차이를 두는게 좋을것같아요. 노트 추가 A Chicken le gusta niñas de primaria
  3. 00:53:352 (53352|2,53846|1) - 이거 두개 00:54:670 - 여기까지 늘려보는건? A Chicken no le gusta niñas de primaria
  4. 01:17:860 - 3번이나 6번에 추가. 피아노가 명확합니다. 01:19:014 - 이걸 표현하신것과 같은 논리 A Chicken le gusta niñas de primaria
  5. 01:20:497 - 01:20:333 - 이 두곳도 마찬가지 A Chicken le gusta niñas de primaria
  6. 01:35:384 (95384|3,95503|3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8981268 A Chicken no le gusta niñas de primaria
  7. 02:20:411 (140411|6) - 5번으로 A Chicken no le gusta niñas de primaria
Gracias
Aruel

Reba wrote:

Lude wrote:

Lude's M4M
1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5 / 6 / 7


[Reba's Black Another]
  1. 00:31:765 - 1번에 노트추가 A Chicken no le gusta niñas de primaria
  2. 00:34:359 - 00:33:711 - 이런 더블들과 차이를 두는게 좋을것같아요. 노트 추가 A Chicken le gusta niñas de primaria
  3. 00:53:352 (53352|2,53846|1) - 이거 두개 00:54:670 - 여기까지 늘려보는건? A Chicken no le gusta niñas de primaria
  4. 01:17:860 - 3번이나 6번에 추가. 피아노가 명확합니다. 01:19:014 - 이걸 표현하신것과 같은 논리 A Chicken le gusta niñas de primaria
  5. 01:20:497 - 01:20:333 - 이 두곳도 마찬가지 A Chicken le gusta niñas de primaria
  6. 01:35:384 (95384|3,95503|3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8981268 A Chicken no le gusta niñas de primaria
  7. 02:20:411 (140411|6) - 5번으로 A Chicken no le gusta niñas de primaria
Gracias
돌았어?
Lude
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Reba

Fresh Chicken wrote:

돌았어?
:V







pendejo
Topic Starter
Garalulu

Lude wrote:

Lude's M4M
1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5 / 6 / 7


[Concerto Cruento]
  1. 00:26:251 - 6번에 노트 추가 (00:28:846 - ) 28:846부터는 뒤 트럼펫? 소리가 이전과는 달리 확실히 납니다. 그래서 롱놋 하나를 곁들인 거라 26:251과는 다른 구조라고 볼 수 있겠네요.
  2. 00:26:738 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8981188 요점은 여기에 00:26:819 - 세개를 두는것 외죠
  3. 00:28:197 (28197|2) - 2번으로, 00:28:278 - 3번에 추가 대신 00:28:278 - 을 더블로 표현했습니다.
  4. 01:00:404 - 01:00:738 - 2개와 3개의 차이가 명확하게 나타날만 한 이유가 있나요? 01:08:071 - 이곳이라면 좀 더 강한 소리니까 이해가 갑니다 00:59:960 - 01:01:293 - 이 파트에서 소리를 들어보면 00:59:960 - 01:00:293 - 01:00:627 - 01:00:738 - 01:00:849 - 01:00:960 - 01:01:071 - 01:01:182 - 이 부분에서 피아노 음이 딱 튀는 걸 느낄 수 있어요. 저는 그 느낌을 표현하고 싶었습니다.
  5. 01:05:071 - 01:05:182 - 이 두곳에 4번 노트 추가로 베이스를 좀 더 강력하게 표현 할수 있을것 같네요 오 좋은 느낌이네요
  6. 01:32:152 - 이곳은 딱히 트리플 코드여야 할 이유가 없는것 같네요 수정 완료
  7. 01:39:040 - 노트 하나 삭제 외죠
Thx for modding!
Deep Sea
Hello Garalulu, sorry for delay
m4m


Concerto Cruento
1 2 3 4 5 6 7

00:00:510 - you can add here 1 or 2 note, there is a strong sound
00:07:297 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013931 it will be more convenient
00:09:297 - ^
00:11:297 - ^
00:05:797 - 00:13:797 - you can diversify this part, you do not have to repeat the same pattern for a long time
00:23:900 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013948 listen, the piano changes the sound
00:24:548 - ^ same here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013953
00:26:575 (26575|3) - move to 3
00:28:197 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013960
00:30:873 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013963 here the sound repeats
00:51:703 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013970
00:55:989 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013977
01:12:293 (72293|5,72293|1) - move to 1 and 7
01:12:626 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013996
01:22:393 (82393|3) - move to 6
01:23:712 (83712|3) - move to 3
01:36:700 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9014009
01:41:797 (101797|3) - move to 5
02:12:066 - add note to 6m loud sound
02:12:327 - ^ same

interesting diff for me, good luck
Topic Starter
Garalulu

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hello Garalulu, sorry for delay
m4m


Concerto Cruento
1 2 3 4 5 6 7

00:00:510 - you can add here 1 or 2 note, there is a strong sound enough with two LNs tho
00:07:297 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013931 it will be more convenient put there intentionally to bring out piano itself
00:09:297 - ^ ^
00:11:297 - ^ ^
00:05:797 - 00:13:797 - you can diversify this part, you do not have to repeat the same pattern for a long time wanna repeat it cuz it's same structure! and also same reason with above
00:23:900 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013948 listen, the piano changes the sound nice pattern
00:24:548 - ^ same here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013953 yap yap
00:26:575 (26575|3) - move to 3 keep this for intention
00:28:197 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013960 keep this
00:30:873 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013963 here the sound repeats I wanna avoid 3434 trill pattern
00:51:703 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013970 wanna keep this tho
00:55:989 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013977 good suggestion!
01:12:293 (72293|5,72293|1) - move to 1 and 7 but it's same with 01:11:960 -
01:12:626 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9013996 I love my concept
01:22:393 (82393|3) - move to 6 hit two times with same col for piano sound!
01:23:712 (83712|3) - move to 3 same reason with above
01:36:700 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9014009 six times with same col hell yeah
01:41:797 (101797|3) - move to 5 oki
02:12:066 - add note to 6m loud sound yeah
02:12:327 - ^ same same

interesting diff for me, good luck
thx for modding!!
Meiju
Yo

[Another]
00:25:602 (25602|6,25684|4,28197|0,28278|2) - would be nice if you'll replace these LNs to simple notes
00:54:011 (54011|1) - this LN should be started 00:53:846 - here
00:58:960 - why double? i don't hear two sounds like 00:58:626 - 00:59:293
01:12:626 - 01:12:960 - replace to doubles i guess, there is not cymbal like 02:18:763 - 02:19:422 - 02:19:752 - and etc.
01:14:528 (74528|0) - seems like here is not the same sound as 01:14:175 (74175|0,74351|0) - here (or am i wrong?). So replace to another column
01:49:801 - should be double
02:39:004 - oh you missed a note
[Wonki's Hyper]
00:33:954 (33954|1) - remove
00:46:683 (46683|3) - i don't really get what this LN follow. 00:47:361 - finish and start here a new LN or make smth like 00:48:039 (48039|0,48717|6)
00:59:960 - your decision is really weird. I mean jacks with 3 notes. At first it's too hard for Hyper. Secondly it's doesn't match with other diffs
01:01:293 - double
01:11:404 (71404|4,71515|3,71626|2,71738|3,71849|4) - remove and 01:11:626 - make double
01:20:497 - i guess you should add note like you did before 01:17:860
01:28:163 - 01:30:716 - listen carefully and remove double jacks
02:19:422 - aaaa too hard D:<

Good luck!
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