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HTT - Girls in Wonderland

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wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
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wcx19911123
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年9月21日 at 13:12:03

Artist: HTT
Title: Girls in Wonderland
Source: K-ON!!
Tags: Toyosaki Aki Hikasa Yoko Youko Satou Satomi Kotobuki Minako Taketatsu Ayana Hirasawa Yui Akiyama Mio Tainaka Ritsu Kotobuki Tsumugi Nakano Asuza keion HTT HO-KAGO TEA TIME Afterschool Sumisola
BPM: 235
Filesize: 5934kb
Play Time: 03:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (5 stars, 593 notes)
  2. Normal (3.21 stars, 209 notes)
  3. Sumisola's Hard (4.74 stars, 455 notes)
Download: HTT - Girls in Wonderland
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 7th map
changed artist , please redl it if you get it before Wed Sep 21, 2011 1:18 pm [GMT+8]

-----staff-----
Normal/Insane by wcx19911123
Sumisola's Hard by Sumisola

enjoy~~ >w<
Last edited by wcx19911123 , edited 13 times in total.
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
You can earn kudosu by helping mod this map! You will gain 1 kudosu if you mod this map.

And

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Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
I'll show you girls MY wonderland ;DDDDDD .
JoJo
1,177 posts
Joined July 2010
JoJo
随手触死一打mapper的男人。。TAT
SPOILER
嫉妒了嫉妒了嫉妒了嫉妒了嫉妒了嫉妒了嫉妒了嫉妒了嫉妒了嫉妒了嫉妒了嫉妒了
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
BPM 235..................................
我一看就觉得没安好心
Sumisola
475 posts
Joined June 2010
Sumisola
低调上传.......完成了的次品

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Download: Hikasa Youko - Girls in Wonderland (wcx19911123) [Sumisola's Hard].osu
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
- Rche -
又送星.

artist: Hisaka Youko-->Hisaka Yoko?
因為舊圖都用yoko然後把youko丟到tag那邊去. <--湊字數.

no kds.
EnakoRin
EnakoRin
General
  • try offset = 420
    Normal和Hard之间的跳跃是不是有点太大了
Normal
  • 没kiai啊?
    00:01:703 (2) - 第一个圈加finish？
    00:21:873 (5,6) - 把5放在6的两个圈的正中间的话更好看
    00:29:533 (4) - new combo?
    00:33:618 (3) - new combo?
    00:37:703 (3) - new combo?
    00:49:448 (4) - 加finish?
    01:40:129 (4) - 听起来有点怪,把开头放在01:40:001,结尾不变?
    01:43:065 (4) - new combo?
    02:52:001 (2) - new combo?
Sumisola's Hard
  • 00:10:001 (5,2) - 木有重叠好,关掉GS,按住alt用鼠标滚轮把DS降为0再重新排
    00:39:235 (4) - 第一个圈加finish
    00:58:001 (8) - 仔细看看，不对称
    01:07:831 (4) - 加finish
    01:20:086 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
    01:23:150 (1) - 加finish
    02:13:192 (4) - 加finish
    02:52:001 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
    02:56:086 (2) - 第一个圈加finish
    03:15:235 (1) - 最后一个圈加finish
    03:24:682 (1,2) - 加finish
    个人认为加一些normal-hitnormal的音效更带感
Insane
  • 没kiai啊？
    02:46:895 (3,1) - 没重叠好
star. 欠一个KDS star（不要老是做神图啊魂淡！KDS不够加啊！）
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EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren

wcx19911123 wrote:

ModLanguage: 用不用这么严啊
这么做是有原因的= =格式不对会被SKIP

kiddly
885 posts
Joined February 2009
kiddly
;)

[General]
  • tag和artist里都有Hikasa Youko,重复了。类似这样重复的还有一些其实是没有必要的，建议删去。
    3个难度的kiai至少保证大体相同不然肯定被挑到死。
[Normal]
  • 作为一个N，我觉得slider略快了点，其实主要是可能被其他人挑所以稍微说一句233。
[Sumisola's Hard]
  • 考虑到全局比较高的slider速度，ar6实在是太低了，至少也要7。
    no hitsound？
    no preview point？
    00:42:299 (3) - new combo。
    01:06:299 (7) - 提前1/2拍然后在拉长1/2拍，不然01:06:171这位置有歌词却空掉了，很不舒服。
    02:09:490 (3) - 拉长1/4拍。
    02:13:192 (4) - 建议要么拉出来要么new combo.
    02:19:320 (1) - 感觉这么长的来回略有点无聊……拆成3个会好点。
    02:20:852 (1) - 其实这里是1/3的。
[Insane]
  • 音效略单调啊，至少多用些finish和whistle……其实normal也有这个问题不过考虑到N确实不好加，就算了。
RobotoRaccoon
224 posts
Joined December 2010
RobotoRaccoon
I only looked at 2 because of the song length
[Normal]

Great!

[Sumisola's Hard]

No problems found without going Nazi.

Good luck!
Star~
DeeN
380 posts
Joined July 2008
DeeN
here we go

<Normal>
nothing



<Sumisola's Hard>
00:56:852 (5) - new combo?

没完成？我是说音效。

<Insanse>
00:17:278 (2) - 去掉折返 然后在00:17:788加个note怎么样?

00:18:299 (5,6,7,8,1) - 建议这5个埋绿线音量渐强

00:26:597 (7,8) - 这个定在（4）很不舒服 建议和之前的（5,6）距离近一点

01:16:001 (1) - add a note?

01:16:256 - 01:17:788 音量轻 01:17:788 - 01:20:086 跟着BASS音埋绿线音量渐强（我觉得这里加soft clap不错ww）

01:29:150 (4,5,6,7) - 6摆在4的位置？

01:46:895 - 01:47:278 加一个0.5速的silder?

02:37:703 (1,2) - Reverse selection

02:38:469 (5,6) - ^

02:40:512 (5,6) - ^

没什么具体好说的主要需要加强的就是音效
虽然是我喜欢的排版风格但是为什么莫名的有些卡手

神麻婆受我一拜 ;_;
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
NI HAO

Normal
* There is some slidertick that is hidden during gameplay. Example, 00:01:703 (2). If you can see the slidertick at editor, please see at solo/test mode. Please fix this things, or the beginner player thought that this slider is a bug

00:34:767 (4) - The head slider isn't follow the beat or rhythm at the song. Try move this to 3rd white tick for following the beat or rhythm
01:17:022 (2) - Move to 01:16:895 for following the vocal on song?
01:20:086 (1) - Add finish at head slider?
01:40:129 (4) - Same issue as 00:34:767 (4)

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Sumisola's Hard
* AR +1 or +2, to make a better flows. Using a fast SV and slow AR can breaking the flows (?)
* This diff needs more hitsounds
* Change the AudioLeadIn to "1500", fix this using a notepad/wordpad
* Change the PreviewTime to "43192", fix this using a notepad/wordpad

01:47:661 (4) - 1/8 kickstream is doesn't fit to the beat/rhythm on the song, maybe try to change in 1/4 kickstream?
02:55:575 (1) - ^

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Can't shoot the blue star, due to star being useless...... sorry :(
The 08 team_Bourdon
710 posts
Joined February 2010
The 08 team_Bourdon
Hello ;)
just give some suggestion.

Normal
looks good.

Sumisola's Hard
00:13:192 (3) - up 2 grid?
00:13:703 (5) - left 7 grid?
00:13:958 (6) - ^
00:18:299 (5) - add one more repeat?
00:16:512 (7) - delete this slider, and add a circle?
00:20:597 (6) - ^
00:58:001 (8) - this slider looks very strange.
01:30:044 (5) - delete this slider, then add 3 circle?
02:17:278 (1,2,3) - delete this slider, add a circle at 02:17:278, then add a slider at 02:17:533 to 02:18:044, then add a slider at 02:18:299 to 02:18:544 and 02:18:809 to 02:19:065 ?
02:19:320 (1) - too long of this slider repeat.

Insane
Nice Insane. 8-)

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Cool mapset!!
GoodLuck!~ :D

uh... i cant shoot a little star, because being useless :(
Esupanitix
393 posts
Joined June 2009
Esupanitix
Normal
00:00:427 Combo
1 - Is it really necessary to put all of these timing points here? They don't affect the slider in any way, shape, or form.
Edit: Oh, it's for hitsounds. Well, editing the hitsound use constantly is really annoying to modders because of the timing section change marks. For future reference, don't do it unless it's for Kiai time, and NOT REPEATEDLY, or only one or two times through a normal section.

00:26:980 Combo
4 - Misspaced slightly.

That's it.

Sumisola
I don't have any complaints for the map except that this looks much more like a lunatic/insane than a hard. The distance snap is a bit too far for the circle size and frequency of beats, not to mention the slider velocity. Sumisola, please work on it.
SYSEN
319 posts
Joined July 2011
SYSEN
general:
for the artist name..........
well, i don't know much about it but:
i think it's from Houkago Tea Time since it's not a character song like Tokimeki Sugar. other Mio character song, and other song that Hikasa sings and this song is categorized on the other songs in Season 2 from the wiki ( http://k-on.wikia.com/wiki/K-ON!).....
maybe better add Yoko in tags, the wiki says : it's Hikasa Yoko http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Y%C5%8Dko_Hikasa some people search Yoko Hikasa instead of Youko
and add Afterschool (from Afterschool Tea Time)

normal:
00:59:661 -01:05:533 -hey hey... this part fits with default soft whistle.. maybe you can consider fill some part with the soft whistle
02:43:831 -02:49:703:same as above
02:51:490 (1) - add finish at the end of the sliders
03:15:490 (1,2,3) - remove the clap and add finish (if you do it, i recommend to decrease the audio to 65% to match the song)
03:23:661 (1) - finishes

Sumisola's hard: a bit empty ....i think because of the hitsounds : (
00:41:405 (2) - argh my combo broke up because of this......well....it's not a bad thing XD
00:43:831 (4,5) - isn't it....too hard to predict since it's 1/4?
01:47:661 (4) - i recommend to change this into 1/1 notes (sluders or jumps )
02:12:171 (1,2,3,4) - this...maybe unstack it?
01:23:150 (1) - this spinner...it's just feel a bit ankward

insane:
oh...no problems
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn
General:

-your easiest diff is 3.21 stars...I think it should be fine since Normal is pretty easy, but some mat/bats will probably complain about it :?

Normal:

00:22:895 (6,1) - Switch NCs?
03:19:575 (1,2) - ^
03:23:661 (1,2) - ^

Sumisola's Hard:

-near the start, you have some 1/2s that are spaced farther away than usual...I think that you should space these closer like all the other ones. As they are, they're quite difficult due to the high bpm :?

00:51:490 (1) - too close to (4), especially because it's far apart on the timeline
01:40:512 (6) - new combo?
03:02:980 (9) - I think this slider doesn't play well and it's somewhat hard to predict :? perhaps change it?
03:17:022 (5) - unstack this?

Insane:

01:50:214 - Add a note? IMO, it seems odd without one here :?

Nice map~
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[General]
- Hard has different audio lead-in and lacks preview time.
- Tag Sumisola
- We can search nothing by searching K-ON!! (maybe because of the "!"), so K-ON!! and K-ON makes no difference, delete the tag.
- 
Sample,34895,0,"soft-hitclap.wav",65
More claps can be put in similar place in the later part of this song? Also it's a bit too loud, make it ~ 70% would be better.

[Insane]
Being an insane OD+1 maybe more appropiate.
01:19:575 (5) - remove clap at the beginning
01:34:895 (4) - minor fix on slider shape
72,272,94895,2,0,B|96:176|200:208,1,160,0|8
02:55:831 (9,10) - down 1 grid

very good :3

[Hard]
01:47:661 (4) - the 1/8 seems too loud for me, make it softer?
02:25:448 (1) - left 1 lv4 grid

nice...but where's hitsound?

[Normal]
00:40:384 (2) - make the slidertick sounding like before?
00:43:831 (1) - just an idea... putting a slidertick like sound here and 1/4 after may works well


looks technically nice. I'd love the slidertick arrangments as well.

star~
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Tony
Hey there. Here are some suggestions.

[Normal]

00:44:341 (2) - ugly overlapping
01:57:873 (2) - this doesn't fit at all...move it 1/1 late

[Sumisola's Hard]
Interesting Angled Slider Design
00:10:895 (2) - not stacked properly. move it to: x:257 y:263. (I know it's a bit too Nazi but I think you can improve this)
01:21:618 (4) - ugly overlapping
01:28:001 (4,5) - better stack them with slider (2)
01:38:469 (1) - the end of slider is offscreen..move it somehow
01:38:980 (2) - ugly overlapping
01:47:661 (4) - make this 1/2 stream not 1/4. It sounds horrible imo
01:50:214 (4) - better stack this with (2)
03:17:022 (5) - this stacking is confusing

[Insane]
Nicely done :3
If you had angled sliders I would have said : "copy/paste val0108 style".
01:32:724 (2) - offscreen note...
02:37:831 (2,3) - this jump is really unexpected and it doesn't fit

good luck with this :3
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
[General]
tag加上Sumisola

[Normal]
00:46:384 (4,1,2) - 不均勻的間距

[Sumisola's Hard]
建議combo顏色要改
01:02:724 (5,6,1) - 直線嗎??
02:12:171 (1,2,3,4) - 不好的排法 容易讓人感覺拍點都一樣造成失誤
03:24:682 (1,2) - 放對稱會比較好??

[Insane]
01:16:256 - 我認為這地方是可以減速的 不過看你的意思吧:)
02:07:065 (1) - 純粹是nazi 可以拉的更圓一些嗎?? 因為你其他都拉好圓 就這個看了不習慣的說

lol你們又把BPM X2了對不對Q_Q
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
thanks for modding :)
fixed some
uptated
thanks you all
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