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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 7월 8일 토요일 at 오후 9:30:45

Artist: Moso Calibration
Title: Seishun Prologue
Source: 冴えない彼女の育てかた♭
Tags: Mousou Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata Flat Saekano How to Raise a Boring Girlfriend TV Size Shad0w1and 加藤恵 Kato Megumi
BPM: 154
Filesize: 15048kb
Play Time: 01:29
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2017-07-02 16:34 23456789: 00:15:835 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -  00:18:951 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 
2017-07-02 16:34 23456789: 앞에껀 삼각형이 반시계방향으로 조금씩돌아가고 뒤에껀 반대로인데
2017-07-02 16:34 23456789: 바꿔보시는건어떰
2017-07-02 16:34 Left: 엌 ㄱㄷㄱㄷ
2017-07-02 16:35 Left: 에디터로 들갈게여
2017-07-02 16:35 Left: 음 그건 딱히 의도가 없구
2017-07-02 16:35 Left: 00:17:978 (3,1) - 얘네 둘의 자연스러움에 따른거기 때매..
2017-07-02 16:36 23456789: ㅇㅎ
2017-07-02 16:36 23456789: 01:00:445 (3,4) - 
2017-07-02 16:37 23456789: 슬라이더 회전방향 반대로하는게 나을거같음
2017-07-02 16:37 Left: 엌 이건 킵..
2017-07-02 16:37 23456789: 00:54:212 (1,2) -  01:06:679 (1,2) - 
2017-07-02 16:37 23456789: 얘네들이랑 비교했을때 라던지..
2017-07-02 16:38 23456789: 둥글게 감쌀이유도 딱히 안보이고
2017-07-02 16:38 Left: 네 저도 그부분을 생각하고 있긴 한데
2017-07-02 16:38 Left: 뭐랄까 딱히 일관성을 줄 필요성이 안느껴져서
2017-07-02 16:38 Left: 고치면 좋긴한데
2017-07-02 16:38 Left: 그래서 킵
2017-07-02 16:38 23456789: ㅇㅋ
2017-07-02 16:48 23456789: 00:31:419 (2) - 오른쪽아래 한칸씩 00:32:004 (3) - -1도 돌리고 485,97로 맞춰주시면 딱맞음
2017-07-02 16:49 Left: 고쳤어욤
2017-07-02 16:49 23456789: 여기까지
2017-07-02 16:49 Left: ㄳㄳ
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Hi, an M4M from my Modding Queue!


Normal

Hard
  • 00:13:497 (1,2) - Obligatory blanket mod (2). This looks like intentional so you can ignore this.
  • 01:26:939 - Add a spinner around here for consistency with other diffs?


Sorry for my short mod! Your map is as good as rankable in my perspective.
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M4M from here

Flat
00:05:510 (1,1) - consider the gap between is less emphasized, because the movement between is so smoothie. Ctrl g to this 00:05:900 (1) - is a good solution imo. if you agree, then change the position of this 00:06:484 (2) - btw
00:13:497 (1,2) - having a stack could make the stop a bit more sudden.
00:23:043 (1,2) - this blanket is not perfect, obviously.
00:27:328 (1,2) - Ctrl g for better flow maybe? i think it will be better.
01:06:484 (9,10) - NC
01:23:822 (1,2) - bad flow between, such a calm part doesn't need a uncomfortable flow. rotate this 01:24:406 (2) - by 60 degrees clockwise plz.

Hard
00:26:744 (3,4) - this is weird somehow... idk how to explain it but it actually doesn't reflect the heavy beat. just don't stack, you can try a overlap.
00:47:978 (1) - this shape doesn't suit your style imo
00:57:718 (2,1) - the later one starts fading in before the early one fully disappear, so it's not rankable.
01:25:186 (1,2) - 01:19:731 (3,4) - consistency

Normal
00:37:069 (1,2) - terrible flow for newbee. you can try a 1/2 beat slider and a circle instead of this 00:37:848 (2) -
ok nice, nothing else for normal

Easy
00:24:601 (3,4) - a bit ugly

that's all, good luck!
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@nitrous allfixed thx for mod!

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M4M from here

Flat
00:05:510 (1,1) - consider the gap between is less emphasized, because the movement between is so smoothie. Ctrl g to this 00:05:900 (1) - is a good solution imo. if you agree, then change the position of this 00:06:484 (2) - btw umm i think it's enough
00:13:497 (1,2) - having a stack could make the stop a bit more sudden. i don't intend that
00:23:043 (1,2) - this blanket is not perfect, obviously. i don't want blanket here intentionally
00:27:328 (1,2) - Ctrl g for better flow maybe? i think it will be better. mine better
01:06:484 (9,10) - NC np
01:23:822 (1,2) - bad flow between, such a calm part doesn't need a uncomfortable flow. rotate this 01:24:406 (2) - by 60 degrees clockwise plz. i think ok

Hard
00:26:744 (3,4) - this is weird somehow... idk how to explain it but it actually doesn't reflect the heavy beat. just don't stack, you can try a overlap. 100% intended
00:47:978 (1) - this shape doesn't suit your style imo lemme consider it
00:57:718 (2,1) - the later one starts fading in before the early one fully disappear, so it's not rankable. tru ok
01:25:186 (1,2) - 01:19:731 (3,4) - consistency idk why i should

Normal
00:37:069 (1,2) - terrible flow for newbee. you can try a 1/2 beat slider and a circle instead of this 00:37:848 (2) - not that hard and flow with next one
ok nice, nothing else for normal

Easy
00:24:601 (3,4) - a bit ugly omg

that's all, good luck!


thx for mod!
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hi random mod owo


Normal

00:04:341 (1,2,3,4) - even this is a strong instrumental it's still a calm part I think making 2,3 to a 1/1 slider would fit more ( start the slider on the red tick if you are going to do this suggestion)
01:24:991 (2) - the circle is not needed imo because the instrumental that this circle has is way too low
00:23:043 (4,5) - make this consistent with 00:21:484 (1,2,3) - ? because imo the sliderend from 5 should be clickable
00:28:692 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - this is the only time you use 1/2 stacks which can be very hard for beginners and it don't suit the rest of the map well imo


Flat is justice

I think AR8,8 or 8,5 suits better because the song the is slow and the slow part feels to fast with ar9

00:38:432 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - is this nc spam really needed?
00:13:887 (1,2) - a bit too hard to hit for not even 4,2* even it's only 156bpm
00:53:043 (3) - players which can play 4* maps will definitely choke there move it a bit down I mean this 00:13:887 (1,2) - has a higher spacing than 00:53:043 (2,3) -

hope it was helpful and Gl o/
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General
  • Fix Ai-mod.


Easy


Normal


Hard


Insane


Flat
    00:01:225 (1) - You follow sounds all diff, this slider didn't end on good time point. (You end on vocal, not sounds.) End this time point: 00:02:393 -
    00:05:510 (1) - why don't you use stream here?? It is very loudly 5 sounds here.
    00:06:874 (3) - I'm...very hate the hit-sounds on sliderbody whole diff. Why you do very well on Hard diff, but Insane... :(
    00:09:017 (1) - snap
    01:26:939 (1) - I think my love pattern is let this stream be a circle, actually this circle is too. :)
  • seems the problem is on hit-sounds...


well, wait my map done :)
good luck.
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hi random mod owo


Normal

00:04:341 (1,2,3,4) - even this is a strong instrumental it's still a calm part I think making 2,3 to a 1/1 slider would fit more ( start the slider on the red tick if you are going to do this suggestion) instrumental sound is important for me
01:24:991 (2) - the circle is not needed imo because the instrumental that this circle has is way too low 1/1 gap, and sound there
00:23:043 (4,5) - make this consistent with 00:21:484 (1,2,3) - ? because imo the sliderend from 5 should be clickable vocal catch
00:28:692 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - this is the only time you use 1/2 stacks which can be very hard for beginners and it don't suit the rest of the map well imo i used 1/2 troughout this map this kind, just it was few


Flat is justice

I think AR8,8 or 8,5 suits better because the song the is slow and the slow part feels to fast with ar9 can consider if shadow uses 8.8 or sth

00:38:432 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - is this nc spam really needed? maybe..? i thought it's cool
00:13:887 (1,2) - a bit too hard to hit for not even 4,2* even it's only 156bpm not that hard
00:53:043 (3) - players which can play 4* maps will definitely choke there move it a bit down I mean this 00:13:887 (1,2) - has a higher spacing than 00:53:043 (2,3) - nerfed

hope it was helpful and Gl o/


thx for mod!

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General
  • Fix Ai-mod. !!!!


Easy
    00:07:069 (2) - ????? omgg clap
    00:41:549 (2,5) - I don't know what are these sliders follow?? seem you follow drum, but slider tail don't. :? it's drum with vocal, maybe i can consider it more
  • only two problem.


Normal


Hard
    00:22:458 - Try to remove reverse, then stack a circle on next slider?? considering vocal, i think this is nice
    00:44:082 (3) - not stack well yeap
  • Nice :)


Flat
    00:01:225 (1) - You follow sounds all diff, this slider didn't end on good time point. (You end on vocal, not sounds.) End this time point: 00:02:393 - true, fixed
    00:05:510 (1) - why don't you use stream here?? It is very loudly 5 sounds here. this looks better for me
    00:06:874 (3) - I'm...very hate the hit-sounds on sliderbody whole diff. Why you do very well on Hard diff, but Insane... :( i removed whistle sound in ENH, and Insane fixed all body hs
    00:09:017 (1) - snap omg rip me
    01:26:939 (1) - I think my love pattern is let this stream be a circle, actually this circle is too. :) last sound has impact, so like this
  • seems the problem is on hit-sounds...


well, wait my map done :)
good luck.


thx for mod!
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M4M
its fine since shad0w1and diff is updated imo and saekano <3

flat
shad0w1and
hard
normal
easy

that's all for me, gl gl lg
my map: p/6107365
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DreaM117er wrote:

Insane
  • AR改到8-9之間,這樣才符合spread。miss BG
    00:04:536 (2) - 這裡不要用3/4啊...我覺得後面再接3連打有點過難了 :arrow: 不难
    00:05:510 (5) - 這裡是5連不是5连
    00:13:887 (1) - 這裡不用加速 :arrow: 故意的
    00:14:666 (1,1) - 我有一個更好的建議,你這樣放有點過難。放在Left的難度反而是合適的,把滑條刪了做成這樣,反而更帶感 :arrow: 和难度无关,两个I是并行关系
    00:30:250 (4,5) - 這裡怎麼沒有跳遠?? :arrow: 这里走图形,而且节奏密度加大了,间距减少也无所谓
    00:37:653 - 這裡建議放三連打,一直停一拍玩起來會很煩人。記得你以前也抓過我這個問題 :? :arrow: 不喜欢凭空加三连
    00:42:913 - 這個音你不打算map嗎?? 00:46:030 (2) - ??????? :arrow: 跟snare不跟scratch
    00:54:017 (1) - 這裡不用NC了
    01:06:484 (1) - ^

    01:25:575 (1) - 一樣,不用加速 :arrow: 故意的
    01:26:160 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 你這個擺的比Left難太多了,注意一下。畢竟要符合spread原則
  • 還有音效


nc和三围改了,其他的感觉不重要,有些是故意的

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well, reject because those were my interpretation :/
http://puu.sh/wzMyA/047036caba.zip
@Left fix your tags and copy yours to mine thx (no Shadowland plz xc)
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Irohas wrote:
M4M
its fine since shad0w1and diff is updated imo and saekano <3

flat


else all fixed! ths for mod :)

shadowland updated and fixed tag
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I guess add Mousou to tag, current Moso is official source, but for romanization, it is Mousou
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hihi from my q

Shadowland's Insane
00:36:484 (1,2,3) - in this 3 jumps, 00:36:679 (2) - has a softer sound than 00:36:484 (1,3) - i recommend you to to move 00:36:679 (2) - closer to 00:36:484 (1) - it should look something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8498150 (spacing emphasisssssssssssssssssssssssssss)
00:44:082 (3) - offscreen
01:17:004 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - would be better if the slider was pointing downwards/curving downwards. Will flow better
01:26:160 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - there is not a change in music so there's no need to have NC or streams that look like that(i don't know how to explain it) I feel like it should look more like this.https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8498197

Anyway, that should be it! There's not much to mod really. It's already quite flawless in my opinion. :D
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