1. CHALLENGE (5.29 stars, 830 notes)

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timing checked by C00L, Underforest, [[Pika]], and Ongaku
also bns

thanks to ayygurl for providing better mp3

#1 F D Flourite
#2 MrSergio

rip Naotoshi's


osu! needs more D!

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http://www.tenaciousd.com/music/the-pick-of-destiny/
http://images.junostatic.com/full/CS554565-01B-BIG.jpg
https://web.archive.org/web/20060825052 ... movie.com/

what genre is it

smokeman

2017 best preview point award

i fuckin love this map

Seriously, there are many more supports than these, it's impossible to capture all of them one by one. Thanks to all whoever supported the map!

thank you everyone!!

Incomp wrote:

Hey there. From #modreq.

The song is hilarious, and the map represents it to a T. On top of that, it's just a good map.

[Challenge]

The kiai times might be worth looking into a little more. They're kind of spammy, even if it does fit the song. the song is rock dude xd

00:34:614 (4) - Not sure why you used a bezier slider here. Looks weird. That's because I use straight and angled slider in satan's part , to fit with the feel of the song, no fix
00:52:018 (3,4) - Try blanketing that 4 within the slider. sure
01:04:843 (1,1) - I want to take a moment to say that I think these sliders are awesome. Love the way you distorted the second one. thank you <3
02:42:986 (4,5,6,7) - The 5 here is in a spot that is not predictable. Consider moving it to where the 7 is (basically rotate the triangle -90 degrees). it's predictable for pro players
03:34:564 (1) - Seemingly-random new combo here. removed NC
04:41:597 (3) - There's a sound that this slider passes through, and that sound is just as important as the one it ends on. Consider turning this into a kick slider or a triplet. turned into kick slider
05:18:732 (1) - I would put a break after this note. That is, if you want this map to be playable with HR. fixed (although no break is cooler xd)

XDLok wrote:

Hi.
From your queue comes the M4M (you just modded mine):

[General]

1. Loved how you use the f word for the preview ( Is this appropriate? idk but fine by me) im not sure xd
2. Appreciated the symmetry used
3. Those sliders are awesome

[Mods]

1. 00:23:163 (2,3,4) - The two sliders facing the same direction seems a little bit weird for flow flow doesn't have to be good, it's a satan part so having like a bad flow is ok
2. 00:27:743 (1,2,3) - Counter-clockwise is better? having a sharper angle here is better in this case
3. 01:04:843 (1) - The first time I play I sliderbroke. Caught me off guard. But idk, looks awesome shouldn't be a problem here
4. 01:10:186 (6,1) - separate them? I like to keep a sharper angle here
5. 01:17:514 (6,1) - ^ ^
6. 01:36:150 (3) - It seem better to focus on the guitar as you do most on this part, but if you really wanted to, then maybe focus on the vocal on 01:37:356 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) as well ok changed to follow the guitar
7. (00:56:054 (1) - This is quite weird there is nothing weird here
8. 01:44:517 (2) - move this 1/16th of a beat ahead actually 1/12 is better
9. 01:47:005 (2) - ^) it's fine here tho
   idk if the above three are important, as the errors are small enough to not affect game play
10. 01:49:718 (3) - snap to vocal? before that i follow the guitar sound so it should be fine
11. 02:01:778 (1) - Increasing the distance can be cool sure
12. 02:09:093 (1,1,1,1) - Quite hard to see where the slider ends tbh, as it had been blocked by 02:08:635 (1) as well I think using the default skin can see clearer xd
13. 02:16:421 (1,1,1,1) - ^ ^
14. 03:19:398 (1) - Rotate it so it flows better? sure
15. 03:38:777 (5) - sounds better if you repeat it up to the white tick (repeat 5 times) ok sure
16. 03:41:874 (5) - ^ sure
17. 03:44:970 (5) - ^ sure
18. 03:39:067 (1) - better move it 1/4s of a beat ahead, this does not seem natural even though the vocal supports it I understand but there is no sound at the red tick. If I do that it become overmapped.
19. 04:03:551 (4,1) - woah, that's a sudden jump adjusted the distance
20. 04:12:551 (9,10) - move these two ahead by 1/4 and add a circle before that, that triggers me, so maybe like this: ok sure
    SPOILER

    
21. 04:29:293 (1,2) - Face the same direction to be consistent? if i do that, uncomfortable flow here 04:29:680 (3,4,5,6) -
22. 04:34:736 - I don't think that this red line is necessary? (As there are no notes anyway) did you know that in nightcore mode you can clearly hear the beat while playing? if I don't set it it feels weird to listen
23. 04:36:410 - ^ ^

[Misc]

A test play which you may (or may not) find useful: https://puu.sh/v6OoL/9cafde2dbb.osr
I suck at this game I know That NF was there so that I don't have to retry a million times

[Conclusion]

Interesting song, hope that my mod at least provide some perspective, and hope that this map will get ranked soon!

CircleFairy wrote:

Hi from my mod queue :-)

00:38:736 (5,6,7) - This can flow a bit better. it doesn't meant to be a good flow, it's the satan part and I want more sharp angles and non-good flow
01:04:843 (1) - This slider is somewhat confusing to read because of where the slider ends, make it more apparent. ok sure
01:48:914 (1) - This note is too early. fixed
01:49:718 (3) - This note is too late. im following the guitar sound
01:50:522 (4) - This note is too early. fixed
03:14:509 (2) - This slider is timed wrong. fixed
03:33:064 (6) - ^ fixed
04:19:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would like to see something a little more creative here. i think stacking is creative LOL

Thoughts
The map is nice overall, theres just a few notes that are not timed correctly, use the beat snap divisor to fix them.

Good luck! :-)

1. 00:28:201 (1) - I can't understand why reverse here but long slider + short slider before. It looks bad, it plays bad. maybe you tried to follow vocal like here 00:35:530 but its bad for this part
2. 00:30:033 (1) - ^
3. 00:40:415 (2) - delete and do a 3 note jumpt like you did it before
4. 00:40:568 - ignore drums is ok but it is too srong
5. 03:43:615 (1,3) - not perfect
6. 03:47:874 (5) - It must be more jumpy I think
7. 04:05:873 (2) - maybe end slider here? 04:06:067 - and put one more circle here 04:06:261 -
8. 04:11:486 (1) - same ^
9. 04:11:099 (3) - stuck with 04:09:744 (5)
10. 04:19:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe space it and increase spacing here? 04:22:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
11. 04:33:551 (1,2,3,1) - Feels so easy after long stream but song isnt very calm here, just increase spacing here too

SolarFox wrote:

hi from nm queue

[Challenge]
00:34:614 (4) - circle slider looks a bit distorted, fix a little fixed
01:17:209 (5) - fix stack lol fixed
02:27:871 (3) - stack on slider (1) I want to have larger distance between 02:27:719 (2) -
02:58:558 (1) - I'd love to have a circle before the spinner ok sure
02:58:558 (1) - not sure about the kiai just adding the effect i guess
03:06:564 (1,1) - reverse slider is better? ok sure
03:23:231 (7) - nc fixed
03:44:196 (3) - blanket looks a bit weird, move the end node a little down it's not meant to be blanket, it meant to be line with 03:43:615 (1) -
03:47:874 (5) - sound is strong on both white and red tick, so two circles fit imo sure
03:48:261 (1,2) - red tick feels empty, try adding a circle since you did 03:55:035 (2) - ok sure
04:03:551 (4,1) - this hurts lol. would ctrl+g slider (1) sure
04:19:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would prefer movement after fourth circle applied
04:22:325 (1) - very strong sound is undermined when you just stack it like this :c, would prefer movement applied
04:33:551 (1,2,3) - 3 nodes would be pointless if the sliders look straight. curve it a little more or use 2 nodes. if you look closer you can see the curve, no fix

dont give kds if unhelpful. good luck!

Testo wrote:

m4m
[mod]

1. 00:28:201 (1) - I can't understand why reverse here but long slider + short slider before. It looks bad, it plays bad. maybe you tried to follow vocal like here 00:35:530 but its bad for this part the things happened before is different than this case, also if I do 3 short slider here i think it will be awful to play
2. 00:30:033 (1) - ^ ^
3. 00:40:415 (2) - delete and do a 3 note jumpt like you did it before i don't understand
4. 00:40:568 - ignore drums is ok but it is too srong as a player, it feels much natural to do my pattern
5. 03:43:615 (1,3) - not perfect first of all, what is not perfect? secondly, im actally make it line up with 03:44:196 (3) -
6. 03:47:874 (5) - It must be more jumpy I think fixed in previous mod
7. 04:05:873 (2) - maybe end slider here? 04:06:067 - and put one more circle here 04:06:261 - then it's not symmetry with 04:05:293 (1) -
8. 04:11:486 (1) - same ^ this already is the thing you're talking about lol
9. 04:11:099 (3) - stuck with 04:09:744 (5) you mean stack? good caught man
10. 04:19:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe space it and increase spacing here? 04:22:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - fixed in previous mod
11. 04:33:551 (1,2,3,1) - Feels so easy after long stream but song isnt very calm here, just increase spacing here too sure

Good luck :3

HM02CauseImFly wrote:

From queue.
There nothing really that I can spot, the map is amazing. I REALLY hope this gets ranked, good luck.

1. 00:50:186 - maybe make sv a but higher here - this seems more intense than the previous section
2. 01:11:713 (5,6,1) - kinda uncomfortable flow - you could argue that it's for emphasis of 1, but you haven't done this anywhere else in this section so it's a bit inconsistent
3. 01:25:301 (1,2,3) - maybe unstack a little like 01:27:708 (1,2,3) - and 01:34:944 (5,6,1) - for consistency?
4. 02:23:749 (1) - ctrl+g this for spacing emphasis, also ctrl+g the others if youre doing this obv
5. 02:27:413 (1,3) - i think you could stack these
6. 02:40:238 (1,2,3,4) - the spacing here is similar but the gaps in rhythm are different. consider changing as a misread may happen here.
7. 03:14:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - consider simplifying rhythm to 1/2 and 1/4 in this section so for readability and to fit with the rest of the section - no one will expect these sort of unusual rhythm gaps unless theyve already listened to the song
8. 03:38:777 (5,1) - could also be misread, also spacing is too big for a 1/4 gap imo
9. 03:39:067 (1) - actually shouldnt this be on the red tick after it? vocal starts there and it's for consistency with similar stuff in the upcoming section
10. 03:49:809 (5,6,7,8) - nitpicky but these arent equidistant
11. 04:03:551 (4,1) - even with slider leniency i think this is too big for a 1/4 gap

newton- wrote:

hi, from queue
amazing map, amazing song
also i like your sliders <3

[ challenge]

1. 00:50:186 - maybe make sv a but higher here - this seems more intense than the previous section well instead to adjust the whole section i decided to add a inherted point on 00:42:858 - with 0.60x sv and add another inherted point on 00:50:186 - with 0.80x sv
2. 01:11:713 (5,6,1) - kinda uncomfortable flow - you could argue that it's for emphasis of 1, but you haven't done this anywhere else in this section so it's a bit inconsistent flow doesn't have to be comfortable in some case, this is the part where satan sing so i want to have more sharper angle and non-good flow
3. 01:25:301 (1,2,3) - maybe unstack a little like 01:27:708 (1,2,3) - and 01:34:944 (5,6,1) - for consistency? sure
4. 02:23:749 (1) - ctrl+g this for spacing emphasis, also ctrl+g the others if youre doing this obv I wanna go different direction
5. 02:27:413 (1,3) - i think you could stack these ok fine
6. 02:40:238 (1,2,3,4) - the spacing here is similar but the gaps in rhythm are different. consider changing as a misread may happen here. so i guess i should lower the distance, fixed
7. 03:14:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - consider simplifying rhythm to 1/2 and 1/4 in this section so for readability and to fit with the rest of the section - no one will expect these sort of unusual rhythm gaps unless theyve already listened to the song ok revamped the whole part
8. 03:38:777 (5,1) - could also be misread, also spacing is too big for a 1/4 gap imo adjusted the distance
9. 03:39:067 (1) - actually shouldnt this be on the red tick after it? vocal starts there and it's for consistency with similar stuff in the upcoming section fixed
10. 03:49:809 (5,6,7,8) - nitpicky but these arent equidistant ok fixed
11. 04:03:551 (4,1) - even with slider leniency i think this is too big for a 1/4 gap lower the distance a lot

good luck!

• 00:39:194 (1) - This one should be emphasized more just like rest of them
  
  00:47:896 (2) - Probably the best pronounced ************ I've ever heard
  
  01:35:246 (1,2) - Why are these so close you have a strong sound on 01:35:849 (2) - emphasize it a little bit
  
  03:05:898 (4) - Ctrl+G so you have a better emphasize on 03:06:564 (1) - since its a strong sound and better cause you have the same DS on 3 before it and the forth is practically the same as them.
  
  03:27:564 (1,2) - You can hear a sound on 03:27:898 (1) - and I think the proper way to map it is like this http://prntscr.com/escgxc it sounds much better tho
  
  04:01:809 (3,4) - Bigger DS between these than 04:02:003 (4,1) - these and 04:02:196 (1) - is a important sound and should be emphasized right?
  
  04:08:390 (1) - ^
  
  04:49:952 (5) - You can hear a beat here so map it pls

• Why bitrate audio 128, need 192)

• 00:34:614 (4) - You need to make sure that these shifts are more visible
  01:04:843 (1) - I certainly understand everything, but you need to reduce the speed of the slider to 1.3-1.5, because the music is not very clear that there will be such a sharp shift, and already 2 sliders can be made so fast
  01:12:629 (2,4) - Do blanket?
  01:48:927 (1) - Why note not that tick?
  01:51:728 (2) - ^

Invertable wrote:

Hi NM from my queue

Challenge

Your Audio bit rate is 128 kbs you know what to do fixed (although you don't really have to fix this but it's the best to do so)

• 00:39:194 (1) - This one should be emphasized more just like rest of them sure
  
  00:47:896 (2) - Probably the best pronounced ************ I've ever heard xd
  
  01:35:246 (1,2) - Why are these so close you have a strong sound on 01:35:849 (2) - emphasize it a little bit sure
  
  03:05:898 (4) - Ctrl+G so you have a better emphasize on 03:06:564 (1) - since its a strong sound and better cause you have the same DS on 3 before it and the forth is practically the same as them. ok sure
  
  03:27:564 (1,2) - You can hear a sound on 03:27:898 (1) - and I think the proper way to map it is like this http://prntscr.com/escgxc it sounds much better tho I didn't hear it wtf
  
  04:01:809 (3,4) - Bigger DS between these than 04:02:003 (4,1) - these and 04:02:196 (1) - is a important sound and should be emphasized right? ok sure
  
  04:08:390 (1) - ^ sure
  
  04:49:952 (5) - You can hear a beat here so map it pls fixed

Uhh really hard to mod this map is awesome song is amazing xD I wish to see this ranked or at least loved one day ! GL hopefully this mod was somewhat helpful!

Moge-ko wrote:

00:22:705 (1) - that sharp angle feels kinda weird because all other sharp angled slider on that part have the sharp angle in the middle of the slider. i think it would look better if u make the sharp angle in the middle of that slider I want to emphasize that important sound, no fix
00:27:285 (4) - that slider looks weird cuz all other slider on that part are more curved than that. maybe make it curved like the sliders before? I try to make 00:27:285 (4) - and 00:27:743 (1) - to have a natural flow, no fix
03:39:067 (1) - that note feels out of place ... maybe make the kickslider shorter and put a slider with the sliderend on that note on it? or just simply remove it? not really out of place
03:58:325 (3) - u skipped vocal and drumsound there. Maybe put there a note? or a 1/2 kickslider? sure
04:00:261 (8,1) - u skipped a guitar/vocal sound there it feels kinda out of place. place a note there or a 1/4 slider? (and you mapped that guitar sound there 04:15:938 (4,5,1) - that makes inconsistent)
04:08:196 (4,1) - skipped guitar sound fixed
04:11:293 (4,1) - skipped guitar sound fixed
04:14:390 (4,1) - skipped guitar sound fixed
04:40:005 (5,1) - u skipped a sound between these 2 sliders fixed

makisokk wrote:

Hi
[General]

• Why bitrate audio 128, need 192) fixed in previous mod

[Challenge]

• 00:34:614 (4) - You need to make sure that these shifts are more visible it's visible already dude lol
  01:04:843 (1) - I certainly understand everything, but you need to reduce the speed of the slider to 1.3-1.5, because the music is not very clear that there will be such a sharp shift, and already 2 sliders can be made so fast player need to remember that
  01:12:629 (2,4) - Do blanket? sure
  01:48:927 (1) - Why note not that tick? if it's on 1/4 tick it's not 100% accurate so i need to change some value
  01:51:728 (2) - ^ explained ^

Sorry this is all I can help, good luck with the map

Yahuri wrote:

from meme

F U C K
-nice colorhaxing :v
00:11:713 (1,2,3,4) - could move the 2-3-4 triangle so that 3,4 are equidistant from the tail of 1 sure
00:26:827 - 00:27:743 (1,2,3) - add clap? sure
00:42:400 - there isn't any distinct note here, so i would silence this sliderend fixed
01:30:874 (2) - i think it would be cool if you change the shape of this slider to emphasize the vocal pitch change here 01:31:175 ok lol sure
02:07:261 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 02:21:917 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - stacking is kinda off, should probably fix it pixel by pixel xd fixed
02:14:589 (1,1,1,1) - move these so that 02:14:016 (1,1) - the head of the short slider perfectly overlaps the red anchor of the long slider? ok sure
02:29:245 - 02:32:909 - 02:40:238 - add finish? you put finish here 02:36:574 sure
03:09:231 (1,2) - move 2 so that its equidistant from the head and tail of 1 fixed
03:43:615 (1,3) - is this supposed to be a blanket? the sliderbody of 3 is too far away from the sliderbody of 1it suppose to line the slider end up
03:49:809 (5,6) - 6 isnt a strong note so i don't think it needs a jump. 03:50:970 (7) - would be ok for a jump though changed the position
04:19:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it's the same vocal phrase over and over. rather than starting with no movement (stacking) -> movement, i would start with movement. sure

short mod, this map is already pretty clean. good luck!

[Soul] wrote:

Pretty hardcore map though I dont enjoy the swearing that much

Mod

Beginning is good.
00:37:209 (7,2) - Blanket 7 on the end of 2 i don't understand
01:02:553 (1,2) - You could increase the spacing here. sure
02:32:757 (3,2) - Same as 7, 2 but put 3 on top of 2 i don't get the thing
I mean I dont really have much to say about this map. Maybe consider different spikes in DS and emphisis in the music to mesh with the distance of notes. Make sure you overlaps and blankets are clean clean clean.

Hope this helps in anyway.

Soul from the OSUWOT Modding Queue~