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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 11 июля 2017 г. at 1:24:07

Artist: M2U
Title: Magnolia (feat. Guriri)
Source: Deemo
Tags: wav.av. rayark sammish finshie pandahero diversity dubstep electronic
BPM: 160
Filesize: 3398kb
Play Time: 02:20
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Download: M2U - Magnolia (feat. Guriri)
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For Collab Extreme: sammish mapped kiai (from 01:21:637 - to 01:45:074 - ), I mapped everything else
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19:05 isopaharuntikka: 00:07:574 (2,3,4) - this straightedness tilts me
19:05 isopaharuntikka: i guess its fine since you use it a lot,
19:05 Su1fu7: its my style >:\
19:05 isopaharuntikka: ya
19:06 Su1fu7: im gonna get memed for 5degree rotations
19:06 Su1fu7: butw/e
19:06 Su1fu7: in every single map that i made
19:06 isopaharuntikka: 00:20:887 (3) - i think this could be spaced further since 00:21:074 (1) - is spaced further from 00:20:512 (1) -
19:07 isopaharuntikka: 00:23:512 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - in this part i'd use spacing that would go from big to small
19:07 isopaharuntikka: kinda feels empty atm
19:08 isopaharuntikka: could be a nice transiton to the small spacing in next part too
19:08 Su1fu7: its upsidedown eiffel tower
19:08 Su1fu7: :o
19:08 isopaharuntikka: more like a ketchup bottle :o
19:08 Su1fu7: fuck
19:09 Su1fu7: i guess i change spacing here
19:09 Su1fu7: just need to figure how to make it looks good
19:09 isopaharuntikka: 00:41:887 (2) - i think it would feel better if you stacked this with 00:41:512 (1) -
19:09 isopaharuntikka: same with 00:47:887 (4) -
19:10 isopaharuntikka: and the other parts afterwards
19:10 isopaharuntikka: but i guess it's fine as it is
19:10 isopaharuntikka: since you use that concept consistently
19:10 Su1fu7: yea
19:10 isopaharuntikka: 00:52:012 (1) - id use a faster sv here
19:10 isopaharuntikka: transition doesnt have that aaaaaaaaaaah feel
19:11 isopaharuntikka: i guess it's more of a looooooooooooooh feel
19:11 isopaharuntikka: maybe you could do like
19:11 Su1fu7: i tried to
19:11 Su1fu7: but the i was like "what sv do i use in kiai?"
19:11 isopaharuntikka: alright
19:12 isopaharuntikka: this song is amazing
19:12 isopaharuntikka: luv it
19:12 Su1fu7: Thanks for help
19:12 Su1fu7: I agree
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23:30 Su1fu7: heyo, are you up for testplay?
23:31 Finshie: yea 
23:31 Finshie: magnolia?
23:31 Su1fu7: yeahj
23:31 *Su1fu7 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1299913 M2U feat. Guriri - Magnolia]
23:34 Finshie: p gud
23:34 Su1fu7: thanks
23:35 Su1fu7: anything that you would suggest to change?
23:35 Finshie: i still feel like 00:40:012 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - needs to be map more
23:36 Su1fu7: i tried
23:36 Su1fu7: but it feels forced af
23:36 Finshie: like if u follow the vocals
23:37 Finshie: like this 00:46:012 (1,2) - one
23:37 Finshie: you can do 4 1/2s here
23:38 Su1fu7: :thinking:
23:39 Su1fu7: god bless sammish for mapping kiai
23:39 Su1fu7: i wouldnt finish it myself
23:39 Finshie: 00:14:512 (1) - https://puu.sh/w1Ko0/bbee8c60ba.png
23:39 Finshie: yea the kiai is really fun
23:40 Finshie: also this overlap doesnt look good 00:21:637 (1,1) - lol
23:40 Finshie: imo
23:41 Su1fu7: its ar 9.4
23:41 Su1fu7: you can see it only in editor
23:44 Su1fu7: about 00:14:512 (5,6,7,8) - stuff
23:45 Finshie: yea?
23:45 Su1fu7: 00:15:637 (1) - do i replace it with for circles or with 2 circles and repeat
23:45 Su1fu7: what do you think?
23:46 Finshie: why would u wanna replace it too?
23:46 Finshie: i think that slider is fine
23:46 Su1fu7: actually no i leave it as it is
23:46 Su1fu7: yea im dumb
23:46 Finshie: it still bothering me that it ends on 00:16:199 - 
23:47 Su1fu7: its my style >:\
23:47 Su1fu7: jk changed it
23:48 Finshie: you can have something here 00:20:793 - 
23:48 Finshie: maybe triples or 1/4 slider or u can keep it as it is i guess
23:50 Su1fu7: i guess ill keep it as it is
23:50 Finshie: if u did change 00:15:637 (1) - might as well change 00:21:637 (1) - but its up to you
23:52 Su1fu7: yea i changed this one too
23:53 Su1fu7: btw you can post it on forum for free cooldosu
23:53 Finshie: sure
23:53 Su1fu7: thanks for help
23:53 Finshie: np
23:54 Finshie: are we done now lol i can still continue if u want
23:54 Su1fu7: lets go
23:55 Su1fu7: theres a bunch of stuff to polish lol
23:56 Finshie: i liked this slider you made on wicked fate btw https://puu.sh/w1L3r/7dd85aae0a.png
23:56 Finshie: maybe u can insert that somewhere lul
23:57 Su1fu7: lemme restart oss
23:57 Finshie: aight
23:58 Su1fu7: about those sliders
23:58 Su1fu7: idk where to put them lol
23:58 Finshie: 00:46:012 (1) - what i mentioned before
23:58 Finshie: u used 4 1/2s here 00:34:012 (1,2,3,4) - 
23:59 Su1fu7: shiet
23:59 Su1fu7: u write
23:59 Su1fu7: 4 1/2 here we go i guess
00:01 Finshie: 00:43:762 (2) - can do something here too
00:02 Finshie: 1/1 reverse is kinda weird on insane
00:03 Finshie: if you wanna keep it just change distance of these 3
00:04 Finshie: 00:42:262 (5,1,2) - since 5>1 is 1/1 and 1>2 is 1/2 but 5>1 is closer
00:04 Finshie: its kinda confusing
00:06 Su1fu7: fixed spacing on those
00:06 Su1fu7: still working with 1/2 things
00:07 Finshie: 00:46:012 (1,2,3) - ds
00:07 Finshie: oh nvm ur changing that to 1/2 anyway
00:07 Su1fu7: ds is a meme
00:08 Su1fu7: actually
00:08 Su1fu7: i dont reallu think i shoud change those
00:08 Finshie: the long slider?
00:08 Su1fu7: coz 00:35:512 (1,2,3,4) - theres a piano or whateverit is
00:09 Su1fu7: 00:46:012 (1,2,3) -
00:09 Su1fu7: those to 1/2
00:15 Finshie: 01:18:262 (1) - ctrl g maybe so 01:18:262 (1,2,3,4) - direction are all the same
00:16 Finshie: 01:18:824 (4) - why youd stop making the pattern like 01:18:262 (1,2,3) - ?
00:17 Su1fu7: coz 1and 2,3,4 is like different sounds
00:17 Su1fu7: kinda
00:17 Su1fu7: not really
00:17 Su1fu7: so its basically 2 groups
00:17 Finshie: yea not really its just gettng louder
00:18 Finshie: hm
00:19 Finshie: also before this get dq'd put a preview point
00:20 Su1fu7: i did already
00:20 Su1fu7: after uploading ofc coz im dumb
00:21 Su1fu7: also saying "b4 it got dq'd" like it will ever get to qualified lol
00:21 Finshie: lol pls
00:21 Su1fu7: its too bad
00:21 Su1fu7: yet
00:21 Su1fu7: also i randomly got message from a guy asking can he gd it
00:22 Su1fu7: i never even talked with this guy b3 what the
00:22 Su1fu7: weird
00:22 Finshie: lol
00:22 Finshie: i got that message sometime
00:22 Finshie: he probably saw ur wicked fate
00:23 Su1fu7: uhh
00:23 Su1fu7: i regret everything
00:24 Finshie: 01:06:074 (2,3,4) - 
00:25 Finshie: 02:12:074 (3,4) - 
00:25 Finshie: unstack 02:12:074 (3,4) - 
00:26 Finshie: if you wanna have slider at the end , start at 02:20:137 - or 02:20:230 - 
00:27 Su1fu7: w8
00:27 Su1fu7: 02:20:137 (4) -
00:27 Su1fu7: its already here
00:27 Finshie: remove it
00:27 Finshie: kinda weird to cut it with spinner
00:29 Finshie: end it at 02:22:137 - weird how it ends at 1/3
00:30 Finshie: the one you bookmarked doesnt have an indication that it should end there
00:30 Su1fu7: 02:22:105 - i think this one is better tho
00:30 Su1fu7: wich one i bookmarked, could you link it please
00:31 Su1fu7: coz i removed all bookmarks :/
00:31 Finshie: what
00:31 Finshie: 02:22:012 - 
00:31 Finshie: theres a bookmark
00:32 Finshie: if u end it at 02:22:105 - it sounds to early
00:32 Su1fu7: you're right
00:32 Su1fu7: 137 here we go
00:33 Finshie: https://puu.sh/w1MCa/d8572e1a3f.png
00:33 Finshie: for 1miss
00:34 Finshie: ok im done
00:34 Finshie: cant mod wubs cus i have no clue about it
00:34 Su1fu7: thats dickish
00:34 Su1fu7: that note
00:34 Su1fu7: same lol
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Fun diff but the kiai spike feels a whole lot harder than the other top 2 diffs. So I'm going to ask for a nerf on the kiai part. Everything looks fine and dandy!
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01:22:480 (3) - Remove
01:22:949 (6) - Remove
01:25:480 (4) - Remove
01:25:949 (1) - Remove
01:27:074 (1,1) - Don't really think it fits rhythmically here
01:28:480 (3) - Remove
01:28:949 (1) - Remove
01:31:480 (4) - Remove
01:34:293 (2) - Remove
01:39:074 (1,1) - Again
01:40:949 (1) - Remove
01:41:230 (3) - Remove


You can take this into consideration if you want or you can ignore your choice. Just think it would help the diff out a little :)

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Fun diff but the kiai spike feels a whole lot harder than the other top 2 diffs. So I'm going to ask for a nerf on the kiai part. Everything looks fine and dandy!
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01:22:480 (3) - Remove
01:22:949 (6) - Remove
01:25:480 (4) - Remove
01:25:949 (1) - Remove
01:27:074 (1,1) - Don't really think it fits rhythmically here the buzz slider sounds right to me.
01:28:480 (3) - Remove
01:28:949 (1) - Remove
01:31:480 (4) - Remove
01:34:293 (2) - Remove this is fine.
01:39:074 (1,1) - Again same
01:40:949 (1) - Remove did this to make it identical to 01:41:230 (3,4) - wasnt that bad.
01:41:230 (3) - Remove it sounds right to me.


You can take this into consideration if you want or you can ignore your choice. Just think it would help the diff out a little :)

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yea abit overmap tbh but i really dont want to have my kiai have bunch of 3/4s but if it really needs to i might have to.
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Hi there, i gonna post some logchat about marianna's extra
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18:11 Marianna: tendo em vista que eu não mappeio musica assim e que eu não estou muito a vontade mappeando esses dias o que você acha?
18:11 Marianna: ;np
18:11 *Marianna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1310000 M2U feat. Guriri - Magnolia [Marianna's Extra]]
18:12 Kalindraz: pera
18:12 Kalindraz: vo baixar
18:12 Kalindraz: ~
18:16 Kalindraz: 4.25 extra
18:16 Kalindraz: pensando*
18:17 Marianna: olha o mapa
18:18 Kalindraz: 00:30:262 (4,5,6,7) -  suspostamente um NC devido a mudança de ds
18:18 Marianna: okay
18:19 Kalindraz: 00:33:824 -  00:33:918 -  ignorou o piano  :(, mas pode deixar asssim tendo em vista que seguiu o vocal
18:20 Marianna: omg eu vou stakear aqui 00:34:012 (1) - 00:33:824 -
18:20 Marianna: pra ficar bonitinho
18:20 Marianna: pq n tem stack rs
18:20 Kalindraz: 00:37:012 (1) -  bem esse slider nao deveria terminar ai, se voce está seguindo o vocal conforme disse acima a duração dele só vai até aqui 00:37:387 -  e eu sugeria outro slider aqui 00:37:762 -  para reforçar sua ideia de vocal
18:21 Kalindraz: 00:39:637 (3) -  well voce poderia repensar a respeito acho que realmente aqui precisaria de um slider 1/6 e proximo dessa nota 00:40:012 (1) -  o som da harpa é mto lindo pra nao ser mapeado, que tal?
18:22 Marianna: Eu não estou seguindo o vocal de forma literal e como essa parte é mais calma não vejo problema em estender um pouco isso 00:37:012 (1) -
18:22 Kalindraz: ah sim, menos mal
18:23 Marianna: eu vou considerar a ideia da harpa, mas do jeito que eu mappeei completamente voltado ao vocal e ao piano ficaria um pouco estranho
18:24 Kalindraz: 00:42:449 -  bem eu sinto que deveria ter algo clicavel aqui por causa do violoncelo, mas pode deixar dessa forma que segue bem!
18:24 Marianna: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8246361 esse jump ficou mt grande? sjagdas
18:25 Kalindraz: sim lol é 1/6
18:26 Kalindraz: continuando
18:26 Marianna: ok dei um jeito aqui
18:26 Kalindraz: 00:56:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
18:27 Kalindraz: esse foi o unico combo que as notas estão stacadas se levar em consideração todos os outros dessa sessão, provavelmente alguem vai reparar isso, poderia retira-los?
18:27 Marianna: 00:59:512 (1,2,3,4,5) -
18:27 Marianna: 01:02:512 (1,2,1) -
18:27 Marianna: é o primeiro, não o único
18:28 Kalindraz: bem mas esse segundo da ligação a um proximo com mudança de sv
18:28 Kalindraz: eu falei em relação aos outros
18:28 Kalindraz: principalmente anteriores
18:28 Kalindraz: 01:12:637 (8) -  yeah, nc pra representação das jump stream
18:29 Kalindraz: 01:15:637 (8) -  same my dear
18:29 Marianna: mas veja só, se eu tivesse feito igual aos outros, os seguintes estariam errados, foi por isso que a partir daí eu dei uma "quebrada" alternando entre eles
18:29 Marianna: ah, não sabia que precisava, vou pôr*-*
18:29 Marianna: 01:18:637 (8) - aqui tbm né?
18:29 Kalindraz: yeah
18:29 Marianna: 01:18:637 (8) - aqui tbm né?
18:30 Kalindraz: 01:20:887 (3) -  also isso fica bem interpretado se substituir por 2 1/4 pq aqui é outro beat drop 01:21:074 -  ooo
18:30 Kalindraz: 01:22:574 (1,1) -  nazi ncs lmao
18:31 Marianna: 01:22:012 - eu tenho medo é disso
18:31 Marianna: calma
18:31 Marianna: tipo
18:31 Kalindraz: well os drop ta muito bom!
18:31 Marianna: aqui 01:20:512 - 1,3x 01:20:887 - aqui 1,2x e aqui 01:21:449 - 1x?
18:32 Marianna: foi isso que vc quis dizer?
18:32 Kalindraz: nao
18:32 Kalindraz: kkkkk
18:32 Kalindraz: tipo
18:32 Kalindraz: 01:20:887 (3) - 
18:32 Kalindraz: isso
18:32 Kalindraz: substitue por 2 slider 1/4
18:32 Kalindraz: pra reforçar na sua interpretação
18:32 Kalindraz: pq aqui 01:21:074 - 
18:32 Kalindraz: é um drop
18:32 Kalindraz: e nao fica mto bem esse slider 1/2
18:33 Kalindraz: pelo menos ao meu ver
18:34 Marianna: ah sim
18:34 Marianna: pronto
18:34 Kalindraz: well isso 01:25:949 (2) -  está como jump stream para isso 01:26:043 (3) -  mas isso 01:35:699 (2,3) -  nao?? 
18:35 Marianna: são ocasiões totalmente diferentes
18:35 Kalindraz: bem, apenas citei xd
18:35 Kalindraz: continuando
18:35 Kalindraz: 01:46:387 (2,3,5) -  pode fixar o padrao de distancia oo só mover um pouquinho pra cima o 2
18:36 Marianna: 01:25:949 (2) - aqui é uma parte super forte pra se por em stack a outro 01:35:699 - mas aqui é uma parte, comparada com aquela, simples demais pra deixar um jump
18:36 Marianna: ]]okay fix
18:37 Kalindraz: well final bem feito 
18:37 Kalindraz: 2 ritmos distintos
18:37 Kalindraz: super bacana
18:37 Marianna: *-* omg
18:37 Kalindraz: well ultimo ponto
18:38 Kalindraz: 02:18:637 (1) -  bem, só buffa mais um pouco a distancia pra mostrar mais enfasê conforme voce fez 
18:38 Kalindraz: fora isso está mto bom
18:38 Marianna: okay :3
18:39 Marianna: obg mesmo
18:39 Marianna: tava precisando
18:39 Kalindraz: relaxa
18:39 Kalindraz: como disse
18:39 Kalindraz: voce mapeia mto bem
18:39 Kalindraz: eu nunca vou desgostar algo seu
18:39 Kalindraz: ahaha
18:41 Marianna: kkkk posta isso lá*-*
18:41 Kalindraz: okay
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Hi there, i gonna post some logchat about marianna's extra
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18:11 Marianna: tendo em vista que eu não mappeio musica assim e que eu não estou muito a vontade mappeando esses dias o que você acha?
18:11 Marianna: ;np
18:11 *Marianna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1310000 M2U feat. Guriri - Magnolia [Marianna's Extra]]
18:12 Kalindraz: pera
18:12 Kalindraz: vo baixar
18:12 Kalindraz: ~
18:16 Kalindraz: 4.25 extra
18:16 Kalindraz: pensando*
18:17 Marianna: olha o mapa
18:18 Kalindraz: 00:30:262 (4,5,6,7) -  suspostamente um NC devido a mudança de ds
18:18 Marianna: okay
18:19 Kalindraz: 00:33:824 -  00:33:918 -  ignorou o piano  :(, mas pode deixar asssim tendo em vista que seguiu o vocal
18:20 Marianna: omg eu vou stakear aqui 00:34:012 (1) - 00:33:824 -
18:20 Marianna: pra ficar bonitinho
18:20 Marianna: pq n tem stack rs
18:20 Kalindraz: 00:37:012 (1) -  bem esse slider nao deveria terminar ai, se voce está seguindo o vocal conforme disse acima a duração dele só vai até aqui 00:37:387 -  e eu sugeria outro slider aqui 00:37:762 -  para reforçar sua ideia de vocal
18:21 Kalindraz: 00:39:637 (3) -  well voce poderia repensar a respeito acho que realmente aqui precisaria de um slider 1/6 e proximo dessa nota 00:40:012 (1) -  o som da harpa é mto lindo pra nao ser mapeado, que tal?
18:22 Marianna: Eu não estou seguindo o vocal de forma literal e como essa parte é mais calma não vejo problema em estender um pouco isso 00:37:012 (1) -
18:22 Kalindraz: ah sim, menos mal
18:23 Marianna: eu vou considerar a ideia da harpa, mas do jeito que eu mappeei completamente voltado ao vocal e ao piano ficaria um pouco estranho
18:24 Kalindraz: 00:42:449 -  bem eu sinto que deveria ter algo clicavel aqui por causa do violoncelo, mas pode deixar dessa forma que segue bem!
18:24 Marianna: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8246361 esse jump ficou mt grande? sjagdas
18:25 Kalindraz: sim lol é 1/6
18:26 Kalindraz: continuando
18:26 Marianna: ok dei um jeito aqui
18:26 Kalindraz: 00:56:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
18:27 Kalindraz: esse foi o unico combo que as notas estão stacadas se levar em consideração todos os outros dessa sessão, provavelmente alguem vai reparar isso, poderia retira-los?
18:27 Marianna: 00:59:512 (1,2,3,4,5) -
18:27 Marianna: 01:02:512 (1,2,1) -
18:27 Marianna: é o primeiro, não o único
18:28 Kalindraz: bem mas esse segundo da ligação a um proximo com mudança de sv
18:28 Kalindraz: eu falei em relação aos outros
18:28 Kalindraz: principalmente anteriores
18:28 Kalindraz: 01:12:637 (8) -  yeah, nc pra representação das jump stream
18:29 Kalindraz: 01:15:637 (8) -  same my dear
18:29 Marianna: mas veja só, se eu tivesse feito igual aos outros, os seguintes estariam errados, foi por isso que a partir daí eu dei uma "quebrada" alternando entre eles
18:29 Marianna: ah, não sabia que precisava, vou pôr*-*
18:29 Marianna: 01:18:637 (8) - aqui tbm né?
18:29 Kalindraz: yeah
18:29 Marianna: 01:18:637 (8) - aqui tbm né?
18:30 Kalindraz: 01:20:887 (3) -  also isso fica bem interpretado se substituir por 2 1/4 pq aqui é outro beat drop 01:21:074 -  ooo
18:30 Kalindraz: 01:22:574 (1,1) -  nazi ncs lmao
18:31 Marianna: 01:22:012 - eu tenho medo é disso
18:31 Marianna: calma
18:31 Marianna: tipo
18:31 Kalindraz: well os drop ta muito bom!
18:31 Marianna: aqui 01:20:512 - 1,3x 01:20:887 - aqui 1,2x e aqui 01:21:449 - 1x?
18:32 Marianna: foi isso que vc quis dizer?
18:32 Kalindraz: nao
18:32 Kalindraz: kkkkk
18:32 Kalindraz: tipo
18:32 Kalindraz: 01:20:887 (3) - 
18:32 Kalindraz: isso
18:32 Kalindraz: substitue por 2 slider 1/4
18:32 Kalindraz: pra reforçar na sua interpretação
18:32 Kalindraz: pq aqui 01:21:074 - 
18:32 Kalindraz: é um drop
18:32 Kalindraz: e nao fica mto bem esse slider 1/2
18:33 Kalindraz: pelo menos ao meu ver
18:34 Marianna: ah sim
18:34 Marianna: pronto
18:34 Kalindraz: well isso 01:25:949 (2) -  está como jump stream para isso 01:26:043 (3) -  mas isso 01:35:699 (2,3) -  nao?? 
18:35 Marianna: são ocasiões totalmente diferentes
18:35 Kalindraz: bem, apenas citei xd
18:35 Kalindraz: continuando
18:35 Kalindraz: 01:46:387 (2,3,5) -  pode fixar o padrao de distancia oo só mover um pouquinho pra cima o 2
18:36 Marianna: 01:25:949 (2) - aqui é uma parte super forte pra se por em stack a outro 01:35:699 - mas aqui é uma parte, comparada com aquela, simples demais pra deixar um jump
18:36 Marianna: ]]okay fix
18:37 Kalindraz: well final bem feito 
18:37 Kalindraz: 2 ritmos distintos
18:37 Kalindraz: super bacana
18:37 Marianna: *-* omg
18:37 Kalindraz: well ultimo ponto
18:38 Kalindraz: 02:18:637 (1) -  bem, só buffa mais um pouco a distancia pra mostrar mais enfasê conforme voce fez 
18:38 Kalindraz: fora isso está mto bom
18:38 Marianna: okay :3
18:39 Marianna: obg mesmo
18:39 Marianna: tava precisando
18:39 Kalindraz: relaxa
18:39 Kalindraz: como disse
18:39 Kalindraz: voce mapeia mto bem
18:39 Kalindraz: eu nunca vou desgostar algo seu
18:39 Kalindraz: ahaha
18:41 Marianna: kkkk posta isso lá*-*
18:41 Kalindraz: okay


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I'll likely come back for another diff some day, good luck!
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https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8266626 first try meme

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• Audio is 128 kbps, maybe find a 192 file if you can

drum-hitclap has a transient (loudest part of the hitfile) that is pretty delayed here. Would be optimal if you were able to modify this so that the transient plays earlier


xtreme collap
00:14:137 (2,3,4) - If anything I think the larger spacing should be from 00:14:230 (3,4) - because of the stronger note here

00:21:074 (1) -

01:08:230 (1) - This is a pretty fast spinner, I feel like this overpaces the transition from said spinner to 01:09:449 (1,2,3,4) - it would be better to use a slider as an alternative or smth. Plus, I feel like more exaggeration than a spinner end can be placed at 01:09:262 -

01:09:824 (4,1) - Pretty small spacing for a strong note here

01:12:262 (1,2,3,4) - 01:15:262 (1,2,3,4) - 01:18:262 (1,2,3,4) - Optional, but maybe you can do something here to signify the increasing volume of these notes? This would follow the music more closely

01:20:887 (4,5,6,7) - Why are these notes less spaced than 01:19:012 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - ? Again stronger notes

01:22:012 (2) - nc on thsi downbeat/kiai note

01:31:762 (1,2) - The bass on slider 2 sounds a lot more intense than the one on slider 1, can you do something here to show that?

01:33:074 (1,2) - Currently reads as a 1/2 jump due to 01:32:887 (2,1) -

01:41:793 (1,1) - Decrease the spacing here, spacing from a circle like this reads as a 1/2 jump because you usually do thing like 01:37:293 (2,1) - Plus, this current pacing during the pattern at 01:41:793 (1,1,1) - is confusing

01:57:262 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I see what you're going for here but these look prett cluttered together atm. You can try a ctrl+h or some other rotation on 01:57:262 (5,6,7,8) -

02:17:137 (3) - Dont think the way you mapped this reverse slider here is very applicable because of how it skips over the stronger beat at 02:17:887 - Try something like this or this (someting clickable on 4)


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i heckin love ur sliders bro

00:19:293 (2,3,4,1) - stream shape here can be a little more defined imo

00:30:824 (4,1) - Why is there such exaggeration and spacing here but none at 00:33:824 (5,1) - ?

00:35:512 (1,2,1,2) - These jumps don't really look applicable here. While the vocal exaggeration is okay there seems to be no notes on 00:35:699 (2,2) -

00:50:512 (1) - Skips over a note you usually map at 00:50:887 -

01:05:512 - Why the sv change here... in the middle of a slider..? Same thing at 01:06:262 - and also 01:08:230 -

01:12:918 (4,1) - Durastic spacing difference from 01:15:918 (4,1) - and 01:18:918 (4,1) -

01:23:793 (1) - 01:30:637 (1) - 01:36:637 (1) - remove nc, since you nc every 2 beats

01:39:262 (5) - add one here

01:43:012 (1,2) - fix blanket with 2?

01:52:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - These streams sound heavily overmapped, even the notes afterward are debatable but expecially these, because its the white noise that's fading in here.

02:02:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - If your going for symmetry here, tilt 02:03:074 (3) - by like -3 degrees


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https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8266626 first try meme

heyo its an m4m

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• Audio is 128 kbps, maybe find a 192 file if you can ill tr to think something about it

drum-hitclap has a transient (loudest part of the hitfile) that is pretty delayed here. Would be optimal if you were able to modify this so that the transient plays earliercutted it a bit, should b better now


xtreme collap
00:14:137 (2,3,4) - If anything I think the larger spacing should be from 00:14:230 (3,4) - because of the stronger note here done

00:21:074 (1) -

01:08:230 (1) - This is a pretty fast spinner, I feel like this overpaces the transition from said spinner to 01:09:449 (1,2,3,4) - it would be better to use a slider as an alternative or smth. Plus, I feel like more exaggeration than a spinner end can be placed at 01:09:262 - idk about this, i tried using slider before, but such long slider just feels really out of place in this diff, i think spinner works a bit better here

01:09:824 (4,1) - Pretty small spacing for a strong note here slightly increase spacing from on those and changed shape of (4)

01:12:262 (1,2,3,4) - 01:15:262 (1,2,3,4) - 01:18:262 (1,2,3,4) - Optional, but maybe you can do something here to signify the increasing volume of these notes? This would follow the music more closely First and last one is fine imo, theres notable spacing changes on those volume rases, and in the second pattern volume changing more gradually and i dont think spacing changes are necessary here

01:20:887 (4,5,6,7) - Why are these notes less spaced than 01:19:012 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - ? Again stronger notes yea I agree on it, ill change it a bit later tho coz its like a transition to sammish part and he will need to readjust some sliders so its doesnt looks like crap

01:22:012 (2) - nc on thsi downbeat/kiai note whoops i probably messed up it sometime, fixed

01:57:262 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I see what you're going for here but these look prett cluttered together atm. You can try a ctrl+h or some other rotation on 01:57:262 (5,6,7,8) - slightly changed angle of first 4 notes and changed position, should be a bit better now

02:17:137 (3) - Dont think the way you mapped this reverse slider here is very applicable because of how it skips over the stronger beat at 02:17:887 - Try something like this or this (someting clickable on 4)I wanted to focus more on vocal in this part plus note on this white tick feels kinda forced to me, ill keep it as it is for now


gl!
Thanks for mod c:

edit: fixed spacing issue at 01:19:012 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) -
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squirrelpascals wrote:
xtreme collap
01:20:887 (4,5,6,7) - Why are these notes less spaced than 01:19:012 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - ? Again stronger notes
uh yea I can change whatever after ur done with it @sulfur

01:31:762 (1,2) - The bass on slider 2 sounds a lot more intense than the one on slider 1, can you do something here to show that?
made it a linear increase in sv and made 2 have a red anchor

01:33:074 (1,2) - Currently reads as a 1/2 jump due to 01:32:887 (2,1) -
I personally disagree; It doesn't come up as an issue when testing and I feel that the player wouldn't have too much problems reading it

01:41:793 (1,1) - Decrease the spacing here, spacing from a circle like this reads as a 1/2 jump because you usually do thing like 01:37:293 (2,1) - Plus, this current pacing during the pattern at 01:41:793 (1,1,1) - is confusing
changed to match previous patterns


thank u squirrel


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Lince's Hard
00:02:512 (1,2,3) - This is really easy to missread as a 3/4 slider because of the high 1/4 spacing betwee 1,2,3 and the fact that 1x SV 3/4 is the exact same length as 0.75x 4/4 one. I really suggest lowering the 1/4 spacing a bit.
00:08:512 - why does the hitsounding get 20% quieter when the song is louder?
00:10:762 (6,1) - blanket isn't perfect
00:17:887 (2,3,1) - slightly lower spacing would remove the overlap at 00:17:887 (2,2) -
00:22:762 (1) - touches the health bar on default skin
00:46:012 (1,2,3) - i think the blankets can be very slightly improved
00:51:637 (2,1) - pretty bad blanket
00:57:824 (5,1) - super small blanket mistake
01:02:512 (1,2) - i would increase spacing slightly, looks like 1/1 but it's 3/2
01:12:824 (1) - silence the spinner
01:18:449 - could have a note like this here since the 1/4 has started already
01:21:449 (1,2) - something like this instead for to capture the wub sound http://puu.sh/wbKYp/321c3b59f0.PNG
kinda dissappointed that there aren't that many SV changes in kiai. I know that it's just hard diff but 01:22:762 (3) - doesn't feel great without speedup
01:30:449 (2,1) - fix blanket
02:14:137 (1) - making it 1/2 beat shorter is better imo for a hard
02:19:012 (1,1) - blanket could be slightly improved

Finshie's Insane
00:13:762 (1,2) - the spacing increase is really sudden and it's hard to read as 1/4 with the overlap
00:28:012 (1,2,3) - i see the stacking of 3 on 1 but the bad blanket it makes with 2 is really noticable. You could break DS slightly and move 2 so it works better or maybe just make a different pattern
00:39:824 (5,6) - 6 is overmapped, should be like this to follow the music Image
01:08:137 (1,1) - manually stack them for better readibility?
01:20:699 (4) - could be split into a kick slider and circle with same spacing as 01:20:137 (1,2,3) -
01:27:074 (1) - why is the SV 2.5x? it's unnecessary, random and confusing since the rest of kiai is without SV changes. You don't even do it here 01:39:074 (1) -
02:10:574 (2,3) - kinda random, you don't use this kind of overlap in the rest of the map. this would be more consistent with the rest

How is this only 4.1* lol

nice wubs
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