1. A.S.L (5.36 stars, 1275 notes)

1. 00:04:030 (1) - 不加个finish嘛
2. 00:18:401 (1,3) - overlap...这个感觉正好处在不overlap和故意overlap中间那个尴尬的区段
3. 01:00:077 - 这里应该有个5连，音还是很清楚的
4. 01:01:065 - 建议这加一个circle，然后如果是我的话01:01:155 (5) - 我会更偏向把这个弄成两个kick slider
5. 02:04:568 (6,1) - 间距有点小，这里感觉应该是个大跳
6. 02:21:515 (2,1) - 间距与02:21:634 (1,2,3,1) - 不一致，这里感觉还是一致比较好
7. 03:14:000 - 加一个circle变三连吧
8. 03:50:018 (2,1) - flow有点不好......
9. 03:56:664 (4) - 建议再往下一点，这里跳感觉太小了而且03:56:485 (3,4,1) - 变成了钝角
10. 04:53:610 (1,2,1,2) - 一般会更接受间距越来越大的排列...越来越小感觉有点奇怪

My Angel RangE wrote:

A.S.L
M4M

00:04:030 (1) - Beat significantly end 00:04:209 ,same beat but different from 00:06:904 (1,2)
00:05:287 (3,4) - significant beat of emphasis not , Ds so far i think i fixed it? can't get your point...
00:07:622 (4) - Basket
00:19:119 (3) - tail over lap what's mean?
01:02:233 (4) - I think look better tail 01:01:874 (3,5) tail Ds same
01:12:293 (1,2,3) - same beat , 01:11:215 (4) because of stick different Ds maybe fix, 01:11:215 (4) or here don't have to be same ds
01:25:766 (5,1) - emphasize Ds very short
01:30:796 (2,3) - it very long
02:09:778 (3,4,5,6) - I think over mapping , because very long jump 1/4 slider

Gl owo?

[Crz]Sword wrote:

m4mback
[A.S.L]

1. 00:04:030 (1) - 不加个finish嘛
2. 00:18:401 (1,3) - overlap...这个感觉正好处在不overlap和故意overlap中间那个尴尬的区段
3. 01:00:077 - 这里应该有个5连，音还是很清楚的 不想在这把强度搞大 漏个音搞成三连了
4. 01:01:065 - 建议这加一个circle，然后如果是我的话01:01:155 (5) - 我会更偏向把这个弄成两个kick slider 圈得加 短滑条还是 算了
5. 02:04:568 (6,1) - 间距有点小，这里感觉应该是个大跳
6. 02:21:515 (2,1) - 间距与02:21:634 (1,2,3,1) - 不一致，这里感觉还是一致比较好 改是改了 但感觉太难啊……可能改回来 看看吧
7. 03:14:000 - 加一个circle变三连吧
8. 03:50:018 (2,1) - flow有点不好...... 我觉得还好啊
9. 03:56:664 (4) - 建议再往下一点，这里跳感觉太小了而且03:56:485 (3,4,1) - 变成了钝角
10. 04:53:610 (1,2,1,2) - 一般会更接受间距越来越大的排列...越来越小感觉有点奇怪

GL~

Pok0555

Pok0555 wrote:

Hey, I'm from my NM modding queue
I'm not good at English, so sorry
Anyway, let's begin

Metadata
You need a source for this, just go to the song setup and write 91 days in the source, write it in Japanese if it originally has a japanese name

Design
Your second and fourth combo kinda blends in with the background, it's hard for players to see some circles if they use certain skin, I recommend changing these 2 combo colors darker, as it also fits the tone of the music in my opinion

Let's begin

00:24:149 (1,2,3,4) - I wouldn't recommend stacking this, I would rather make it into a stream, it just looks better in my opinion and it helps with the flow
00:25:586 (1,2,3,4) - Same ^
00:35:646 (1,2,3,4) - Same ^

00:16:784 (3) - You shouldn't make this a jump, I can't hear any strong beat here, you should ONLY make jumps on strong beats, basically, try not to make jumps on blue (1/4) and yellow (1/8) beats since most of them are weak beats
00:18:221 (8) - Same ^
00:29:718 (8) - Same ^
00:34:748 (3) - Same ^
00:35:467 (6) - Same ^
00:46:245 (2) - Same ^
01:00:437 (5) - Same ^
01:03:311 (2) - Same ^
01:28:640 (5) - Same ^
01:33:670 (2) - Same ^
01:29:898 (5,6) - Same ^ (and I would stack these two)
01:36:544 (2) - Same ^^
01:39:419 (3) - Same ^
01:40:856 (2,4,5) - Same ^
01:49:838 (3) - Same ^
...Yeah, basically, just don't make jumps on weak beats, scan through your map again cuz it has a lot of jumps like this



00:24:688 (6) - This slider/circle is over mapped, I can't hear any beats
00:26:125 (6) - Same ^
00:28:461 (4) - Same ^
00:30:437 (2) - Same ^
00:32:592 (2) - Same ^ (and this circle also can not be a jump, there aren't any beats there in the first place)
01:04:029 (5) - Same ^^
01:09:958 (5) - Same ^
01:50:916 (2) - Same ^
01:51:994 (2) - Same ^
01:53:790 (2) - Same ^ (try to avoid 1/4 and 1/8 beats, your map is very over mapped)
02:00:976 (2) - Same ^
02:02:413 (2) - Same ^
02:03:850 (2,4,5) - Same ^
02:13:191 (8) - I think this one is also over mapped ^

02:35:646 (4,5,6) - Stack dis
02:36:006 (7,8,9) - And dis
02:37:083 (4,5,6) - Same ^
02:37:443 (7,8,9) - Same ^

00:40:317 (2) - This circle is considered inconsistent spacing, which means it's not distance snapped and yet is also not a jump, move it closer to the slider end
00:56:125 (3) - This slider ends with a vocal, don't end a slider with vocal if you starts it with a sound, only do this if you also starts with a vocal
01:14:449 (1) - This slider starts with a weak beat but it ends with a stronger beat, you shouldn't do this
02:03:311 (1) - Same ^
02:08:700 (4) - Same ^

Um... That's really all I could do for you
The rest of your map is a copy pasted version of your older one with some small tweaks, I won't be going over them since they practically have the same mistakes
and even if it's an insane or extra, over mapping and wrong jumps are not recommended, especially using a lot of over mapped 1/4, 1/8 beats, don't do this just to make your map harder, many ranked maps doesn't do this, yet they're still hard, cuz they know how to use jumps correctly, the only thing I could tell you to do right now is read the osu! wiki, read all the sections about mapping and especially about jumps, and of course, read the ranking criteria
That's all I could help you for now,
Good Luck
And plz give me kudosu if you found this helpful, I modded your map instead of sleeping *cries*

too many opinion so i decide to reply here (yeah i'm lazy ). streams at the beginning stacked because i want to emphasize the kick liders later, so keep it. about jumps on weak sound, i applied some of them, others are rejected as i think they are proper with the music. And overmap things, sometime u can't just leave it a 1/1 slider or blank because of there is no clear sound. this will break the overall intensity of the map.

anyway thank you for your mod!

• General
  idk why u timing 83.5 bpm. It is quite natural to measure music in quarters, not in half notes. So plz 167 bpm.

• A.S.L.
  00:08:161 (5,6) - if u hear, there is a good drum sound for mapping not like this
  00:11:035 (5,6) - ^
  And u lost most of this moment, so th rhythmic is pretty wierd
  02:21:634 (1,2,3) - too overmap lol, try to reduce space like this https://yadi.sk/i/YEApwqYC3KmFQT
  02:31:694 (1,2) - try to star triol patterns with reverse slider that player can get used to and understand the rhythm
  03:44:808 (2,3,4) - ctrl+g
  03:44:628 (1,2,3) - well i can put (1) in the middle between this two
  04:29:179 (1,2,1,2) - there u can do actually stream of triols with a some space and NC on each
  04:58:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - put this patterns in middle of the area, alittle move

1. 00:04:209 (2,3) // 00:05:467 (5,6) - these are like the only places you use uncomfortable flow in the intro, consider changing since imo these shouldnt be emphasized as much as they are
2. 00:30:616 (3) - 243|318 ish so that 1 in 00:29:898 (1,2,3) - looks more centered
3. 00:34:389 (2) - i think redtick is stronger than bluetick here
4. 00:40:676 (3,4,5) - triangle?
5. 00:50:736 (4,1) - unsure if you intended this but slider flow is kinda uncomfy here
6. 00:57:922 (3,4,1) - same here and a bunch of other places - i don't really get what you're trying to emphasize with this uncomfy flow thing since it doesnt follow a pattern i can see
7. 01:08:700 (1,2) - blanket? would look nicer
8. 01:13:371 (2,3,4) - reading problem kinda, maybe stack 3 somewhere else
9. 01:35:287 (3,4,5,6,1) // 01:46:425 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - feels uncomfortable to play imo
10. 02:08:700 (4,5,1) - bit too overdone for a 1/4 jump for this intensity?
11. 02:13:012 (7,8) - flow would be more predictable if these were ctrlged, just an opinion
12. 03:55:407 (1,2) - this is 1/3 too (or maybe im just deaf)
13. 04:25:946 (3,4) - line these up so flow doesnt seem as uncomfortable
14. 05:08:700 (1,3,4) - blanket

gottagof4ast wrote:

nm from my queue

General
the kind of sampleset you are using at 00:04:030 conflicts between timing points which is unrankable

Current bg resolution is really low and is also a .png file while it should be .jpg

audio quality is also pretty bad so you may want to ask the owner of https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1254412 to see if you can't use that mp3

will fix all these later, these day im kinda busy ;w;

A.S.L
What is the diffname about as I have watched the show and have no clue what it is supposed to mean, or is it just a temporary one
A.S.L is the knife that Angelo bought when he was with Nero , and it also appeared in the lyric here 01:36:365 - "A.S.L ナイフ(knife) で” (see im the real fan of 91 days)
00:08:161 (5,6) - the slider gets more emphasis even though imo, it's almost mapped to background noise. While 00:08:161 (5) - actually has a decently loud sound and gets like no emphasis at all

00:25:586 (1,2,3,4) - I kinda get the burst at 00:24:149 (1,2,3,4) - but this one I have a problem wiht as the 1/8 sounds are barely pronounced

00:39:059 (2) - this slider is almost mapped to nothing, As if the idea was to map it to the vocal then that would not work as the vocal is really quiet

00:42:113 (3) - I'm sad that this gets like 0 emphasis

00:51:275 (1) - the sound on this tail is really loud in comparison to the sliderhead so it deserves to be clickable

00:59:898 (4) - You can very clearly hear the sound of a triple in the scond half of this sliderend so why not make this into a 1/4 slider with a 4-note burst after intended undermap, really don't want to be to intense here

01:02:772 (1,2) - Change this into 2 1/4's cause 2 is quiet and 1's tail is pretty loud with the drum and all changed in another way

01:14:898 (3) - overmapped imo as the kinda sound there is just the singer preparing for the next syllable and not an important sound i think it was clear and actually it is a independent syllable

01:25:946 (1) - starts on like nothing and ends on a heavy drum beat

This song is really weird, the kiai just has so much noise that some filler rhythm fits okish
But, following the vocals a bit more with longer sliders at 01:41:035 (3) - wouldn't hurt just a 1/1 slider is not enough to express the emotion here imo

02:21:515 (2,1,2,3,1) - seems a bit to difficult to hit for 5.25 i'll think about it

02:48:940 (3) - would not map this vocal as you were completely ignoring them during the reverses right before this tried but remove this just feels weird to play since vocal here is so strong

02:51:275 (2) - feels mapped to nothing

02:53:431 (4,1) - this is a tripel as the sound you mapped 02:53:431 (4) - to repeats on the blue tick

03:15:347 (4,6) - improve blanket

03:28:640 (2) - also mapped to nothing remove this beat feels bad as i want to hold the intensity here

03:56:664 (4,2) - Ugly overlap

04:06:185 (1,2,3,4,5) - flow is not that great cause of the wide angle that is intended, to break flow here

04:30:796 (1) - Is it just me or does the guitar sound start really late into the slider but you can't start this at 1/8 or player will get mad..

04:36:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - A continuous stream doesn't work imo as the sound has extra emphasis on 04:36:365 (1,4,5) - ummm i'll think

04:38:341 (9,2) - stack police

ending is pretty good

The rhythm in this song is just pretty weird and sounds pretty tough to map perfectly so would try to improve on that during the kiai as there are quite alot of sliders with heavy sound on the tails and weak sounds on the head and overmapped spots
Still, It's cool that you are mapping Ling Tosite as their songs are quite challenging

Gl with the map

PS:Love your "haze" mapset but its bubble is popped now ;w;

DarkFire wrote:

Hi, NM from my modding room

• General
  idk why u timing 83.5 bpm. It is quite natural to measure music in quarters, not in half notes. So plz 167 bpm. 'cause it is 83.5bpm indeed.

• A.S.L.
  00:08:161 (5,6) - if u hear, there is a good drum sound for mapping not like this
  00:11:035 (5,6) - ^
  And u lost most of this moment, so th rhythmic is pretty wierd
  02:21:634 (1,2,3) - too overmap lol, try to reduce space like this https://yadi.sk/i/YEApwqYC3KmFQT u r right
  02:31:694 (1,2) - try to star triol patterns with reverse slider that player can get used to and understand the rhythm
  03:44:808 (2,3,4) - ctrl+g no
  03:44:628 (1,2,3) - well i can put (1) in the middle between this two
  04:29:179 (1,2,1,2) - there u can do actually stream of triols with a some space and NC on each that's too hard imo
  04:58:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - put this patterns in middle of the area, alittle move i used ctrl+h/j to made this :3

Diff is good, but some moments rhythmical wierd or not mapped by the drums

newton- wrote:

from q


metadata: artist should be "TK from Ling tosite sigure" (note the absence of caps on tosite and sigure)
source: band name here

lol that's my fault



[ asl]

1. 00:04:209 (2,3) // 00:05:467 (5,6) - these are like the only places you use uncomfortable flow in the intro, consider changing since imo these shouldnt be emphasized as much as they are
2. 00:30:616 (3) - 243|318 ish so that 1 in 00:29:898 (1,2,3) - looks more centered
3. 00:34:389 (2) - i think redtick is stronger than bluetick here follow the guitar since it's dominate
4. 00:40:676 (3,4,5) - triangle?
5. 00:50:736 (4,1) - unsure if you intended this but slider flow is kinda uncomfy here
6. 00:57:922 (3,4,1) - same here and a bunch of other places - i don't really get what you're trying to emphasize with this uncomfy flow thing since it doesnt follow a pattern i can see uhhhh i'll think about it
7. 01:08:700 (1,2) - blanket? would look nicer
8. 01:13:371 (2,3,4) - reading problem kinda, maybe stack 3 somewhere else this pattern has been wildly used in my map so it'e not a problem imo
9. 01:35:287 (3,4,5,6,1) // 01:46:425 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - feels uncomfortable to play imo that's what i want lol
10. 02:08:700 (4,5,1) - bit too overdone for a 1/4 jump for this intensity? nerfed
11. 02:13:012 (7,8) - flow would be more predictable if these were ctrlged, just an opinion but then the stream later will be very wired...
12. 03:55:407 (1,2) - this is 1/3 too (or maybe im just deaf) u r right, will remap this part
13. 04:25:946 (3,4) - line these up so flow doesnt seem as uncomfortable
14. 05:08:700 (1,3,4) - blanket

good luck!

Nevo wrote:

bad mod \o/

01:27:562 (2) - does the spacing here really need to be this big since it has less impact as the note prior to it
01:35:826 (6) - I think you could increase the spacing here since its just as loud as a beat as the jumps before it
01:57:922 (3,4,5) - maybe tone down the spacing a little keep same with previous 0.5x
02:07:982 (2) - you can stack this slider head to 02:06:904 (3) -
02:13:012 (7) - this jump goes against the current counterclockwise flow you were holding for a while
02:17:323 (4) - I think the sliderend should be a clickable
02:17:862 (2) - the spacing here doesn't fit the intensity of the beat
03:27:383 (1,2,3,4) - I think you could tone down the spacing here so 03:33:131 (1,2,3,4) - has more impact

sry for shit mod lol

Ryuusei Aika wrote:

osu needs mooooooooooore TK
明天来送个摸

General
91Days放一下source

A.S.L
00:07:083 (2,3) - 这里的间距比00:06:904 (1,2) - 这两拍重音的都大了，如果你想强调一下那相比鼓点而言明显弱了的乐器是不是有点奇怪
00:09:958 (2,3) - ^
01:35:646 (5,1) - 不知道你这个是不是blanket，如果不是的话做彻底一点比较好
02:32:053 (1,2) - 你这个pattern建议和02:32:413 (1,2) - 换一下，因为它这部分音乐02:32:053 (1,2) - 和02:32:772 (1,2) - 是一致的，02:32:413 (1,2) - 和02:33:131 (1,2) - 是一致的
03:26:485 (5,1) - 这地方我没看出用这么大间距的必要性在哪，就是一个滑音用的间距比03:27:922 (4,1) - 这里都大了，感觉不太合适

I love tk (((o(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o)))

Faygor wrote:

was modding ur map ytd then halfway through i fell asleep lol boring map indeed ;_；

[A.S.L]
00:09:778 (1): Inconsistent spacing with last section but technically by a bit only although i found it rather noticable lol
00:11:934 (7): inconsistent spacing with (6), spacing is a bit too significant
00:14:808 (5,6,7,8): Looking at how u section the song and identify places for emphasis im not too sure why u didn NC this
00:21:994 (3): Also reduce spacing a bit
00:31:694 (7): decrease spacing with prev circle and increase spacing with slider for consistency
01:03:131 (2,3): Move this closer to (1) for better emphasis of (4)?
01:07:982 (3): same, move closer to (4) instead this time
01:14:808 (2,3,4): I think overmapped (unlike 03:13:910 which has audible drums)
01:23:431 (1,1): dam i like this pretty much
02:09:778 (3,4,5,6): NC here would be appropriate for its high intensity
02:22:712 (5): I would emphasize this
02:24:149 (5): same too
02:29:179 (1): I think u could have NCed the next circle instead judging from what u did at the beginning of kiai (i think ur trying to end the combo when the high pitched guitar ends right) just nc with white tick
02:31:694 (1): Unnecessary NC, don't see much justification for it attention for 1/3
03:01:515 (3): Inconsistent spacing emphasis
04:11:215 (1): I think the gap between stream and the prev section here should be less than 04:12:652 to better reflect that the song is reaching to its climax
04:34:928 (5): increase spacing with (4)

honestly its pretty good overall, i could only pick a bit of spacing issues
the flow is pretty polished imo, pretty pleasing to play
and i got a bit lazy at the 3 min mark cuz i was out whole day and therefore tired and want to sleep again
good luck!

[Kamiya] wrote:

m4m

[A.S.L]

00:22:892 (2,3) - 这里的节奏有问题,你可以2slider还单点 或者你把前面的1note改slider都行 都可以吧 我主要觉得这样放能体现吉他

00:32:053 (1) - 突然怪异

00:41:395 (1,2) - 这两个重音。叠起来会不会感觉不舒服。

00:54:149 (1,2) - 这里的距离稍微有点开了。没有强调也没有重音，00:54:329 (2,3) - 还不如想办法加大点这里的距离。

01:24:509 - 为什么这里开始不kiai啊。因为这是pp图（x

02:21:994 - 那你如果这里是kiai我感觉还有潜力摆更大距离。

02:21:754 (2,3) - 全部nc 好辨识 毕竟pp图(

02:31:814 (2,3) - ^

03:21:275 (1,2,1,2) - 会不会有点单调了 2可以设0.5x滑条滑条向上 还是不了 单点留空挺好的

大概像这样

04:23:790 (7,8) - ctrl g 会顺手一些

04:47:143 - 这里开始的间距感觉可以加个0.3~0.5，毕竟高潮部分（kiai）。不要吝啬pp

05:11:394 (6) - 还有一点 做个滑条吧。

差不多了差不多了溜了溜了。
gl