1. Fans Insane (4.92 stars, 1132 notes)

• Audio should be 192 kbs
  BG shlould be 1360x768 or 1920x1080/1200
  Check AIMod LEL

• 00:54:958 (2,3,4,5) - Brole flow
  01:04:189 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
  01:33:364 (2,3) - Very bad overlap

-Eriri- wrote:

NM

[Fans Insane]

做完图最好开一下AImod检查一下，能检查出一些很基本的问题

timing里面感觉滑条速度也有点不对，一首正常BPM的ACG曲子，都做到5星了，滑条速度还是1.0有点怪，然后说一下，绿线的作用不仅仅是用来调音量的，还可以调滑条速度，看这图整整5分钟滑条都没变过速，嘛 其实也不是说一定一定要变速什么的，只是觉得做图的过程中，通过变速滑条也能很好的表达出自己的想法，或者契合音乐本身

00:39:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这一段是跟人声还是背景声？如果是人声的话，00:39:012 (1,2) - 用可以用滑条代替，如果是跟背景的话，应该更早就开始放note的，这儿从人声开始但是却不是跟住人声感觉怪怪的。

*01:02:748 (2,3,4,5) - 没叠好还是故意的？

其实很多地方都并不需要摆note，像01:10:496 (7) - 可以delete掉的，整张图都是塞爆的话，而且几乎都是1/4滑条和note会让人感觉很单调很无趣的

01:16:100 (6) - ^

01:24:507 (1) - ^

01:29:452 (3,4,5) - ^

01:31:759 - 这儿可以跟人声放note

02:09:012 (2,3,4,5) - 还有很多这些地方就不多说了，并不是高潮的地方不太适宜摆那么多切指，而这种地方完全可以不摆东西，这样甚至有人会说是overmap的（

05:15:688 (3) - 该摆白线的吧

高潮之前的一大段我觉得跟人声可以了，02:08:683 (1) - 这种可以直接一个note 然后再等人声出现继续摆

03:05:056 (1) - 然后这种滑条，感觉和滑条速度太低有关吧，看起来扭成一团的，并不好看(

总之节奏这东西个人有个人的想法吧.....就看如何把它好好从图里表达出来了

再说说排版吧

03:46:265 (1,2,3) - 尽量避免这种糊在一起的 02:11:979 (7,1,2) - 还有很多，都是没必要的摩擦。这种很影响美观度，如何使note之间保持联系又不影响美观这点我觉得需要提升。

flow感觉是玄学我也不会，这东西也许多打图多看图会有些帮助吧...

Arastelia wrote:

hello there from queue

00:48:035 (1,2,3,4) - these patterns need to be separated or better organized bcuz i think u just hand placed them imo

00:49:683 (2,3,4) - i feel like you should replace these with doubles as it matches the vocals better

01:10:783 (1) - should be slider instead of a single note

01:21:002 (1) - too many points looks a bit sketchy i know what ur trying to do tho but that entire slider could be made with just 3 points

01:32:705 (1,2,1) - fix stacking here

01:42:595 (1,2,3) - unequal spacing

01:56:441 (1,2,3) - fix stacking

02:09:133 (2,3,4) - same as above

02:24:792 (1,2,3,4,5) - unequal spacing

02:30:561 (5,1) - missed a triple between these two sliders

02:34:682 (8) - this note is unnecessary as theres a pause

02:48:693 (5,6,7,8,9) - fix stacking

02:58:748 (1) - remove as its unnecessary and stops all momentum

03:02:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - lol uhh this might be very hard to hit unless you're a very good streamer i suggest shortening the length of this

03:16:220 (2,3,4) - stacking error

03:21:989 (7,8,9,10,11) - same as above

03:30:808 (3) - missing a note before here

03:32:127 (3) - same as above

03:50:670 (9,10,11,12,13) - you can make a star formation with these notes for a bit of diversity

04:42:263 (4,5,6) - stacking error

05:02:703 (9) - id move this slider away from the triple as it can cause confusion

05:05:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - im not sure what you are trying to do here but it needs to be fixed since its very hard to read and hit

05:23:640 (1) - spinner is too long here

thanks for linking your map

makisokk wrote:

Hello from my que
[General]

• Audio should be 192 kbs
  BG shlould be 1360x768 or 1920x1080/1200
  Check AIMod LEL

[Fans Insane]

• 00:54:958 (2,3,4,5) - Brole flow
  01:04:189 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
  01:33:364 (2,3) - Very bad overlap

Sorry i can't say anymore abaout your map
PLS CHECK THIS:
t/86329
t/441929
https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria
And this guy https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oL3az8F ... GGoLIrQtOx
Good luck and sorry for little mod

-Eriri- wrote:

-Eriri- wrote:

NM

[Fans Insane]

做完图最好开一下AImod检查一下，能检查出一些很基本的问题

timing里面感觉滑条速度也有点不对，一首正常BPM的ACG曲子，都做到5星了，滑条速度还是1.0有点怪，然后说一下，绿线的作用不仅仅是用来调音量的，还可以调滑条速度，看这图整整5分钟滑条都没变过速，嘛 其实也不是说一定一定要变速什么的，只是觉得做图的过程中，通过变速滑条也能很好的表达出自己的想法，或者契合音乐本身

00:39:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这一段是跟人声还是背景声？如果是人声的话，00:39:012 (1,2) - 用可以用滑条代替，如果是跟背景的话，应该更早就开始放note的，这儿从人声开始但是却不是跟住人声感觉怪怪的。

*01:02:748 (2,3,4,5) - 没叠好还是故意的？

其实很多地方都并不需要摆note，像01:10:496 (7) - 可以delete掉的，整张图都是塞爆的话，而且几乎都是1/4滑条和note会让人感觉很单调很无趣的

01:16:100 (6) - ^

01:24:507 (1) - ^

01:29:452 (3,4,5) - ^

01:31:759 - 这儿可以跟人声放note

02:09:012 (2,3,4,5) - 还有很多这些地方就不多说了，并不是高潮的地方不太适宜摆那么多切指，而这种地方完全可以不摆东西，这样甚至有人会说是overmap的（

05:15:688 (3) - 该摆白线的吧

高潮之前的一大段我觉得跟人声可以了，02:08:683 (1) - 这种可以直接一个note 然后再等人声出现继续摆

03:05:056 (1) - 然后这种滑条，感觉和滑条速度太低有关吧，看起来扭成一团的，并不好看(

总之节奏这东西个人有个人的想法吧.....就看如何把它好好从图里表达出来了

再说说排版吧

03:46:265 (1,2,3) - 尽量避免这种糊在一起的 02:11:979 (7,1,2) - 还有很多，都是没必要的摩擦。这种很影响美观度，如何使note之间保持联系又不影响美观这点我觉得需要提升。

flow感觉是玄学我也不会，这东西也许多打图多看图会有些帮助吧...

cjn1508 wrote:

00:07:414 (1,2,3,4) - 换气这儿可以不要音符 把234摆成三角形
00:56:814 (4,1) - 好远。。
01:57:968 (2) - 出屏幕外了
02:38:683 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - 这几个滑条位置可以再斟酌一下
02:41:979 (3) - 可以换成一个短的 接下一个
02:45:276 (8) - new combo
02:54:507 (12) - new combo
03:36:292 (6,7,8) - 有点迷 短滑条可以去了 当然也许能成为一个很不错的更
03:38:188 (6,7) - 位置交换一下 567间距一样
04:16:265 (1,2,3,4) - 弄成三个长滑条
04:22:529 (10) - 跑出屏幕外了
04:36:869 (8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - 过度不是很平滑
04:41:155 (1,2,3) - 这个123应该跟456一样吧

好听 还有我涨了不少姿势呢
总之 谢谢mapper啦

首先
你的滑條可以簡單點 多用COPY 還有多用小工具轉向
這樣可以使你的圖整齊點

其次~!
大至上是滑條太短. 所以不好看

gary00737 wrote:

嗯~~~~~ 你好哇~ 我來水摸

首先
你的滑條可以簡單點 多用COPY 還有多用小工具轉向
這樣可以使你的圖整齊點

其次~!
大至上是滑條太短. 所以不好看

水摸開始

00:52:858 (5,1) - 1/1 的間距跟 1/2一樣 音樂上有停頓 感覺放在00:52:858 (5) - 疊住會有不錯的效果
01:09:836 (2) - 這個可以刪掉.
01:48:243 (1) - 多給他1格 感覺上比較順暢 (因為前後都是1/2 的空間 不然別人玩的時候在機械手按拍子就會亂掉)<-這點不明白可以再找我問 因為我覺得自己說得不清楚
02:03:737 (1) - ctrl+g 要注意來回滑條之後的方向 是否對準你之後要去的位置 / 順不順暢
03:04:726 (2) - 這個我覺得可以做3連打唷. 音樂上有支援
04:09:672 (1,2) - 感覺可以換1/1的滑條
04:12:309 (1) - 沒聽到聲音 可以換個1/1 移上前.放在紅線上 之後的白線放上圓
04:16:265 (2) - 可以轉成減速滑條到04:16:512 -
04:16:595 (3) - 可以跟上面一樣 做成3/4滑條 之後 04:16:924 - 放1/1滑條 -> 04:17:254 (4) - 不要
04:42:639 (1) - 拉長至04:43:792 -
04:45:111 (6) - 滑條尾巴有重音是很奇怪的.. 雖然我有時候都會這樣做
04:49:726 (3,4) - 這個疊住不好讀
04:51:045 (3) - 也是重音問題
05:08:353 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡是連打耶~
05:10:331 (1,2) - 滑條太短顯得後面的2找不出來
05:13:792 (9,10,11) - 可以給他們一個大間距 因為音樂上支援
05:14:287 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - 不知道在跟什麼音-.-'!!!

水摸完畢

感覺上節奏掌握比我好

可是排版方面你要多看別人的RANK圖 找你喜歡的MAPPER 學習

加油

leo16834 wrote:

嗨~ 路過幫你MOD一下 目前正在學習幫別人MOD

General

一些可以在編輯使用的工具 連打的工具可以上方的編輯點開 然後把將滑調轉換的選像點下去就會有很完整的點打出現了
一般來說滑條的錨點可以少一點 滑條會看起來比較圓滑


以下MOD開始

Fans Insane

NC: New combo
Flow: 移動動線

00:39:507 (1) - 這個NC可以移除
00:52:858 (5,1) - 這個是想要呈現錯位的感覺嗎? 建議5移到X :41 Y:200 可以比較明顯
00:55:496 (6,1) - ^ 6移到 x :337 y:53
00:57:803 (3,5) - 5疊在3尾巴
01:03:243 (5,2) - 2疊在5尾巴
01:05:386 (1) - 前面的滑條頗快 到這裡突然變太慢 不太好 建議這個可以先降到1倍速 再依序慢慢的降到你想要的慢速滑條
01:10:001 (2,3) - 這兩個突然跳太遠了 會反應不及 需要平衡一下
01:37:364 (1,2) - 這兩個疊在一起應該比較好
01:41:814 (4,5) - 角度太折了 會卡手 且flow也不太好看
02:04:150 (4,5) - 這兩個連打疊得太近了 修一下吧
02:09:672 (1,2) - 這個的 1 2 跟後面這個 02:10:990 (1,2) - 我覺得前面可以+一點距離 前面那個有點近
02:15:276 (3,6) - 6疊在3尾巴
02:15:935 (6,9) - 9疊在6尾巴
02:25:166 (1,2) - 1稍微下挪點
02:27:968 (7,8,9) - 沒有疊好
02:53:188 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這邊這個錯位就變成有點難讀譜了 建議做成星型比較好看
02:54:095 (7,8) - 連打有點遠修正 靠近些
03:10:331 (5) - NC
03:24:672 (6,7,8) - 疊在一起比較好看
03:26:320 (5,6) - 角度太折了 卡手
03:43:133 (1,2,3) - 沒疊好
03:50:716 (2,3) - flow不優 可以把3移到x:385 y361 連帶這顆 03:51:210 (5) - 移到x:183 y342 參考看看
04:11:650 (5,6) - 直接把5放在6上面吧
04:26:897 (5,6) - 連打6靠近5一點吧
04:27:803 (5,6,7,8,9) - 連打疊好比較好看
04:45:276 (6) - NC
05:22:199 - 這點之後似乎有變速 可能要加一條紅線補正


MOD完發現打好多
加油~

Yugu wrote:

from m4m

Fans Insane

做完图也要检查下aimod

00:05:633 - 怎么感觉timing好迷，一开始这里的吉他音是比较大所以推荐弄个2连，你在00:05:716 - 放一个note不合适
00:05:716 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉你抓音好迷，这段是跟人还是跟吉他想清楚
这后面的你都在跟吉他
但是到了00:14:287 - 你又不跟吉他了该有note又没note
00:16:265 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里也是然后00:17:913 (2) - 又是在跟了之前一直没跟的背景的钢琴 00:17:748 - 和 00:17:748 - 的人声又漏了
00:20:880 - 这里没音你却放了个滑条 overmap
00:22:858 (2) - 同
还是要想清楚什么时候跟吉他什么时候跟人主跟吉他还是主跟人，还是说你想跟钢琴

00:39:177 - 蜜汁绿线，作图要作好看点，像写代码一样(跑远了
00:39:012 (1,3) - 还是尽量不要弄这种叠或者贴边摆，要么就把它弄成一种模式化的东西
00:40:990 (5,2) - 和00:41:155 (6,3) - 要叠就间距一样的叠
00:42:309 (5,2) - 同上上，后面我就不再多说了
00:43:628 (4,5) - flow有点硬 00:43:957 (5) - 变速要NC，后面我也不多说了
00:43:957 (5,6) - 要包就包好一点要么就不要包
00:49:232 (6,9) - note和滑条尾叠
00:51:869 (1,5) - 这种可以叠就叠吧，后面也不多说了自己斟酌
00:55:001 (3,6) - 这种贴的就不太好看
00:55:825 (1,2) - ^
01:42:474 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - flow还是有点僵硬的感觉
01:55:166 (1,3,5) - 做成间距一样多好

然后挺关键的一点00:40:001 - 到00:43:957 - 是一个part
00:45:276 - 到00:49:232 - 是一个part，这两个part(节奏)都是一样的，为什么你放的note(节奏模式)是不同的
可能你这一长串的part在后面也有相同的part，有重复相同的note(节奏模式)我没看到，嘛，告诉一句别人点醒我的一句，“歌曲都有规律凭什么你做的图没有规律”

04:47:913 - 这里开始到这里04:52:529 - 一个节奏
04:58:463 - 这里开始到这里05:03:078 - 相同节奏
你节奏下的却是不同的

如果我说错了那就无视这些话吧....但是没说错的话你就要准备大改你的图了....
你自己检查下吧

01:52:529 (1,2) - 个人认为ctrl g这里flow比较好打
03:18:737 (6,4) - 像这里就是没叠好的了(虽然说后面不说了但是还是忍不住说了 )
04:16:924 - 你这里是不是没把音量变回来
04:31:265 (1,2,3,5,6) - 像这种明显可以摆成弧形连打的形状
04:42:639 (1) - 好丑...
04:45:770 (2) - ^ 活用红锚点
05:15:606 (3) - ^
05:20:880 (3) - 拉弧形三点就够啦
05:23:446 (1) - 转盘请结束到05:26:821 - 这里，后面都没音了

问题主要是抓音还有排列整洁度还有我说过最关键的那个规律问题
要细摸感觉真的能摸出一篇论文

总之加油吧，比我刚开始作图的时候好太多了，特别是flow方面

gl!

1. Source should be BanG Dream!
2. just a suggestion though, why not set previous time on 03:03:902 - instead for highlighting the chorus?

1. 00:08:353 (1,2) - I recommend to remake them with same shape, copy 00:09:672 (2) - on 00:08:353 - then rotate to 90degree clockwise would be great
2. 00:05:716 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3) - no hitsounds on long period of time isn't rankable iirc, please put at least whistle on white ticks such as 00:05:716 - 00:07:034 - 00:08:353 - etc. where the guitar''s rhythm was there
3. 00:26:814 (1) - this spinner should end in 00:29:452 - as vocals are ending, also it would be great if you mapper the next vocal section starting on 00:31:100 -
4. 00:39:672 (3) - avoid overlap with 00:39:012 (1) - for visual matter, around 435|185 should be enough
5. 01:33:902 (4) - 01:34:562 (1) - why not 2 circles for consistency? these were the only two i've seen you mapped as 1/4 sliders on this whole instrumental section
6. 02:14:287 (3) - overmapped, there's no 1/4 rhythm and here and please make 02:14:617 - clickable for that strong drum
7. 02:16:265 (7) - NC, then remove NC on 02:16:924 - ,then NC again on 02:17:584 - ,and finally remove NC on 02:18:243 - for making it consistent (6 combo per color)
8. 03:04:562 - 03:04:644 - you missed those drums ;w;
9. 04:16:265 (2) - NC here as you have large gap with 04:14:946 (1) -
10. 04:41:155 (1,2,3) - vs. 04:42:144 (4,5,6) - why their distance different while the combo color is still the same? I can suggest adding NC on 04:42:144 (4) - or make 'em same spacing
11. 05:01:100 (1,2,3,4,5) - circular flow here plays kinda boring so ye add some interesting patterns instead like zig-zags or triangles or something
12. 05:23:446 (1) - this should be ended on 05:26:633 - for the ending vocals w

Akitoshi wrote:

hello, since KantanDez having crappy internet, I'll be the one who will mod this map instead of him (from here : p/6083587).
I'm noob modder so pls no bully.

General

1. Source should be BanG Dream!
2. just a suggestion though, why not set previous time on 03:03:902 - instead for highlighting the chorus?

Fans Insane

1. 00:08:353 (1,2) - I recommend to remake them with same shape, copy 00:09:672 (2) - on 00:08:353 - then rotate to 90degree clockwise would be great
2. 00:05:716 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3) - no hitsounds on long period of time isn't rankable iirc, please put at least whistle on white ticks such as 00:05:716 - 00:07:034 - 00:08:353 - etc. where the guitar''s rhythm was there
3. 00:26:814 (1) - this spinner should end in 00:29:452 - as vocals are ending, also it would be great if you mapper the next vocal section starting on 00:31:100 -
4. 00:39:672 (3) - avoid overlap with 00:39:012 (1) - for visual matter, around 435|185 should be enough
5. 01:33:902 (4) - 01:34:562 (1) - why not 2 circles for consistency? these were the only two i've seen you mapped as 1/4 sliders on this whole instrumental section
6. 02:14:287 (3) - overmapped, there's no 1/4 rhythm and here and please make 02:14:617 - clickable for that strong drum
7. 02:16:265 (7) - NC, then remove NC on 02:16:924 - ,then NC again on 02:17:584 - ,and finally remove NC on 02:18:243 - for making it consistent (6 combo per color)
8. 03:04:562 - 03:04:644 - you missed those drums ;w;
9. 04:16:265 (2) - NC here as you have large gap with 04:14:946 (1) -
10. 04:41:155 (1,2,3) - vs. 04:42:144 (4,5,6) - why their distance different while the combo color is still the same? I can suggest adding NC on 04:42:144 (4) - or make 'em same spacing
11. 05:01:100 (1,2,3,4,5) - circular flow here plays kinda boring so ye add some interesting patterns instead like zig-zags or triangles or something
12. 05:23:446 (1) - this should be ended on 05:26:633 - for the ending vocals w

good luck and please tell KantanDez that he's gay