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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Senin, 18 September 2017 at 22.02.52

Artist: Maaya Sakamoto
Title: Sanagi
Tags: FOLLOW ME UP 北川勝利 Katsutoshi Kitagawa Flying Dog Pupa Chrysalis Delis avmidfvurtrtdrk Frostmourne FrostxE GhostFY yaldo_27
BPM: 160
Filesize: 11222kb
Play Time: 04:18
Difficulties Available:

Download: Maaya Sakamoto - Sanagi
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Normal by Frostmourne
Insane by Delis
Storyboard by GhostFY

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Last edited by Yohanes on , edited 26 times in total.
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:3 xD >w< ;w; :^) :V
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dog delis

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idk whats this


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honestly i don't like ar9 here, 160 bpm is too low for it.
tested 8.7 and it feels much better for me
01:08:642 (1) - hitnormal!
01:25:329 (1) - hitfinish!
02:35:079 (7,2,4,6) - suggesting to hitfinish them(soft), or chose your own places, i think it will fit here o.o! same for 02:40:704 (4) -
03:48:392 (2) - idk you can place it 03:49:329 (1) - movement from slider will be better maybe
hs mod bcs fc on 9/10 chances


Delis
ar8 is good here pls keep
01:39:579 (1,2) - it feels much better clicking an actual doublets than a fucking slider on blue tik thanks
02:12:579 (1,2) - swap pls for vocals and for not breaking square
02:14:642 (2) - heeey whistle drum
02:16:142 (1) - same i see no reason to not do it the way like normies do
02:32:079 (1,2,3,4,1) - tief
02:48:204 (8) - fuck i thought its after a 3/4 slider note and got 50!~ place it like you always do near next slider


Hard
00:53:641 (1) - it feels empty when you leave it like that with 0 hitsounds. normal whistle all 3 heads!
02:43:141 (6,1) - aaaa swap i almost clicked like its 1/2
03:53:454 (2,1) - idk overlap i'd cover it more


Frostmourne
01:38:454 (2,3) - you can try this rhythm, fits better for me http://i.imgur.com/TyB0Zor.png
04:12:016 (1) - end it on 04:18:579 like all others in this spread
Last edited by Mirash on , edited 5 times in total.
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知らない!!!!
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14:41 Yohanes: Shiranai?
14:41 Yohanes: shiranai shiranai?
14:41 Yohanes: Mako Shiranai???
14:44 Shiranai: 知らない!!!!
14:44 Shiranai: 知らん
14:45 Yohanes: しらない wwww
14:46 Shiranai: パパ知らない!
14:49 Yohanes: わかりません
14:50 Shiranai: wwww
14:50 Yohanes: btw
14:50 Yohanes: boleh minta testplay nggak?
14:50 *Yohanes is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1299081 Maaya Sakamoto - Sanagi]
14:50 Yohanes: :D
14:52 Shiranai: いいえ
14:52 Shiranai: :D
14:52 Shiranai: Bayar!!!!
14:52 Yohanes: pay for play
14:53 Shiranai: Bentar download
14:53 Yohanes: not nice
14:53 Yohanes: ._.
14:53 Shiranai: :(
14:53 Yohanes: kayyyyyy
14:53 Yohanes: butterfly ya
14:53 Yohanes: :D
14:54 Shiranai: Kok gambarnya pahaaaa
14:54 Yohanes: :D
14:55 Yohanes: :D
15:00 Shiranai: むずかしいすぎるzzz
15:00 Yohanes: わかりません
15:01 Yohanes: :D
15:01 Shiranai: :D
15:01 Shiranai: 00:49:329 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ini ga pake nc aja? 
15:02 Shiranai: Kaya 1,2 1,1 gitu
15:02 Shiranai: Aku kaget sama jumpnya hahaha
15:03 Shiranai: 02:04:329 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Dibandingin sama yang pertama yang ini jumpnya lebih kecil lol 
15:03 Shiranai: 何でだろう?
15:04 Yohanes: hmm nc oke juga sih
15:04 Yohanes: applied!
15:04 Yohanes: nggak juga ah
15:04 Yohanes: kalo diliat 1-1, yg kedua lebih besar malah xd
15:05 Shiranai: :(
15:05 Shiranai: 02:37:329 (1) - Ini ga ctrl+g aja? 
15:05 Shiranai: Kayanya flownya lebih enak kalo circular
15:06 Yohanes: aku lebih suka pake back and forth disitu
15:06 Yohanes: soalnya suara finish nya sharp
15:06 Shiranai: Sharp mah merk tv
15:07 Yohanes: kulkas juga
15:08 Shiranai: 02:42:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Ritme streamnya ga kaya gini aja? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8141090
15:09 Shiranai: Kayanya lebih cocok kalo 7,8 agak jump gitu
15:09 Yohanes: hmm, itu bisa juga sih sebenernya
15:10 Shiranai: Bagian 1/4 slidernya aneh bgt -_-
15:10 Yohanes: tapi aku lebih prefer bikin build up stream disana
15:10 Yohanes: emang agak aneh sih
15:10 Yohanes: hmmm
15:10 Yohanes: ntar aku pikirin deh
15:11 Yohanes: soalnya kalo pake ritme kaya yg kamu kasih, rasanya terlalu empty
15:11 Yohanes: somehow
15:12 Shiranai: Aku udah ga bisa modding lagi wkwk
15:12 Shiranai: Itu aja sih kayanya
15:13 Yohanes: wkwkwk :D
15:13 Shiranai: Siniiii bayar
15:13 Yohanes: oke deh, thank you Makoo....... Shiranai
15:13 Yohanes: kudos :D
15:13 Yohanes: post
15:14 Yohanes: 1 kds = 100rb
15:14 Shiranai: OK
15:14 Yohanes: Yohanes' kudos converter
15:14 Shiranai: ;)
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Delis, AR8 is complicate :o
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Unless her bust size is somehow rational and normalized I won't be able to mod this map. THANKS :)
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Unless her bust size is somehow rational and normalized I won't be able to mod this map. THANKS :)

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sorry for super late i totally forgot ;;

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03:07:048 - bugged break extension

For stuff like 00:14:454 (3,1) - , 00:26:454 (3,1) - , etc. maybe swap NC to line up with the composition better? If you do this maybe also add an NC to 00:15:579 (2) - etc.

Really think 02:27:392 (4,5,6,7) - detracts too much from the strong vocals, esp when up to this point you've been using the same rhythm for this part. I think you should just stick with the 02:15:392 (4,5,6) - for this vocal.

Please don't skip over the 01:27:298 - drumbeats ;w; really don't see any benefit to mapping parts like this with just 1/2 jumps, the only thing happening rn is the drumline. This happens later in the map as well iirc. (not talking about stuff like 03:22:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - where other instruments take priority, just the parts that are exclusively drums)

uh i guess that's it for this diff, bc its so simple I don't have much but general stuff

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gd'ers diffs are too removed from my preferences for me to give any helpful advice, sorry for tiny mod :c
Good luck~
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Mirash wrote:
dog delis

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idk whats this I'll figure this out later


Butterfly
honestly i don't like ar9 here, 160 bpm is too low for it.
tested 8.7 and it feels much better for me Eeeee? I like them with AR 9 besides, my other maps that are around this bpm are all using AR 9. ( I also want to avoid decimal AR if possible)
01:08:642 (1) - hitnormal!
01:25:329 (1) - hitfinish! not nreally needed here because no prominent cymbal
02:35:079 (7,2,4,6) - suggesting to hitfinish them(soft), or chose your own places, i think it will fit here o.o! same for 02:40:704 (4) - I actually pretty like them as they're now, but I'll try to think about this
03:48:392 (2) - idk you can place it 03:49:329 (1) - movement from slider will be better maybe
hs mod bcs fc on 9/10 chances pro


Hard
00:53:641 (1) - it feels empty when you leave it like that with 0 hitsounds. normal whistle all 3 heads! aaaaaa I tend not to use normal whistle on my map, but lets ee
02:43:141 (6,1) - aaaa swap i almost clicked like its 1/2 its fine imo :3
03:53:454 (2,1) - idk overlap i'd cover it more

UndeadCapulet wrote:
sorry for super late i totally forgot ;;

Butterfly


03:07:048 - bugged break extension

For stuff like 00:14:454 (3,1) - , 00:26:454 (3,1) - , etc. maybe swap NC to line up with the composition better? If you do this maybe also add an NC to 00:15:579 (2) - etc. hmmm, I like to keep them as they're to be honest

Really think 02:27:392 (4,5,6,7) - detracts too much from the strong vocals, esp when up to this point you've been using the same rhythm for this part. I think you should just stick with the 02:15:392 (4,5,6) - for this vocal. alright changed

Please don't skip over the 01:27:298 - drumbeats ;w; really don't see any benefit to mapping parts like this with just 1/2 jumps, the only thing happening rn is the drumline. This happens later in the map as well iirc. (not talking about stuff like 03:22:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - where other instruments take priority, just the parts that are exclusively drums) I must've missed this, thanks

uh i guess that's it for this diff, bc its so simple I don't have much but general stuff

---

gd'ers diffs are too removed from my preferences for me to give any helpful advice, sorry for tiny mod :c
Good luck~

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Thanks Mirash and UC, sorry for the late reply
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Frostmourne
01:38:454 (2,3) - you can try this rhythm, fits better for me http://i.imgur.com/TyB0Zor.png
04:12:016 (1) - end it on 04:18:579 like all others in this spread
fixed all for my part thank you!
Frostmourne's Normal
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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 203173
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.800006

[Metadata]
Title:Sanagi
TitleUnicode:さなぎ
Artist:Maaya Sakamoto
ArtistUnicode:坂本真綾
Creator:Yohanes
Version:Frostmourne's Normal
Source:
Tags:FOLLOW ME UP 北川勝利 Katsutoshi Kitagawa Flying Dog Pupa Chrysalis Delis Frostmourne FrostxE GhostFY yaldo_27
BeatmapID:1299084
BeatmapSetID:615921

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

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0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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227829,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
251829,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0


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Combo3 : 17,254,176
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Amazing Song + Full ver + Full Spread? This lad is out of control.

Butterfly
00:57:017 (2,3) - Change this to a slider to emphasize the vocal? I think it fits really well. (You did this on 01:05:642 (1,2,3) - hmmmm)
01:06:954 (6) - I know that you're trying to change the flow here, but the this looks so weird. Maybe just flip it?
02:06:579 (6,7,8,9,10) - should be constant 1/4 on every ticks, though not every ticks need to be clickable. My Suggestion http://i.imgur.com/X5VRPtF.png

02:09:017 (2,3) - inconsistent composition from the previous kiai. Make this a slider?
02:18:954 (9) - blue tick is audible, a triplet?

02:43:329 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think you can reflect the music better here
02:44:454 (5,3) - should be 1/2 sliders, 02:45:579 (6) - should be circles and perform a jump. My take on it http://i.imgur.com/nsm2P7X.png
02:46:142 (1) - should be circles as well

02:47:267 (4,5,6) - I think this triplet is on the wrong timeline lol, if you listen closely the drum is on the blue tick before and ends on the red tick after. but your triplet starts on the red tick and the blue tick after is silent. 02:48:392 (5,6,7) - for example everything after follows what I said here.

03:22:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - should be one long stream (make it look like this 02:56:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - because this stream looks so delicious seriously, I want to tap it)

04:08:267 (6) - this one looks weird why not just flip it


This map is fun to play, though a little bit jumpy.

Good luck with your mapset :)
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00:08:267 (5,6) - maybe tone down on the spacing here by a little bit as 00:07:704 (2) - had the same sound but not nearly the same emphaisis by spacing

01:19:704 (2) -maybe find a way to give this note more sapcing like you did at 01:18:204 (3) -

01:23:267 (5,6) - This increase in spacing feels way too high, tone it down a bit

01:56:454 (3,4) - spacing of these 2 notes should be lower than 01:56:642 (4,5) - , if you want to keep following that sapcing emphasis for heavy frum beats

02:03:767 (4,5) - Also feels too big imo

02:18:954 (9) - this should be a triple

02:14:642 (1,2,3,4) - You could do something like http://i.imgur.com/x1JzAbE.png to still keep the sapcing emphasis you use at 02:13:142 (1,2,3,4) - and 02:13:892 (4,5,6,1) -

02:46:142 (1,2,3) - These feel really important (head and tail), so space them more or just jumps could also work

02:46:892 (3,4) - something on this blue tick, you don't have to map it but just putting it here in the case that you want to

03:22:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - stream pls

03:46:142 (1) - Also should be a triple

04:05:454 (5) - Would just make this a 1/2 slider as there is a sound on the red tick but not the blue tick where you are currently ending the slider

04:07:892 (5,6) - previously in the same part you put the cymbal sounds on tails like at 04:05:829 (1,2) -, try to be consistent and choose one of the 2


cool map and nice storyboarding
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Amazing Song + Full ver + Full Spread? This lad is out of control.

Butterfly
00:57:017 (2,3) - Change this to a slider to emphasize the vocal? I think it fits really well. (You did this on 01:05:642 (1,2,3) - hmmmm) I can totally see your point here, but some reason I want this particular section to have the jump between them. Also, I think the vocal is adequately emphasized here ;thinking;
01:06:954 (6) - I know that you're trying to change the flow here, but the this looks so weird. Maybe just flip it? I personally think that one is fine, no change for now
02:06:579 (6,7,8,9,10) - should be constant 1/4 on every ticks, though not every ticks need to be clickable. My Suggestion http://i.imgur.com/X5VRPtF.png Yeah, it is. But I want to place jump on them to make the transition towards kiai more dramatic

02:09:017 (2,3) - inconsistent composition from the previous kiai. Make this a slider? I used to have a slider there, but I don't really like how they plays for some reason. Let's say that this is for variety lol
02:18:954 (9) - blue tick is audible, a triplet? I love the pattern there, and I think those section would benefitting more to have those kind of pattern instead of changing it into a triplet as there'll be more flow to it

02:43:329 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think you can reflect the music better here I'm trying. I also still looking for ways to improve that section
02:44:454 (5,3) - should be 1/2 sliders, 02:45:579 (6) - should be circles and perform a jump. My take on it http://i.imgur.com/nsm2P7X.png Hmm, I'll think about it, no change for now
02:46:142 (1) - should be circles as well

02:47:267 (4,5,6) - I think this triplet is on the wrong timeline lol, if you listen closely the drum is on the blue tick before and ends on the red tick after. but your triplet starts on the red tick and the blue tick after is silent. 02:48:392 (5,6,7) - for example everything after follows what I said here. Oh, you're right. But imo, the way guitar sound on that section makes my rhythm choice justifiable somehow

03:22:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - should be one long stream (make it look like this 02:56:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - because this stream looks so delicious seriously, I want to tap it) I want to emphasize the jump on 03:22:704 - and 03:22:892 (5) - as I think they're more prominent

04:08:267 (6) - this one looks weird why not just flip it I originally thought this was a good idea, but I'm wrong lol. changed

Thank you for the mod! Your mod points out many valid points, but I'd keep my choice more because of personal preferences
This map is fun to play, though a little bit jumpy.

Good luck with your mapset :)

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Image Butterfly

00:08:267 (5,6) - maybe tone down on the spacing here by a little bit as 00:07:704 (2) - had the same sound but not nearly the same emphaisis by spacing reduced by tiny amount

01:19:704 (2) -maybe find a way to give this note more sapcing like you did at 01:18:204 (3) - same, there're not much that I can do without touching the health bar

01:23:267 (5,6) - This increase in spacing feels way too high, tone it down a bit I personally think they're fine, because of how flow builds up to them

01:56:454 (3,4) - spacing of these 2 notes should be lower than 01:56:642 (4,5) - , if you want to keep following that sapcing emphasis for heavy frum beats hmm, thats true but Its not really that big of a deal xd

02:03:767 (4,5) - Also feels too big imo yeah, its rather big. But I still think they're justifiable considering how strong the emphasis there

02:18:954 (9) - this should be a triple gave my reasoning in previous mod ^^^

02:14:642 (1,2,3,4) - You could do something like http://i.imgur.com/x1JzAbE.png to still keep the sapcing emphasis you use at 02:13:142 (1,2,3,4) - and 02:13:892 (4,5,6,1) - I don't reallt like how they flows & looks, sorry ;;

02:46:142 (1,2,3) - These feel really important (head and tail), so space them more or just jumps could also work they have different kind of flow compared to the rest of the map, so I think that's enough

02:46:892 (3,4) - something on this blue tick, you don't have to map it but just putting it here in the case that you want to keep mine lol

03:22:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - stream pls I want to emphasize the jump on 03:22:704 - and 03:22:892 (5) - as I think they're more prominent

03:46:142 (1) - Also should be a triple I personally like the slider there, but I'll see of what I can do

04:05:454 (5) - Would just make this a 1/2 slider as there is a sound on the red tick but not the blue tick where you are currently ending the slider I want it to have similar feeling compared to the similar sounding / feeling section

04:07:892 (5,6) - previously in the same part you put the cymbal sounds on tails like at 04:05:829 (1,2) -, try to be consistent and choose one of the 2 on that one, I want to emphasize the piano sound, rather than the drum


cool map and nice storyboarding Thank you!

Thank you for the mod guys! Really appreciate that :D
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General
  • 03:08:829 - Timing sounds off, feels like the offset should be later in this section

Easy
  • 01:38:454 (2,3) - Maybe move the (2) to the left and then place the (3) in a way that doesn't overlap because the ovarlap looks ugly imo
  • 02:35:829 (1) - I don't think this slider is necessary as nothing in the music is really prominent here


Normal
  • 00:02:079 (1) - Think it would look nicer if this was at x:316 y:176, so 00:02:079 (1,2,3) - form a curve
  • 00:27:579 (2,3) - I think the overlap of these two is ugly, moving the (3) down would resolve this
  • 01:57:204 (2,3) - i think having as a repeat slider instead would better follow the vocals and drums whilst also cutting out the empty space the current pattern has
  • 02:11:641 (3) - I think this would look nicer if moved down a tiny bit to better follow the direction the player is already heading
  • 02:24:766 (1,2) - Ugly overlap


Butterfly
  • 00:04:329 (1) - Either have this overlap more with previous sliderend or forget about the overlap and blanket it with the sliderend so it is more visually pleasing
  • 02:47:829 (2,3) - Make a triple so the guitar at 02:47:923 - is followed
  • 03:29:267 (4,5) - I would reduce spacing here so that the spacing builds up until the end of this vocal phrase


That's all from me, GL
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