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OBRIGADO

rank pls

Here my M4M from modding queue

Collab

Avoid making circles aligned vertically or horizontally it is not great 00:01:437 (1,2) - Like this
00:03:067 (2,3) - Fix the blanket
00:26:708 (2,3,4,5) - Try to make a square it's cool
00:43:828 (4,5) - Fix blanket
Why did not you use all the notes here 00:52:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
Avoid making circles aligned vertically or horizontally it is not great 01:24:915 (5,1,2,3) -
01:27:034 (3,5) - Blanket ?
01:53:447 (5) - Your slider "S" weird
01:55:241 (2,3) - Fix blanket
02:28:828 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8503364 It's good no ?
02:39:263 (1,2) - Fix Blanket

Good luck for the ranking it's a funny map

Hi, M4M with yShadowXOP_

Collab

General Suggestions:
1. space out some of the higher impact triplets.

2. Some of your 1/2 is stacked, which I dislike, but I won't comment on it.

3. Do something in addition to the distance:beat equality you have to help distinguish 1/1 from 1/2

4. Sliders could be polished to be circular, and many notes could be slightly adjusted to blanket each-other.

5. Decrease long slider usage in the kiais


Notes:
1. When i say "uncomfortable movement", i'm making that statement based on angle difficulty for a mouse. maybe it's different for tablet players.


Mod:
00:01:437 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think it'd look nice if the angle on (1,2,3) was the same as the one on from (2) to (3,4,5) to (6).

00:01:681 (2,3,4,5,6) - because of stacking, (2,3) is smaller than (5,6).

00:03:556 - there's a loud sound here, if you don't want to put a circle maybe change the slider shape.

00:03:882 (1) - should this end at 00:04:249?

00:06:165 (4) - could be 1/2 slider

00:08:284 - you could have a 1/2 slider here considering how quiet 00:08:447 (2) is.

00:13:013 (1) - end this on the red tick

00:13:502 (2,3,4) - uncomfortable movement

00:15:458 (5,1) - change this to: circle at 00:15:458, 1/2 slider at 00:15:621, and circle at 00:15:947 to properly represent the drums

00:28:013 (3,5) - could have 1/4 here.

00:33:230 (1) - NC?

00:35:023 (5,1,2,3) - on (5) and (1) you have the sliderhead on the large drum and slidertail on the small drum. (2) and (3) put the larger sound on either reversearrow or slidertail, and (3) starts on the lesser sound. so, it's a consistency issue.
a similar issue happens on 00:36:654 (1,2,3).

00:40:567 (1) - end on red tick

00:48:230 (1,2,3,4) - make it like this: https://image.prntscr.com/image/aY2HdbE ... zZtx9g.png

00:51:817 - add circle?

00:54:100 - i think you should do something for this, it's the same sound as 00:51:980 (2,3,4,5)

01:11:545 (8) - NC?

01:13:665 (5,6,7,8) - very uncomfortable movement.

01:14:154 (8) - NC

01:28:176 (1) - NC

01:37:958 (7) - what if this was 1/2 with a reverse?

01:42:850 - place circle

01:44:154 (5) - ctrl + f

01:52:306 (1) - this isn't acting like a 3 point slider, and may be unintended. to "fix" this, add a slider node and remove it.

02:01:926 (6) - 1/4 slider?

02:26:219 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a NC every 3 notes would be better for these sounds imo

02:57:523 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - feels odd with the other sounds being really prominent.

03:03:230 (4,5,6) - this is hard/uncomfortable for the calm section.

03:26:871 (1,2,3,4,5) - the previous 5 notes were perfect. i think these 5 are too hard for these sounds, the pattern's complexity and the increase in spacing is too much.

03:31:926 (4,5,6) - the spacing here is too large for a large angle. decrease either.

03:44:480 (4,5) - i think this looks bad, but it's subjective aesthetics and not that big of an issue. maybe like this? https://image.prntscr.com/image/HI_Q30o ... 8Mgw1Q.png

03:47:578 (4) - NC

04:01:436 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - here's the correct notes: https://image.prntscr.com/image/36S0GeS ... dG1Mag.png from there, you can simplify it to this: https://image.prntscr.com/image/NN7B-AD ... MDfItA.png


i'm curious who mapped which parts Good Luck.

4n3c wrote:

Hi, M4M with yShadowXOP_
Collab
General Suggestions:
1. space out some of the higher impact triplets.
2. Some of your 1/2 is stacked, which I dislike, but I won't comment on it.
3. Do something in addition to the distance:beat equality you have to help distinguish 1/1 from 1/2
4. Sliders could be polished to be circular, and many notes could be slightly adjusted to blanket each-other.
5. Decrease long slider usage in the kiais
Notes:
1. When i say "uncomfortable movement", i'm making that statement based on angle difficulty for a mouse. maybe it's different for tablet players.
Mod:
00:01:437 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think it'd look nice if the angle on (1,2,3) was the same as the one on from (2) to (3,4,5) to (6).
00:01:681 (2,3,4,5,6) - because of stacking, (2,3) is smaller than (5,6).
00:03:556 - there's a loud sound here, if you don't want to put a circle maybe change the slider shape.
00:03:882 (1) - should this end at 00:04:249?
00:06:165 (4) - could be 1/2 slider
00:08:284 - you could have a 1/2 slider here considering how quiet 00:08:447 (2) is.
00:13:013 (1) - end this on the red tick
00:13:502 (2,3,4) - uncomfortable movement
00:15:458 (5,1) - change this to: circle at 00:15:458, 1/2 slider at 00:15:621, and circle at 00:15:947 to properly represent the drums
00:28:013 (3,5) - could have 1/4 here.
00:33:230 (1) - NC?
00:35:023 (5,1,2,3) - on (5) and (1) you have the sliderhead on the large drum and slidertail on the small drum. (2) and (3) put the larger sound on either reversearrow or slidertail, and (3) starts on the lesser sound. so, it's a consistency issue.
a similar issue happens on 00:36:654 (1,2,3).
00:40:567 (1) - end on red tick
00:48:230 (1,2,3,4) - make it like this: https://image.prntscr.com/image/aY2HdbE ... zZtx9g.png
00:51:817 - add circle?
00:54:100 - i think you should do something for this, it's the same sound as 00:51:980 (2,3,4,5)
01:11:545 (8) - NC?
01:13:665 (5,6,7,8) - very uncomfortable movement.
01:14:154 (8) - NC
01:28:176 (1) - NC
01:37:958 (7) - what if this was 1/2 with a reverse?
01:42:850 - place circle
01:44:154 (5) - ctrl + f
01:52:306 (1) - this isn't acting like a 3 point slider, and may be unintended. to "fix" this, add a slider node and remove it.
02:01:926 (6) - 1/4 slider?
02:26:219 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a NC every 3 notes would be better for these sounds imo
02:57:523 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - feels odd with the other sounds being really prominent.
03:03:230 (4,5,6) - this is hard/uncomfortable for the calm section.
03:26:871 (1,2,3,4,5) - the previous 5 notes were perfect. i think these 5 are too hard for these sounds, the pattern's complexity and the increase in spacing is too much.
03:31:926 (4,5,6) - the spacing here is too large for a large angle. decrease either.
03:44:480 (4,5) - i think this looks bad, but it's subjective aesthetics and not that big of an issue. maybe like this? https://image.prntscr.com/image/HI_Q30o ... 8Mgw1Q.png
03:47:578 (4) - NC
04:01:436 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - here's the correct notes: https://image.prntscr.com/image/36S0GeS ... dG1Mag.png from there, you can simplify it to this: https://image.prntscr.com/image/NN7B-AD ... MDfItA.png
i'm curious who mapped which parts Good Luck.

Hi!
So, the collab criteria was 1 minute for each one, starting with Shadow, there was a storyboard that made this easy to see, but I unfortunaly lost it :/

I'll make it again to help identify wich part is wich ^^

So, I'll contact Shadow, and we are goin' to start fixing, thanks for the suggestions and the mod, there are some visible problems with spacing that I'll fix. ^^

Hi, from my queue

Change timing point offset to about 1432 and move green points

[victor's Insane]

Generally I see that the majority of map is focused on linear movement, but it's insane diff and on this level linear movement is boring in this amount, so think of changing some parts into more circular

00:16:763 (4,5,1,2) - Breaking flow, whole pattern is clear exept for this part
00:27:850 (4,5) - Subjective opinion but it doesn't look good
00:57:523 (5) - Nc
01:25:567 (3,4) - Snap little more
02:04:208 (2) - Sounds from beginning and end are the same so two stacked circles should be better
02:10:078 (1,2,3) - Snap it more

[/Notes]

Hope it can be helpful
Good luck with mapset

00:01:921 (3,4,5) - acho q seria melhor afastar esse triple do 00:01:676 (2,6) -
00:50:018 (4) - põe um slider aqui, tem som no tick vermelho
00:51:323 (1) - ^
00:52:627 (1) - ^
00:53:116 (2,4) - tem som aqui
00:54:095 - ^
00:54:421 - ^
00:54:584 (7) - esse slider deveria acabar no tick vermelho eu acho

00:52:627 (1) - Acho que o ritmo ficaria melhor assim +/-


01:13:171 (9) - NC
01:17:410 (5,7,9) - tem som nos ticks vermelhos, põe circulos e faz um jump zigzag
Algo desse jeito


02:11:214 (3,4,5,6) - aumenta o espaçamento pra dar ênfase no kiai
02:23:931 (2,3) - 02:24:258 (4,5) - ^
02:28:660 (8) - tlvz trocar esse circulo por um slider até 02:29:964 q eh onde termina o vocal
03:12:518 (8,9) - reduz um pouco o espaçamento, n faz sentido ser tão longo esse jump
03:21:649 (2,3) - ^
03:23:605 (5,6,7) - ^
03:26:866 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
04:01:431 (1,2,3) - 04:01:758 (1,2,3,4,5) - tem um som no tick azul entre as streams, junta elas em uma coisa só

Acho que é isso, boa sorte o mapa ta bem daora

That's about it. Overall map was quite enjoyable.

From my queue: t/622943

Simuzax wrote:

00:01:921 (3,4,5) - acho q seria melhor afastar esse triple do 00:01:676 (2,6) -
00:50:018 (4) - põe um slider aqui, tem som no tick vermelho
00:51:323 (1) - ^
00:52:627 (1) - ^
00:53:116 (2,4) - tem som aqui
00:54:095 - ^
00:54:421 - ^
00:54:584 (7) - esse slider deveria acabar no tick vermelho eu acho

00:52:627 (1) - Acho que o ritmo ficaria melhor assim +/-


01:13:171 (9) - NC
01:17:410 (5,7,9) - tem som nos ticks vermelhos, põe circulos e faz um jump zigzag
Algo desse jeito


02:11:214 (3,4,5,6) - aumenta o espaçamento pra dar ênfase no kiai
02:23:931 (2,3) - 02:24:258 (4,5) - ^
02:28:660 (8) - tlvz trocar esse circulo por um slider até 02:29:964 q eh onde termina o vocal
03:12:518 (8,9) - reduz um pouco o espaçamento, n faz sentido ser tão longo esse jump
03:21:649 (2,3) - ^
03:23:605 (5,6,7) - ^
03:26:866 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
04:01:431 (1,2,3) - 04:01:758 (1,2,3,4,5) - tem um som no tick azul entre as streams, junta elas em uma coisa só

Acho que é isso, boa sorte o mapa ta bem daora

Valeu! Desculpa a demora, eu já já vou colocar aqui as coisas que levei em consideração (o que foi bastante), eu tive alguns problemas no computador, por isso não respondi ;-

Amaikai wrote:

Neat

Hitsounds still WIP I assume

00:06:486 (1) - only straight slider in map

These transition badly to that open circle slider. All of these 00:07:138 (3,4,1) - have equal weight on music, but this isn't reflected on map. 3 and 4 have equal weight but jump to 1 comes from uncomfortable angle which would make more sense if music was weighted differently. Currently flow is something like https://puu.sh/wZMw3/c38370d232.png Circular flow with more equal weight would go something like https://puu.sh/wZMOP/028d7ae292.png with emphasis coming from spacing to each circular motion. Sharp angled sliders would work better too, I didn't make picture of it tho.

00:18:388 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Dunno about pattern design here. 00:18:388 (1) - Guitar leaves sound playing and also on 00:19:366 (4) . Both singer and vocals have same tune at 00:18:714 (2,3) - so I would see contrasting 4 compared to 2,3 better. 00:18:388 (1) - is already contrasted by it going another direction.
00:20:345 (4) - This 4 isn't contrasted despite singer and guitar becoming different.

Rhythm here 00:23:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - lasts until 00:24:584 (white tick) and singer starts following red ticks instead of whites here 00:24:910 (1,2,3,4) - , currently strong sounds end up on sliderends which isn't really ideal. Compare to: 00:27:355 (1,2,3) -

This has clap 00:30:453 (3) - but 00:30:127 (1) - doesn't, despite drums having strong beats on both spots.

Whats the map following here 00:36:649 (1,2,3) - ? Drum follows white ticks. Vocals do 00:36:649 (1,2) - but then switch to red ticks 00:37:464 and 00:37:790. First 2 sliders do follow vocals but 3rd slider 00:37:627 (3) - is ignoring vocal on red tick and guitar on next white tick.

Sliderend is still bad 00:38:931 (5,6) - at representing strong sounds on music. Hitsounds (like clap) would make it sound better imo, if you don't want to map notes to 1/4 drum hits.

00:47:736 (3,3) - Strong sounds on slider ends, singer zizi and drum hit. Also later on map 01:33:877 (1) - you have sliderend on beat that starts a section. There were several spots around map where you have sliderend on strong parts of beats, homework to find them all and figure if it makes sense to have passively played element on strong part.

01:01:105 (4) - mute sliderend on sliders like these, the sound at sliderend lands on nothing on that spot.

01:12:518 (6) - NC
01:14:149 (1) - NC

If you do NC changes 01:14:149 (1,2,3,4) - this should be pattern seperateable from 01:15:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - while currently transition between "sections" isn't the best. Also I think 1/2 rhyhm with notes at 01:15:127 (1,2,3,4,5) - to follow vocals would fit better than slider+stream there.

02:23:605 (1) - Finish HS here but not at 00:39:258 (1) - , should be mapped similarly however you end up mapping them.

That's about it. Overall map was quite enjoyable.

From my queue: t/622943

Heyo, Thanks for the mod! Sorry for the delay, I ran into some issues with my computer, but it's all resolved now.

Milar001 wrote:

Hi, from my queue

Change timing point offset to about 1432 and move green points

[victor's Insane]

Generally I see that the majority of map is focused on linear movement, but it's insane diff and on this level linear movement is boring in this amount, so think of changing some parts into more circular

00:16:763 (4,5,1,2) - Breaking flow, whole pattern is clear exept for this part
00:27:850 (4,5) - Subjective opinion but it doesn't look good
00:57:523 (5) - Nc
01:25:567 (3,4) - Snap little more
02:04:208 (2) - Sounds from beginning and end are the same so two stacked circles should be better
02:10:078 (1,2,3) - Snap it more

[/Notes]

Hope it can be helpful
Good luck with mapset

...Victor's diff was already removed from the mapset before this post, but to not make your effort in vain, I applied it to the diff's backup I have here, I may even put the diff back into the mapset

Hello!

From my queue:

00:20:997 (1) - Not quite in line with the following note, needs to be turned a couple degrees counter-clockwise.
00:38:931 (5,6,1) - These strange overlaps look pretty ugly. Maybe increase spacing a little to improve aesthetics?
01:01:105 (4,5) - Short slider doesn't flow well with next object - move a little more the the right.
01:03:714 (5,6) - Same as above - potentially even replace these short sliders with a stacked note on the long slider?
01:08:931 (7,8) - ^ (I won't point any more of these out)
01:36:486 (1) - Replace with 2 notes to emphasise white tick.
02:06:323 (4,1) - Jump is too far for the music, try reducing it a bit.
02:10:562 (1) - Move upwards a bit for better flow from the last slider.
02:28:660 (8) - Long, held note - replace with a spinner?

The rest of the map looks good, except for a few more weird slider flows and overlaps.

GL, HF!

00:20:997 (1) - Not quite in line with the following note, needs to be turned a couple degrees counter-clockwise. Fixed

00:38:931 (5,6,1) - These strange overlaps look pretty ugly. Maybe increase spacing a little to improve aesthetics? Applied, increased distance and added curves in parallel for aesthetics, very satisfied with the result.

01:01:105 (4,5) - Short slider doesn't flow well with next object - move a little more the the right. Fixed

01:03:714 (5,6) - Same as above - potentially even replace these short sliders with a stacked note on the long slider? I Kept the short slider like that for consistency, it's kind the map's highlight pattern, used in the same sound, but aesthetics were improved.

01:08:931 (7,8) - ^ (I won't point any more of these out) I Discussed with Shadow, we think the map would not sound nor look as we like with those short sliders replaced, but I'll look forward to improve their aesthetics.

01:36:486 (1) - Replace with 2 notes to emphasise white tick. Fixed

02:06:323 (4,1) - Jump is too far for the music, try reducing it a bit.

ShadowX wrote:

It has the same rhythm as here 02:08:931 (4,1)

And as much that I don't like denying mods, I don't find this too brute, it's an Expert rated map after all.

02:10:562 (1) - Move upwards a bit for better flow from the last slider. Fixed

02:28:660 (8) - Long, held note - replace with a spinner? Added, but I think I'll make some kind of sliderart because it fits better, or not

The rest of the map looks good, except for a few more weird slider flows and overlaps. Thank You.

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