Daoski wrote:

ayyy first

09:55 A BCDe: isn't this a blanket?
09:55 Daoski: its not perfect
09:56 A BCDe: oops
09:56 Daoski: the gap at the sliderhead is wider than at the end
09:56 Daoski: should fix it its pretty obvious compared to most of ur blankets
09:58 A BCDe: well you were sensitive
09:58 Daoski: well considering its a lower star diff u gotta keep ur aesthetics intact
09:59 Daoski: cuz im pretty sure ur keeping relatively consistent distance spacing so not much for me to say there
09:59 A BCDe: got it
10:00 Daoski: 03:43:599 (3,4,1) - im pretty sure these should be spaced symmetrically in the sense that the placement from 3-4 and 4-1 are different spacing
10:01 Daoski: u see that compared to the distance of the slider end of #4 to #3 slider is farther than the sliderend of #1's gap to #4 changed
10:01 Daoski: aesetheeeetix
10:02 Daoski: if u dont get what i mean i can always snip a pic with me drawing to show u
10:04 A BCDe: oh ok i got it
10:04 Daoski: 04:54:084 (1,2) - i think that blankets like these don't look TOO good, but u are indeed staying consistent with the spacing so i cant really roast u here lolz similar to the beginning, so no change here
10:05 Daoski: 05:02:084 (1) - i think u should increase spacing here because u seem to emphasize with spacing each measure (for example: 05:00:751 (1) - ) not applied cuz its almost the end
10:06 Daoski: if u are going to space it with emphasis like that i think u should probably do it consistently so the spacing is easier to anticipate and intuitive overall
10:06 Daoski: just something to watch for in general for ur map
10:08 Daoski: cool i guess thats all i can say with what i know about mapping, gl!

gl! dat marathon

Shinra Bansho wrote:

mod

Everything in here is just my opinion it's your map not mine so do what you want with it lol

General Things maybe,,,
Lower AR for such a low star beginner map. it was not supposed to be the map for the beginners, but it became to be!
Inconsistent kinds of flow if that makes sense. Try and maintain a theme.
Timing Timing Timing, your offset seems to be off and its noticeable as you get into the map. Thanks! I haven't noticed it!
00:35:599 (2) - weird flow, feels unnatural
00:38:313 (2) - snapped on blue tick, maybe you were going for that yes, i was
00:39:027 (3) - 　Clean up blanket a bit I want to. If it is necessary, need help.
00:54:313 (2) - Place circle on red tick here to maintain 1/4th kind of theme you had here ( 00:51:884 (2) - ) and here (00:47:313 (2) - )i would if the vocal were not singing at 1/8
01:29:599 (6) - blanket could be better not a big deal tho same with others fixed
01:41:313 (1) - idk if this slider is supposed to be straight up and down or not but if it is its off it is supposed to be that way
01:43:599 (1) - is this supposed to be a blanket? would look better (imo) if it were the second slider is a 'blanket' of that slider
02:08:770 (1) - timing starts to become noticeably wrong here fix offset thanks! now the bpm is 104.986!
02:31:623 (1) - consider making a kick slider hmm... will consider after looking how it will look like, but not good when i think
02:34:480 (2) - emphasizes wrong sounds excuse me?
02:38:194 (2) - filler isnt used throughout the map up until here dont start to use it it throws the player off and is unexpected
02:39:623 (4) - consider making a reverse slider i like that stuff
03:00:480 (2) - Clean up blanket fixed
03:01:337 (1) - RELLY LIKE THESE thanks!
03:17:337 (1) - Bad emphasis
03:27:623 (2) - these few sliders could be cleaned up cleaned
03:39:051 (5) - consider using full beat sliders instead of reverses throughout the whole section this is the right one
04:05:337 (1) - this flow so does not fit the map, not bad but doesnt fit the map in my opinion considered
04:16:766 (1) - jumps too big its a weird difficulty spike i also think that it's "wierd"
04:30:480 (1) - not lined up most of the linear sliders are not lined up in this map
04:51:418 (1) - remap to fit lead piano with a 1/4th repeater or something and then go to lower piano feels weird
04:54:751 (2) - (sorry if this sounds super bitchy at this point) Blanket lol fixed, but no changes found
05:11:213 (1) - maybe put something at the end a repeating slider or something? changing distance of the last 5 notes instead

sorry for any grammar mistakes lol

00:54:178 - Add a note here.
01:33:325 (6) - Try this.
01:41:324 (1) - Then make one slider. PHOTO It seems to me that here the sounds are not so strong.
02:35:610 (3) - I think it's worth making the slider more beautiful.
02:47:610 (1,2,3,4,1) - Try this.
03:09:753 - To be honest, if this level would be mine, I would add a note here. You decide whether to bet or not.
04:09:182 - ^

XFroceS wrote:

From #modreq

00:54:178 - Add a note here. I would if the vocal weren't singing at 1/8
01:33:325 (6) - Try this. that doesn't follow the song
01:41:324 (1) - Then make one slider. PHOTO It seems to me that here the sounds are not so strong. changed something else instead
02:35:610 (3) - I think it's worth making the slider more beautiful. considered
02:47:610 (1,2,3,4,1) - Try this. considered, but might have to change a lot of things if i do so
03:09:753 - To be honest, if this level would be mine, I would add a note here. You decide whether to bet or not. There's no triple 1/4 hits throughout the map
04:09:182 - ^

If something you do not understand, write to me in the message.

Boruma wrote:

Rang-I

- Should probably set AR to 7, 7.5, or 8 due to difficulty level being 2.51 stars.
02:07:324 (3) - The spacing here is a bit confusing. Maybe just create a closer stack here. got it
02:16:467 (4) - Here the spacing makes sense. I think it's just the odd slider velocity.
03:18:753 (4) - Perhaps move this hitcircle more further out left rather than down. v
03:19:039 (5) - If you do above^, move slider left a bit as well. ^ considered, I'll check if it works well.
04:01:896 (1) - 04:18:610 (5) Make the slider velocity less fierce. Reduce the slider velocity at least to 1.25x. That much of an increase at once from 0.80x to 1.33x is too much of a jump in slider velocity. Just wanted to make more special because the tone and the lyrics are the same as the song before this.
For being a 1/8 mapped song, this is a rather well-mapped beatmap.

M4M https://osu.ppy.sh/s/595158

Xanandra wrote:

Hello!

[General]

Timing seems a bit wrong to me still, I tried to time it, but I dont know how to do multi sections (it is definitely multi section)
There are still some sections that seems require +10 ms. Oh well. oh no

Either use OD8, or AR8. The differences between the two are too big, doesnt fit the map.


[Rang-something]

00:21:031 - Add a note here? Nope
00:23:317 - Add note Seriously, No
00:31:032 (3) - These kind of sliders are better off like this: https://puu.sh/vvttR/1232e841f5.png This rhythm is more faithful to the song's rhythm. (Similar to what you did at 00:35:604 (2,3) - ) Agree. Might need some help for this to make a nice slider like that.
00:38:176 - Add note ok
00:49:320 (2) - Same comment as 00:31:032 (3) - *
00:54:178 - Add note I can't. the vocal is following 1/8 at the moment
02:34:467 (2) - Same comment as 00:31:032 (3) - *
04:16:753 (1,2,3) - These jumps are so odd in this map. No where else in the map have you used such large jumps. I recommend to reduce the jumps a bit so its more consistent with the rest of your map. ok

Thats it from me for now! Good luck with your map!

Quadrocake wrote:

Hello from modrequest

First of all, bg. Maybe just cut off down side of the image? It is not the best idea to leave it like that. That's not a good idea
Also, check aimod, it says that some objects are not on ticks. Checked several times due to the timing issue before, all objects are ticked correctly

00:09:902 (1) - move it slightly to the right, so that it makes better curve with previous notes not that effective
00:12:187 (1) - few pixels up I just wondered why this is a bit down
02:38:480 (1) - maybe remove nc? i got what you wanna talk about, but i think that's not good
03:17:337 (1,2) - a bit strange flow. I think that slider should be pointed towards next note the three sliders are the same
03:28:765 (1) - maybe make it slightly curved too? It will make better flow imo just wanted to make it linear
04:01:622 (2) - i think you can make this slider 1.00x and add a note after it

04:14:194 (6,1,2) - make it symmetrical? considered
04:16:765 (1,2,3) - maybe rotate it for like 10 degrees, so that spacing beetween first slider and previous note will increase. It would make better flow i was just working on it. will try your idea too
04:35:051 (1,2) - blanket? yes it is

Good luck!

Blan_C wrote:

Hello, NM from #modreqs, sry for english

I found some beats that are too important to be skipped (imo)
00:21:044 - Strong beat here No
00:23:044 - This empty space should be mapped Seriously, No
00:54:187 - This vocal sound isnt mapped - previously you did the vocal follows 1/8, so no changes for this

00:24:759 (3) - boom sound here ->00:25:616 - Trying to make simple
00:31:044 - This reverse dont support vocal. I would do this as you did here 00:35:616 (2,3) - working on it, since there have been so much claims for this
00:45:044 (6) - Its a bit too close to 00:44:473 (4) - imo this is okay
00:49:330 (2) - This reverse dont support vocal same as above
01:04:187 (6) - it do not fit - try slider from 01:03:616 - to 01:04:187 - or put circles 01:04:187 - 01:04:473 - got what you mean
01:15:616 (4,1,2,3,4) - This dont support vocals that good. Try this - fits to vocal really good imo you're kind of right, but I actually don't want to change this pattern, and it might seem a bit uncomfortable if i change like that
01:26:473 (1) - i would end this slider 01:27:044 - and put circle 01:27:330 - intentional, check 03:02:479 (1) - and 03:20:765 (1) -
01:44:759 (1) - ^ ^
02:34:480 (2) - This reverse dont support vocal same as above
02:38:194 - There isnt any sound actually isn't this okay? i think it is
04:00:765 (1,1) - I am not sure about this rapid incrase in slider velocity Since the song have a same lyrics at this part as the original song Horang PyungRyuGa, so wanted to point that out.
04:25:908 (1) - This slider skip cymbals. maybe 3 circles? Got what you mean
03:16:765 - 03:19:337 - this part is a bit weird to me. maybe this? imo better (circle (5) in 3:16:765)
considered, and will change if i find a nicer way than what it is on the map right now

Placing is good :3
You make some 'unjustified' overlaps which i dont like, but its more like personal niptick.
Nice map, GL

nyu - wrote:

gl! 🌸♥

koreapenguin wrote:

세상에 내가 모딩을 하게될줄이야... 그러게요...

General

1. Ai 모드좀 체크하셔야할듯 언스냅 왜케많은데요 님아;;; 박자가 안 맞는 문제 때문에 빨간 선을 많이 건드렸는데 그때 잘 안 맞춰진게 많았나봐요 다 확인했다고 생각했는데..
2. BG 관련해서 크기 제한이나 비율제한같은거 있었던거같은데 나중에 BN이나 QAT들한테 물어보셈
3. 볼륨 뺄때 제외하곤 나머지 전부 30%인데 키아이파트는 나름 하이라이트인데 기존구간들하고 차이를 주기위해서 키아이파트 볼륨은 50% 정도? 해주면 좋음 인정합니다.

Rang-E

1. 00:09:760 - 요쯤에 1//8 노트놔주면 좀더 포인팅되고 플레이할때 비어있다는 느낌이 안들어서 좋을꺼임 고민해볼게요. 근데 이 부분은 모양을 완전히 바꾸거나 약간의 조언이 필요할 것 같네요.
2. 00:15:901 (2) - 1/6이 아니라 1/8 서클 시작두고 뒷포인트에 리피트슬라넣어주면 그레이뚜 누군가 분명 지적을 했었는데 갠챗으로 했었나봐요 여기 스레드에는 없네요
3. 00:35:044 (1,2) - 예전부터 매핑해오면서 제가 병걸린건지는 모르겠는데 노트 어중간하게 요렇게 걸쳐있으면 보기되게안좋았음 플레이할때도 마찬가지고 재량것 이쁘게 플레이팅을 해보시는것도 나쁘지않음 더 이뻐질수있음 반박할 수가 없어서 교체했습니다.
4. 00:44:473 (4,6) - ^ 마찬가지 아니면, 00:44:473 (4,5,6,1) - 이 모양자체를 일관성있게 배치를 해주셈 대칭도 맞출 겸 일관성있게 배치하는 것으로 바꿨습니다
5. 00:46:473 (1,3) - 오 쉿... ^ 네 01:25:330 (1,1) - 이건 많이 연구한 거라.. 맘에 안 드는 부분의 모양을 바꾸는 것으로 대신하겠습니다 마찬가지 02:51:051 (3,1,2) - ^ 이건 허용..안 되나요?
6. 02:09:350 (2,3,4) - 디스탄스 확인, 일부러 의도한거라면... 좀 베드한거같음 왜 이런지 저도 궁금하네요
7. 03:00:479 (2) - 가이드라인내용이긴한데 뭐... 저한테는 좀 안좋아보임 03:00:479 (2) - 차라리 지우고 02:59:051 (1) - 요놈을 03:00:765 - 여기까지 익스텐드시키는게 박자가 더 좋은거같음 플레이도 마찬가지공 저도 이 부분 처음 만들 때는 조언대로 했는데 뭔가 전번과 박자 패턴이 비슷(같아)해지니까 약간 고조시키고 싶다는 생각이 들어서 바꿨습니다.
8. 03:02:479 (2) - 뉴콤은 왜 넣으신지 모르겠지만 해제하시고, 슬라이더 속도 변화에따른 뉴콤이라면 전과 아피 상승폭이 크지않아 상관없음 아니면... 1.0x 지점을 03:01:337 - 여기로 해버리시든지... 애초에 왜 소도를 나눈지 잘모르겠음 그럴 상황도 아닌거같고 곡조는 상태는 그대로임.. 전 모딩글에도 봤는데 아무리 말씀하신 이유를 찾아봐도 도통 이해가안됨... 뭐 플레이는 아무렴 상관없음 뉴콤은 근대 보기안좋음 01:25:330 (1,1) - ^ 04:00:765 (1,1) - 마찬가지 04:19:051 (1,1) - 뭔가 처음 들었을 때 시작에 챙~하는 소리가 뭔가 효과를 주고 싶은 느낌이 들었나봐요 ㅋㅋㅋ 뭐 저도 그때 생각은 잘 기억이 안
   나는데 그래도 나쁘지 않은 표현방식이라고 생각합니다 ㅎ 뉴콤보는 지우겠습니다.
9. 04:27:908 (6,1,2) - 꽤나 겹침이 복합적이라... 안이쁨 ㅜ 어떻게 어떻게 고쳤습니다.
10. 04:51:082 (4,1) - 가장 맨 처음에 말했던부분 ^
11. 04:51:415 (1) - 뉴콤 빼고 04:52:748 (2) - 뉴콤 넣고 04:54:082 (1) - 빼고 04:55:415 (3) - 넣고 [초반 앞부분도 이렇게 체크해주심됨] 네
12. 04:58:415 (2) - 1/8 위의 멘트와 같습니다.
13. 05:03:248 - 포인팅 이후 다 찾아서 넣어주면 좋음 솔직히 말해서 여기서 1/8을 넣으려면 디스턴스도 좁고 박자도 짧아서 넣기가 애매할
    것이라는 생각이 많이 드네요.
14. 05:08:922 (1,2,3,4,5) - BPM 변화에따라 타이밍이 바뀌는데, 이런거 디스탄스 동일이두면 같은 박자라고 사람이 느끼기쉬움 보고치기에도 미세하니까 차라리 넓게 배치해서 보고 느끼기 쉽게 해주는게 좋음 게다가 곡이 느려서 더 문제임 네, 근데 좋은 모양은 안 나왔네요

Blan_C 왈중에 01:16:187 - 요부분 쟤처럼하는게 좋을듯 패턴이아니라 박자문제

그쪽에도 물어보고 고치도록 해보겠다고
했으니... 알겠습니다.

koreapenguin wrote:

General

1. BG 관련해서 크기 제한이나 비율제한같은거 있었던거같은데 나중에 BN이나 QAT들한테 물어보셈

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Background images must not exceed a width of 1920 pixels and a height of 1200 pixels. Images with lower vertical or horizontal resolutions than that of the player's will be upscaled to fit the entire screen.