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ITSUHA. - SELEN - Reverse World -Extend Ver.- [OsuMania]

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akuma123
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 11 de octubre de 2017 at 05:14:46 p.m.

Artist: ITSUHA.
Title: SELEN - Reverse World -Extend Ver.-
Tags: trance core space piano
BPM: 77.5
Filesize: 7905kb
Play Time: 05:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Reverse - 4Key (4.93 stars, 4450 notes)
Download: ITSUHA. - SELEN - Reverse World -Extend Ver.-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For rank UwU

Number of Mods: 12
Umo-
NM req from imtdb1's modding queue
1|2|3|4
Reverse
Set a preview time in the map please 01:14:586 meybe?
00:24:780 - please remove this speed change
00:50:328 (50328|2) Ghost note, remove it
01:14:748 - double notes dont fit there. make the pattern something like this
01:17:505 - ^
01:20:100 - ^
01:21:397 - ^
01:22:289 - why did you place a double here? Make it 1 note chord
01:22:532 - ^
01:22:857 - ^
01:23:667 - imo you can replace those notes with LN's like this
01:25:289 - same as 01:14:789
01:26:586 - ^
01:27:884 - ^
01:29:262 - 01:29:343 - why did you place doubles here if you alredy followed strong sounds at 01:29:181 with doubles?
01:29:991 - 01:29:992 - ^
01:30:478 - if you want to have doubles here resnap them to 1/2
okay my osu messed up so I will probably come back to mod the rest or you just poke me ingame if you wanna do irc when I'm online
Topic Starter
akuma123

imtdb1 wrote:

NM req from imtdb1's modding queue
1|2|3|4
Reverse
Set a preview time in the map please 01:14:586 meybe? I choose another point for the preview but thanks for remind me that xD
00:24:780 - please remove this speed change If more people told me the same thing i will do it
00:50:328 (50328|2) Ghost note, remove it Done
01:14:748 - double notes dont fit there. make the pattern something like this Nope sorry, i preffer putting doubles on the synthesizer rather than do it on the beats, i think is better.
01:17:505 - ^
01:20:100 - ^
01:21:397 - ^
01:22:289 - why did you place a double here? Make it 1 note chord Syntehsizer
01:22:532 - ^
01:22:857 - ^
01:23:667 - imo you can replace those notes with LN's like this
01:25:289 - same as 01:14:789
01:26:586 - ^
01:27:884 - ^
01:29:262 - 01:29:343 - why did you place doubles here if you alredy followed strong sounds at 01:29:181 with doubles? Putting doubles for the drums on that sections maybe will better, done.
01:29:991 - 01:29:992 - ^
01:30:478 - if you want to have doubles here resnap them to 1/2
okay my osu messed up so I will probably come back to mod the rest or you just poke me ingame if you wanna do irc when I'm online Dont worry, take your time xD
Thanks for the mod, i will be waiting for the rest of the mod :D
[Ping]
Hi, from TheNewBungping's 4Keys O!Mania GD/Modding Queue [OPEN]

Super awesome map, I'll shoot a star

Reverse
01:31:370 Add a note here
01:32:667 ^
02:14:181 ^
02:15:478 ^
02:56:992 ^
03:16:451 ^
03:17:748 ^
04:20:019 ^
04:21:316 ^
05:04:127 ^
05:05:424 ^


03:08:424 Add a note here

03:10:208 Add double note here
04:35:829 ^
04:57:884 ^

04:24:965 Add a note here

04:47:343 - 04:48:154 Don't left this part empty

04:48:316 Add a note here
Wasabi Loli
Hello!
A Stamina map huh, well good thing I have no stamina xd
Not much bad to say about this map
The one and only diff
Bursts through the whole map are lacking originality [they seem copy-pasted, maybe try a different kind of burst?]
03:54:802 - these jacks are a no no
uhh, anything else I can say about this map is just me nit-picking so I guess that it?

Very short mod but I don't want to bombard you with how i think a section should work if it works the way you have it now
Topic Starter
akuma123

Shawn Wasabi wrote:

Hello!
A Stamina map huh, well good thing I have no stamina xd
Not much bad to say about this map
The one and only diff
Bursts through the whole map are lacking originality [they seem copy-pasted, maybe try a different kind of burst?] If you are referring to the ones that are supposed to be for the piano, then yes, i was thinking of changing them and instead following the louder sound (i dont know its name)
03:54:802 - these jacks are a no no Sorry but those jacks are a yes yes :p
uhh, anything else I can say about this map is just me nit-picking so I guess that it?

Very short mod but I don't want to bombard you with how i think a section should work if it works the way you have it now
Thanks :D
genkicho
NM From My Mod Que


Col 1 2 3 4

Dis
01:41:343 (101343|1,101505|1) - different sound, i suggest different col
01:46:532 (106532|1,106694|1) - ^
01:51:397 (111397|0,111559|0,111721|0) - 01:51:721 (111721|1,111884|1,112046|1) - looks weird and dont fit the songg >.>
02:07:046 (127046|3,127046|2,127127|2,127127|3) - theyre different sound, 02:07:127 (127127|3,127127|2) - is same as 02:07:289 (127289|2,127289|1) -
02:33:721 (153721|3,153884|3,154046|3) - i suggest avoid this, cuz theyre 1/2 snaps
02:34:694 (154694|1,154857|1,155019|1) - ^
03:18:640 (198640|1,198640|0,198721|2,198721|3,198802|1,198802|0,198884|3,198884|2,198965|0,198965|1) - i suggest change to 14 and 23, cuz looks repetitive
03:46:694 (226694|3,226857|3,227019|3,227181|3,227343|3) - rearrange (?)

i think thats all.. bad at this kind of pattern >.>
Topic Starter
akuma123

genkicho wrote:

NM From My Mod Que


Col 1 2 3 4

Dis
01:41:343 (101343|1,101505|1) - different sound, i suggest different col Done
01:46:532 (106532|1,106694|1) - ^
01:51:397 (111397|0,111559|0,111721|0) - 01:51:721 (111721|1,111884|1,112046|1) - looks weird and dont fit the songg >.> Changed
02:07:046 (127046|3,127046|2,127127|2,127127|3) - theyre different sound, 02:07:127 (127127|3,127127|2) - is same as 02:07:289 (127289|2,127289|1) - If someone else recommend the same thing i will change it
02:33:721 (153721|3,153884|3,154046|3) - i suggest avoid this, cuz theyre 1/2 snaps Changed
02:34:694 (154694|1,154857|1,155019|1) - ^
03:18:640 (198640|1,198640|0,198721|2,198721|3,198802|1,198802|0,198884|3,198884|2,198965|0,198965|1) - i suggest change to 14 and 23, cuz looks repetitive Done
03:46:694 (226694|3,226857|3,227019|3,227181|3,227343|3) - rearrange (?) Done
i think thats all.. bad at this kind of pattern >.> Dont worry, it was a good mod xD
Thanks :D
Incendent
03:21:727(0321717|3,0321884|2,0322046|1) And So on, I'm not to big of a fan on these long notes. They are too short in my opinion (You probably already are aware of this and intend to keep it though.). Other than that, You have a solid map!

Sorry I couldn't help too much (If at all), but you have earned my first star! :)
Topic Starter
akuma123

Incendent wrote:

03:21:727(0321717|3,0321884|2,0322046|1) And So on, I'm not to big of a fan on these long notes. They are too short in my opinion (You probably already are aware of this and intend to keep it though.). To be honest, im still not sure if i will keep them because it could be annoying for a lot of players, but for the moment ill keep them xD
Other than that, You have a solid map! Thanks xD

Sorry I couldn't help too much (If at all), but you have earned my first star! :)
Thanks for the star :D
Monheim
Here is your mod :D
Reverse
01:11:992 (71992|1,71992|2,72073|0,72154|2,72235|0,72316|3,72397|1,72478|3,72559|1,72640|3,72721|2,72802|1,72884|0,72965|3,73046|2,73127|1,73208|0,73289|1,73289|3) - Repeating this pattern makes it feel like the entire segment is repeating itself
01:56:424 (116424|3,116424|2) - Theres a fast piano noise here
03:09:965 (189965|1) - Should probably be a jump after this note
03:21:721 (201721|2,201721|3) - Please dont use LNs like this aha
03:54:802 (234802|1,234802|3,234802|0,234911|3,234911|0,235019|0,235019|3,235127|3,235127|0,235235|3,235235|0,235343|0,235343|3,235451|2,235451|3,235451|0) - This is too difficult
Good luck on ranking :)
Ryzen_old_1

Another Lie wrote:

clearing req from my queue. Normally, i don't take above 3 minutes pianos are exception
Mod
00:48:296 (48296|0,48392|2,48489|1,48586|2,48683|1,48780|3) - try this https://puu.sh/wx2pO.jpg
00:52:650 - add LN to 3rd col? end at 00:53:830 -
01:22:532 (82532|0,82532|1,82857|1,82857|2) - i don't think those are drum sound, maybe delete each 1 of them
01:23:775 (83775|2,83775|1,83884|1,83884|0,84100|2,84100|1,84208|0,84208|1,84397|1,84397|0,84478|2,84478|3,84721|1,84721|2) - re-arrange, also delete each 1 of them. unless you're using double as specific reason like 01:14:911 (74911|3,74911|2,74992|0,74992|1,75073|2,75073|3,75154|1,75154|0,75235|3,75235|2,75316|0,75316|1,75397|3,75397|2) - etc
01:34:370 - add note to 2nd col?
01:34:694 - add note to 3rd col? then move 01:34:775 (94775|2) - to 2nd col
01:35:343 (95343|0) - (optional) consider reduce it length to 01:36:154 -
01:36:235 - add note to 1st col if mod above applied
02:27:343 (147343|1,147343|3,147451|0,147451|2) - aren't they supossed to be at 1/4? (also 1 notes if possible)
02:27:667 (147667|2,147667|3,147775|1,147775|0) - (also 1 notes if possible)
for 03:10:046 - and 03:10:208 - are you intentionally ignored those sound?
04:01:938 (241938|0) - (optional) reduce length to 04:02:586 -
04:02:667 - & 04:02:829 - add note to 1st col if mod above applied
04:35:829 - sound here
04:47:586 - sound 04:47:748 - sound 04:47:992 - sound 04:48:073 - sound
04:57:884 - sound
Good luck, tbh i'm a bit dissapointed no SV T_T
Topic Starter
akuma123

Civilization wrote:

Here is your mod :D
Reverse
01:11:992 (71992|1,71992|2,72073|0,72154|2,72235|0,72316|3,72397|1,72478|3,72559|1,72640|3,72721|2,72802|1,72884|0,72965|3,73046|2,73127|1,73208|0,73289|1,73289|3) - Repeating this pattern makes it feel like the entire segment is repeating itself Its basically because of the melody and the pitch,and as you can hear it, its very repetitive so no thanks.
01:56:424 (116424|3,116424|2) - Theres a fast piano noise here Yeah but in other mods they told me that it will be better if i just focus on the burst sounds on those sections.
03:09:965 (189965|1) - Should probably be a jump after this note Done
03:21:721 (201721|2,201721|3) - Please dont use LNs like this aha I know XD, still need some ideas for that section xd
03:54:802 (234802|1,234802|3,234802|0,234911|3,234911|0,235019|0,235019|3,235127|3,235127|0,235235|3,235235|0,235343|0,235343|3,235451|2,235451|3,235451|0) - This is too difficult You are the 3rd person to told me that, so i will re arrange it xD

Good luck on ranking :)
Thanks for the mod :D
Topic Starter
akuma123

Ryzen wrote:

Another Lie wrote:

clearing req from my queue. Normally, i don't take above 3 minutes pianos are exception
Mod
00:48:296 (48296|0,48392|2,48489|1,48586|2,48683|1,48780|3) - try this https://puu.sh/wx2pO.jpg Used another pattern but thanks for the idea.
00:52:650 - add LN to 3rd col? end at 00:53:830 - Nope, sorry
01:22:532 (82532|0,82532|1,82857|1,82857|2) - i don't think those are drum sound, maybe delete each 1 of them I was not putting doubles to the drums in that section, i was putting them to the synthesizer
01:23:775 (83775|2,83775|1,83884|1,83884|0,84100|2,84100|1,84208|0,84208|1,84397|1,84397|0,84478|2,84478|3,84721|1,84721|2) - re-arrange, also delete each 1 of them. unless you're using double as specific reason like 01:14:911 (74911|3,74911|2,74992|0,74992|1,75073|2,75073|3,75154|1,75154|0,75235|3,75235|2,75316|0,75316|1,75397|3,75397|2) - etc
01:34:370 - add note to 2nd col? Re arranged all that section, thanks.
01:34:694 - add note to 3rd col? then move 01:34:775 (94775|2) - to 2nd col
01:35:343 (95343|0) - (optional) consider reduce it length to 01:36:154 -
01:36:235 - add note to 1st col if mod above applied
02:27:343 (147343|1,147343|3,147451|0,147451|2) - aren't they supossed to be at 1/4? (also 1 notes if possible) Nope,
listen at 25%

02:27:667 (147667|2,147667|3,147775|1,147775|0) - (also 1 notes if possible)
for 03:10:046 - and 03:10:208 - are you intentionally ignored those sound? Yep, because of the lack of piano in those sections, those blanks spaces are intentional.
04:01:938 (241938|0) - (optional) reduce length to 04:02:586 -
04:02:667 - & 04:02:829 - add note to 1st col if mod above applied
04:35:829 - sound here
04:47:586 - sound 04:47:748 - sound 04:47:992 - sound 04:48:073 - sound
04:57:884 - sound
Good luck, tbh i'm a bit dissapointed no SV T_T
Thanks for the mod :D
Verniy_Chan

Hi Akuma

Mod Via ♡ Верный Mania Queue ♡

4K = |1|2|3|4|
| W (Whistle) | C (Clap) | F (Finish) |

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)
General
  1. There's some issue about delay hitsounds file soft-hitfinish.wav, ask BN to fix
  2. Hei.. i can't find where's notes you're put Whistle (W). I only see Finish (F)
Reverse

OD : 8,7
HP : 8,7
  1. 01:12:721 (72721|2,72884|0) - try to put same collum for pitch relevancy piano like 01:11:992 (71992|2,72154|2,72316|3,72478|3) -
  2. 01:23:100 (83100|1,83262|1,83424|0) - do you forgot to emphasizing piano like 01:22:370 (82370|0,82370|1,82532|1,82532|0,82694|2,82694|1,82857|1,82857|2) -
  3. 01:34:370 - there's cymbal, add F. Also here 01:34:694 -
  4. 01:37:613 - add a note, missing 2nd piano here like 01:36:802 -
  5. 02:05:748 (125748|2,125911|1,126073|1) - how about it to put same collum for pitch relevancy, also here:
    04:11:748 (251748|2,251911|0,252073|2) -
  6. 02:07:046 (127046|2,127046|3,127127|3,127127|2) - i'am pretty sure both is different pitch, and i think here 02:07:127 (127127|2,127127|3,127289|2,127289|1) - mostly same pitch
  7. 02:17:829 - missing F for cymbal, also:
    02:36:965 -
    02:48:316 -
    02:48:965 -
    03:09:397 -
    03:19:451 -
    03:19:775 -
    04:23:667 -
    04:35:019 -
  8. 03:32:100 - i think there's still piano sound which it used 1/8 LN, or maybe it as purpose?
  9. 03:57:559 (237559|0,237721|0,237884|0,238046|0,238208|0) - considering to avoid this achor
  10. 04:13:046 (253046|2,253127|1,253370|2,253451|1) - Ctrl+G for variety?
Notes : I like pattern on 2nd kiai section, good job

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Score
86,75

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
Topic Starter
akuma123

Verniy_Chan wrote:


Hi Akuma

Mod Via ♡ Верный Mania Queue ♡

4K = |1|2|3|4|
| W (Whistle) | C (Clap) | F (Finish) |

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)
General
  1. There's some issue about delay hitsounds file soft-hitfinish.wav, ask BN to fix Okay :D
  2. Hei.. i can't find where's notes you're put Whistle (W). I only see Finish (F) I will try to fix that xD
Reverse

OD : 8,7
HP : 8,7
  1. 01:12:721 (72721|2,72884|0) - try to put same collum for pitch relevancy piano like 01:11:992 (71992|2,72154|2,72316|3,72478|3) - DONE
  2. 01:23:100 (83100|1,83262|1,83424|0) - do you forgot to emphasizing piano like 01:22:370 82370|0,82370|1,82532|1,82532|0,82694|2,82694|1,82857|1,82857|2) - I put emphasis to the high pitched piano in that litle section, but if more people suggest that i will change it
  3. 01:34:370 - there's cymbal, add F. Also here 01:34:694 - I dont think there should be a triple after a burst =/
  4. 01:37:613 - add a note, missing 2nd piano here like 01:36:802 -
  5. 02:05:748 (125748|2,125911|1,126073|1) - how about it to put same collum for pitch relevancy, also here: DONE
    04:11:748 (251748|2,251911|0,252073|2) - DONE
  6. 02:07:046 (127046|2,127046|3,127127|3,127127|2) - i'am pretty sure both is different pitch, and i think here 02:07:127 DONE
    (127127|2,127127|3,127289|2,127289|1) - mostly same pitch DONE
  7. 02:17:829 - missing F for cymbal, also: Most of these suggestions are triples after a burst, or after a double and that would make some really unnecesary and anoying minijacks that does not respond to any sound at all so most of them are a no, sorry
    02:36:965 -
    02:48:316 -
    02:48:965 -
    03:09:397 -
    03:19:451 -
    03:19:775 -
    04:23:667 -
    04:35:019 -
  8. 03:32:100 - i think there's still piano sound which it used 1/8 LN, or maybe it as purpose? I dont really know if i should keep this idea of the miniholds, they are so akward to press, so for the moment i will reject this xD
  9. 03:57:559 (237559|0,237721|0,237884|0,238046|0,238208|0) - considering to avoid this achor DONE
  10. 04:13:046 (253046|2,253127|1,253370|2,253451|1) - Ctrl+G for variety? DONE

Notes : I like pattern on 2nd kiai section, good job

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Score
86,75

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
First,i apologize for the late response, i was so busy with the college that i completely forgot aout this xD
Thanks for the mod, it was helpful, and hey, a 86.75 does not sound that bad xD
BloowXv2
Hey bro! esta divertido tu mapa y parece que lo intentas rankear asi que te dejare un random mod xD

lo estaba jugando y me di cuenta de algo y es que estos espacios sin notas rompen la secuencia del patrón con la música 03:10:046 - 03:10:208 -
tal vez aquí también 03:10:289 -

y creo que las LNs como estas 03:21:721 (201721|2,201721|3) - que están en 1/8 dificultan tomarlas con una acc constante debido al corto tiempo que necesitas para soltar la LN... en otro caso no se si los BNs la pasen para ranked pero lo que te recomiendo es ponerlas en 1/4, asi da tiempo para presionarlas y tomar buena acc y no sientes que estas picando el teclado demasiado rápido para no agarrarlas mal o con un 200 intencional xD
(recuerda que el mapa no es una dificultad Xtreme asi que no es necesario provocar un aumento de dificultad repentino en la jugabilidad)

ah por cierto, tal vez quieras colocar una LN aqui 00:52:650 - en la columna 3 hasta aqui 00:53:830 - y asi evitar el aviso de ''No se permiten descansos en mapas osu!mania''

bueno ahi dejo eso. suerte esta bueno el map ;)
Topic Starter
akuma123

BloowXv2 wrote:

Hey bro! esta divertido tu mapa y parece que lo intentas rankear asi que te dejare un random mod xD

lo estaba jugando y me di cuenta de algo y es que estos espacios sin notas rompen la secuencia del patrón con la música 03:10:046 - 03:10:208 -
tal vez aquí también 03:10:289 - A mi parecer el vacio hace que se genere un contraste bonito en esa parte, pero hay quienes le gusta y otros a los que no, tendria que decirlo mas gente para que lo cambie o un BN quiza, de momento lo mantendre pero tendre en cuenta tu recomendacion.

y creo que las LNs como estas 03:21:721 (201721|2,201721|3) - que están en 1/8 dificultan tomarlas con una acc constante debido al corto tiempo que necesitas para soltar la LN... en otro caso no se si los BNs la pasen para ranked pero lo que te recomiendo es ponerlas en 1/4, asi da tiempo para presionarlas y tomar buena acc y no sientes que estas picando el teclado demasiado rápido para no agarrarlas mal o con un 200 intencional xD
(recuerda que el mapa no es una dificultad Xtreme asi que no es necesario provocar un aumento de dificultad repentino en la jugabilidad)
Honestamente no me gusta para nada esa parte, pero como que no le encuentro muchas otra opciones para esa parte xD Igual gracias por el comentario, de momento lo dejare con el 1/4 que dices pero vere si puedo cambiar totalmente esa parte.

ah por cierto, tal vez quieras colocar una LN aqui 00:52:650 - en la columna 3 hasta aqui 00:53:830 - y asi evitar el aviso de ''No se permiten descansos en mapas osu!mania'' Eso es un problema del cliente, porque a mi no me gustaria ponerle una ln ahi porque me parece que queda mas chido con el vacio, como que marca mucho mas fuerte el final de esa seccion

bueno ahi dejo eso. suerte esta bueno el map ;)
Gracias por el modeo sorpresivo xD, solo por eso te ganaste tu modeo en tu mapa que vistie xD
BloowXv2
oie khe jaja gracias xD y suerte de nuevo c:
Syadow-
Marked owo will mod around this week or next week due school event

sorry for late mod ;w;

[Reverse]
  1. 01:36:154 - i think single enough here, since 01:36:235 - same here
  2. 01:39:884 - why double ? remove all, u can ignore since the sound quite low 01:40:532 - same
  3. 02:26:748 - 02:27:073 - double too
  4. 02:33:802 - why not map 1/4 too and make a stream ? more intens so is good for this part
  5. 03:00:154 (180154|0) - move col 3
  6. 03:04:694 (184694|1,184857|2,184938|1,185019|2,185100|1) - ctrl h more better
  7. 03:10:046 - why empty here ? add note n 03:10:208 - add double note
  8. 04:02:586 (242586|3,242748|3) - remove this or 04:02:667 (242667|1,242829|1) - remove this
  9. 04:35:829 - add note owo
  10. 04:46:370 (286370|0,286694|1,287019|1) - hmm =w= single all or double all cuz cymbal
  11. 04:47:343 - till 04:48:640 - i think it 1/3 1/6 *triplet owo
  12. 04:57:884 - add note feels empty owo
  13. 05:09:235 (309235|0) - move col 2
thats all
really solid but need more variation i guess
good luck o//
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