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Artist: 55x55
Title: TIPA PRIVIDENIE (feat. Utopia Show)
Tags: Shmiklak russian русский marvollo m_a_r_v_o_l_l_o youtube namki armin a_r_m_i_n vanucik5656 vanucik
BPM: 128
Filesize: 1745kb
Play Time: 00:46
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omg omg omg first ranked thx thx thx
but actually 12th xd

Типа няшка
hitsounded by Namki <3

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o/ fast check

Easy:
nothing
Normal:
00:16:445 (4) - Why here isn't whistle on end like on 00:20:195 (4)? I think you should put it here too.
Hard:
00:30:039 (2) - I prefer NC here, because it's new part of song (can i name it song xD)...
00:35:664 (1,2,3,4) - This DS here is kinda far for Hard, i think better is when you make it like on 00:31:914 (1,2,3,4)
Insane:
nothing

rrank it pls.
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ну хоть уши не режутся от этой песни
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Chalwa wrote:
o/ fast check

Normal:
00:16:445 (4) - Why here isn't whistle on end like on 00:20:195 (4)? I think you should put it here too. idk if it's useful because it doesnt exist in any diff, so lemme ask Namki

rrank it pls.
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wtf its so neat
00:43:164 (1) - delete nc btw

shmiklak
00:21:601 (3) - make it less curved, looks kinda weird
rhythms are literally the same though the whole map, which makes this look so boring zz
00:22:539 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make them different at least here, they are the same as 00:15:039 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - but the music is way denser, so it should be mapped differently
00:38:476 (2,3,4,5) - well, this pattern is kinda hard for the normal, maybe change two of these circles to 1/2 slider?
00:43:632 (1,1,1) - those ncs are unneccessary

namki
00:16:210 (5,6,7) - put them as a straight line? rn it looks kinda messy http://imgur.com/a/thJex
00:21:953 - should be mapped as well, since you are focusing on the vocals
00:30:039 (2) - nc
00:31:914 (1,2,3,4) - imo this is inappropriate for a hard diff, even if the bpm is so low. 00:39:414 (1,2,3) - something like this looks muuuch better
00:35:664 (1,2,3,4) - same, also spacing is kinda huge
00:37:070 (1) - maybe add a sv change, so this nc will look reasonable? x1.1-1.2 or so
00:38:476 (5) - ctrl+g maybe

vanucik
00:32:851 (5,6) - flow is kinda bad, you force player to go in one direction thought the whole screen, so your structure dies :( also spacing between 00:32:617 (4,5) - is huge a bit (in comparsion with 00:40:117 (4,5) - , for example), so i think something like this will work better http://imgur.com/a/SNlQP
otherwise its a good diff, good job!

shmiklak
00:15:976 (4) - better ctrl+h+j 00:15:507 (3) - this slider and use it instead of 00:15:976 (4) -
00:34:140 (2,1) - make stack leniency 5 or 4, so those stacks wont affect your map
too many overlaps in the kiai, so it looks a bit messy, but overall its fine

good luck!!
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Hello Shmiklak and the GDers~


55x55 - TIPA PRIVIDENIE (feat. Utopia Show)


EASY A R M I N SHOW


  • 00:21:601 (3,4) The flow at this part feels weird. That's not so linear, and I think that you could uncurve this slider a bit, and giving this pattern something like this : https://puu.sh/wDcBV/8e612cfacf.jpg ~ You'll have to change distance snap after doing this, of course.
  • 00:27:570 (1) Here, we have a problem that I just had with my new qualified map. The delay afterwards of Easy difficulties must be 4/1 (4 complete beats after the slider). But as I see, with this circle, there is only 3/1. I talked about it with Irreversible on my map, and it was unrankable. Even if the beat of this circle is important, you really should remove it.
NORMAL SHMIKLAK SHOW


HARD NAMKI SHOW


  • 00:17:851 (4,5,6,7) I don't think that it's a Hard difficulty pattern.. Maybe more a Light Insane, but maybe you could try to make something more easy for a Hard difficulty.
  • Nothing more on this, but I see the diff more like a Light Insane than a Hard on some patterns.

HYPER VANUCIK SHOW


  • Nothing on this, clean difficulty.
INSANE SHMIKLAK SHOW


  • 00:43:164 (1,1,1,1) Why don't you do like the other high diffs, why no sliders ? I think it would be better than these circles.


In general, the map is great. Clean and neat difficulties are in.
Though I don't liked the song :v
Good luck my boi !
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Hello Shmiklak and the GDers~


55x55 - TIPA PRIVIDENIE (feat. Utopia Show)


EASY A R M I N SHOW


  • 00:21:601 (3,4) The flow at this part feels weird. That's not so linear, and I think that you could uncurve this slider a bit, and giving this pattern something like this : https://puu.sh/wDcBV/8e612cfacf.jpg ~ You'll have to change distance snap after doing this, of course. I think the Flow is fine enough
  • 00:27:570 (1) Here, we have a problem that I just had with my new qualified map. The delay afterwards of Easy difficulties must be 4/1 (4 complete beats after the slider). But as I see, with this circle, there is only 3/1. I talked about it with Irreversible on my map, and it was unrankable. Even if the beat of this circle is important, you really should remove it. Talked with Bonsai, he said its fine below 160bpm


Good luck my boi !


@komore Fix ty

@Shmok just remove the NC at 00:43:164 (1) -
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My map has 130BPM
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Come on dude, I told you in game that it's fine. The RC rule was written for 180 BPM songs.
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Komore wrote:
namki
00:16:210 (5,6,7) - put them as a straight line? rn it looks kinda messy http://imgur.com/a/thJex that would be a prefect if I ain't followed such idea throught the entire diff
00:21:953 - should be mapped as well, since you are focusing on the vocals idk really, I making mephasis on triple and 5 note stream would be a bit complex I think, will keep in mind that moment
00:30:039 (2) - nc yup, why not
00:31:914 (1,2,3,4) - imo this is inappropriate for a hard diff, even if the bpm is so low. 00:39:414 (1,2,3) - something like this looks muuuch better
00:35:664 (1,2,3,4) - same, also spacing is kinda huge reconsidered the whole pattering, should be less complex for now
00:37:070 (1) - maybe add a sv change, so this nc will look reasonable? x1.1-1.2 or so would be a fine way to emphasis it, but well it's fine as it is now, maybe will change in future
00:38:476 (5) - ctrl+g maybe yup


and, Imakuri, I don't think it's such a hard pattern as bpm is only 128 I believe players can handle it very well

thankies.

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BeatmapID:1348161
BeatmapSetID:634648

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"mY4euE7U0Y8.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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45039,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0


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Combo2 : 217,203,38

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Komore wrote:

shmiklak
00:21:601 (3) - make it less curved, looks kinda weird
rhythms are literally the same though the whole map, which makes this look so boring zz
00:22:539 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make them different at least here, they are the same as 00:15:039 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - but the music is way denser, so it should be mapped differently
00:38:476 (2,3,4,5) - well, this pattern is kinda hard for the normal, maybe change two of these circles to 1/2 slider? it's kiai part and t's 128 bpm so it should work fine
00:43:632 (1,1,1) - those ncs are unneccessary we use them in every diff so it's fine


shmiklak
00:15:976 (4) - better ctrl+h+j 00:15:507 (3) - this slider and use it instead of 00:15:976 (4) -
00:34:140 (2,1) - make stack leniency 5 or 4, so those stacks wont affect your map yeah
too many overlaps in the kiai, so it looks a bit messy, but overall its fine it's my idea

good luck!!

thx
Imakuri wrote:
Hello Shmiklak and the GDers~


55x55 - TIPA PRIVIDENIE (feat. Utopia Show)


EASY A R M I N SHOW


  • 00:21:601 (3,4) The flow at this part feels weird. That's not so linear, and I think that you could uncurve this slider a bit, and giving this pattern something like this : https://puu.sh/wDcBV/8e612cfacf.jpg ~ You'll have to change distance snap after doing this, of course.
  • 00:27:570 (1) Here, we have a problem that I just had with my new qualified map. The delay afterwards of Easy difficulties must be 4/1 (4 complete beats after the slider). But as I see, with this circle, there is only 3/1. I talked about it with Irreversible on my map, and it was unrankable. Even if the beat of this circle is important, you really should remove it.
NORMAL SHMIKLAK SHOW


lol ok
HARD NAMKI SHOW


  • 00:17:851 (4,5,6,7) I don't think that it's a Hard difficulty pattern.. Maybe more a Light Insane, but maybe you could try to make something more easy for a Hard difficulty.
  • Nothing more on this, but I see the diff more like a Light Insane than a Hard on some patterns.

HYPER VANUCIK SHOW


  • Nothing on this, clean difficulty.
INSANE SHMIKLAK SHOW


  • 00:43:164 (1,1,1,1) Why don't you do like the other high diffs, why no sliders ? I think it would be better than these circles. yeah liked it


In general, the map is great. Clean and neat difficulties are in.
Though I don't liked the song :v
Good luck my boi !

thx
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