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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年5月19日 at 6:45:55

Artist: Mastermind(xi+nora2r)
Title: Dreadnought
Source: BMS
Tags: World Fragments Diverse System DVSP-0145 C89 Breakthrough 大血戦 -THE BMS OF FIGHTERS ULTIMATE- BOFU2015 Yusuke Ishiwata Kohei Ohtsu
BPM: 192
Filesize: 8051kb
Play Time: 05:01
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Download: Mastermind(xi+nora2r) - Dreadnought
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Image Bravery Taiko Soul - Completed
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16:39 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1280900 Mastermind (xi+nora2) - Dreadnought [Bravery Taiko Soul]]
16:39 Charlotte: complete
16:39 iloveyou4ever: 6.24* wow
16:40 Charlotte: I need advice.
16:40 Charlotte: still wip
16:40 iloveyou4ever: let me try first XDD
16:40 Charlotte: spect
16:46 iloveyou4ever: rsi inc
16:46 iloveyou4ever: ...
16:46 Charlotte: rsi?
16:47 iloveyou4ever: 02:04:424 - 
16:47 iloveyou4ever: maybe let the usage of sv in spinner parts be consistent?
16:47 Charlotte: okay.
16:47 iloveyou4ever: add some sv change here as well cuz you added at 00:31:924 - 
16:48 Charlotte: hmm...bule tick?
16:49 iloveyou4ever: bule kick?
16:49 Charlotte: bule line?
16:49 iloveyou4ever: green line
16:50 iloveyou4ever: not blue line XDD,blue line is bookmark
16:50 iloveyou4ever: sv change=green line
16:50 Charlotte: no no no no
16:50 iloveyou4ever: no?
16:51 iloveyou4ever: ...
16:52 Charlotte: https://puu.sh/vAOYJ/772439b26c.png
16:52 iloveyou4ever: ohhhh you mean 1/4 divisor...
16:52 Charlotte: yes
16:52 iloveyou4ever: yes add sv on it :D
16:53 Charlotte: bule line<3
16:53 iloveyou4ever: I don't understand sorry XD
16:53 Charlotte: bule line SV change is good?
16:53 iloveyou4ever: yes :D
16:53 Charlotte: hmm...ok.I'll try
16:54 iloveyou4ever: and here
16:54 Charlotte: sure
16:54 iloveyou4ever: 02:12:783-
16:54 iloveyou4ever: 02:12:783 - 
16:54 iloveyou4ever: change like this? https://puu.sh/vAOSC.jpg
16:55 iloveyou4ever: I just think 02:13:642 - this need to be removed,as it's new part of music
16:55 iloveyou4ever: use 1/2 to divide the notes into two parts and let players know the music part change
16:56 Charlotte: emphasize new melody!
16:56 iloveyou4ever: yes
16:59 iloveyou4ever: 02:43:955 - 
16:59 iloveyou4ever: remove this,no obvious sound here
17:01 iloveyou4ever: 02:51:611 - I will remove this and add a note at 02:52:392 - 
17:01 iloveyou4ever: emm nvm ignore the above suggestion
17:02 Charlotte: ok
17:03 iloveyou4ever: 02:54:658 - add D and start at 02:54:736 - 
17:03 iloveyou4ever: I just think it needs emphasis here
17:03 Charlotte: sure.
17:05 iloveyou4ever: 02:59:424 - remove this?
17:05 iloveyou4ever: new melody again
17:06 Charlotte: fixed.
17:06 iloveyou4ever: and add a note at 03:00:986 - 
17:06 iloveyou4ever: connection
17:07 iloveyou4ever: 03:09:424 - and remove this for consistency too 
17:07 Charlotte: fixed.
17:08 iloveyou4ever: 03:19:971 - too messy?
17:08 iloveyou4ever: I think it doesn't fit the music
17:09 iloveyou4ever: oops I hear wrongly...it's fine
17:09 Charlotte: ok
17:10 iloveyou4ever: 03:32:158 - and the kiai time should start here?
17:12 Charlotte: nope.for consistency
17:12 iloveyou4ever: ok
17:13 iloveyou4ever: I think others are fine
17:13 iloveyou4ever: pretty consistent with suitable variation
17:13 Charlotte: please post
17:13 iloveyou4ever: oh ok :D
17:14 iloveyou4ever: you may call me to check again if you want >_<


Good Luck :)
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こんにちは~ M4Mありです:3

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  • 多くのRanked譜面と比較し、mp3の音量が若干小さいように感じます。必須ではありませんが平均100dB前後ほどに音量を上げても良いと思います。


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誤字脱字等で読み取れない部分があったらまた連絡お願いします
Good luck!
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00:14:346 (77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - -> d kkd k d k ddd? ここだけ1/2の2拍目からの1/4がなくて違和感があったのと、後ろのdddの音も目立っていいかなと思いました。
d kkd kkd k dddでもいいかもしれません。
00:24:346 (170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179) - 同上
04:34:346 (906,907,908,909,910,911,912,913,914,915) - 同上
04:44:346 (999,1000,1001,1002,1003,1004,1005,1006,1007,1008) - 同上
04:54:346 (1094,1095,1096,1097,1098,1099,1100,1101,1102,1103) - 同上
00:49:346 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - ->d__d__d_k_kk(kkkk)kd? 1/6の前に来てる1/4の2音はしっかりとった方が叩きやすいと思いました。
01:11:221 (181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191) - ->(dddk)d(kkdk)dk? どんどん上がっていくメロディーに合わせると気持ちいいかなと思いました。
逆手で1/6kkdkを叩くことになるので、叩きにくいという人が多かったら(dddk)d(kkkd)dkでもいいかもしれません。とにかく最後はkにした方がいいと思いました。
01:28:721 (338,339,340,341,342,343,344,345) - ->d_kkdkdkd? 01:29:189 を開けているのが不自然に感じたので
01:33:096 (384,385,386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393,394,395) - ->(1/6kkkdddk_d_d_k)_d_k ここら辺の音、最初はDLしたときに音源壊れちゃったのかと思いました 一応1/6鳴ってるので取るとしたらこんな感じがいいかなと思います。
02:18:721 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - ->d_kdddkkd? 02:13:877 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21) と合わせてddkkdを入れた方が方がプレイしたときの違和感が少ないと思いました。
02:21:221 (88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97) - ->kd(kkkd)_kkd? ゆむやさんのmodにも書いてあるように1/6の位置が少し違うのと、個人的に次の大音符地帯を気持ちよく叩くために1/6の後は空けた方がいいと思いました。
02:26:533 (135,136,137,138) - ->(kkkd)dk? ここも取るとしたらという感じです
02:53:721 (399,400,401) - ->(kddk)? 取るとしたら オーバーマッピングがよくわからないので1/6いけると思っところを指摘しています

力尽きました。
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    Artist
  • Remove the space between Mastermind and (xi+nora2), so it should look like "Mastermind(xi+nora2r)" since that's how the alias is written and shown officially.
    Source
  • Add BMS in Source, since this song was part of the BOFU 2015 contest called 大血戦 -THE BMS OF FIGHTERS ULTIMATE-.
    Tags
  • Add World Fragments in tags, this is the album the longer version of the song was released in.
  • Add Diverse System in tags, this is the label the album was released under.
  • Add DVSP-0145 in tags, this is the catalog number for the album.
  • Add C89 or Comiket 89 in tags, since the album was released in this event.
  • Add SOUND VOLTEX IV HEAVENLY HAVEN in tags, since this song appeared in the SOUND VOLTEX series as a shorter version.
  • Add KONAMI in tags, this is the parent company that oversees BEMANI and BMS.
  • Add BEMANI in tags, they're the rhythm game division of KONAMI and they preside over the SOUND VOLTEX series.
  • Add Breakthrough in tags, since this is the offical music genre of the song Dreadnought.
  • Add 大血戦 -THE BMS OF FIGHTERS ULTIMATE- or BOFU2015 in tags, since the song appeared in the contest.
  • Add Yusuke Ishiwata in tags, this is xi's real name. (Optional)
  • Add Kohei Ohtsu in tags, this is nora2r's real name. (Optional)
  • Add CHUNITHM in tags, the song also appeared in SEGA's rhythm game as well. (Optional)
Sources used: Remy Wiki, VGMdb, Diverse System, World Fragments, SoundCloud, BOFU 2015, Yusuke Ishiwata, Kohei Ohtsu.

Image General Suggestions

    Background Image
  • Here's a higher resolution image for the BG, unfortunately it doesn't have the text of the Artist and Song Title. (Optional)
    Inconsistent Values
  • All of the Inherited Timing points are unsnapped as well as your Kiai times due to you changing the Offset for your new MP3 file. This should be an easy fix for ya.
    Hitsounding
  • How about increasing the volume from 70% to 80% for the Kiai times? You can emphasize the Kiai sections more since the song begins to crescendo for those parts marked with the green Inherited Timing points.

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  • 00:00:579 (1) - Delete this note, think you did it on accident since there's no beat that correlates with this finisher here.
  • 00:01:908 (1) - Change to K finisher, there's a cymbal and winding up sound here, that you can emphasize with a finisher unless you wanted to stay consistent with the 1/1 kat pattern you were using.
  • 00:09:876 (39) - Change to d, the pattern flows better since it would be the opposite of the earlier pattern at 00:09:095 (35,36), the two kats sounds out of place at this section since the usage of dons is more prominent and the two kats would be too contrasting.
  • 00:12:845 (64) - Change to k, there's a snare drum here along with the kick here and it doesn't seem to appear until later at 00:22:845, so this unique sound can be represented better with a kat.
  • 00:14:017 (73) - Change to k, you can represent the synthetic sound here much better with a kat and the don note here sounded a bit out of place compared to a kat.
  • 00:15:345 (84) - Change to k, snare sound here that you can show with a kat and besides, you used this pattern later at 00:18:314 (113,114,115) to emphasize the faint snare sound here.
  • 00:17:611 (105) - Change to k, you can emphasize the high pitched notes here and it also flows nicely since the pattern is opposite of the earlier pattern at 00:17:064 (100,101,102).
  • 00:20:970 (138,139) - Change to k, it sounds better as a (k,k,d) triple since it represents the drum sounds here much better.
  • 00:22:845 (157) - Change to k, the snare sound is unique since it appears two times for this section and it would better shown as a kat.
  • 00:25:345 (177) - Change to k, think it sounds better since it would represent the snare drum here much better.
  • 00:49:642 (21) - Delete this note, while there is a faint sound here, it's really insignificant to emphasize and playing it, would be hard to hear this particular note since it's so faint.
  • 01:14:408 (203) - Change to D finisher, I think it would be a great way to show that a new melody in the song is starting and you can represent the cymbal sound here with a finisher.
  • 01:27:767 (328) - Change to k, the reverb of the high pitched note here sounds better with a kat just like these two notes later at 01:28:001 (330,331).
  • 03:06:126 (78) - Change to k, it sounds better as a k since it's representing the key sounds here like this note does earlier at 03:05:970 (76).
  • 03:16:595 (190,191,192) - How about changing these notes into a 1/6 (k,k,k,k) pattern? It would emphasize the 1/6 beat here and it would flow a lot better.
  • 03:36:491 - Add a D finisher, think you forgot a finisher here.
  • 03:36:673 (359) - This finisher should be snapped to this timestamp 03:36:699 at 1/3 since it isn't 1/4 as noted by the previous finishers here.
  • 03:39:876 (390) - Change to k, this would still fit with the structure you're using and it would also emphasize the piano notes here much better.
  • 04:09:876 (695,696,697) - This 1/4 pattern can be changed into a 1/6 (k,k,k,d) pattern if you're representing the piano keys here.
  • 04:32:845 (892) - Change to k, could represent the snare drum sound here that's more prominent than usual.
  • 04:34:017 (901) - Change to k, sounds much better as a kat and it emphasizes the synthetic sounds here as well.
  • 04:35:345 (912) - Change to k, you can emphasize the snare drum sounds here.
  • 04:45:345 (1005) - ^, same as the above reasoning used.
  • 04:55:345 (1100) - ^, same like the reason listed above.

Image Overall Summary

  • Good structure and patterns used, it served well to contrast and accentuate certain parts in the song. Not much else to say other than a solid marathon map.

Best of endeavors with this marathon.
Thanks for requesting from SΞCTOR #712.
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I fixed many suggestion.
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遅くなりました、mod req from in-game chat M4Mです。
ボク自身Mod初心者ですので的が外れた提案をしてしまうかもしれません。



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2017-05-03 11:33 Charlotte: こんにちは、テストプレイ頼んでもよろしいですか? (曲が嫌いでなければModもお願いしたいです)
2017-05-03 11:33 MNTkun: いいですよ!
2017-05-03 11:33 Charlotte: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1280900 Mastermind (xi+nora2) - Dreadnought]
2017-05-03 11:33 Charlotte: 難しかったらすいません@@
2017-05-03 11:33 MNTkun: M4Mできたらお願いしてもいいですか?
2017-05-03 11:34 Charlotte: 急いでないなら可能です
2017-05-03 11:34 MNTkun: ありがとうございます!
2017-05-03 11:34 MNTkun: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/580978
2017-05-03 11:34 MNTkun: これです
2017-05-03 11:34 Charlotte: 2件抱えてるのと一つ消化するのに時間がかかるためです。
2017-05-03 11:34 MNTkun: なるほど
2017-05-03 11:35 Charlotte: 引き受けました。




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00:19:408 (123) - change to D ? 大音符にしても良いと思いました、00:20:033 (129) - 00:29:408 (219) - 00:30:033 (225) - 01:04:408 (108) - 01:06:908 (135) - 01:19:408 (248) - 01:21:908 (274) - 01:24:408 (299) - 02:19:408 (69) - 02:30:658 (165) - 02:34:408 (202) - 02:39:408 (248) - 02:39:408 (248) - 03:04:408 (62) - 03:14:408 (166) - 03:34:408 (338) - 03:38:158 (371) - 03:58:158 (573) - 04:01:908 (614) - 04:06:908 (660) - 04:08:158 (673) - 04:18:158 (781) - 04:39:408 (950) - 04:40:033 (956) - 04:49:408 (1046) - 04:50:033 (1052) - 04:59:408 (1135) - 05:00:033 (1141) - これらも同じです。ですが、全部変えてしまっても大音符ばかりは叩きづらくなると思いますのでどれかを変える形にして頂いても構いません。

01:09:408 (162) - change to K ?

01:22:533 (279) - change to D and 01:22:611 (280) - delete ? 大音符が1つ作れそうなのとムリなく複合を叩けると思ったからです。

01:54:095 (444) - change to d ?

02:18:470 (59) - change to k ?

02:31:126 (169,170) - ctrl + g ?

03:38:626 (375,376) - ctrl + g ?

03:45:970 (456) - change to k ?


提案が少なく申し訳ありません。譜面が良すぎて今のボクのMod力ではどこを指摘したらいいのだろうと思うほどでした、絞って絞りぬいた考えの末こうなってしまいました。
曲も良いと思いました。テストプレイの時に叩いた時も楽しく叩けて5分という長さを感じさせない譜面だと思いました!

頑張ってください、good luck!
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遅くなりました、mod req from in-game chat M4Mです。
ボク自身Mod初心者ですので的が外れた提案をしてしまうかもしれません。



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2017-05-03 11:33 Charlotte: こんにちは、テストプレイ頼んでもよろしいですか? (曲が嫌いでなければModもお願いしたいです)
2017-05-03 11:33 MNTkun: いいですよ!
2017-05-03 11:33 Charlotte: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1280900 Mastermind (xi+nora2) - Dreadnought]
2017-05-03 11:33 Charlotte: 難しかったらすいません@@
2017-05-03 11:33 MNTkun: M4Mできたらお願いしてもいいですか?
2017-05-03 11:34 Charlotte: 急いでないなら可能です
2017-05-03 11:34 MNTkun: ありがとうございます!
2017-05-03 11:34 MNTkun: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/580978
2017-05-03 11:34 MNTkun: これです
2017-05-03 11:34 Charlotte: 2件抱えてるのと一つ消化するのに時間がかかるためです。
2017-05-03 11:34 MNTkun: なるほど
2017-05-03 11:35 Charlotte: 引き受けました。




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Bravery Taiko Soul

00:19:408 (123) - change to D ? 大音符にしても良いと思いました、00:20:033 (129) - 00:29:408 (219) - 00:30:033 (225) - 01:04:408 (108) - 01:06:908 (135) - 01:19:408 (248) - 01:21:908 (274) - 01:24:408 (299) - 02:19:408 (69) - 02:30:658 (165) - 02:34:408 (202) - 02:39:408 (248) - 02:39:408 (248) - 03:04:408 (62) - 03:14:408 (166) - 03:34:408 (338) - 03:38:158 (371) - 03:58:158 (573) - 04:01:908 (614) - 04:06:908 (660) - 04:08:158 (673) - 04:18:158 (781) - 04:39:408 (950) - 04:40:033 (956) - 04:49:408 (1046) - 04:50:033 (1052) - 04:59:408 (1135) - 05:00:033 (1141) - これらも同じです。ですが、全部変えてしまっても大音符ばかりは叩きづらくなると思いますのでどれかを変える形にして頂いても構いません。いくつか大音符に変更しました。

01:09:408 (162) - change to K ? 直前にnotesを入れたほうが良い流れと感じたのでno changeで

01:22:533 (279) - change to D and 01:22:611 (280) - delete ? 大音符が1つ作れそうなのとムリなく複合を叩けると思ったからです。白線入りのほうが良いと感じました。

01:54:095 (444) - change to d ? piano sound拾ってます。

02:18:470 (59) - change to k ? 変化付けで配色を変えてるので以下no changeです。

02:31:126 (169,170) - ctrl + g ?

03:38:626 (375,376) - ctrl + g ?

03:45:970 (456) - change to k ?


提案が少なく申し訳ありません。譜面が良すぎて今のボクのMod力ではどこを指摘したらいいのだろうと思うほどでした、絞って絞りぬいた考えの末こうなってしまいました。
曲も良いと思いました。テストプレイの時に叩いた時も楽しく叩けて5分という長さを感じさせない譜面だと思いました!yay!

頑張ってください、good luck!


Thank you mod :)
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interesting map \o
call me back when you're done~

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modしたさあったので、ircみたいなのやってしまいました
お時間取らせてしまい申し訳ないです
irc!
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2017-05-13 23:11 komasy: この譜面大好きです
2017-05-13 23:12 Charlotte: ちょっと質問いいですか
2017-05-13 23:12 Charlotte: ><
2017-05-13 23:12 komasy: はい~
2017-05-13 23:13 Charlotte: 少し気になる部分がありまして
2017-05-13 23:13 Charlotte: 02:29:408 - 02:32:220 - do
2017-05-13 23:13 Charlotte: ここどう思いますでしょうか?
2017-05-13 23:14 komasy: その二か所をdにするということですか?
2017-05-13 23:15 Charlotte: 02:29:408 - 02:30:501 - で区切る。 02:30:658 - 02:31:751 - で区切る。次メロディーは02:31:908 - ここから始める
2017-05-13 23:15 Charlotte: ほうが良い気がしたのでもしよろしければアドバイスもらえればと
2017-05-13 23:17 Charlotte: (...伝わってないでしょうか?
2017-05-13 23:18 komasy: 02:29:408 - 02:30:501 - のどこかで区切るということですか?
2017-05-13 23:18 Charlotte: 違います;w;
2017-05-13 23:19 komasy: 日本語力なくてすみません…
2017-05-13 23:19 Charlotte: 02:29:408 - 02:30:501 - A 02:30:658 - 02:31:751 - A 02:31:908 - B メロディー的にはこんな感じ分かれてると思うのですが
2017-05-13 23:20 Charlotte: 02:31:829 - 自分の場合ここにnotes入れててA+Bみたいな感じになってるから 02:31:908 - ここのnotesからの1/4のほうが良いのではと思ってるということです..
2017-05-13 23:21 Charlotte: いや日本語出来ていないのはこちらです;w;
2017-05-13 23:21 komasy: あ~なるほどですw すみませんでした
2017-05-13 23:23 komasy: 僕個人としては
2017-05-13 23:23 komasy: 例えば02:30:501 - 02:30:658 - の間にnote入れてメロディつなげたいです
2017-05-13 23:24 komasy: その場合02:30:267 - を消したり…
2017-05-13 23:24 Charlotte: なるほど
2017-05-13 23:24 komasy: つまり現状の方が好きってことですね…
2017-05-13 23:25 komasy: 区切るとメロディがつながっていることによる疾走感(?)が失われる気がするんですね
2017-05-13 23:26 Charlotte: 他の同様のパートと一貫性がないのは気にしませんか?
2017-05-13 23:29 komasy: 自分はあんまり気にならないですね、変化付けてると捉えます
2017-05-13 23:31 Charlotte: なるほど、助言ありがとうございます。
2017-05-13 23:31 komasy: あの、全く関係ないんですけど、02:32:689 (184,185,186,187) - を1/4左に動かしてほしいな~というのがあります
2017-05-13 23:31 komasy: 叩いてて違和感感じてます><
2017-05-13 23:32 Charlotte: fix!
2017-05-13 23:33 komasy: 03:21:908 - こっからプレイするたび鳥肌立ちますね
2017-05-13 23:33 komasy: 03:25:970 (267) - ここはkの方が自然なように思えます
2017-05-13 23:34 Charlotte: ↑fixed
2017-05-13 23:35 komasy: 02:12:767 - ここからピアノ始まってませんか?
2017-05-13 23:39 Charlotte: ここは鳴ってますが1/4先端が青線上...うーん
2017-05-13 23:41 komasy: 僕がこの曲で譜面作った時は思い切ってピアノの音取らずに02:13:783 - から始めましたね(参考にならない)
2017-05-13 23:42 komasy: サビ前に忙しくするとサビが盛り上がりにくくならないかな…という思いがあってそうなったのですが
2017-05-13 23:43 Charlotte: なるほど、02:12:767 - ここ抜きの現状は違和感感じますか?
2017-05-13 23:44 Charlotte: なんか普通にIRC Mod頼んでる感じになっててほんとに申し訳ないです
2017-05-13 23:44 komasy: 正直感じませんw
2017-05-13 23:44 komasy: いえいえw こちらも楽しいので…
2017-05-13 23:45 Charlotte: 感謝です(w3w)
2017-05-13 23:46 komasy: https://puu.sh/vOJcU/226f3d19f0.png
2017-05-13 23:46 komasy: あくまで主観ですが、こんな感じに音抜きしたほうが流れは自然かなという風に思っています
2017-05-13 23:47 komasy: ピアノをあえて完全に取るということをせず密度を下げて、02:13:783 - からの目立つ音にフォーカスを当てる感じです
2017-05-13 23:47 komasy: (あくまで個人的にですw)
2017-05-13 23:49 Charlotte: 個人的な意見でも大歓迎です
2017-05-13 23:52 komasy: あと一つだけ気になった点がありまして、
2017-05-13 23:53 komasy: 02:17:845 (52,53) - なんですけど、周り見ても1/2二連続って、ここだけで浮いているように感じるんですよね
2017-05-13 23:53 komasy: ここは配置配色の変更でなんとかなると思います
2017-05-13 23:54 Charlotte: そこはKinにも指摘されました。まだ見てないですが変更予定です
2017-05-13 23:55 komasy: 自分からは以上です
2017-05-13 23:55 komasy: ランクド頑張ってください~!!
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  • 00:24:173 (168) - I think this one flow kinda weird. Maybe delete it ? or change it to d ? I think ddddkkk is good.
  • 00:25:658 (180) - little suggestion, maybe change it to k ? I like how it flow as k. But d is good too. nope.I prefer don.
  • 01:51:829 - Maybe add a k to represent the strange sound ? I prefer melody.so keep
  • 01:54:095 (446) - change this one as d ? it flow a bit better. nope.for piano sound.
  • 02:17:454 (50) - maybe move this note here 02:17:767 - . Or just add a kat here 02:17:767 - ? I think it goes better with the melody. I changed pattern.
  • 02:30:658 (165) - Change this one as k ? It goes well with the melody, and the flow is still good. fixed & other part
  • I think it might be better to end the pattern here : 03:45:658 - . Maybe move this note 03:45:736 (454) - here 03:45:892 - ? If you fix it, I think, this one 03:45:970 (456) - as k, flow better. changed pattern

interesting map \o
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Hey, just one little thing I noticed while playing:
03:32:220 - Shouldn't the 3rd Kiai start here? Feels odd to have it started before the actual "chorus" begins.
Great map, the patterning makes sense, is consistent and everything flows nicely.
Good job Charlotte and good luck on getting this ranked! no kds
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