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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年9月13日 at 20:44:59

Artist: MAMI
Title: Kaze no Uta
Source: ニュートンと林檎の樹
Tags: sahuang my angel azusa misure momochikun opening newton to ringo no ki newrin Laplacian eroge visual novel
BPM: 200
Filesize: 6668kb
Play Time: 02:06
Difficulties Available:

Download: MAMI - Kaze no Uta
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Expert - sahuang
Insane - Misure
Hard - Momochikun
Normal, Extra - me
(non-standard sv-multiplier is used in extra)

try Asuka's set too ^^
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Extra
00:25:354 (1,2,3) - 感覺 https://puu.sh/wnJnp/127c9c8f85.png 會比較順手 ( i think this flow will be better.)
01:18:154 (1) - 打的時候覺得這個有點過快 ( I feel so fast.)


My Eng not good

圖很好打 學習了

抱歉我只找到這 唯有射星 :?
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Hi hi I'm here :3

Normal
• Why is the AiMod report so much spacing issues tho :o
00:25:354 (3,4) - Not such a big deal but I found ctrl + g these feels better, plus they can be more similar to 00:27:154 (2,3) - 00:23:554 (2,3) - as well. Same goes for the next pattern
01:04:354 (2,1,2,3,1) - The flow is kinda narrow. Might wanna make a star shape or somewhat wider?
01:08:854 - is this hitfinish really necessary? A hitwhistle is perfectly fine imo
01:27:454 (1) - The overlap is too deep inside the slider body. Just overlapping half the sliderend would be better.
01:41:854 (1) - curving the half end a bit more to make a good blanket shape http://puu.sh/wokiw/ffdc56ada5.jpg
02:03:625 (3) - I would NC this but it's up to you

Hard
00:27:754 (6) - Pointing it out is a better option tbh http://puu.sh/wokv6/d1a5017db4.jpg
00:27:604 (5) - Umm so the hihat sound is a bit louder, but mapping this and not 00:24:004 - feels inconsistent tho
00:33:154 (6) - I would choose to have 2 circles instead, such a pity to have 00:33:454 - unclickable
01:17:854 (5,6) - just curious shouldn't these 2 be mapped continuing with the pattern of 01:16:654 (1,2,3,4) - instead of changing?
02:03:625 (3) - NC maybe?

Insane
00:42:454 (1) - Usually you'll stack. How about stacking this too?
01:01:954 (3) - How about 2 circles to make them clickable for the vocal?
01:44:254 (3,1) - I'd recommend lowering the spacing a tiny bit for easier 1/4 noticing. 01:48:154 (1) - you even used smaller spacing for higher pitch beat here

Expert
00:14:104 (2,3) - Spacing is kinda big compare to other similar beats in the section. Consider reducing them
00:19:654 (3,4) - The only part where you don't use circle jumps. Why is that?
00:33:454 (1) - Just asking is this an apple? :d
01:29:854 (3) - why is the spacing here so enormous? Other hitfinish objects didn't even get that super high spacing
01:58:654 (4) - Should be just a circle. There is nothing on the slider end. Also to be consistent with 01:56:854 (4) -

Extra
00:24:154 (3) - Well the note is clearly different from 00:23:554 (1,2) - on pitch, so why not a different slider shape, or different flow to represent it?
00:33:454 (1) - Is it ok to make it super slow so sudden?
00:36:454 (1) - The 4 objects all express the hihat sound, so NC here is not really necessary tho

Kay quick bad mod for you. Good luck with the set
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Yamicchi wrote:

Insane
00:42:454 (1) - Usually you'll stack. How about stacking this too?
:arrow: ok fixed
01:01:954 (3) - How about 2 circles to make them clickable for the vocal?
:arrow: would like to emphasize 01:02:254 (1) - tbh so no change here
01:44:254 (3,1) - I'd recommend lowering the spacing a tiny bit for easier 1/4 noticing. 01:48:154 (1) - you even used smaller spacing for higher pitch beat here
:arrow: 2.1x DS will be nice here. As for the finally one I want to do something different to show rhythm change so did other things now for it


Thanks for your modding! :)

Codesu
Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 79804
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.18

[Metadata]
Title:Kaze no Uta
TitleUnicode:風の唄
Artist:MAMI
ArtistUnicode:MAMI
Creator:Garden
Version:Misure's Insane
Source:ニュートンと林檎の樹
Tags:sahuang my angel azusa misure momochikun opening newton to ringo no ki newrin Laplacian eroge visual novel
BeatmapID:1325132
BeatmapSetID:624037

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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还剩俩 要等明天了...我要去毕业典礼(
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* 00:44:854 (2) - 感觉应该往下面放一点,最好纵坐标比3来得更大,一方面可以避免没必要的读图障碍,另一方面也能按照音高走。e.g.
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* 00:55:054 (1,3) - 把1上下翻一下然后把3 ctrl+G,怎么样(当然前后的note做点微调)?这样的话1之前的note到1以及1~3就更加有华尔兹的感觉了。如图:
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* 01:16:654 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Nice! 不过最后一个滑条01:18:154 (1) - 的弧度好像应该小一点,和前面几个滑条搭一些



sahuang's Expert
* 00:30:454 (4) - 感觉1/2滑条或者两个单点会比较好...如果这里不这么改的话,00:32:254 (4) - 改成一个单点?不然00:30:604 - 和00:32:404 - 给人的松紧感与充盈感不太和谐...

* 00:33:454 (1) - 物理大师

* 00:49:354 (6) - ctrl+G? flow better

* 00:50:854 (2) - NC,很明显的断裂感

* 01:12:454 (1) - 这里为什么要NC...

* 01:16:654 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - 神马破

* 01:57:154 (5) - 根据前后的样子,只有这里和下面那里没有NC...最好加上

* 01:58:954 (5) - ^

* 02:02:104 (3,4) - 换个位置更好玩,不然原来四方跳难打而且还绕



Misure's Insane
* 00:33:454 (1) - 感觉这个能做得更有诚意一些,比方说翅膀啊音符啊苹果啊d/dx记号啊什么的

* 00:42:454 (1) - 角度不太自然...

* 00:57:604 (4) - 这个有点坑爹啊...初见被坑了一下,有点难受

* 01:19:804 (2,1) - spacing是不是有点小



Mochi's Hard
* 00:39:454 (3,4) - Blanket?

* 01:20:254 (3) - Suggest a NC here since the spacing has been increased after 2

* 01:34:654 (3) - Same as above

* 01:57:604 - You might want to add a note here, as the beat here is as strong as 01:57:754 -

* 02:02:104 (2,3,4,5) - What about making a perfect arc?

* Quite enjoyable! Nothing else to mention.



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* 02:03:250 (2,3) - 改成一个滑条比较好,因为这里的减速没法直接读出来,对Normal而言不友好

很爽
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M4M

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00:25:354 (1,2,3) - 感覺 https://puu.sh/wnJnp/127c9c8f85.png 會比較順手 ( i think this flow will be better.) 试着有意break flow表现曲调变化
01:18:154 (1) - 打的時候覺得這個有點過快 ( I feel so fast.) 第一次打可能反应不过来,多试几次感觉就没问题了


My Eng not good

圖很好打 學習了

抱歉我只找到這 唯有射星 :?


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• Why is the AiMod report so much spacing issues tho :o cuz I applied different distance snap to 1/2 and 1/1 gap
00:25:354 (3,4) - Not such a big deal but I found ctrl + g these feels better, plus they can be more similar to 00:27:154 (2,3) - 00:23:554 (2,3) - as well. Same goes for the next pattern i want some rhythm variation here, 00:23:554 (2,3) - 00:27:154 (2,3) - are consistent and so are 00:25:354 (3,4) - 00:28:954 (3,4) -
01:04:354 (2,1,2,3,1) - The flow is kinda narrow. Might wanna make a star shape or somewhat wider? yea flow is intended to be narrow as an obvious transition to a new section
01:08:854 - is this hitfinish really necessary? A hitwhistle is perfectly fine imo um i would keep this for now, i think it sounds okay with some volume control
01:27:454 (1) - The overlap is too deep inside the slider body. Just overlapping half the sliderend would be better. yes
01:41:854 (1) - curving the half end a bit more to make a good blanket shape http://puu.sh/wokiw/ffdc56ada5.jpg can't tell much difference but i tried
02:03:625 (3) - I would NC this but it's up to you yup i agree


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00:24:154 (3) - Well the note is clearly different from 00:23:554 (1,2) - on pitch, so why not a different slider shape, or different flow to represent it? yes but it's kinda hard to change the flow structure so I only modified the shape a bit
00:33:454 (1) - Is it ok to make it super slow so sudden? i think it works well as a significant transition to calm section
00:36:454 (1) - The 4 objects all express the hihat sound, so NC here is not really necessary tho right

Kay quick bad mod for you. Good luck with the set


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先给牛顿盖个棺材板

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pw384 wrote:
流下了不会微积分的泪水


Extra
* 00:44:854 (2) - 感觉应该往下面放一点,最好纵坐标比3来得更大,一方面可以避免没必要的读图障碍,另一方面也能按照音高走。e.g. 整体调整了下
img
Image


* 00:55:054 (1,3) - 把1上下翻一下然后把3 ctrl+G,怎么样(当然前后的note做点微调)?这样的话1之前的note到1以及1~3就更加有华尔兹的感觉了。如图: 感觉一下蹦太远了,这一段还是不想增加太多额外的移动压力,而且 00:55:054 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 的结构看上去也挺好
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* 01:16:654 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Nice! 不过最后一个滑条01:18:154 (1) - 的弧度好像应该小一点,和前面几个滑条搭一些 忽然同时加大弧度和速度感觉更有力一些!


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* 02:03:250 (2,3) - 改成一个滑条比较好,因为这里的减速没法直接读出来,对Normal而言不友好 在理

很爽
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补上另外两个 nokds

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  • 00:33:454 (1) - 这个减速有点狠吧... 和后面进kiai加速一样,狠一点才有过渡的感觉
  • 01:48:754 (4,5,1) - 其实这种flow十分不好打,01:49:054 (1) - 更多的人大概会更接受这个ctrl+G,而且ctrl+G以后flow更顺一些
    是故意作难的flow,突出强调这里的vocal,我个人还是挺喜欢这个梗的
  • 01:59:854 (1,2,3,4) - 02:00:754 (1,2,3,4) - 视觉上有些不等距... 额看上去还行啊,下面那组好像有那么一点,我下次更新的时候修一下
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extra没改啥,还是谢谢啦 :)
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  • 00:26:254 (1) - Well, I could raise up the shape of the slider, just grabbing the red tick and dragging it very close to the "3", currently it is without any connection on the "3" giving an impression of overlap as I see it, I did an example of how it improves visually Click Here , and reinforce the direction for next note lol
  • idk If this is really important to quote 00:31:954 (2,4,1) - but u can stack this three notes on slider end this note 00:29:854 (1) - ?
  • 00:43:354 (2,3,4) - :
    I feel that here at this point 00:43:504 - need something clicable precisely because it has a breathing occasioned from that point, and it intensifies here 00:43:654 - , well i could try this Patternif u wanna apply my suggestion
  • 00:55:504 (2,2) - Well, it was the only notes that were stacked in the slider end, unlike the large majority that was at the beginning of the sliders, because it could just use a slower part to put distance and rhythm in focus, but since that part is a bit more "energetic" than the previous one I think it's best to distance them graduatively to reinforce the change of speed / intensity of music.
  • 01:02:254 (1) - u can rotate this slider -11º degrees to leave a perfect blanket and the end slider to be aligned with 2 Preview
  • 01:16:054 (1) - I don't think it was a good idea to use this 3/4 because there is a beat that was ignored at that point 01:16:204 - But if you want to keep that slider, you can increase the speed of the slider, so that the slider end fixes at that point that I indicated
  • 01:19:354 (5) - u can put a NC here to emphasize a 1/1 pause like u did here 01:18:454 (1,1) - ?
  • 01:26:554 (1) - u can move too this note to this Coordinate X268 Y228 to equal distance beetween this notes?
  • 01:33:754 (1,2,1,2) - The volume of the drum is relatively high, and in the music is very low, to reinforce that ds the volume has to be low in a certain way?
  • 01:34:354 (1) - I believe that here, it had to be 2 notes instead of a 1/2 slider because the vocal speaks just one word of 3 syllables, do not you think it is better to reinforce the vocal?
  • 01:49:954 (1) - u can transform this 1/1 slider into a 2 1/2 slider to review the previous rhythm, like that 00:23:554 (1,2,3) -


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Mochi's Hard





nothing to add on normal.

thank you for this garden i'm wish best luck for ya!
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pw384 wrote:

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* 00:33:454 (1) - 感觉这个能做得更有诚意一些,比方说翅膀啊音符啊苹果啊d/dx记号啊什么的
:arrow: 拉了几个都好丑orz 结果还是换成了个原始的形状(并没有艺术细胞orz)
* 00:42:454 (1) - 角度不太自然...
:arrow: 诶 感觉还好呃O O
* 00:57:604 (4) - 这个有点坑爹啊...初见被坑了一下,有点难受
:arrow: 这里想搞个梗 左右搓然后空拍的感觉
* 01:19:804 (2,1) - spacing是不是有点小
:arrow: a 是想过渡一下 于是干脆直接stack了


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  • Well the only thing I recommend for this diff is if you can move some notes to certain coordinates to improve the aesthetic view:
  • 00:43:654 (2) - x186 y150 to just stack with 00:45:154 (1) -
    :arrow: here I prefer to focus on the distance
  • 00:51:904 (2,3) - and move these to x340 y40 to slider end on 3 stay on center of 00:52:354 (1) - like that !Click here
  • 00:55:654 (3) - x180 y152 with same reason^
    :arrow: did some for both
  • 01:01:354 (1) - small observation this slider1/2 with reverse should be a 1/1 slider like these others 00:58:654 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ? o_O
    :arrow: just want to add some variety xd also the rhythm changed after this so it will be ok
  • 01:18:454 (1) - and this into another 3/4 because occasionally you are ignoring a strong beat that is occurring here 01:18:754 -
    :arrow: in fact I would like to emphasize vocal so umm
  • 01:24:304 (2,3) - plssss move this to x440 y164 to equal distance on all these notes 01:24:304 (2,3,1,2,3) - PLS PLS LOOK HERE
    :arrow: the tail of slider is unclickable so it will seem close than others when playing, so this will be suitable for play imo
  • 01:39:754 (3,3) - idk, i think its a overlap :/?
    :arrow: umm maybe not so noticeable also it's hard to fix that lol
  • 01:50:404 (2,4) - and these to x282 y86 to make a equal distance between 01:49:504 (2,3) -
    :arrow: whatever xdd



Thanks everyone! :)

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