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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年8月3日 at 0:45:58

Artist: Fujita Akane, Miyamoto Yume, Ozawa Ari
Title: Precious You*
Source: ロクでなし魔術講師と禁忌教典
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BPM: 130
Filesize: 16130kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  • Easy (1.39 stars, 91 notes)
  • Hard (2.7 stars, 211 notes)
  • Insane (3.58 stars, 307 notes)
  • Normal (1.71 stars, 130 notes)

Download: Fujita Akane, Miyamoto Yume, Ozawa Ari - Precious You*
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#18 <Precious You☆>, the ending of <ロクでなし魔術講師と禁忌教典>.
All diffs by myself.
Opening by Rizia

Thanks Shad0w1and for providing me the mp3 and video!
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Last edited by Koiyuki on , edited 15 times in total.
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metadata: the artist is too long to submit, comfirmed with KwaN and only use CV's name as the artist.
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Koiyuki wrote:
thanks 虾抖烂的 for providing me the mp3 and video!

我是烂的


Insane
00:04:016 - 考虑切断强调这个音
00:04:709 - 00:04:939 - 可以考虑跟
00:41:632 - 提前切断?
00:43:016 - 给成两个1/4短滑条?这个beat最好点一下
01:27:324 - 建议给个点击,note或者1/2滑条都好

Hard
01:24:209 - 感觉应该切开
01:27:324 - 和i一样

Normal
00:46:939 (5,6) - 可以包好点
00:57:093 (2,3) -
01:00:786 (3,4) -
01:20:170 (3,4) - 脱了DS,弄回1.0

Easy
00:01:709 (2) - 包
00:19:247 (1) - 不太好看,微调下

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/586296
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Normal
  • 00:34:016 (1) - 这滑条也是自身重合多了点
  • 00:36:093 (2) - 你基本上都只跟鼓,那其实原曲并没有鼓,只有vocal,并不一定非得这样强调,所以1跟2我觉得还是换滑条比较好,而且nm里连续4个1/2的clickable尽管bpm低也有点
  • 00:58:939 (4,5,6) - 考虑原曲中鼓位置,这里节奏ctrl+G会比较好,00:59:632 - 这里没鼓


Hard


Insane
  • 00:22:247 (6) - 这里还挺明显是4个音……是不能再加一次折返了是吗我不太清楚
  • 00:53:401 (4) - 拆成俩1/4?
  • 00:55:593 (9) - 这个感觉删掉比较好?如果说是为了vocal的“s”感觉也有点牵强,背景音来讲肯定是overmap,打起来空空的

GL
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虾抖烂的
Shad0w1and wrote:
Koiyuki wrote:
thanks 虾抖烂的 for providing me the mp3 and video!

我是烂的


Insane
00:04:016 - 考虑切断强调这个音 前奏不考虑 这里跟不太舒服
00:04:709 - 00:04:939 - 可以考虑跟
00:41:632 - 提前切断?考虑一下
00:43:016 - 给成两个1/4短滑条?这个beat最好点一下 有这想法但是有点难摆,我考虑考虑
01:27:324 - 建议给个点击,note或者1/2滑条都好 可以

Hard
01:24:209 - 感觉应该切开 no
01:27:324 - 和i一样 no

Normal
00:46:939 (5,6) - 可以包好点
00:57:093 (2,3) -
01:00:786 (3,4) - 姐姐这些不是blanket
01:20:170 (3,4) - 脱了DS,弄回1.0 ok

Easy
00:01:709 (2) - 包 fixed
00:19:247 (1) - 不太好看,微调下 没啥好调的

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/586296


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Easy


Normal
  • 00:34:016 (1) - 这滑条也是自身重合多了点 hmm
  • 00:36:093 (2) - 你基本上都只跟鼓,那其实原曲并没有鼓,只有vocal,并不一定非得这样强调,所以1跟2我觉得还是换滑条比较好,而且nm里连续4个1/2的clickable尽管bpm低也有点 不改 我个人觉得这种强调更好 而且normal也没几个1/2单点
  • 00:58:939 (4,5,6) - 考虑原曲中鼓位置,这里节奏ctrl+G会比较好,00:59:632 - 这里没鼓 ^


Hard


Insane
  • 00:22:247 (6) - 这里还挺明显是4个音……是不能再加一次折返了是吗我不太清楚 en, 确保安全所以没加
  • 00:53:401 (4) - 拆成俩1/4? 可以说我个人dt有点累了所以这里就下的简单了点2333
  • 00:55:593 (9) - 这个感觉删掉比较好?如果说是为了vocal的“s”感觉也有点牵强,背景音来讲肯定是overmap,打起来空空的 还好吧

GL


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hello, don't hit me for my english :x

General
00:59:747 - why u divide this kiai, this point is useless imo

Insane
00:15:324 - i want to see this sliderend more clickable, here is the same sound
00:17:286 (7) , 0017:786 (2) and other - i hear here is a 1\6 rhythm, have nothing against this, but... hm ok seems fine
00:22:016 (5) - why here is so small spacing? it's very good sound, something like this will be more better
00:31:247 (3) - same as 00:15:324 -
00:41:632 - you can highlight this vocal by a sliderend imo
00:59:632 (4) - quiet sound, can you reduce spacing here

Hard
01:03:555 (1) - i think u can map this vocal http://puu.sh/wiKOi/a53af5a678.jpg

Normal
00:04:478 (1) - move this slider to the left

Easy
well, i can find nothing

good luck!
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asdfasdf

Easy


  • 00:00:324 (1) - I'm really unsure about this. You've only used 1/2 in 00:58:939 (4) - , and overall map has only used simple rhythm structure, especially in kiai, overall rhythm was 1/1 and 2/1. However using 1/2 slider at the beginning can break the rhythmical balance of map, so I strongly recommend to use 1/1.
  • 00:37:709 (1) - flow can be bit hard, consider changing like this

Normal


Hard



Insane




I like the kiai on Insane diff, gl!
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M4M :3


General
  • 00:00:786 - You've here stacked TS with different volumes and hitsounds sets on every diff.


Easy


Normal


Hard


Insane

Overall, this is very good mapset! I think you can call me back If I'll pass BN test, but I think it's not very realistic scenario xD
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Free short mod for My Angel Rumia


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omg ban this illust


Normal
00:42:093 (2,3,4) - 1/2 + 1/1 or 1/2 + circle + 1/2 isn't better considering your rhythm use and drumbeat?


Hard
00:29:401 (3) - can give HS in reversepoint i think?
00:45:093 (1,2,3,4) - vs 00:59:862 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm is entirely different
01:03:093 (4,1) - stack


Insane
00:17:747 (2) - 00:26:978 (2) - i liked 00:15:555 (1,2) - just this 1/2 gap

my modding skill is too suck and map is cool
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  • 音效太小聲了, 聽得不太清楚 試著調大聲點吧


Easy



Normal



Hard



GL
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insane
我覺得把00:55:363 (7) - 刪了的話這段來得更帶感


normal
01:10:478 (6) - 這個可以換成一個circle在白線

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hello, don't hit me for my english :x

General
00:59:747 - why u divide this kiai, this point is useless imo for origin skin

Insane
00:15:324 - i want to see this sliderend more clickable, here is the same sound well after a 1/8 tick i'd like to make it easier to catch
00:17:286 (7) , 0017:786 (2) and other - i hear here is a 1\6 rhythm, have nothing against this, but... hm ok seems fine omg i'd like to communicate with other bns it's not a necessary thing to fix imo, 1/4 plays much better
00:22:016 (5) - why here is so small spacing? it's very good sound, something like this will be more better yea because my style cant let me find other place to place...orz
00:31:247 (3) - same as 00:15:324 - afterjump is also an emphasis
00:41:632 - you can highlight this vocal by a sliderend imo hmm i have no idea how to change
00:59:632 (4) - quiet sound, can you reduce spacing here not every quite sound need small space, here i'd like to emphasize the vocal

Hard
01:03:555 (1) - i think u can map this vocal http://puu.sh/wiKOi/a53af5a678.jpg ok

Normal
00:04:478 (1) - move this slider to the left ok

Easy
well, i can find nothing

good luck!


Cellina
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asdfasdf

Easy


  • 00:00:324 (1) - I'm really unsure about this. You've only used 1/2 in 00:58:939 (4) - , and overall map has only used simple rhythm structure, especially in kiai, overall rhythm was 1/1 and 2/1. However using 1/2 slider at the beginning can break the rhythmical balance of map, so I strongly recommend to use 1/1. just because here is 1/2
  • 00:37:709 (1) - flow can be bit hard, consider changing like this
imo there is no flow in the easy

Normal

  • 00:04:478 (1,2) - this can be bit hard to read due to stack did some changes
  • 00:35:862 (1,2,3,4) - it can be bit hard but idk blablabla the only part in normal to click 1/2s, i think it's fine
  • 00:52:478 (1,2) - imo this part should be bit harder in order to fit the music, also harder parts to easier here

Hard



Insane




I like the kiai on Insane diff, gl!


Venix
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M4M :3


General
  • 00:00:786 - You've here stacked TS with different volumes and hitsounds sets on every diff. ??


Easy


Normal


Hard


Insane

Overall, this is very good mapset! I think you can call me back If I'll pass BN test, but I think it's not very realistic scenario xD


Left
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Free short mod for My Angel Rumia


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omg ban this illust omg i cant ps


Normal
00:42:093 (2,3,4) - 1/2 + 1/1 or 1/2 + circle + 1/2 isn't better considering your rhythm use and drumbeat? !nice, fixed


Hard
00:29:401 (3) - can give HS in reversepoint i think? k
00:45:093 (1,2,3,4) - vs 00:59:862 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm is entirely different because i dont like to map the same
01:03:093 (4,1) - stack fixed


Insane
00:17:747 (2) - 00:26:978 (2) - i liked 00:15:555 (1,2) - just this 1/2 gap lol

my modding skill is too suck and map is cool


kisses
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General

  • 音效太小聲了, 聽得不太清楚 試著調大聲點吧
我感觉够了啊,可能我耳机比较明显lol


Easy



Normal



Hard



GL


@rizia, all fixed
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that's unrankable D:
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