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Kishida Kyoudan & The Akeboshi Rockets - Rewriter

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Suzully
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年10月11日 at 23:54:30

Artist: Kishida Kyoudan & The Akeboshi Rockets
Title: Rewriter
Source: Rewrite
Tags: Key
BPM: 186
Filesize: 14899kb
Play Time: 03:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Monster Tamer (2.81 stars, 179 notes)
  2. Rewriter (5 stars, 602 notes)
  3. Superman (4.72 stars, 327 notes)
Download: Kishida Kyoudan & The Akeboshi Rockets - Rewriter
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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岸田教団＆The明星ロケッツ
Rewriter

Normal - 100%
Hard - 100%
Insane - 100%
SB - 100%

My 18th beatmap.
And my 1st challenge for SB.
Last edited by Suzully , edited 33 times in total.
Naichatta
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Naichatta
ｽﾞｻ━━━━⊂（ﾟДﾟ⊂⌒｀つ≡≡≡━━━━!!
Suzully
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kusano wrote:

ｽﾞｻ━━━━⊂（ﾟДﾟ⊂⌒｀つ≡≡≡━━━━!!
この早さはおかしい
ｽﾍﾟｼｬﾙｱﾘｶﾞﾄｳ(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ
S o r d a
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Joined July 2009
S o r d a
期待！！！！！！！！
ヾ(・ω・ｏ)ヾ(・ω・ｏ)ヾ(・ω・ｏ)
kokono_tan
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Joined November 2010
kokono_tan
岸田教団ｷﾀ━━━━(ﾟ∀ﾟ)━━━━!!
岸田好きなので期待してますw
Takos
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Takos
rewrite好きだなーw
期待してます、ふぁいと〜
Suzully
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Suzully
@S o r d a, kokono_tan, Takos
ありがとー！　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Hinacle
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Hinacle
SPOILER
未来のMATすずりーさんじゃないですか！！
Suzully
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Hinacle wrote:

SPOILER
未来のMATすずりーさんじゃないですか！！
Nope!!(ﾟДﾟ)
JoJo
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JoJo
Nice song ~ >A<

S o r d a wrote:

期待！！！！！！！！
ヾ(・ω・ｏ)ヾ(・ω・ｏ)ヾ(・ω・ｏ)
Suzully
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JoJo wrote:

Nice song ~ >A<

S o r d a wrote:

期待！！！！！！！！
ヾ(・ω・ｏ)ヾ(・ω・ｏ)ヾ(・ω・ｏ)
Thanks<3
KSHR
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:) :D ;) >:( :( :o :shock: :? 8-) :lol: :x :P :oops: :cry: :evil: :twisted: :roll: :!: :?: :idea: :arrow: :|
AoiX
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AoiX
Rewrite :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!:
hope it can be ranked
Suzully
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xykbear wrote:

Rewrite :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!:
hope it can be ranked
Thanks for star :D
Breeze
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Breeze
こんにちは、Ｓｕｚｕｌｌｙさん　 ;)

[General]
  1. No any tags like Key, GAL, AVG?
[SB]
  1. nice SB, only one thing I noticed, 02:20:707 - FGKGO5B.jpg, there is a fade in effect, but I feel it viewed no as good as expected, you can try check Erasing "OUT" in the left tool bar, that make it looks better
[Timing]
  1. I got a offset 10385 (-2 from yours) which is only 2ms difference, so I think yours is fine
[Monster Tamer]
  1. 01:29:094 (1) - How about add a finish here?
[Superman]
  1. 01:29:094 (1) - Finish?
[Rewrite]
  1. 01:29:094 (1) - Finish?
  2. 02:36:514 - No break here?
いい譜面ですよ
star
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn
Monster Tamer:

00:23:290 (5) - new combo

Superman:

Fine

Rewriter:

Fine

nice map~ =w=
Suzully
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Breeze wrote:

こんにちは、Ｓｕｚｕｌｌｙさん　 ;) こんにちは、Breezeさん :)

[General]
  1. No any tags like Key, GAL, AVG? Added Key >w<
[SB]
  1. nice SB, only one thing I noticed, 02:20:707 - FGKGO5B.jpg, there is a fade in effect, but I feel it viewed no as good as expected, you can try check Erasing "OUT" in the left tool bar, that make it looks better Fixed~
    [attachment=0:a9d75]0.png[/attachment:a9d75]
[Timing]
  1. I got a offset 10385 (-2 from yours) which is only 2ms difference, so I think yours is fine Fixed~
[Monster Tamer]
  1. 01:29:094 (1) - How about add a finish here? Oops...added.
[Superman]
  1. 01:29:094 (1) - Finish? Added.
[Rewrite]
  1. 01:29:094 (1) - Finish? Added.
  2. 02:36:514 - No break here? I don't want to use break here because SB is hidden by break-element. In Normal and Hard, there is a big space between notes so I added break. But in this diff, the space is short so I didn't add it.
いい譜面ですよ ありがとうございます
star

pieguy1372 wrote:

Monster Tamer:

00:23:290 (5) - new combo Fixed.

Superman:

Fine

Rewriter:

Fine

nice map~ =w=
Thank you for mod~ :)
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
from my que

[General]
EpilepsyWarning is different between Rewriter and other 2 diffs

[SB]
change to this ?
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\FGCH05A.jpg",320,240
 F,0,47481,,0
 M,0,47481,58126,423,240,264,240
 S,0,47481,58126,1.064
 F,0,49739,49820,1,0
 F,0,49901,49981,1,0
 F,0,50062,50143,1,0
 F,0,50223,50304,0,1
 F,0,50304,58126,1
I think it fade in too late..

also can try something like this in somewhere
 F,1,60707,61030,1,0
 F,0,61191,61514,1,0
 F,0,61836,62320,1,0
add to 
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.jpg",320,240

and change to this
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\BG_2.png",320,240
 F,2,78772,79417,1,0
 S,1,78772,79417,1.2,0.8
do same as this at 03:07:159 -

[Monster Tamer]
01:34:255 (1,2) - kinda confusing to newbies imo , maybe try this ? http://puu.sh/609N
02:57:481 (2) - change to 1/1 repeat slider? follow the vocal and can add a clap here

[Superman]
02:07:159 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - nice flow , how about jump a little on 02:08:288 (2) ?

[Rewriter]
00:39:417 (9,10,11,1,2,3) - kinda confusing , but with AR9 , I think it is fine
00:47:804 (1) - slider shape is different with other diffs , all straight feel kinda boring 0.0
01:35:546 (1,2,3,4,5) - jump more far 0.0?
02:01:675 (1) - ctrl + r ? flow better imo
02:36:514 - add break ? it is kinda dangerous when playing with HR..

awesome map
sorry for my poor modding , especially sb mod ;_;
Suzully
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Suzully

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que

[General]
EpilepsyWarning is different between Rewriter and other 2 diffs Oops...fixed~

[SB]
change to this ?
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\FGCH05A.jpg",320,240
 F,0,47481,,0
 M,0,47481,58126,423,240,264,240
 S,0,47481,58126,1.064
 F,0,49739,49820,1,0
 F,0,49901,49981,1,0
 F,0,50062,50143,1,0
 F,0,50223,50304,0,1
 F,0,50304,58126,1
I think it fade in too late..

also can try something like this in somewhere
 F,1,60707,61030,1,0
 F,0,61191,61514,1,0
 F,0,61836,62320,1,0
add to 
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.jpg",320,240

and change to this
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\BG_2.png",320,240
 F,2,78772,79417,1,0
 S,1,78772,79417,1.2,0.8
do same as this at 03:07:159 -

All fixed on SB!

[Monster Tamer]
01:34:255 (1,2) - kinda confusing to newbies imo , maybe try this ? http://puu.sh/609N I keep it for now, sorry.
02:57:481 (2) - change to 1/1 repeat slider? follow the vocal and can add a clap here ^

[Superman]
02:07:159 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - nice flow , how about jump a little on 02:08:288 (2) ? Fixed.

[Rewriter]
00:39:417 (9,10,11,1,2,3) - kinda confusing , but with AR9 , I think it is fine I also think it's fine~
00:47:804 (1) - slider shape is different with other diffs , all straight feel kinda boring 0.0 Fixed.
01:35:546 (1,2,3,4,5) - jump more far 0.0? Fixed.
02:01:675 (1) - ctrl + r ? flow better imo Nah.
02:36:514 - add break ? it is kinda dangerous when playing with HR.. I see your point, but it's fine imo. After it, there is long stream so HP can be recovered :P

awesome map
sorry for my poor modding , especially sb mod ;_;
Thank you very much for mod and star~ :)
Your SB mod is very valuable for me!
mercury2004
615 posts
Joined February 2010
mercury2004
Mod as requested.(Poor mod)

Red: Means.You are breaking beatmapping rules. You should change it immediately.
Orange: Means. My Suggestion. It is okay whether you change it or not
Purple:Means. Highly Recommend you to change it.

General
This map set is perfectly done well. This should get rank already. Star for you
I recommended you to lower your SB size from 800x600 to 640x480. Because the preferred size of static SB is 640x480 My beatmap got popped, because of SB was 800x600.
There is an issue in SB. Here
SPOILER
There is a black strip there. Its mean you downsize it too much.

Monster Tamer
00:34:578 (5,2) - Move 2 under 5 ?

Superman
Fine

Rewriter
Fine



You don't need Kudos this. If this is not helpful at all.
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