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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年9月7日 at 22:51:42

Artist: Pegboard Nerds
Title: We Are One (Original Vocal Mix)
Tags: 12 aftermath dubstep drumstep glitch hop
BPM: 110
Filesize: 6295kb
Play Time: 03:27
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Download: Pegboard Nerds - We Are One (Original Vocal Mix)
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#11 「Let's turn up the heat!!」

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Just thought i'd give some constructive criticism but you don't have to listen to me lol

Nomal - Could increase AR by 1
Advanced - Could increase AR by 1
Insane - Slider velocity is slightly too fast although its not too much of a problem
Night Begins - Not much uniformity in the map, it seems a little jumbled up

Overrall they are nice maps though and i enjoyed playing them!
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TwennyOneSavage wrote:
Just thought i'd give some constructive criticism but you don't have to listen to me lol

Nomal - Could increase AR by 1
Advanced - Could increase AR by 1
Insane - Slider velocity is slightly too fast although its not too much of a problem
Night Begins - Not much uniformity in the map, it seems a little jumbled up

Overrall they are nice maps though and i enjoyed playing them!

[Ok~About the AR, I would keep that in mind when I start the modding process, about the Slider Velocity..Err, yeah, have to say it's hard to set cuz the bpm is too high to make small differences. I've tried to make it average and legit enough for players. I don't want to change it cuz... cough* you know, it's hard work when you want to fix the SV.
In a word, thanks for your suggestion. Don't know if it's legit to give u a kodosu, er, sorry for that.
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Oh don't worry, i just thought i'd give my input. Im not asking you to actually change anything lol!
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Hello, from my queue.

note: everything marked with * is just a comment

general

01:59:436 - (for all difficulties) This isn't needed, but you can disable Kiai here and activate it again at 01:59:982 to create a nice rhythmic fountain.
03:09:254 - (also for all) This isn't needed, but you can disable Kiai here and activate it again at 03:09:800 (1) to create another nice rhythmic fountain.


normal

01:16:345 (1,2) - Blanket for appeal.
01:57:800 (3) - Changing this slider to a 1/4 slider would accompany the rhythm better:
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02:15:254 (3) - ^
03:07:618 (3) - ^


advanced

00:28:073 (6,1) - Blanket is a bit off, just move (6) left a grid unit.
02:33:254 (2,3) - This rhythm would emphasize the vocals and accompany the rhythm better:
Image


hard

02:01:618 (6,1) - You can blanket this combo while retaining the distance snap:
Image
02:10:891 (1,2, 3) - *This doesn't have to be blanketed since (3) is too high and would make retaining the distance snapping difficult.


Very clean mapset, nice work.
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Normal
  • 00:23:982 (1) - IMO the curve would be more natural if you moved the second sliderpoint to 92;40
  • 00:43:618 (3,4) - blanket can be improved here, like this
  • 01:56:709 (2) - blanket can be improved here, moving (2) to 299;263 should work well
  • 02:01:073 (3) - moving second sliderpoint to 144;335 would improve blanket
  • 02:45:800 (1) - not sure if the NC is necessary here, for the entire map you used new combos every 2 measures and here you add NC so it's a bit inconsistent


Advanced
    AR6.5 would definitely work better here, even AR7 maybe because of all the different 1/2 rhythms
  • 00:28:345 (1) - blanket can be improved if you move this to 205;82


Hard
  • 00:19:618 (1) - For this entire section, I personally think that the SV is a bit too high for the spacing you're using, and it feels a bit awkward to play. That can't be fixed without a remap though, so just a comment
  • 00:32:437 (6,1) - blanket seems really off, moving 2nd sliderpoint to 121;71 and 3rd sliderpoint to 188;85 should make it a bit better
  • 00:43:073 (7) - move 2px right to stack with (3)'s sliderend
  • 01:02:709 (7,8) - jump here felt a bit unexpected, i'd rather just use 1.4x spacing here
  • 01:09:800 (1,2) - blanket can be slightly improved
  • 01:29:982 (2) - blanket can be improved a bit
  • 01:33:800 (1,2) - maybe make these 2 sliders look the same but mirrored? currently it looks a bit weird that one is so different than the other
  • 01:40:345 (1) - imo should have the same distance as 01:39:254 (3,4) - for consistency
  • 01:52:345 (4,5,6) - spacing felt weird here, i'd rather just make (5) normal spacing especially since you didn't emphasize (5) on any other patterns
  • 02:34:891 (1) - same as 00:19
  • 02:55:891 (5,6) - blanket can be really improved here


Insane
  • 00:24:527 (2,3) - spacing felt too low, especially comparing to 00:19:618 (1,2) - , so i'd try to use the same spacing/flow as there
  • 00:38:436 (4,5) - spacing felt too low here as well, (5) should definitely be more emphasized
  • 00:41:845 (2) - shouldn't this note be closer to (1) than (3) since (3) is a stronger note and needs more spacing?
  • 00:46:209 (2) - ^ same, applies throughout the diff as well
  • 01:31:345 (6) - blanket can be improved by moving to x137 y264
  • 01:36:254 (2,3) - spacing felt too low here, i'd try to do something like this instead
  • 01:52:073 (5,1) - spacing also feels really low here, i'd try to break symmetry and space (1) much further away to the right and maybe ctrl+g it


Night begins
    really nice diff, but i'd capitalize it so it says "Night Begins" and it looks nicer

really nice map, last diff is sooo fun, hope it gets ranked soon
(if you're looking for an extra gd i really liked this song sooo :u )
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hi! from my queue :D


Normal
  • 00:19:618 (1) - maybe try and make this slider a bit nicer, it looks okay but it could be better
  • 01:46:891 (1,2) - maybe make these the same slider? if you blanket them it fits nicely and doesnt change a lot
  • 03:12:254 (5,6) - ctrl+g sounds nicer here, need to change the positions of them though


Advanced
  • 00:30:254 (4,1) - move these up a bit so it blankets nicer
  • 01:53:982 (3) - the sliderend ends on a strong sound i suggest you make this part the same as the section after it (01:54:527 (4,5,6) - ) or slightly different for variation. you have more of these later
  • 02:16:209 (4) - this doesnt align well with the slider
  • 02:27:527 (4) - same for here the slider ends on a strong sound (this one is pretty noticeable) same for the ones after


Hard


Insane
  • 00:20:164 (2,3) - why are these 2 stacked the rest have the same kind of sound
  • 00:22:073 (2,3) - same for here more spacing than the rest but no sound difference
  • 00:22:618 (4,5,6,7,8) - and here the sounds are different but the spacing the same
  • 02:26:982 - its not really noticeable but you missed a sound here, same for the later ones
  • 02:40:618 (4,6) - these 2 have the same kind of sound but not the same spacing


Night Begins

thats it hope it helps :)
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Lab Mod!
Results given in [x, y] formats


Advanced
Object at 00:46:891 - should be placed at: [290, 36] currently at: [292, 36] to move in line with slider
Object at 00:49:073 - should be placed at: [247, 279] currently at: [248, 280] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:07:618 - should be placed at: [320, 190] currently at: [320, 192] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:08:164 - should be placed at: [283, 22] currently at: [284, 24] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:43:891 - should be placed at: [495, 115] currently at: [496, 116] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:46:345 - should be placed at: [0, 138] currently at: [0, 140] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:06:936 - should be placed at: [118, 147] currently at: [120, 148] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:15:254 - should be placed at: [171, 255] currently at: [172, 256] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:16:209 - should be placed at: [66, 228] currently at: [68, 228] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:16:345 - should be placed at: [58, 180] currently at: [60, 180] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:55:891 - should be placed at: [399, 246] currently at: [400, 248] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:10:345 - should be placed at: [289, 111] currently at: [288, 112] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:14:982 - should be placed at: [487, 158] currently at: [488, 160] to move in line with slider


Hard
Object at 00:39:664 - should be placed at: [261, 163] currently at: [260, 168] to blanket slider body
Object at 00:55:891 - should be placed at: [48, 206] currently at: [48, 208] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:00:254 - should be placed at: [178, 230] currently at: [176, 224] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:01:482 - should be placed at: [370, 248] currently at: [372, 248] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:05:845 - should be placed at: [466, 75] currently at: [464, 76] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:10:209 - should be placed at: [72, 50] currently at: [76, 44] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:30:800 - should be placed at: [303, 136] currently at: [308, 136] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:47:982 - should be placed at: [38, 211] currently at: [36, 212] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:59:709 - should be placed at: [63, 127] currently at: [64, 128] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:03:254 - should be placed at: [180, 168] currently at: [180, 172] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:03:527 - should be placed at: [248, 117] currently at: [251, 115] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:05:164 - should be placed at: [228, 251] currently at: [224, 248] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:27:254 - should be placed at: [337, 65] currently at: [338, 66] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:30:118 - should be placed at: [14, 119] currently at: [16, 120] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:59:300 - should be placed at: [231, 179] currently at: [232, 180] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:04:618 - should be placed at: [217, 243] currently at: [216, 244] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:08:027 - should be placed at: [137, 292] currently at: [136, 296] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:10:209 - should be placed at: [362, 157] currently at: [356, 160] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:17:300 - should be placed at: [52, 362] currently at: [52, 360] to move in line with slider


Insane
Object at 00:33:254 - should be placed at: [178, 121] currently at: [181, 122] to blanket slider body
Object at 00:44:573 - should be placed at: [140, 308] currently at: [140, 304] to blanket slider body
Object at 00:55:754 - should be placed at: [302, 127] currently at: [303, 120] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:05:300 - should be placed at: [439, 76] currently at: [440, 80] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:06:254 - should be placed at: [163, 303] currently at: [164, 304] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:08:164 - should be placed at: [108, 277] currently at: [111, 274] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:18:936 - should be placed at: [428, 19] currently at: [428, 28] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:32:709 - should be placed at: [142, 135] currently at: [152, 136] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:44:709 - should be placed at: [298, 132] currently at: [296, 132] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:44:982 - should be placed at: [151, 115] currently at: [152, 116] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:45:800 - should be placed at: [298, 132] currently at: [296, 132] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:55:891 - should be placed at: [422, 319] currently at: [424, 320] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:02:982 - should be placed at: [277, 116] currently at: [280, 116] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:12:527 - should be placed at: [324, 335] currently at: [323, 336] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:52:073 - should be placed at: [371, 124] currently at: [372, 125] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:54:800 - should be placed at: [211, 123] currently at: [212, 124] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:56:573 - should be placed at: [125, 204] currently at: [124, 196] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:03:118 - should be placed at: [478, 52] currently at: [484, 47] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:05:300 - should be placed at: [317, 105] currently at: [320, 104] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:05:709 - should be placed at: [503, 243] currently at: [504, 244] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:11:845 - should be placed at: [504, 259] currently at: [510, 259] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:12:800 - should be placed at: [115, 215] currently at: [116, 216] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:17:982 - should be placed at: [151, 227] currently at: [152, 220] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:20:573 - should be placed at: [-6, 192] currently at: [0, 192] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:21:118 - should be placed at: [-6, 192] currently at: [0, 192] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:24:800 - should be placed at: [434, 80] currently at: [436, 76] to blanket slider body


Night begins
Object at 00:29:845 - should be placed at: [392, 343] currently at: [392, 340] to blanket slider body
Object at 00:56:573 - should be placed at: [310, 296] currently at: [312, 296] to move in line with slider
Object at 00:56:709 - should be placed at: [293, 190] currently at: [296, 193] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:11:982 - should be placed at: [59, 25] currently at: [60, 32] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:12:118 - should be placed at: [230, 64] currently at: [228, 64] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:31:618 - should be placed at: [408, 194] currently at: [409, 189] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:34:618 - should be placed at: [355, 285] currently at: [356, 284] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:39:800 - should be placed at: [432, 249] currently at: [432, 252] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:44:027 - should be placed at: [358, 226] currently at: [360, 232] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:58:345 - should be placed at: [419, 160] currently at: [420, 156] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:03:254 - should be placed at: [199, 103] currently at: [200, 112] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:03:527 - should be placed at: [240, 35] currently at: [240, 32] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:05:982 - should be placed at: [195, 131] currently at: [192, 132] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:06:527 - should be placed at: [250, 71] currently at: [256, 72] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:06:799 - should be placed at: [195, 131] currently at: [192, 132] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:24:664 - should be placed at: [238, 115] currently at: [244, 115] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:25:345 - should be placed at: [238, 115] currently at: [244, 115] to blanket slider body


Normal
Object at 00:51:800 - should be placed at: [412, 58] currently at: [412, 56] to move in line with slider
Object at 00:57:527 - should be placed at: [400, 123] currently at: [400, 127] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:10:618 - should be placed at: [319, 148] currently at: [320, 152] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:10:618 - should be placed at: [321, 151] currently at: [320, 152] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:45:254 - should be placed at: [464, 22] currently at: [464, 20] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:59:164 - should be placed at: [318, 61] currently at: [318, 59] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:27:254 - should be placed at: [315, 123] currently at: [316, 124] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:58:891 - should be placed at: [459, 167] currently at: [460, 168] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:00:800 - should be placed at: [71, 158] currently at: [72, 156] to move in line with slider

I hope I didn't malfunction! C:


Sorry I couldnt make it output less LOL but it sees what it sees
ps: super fun
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Hello, from my queue.

note: everything marked with * is just a comment

general

01:59:436 - (for all difficulties) This isn't needed, but you can disable Kiai here and activate it again at 01:59:982 to create a nice rhythmic fountain.
03:09:254 - (also for all) This isn't needed, but you can disable Kiai here and activate it again at 03:09:800 (1) to create another nice rhythmic fountain.ummm, I would keep that for a while cuz I think it's still high and it suits the kiai as well


normal

01:16:345 (1,2) - Blanket for appeal. ahh, I didn't mean to make a blanket though...
01:57:800 (3) - Changing this slider to a 1/4 slider would accompany the rhythm better:
Image
02:15:254 (3) - ^
03:07:618 (3) - ^ however the bass is louder so I think we should stress the bass,


advanced

00:28:073 (6,1) - Blanket is a bit off, just move (6) left a grid unit. fixed
02:33:254 (2,3) - This rhythm would emphasize the vocals and accompany the rhythm better:
The voice 'we' is at 02:33:800 - , clearly I don't need to change it for emphasizing the vocals


hard

02:01:618 (6,1) - You can blanket this combo while retaining the distance snap:
actually I feel boring if there is too much blankets.. so yeah, it could be some... mutations.
02:10:891 (1,2, 3) - *This doesn't have to be blanketed since (3) is too high and would make retaining the distance snapping difficult. it is not blanket to me though. however I don't get what is DS difficult ;w;


Very clean mapset, nice work. thanks


Mismagius
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Normal
  • 00:23:982 (1) - IMO the curve would be more natural if you moved the second sliderpoint to 92;40 sure, fixed
  • 00:43:618 (3,4) - blanket can be improved here, like this fixed
  • 01:56:709 (2) - blanket can be improved here, moving (2) to 299;263 should work wellum..I don't like to map w/o grid snap here.
  • 02:01:073 (3) - moving second sliderpoint to 144;335 would improve blanket fixed
  • 02:45:800 (1) - not sure if the NC is necessary here, for the entire map you used new combos every 2 measures and here you add NC so it's a bit inconsistent ..you're right, both were fixed


Advanced
    AR6.5 would definitely work better here, even AR7 maybe because of all the different 1/2 rhythms actually I am worried about the gap between Normal and Advanced... So I try to decrease the difficulty as much as possible... I will keep this one for now!
  • 00:28:345 (1) - blanket can be improved if you move this to 205;82 too minor to fix


Hard
  • 00:19:618 (1) - For this entire section, I personally think that the SV is a bit too high for the spacing you're using, and it feels a bit awkward to play. That can't be fixed without a remap though, so just a comment yeah... remap in coming.
  • 00:32:437 (6,1) - blanket seems really off, moving 2nd sliderpoint to 121;71 and 3rd sliderpoint to 188;85 should make it a bit better it is fine to me tho... I don't want to change the slider, cuz 00:33:254 (2) - is its copy.
  • 00:43:073 (7) - move 2px right to stack with (3)'s sliderend fixed
  • 01:02:709 (7,8) - jump here felt a bit unexpected, i'd rather just use 1.4x spacing here fixed
  • 01:09:800 (1,2) - blanket can be slightly improved fixed
  • 01:29:982 (2) - blanket can be improved a bit fixed
  • 01:33:800 (1,2) - maybe make these 2 sliders look the same but mirrored? currently it looks a bit weird that one is so different than the other fixed, now they look more different.
  • 01:40:345 (1) - imo should have the same distance as 01:39:254 (3,4) - for consistency it's denser than those reverses so I guess the difficulty is still level up
  • 01:52:345 (4,5,6) - spacing felt weird here, i'd rather just make (5) normal spacing especially since you didn't emphasize (5) on any other patterns 01:52:618 (5,1) - as example?
  • 02:34:891 (1) - same as 00:19 headache, fine, i would think about it for now.
  • 02:55:891 (5,6) - blanket can be really improved here fixed


Insane
  • 00:24:527 (2,3) - spacing felt too low, especially comparing to 00:19:618 (1,2) - , so i'd try to use the same spacing/flow as there fixed
  • 00:38:436 (4,5) - spacing felt too low here as well, (5) should definitely be more emphasized emphasizing 00:38:709 (5) - means the spacing between 00:38:709 (5,1) - would be harder to catch... moreover, 00:38:164 (3,4,5) - looks nice, I don't want to break it.
  • 00:41:845 (2) - shouldn't this note be closer to (1) than (3) since (3) is a stronger note and needs more spacing? fixed
  • 00:46:209 (2) - ^ same, applies throughout the diff as well fixed
  • 01:31:345 (6) - blanket can be improved by moving to x137 y264 fixed
  • 01:36:254 (2,3) - spacing felt too low here, i'd try to do something like this instead fixed
  • 01:52:073 (5,1) - spacing also feels really low here, i'd try to break symmetry and space (1) much further away to the right and maybe ctrl+g it fixed


Night begins
    really nice diff, but i'd capitalize it so it says "Night Begins" and it looks nicer why not?

really nice map, last diff is sooo fun, hope it gets ranked soon appreciate it ><... but I don't want to add a slot for this song, sorry :?
(if you're looking for an extra gd i really liked this song sooo :u )


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hi! from my queue :D


Normal
  • 00:19:618 (1) - maybe try and make this slider a bit nicer, it looks okay but it could be better ;;w;; sad, I knew I am not good at slider making... well, tbh it looks like a poop.
  • 01:46:891 (1,2) - maybe make these the same slider? if you blanket them it fits nicely and doesnt change a lot ummm, I was bored to making the same blankets, I think something new would refresh the playing performance
  • 03:12:254 (5,6) - ctrl+g sounds nicer here, need to change the positions of them though ...err to me they sounds the same,


Advanced
  • 00:30:254 (4,1) - move these up a bit so it blankets nicer fixed
  • 01:53:982 (3) - the sliderend ends on a strong sound i suggest you make this part the same as the section after it (01:54:527 (4,5,6) - ) or slightly different for variation. you have more of these later but it's a diff between normal and hard, can't make too many circle or the gap between normal and adv would be risky... from my experience, it's the safe way to avoid the risky gap.
  • 02:16:209 (4) - this doesnt align well with the slider fixed
  • 02:27:527 (4) - same for here the slider ends on a strong sound (this one is pretty noticeable) same for the ones after yeah, you're right,
    but you can't avoid clickable note on the slider tails cuz this is still a low level for new players. indeed, in my mapset, I regard Normal as Easy, Advanced as Normal/color]


Hard


Insane
  • 00:20:164 (2,3) - why are these 2 stacked the rest have the same kind of sound fixed
  • 00:22:073 (2,3) - same for here more spacing than the rest but no sound difference umm, but, I don't think it's a problem... random placing in control is fine to me.
  • 00:22:618 (4,5,6,7,8) - and here the sounds are different but the spacing the same cough, ah. from what we are listening to, there is no difference if we make the spacing different. for real, hard to judge, and no one says you have to make the different spacing when the key sound is different.
    I focus on patterns more when I am mapping, and I believe it works.
  • 02:26:982 - its not really noticeable but you missed a sound here, same for the later ones I basically ignore the vocal in this part, so I won't change it.
  • 02:40:618 (4,6) - these 2 have the same kind of sound but not the same spacing as above


Night Begins
  • 00:19:618 - 00:28:073 - same point as insane
  • 02:26:982 - also same as insane, missed a sound here errrr, the same reason as above, sorry for laziness

thats it hope it helps :)


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box=Lab Mod!Results given in [x, y] formats


Advanced
Object at 00:46:891 - should be placed at: [290, 36] currently at: [292, 36] to move in line with slider
Object at 00:49:073 - should be placed at: [247, 279] currently at: [248, 280] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:07:618 - should be placed at: [320, 190] currently at: [320, 192] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:08:164 - should be placed at: [283, 22] currently at: [284, 24] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:43:891 - should be placed at: [495, 115] currently at: [496, 116] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:46:345 - should be placed at: [0, 138] currently at: [0, 140] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:06:936 - should be placed at: [118, 147] currently at: [120, 148] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:15:254 - should be placed at: [171, 255] currently at: [172, 256] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:16:209 - should be placed at: [66, 228] currently at: [68, 228] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:16:345 - should be placed at: [58, 180] currently at: [60, 180] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:55:891 - should be placed at: [399, 246] currently at: [400, 248] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:10:345 - should be placed at: [289, 111] currently at: [288, 112] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:14:982 - should be placed at: [487, 158] currently at: [488, 160] to move in line with slider


Hard
Object at 00:39:664 - should be placed at: [261, 163] currently at: [260, 168] to blanket slider body
Object at 00:55:891 - should be placed at: [48, 206] currently at: [48, 208] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:00:254 - should be placed at: [178, 230] currently at: [176, 224] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:01:482 - should be placed at: [370, 248] currently at: [372, 248] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:05:845 - should be placed at: [466, 75] currently at: [464, 76] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:10:209 - should be placed at: [72, 50] currently at: [76, 44] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:30:800 - should be placed at: [303, 136] currently at: [308, 136] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:47:982 - should be placed at: [38, 211] currently at: [36, 212] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:59:709 - should be placed at: [63, 127] currently at: [64, 128] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:03:254 - should be placed at: [180, 168] currently at: [180, 172] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:03:527 - should be placed at: [248, 117] currently at: [251, 115] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:05:164 - should be placed at: [228, 251] currently at: [224, 248] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:27:254 - should be placed at: [337, 65] currently at: [338, 66] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:30:118 - should be placed at: [14, 119] currently at: [16, 120] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:59:300 - should be placed at: [231, 179] currently at: [232, 180] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:04:618 - should be placed at: [217, 243] currently at: [216, 244] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:08:027 - should be placed at: [137, 292] currently at: [136, 296] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:10:209 - should be placed at: [362, 157] currently at: [356, 160] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:17:300 - should be placed at: [52, 362] currently at: [52, 360] to move in line with slider


Insane
Object at 00:33:254 - should be placed at: [178, 121] currently at: [181, 122] to blanket slider body
Object at 00:44:573 - should be placed at: [140, 308] currently at: [140, 304] to blanket slider body
Object at 00:55:754 - should be placed at: [302, 127] currently at: [303, 120] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:05:300 - should be placed at: [439, 76] currently at: [440, 80] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:06:254 - should be placed at: [163, 303] currently at: [164, 304] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:08:164 - should be placed at: [108, 277] currently at: [111, 274] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:18:936 - should be placed at: [428, 19] currently at: [428, 28] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:32:709 - should be placed at: [142, 135] currently at: [152, 136] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:44:709 - should be placed at: [298, 132] currently at: [296, 132] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:44:982 - should be placed at: [151, 115] currently at: [152, 116] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:45:800 - should be placed at: [298, 132] currently at: [296, 132] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:55:891 - should be placed at: [422, 319] currently at: [424, 320] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:02:982 - should be placed at: [277, 116] currently at: [280, 116] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:12:527 - should be placed at: [324, 335] currently at: [323, 336] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:52:073 - should be placed at: [371, 124] currently at: [372, 125] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:54:800 - should be placed at: [211, 123] currently at: [212, 124] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:56:573 - should be placed at: [125, 204] currently at: [124, 196] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:03:118 - should be placed at: [478, 52] currently at: [484, 47] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:05:300 - should be placed at: [317, 105] currently at: [320, 104] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:05:709 - should be placed at: [503, 243] currently at: [504, 244] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:11:845 - should be placed at: [504, 259] currently at: [510, 259] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:12:800 - should be placed at: [115, 215] currently at: [116, 216] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:17:982 - should be placed at: [151, 227] currently at: [152, 220] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:20:573 - should be placed at: [-6, 192] currently at: [0, 192] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:21:118 - should be placed at: [-6, 192] currently at: [0, 192] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:24:800 - should be placed at: [434, 80] currently at: [436, 76] to blanket slider body


Night begins
Object at 00:29:845 - should be placed at: [392, 343] currently at: [392, 340] to blanket slider body
Object at 00:56:573 - should be placed at: [310, 296] currently at: [312, 296] to move in line with slider
Object at 00:56:709 - should be placed at: [293, 190] currently at: [296, 193] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:11:982 - should be placed at: [59, 25] currently at: [60, 32] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:12:118 - should be placed at: [230, 64] currently at: [228, 64] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:31:618 - should be placed at: [408, 194] currently at: [409, 189] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:34:618 - should be placed at: [355, 285] currently at: [356, 284] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:39:800 - should be placed at: [432, 249] currently at: [432, 252] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:44:027 - should be placed at: [358, 226] currently at: [360, 232] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:58:345 - should be placed at: [419, 160] currently at: [420, 156] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:03:254 - should be placed at: [199, 103] currently at: [200, 112] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:03:527 - should be placed at: [240, 35] currently at: [240, 32] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:05:982 - should be placed at: [195, 131] currently at: [192, 132] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:06:527 - should be placed at: [250, 71] currently at: [256, 72] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:06:799 - should be placed at: [195, 131] currently at: [192, 132] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:24:664 - should be placed at: [238, 115] currently at: [244, 115] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:25:345 - should be placed at: [238, 115] currently at: [244, 115] to blanket slider body


Normal
Object at 00:51:800 - should be placed at: [412, 58] currently at: [412, 56] to move in line with slider
Object at 00:57:527 - should be placed at: [400, 123] currently at: [400, 127] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:10:618 - should be placed at: [319, 148] currently at: [320, 152] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:10:618 - should be placed at: [321, 151] currently at: [320, 152] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:45:254 - should be placed at: [464, 22] currently at: [464, 20] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:59:164 - should be placed at: [318, 61] currently at: [318, 59] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:27:254 - should be placed at: [315, 123] currently at: [316, 124] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:58:891 - should be placed at: [459, 167] currently at: [460, 168] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:00:800 - should be placed at: [71, 158] currently at: [72, 156] to move in line with slider

the first time I try to avoid replying...... partially fixed. Have to say it works perfectly in low levels, nice job

I hope I didn't malfunction! C:

Sorry I couldnt make it output less LOL but it sees what it sees
ps: super fun thanks><


Thank you for mods >.<
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Night Begins
00:30:254 (4,5) - y not slider like the rest
00:42:800 (3,4) - slider?
00:42:936 (4) - seems out of place. 00:42:664 (2) is exact same sound so shouldnt spacing be the same too? (or u can just do ^)
00:44:709 (5,6,7) - too far apart
00:48:527 (3) - using this to map the sound, but then 00:50:709 (3,4) next time it appears, and then 00:51:800 (3,4) is same pattern but for different sound
01:02:982 (6) - i dont think this rly needs to be emphasized
01:47:573 (4,5) - shouldnt this be a slider if 01:47:164 (2) is too (applies to all of these)
02:49:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - y not follow 02:47:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6) pattern


Insane
gonna do a lazy insane mod
00:19:618 (1) and 00:20:709 (4,5) and 00:21:800 (1,2) have the same intensity (and are downbeats) so why not map them the same
00:20:709 (4) - if u arent changing ^ then emphasize this more. also NC 00:22:891 (5)
00:30:254 (6) - whats with the spacing
for the first 53 second there r a lot of changes in the patterns that represent the same sounds and idk if there should be that many variations (also in top diff)

also y not start the map here 00:19:618 (1) rather than having a spinner and a 20 second break
and i think the bpm is 220, considering you are using yellow ticks for streams. the correct bpm will put big white ticks on the correct downbeats, too (right now it looks like big white ticks are on every 2 downbeats)
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Normal
00:46:891 (2,3) - 这个不做个blanket吗?感觉目前这里做blanket滑条的联系性会比较强
01:14:164 (4,6) - 可以做成对称一点的形状0 0


Advanced
OK


Hard
02:57:527 (3) - 这里为什么要跳呢?我觉得4开始才是第二组节奏,从4跳会更好


Insane
00:29:981 (5,6) - 应该不是问题。。但是前面几组包括后面都是从5这个地方开始跳,只有这组是6跳的
01:33:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这段节奏那种重音鼓不跟上吗?01:34:345 - 类似这种的。。。因为这里节奏明显变复杂了,继续走前面的节奏感觉并不是很好
03:02:300 (2,3) - 这里这个跳似乎不是很好,因为后面4有个更明显也更强烈的重音,但是这里2,3跳的距离比3到4之间还要大很多,缺少些打击感
03:08:573 (4,5) - 前面几组都是一个小跳,这里走DS打起来没什么不好,不过跟总体相比较就缺少点感觉0 0


Night Begins
01:57:527 (5,6) - 这里改成滑条?似乎这样节奏上来说更好一点。类似这一组01:56:164 (3,4,5) -
感觉很好似乎摸不出来什么
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Night Begins
00:30:254 (4,5) - y not slider like the rest fixed
00:42:800 (3,4) - slider? fixed
00:42:936 (4) - seems out of place. 00:42:664 (2) is exact same sound so shouldnt spacing be the same too? (or u can just do ^)
00:44:709 (5,6,7) - too far apart it's not hard to play to me...
00:48:527 (3) - using this to map the sound, but then 00:50:709 (3,4) next time it appears, and then 00:51:800 (3,4) is same pattern but for different sound but tbh, we can't follow the voice cuz it's basically unsnapped... I think it's not tricky, and players can play it well.
01:02:982 (6) - i dont think this rly needs to be emphasized ...umm maybe keep it for a while
01:47:573 (4,5) - shouldnt this be a slider if 01:47:164 (2) is too (applies to all of these) but no need to be that consistent... we can have some casual placement or the map is boring to map and play, cuz you could expect every thing in coming.
02:49:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - y not follow 02:47:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6) pattern can't think up a better solution for now.


Insane
gonna do a lazy insane mod
00:19:618 (1) and 00:20:709 (4,5) and 00:21:800 (1,2) have the same intensity (and are downbeats) so why not map them the same why have to make them the same... isn't it boring to play?
00:20:709 (4) - if u arent changing ^ then emphasize this more. also NC 00:22:891 (5)
00:30:254 (6) - whats with the spacing a random and special placement, nothing wrong with it.
for the first 53 second there r a lot of changes in the patterns that represent the same sounds and idk if there should be that many variations (also in top diff)

also y not start the map here 00:19:618 (1) rather than having a spinner and a 20 second break umm, I can't ignore the intro, it's loud and special to me.
and i think the bpm is 220, considering you are using yellow ticks for streams. the correct bpm will put big white ticks on the correct downbeats, too (right now it looks like big white ticks are on every 2 downbeats) from the drum beat, it is 110 bpm.


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Normal
00:46:891 (2,3) - 这个不做个blanket吗?感觉目前这里做blanket滑条的联系性会比较强 fixed
01:14:164 (4,6) - 可以做成对称一点的形状0 0 角落没什么空间放对称了,就这样了吧


Advanced
OK


Hard
02:57:527 (3) - 这里为什么要跳呢?我觉得4开始才是第二组节奏,从4跳会更好 fixed


Insane
00:29:981 (5,6) - 应该不是问题。。但是前面几组包括后面都是从5这个地方开始跳,只有这组是6跳的 咳咳,我觉得放在这里对称又好看...
01:33:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这段节奏那种重音鼓不跟上吗?01:34:345 - 类似这种的。。。因为这里节奏明显变复杂了,继续走前面的节奏感觉并不是很好 跟鼓点,鼓点的密度很稀,完全不适合在高难度出现。跟多个音轨,取舍很麻烦,玩起来更是要目押来猜作者到底怎么跟轨,我认为这样不好。既然背景有一条密度比较高的电音音轨,跟这个,只要跟上去了,打起来就没有问题。
03:02:300 (2,3) - 这里这个跳似乎不是很好,因为后面4有个更明显也更强烈的重音,但是这里2,3跳的距离比3到4之间还要大很多,缺少些打击感 先保留,这里并不会导致问题,我很多时候习惯放部件的时候不看间距,只看摆出来的整体形状。
03:08:573 (4,5) - 前面几组都是一个小跳,这里走DS打起来没什么不好,不过跟总体相比较就缺少点感觉0 0 先保留吧...我觉得走ds还行。


Night Begins
01:57:527 (5,6) - 这里改成滑条?似乎这样节奏上来说更好一点。类似这一组01:56:164 (3,4,5) - 这里打起来还好...一开始的初衷是想多方圆圈来凑星数...
感觉很好似乎摸不出来什么


Thanks for modding! :)
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hi, nm from my queue

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00:00:800 (1) - why is this on the red tick? the sound starts on the white tick. also lower the volume for it because 80% sounds bad :/
00:34:345 (4) - ctl+g ctrl+h ctrl+j looks better imo
00:46:891 (2,3) - blanket is somewhat off
01:10:618 (5,6) - yes ^
01:16:345 (1,2) - not spaced perfectly between the slider head and tail. super minor but idk
01:46:891 (1,2) - fix blanket
01:55:618 (1,2) - ^ ow
02:00:527 (2,3) - ahh ^
02:03:254 (7) - looks better if you move this down imo
03:02:164 (3) - move this down a few pixels?
03:10:891 (3) - move this up it's too close to the other slider imo

Advanced
same thing about the spinner at the start
00:28:073 (6,1) - blanket :/
00:43:618 (1) - move this down the body is too close to 4
02:26:164 (1,2) - blankettt
02:32:709 (1,2,3) - ^

Hard
same spinner thing
00:37:073 (1) - the 2 anchors seems unnecessary
00:39:664 (2,3) - blanket is ehh
00:42:391 (4,7) - ^
00:45:800 (1) - same anchor thing
00:46:618 (2,5) - blanket
01:06:254 (4,5) - ^


oh and same spinner stuff on other diffs



really fun map
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There's very little to mod but I'll try
Only 2 highest diffs cause I'm really weak in modding easier maps

Night Begins
00:41:982 (3,4) - I think you shouldn't start slider from place where previous slider ends
00:47:982 (1,2) - same
00:53:300 (4,5) - a bit too spaced, playable but idk if enough
00:56:709 (1,2) - slider under slider
01:07:618 (1,2) - same, you know that I mean so I'm gonna skip every next
01:18:254 (5) - turn it horizontally
01:48:527 (3,4,5,6) - this pattern is kinda strange imo
02:13:618 (3,4,5,6) - that's strange too
03:13:345 (3,4) - increase the spacing

Insane
01:12:936 (4) - imo this blanket is not enough spaced
01:18:936 (2) - same
01:29:436 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't know what's wrong but it's strange to play
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hi, nm from my queue

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00:00:800 (1) - why is this on the red tick? the sound starts on the white tick. also lower the volume for it because 80% sounds bad :/ fixed
00:34:345 (4) - ctl+g ctrl+h ctrl+j looks better imo fixed
00:46:891 (2,3) - blanket is somewhat off
01:10:618 (5,6) - yes ^ too picky to fix...
01:16:345 (1,2) - not spaced perfectly between the slider head and tail. super minor but idk fixed
01:46:891 (1,2) - fix blanket fixed
01:55:618 (1,2) - ^ ow fine
02:00:527 (2,3) - ahh ^ this one is fine to me
02:03:254 (7) - looks better if you move this down imo fixed
03:02:164 (3) - move this down a few pixels? fixed
03:10:891 (3) - move this up it's too close to the other slider imo fixed

Advanced
same thing about the spinner at the start k
00:28:073 (6,1) - blanket :/ fixed
00:43:618 (1) - move this down the body is too close to 4 it's clear to distinguish
02:26:164 (1,2) - blankettt it's one is fine
02:32:709 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed

Hard
same spinner thing
00:37:073 (1) - the 2 anchors seems unnecessary lesjuh style
00:39:664 (2,3) - blanket is ehh this one is fine
00:42:391 (4,7) - ^ it's not clear to regard it as a blanket when playing
00:45:800 (1) - same anchor thing don't think it's a problem tho
00:46:618 (2,5) - blanket the same as above
01:06:254 (4,5) - ^ it's fine/


oh and same spinner stuff on other diffs



really fun map


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[ClickMyCircle] wrote:
There's very little to mod but I'll try
Only 2 highest diffs cause I'm really weak in modding easier maps

Night Begins
00:41:982 (3,4) - I think you shouldn't start slider from place where previous slider ends why, it's totally safe in high levels
00:47:982 (1,2) - same umm but it's not trick or hard to play right?
00:53:300 (4,5) - a bit too spaced, playable but idk if enough to consider it for an Extra, this place is not very difficult to catch.
00:56:709 (1,2) - slider under slider
01:07:618 (1,2) - same, you know that I mean so I'm gonna skip every next ok...
01:18:254 (5) - turn it horizontally fixed
01:48:527 (3,4,5,6) - this pattern is kinda strange imo fine to me
02:13:618 (3,4,5,6) - that's strange too fixed
03:13:345 (3,4) - increase the spacing fixed

Insane
01:12:936 (4) - imo this blanket is not enough spaced too picky ;w;
01:18:936 (2) - same ;;w;;
01:29:436 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't know what's wrong but it's strange to play fine, I will keep it for a while cuz idk how to fix it.


Thanks for modding! :)
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