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Yasuda Rei - Best of my Love

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do you like my mappu

y..
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41.94%
no...
1
3.23%
kill yourself
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54.84%
Total votes: 31
Topic Starter
schoolboy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, July 19, 2017 at 17:39:10

Artist: Yasuda Rei
Title: Best of my Love
Tags: Rachel Rhodes
BPM: 120
Filesize: 10655kb
Play Time: 05:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. A Colorful Path Of Love (3,85 stars, 961 notes)
Download: Yasuda Rei - Best of my Love
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allein
7ambda
your mp3 is higher than 192 kbps
  1. 00:08:215 - 00:32:215 - you could make this a kiai since it sounds the same as the other kiais, unless you don't want to start the map right off with one though
  2. 01:17:715 (6) - 03:03:715 (5,1) - 03:18:715 (2) - 04:33:715 (2) - Consider making this passive instead of active. It kind of sounds weird active, especially if it's not a repeat. Also, you seem to want your 3/4s to play passively in general {i.e. 04:49:215 (2,3)}.
  3. 01:33:715 (5) - Kind of the same concept as above. The vocal more noticeably changes on the red tick, so shortening the slider to a 1/2 and adding a circle on the blue tick {filler rhythm} would fit the rhythm better.
  4. 01:20:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - You could have the rhythm be smth like this. It sounds odd that you ignored the "real" between (5) and (6), especially since it's really audible. That would also put 01:21:215 as the start of the second burst; white tick would be strongly emphasized by that.

    01:36:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) is fine since you emphasize the white tick by starting the five note burst on it.

    03:54:340 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) also sounds fine. Even though the second burst starts on red, it's not exactly clear where the vocal starts after (6).
  5. 03:06:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^ "she" on (5), and also to keep consistent with starting the second burst on red tick
  6. 01:25:465 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - fix structure. 01:26:715 (3) should also be moved slightly down to the left {equidistant triangle} to keep spacing emphasis on the vocals
  7. 01:29:715 (6) - You could space further away to put more emphasis on this vocal; it's more powerful than 01:29:215 (3,4,5) and 01:29:965 (7,8).
  8. 02:17:840 - You could add a circle, since (13) is just filler rhythm; 02:17:840 should also be filler rhythm in this case. There's no particular separation between (11) and 02:17:965 (12,13,1). They sound connected, because white and red ticks sound approximately equal, so mapping 02:17:715 (11,12,13,1) as a five note burst would indicate that.
  9. 02:32:965 (4) - This shape doesn't reflect the music imo. Angled-wave implies that the music changes more drastically, but that's not the case. Besides, it doesn't look like it fits in comparison to what shapes you've been using.
  10. 03:15:340 (2) - 03:16:090 (5) - 04:45:340 (3) - White and red ticks are loud enough where these patterns don't need filler rhythm.
  11. 03:32:090 (6) - You're not really indicating any sound with this. 03:31:215 (1,2,3) on the other hand does have a sound every quarter tick.
  12. 03:35:215 (2) - unsnapped tail
  13. 03:47:340 (4) - 03:48:090 (8) - this, you could ignore since it isn't as audible; white and red ticks overshadow it
  14. 04:14:715 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - differentiate your spacing according to how the buildup keeps getting more intense
  15. 04:19:965 (13) - 1/8 repeat? the fuck? the vocal doesn't even land on blue
  16. 04:21:715 (1) - the sound you start on bounces again on the red tick, so you could add another 1/16 buzz there. Make sure you have a 1/4 delay between them though.
Topic Starter
schoolboy

F1r3tar wrote:

your mp3 is higher than 192 kbps
  1. 00:08:215 - 00:32:215 - you could make this a kiai since it sounds the same as the other kiais, unless you don't want to start the map right off with one though not sure if i really want this, since then more than 1/2 of the map will be kiai, which is kinda lame.. will thnik about this
  2. 01:17:715 (6) - 03:03:715 (5,1) - 03:18:715 (2) - 04:33:715 (2) - Consider making this passive instead of active. It kind of sounds weird active, especially if it's not a repeat. Also, you seem to want your 3/4s to play passively in general {i.e. 04:49:215 (2,3)}. aaa i cant understand what do you mean by 'passive' uwu
  3. 01:33:715 (5) - Kind of the same concept as above. The vocal more noticeably changes on the red tick, so shortening the slider to a 1/2 and adding a circle on the blue tick {filler rhythm} would fit the rhythm better. 01:34:027 - somewhy i hear vocals here lol.. will think about this as well
  4. 01:20:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - You could have the rhythm be smth like this. It sounds odd that you ignored the "real" between (5) and (6), especially since it's really audible. That would also put 01:21:215 as the start of the second burst; white tick would be strongly emphasized by that. 01:21:340 - is pretty audible, so i think that my rhythm should work better

    01:36:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) is fine since you emphasize the white tick by starting the five note burst on it.

    03:54:340 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) also sounds fine. Even though the second burst starts on red, it's not exactly clear where the vocal starts after (6).
  5. 03:06:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^ "she" on (5), and also to keep consistent with starting the second burst on red tick i guess ill keep this aswell
  6. 01:25:465 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - fix structure. 01:26:715 (3) should also be moved slightly down to the left {equidistant triangle} to keep spacing emphasis on the vocals fixed
  7. 01:29:715 (6) - You could space further away to put more emphasis on this vocal; it's more powerful than 01:29:215 (3,4,5) and 01:29:965 (7,8). yes
  8. 02:17:840 - You could add a circle, since (13) is just filler rhythm; 02:17:840 should also be filler rhythm in this case. There's no particular separation between (11) and 02:17:965 (12,13,1). They sound connected, because white and red ticks sound approximately equal, so mapping 02:17:715 (11,12,13,1) as a five note burst would indicate that. 02:17:840 - i dont really want to map this since its pretty inaudible, so i guess its better to keep this as it is
  9. 02:32:965 (4) - This shape doesn't reflect the music imo. Angled-wave implies that the music changes more drastically, but that's not the case. Besides, it doesn't look like it fits in comparison to what shapes you've been using. thought about this already, will change it when ill get a beetr idea for this xd
  10. 03:15:340 (2) - 03:16:090 (5) - 04:45:340 (3) - White and red ticks are loud enough where these patterns don't need filler rhythm. dont think so, imo those sounds in the music deserve some 1/4 emphasis
  11. 03:32:090 (6) - You're not really indicating any sound with this. 03:31:215 (1,2,3) on the other hand does have a sound every quarter tick. i still think there's pretty noticeable sound o;
  12. 03:35:215 (2) - unsnapped tail ok
  13. 03:47:340 (4) - 03:48:090 (8) - this, you could ignore since it isn't as audible; white and red ticks overshadow it same as ^, prefer to keep this
  14. 04:14:715 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - differentiate your spacing according to how the buildup keeps getting more intense yeah, will redo this i guess
  15. 04:19:965 (13) - 1/8 repeat? the fuck? the vocal doesn't even land on blue but the instruments do
  16. 04:21:715 (1) - the sound you start on bounces again on the red tick, so you could add another 1/16 buzz there. Make sure you have a 1/4 delay between them though. it will be way too hard, its pretty hard even now and with 2 buzzes it will be totally impossible
thanks for the mod, gonna think about the 3/4 sliders
lcfc
Hello. Mod from me and neilperry (posting for neilperry as he can't for obvious reasons, hope it is kudosu-able lol)

General: as told before bitrate of mp3 file higher than 192.

00:19:215 (3,4) - rly subjective thing from me. You can make overlap more neat or avoid it. there some examples xd: https://puu.sh/wwcRN/bb84809e21.jpg https://puu.sh/wwcSI/c4b20b82ad.jpg
00:27:715 (6) - you emphazed vocal before with notes. so i guess you can place 2 notes instead slider.
03:10:215 (1) - mby do smthing like that to emphaze vocal more cleary? https://puu.sh/wwd3b/bc57689c96.jpg
04:21:215 (1) - what abt to continue reverse to this tick? 04:21:652 - will follow beats better
04:37:715 (1) - try to use less white ticks for better slider control http://puu.sh/wwdbi/564d57d6cd.jpg
04:48:215 (1) - as i told xd

Other looks very awesome for me. Sorry for so subjective mod. Map still perfect but mby some my advices help to improve it a bit xd
Best of luck o/
Topic Starter
schoolboy

LowComboFC wrote:

Hello. Mod from me and neilperry (posting for neilperry as he can't for obvious reasons, hope it is kudosu-able lol)

General: as told before bitrate of mp3 file higher than 192. oops, gonna fix that asap

00:19:215 (3,4) - rly subjective thing from me. You can make overlap more neat or avoid it. there some examples xd: https://puu.sh/wwcRN/bb84809e21.jpg https://puu.sh/wwcSI/c4b20b82ad.jpg tried something
00:27:715 (6) - you emphasized vocal before with notes. so i guess you can place 2 notes instead slider. imo slider works better
03:10:215 (1) - mby do smthing like that to emphaze vocal more cleary? https://puu.sh/wwd3b/bc57689c96.jpg i think my way is better since there are two separate words
04:21:215 (1) - what abt to continue reverse to this tick? 04:21:652 - will follow beats better hmm ok
04:37:715 (1) - try to use less white ticks for better slider control http://puu.sh/wwdbi/564d57d6cd.jpg tried
04:48:215 (1) - as i told xd yeah same

Other looks very awesome for me. Sorry for so subjective mod. Map still perfect but mby some my advices help to improve it a bit xd
Best of luck o/
thank you!
Chalwa
o/
[General]
  1. Audio's bitrate is still higher than 192 kbps...
[Diff]
  1. 00:27:215 (5) - Here's very little suggestion, but imo Ctrl + J are improving intuitive flow a bit.
  2. 01:37:715 (1,2,3) - Oh, i prefer here two kicksliders like on 00:23:715 (1,2), cause they work better imo
  3. 01:39:715 (5,3) - I think you can move this objects very, very, very little to left, because now 01:40:965 (3,5) are really close, but 01:38:715 (2,5) aren't that much. I prefer to search a centre of both.
  4. 02:10:965 (3) - I saw you emphasised many times "o" for make it clickable, so i think two circles will fit here more than 1/2 slider.
  5. 03:10:215 (1,2) - In the all of the map, you at this sounds made 1/1 reversed sliders, so why here're two sliders??
  6. 04:37:715 (1) - Very nice slider c:
  7. 04:46:965 (3) - This one slider haven't got slider node, please fix it (xD)
  8. 05:10:965 (3) - The same thing with emphasising "o"

GL!
EncoreW
:3

[General]

320kbps mp3 is not avaliable, here is 192kbps version, remember change offset if necessary https://puu.sh/wDaTT/512d578150.mp3

enable countdown can be closed

source and tags

[A Colorful Path Of Love]

00:19:715 (4) - maybe this slider can be 3/4?

00:24:215 - to 00:32:215 - , this part's volume can be a litttle lighter than others, because this part is not vocal, 60% is enough

00:38:965 (4) - this rhythm maybe better? https://puu.sh/wDbbV/3f73979bdd.png i think 00:39:215 - a drum here so this place needs something to reflect this, at least it can't be balnk

00:59:965 (1) - the same as before, a obvious piano 01:00:215 - here

01:22:215 - 03:08:215 - 04:38:215 - you can consider add a hitsound like default soft finish in kiai's start or a piano's finish

01:48:965 - 03:10:965 - 03:34:965 - 04:48:965 - add a circle here? in kiai part, a 1/1 blank appeared is not a good way

01:58:465 (2,3) - 01:59:465 (1,2) - the same lyric, consider the same or similar pattern?

02:06:465 (2,3) - 02:07:465 (1,2) - ^

04:15:215 (4) - nc

04:14:215 (1) - to 04:17:965 (4) - this part, i think volume should be louder and louder, for example 40% to 70%

04:22:215 - this place can be a circle not a slider's end because it's a finish

nice song good luck
Shmiklak
[mod]
  1. tags pls
  2. no countdown pls
  3. too high quality of audio file
  4. not sure with drain time
  5. 00:10:215 (1) - such rythm will follow vocals better and the downbeat here 00:11:215 - will become clickable https://puu.sh/wDEiW/d837317137.jpg
  6. 00:39:715 (5) - in a danger place, might overlap with HP bar on lower resolutions so try to avoid it
  7. 00:16:465 (2) - i don't like rythm here because slider ends on vocal's start 00:16:715 - I suggest to ctrl+g these ones 00:16:465 (2,3) -
  8. 00:24:715 (2,3,4) - i would suggest to use here the same rythm as here 00:28:715 (2,3,4) - it fits better
  9. 01:12:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't like how you emphasis vocals here. I suggest smth like this https://puu.sh/wDENK/59469c406e.jpg
  10. 01:27:090 - feels overmapped also haven't found anything similar in other kiai times
  11. 01:42:090 - also feels overmapped, I don't hear any sound which you usually emphasized by triplets, maybe you have another reason? i'm interested
  12. 03:57:215 (3) - 04:34:715 (1) - 05:05:215 (5) - overlap with hp bar
  13. 04:03:965 (12,13,1) - overlap with accuracy meter
  14. 03:29:090 - I don't think that this "m" worth a circle
beauty. gl
Mir
on request

tags, audio, countdown



your drain time is safe

[A Colorful Path of Love]
- 00:12:215 (1,2,3,4) - Could be a nice star if you wanted. // 01:12:215 (1,2,3,4) -
- 00:19:215 (3,4) - This overlap is kinda :( maybe you can move it a bit?
- 00:29:715 (5,3) - This as well, but you can try moving 00:29:715 (5) - upwards.
- 00:31:215 (5,6) - Could possibly be a slider to cover the vocal on 5?
- 00:53:090 (5) - I can't hear a triple here in the song.. maybe remove it?
- 00:55:215 (1,2,3,4) - Why not do the same as 00:54:215 (1,2,3,4) - since they're quite similar?
- 01:14:215 (1) - Nazi but this isn't perfectly symmetrical so the bump is leaning towards the left.
- 01:33:715 (5) - Not too sure about skipping 01:33:965 - since you mapped the vocals pretty consistently here.
- 01:55:215 (5,6) - Using different rhythms for this and 01:57:215 (1,2,3,4) - is kinda inconsistent I find.
- 02:06:465 (2,3,1,2) - When you use similar shapes for 01:58:465 (2,3,1,2) - using different ones for each sound seems inconsistent, no?
- 02:35:215 (5,6,7) - What do you think about ctrl+g'ing this rhythm so that the weaker vocal gets put on a slider end?
- 02:42:715 - A lot of the whites have been clickable so I think this one should be too, notwithstanding it's a pretty strong beat (drum + vocal) and was mapped actively at 02:44:465 (2,3) -
- 02:45:965 (1) - I don't think you ever skipped such a noticeable downbeat before.. or even after, maybe try to cover it somehow with a reverse or a triple?
- 02:54:715 - Missing a snare I think.
- 03:00:215 (1,2) - Is it supposed to blanket? If it is, it's pretty noticeably off.
- 03:10:215 (1,2,3) - Hmm, why is this different to 01:24:215 (1) - 04:40:215 (1) - ?
- 03:43:715 (5) - The vocal is really weird here so I think ending it on the red tick would be better than skipping it.
- 04:19:715 (11,12,13) - The reverse arrow is covered up a lot by the stack, I think you should increase the SV so that you can see it.
- 04:47:215 - This beat sounds stronger.. maybe make it clickable? 04:46:965 (3,4) - Ctrl+g this rhythm perhaps?
- 05:18:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm in the song repeats on 05:20:215 (1,2,3,4,5) - but you use a lot fewer circles, and then at 05:22:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it's a mix of both. I think using one rhythm for all three would be better than varying it one after the other.

That's all I can find, good luck!
Topic Starter
schoolboy
oo thanks will reply soon!!

Chalwa wrote:

o/

[Diff]
  1. 00:27:215 (5) - Here's very little suggestion, but imo Ctrl + J are improving intuitive flow a bit. well, the current one is good as well imo
  2. 01:37:715 (1,2,3) - Oh, i prefer here two kicksliders like on 00:23:715 (1,2), cause they work better imo hmm, i think that triplet wis more accurate for these sounds..
  3. 03:10:215 (1,2) - In the all of the map, you at this sounds made 1/1 reversed sliders, so why here're two sliders?? not only here btw...
  4. 04:37:715 (1) - Very nice slider c: thanks owo

GL!

Speechless wrote:

:3

[General]

[A Colorful Path Of Love]

00:19:715 (4) - maybe this slider can be 3/4? imo 1/2 fits the vocals better here

00:38:965 (4) - this rhythm maybe better? https://puu.sh/wDbbV/3f73979bdd.png i think 00:39:215 - a drum here so this place needs something to reflect this, at least it can't be balnk but rip vocals them x( prefer to keep

00:59:965 (1) - the same as before, a obvious piano 01:00:215 - here same

01:48:965 - 03:10:965 - 03:34:965 - 04:48:965 - add a circle here? in kiai part, a 1/1 blank appeared is not a good way still thats all about vocals, the current way emphasize them better

04:22:215 - this place can be a circle not a slider's end because it's a finish will be too tricky then..

nice song good luck

Shmiklak wrote:

[mod]
  1. 00:10:215 (1) - such rythm will follow vocals better and the downbeat here 00:11:215 - will become clickable https://puu.sh/wDEiW/d837317137.jpg dont think so, also thats not a downbeat
  2. 00:16:465 (2) - i don't like rythm here because slider ends on vocal's start 00:16:715 - I suggest to ctrl+g these ones 00:16:465 (2,3) - hmm, i think my rhythm works better o.o
  3. 01:12:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't like how you emphasis vocals here. I suggest smth like this https://puu.sh/wDENK/59469c406e.jpg whats the difference?
  4. 01:27:090 - feels overmapped also haven't found anything similar in other kiai times thats for vocals uwu
  5. 01:42:090 - also feels overmapped, I don't hear any sound which you usually emphasized by triplets, maybe you have another reason? i'm interested the same thing ^
beauty. gl
thanks for the mods!!
will answer to mir soontm
Kurai
[General]
  1. The bitrate of your mp3 is too high (320kbps). It has to be maximum 192kbps and minimum 128kbps. I would do it for you but it would take me more than 2 hours to upload the new mp3 from where I am...
    Also be careful, when re-encoding a mp3, the offset might change a little.
  2. Consider adding "Rachel Rhodes" to the tags, which is the alias of Yasuda Rei.
That's all to be honest, nothing much to say about the map itself, you did a great job!


real mod here
Topic Starter
schoolboy

Mir wrote:

on request

tags, audio, countdown kept the countdown, since it kinda fits? or idk..



your drain time is safe

[A Colorful Path of Love]
- 00:12:215 (1,2,3,4) - Could be a nice star if you wanted. // 01:12:215 (1,2,3,4) - dont really like the flow into the slider
- 00:19:215 (3,4) - This overlap is kinda :( maybe you can move it a bit? fixed
- 00:29:715 (5,3) - This as well, but you can try moving 00:29:715 (5) - upwards. fixed
- 00:31:215 (5,6) - Could possibly be a slider to cover the vocal on 5? imo 2 circles are more fitting for this moment..
- 00:53:090 (5) - I can't hear a triple here in the song.. maybe remove it? but there is a beat on the blue tick
- 00:55:215 (1,2,3,4) - Why not do the same as 00:54:215 (1,2,3,4) - since they're quite similar? but they're the same? circles and circles,
similar patterns are kinda meh tbh

- 01:14:215 (1) - Nazi but this isn't perfectly symmetrical so the bump is leaning towards the left. fixed!!
- 01:33:715 (5) - Not too sure about skipping 01:33:965 - since you mapped the vocals pretty consistently here. um, but the current one fits kinda well?..
- 01:55:215 (5,6) - Using different rhythms for this and 01:57:215 (1,2,3,4) - is kinda inconsistent I find. well, i think its fine since only 1/2 beats were mapped both times.. diversity in patterns wont hurt anyone :P
- 02:06:465 (2,3,1,2) - When you use similar shapes for 01:58:465 (2,3,1,2) - using different ones for each sound seems inconsistent, no? as i said before, i dont really like to do the similar things over and over again, sorry uwu
- 02:35:215 (5,6,7) - What do you think about ctrl+g'ing this rhythm so that the weaker vocal gets put on a slider end? b-b-but she sings do-ke-do-keo 02:34:465 (2,3,4,5,6) - here and then the vocals change 02:35:715 (7) - and i do a slider.. so i think its better to keep the current one
- 02:42:715 - A lot of the whites have been clickable so I think this one should be too, notwithstanding it's a pretty strong beat (drum + vocal) and was mapped actively at 02:44:465 (2,3) - but vocals... if i do so, ill ignore the vocals, which contradicts with the whole concept
- 02:45:965 (1) - I don't think you ever skipped such a noticeable downbeat before.. or even after, maybe try to cover it somehow with a reverse or a triple? 00:59:965 (1) -
- 02:54:715 - Missing a snare I think. oops
- 03:00:215 (1,2) - Is it supposed to blanket? If it is, it's pretty noticeably off. ehh, not really ;w;
- 03:10:215 (1,2,3) - Hmm, why is this different to 01:24:215 (1) - 04:40:215 (1) - ? but same as 04:48:215 (1,2) -, for example
- 03:43:715 (5) - The vocal is really weird here so I think ending it on the red tick would be better than skipping it. hmm, im pretty sure it lands on blue tick, but i think i will ask somebody
- 04:19:715 (11,12,13) - The reverse arrow is covered up a lot by the stack, I think you should increase the SV so that you can see it. yeah,
fixed

- 04:47:215 - This beat sounds stronger.. maybe make it clickable? 04:46:965 (3,4) - Ctrl+g this rhythm perhaps? but again vocals >.<
- 05:18:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm in the song repeats on 05:20:215 (1,2,3,4,5) - but you use a lot fewer circles, and then at 05:22:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it's a mix of both. I think using one rhythm for all three would be better than varying it one after the other. lowered the sapcing, but i think its pretty fine, as i already explained before

That's all I can find, good luck!
thank you mir :3

@Kurai all fixed!!
Topic Starter
schoolboy
Kurai
Hello again! I checked the map again and this time I found a couple of things that were bothering me:

[A Colorful Path Of Love]
  1. 00:19:791 (4) - Maybe you could avoid having those two sliders touching, it does not look great.
  2. 00:51:541 (4,5) - You kind of are contradicting what you did before with this pattern. I mean: with 00:49:791 (6) - you are going in the opposite direction of the flow whereas you are not with 00:51:791 (5) - although the rhythm is basically the same here. Try to be a bit more consistent.
  3. 01:11:541 (5,6) - Still with the same logic, I believe this pattern should not be linear. What I mean is that: at 01:11:791 - the intensity in the vocals changes, yet there is no change in the spacing or in the movement of the cursor. Somehow I believe you should change the direction of this slider (even if that means ruining the design of the pattern) in order to emphasize the vocals better.
  4. 01:33:791 (5) - This slider should not end on a 1/4 tick but on a 1/8. You are attempting to follow the vocals with this slider and the vocals clearly stop on the yellow tick here unlike 01:17:791 (6) - .
  5. 03:43:791 (5) - There is nothing justifying ending this slider on a blue tick here. Can you explain to me the logic behind this, please?
  6. 04:33:791 (2) - Should end on a yellow tick.
  7. 04:38:291 (1) - I don't like how this circle is stacked on the head of the slider. It' is not that intuitive to play because the circle is rather far from the tail of the slider and it is going back to a place where the player had to hold a kick slider just a couple of milliseconds ago. It is really not that comfortable to play and I would rather you moved it away from this spot.
  8. 05:25:791 (1,2,3,1) - Why did you feel like introducing a 1/4 jump here? It does not seem to follow anythin in particular here.
Topic Starter
schoolboy

Kurai wrote:

Hello again! I checked the map again and this time I found a couple of things that were bothering me:

[A Colorful Path Of Love]
  1. 00:19:791 (4) - Maybe you could avoid having those two sliders touching, it does not look great.lol i thought i fixed it earlier zz rip me,
    fxed
  2. 00:51:541 (4,5) - You kind of are contradicting what you did before with this pattern. I mean: with 00:49:791 (6) - you are going in the opposite direction of the flow whereas you are not with 00:51:791 (5) - although the rhythm is basically the same here. Try to be a bit more consistent. changed this!!
  3. 01:11:541 (5,6) - Still with the same logic, I believe this pattern should not be linear. What I mean is that: at 01:11:791 - the intensity in the vocals changes, yet there is no change in the spacing or in the movement of the cursor. Somehow I believe you should change the direction of this slider (even if that means ruining the design of the pattern) in order to emphasize the vocals better. hmm here i cant agree with you because the vocals are kinda repetitive and this pattern is introducing them pretty cool imo
  4. 01:33:791 (5) - This slider should not end on a 1/4 tick but on a 1/8. You are attempting to follow the vocals with this slider and the vocals clearly stop on the yellow tick here unlike 01:17:791 (6) - . alright
  5. 03:43:791 (5) - There is nothing justifying ending this slider on a blue tick here. Can you explain to me the logic behind this, please? snapped to 1/8 so now it follows vocals!
  6. 04:33:791 (2) - Should end on a yellow tick. yeah true
  7. 04:38:291 (1) - I don't like how this circle is stacked on the head of the slider. It' is not that intuitive to play because the circle is rather far from the tail of the slider and it is going back to a place where the player had to hold a kick slider just a couple of milliseconds ago. It is really not that comfortable to play and I would rather you moved it away from this spot. actually i got a lot of testplays and nobody was complaining about this.. i also didnt have any problems with this, so id like to keep this..
  8. 05:25:791 (1,2,3,1) - Why did you feel like introducing a 1/4 jump here? It does not seem to follow anythin in particular here.05:26:041 (2,3,1) - sounds here are pretty strong, so oi think this jump kinda fits since it emphasize them.. but i changed spacing, so now its same as at the other 1/4 jump in this map 01:37:791 (1,2,3,1) -
thankyou

also polished this a bit, hope its better now uwu
Kurai
I think it's time now!
Topic Starter
schoolboy
thank you very much! :3
Natsu
General

  1. Metadata?
  2. normal-hitwhistle is in ogg format according to the modding assistant, here is a fixed version for you: https://files.fm/u/sqkzycn9 (also reduced the file size of it)
  1. 00:19:291 (3,4) - doesn't looks that nice, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8623394
  2. 01:17:791 (6,1) - try 1.0 spacing, it looks a lot better
  3. 01:33:791 (5,1) - the spacing is too short compared to the rest, also the sound at 1 is strong enough for bigger spacing.
  4. 02:24:916 - any reason for the break to be dragged here?
  5. 03:03:791 (5,1) - the spacing is too short compared to other places, I'd suggest 1.0 as well, like you did at 01:17:791 (6,1) -
  6. 03:24:041 (2,1) - this is not that comfortable to play try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8623470 or something similar
  7. 03:43:791 (5,1) - the spacing is super short considering is a 1/2 gap and that 1 has a cymbal on it, I'd make a jump here or atleast increase the spacing here.
  8. 04:35:791 (1,2,1) - the cursor movement is really uncomfortable here, also the spacing at 2 and 1 is super short after the jump section, try a different placemennt here? (for the stream or for 2)
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Topic Starter
schoolboy

Natsu wrote:

General

  1. Metadata? here: http://www.yasudarei.net/disco/archive/?SECL-1599
  2. normal-hitwhistle is in ogg format according to the modding assistant, here is a fixed version for you: https://files.fm/u/sqkzycn9 (also reduced the file size of it) oo thanks!
  1. 00:19:291 (3,4) - doesn't looks that nice, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8623394 sorry, but i like the current way more.. i didnt use any such blankets though the whole map, so it will be kinda strange if ill do that once
  2. 01:17:791 (6,1) - try 1.0 spacing, it looks a lot better fixed
  3. 01:33:791 (5,1) - the spacing is too short compared to the rest, also the sound at 1 is strong enough for bigger spacing. did 1.5x, also changed the spacing here 04:33:791 (2,1) -
  4. 02:24:916 - any reason for the break to be dragged here? fixed
  5. 03:03:791 (5,1) - the spacing is too short compared to other places, I'd suggest 1.0 as well, like you did at 01:17:791 (6,1) - oops, fixed
  6. 03:24:041 (2,1) - this is not that comfortable to play try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8623470 or something similar hmm, its fine imo,
    never had problems with this/none of testplayes were complaining about it
  7. 03:43:791 (5,1) - the spacing is super short considering is a 1/2 gap and that 1 has a cymbal on it, I'd make a jump here or atleast increase the spacing here. gap is 3/8, and it plays mostly like a 1/4, so imo huge spacing will be really uncomfortable.. but now its the same as other such moments 01:33:791 (5,1) - and 04:33:791 (2,1) - so i hope its fine now?
  8. 04:35:791 (1,2,1) - the cursor movement is really uncomfortable here, also the spacing at 2 and 1 is super short after the jump section, try a different placemennt here? (for the stream or for 2) okay, changed the position of (2)
call me back
thanks natsu!! :3
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