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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on יום שלישי 01 אוגוסט 2017 at 11:45:06

Artist: RoughSketch feat.Aikapin
Title: Grimm (Kobaryo's FTN-Remix)
Tags: hanamushi distorted children speedcore hardcore electro burst hardstyle 花蟲 laughingcomet
BPM: 200
Filesize: 9731kb
Play Time: 03:35
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Download: RoughSketch feat.Aikapin - Grimm (Kobaryo's FTN-Remix)
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He who foresees calamities, suffers them twice over

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Image Easy - by me.
Image Normal - by me.
Image Hard - by laughingcomet.
Image Insane - by me.
Image Extra - by me.
Image Grimmpossible - by me.

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laughingcomet for his GD & modding.
CometicRush for modding & a star.
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Yeah, you'll probably face a new pattern in 02:56:967 that me, personally, have never seen in a ranked map. Not everyone is happy about new patterns, but try to find the unique side in it. Goodluck, and no hate. (;
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Lol RIP the jacks
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Thank you all for the support!
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hey oh~

well, i'll check other diffs soon, that's all for today, GL~
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JesusMD24 wrote:
hey oh~
Grimmpossible

00:32:655 (32655|0,32692|1) - Ctrl + G, it looks better, like 00:32:655 (32655|0,32692|1) - imo
done
00:37:155 (37155|0) - not necessary
i don't agree
00:37:305 (37305|3,37342|2) - Ctrl + G
done
00:37:305 (37305|3,37342|2) - Same^
done
00:46:905 (46905|0,46942|1) - ^
done
00:47:505 Add note here?
done
00:59:055 (59055|3,59205|3) - try this?
done
01:00:405 (60405|0) - mmmm, LN would be fine here imo
i don't agree
01:01:605 (61605|0,61642|1) - Ctrl + G
done
01:07:305 (67305|3,67755|1,68205|0,68655|3) - they should be 3 notes, or 2 imo
done
01:09:255 what happening here?
added double here 01:09:255
01:09:705 (69705|2,70155|1,70605|0,71055|2) - mmmmm same, 3 notes or 2
done
01:11:355 (71355|0,71392|1,71430|2,71467|3) - I think that these notes are not necessary
i don't agree, sound is unique
01:12:105 (72105|1,72555|2,73005|3,73455|0) - mmmm 3 or 2 notes
done
01:15:255 add note?
done
01:15:442 ^
done
01:15:855 ^
done

well, i'll check other diffs soon, that's all for today, GL~

Wow great mod, thanks!!!
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bad english mod

artist: RoughSketch feat.あいかぴん
sourse: 花蟲
romanised artist: RoughSketch feat. Aikapin
add tags 'hanamushi distorted children speedcore hardcore electro burst'


no one diff uses lns in the main kiai, it makes me sad.
also i think "Grimmpossible" is too much harder than "Insane", i'd recommend to make one more diff between them

Grimmpossible

00:27:367 (27367|3,27517|2) - I guess these are ghost notes, it applies to almost all burst. My suggestion: https://puu.sh/vvzeI/d7cdb68234.png
00:32:617 (32617|3,32767|3) - Delete this and make these doubles 00:32:580 (32580|2,32730|2)
01:28:605 (88605|1,88605|2,89055|1,89055|0) - same pitch, place on same columns
02:56:955 - The song gives you a chance to make map in more varied styles, don't you wanna change the style in the 3rd kiai?
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eyes wrote:
bad english mod

artist: RoughSketch feat.あいかぴん
sourse: 花蟲
romanised artist: RoughSketch feat. Aikapin
add tags 'hanamushi distorted children speedcore hardcore electro burst'

done
no one diff uses lns in the main kiai, it makes me sad.
also i think "Grimmpossible" is too much harder than "Insane", i'd recommend to make one more diff between them

Grimmpossible

00:27:367 (27367|3,27517|2) - I guess these are ghost notes, it applies to almost all burst. My suggestion: https://puu.sh/vvzeI/d7cdb68234.png
Actually i don't agree these are ghost notes! ^^"
00:32:617 (32617|3,32767|3) - Delete this and make these doubles 00:32:580 (32580|2,32730|2)
done
01:28:605 (88605|1,88605|2,89055|1,89055|0) - same pitch, place on same columns
done
02:56:955 - The song gives you a chance to make map in more varied styles, don't you wanna change the style in the 3rd kiai?
do you have a suggestion?


Thanks a lot :D
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Hello CHARGE! Here's the mod you've requested ;)

Column : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Easy


- 00:20:955 (20955|0) Maybe extend this to 00:26:955 ? Just to follow the noise
- 00:28:155 (28155|3) Add Finish sound
- 00:32:505 and similar parts : Add a note? For drumkick.
- 00:37:305 Maybe add a note?
- 00:46:155 (46155|0,46455|1) Extend to 00:46:455, 0046:755 respectively; judges may be tricky for beginners
- 01:18:555 (47805|2) Extend this to 01:20:955
- 02:08:655 Add a note?
- 02:12:555 (132555|0,132780|2,133155|1,133455|3) Differing timing (white->blue / white->white) maybe confusing for beginners
- 02:17:955 (137955|2) Maybe extend to 02:18:555
- 02:22:455 (142455|1,142755|2) Add notes? To follow 02:22:155 (142155|0,142155|3)
- 02:23:355 ~ 02:25:755 Putting 2 notes seems unrealistic, maybe consider this; http://puu.sh/vvzYy/4bdb04f0eb.png
- 02:56:355 (176355|3) Replace this to LN (until 02:56:655) and add a note (02:56:655).
- 03:01:605 (181605|3) Maybe replace this to normal note?
- 03:05:355 (185355|2,185655|2,185955|2,186255|2) Any specific reason to put all those note in one column?
- 03:35:355 Add a note here?


Normal


Maybe consider buffing this difficulty. There's pretty big difficulty gap between Normal and Comet's Hard.

- 00:27:855 Add note to 2?
- 00:34:905 (34905|3,35055|2) and similar parts : Maybe change this to this : http://puu.sh/vvA90/a6729abf47.png or change 00:30:105 (30105|0,30180|1,30255|2) this part?
- 00:55:155 (55155|2) ~ 00:56:655 http://puu.sh/vvAcT/6b10c67f9d.png - This looks more smoothier.
- 01:10:830 (70830|3,70905|1) Hmm?
- 02:13:380 Add note to 3? A sound exists.
- 02:25:755 (145755|3,145905|0,146055|3,146205|0) Add notes respectively? 2 notes sounds more powerful.
- 02:27:855 Add note to 4
- 02:37:455 Add note to 2
- 02:41:505 ~ 02:41:805 https://puu.sh/vvAkr/2b8d0de927.png ?
- 02:47:055 Add note to 2
- 03:06:255 Add note to 3
- 03:34:155 https://puu.sh/vvAog/5a27334e54.png / Followed the melody.


Comet's Hard


pretty surprised at first

- 00:27:555 ~ 00:27:855 https://puu.sh/vvAs3/b5152dab66.png ?
- 00:37:155 Add note to 2? Like this : 00:37:305 (37305|2,37305|3) -
- 02:27:855 and similar parts : Add note to 3?
- 02:36:555 (156555|3,156705|2,156855|1,157005|0) Replace these note to LN?


Insane


- 00:51:705 Add a note?
- 01:01:155 Add a note to 3?
- 02:08:655 (128655|2,128805|1) Replace these to LN?
- 02:25:755 ~ 02:26:955 https://puu.sh/vvAM5/bdce8c5d0b.png ?


Grimmpossible


- 00:27:367 (27367|3,27517|2) Kinda ghost notes? Actually there isn't a drumkick. Drumkick ends 00:27:330 and 00:27:480.
- 00:32:617 (32617|3,32767|3) ^^^
- 00:37:267 (37267|0,37417|0) ^^^
- 00:42:217 (42217|0,42367|1) ^^^
- 00:46:867 (46867|3,47017|3) and other same parts : ^^^
- 00:46:867 (46867|3,47017|3) Empty?
- 01:48:930 (108930|1) Remove this?
- 02:26:355 ~ 02:26:955 https://puu.sh/vvB0O/b0ae496e0e.png ? / This looks more interesting.
- 02:42:105 ~ 02:42:555 https://puu.sh/vvB2I/e98e8f34ac.png ?
- 02:54:405 (174405|1,174555|2) Remove these?
- 03:10:905 ~ 03:11:355 Same as 02:42:105 ~ 02:42:555

Cool song, and funny patterns!

Hope this get ranked soon ;)
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CHARGE wrote:
eyes wrote:
02:56:955 - The song gives you a chance to make map in more varied styles, don't you wanna change the style in the 3rd kiai?
do you have a suggestion? LNs LNs LNs

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CometicRush wrote:
Hello CHARGE! Here's the mod you've requested ;)

Column : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Easy


- 00:20:955 (20955|0) Maybe extend this to 00:26:955 ? Just to follow the noise
done
- 00:28:155 (28155|3) Add Finish sound
finish is at 00:27:855 (27855|0) -
- 00:32:505 and similar parts : Add a note? For drumkick.
There's a sound, but the structure is constant for easy diff. i don't want it to be too crowded.
- 00:37:305 Maybe add a note?
same
- 00:46:155 (46155|0,46455|1) Extend to 00:46:455, 0046:755 respectively; judges may be tricky for beginners
done
- 01:18:555 (47805|2) Extend this to 01:20:955
done
- 02:08:655 Add a note?
done
- 02:12:555 (132555|0,132780|2,133155|1,133455|3) Differing timing (white->blue / white->white) maybe confusing for beginners
it is following the music though, constant structure
- 02:17:955 (137955|2) Maybe extend to 02:18:555
done
- 02:22:455 (142455|1,142755|2) Add notes? To follow 02:22:155 (142155|0,142155|3)
done
- 02:23:355 ~ 02:25:755 Putting 2 notes seems unrealistic, maybe consider this; http://puu.sh/vvzYy/4bdb04f0eb.png
waaaay to hard for easy!
- 02:56:355 (176355|3) Replace this to LN (until 02:56:655) and add a note (02:56:655).
done
- 03:01:605 (181605|3) Maybe replace this to normal note?
done
- 03:05:355 (185355|2,185655|2,185955|2,186255|2) Any specific reason to put all those note in one column?
fixed
- 03:35:355 Add a note here?
done

Normal


Maybe consider buffing this difficulty. There's pretty big difficulty gap between Normal and Comet's Hard.

- 00:27:855 Add note to 2?
done
- 00:34:905 (34905|3,35055|2) and similar parts : Maybe change this to this : http://puu.sh/vvA90/a6729abf47.png or change 00:30:105 (30105|0,30180|1,30255|2) this part?
LN seems better imo
- 00:55:155 (55155|2) ~ 00:56:655 http://puu.sh/vvAcT/6b10c67f9d.png - This looks more smoothier.
done
- 01:10:830 (70830|3,70905|1) Hmm?
moved to 01:10:905 -
- 02:13:380 Add note to 3? A sound exists.
it does exist, but i decided to omit it so it wont be too crowded.
- 02:25:755 (145755|3,145905|0,146055|3,146205|0) Add notes respectively? 2 notes sounds more powerful.
added blue
- 02:27:855 Add note to 4
done
- 02:37:455 Add note to 2
done
- 02:41:505 ~ 02:41:805 https://puu.sh/vvAkr/2b8d0de927.png ?
done
- 02:47:055 Add note to 2
done
- 03:06:255 Add note to 3
done
- 03:34:155 https://puu.sh/vvAog/5a27334e54.png / Followed the melody.
done

Comet's Hard


pretty surprised at first

- 00:27:555 ~ 00:27:855 https://puu.sh/vvAs3/b5152dab66.png ?
done
- 00:37:155 Add note to 2? Like this : 00:37:305 (37305|2,37305|3) -
done
- 02:27:855 and similar parts : Add note to 3?
done
- 02:36:555 (156555|3,156705|2,156855|1,157005|0) Replace these note to LN?
done


Insane


- 00:51:705 Add a note?
done
- 01:01:155 Add a note to 3?
done
- 02:08:655 (128655|2,128805|1) Replace these to LN?
done
- 02:25:755 ~ 02:26:955 https://puu.sh/vvAM5/bdce8c5d0b.png ?
done


Grimmpossible


- 00:27:367 (27367|3,27517|2) Kinda ghost notes? Actually there isn't a drumkick. Drumkick ends 00:27:330 and 00:27:480.
fixed
- 00:32:617 (32617|3,32767|3) ^^^
fixed
- 00:37:267 (37267|0,37417|0) ^^^
fixed
- 00:42:217 (42217|0,42367|1) ^^^
fixed
- 00:46:867 (46867|3,47017|3) and other same parts : ^^^
fixed
- 00:46:867 (46867|3,47017|3) Empty?
fixed
- 01:48:930 (108930|1) Remove this?
fixed
- 02:26:355 ~ 02:26:955 https://puu.sh/vvB0O/b0ae496e0e.png ? / This looks more interesting.
changed
- 02:42:105 ~ 02:42:555 https://puu.sh/vvB2I/e98e8f34ac.png ?
changed
- 02:54:405 (174405|1,174555|2) Remove these?
doubles referring to the guitar sound
- 03:10:905 ~ 03:11:355 Same as 02:42:105 ~ 02:42:555
changed
Cool song, and funny patterns!

Hope this get ranked soon ;)

AMAZING mod. Thank you SO MUCH!!
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CHARGE wrote:
eyes wrote:
02:56:955 - The song gives you a chance to make map in more varied styles, don't you wanna change the style in the 3rd kiai?
do you have a suggestion? LNs LNs LNs


Updated, what do you think?
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Yo

Promised mod

mod
Code:
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Easy
Uncheck "widescreen support"
00:04:155 (4155|2,4455|0,4755|1,5055|2,5355|3) - hmm I think that this pattern more fit https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7918605?
00:21:255 (21255|0) - This LN should start here 00:20:955 - I think that this 1/1 pause isn't comfortable to play for novice players
00:32:805 (32805|0) - move to column 2 for balance
00:42:555 (42555|3,42855|0) - ctrl+H
02:03:555 (123555|0) - move to column 2
03:18:255 (198255|3,198405|2) - I propose 2 3
03:20:805 (200805|3,201255|2) - ctrl+G
03:23:055 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7918687

Normal
Uncheck "widescreen support"
00:00:555 - to 00:06:555 - I think that you can reverse several patterns. For example:
00:01:755 (1755|2,1905|1,2055|0) - ctrl+G
00:02:955 (2955|0,3105|1,3255|2) - ctrl+H
00:04:155 (4155|1,4305|2,4455|3) - move one column to the left and 00:04:755 (4755|0,4905|1,5055|2,5355|3,5505|2,5655|1) - ctrl+H this
A the end 00:06:555 (6555|2,6705|1,6855|0) - move one column to the right
00:08:955 (8955|1,9105|2,9255|3) - and ctrl+G
I think that this setting is more fun to play
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00:32:505 (32505|3,32655|3) - 03:20:505 (200505|0,200655|0) - such LNs Are not welcome in Normal diffs I think
01:06:255 (66255|2,66555|1) - I propose 2 3
01:22:530 (82530|1) - Consider removing this note. It's not comfortable to play in Normal diff
01:30:405 (90405|2) - ghost note? remove
01:51:780 (111780|1) - the same situation as above. It's not comfortable to play in Normal diff. Similar moments are more.
01:59:805 (119805|1,119955|2) - 3 4
03:07:155 (187155|1,187230|0) - hmmm ctrl+G

Comet's Hard
Uncheck "widescreen support"
00:27:405 (27405|0,27480|1) - maybe 2 1?
01:35:805 (95805|0) - move to column 4
01:45:255 (105255|1,105405|2) - move one column to the right
01:48:855 (108855|2) - to column 1
02:47:055 (167055|2) - to column 2
------------------------------------------------
Other diffs: Uncheck "widescreen support"
I do not have the strength and motivation to mod other diffs


GL o/
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Mod from pm
Easy
00:00:555 (555|3,855|1,1755|2,2055|0,2955|1,3255|3) - should be on same column because of they are same sound
00:04:755 (4755|1,5055|3) - move to 1 & 3, same sound with notes below
00:05:355 (5355|0) - move to 4
00:09:555 (9555|1,9855|2) - move to 3 & 1, same sound with notes below
00:06:555 (6555|2,6855|0,7755|1,8055|3) - change to 1 & 3
00:10:155 (10155|3) - move to 00:10:455 - at col 3
00:11:355 (11355|2,11355|3) - move 1 note to col 1 and the other note to this 00:11:655 - place https://puu.sh/vvKSk.png
00:12:555 (12555|3,12555|0,13755|0,13755|1,14355|2,14355|3,14955|3,14955|0,16155|2,16155|1,17355|2,17355|0,18555|0,18555|3,19155|2,19155|1) - make them same like beginning of the song, make sure you're consistent enough at easy diff
00:20:955 (20955|0) - delete. for replacement, 00:19:755 (19755|3) - move to 1st col & make it longer until 00:26:955 -
00:23:505 - add LN which end at 00:26:955 -
00:27:705 (27705|2) - delete or move it to 00:27:855 -
00:48:255 (48255|1,48405|2,48555|3) - delete or change with single LN which end at 00:48:705 -
00:48:705 - add note
01:20:955 (80955|0,82155|3) - delete, focus on main sound
01:23:355 (83355|1,84555|3) - ^
01:25:455 (85455|3,85755|1) - ^
01:26:955 (86955|1,88155|1) - ^
01:59:355 (119355|3,119355|2) - why 2 LN? you only got LN on previous "aaaaaaa~" sound. Be consistent
02:01:755 (121755|1,121755|0) - ^
02:04:155 (124155|0,124155|3) - ^
02:08:805 - add note
02:10:005 - add note
02:10:830 - ^
02:11:205 - ^
02:12:105 - ^
02:12:405 - ^
02:13:005 - ^
02:13:155 (133155|1) - move to blue line
02:13:605 - add note
02:14:430 - ^
02:14:805 - ^
02:15:630 - ^
02:16:005 - ^
02:16:830 - ^
02:17:205 - ^
02:17:805 - ^

Do not worry if your easy diff exceed E icon, few of ranked maps are same like that too.
I can't continue, so many to fix it. I prefer via .osu file than typing, but you didn't allow it. fine for me
Goodluck for your map
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