00:24:596 - No finish HS here ?
00:26:537 (26537|1) - Maybe move it to (3) just to avoid having the same single note twice on the same row (00:26:537 (26537|1,26890|1))
00:32:184 (32184|2) - To (3) for the same reason
From 00:47:184 to 00:58:478 - I think you should map something here, even if its super simple. But having just a LN for a so long time is a bit disapointing
Something like you did after at 02:51:419 for example
00:59:890 (59890|2,60066|3) - Maybe CTRL+G those, there is no real mistake but since the tone is changing i think its more interesting to break that stair 00:59:537 (59537|0,59713|1,59890|2,60066|3)
01:05:537 - Same thing here, id break the stair somehow to mark the tone changing
01:11:184 - Same remark
01:16:831 - And same ~
What about
01:56:713 (116713|2) - Moving it to (1) and
01:56:890 (116890|1) - To (2)
First i think you shouldnt have the jack with 01:57:066 (117066|1,117243|1) and then i kinda feel its better to have a symetric pattern for the TRACK TRACK
For the first kiai starting at 02:06:243 i think you can use the hat closed HS you used before, it will add variations to all those kicks
02:06:419 - Im pretty sure you should add a note here
02:11:978 (131978|2,131978|3) - I have serious doubts for those, okay its somehow match the synthesizer (and not exactly in fact) but anyway its weird to have an LN + note at this weak beat.
I suggest going for this instead :
02:14:096 (134096|2) - Almost same thing here, i think the LN should start at 02:14:007
02:17:890 (137890|3,138066|3,138243|3,138419|3,138596|3) - Maybe you can solve this anchor a bit
02:33:419 (153419|0,153596|0,153772|0,153949|0) - Anchor too
02:39:596 (159596|2,159772|2,159949|2,160125|2) - Not sure you can fix this one easily, but just notifying it anyway
Except those little mistakes, that kiais part is really impressive, the mapping fit the song so well and the SV are perfectly done adding some real value and fun, really great job >w<)b03:08:007 (188007|3,188184|2) - I think you should move them differently, you are not using jacks in this section so why now ?
03:19:302 (199302|3,199478|2) - Same remark
03:27:066 (207066|3,207243|1) - Not sure those 2 are really necessary i mean 03:27:066 (207066|3) is okay but with 03:27:243 (207243|1) it feels like you are starting too early, maybe just remove 03:27:243 (207243|1)
What about adding claps there :
03:47:890 + 03:48:243
03:49:302 + 03:49:655
03:50:713 + 03:51:066
03:52:125 + 03:52:478
03:59:802 (239802|2,239802|3,239978|3,239978|2) - 2 chords on weak beats, i mean okay you are mapping the synthesizer but still it feels weird since the drum is really strong at 03:59:890. Also the surrounding pattern in really drum-oriented so you can not emphasize that much the synthesizer while keeping the drum mapping. Either you find something to emphasize 03:59:890 or maybe just remove any note at those beats so it wont be confusing
(and so same remark for all the following similar pattern)
Before continuing the mod, just notifying some huge anchor i think you should fix or at least reduce :
04:05:713 (245713|1,245890|1,246066|1,246243|1,246419|1,246596|1)
04:08:713 (248713|3,248890|3,249066|3,249243|3,249419|3)
04:09:331 (249331|2,249507|2,249684|2,249860|2,250037|2)
04:14:360 (254360|3,254537|3,254713|3,254890|3,255066|3,255243|3,255419|3)
04:15:772 (255772|1,255949|1,256125|1,256302|1,256478|1,256655|1)
04:26:272 (266272|2,266449|2,266625|2,266802|2,266978|2,267155|2)
04:31:302 (271302|2,271478|2,271655|2,271831|2,272007|2)
04:32:272 (272272|2,272449|2,272625|2,272802|2,272978|2,273155|2)
04:36:949 (276949|2,277125|2,277302|2,277478|2,277655|2,277831|2)
About the HS for those kiais, first i think you should find another sound for the whistle, i dont really find them apropriate for the king of music but if you decide to keep them anyway i think you should remove some of them at those places, otherwise its really too much :04:03:596 (243596|0,243949|0) - I would remove those 2 whistle, this is just too much here
04:04:655 (244655|0) - This one too, i dont think this whistle is necessary
04:08:890 (248890|2,248978|0) - Same would remove those too, it will give some breath before the 2 whistle triplet after
04:15:243 (255243|2) - Would remove this whistle too
For the second kiai there is just... too much whistle i mean its an invading HS and you are using at a 1/4 mapping, try to lightweight it a bit
Otherwise
04:10:302 - What about a clap here ?
04:32:890 - Here too
And great job for the piano HS during those kiais owo)b
Well in fact nothing to say after that kiai, the end is pretty clean :3So my real opinion about this is : During the first 4min of the test-playing and modding i was like 'Omg this is real good, awsome stuff' and then the last 2 kiais i was somehow disappointed. First the whistle HS destroy all the map mood and the mapping feels a bit weird and less entertaining. So maybe you should really focus on those kiai because the rest of the map has a huge potential and very few mistakes in the end, good luck :3