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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年12月18日 at 13:32:47

Artist: loos
Title: Koi Yomi Zakura (Full size)
Tags: omoi yoshino オモイヨシノ 柊莉杏 Hiiragi Rian spice+rock imouto ouo koko lyric ametrin yf_bmp gust ultimate madoka
BPM: 168
Filesize: 8029kb
Play Time: 03:50
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Download: loos - Koi Yomi Zakura (Full size)
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Here is Darkarchon's Expert

第一张图,或许还是不太如人意,但是我在试着提升,走到这一步虽然不算很辛苦,但是姑且也有一些付出,一切留给下一张图和改变后的自己。

ImageAmetrin's Easy by Ametrin
ImageNormal by me
ImageHard by me
Imagekoko's Insane by Imouto koko
ImageInsane by me
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Imageyf's Expert by yf_bmp
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为啥你这时间轴最后面都有东西的
吓我一尿
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Hanazawa Kana wrote:
为啥你这时间轴最后面都有东西的
吓我一尿

(居然有人回复,吓尿
;w;因为还没做完,先随便放点note占个坑
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很久没玩了,真不会摸,随便水一下。

Insane
首先,全程基本只压了鼓点,导致很多地方缺音情况(可以参考一下我以前东方那图的摸)以及有些地方略违和,感觉压音最好还是能够灵活一点,音尽量填的满一点。
有些地方音效被音乐盖过去了,建议音效声再大点
以及建议养成开ds的习惯。

00:06:159 - 漏音了
00:06:516 (6) - 0.5x明显慢了,反应不过来
00:07:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这段节奏稍平缓,不适合这么激烈的排列,后面一小段都是
00:11:784 - 漏音了
00:12:320 - 好像漏音了,没听清
00:13:302 (2) - 这段节奏明显加强,排列反而简单了
00:24:374 (1) - 这里开始是比较平缓的一段,应该考虑降低ds和sv,排列也要简单一点(有看出降低但力度不太够的样子)
00:32:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 有点难打,建议开ds
00:45:981 (8) - 这段的音不压很难受
00:59:374 - 重音在滑条尾,后同
01:02:945 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - 音乐平缓下来排列却难了,后面一小段都是
01:03:659 (13,14) - 感觉14有点overmap,而且就算你这14压了音 01:03:927 - 这个总不能不压吧
01:05:445 (5) - 奇怪的滑条,音没突变的话用这种滑条可能有点违和?尤其是你图大部分滑条都比较简单的情况
01:09:374 (11) - 这里应该是一段音的结束,应该突出一点,作衔接感觉不太好
01:10:802 (5) - 01:11:874 (12) - 01:15:088 (13) - 同理
01:16:874 (4,5,6,7) - 可以考虑改成 单点 单点 滑条
01:17:945 (9,10) - 这两个滑条可以加速来突出一下
01:22:945 (28,29,30,31,32) - 这段节奏正高潮,可以跳的大一点,后同
01:24:195 (34,1,2,3,4,5) - 重音没凸显出来,后面一小段都是
01:27:231 (1) - 音有明显变化,这里用折返滑条。。额。。
01:28:302 (2) - 这滑条感觉凸显不出白线的重音,用单点可能比较好?

虽然之前发qq了,还是来骗一波kd
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很久没玩了,真不会摸,随便水一下。

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首先,全程基本只压了鼓点,导致很多地方缺音情况(可以参考一下我以前东方那图的摸)以及有些地方略违和,感觉压音最好还是能够灵活一点,音尽量填的满一点。
有些地方音效被音乐盖过去了,建议音效声再大点
以及建议养成开ds的习惯。

00:06:159 - 漏音了 这里那个是回声吧,感觉不应该跟
00:06:516 (6) - 0.5x明显慢了,反应不过来 fixed
00:07:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这段节奏稍平缓,不适合这么激烈的排列,后面一小段都是这里感觉还好,因为比起最开始的时候是相对激烈的
00:11:784 - 漏音了fixed
00:12:320 - 好像漏音了,没听清 没有~
00:13:302 (2) - 这段节奏明显加强,排列反而简单了我想的是只是前面那个激烈一些,这里开始才是正常的强度
00:24:374 (1) - 这里开始是比较平缓的一段,应该考虑降低ds和sv,排列也要简单一点(有看出降低但力度不太够的样子)fixed
00:32:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 有点难打,建议开ds感觉还好,就不改了
00:45:981 (8) - 这段的音不压很难受这里有音啊...你的压音是什么意思
00:59:374 - 重音在滑条尾,后同这段还有后面改了下节奏
01:02:945 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - 音乐平缓下来排列却难了,后面一小段都是fixed
01:03:659 (13,14) - 感觉14有点overmap,而且就算你这14压了音 01:03:927 - 这个总不能不压吧改成了长串
01:05:445 (5) - 奇怪的滑条,音没突变的话用这种滑条可能有点违和?尤其是你图大部分滑条都比较简单的情况改了下节奏
01:09:374 (11) - 这里应该是一段音的结束,应该突出一点,作衔接感觉不太好fixed
01:10:802 (5) - 01:11:874 (12) - 01:15:088 (13) - 同理fixed
01:16:874 (4,5,6,7) - 可以考虑改成 单点 单点 滑条fixed
01:17:945 (9,10) - 这两个滑条可以加速来突出一下fixed
01:22:945 (28,29,30,31,32) - 这段节奏正高潮,可以跳的大一点,后同fixed
01:24:195 (34,1,2,3,4,5) - 重音没凸显出来,后面一小段都是fixed
01:27:231 (1) - 音有明显变化,这里用折返滑条。。额。。
01:28:302 (2) - 这滑条感觉凸显不出白线的重音,用单点可能比较好?也有点难受,但是不知道怎么改

虽然之前发qq了,还是来骗一波kd

谢摸
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Hanazawa Kana wrote:
为啥你这时间轴最后面都有东西的
吓我一尿

突然想起来卡拿爷爷好像是下了之前的版本,我重新上传了完整版mp3
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后续改完了可以再喊我哇
当然别的难度也是;w;
2017-05-31 00:02 Imouto OuO: 00:43:659 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) -
2017-05-31 00:02 Imouto OuO: 这种梗不能放hard里
2017-05-31 00:02 Imouto OuO: hard别玩读图梗
2017-05-31 00:03 papapa213: emmm 这里我再想一想
2017-05-31 00:04 Imouto OuO: 00:49:731 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67) -
2017-05-31 00:04 Imouto OuO: 这里这种其实就是摆的有点乱了
2017-05-31 00:04 Imouto OuO: 如果要摆折返的flow的话
2017-05-31 00:04 Imouto OuO: 最好是用一些固定的点
2017-05-31 00:04 papapa213: 嗯
2017-05-31 00:05 Imouto OuO: 比如00:50:802 (64,65) - 可以放在62上
2017-05-31 00:05 Imouto OuO: 然后66顺着ds往左上放一点,这样正好也不会挡住67
2017-05-31 00:06 Imouto OuO: 湖面的00:52:231 (69,70) - 正好又可以放在66上
2017-05-31 00:06 Imouto OuO: 然后71就被67滑条包住了
2017-05-31 00:06 Imouto OuO: 这里局部的排列就整齐了
2017-05-31 00:06 Imouto OuO: 。。看了看 71放不下去
2017-05-31 00:06 Imouto OuO: 那就随便放个地方好了=。=
2017-05-31 00:07 papapa213: =。=
2017-05-31 00:07 papapa213: 嗯 我思考一下
2017-05-31 00:08 Imouto OuO: 01:01:874 (97,98,99) - 这个也是 hard不是非要ds,但是最好大体满足距离=时间
2017-05-31 00:08 Imouto OuO: 这个读图梗有点多余
2017-05-31 00:08 papapa213: 突出99的重音
2017-05-31 00:08 papapa213: 有这个意思
2017-05-31 00:08 Imouto OuO: 01:03:659 (104,106) - 这种无意叠了一点点也是摆的比较随意了
2017-05-31 00:09 Imouto OuO: 那可以跳一小下,但是97 98重叠
2017-05-31 00:09 Imouto OuO: 或者干脆97和98铺开摆,叠半个比较怪=。=
2017-05-31 00:10 Imouto OuO: 01:07:588 (114,115,116) - 这里也是
2017-05-31 00:10 Imouto OuO: 我qq截个图吧
2017-05-31 00:11 papapa213: 其实从头到尾都一样的话叠半个也无所谓吧
2017-05-31 00:11 papapa213: 我觉得这样挺舒服的
2017-05-31 00:11 Imouto OuO: 那
2017-05-31 00:11 Imouto OuO: 也是摆个角度比较好
2017-05-31 00:11 Imouto OuO: 这里三个看着有点乱。。
2017-05-31 00:12 Imouto OuO: 01:16:159 (144,145,146) - 比如这里是直线的
2017-05-31 00:12 Imouto OuO: 刚刚那个地方就是歪的
2017-05-31 00:12 papapa213: 前面算是故意歪
2017-05-31 00:12 Imouto OuO: 。。
2017-05-31 00:13 Imouto OuO: 不怎么能体会到
2017-05-31 00:13 papapa213: emmmm
2017-05-31 00:13 Imouto OuO: 01:17:588 (150,151,152,153,154,155) - 。。。
2017-05-31 00:13 Imouto OuO: 不说好不好玩,反正HD党激怒
2017-05-31 00:14 papapa213: 。。。。。
2017-05-31 00:15 Imouto OuO: 01:55:266 (73,74) - 这也是故意的吗
2017-05-31 00:15 papapa213: 是...
2017-05-31 00:16 Imouto OuO: 02:24:374 (5,6,7,8) - 这个呢
2017-05-31 00:16 Imouto OuO: 这里真的 没感觉有必要拿滑条挡着半个note
2017-05-31 00:16 papapa213: 我觉得前后节奏比较稀疏的话
2017-05-31 00:17 papapa213: 这里好像是摆歪了
2017-05-31 00:17 papapa213: 好像是调别的地方的时候忘了动
2017-05-31 00:18 Imouto OuO: 02:42:230 (52) - 这个大概是没在意歪的,摆的时候还是多看一眼这些细节吧
2017-05-31 00:18 papapa213: 嗯
2017-05-31 00:18 papapa213: savelog
2017-05-31 00:18 Imouto OuO: 其实不用savelog的)
2017-05-31 00:19 Imouto OuO: 因为irc mod的话窝打算发thread骗个kds
2017-05-31 00:19 papapa213: 不我就记一下……马上就熄灯了
2017-05-31 00:19 papapa213: emmm放心后面肯定会让你再摸
2017-05-31 00:19 papapa213: 这hard还没传呢 让你给我挑挑刺然后我改了再传2333
2017-05-31 00:20 Imouto OuO: 噗噗
2017-05-31 00:20 Imouto OuO: 别的也会看的,等你做完了
2017-05-31 00:20 Imouto OuO: 排列感觉小毛病不少,改改好再考虑考虑flow之类的问题
2017-05-31 00:21 Imouto OuO: 然后节奏的话。。
2017-05-31 00:21 Imouto OuO: 有些空着比较难受
2017-05-31 00:21 papapa213: sad
2017-05-31 00:21 papapa213: 这个是问题
2017-05-31 00:21 papapa213: 不挑一些重音的话我就很想塞满
2017-05-31 00:22 Imouto OuO: 00:39:016 (23,24,25,26,27) - 这个
2017-05-31 00:22 Imouto OuO: 个人感觉hard下完全可以忽略掉
2017-05-31 00:22 Imouto OuO: hard的节奏本来就不嫌简单
2017-05-31 00:22 papapa213: 改成两个长滑条吧
2017-05-31 00:22 Imouto OuO: 哪怕一直是跟二分鼓点都很好摆的应该
2017-05-31 00:23 Imouto OuO: 没我是建议直接下二分鼓点的节奏。。
2017-05-31 00:23 Imouto OuO: 这里鼓点没断啊
2017-05-31 00:26 Imouto OuO: 00:41:874 (32,33) - 00:43:302 (37,38) - 这里的空拍 和后面的性质不一样吧
2017-05-31 00:26 Imouto OuO: 感觉是自创的空拍?
2017-05-31 00:26 Imouto OuO: 我仔细听一下
2017-05-31 00:26 Imouto OuO: 听了一下感觉是连续的。。这些地方不要空比较好
2017-05-31 00:27 papapa213: 熄灯了
2017-05-31 00:28 papapa213: 等下 我去切一下集显 不然会很卡
2017-05-31 00:28 Imouto OuO: 你们熄灯时间真特别)
2017-05-31 00:28 Imouto OuO: 好
2017-05-31 00:28 papapa213: haole
2017-05-31 00:29 papapa213: 刚最后一句没收到
2017-05-31 00:29 papapa213: 我看到你发消息但是我已经下了
2017-05-31 00:29 Imouto OuO: 最后一句是
2017-05-31 00:29 Imouto OuO: 你们熄灯时间真特别
2017-05-31 00:29 Imouto OuO: 还有你居然不开保存私聊信息的么O.O
2017-05-31 00:29 papapa213: 十一点半啊
2017-05-31 00:29 Imouto OuO: 挺好用的感觉
2017-05-31 00:29 Imouto OuO: 。喔对现在是11点半
2017-05-31 00:29 Imouto OuO: 我看成12点半了)
2017-05-31 00:30 Imouto OuO: mdzz笔记本时间总是看错位
2017-05-31 00:30 papapa213: emmmm不太喜欢自动给我缓存东西的感觉
2017-05-31 00:30 papapa213: 舰C玩家?
2017-05-31 00:30 Imouto OuO: 不完全是因为那个啦
2017-05-31 00:30 Imouto OuO: 00:11:338 (28,29,30) - 这个
2017-05-31 00:30 Imouto OuO: overmap吧 hard最好是不要
2017-05-31 00:32 Imouto OuO: 唔,我觉得吧,其实这图的节奏你可以下的更普通一点,从00:07:231 - 到00:18:659 - 这段
2017-05-31 00:32 Imouto OuO: 你是不是觉得鼓点太单一了
2017-05-31 00:32 Imouto OuO: 然后想找点空拍和三连之类的
2017-05-31 00:33 papapa213: 有点难了?
2017-05-31 00:33 Imouto OuO: 不是难不难的问题其实
2017-05-31 00:33 Imouto OuO: 就是hard没这个必要去自创一些节奏
2017-05-31 00:34 Imouto OuO: hard这难度是不怕你一路滑条单点塞满二分拍摆到头的
2017-05-31 00:35 papapa213: 这段是有问题
2017-05-31 00:35 papapa213: 我重新听了遍
2017-05-31 00:35 Imouto OuO: 00:35:802 - 00:44:374 - 然后这里
2017-05-31 00:35 Imouto OuO: 这段也是比较单一的节奏,不过也有三连,你却没下
2017-05-31 00:35 Imouto OuO: 00:42:231 (33,34) -
2017-05-31 00:36 Imouto OuO: 这里33的结尾到34 有个三连
2017-05-31 00:36 Imouto OuO: 正常的二分节奏 补点三连完全就够用了
2017-05-31 00:37 Imouto OuO: 00:36:516 (16,17) - 这里也是三连
2017-05-31 00:37 papapa213: 这里和00:35:802 (14,15) - 是一样的
2017-05-31 00:38 Imouto OuO: 但是节奏实际上是不一样的啊
2017-05-31 00:38 Imouto OuO: 这里14到17有什么特别的反复节奏吗
2017-05-31 00:38 papapa213: 主要是考虑到前面00:35:266 (11,12,13) - 过来 然后再跟三连会太激烈了
2017-05-31 00:38 Imouto OuO: 那也没有15和16之间莫名空一拍的理由吧
2017-05-31 00:40 papapa213: emmm怎么说呢
2017-05-31 00:40 Imouto OuO: qq上截了个图
2017-05-31 00:40 Imouto OuO: 觉得激烈的话这样摆也很简单的
2017-05-31 00:41 Imouto OuO: 其实我觉得你要玩空拍的话
2017-05-31 00:41 Imouto OuO: 直接跟人声也不错啊
2017-05-31 00:41 papapa213: 先保留
2017-05-31 00:41 papapa213: 不跟人声 讨厌人声
2017-05-31 00:42 Imouto OuO: 不跟人声的话
2017-05-31 00:44 Imouto OuO: 那跟鼓点感觉还是要再细致一点,有时候漏一些鼓点是为了突出一些特别的节奏,没特别的节奏随便漏就会比较难受
2017-05-31 00:44 Imouto OuO: 大致就先这样吧;w; 早点休息 加油/.\

加油;w;
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Normal


整体感觉超棒,和之前完全不是一个质量了。
Normal的节奏方面我好弱的,所以也没什么好建议;w;
才不是已经觉得很棒了什么的。
汪酱加油 :)
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来摸我图啊

normal
用AiMod查一下ds,有些不太对
00:13:302 (2,3) - normal不要这么叠啊,尽量都拉开
00:55:088 (1) - 是不是挡折返箭头了,没记错这个unrank的
01:22:945 (3) - 多次折返最好也别在normal下
01:38:659 (1,2,3) - 其实这种直接折返就行了
01:40:088 (1,2,3,4) - 这单点好多啊,有点过分

类似的还有很多

感觉节奏下的太满了啊,normal应该不能下的这么满,得看着漏些节奏...

我做了一段高潮你可以看看,虽然我水平也不行
Code:
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TitleUnicode:恋詠桜
Artist:loos
ArtistUnicode:柊莉杏
Creator:papapa213
Version:Normal
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hard
00:52:945 (1,2,3,4,5) - rc里面写“Avoid visually similar 1/2 and 1/1 spacing”,我不知道1-2、2-3和4-5这个算不算看着像的...
01:35:266 (1) - 这种我觉得完全可以下3连啊,你normal节奏那么慢到hard反而开始漏了...
01:52:320 - 02:30:802 - 类似这种很强的鼓漏掉了有点别扭,不过还行吧

insane
00:55:981 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 后面你nc了,这里也加上吧
02:24:374 (9) - nc吧
00:40:088 (8,1) - nc是不是应该放8上
01:09:909 (9,1,2,3,4) - 这地方感觉不太好看
感觉这个难度很好啊,比n和h好多了(
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Imouto OuO wrote:
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no kd

Normal


整体感觉超棒,和之前完全不是一个质量了。
Normal的节奏方面我好弱的,所以也没什么好建议;w;
才不是已经觉得很棒了什么的。
汪酱加油 :)


all fixed ,感谢一摩托:) :) 一摩托萌,香草,没有一摩托我要死了

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来摸我图啊 摸哪个啊你也不说

normal
用AiMod查一下ds,有些不太对
00:13:302 (2,3) - normal不要这么叠啊,尽量都拉开 fixed
00:55:088 (1) - 是不是挡折返箭头了,没记错这个unrank的 fixed
01:22:945 (3) - 多次折返最好也别在normal下 fixed
01:38:659 (1,2,3) - 其实这种直接折返就行了 先不改
01:40:088 (1,2,3,4) - 这单点好多啊,有点过分fixed

类似的还有很多

感觉节奏下的太满了啊,normal应该不能下的这么满,得看着漏些节奏...参考了你的kiai段

我做了一段高潮你可以看看,虽然我水平也不行
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hard
00:52:945 (1,2,3,4,5) - rc里面写“Avoid visually similar 1/2 and 1/1 spacing”,我不知道1-2、2-3和4-5这个算不算看着像的... 先不改吧,想玩这种梗
01:35:266 (1) - 这种我觉得完全可以下3连啊,你normal节奏那么慢到hard反而开始漏了...先这样吧,感觉没啥问题
01:52:320 - 02:30:802 - 类似这种很强的鼓漏掉了有点别扭,不过还行吧

insane
00:55:981 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 后面你nc了,这里也加上吧 fixed
02:24:374 (9) - nc吧 fixed
00:40:088 (8,1) - nc是不是应该放8上 fixed
01:09:909 (9,1,2,3,4) - 这地方感觉不太好看 fixed
感觉这个难度很好啊,比n和h好多了(


Sinon Asada (2017/6/20 23:54:13): 明天我再给你看图

then

2017年6月21日(星期三) 凌晨1:57
Re: [osu!] loos - koi yomi zakura
from Sinon Asada


感谢大SA哇 :) :) 大SA萌,香草,没有大SA我要死了
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这啊哇整天跟啪啪啪卖萌怪不得这弱智一直发春

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2017-06-24 16:49 Pata-Mon: 先说hard吧
2017-06-24 16:49 papapa213: 嗯
2017-06-24 16:50 Pata-Mon: 00:06:516 (1,1) - 这种没包好的大概有一堆我就不说了
2017-06-24 16:50 Pata-Mon: 而且主要讲讲更大的问题
2017-06-24 16:50 papapa213: 好..
2017-06-24 16:50 Pata-Mon: 00:07:231 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 你这里节奏是什么思路 说一下
2017-06-24 16:50 papapa213: 我想一想
2017-06-24 16:51 papapa213: du的声音吧
2017-06-24 16:51 papapa213: du在滑条头
2017-06-24 16:51 Pata-Mon: 鼓声的话
2017-06-24 16:51 Pata-Mon: 00:07:231 (1,2,3,4) - 
2017-06-24 16:51 Pata-Mon: 那你这两个还不如干脆换成1/1滑条
2017-06-24 16:51 Pata-Mon: 这打的时候还能明显感觉到你在跟鼓
2017-06-24 16:52 papapa213: 喔
2017-06-24 16:52 papapa213: 好
2017-06-24 16:52 Pata-Mon: 00:08:659 (1,2,3,4) - ds一直在变不知道怎么回事
2017-06-24 16:52 Pata-Mon: 这种细节多注意 正常来讲这种东西开着ds不会出这问题
2017-06-24 16:53 Pata-Mon: 00:10:802 (3,4) - 
2017-06-24 16:53 Pata-Mon: 这个ds看不出是空一拍
2017-06-24 16:53 Pata-Mon: 要摆远
2017-06-24 16:53 Pata-Mon: 00:12:231 (1) - 这种明显变速你知道要加一次nc 那之后00:12:945 (2) - 这里的nc也不能忽略
2017-06-24 16:54 Pata-Mon: 00:35:802 (1,2,1,2) - 迷之节奏
2017-06-24 16:54 Pata-Mon: 你要想清楚你跟啥
2017-06-24 16:54 Pata-Mon: 永远要想清楚  想不清楚就容易做得有问题
2017-06-24 16:54 Pata-Mon: 当然都跟混合轨可以 但不管怎样节奏要有逻辑
2017-06-24 16:55 Pata-Mon: 00:42:945 (4,5,1,2,3) - 迷之节奏+1
2017-06-24 16:55 papapa213: 嗯……你那是网不好吗,我这收到两次
2017-06-24 16:55 Pata-Mon: 不知道
2017-06-24 16:56 Pata-Mon: 00:50:088 (4,1) - ds
2017-06-24 16:56 Pata-Mon: 00:52:945 (1,2) - 
2017-06-24 16:56 Pata-Mon: 00:55:088 (1,2) - hard难度 变速别这么夸张 这根本看不出是1/4
2017-06-24 16:56 Pata-Mon: 哦 也不是1/4 你这snap都不对吧
2017-06-24 16:57 papapa213: snap不对

然后后面都在qq说的
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198,216,122766,2,0,B|240:214|240:214|276:198|276:198|321:195,1,120
384,234,123659,2,0,B|402:286|402:312,1,80
357,379,124373,6,0,B|314:384|283:357|283:357|210:385|210:385|181:356|130:360,1,240
58,383,125802,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,55,138659,5,0,0:0:0:0:
194,203,139373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,79,140087,2,0,P|85:2|82:-25,2,80
254,61,141516,5,0,0:0:0:0:
316,209,142230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,85,142945,2,0,P|425:8|428:-19,2,80
479,231,144374,6,0,P|422:242|394:244,2,80
356,333,145802,2,0,P|298:333|274:338,2,80
256,192,147231,12,0,149374,0:0:0:0:
18,83,150088,5,0,0:0:0:0:
97,91,150445,2,0,P|145:70|183:50,1,80
174,217,151516,2,0,P|161:264|160:322,2,80
334,217,152945,6,0,P|347:264|348:322,2,80
342,57,154374,2,0,P|378:75|414:90,1,80
494,83,155088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,221,155802,6,0,P|367:216|315:218,1,80
256,192,156516,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,341,157231,2,0,P|160:366|108:371,2,80
99,221,158659,6,0,P|138:216|178:216,1,80
256,192,159373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,341,160088,2,0,P|347:364|386:372,2,80
415,216,161516,6,0,P|466:221|520:212,2,80
409,53,162945,6,0,P|451:34|494:14,2,80
311,100,164374,6,0,B|322:63|322:63|294:41|284:7|284:7|263:35|228:44|228:44|219:91|225:142|225:142|186:107|144:83|144:83|115:104|79:102|79:102|99:132|98:167|98:167|140:191|191:204|191:204|145:225|109:258|109:258|120:293|107:326|107:326|141:316|176:328|176:328|210:296|234:251|234:251|245:303|265:346|265:346|301:347|329:369|329:369|329:333|352:305|352:305|331:261|297:225|297:225|348:231|396:225|396:225|408:192|438:172|438:172|405:160|385:130|385:130|337:135|298:155,1,1612.79995078125
96,91,177231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
221,263,178659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
221,50,180088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,222,181516,5,0,0:0:0:0:
297,155,182945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,341,184373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,129,185802,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,282,187230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,28,190088,6,0,P|105:106|115:202,1,160
101,339,191516,2,0,P|149:314|197:306,1,80
223,244,192231,2,0,P|271:269|319:277,1,80
369,306,192945,2,0,P|378:344|378:384,2,80
360,226,194016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,145,194374,2,0,P|355:59|395:-3,1,160
259,85,195802,6,0,P|152:76|85:64,1,160
30,211,197231,2,0,P|82:201|120:198,1,80
174,243,197945,2,0,P|184:295|187:333,1,80
256,192,198659,12,0,200088,0:0:0:0:
455,365,204374,6,0,P|440:276|430:179,1,160
439,127,205446,2,0,P|359:106|299:155,1,160
257,216,206517,2,0,L|256:269,2,40
212,151,207231,6,0,P|149:106|74:128,1,160
4,165,208303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,208,208660,2,0,P|90:254|95:314,2,80
7,354,210089,6,0,P|66:395|173:366,1,160
207,328,211160,2,0,L|185:154,1,160
257,130,212231,2,0,L|256:61,2,40
326,170,212946,6,0,L|305:328,1,160
371,374,214017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
426,316,214374,2,0,P|478:311|522:323,2,80
305,212,215803,6,0,P|384:199|424:111,1,160
464,66,216874,2,0,B|423:48|390:52|383:78|354:80|306:62,1,160
256,123,217946,2,0,L|256:186,2,40
204,64,218660,6,0,B|158:80|129:78|122:52|89:48|48:66,1,160
1,131,219731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
15,211,220089,2,0,P|43:244|87:278,2,80
174,192,221517,6,0,B|114:189|105:112|105:112|170:73|217:124,1,240
296,122,222946,2,0,B|330:72|401:102|401:102|402:178|335:193,1,240
296,262,224374,2,0,B|324:317|256:362|256:362|192:318|215:259,1,240
257,192,225803,5,0,0:0:0:0:
255,112,226160,2,0,L|256:32,2,80
256,192,227231,12,0,229374,0:0:0:0:
256,172,230802,6,0,L|256:207,1,20




音效懒了 你normal下完直接复制下
2kd的位置就这么被我占了你怎么着吧(
不如找时间摸一下骗2kd

Edit: 你不要在曲子简介里搞事啊 yui.jpg




Insane
bn都来了 那摸就放这里好了
这个摸将十分鸡毛 很多是个人作图习惯 建议你看着办

00:05:802 (1) - 放80|132去 整体趋势往下你突然放那么高
00:06:516 (1,1) - 这都不包的咯
00:07:588 (3,4,5) - 45的间距应该比34大
00:09:016 (3,4,5) - ^
00:09:731 (8,9,1) - ^
00:10:624 (4) - ^ 放132|192
这一块的间距都可以微调一下
00:12:052 (5,6,7) - 短滑条加单点突出下7?顺便7可以nc
00:13:302 (2,3,4) - 34间距可以比23大 你这样打的没感觉 而且45贼大
00:14:641 (3) - 这个音怎么来的
00:16:070 (3) - ^ 你在00:12:945 (1,2) - 又没加圈 至少保持一致啊
00:20:981 (5) - 用00:19:552 (2) - 对称过去 别手拉
00:22:766 (8,1) - 我还是觉得1可以摆开打重音 比如1放119|236
00:23:838 (1,2,3) - 三连加原地单点 这种梗后面用了 可以用的更多 这里也不太好康
00:25:981 (3,3) - 没看出来你拉3/2是为啥 1/1踩人声不好吗
00:35:981 (2,3,4) - 00:34:909 (3,2,3,4) - 要么叠严实点要么拉开点
00:37:588 (3,4,5) - 用旋转120做对称好不好
00:40:981 (4,5,6) - 滑条中间可能出界了
00:42:231 (5,6,7,8) - 你就不能用00:41:516 (1,2,3,4) - 对称做吗==
00:43:659 (5,6,7,8) - ^
00:46:695 (1) - 尾巴叠到00:45:981 (2) - 头上 现在这样感觉就是没地方下只好放着这里
00:49:374 (4,5) - 这里不要直滑条 求求里
Image

00:52:231 (4) - 朝下 跟着歌走
Image

00:55:981 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 毫无间距感==
你找到55802ms塞进去看吧我实在不知道怎么传
Code:
403,199,55802,5,12,2:0:0:0:
325,131,55981,1,0,2:0:0:0:
325,131,56070,1,0,2:0:0:0:
325,131,56159,1,8,2:0:0:0:
204,176,56338,5,0,2:0:0:0:
204,176,56427,1,0,2:0:0:0:
204,176,56516,1,8,2:0:0:0:
203,304,56695,5,0,2:0:0:0:
203,304,56784,1,0,2:0:0:0:
203,304,56874,1,8,2:0:0:0:
337,350,57052,5,0,2:0:0:0:
337,350,57141,1,0,2:0:0:0:
337,350,57231,1,12,3:2:0:0:
403,199,57409,6,0,B|300:237|317:150|212:189,1,195.999994018555,2|2,2:2|0:1,0:0:0:0:
215,188,58213,1,2,0:1:0:0:
215,188,58302,1,10,0:1:0:0:
215,188,58481,1,2,0:1:0:0:

顺便后面所有的部分都左右对称过去 flow就顺了(
01:01:516 (1) - 和前面近了 你看 01:06:874 (2,1) - 都拉到哪了
01:01:516 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个对称拉太大了 搞得01:02:945 (1) - 只能飞的更远 然后你这段的间距感觉就有点崩
01:10:088 (1,2,3) - 这个大钝角可以再思考下
01:16:516 (3) - 这个滑条也太出戏了 不能这么水的啊
01:18:659 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - flow非常诡异 特别是中间那两个
01:20:445 (3,1,2,3,4) - 接的也太顺了
01:32:588 (1) - ctrl+g
01:41:159 (3,4,1,2) - 这个歌间距有点过
懒了 早饭都没吃
建议思考下整体间距的安排 音乐和缓的地方就不要出现很大的间距了 看着很出戏
美丽
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