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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, April 20, 2017 at 11:49:42 PM

Artist: Hanasaka Yui(CV: M.A.O)
Title: Harumachi Clover
Source: OneRoom
Tags: tvsize kantoku カントク one room ワンルーム Kisses Victorica ktgster frostwich Nao Tomori Mir
BPM: 142
Filesize: 2545kb
Play Time: 00:30
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Download: Hanasaka Yui(CV: M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover
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Kisses' Easy by Kisses
stwi's Normal by frostwich
Hard by me
Light Insane by me
Kisstorica's Insane by Kisses and Victorica
ktgster's Cloverdose by ktgster
Hitsounding by Mir
Finish spam by me
Background by Shad0w1and
Last edited by Naotoshi on , edited 39 times in total.
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13:11 PolkaMocha: yoyoyo
13:45 Naotoshi: no
13:45 PolkaMocha: cool thats it from me


haha Im so funny

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13:11 Naotoshi: yo
13:11 PolkaMocha: yoyoyoy
13:11 Naotoshi: can u do me a favor
13:11 PolkaMocha: Yeah sup
13:11 Naotoshi: and mod this harumachi clover set i'm gonna upload in a bit
13:11 PolkaMocha: auhhhh depends on how built up my queue is
13:12 Naotoshi: wanna see if i can rank it before the weekend
13:12 PolkaMocha: like yeah I will
13:12 Naotoshi: fuk ur queue
13:12 PolkaMocha: but let me see if Im already busy or not so I can tell you when I can do it
13:12 PolkaMocha: yeah fuk my queue x)
13:13 Naotoshi: mod my 30 second anime meme map instead
13:13 Naotoshi: thanks
13:13 PolkaMocha: np memel○rd
13:33 Naotoshi: ok
13:33 Naotoshi: 2 mins
13:33 PolkaMocha: what
13:34 PolkaMocha: Also I have no mod q posts so Im good
13:37 Naotoshi: go go go
13:37 *Naotoshi is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1252652 Hanasaka Yui(CV: M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover [stwi's Normal]]
13:38 PolkaMocha: irc? o3o
13:38 PolkaMocha: ew
13:38 Naotoshi: sure
13:38 PolkaMocha: omfg ew
13:38 Naotoshi: i just need SP
13:38 Naotoshi: LOL
13:38 PolkaMocha: ok
13:38 PolkaMocha: CLOVERDOSE?!
13:38 PolkaMocha: I WANT TO DIE
13:38 Naotoshi: LOL
13:38 Naotoshi: it represents
13:38 PolkaMocha: Jesus fuck Im cringing
13:38 Naotoshi: how theres too many
13:38 Naotoshi: of them
13:38 PolkaMocha: so hard
13:38 Naotoshi: LOL
13:38 Naotoshi: dude
13:38 Naotoshi: the song is actually soo good
13:39 PolkaMocha: uh
13:39 PolkaMocha: anyway lets mod!
13:39 PolkaMocha: Advanced
13:39 Naotoshi: no do top diff first lz
13:39 PolkaMocha: 00:07:045 (3) - This thing shoots right through the hp bar its kinda ugly
13:40 PolkaMocha: 00:07:890 (1) - I dont like this landing on a downbeat. Perhaps ignore the triplet and go for a 1/2 pattern
13:40 PolkaMocha: 00:09:580 (1) - girrrrr
13:41 PolkaMocha: 00:11:270 (1) - Why are you like thiiiiis
13:41 PolkaMocha: 00:12:960 (1) - REEEEEEE
13:41 PolkaMocha: 00:27:327 (1,1) - remove ncs
13:41 Naotoshi: fuck hp bar
13:42 PolkaMocha: k cloverdope
13:42 Naotoshi: i cant do anything about the triple
13:42 Naotoshi: cuz i mapped them all the same way
13:42 PolkaMocha: I saw ;-;
13:42 Naotoshi: fixed blanket
13:42 PolkaMocha: uh
13:42 PolkaMocha: ok
13:43 PolkaMocha: so colveobodrse
13:43 PolkaMocha: 00:00:284 (1,2,3,4,5) - its a clover omf
13:43 PolkaMocha: 00:07:045 (3) - ctrl + g this for many flow
13:44 Naotoshi: ok
13:44 PolkaMocha: 00:28:382 (1) - unecessary nc imo
13:44 Naotoshi: i like nc at end of bursts
13:44 Naotoshi: cute
13:44 PolkaMocha: 00:27:538 (1) - here too :/ maybe just put one 00:27:960 (3) - ?
13:45 Naotoshi: no
13:45 PolkaMocha: cool thats it from me
13:45 Naotoshi: nice
13:46 Naotoshi: ok post


normol:
widescreen support checked y
00:19:932 (3,4,5) - this is hard for normal players actually. Why not make the first 1/2 slider repeat?
00:27:327 (3) - 1/2 repeat fits better
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13:11 PolkaMocha: yoyoyo
13:45 Naotoshi: no
13:45 PolkaMocha: cool thats it from me


haha Im so funny

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13:11 Naotoshi: yo
13:11 PolkaMocha: yoyoyoy
13:11 Naotoshi: can u do me a favor
13:11 PolkaMocha: Yeah sup
13:11 Naotoshi: and mod this harumachi clover set i'm gonna upload in a bit
13:11 PolkaMocha: auhhhh depends on how built up my queue is
13:12 Naotoshi: wanna see if i can rank it before the weekend
13:12 PolkaMocha: like yeah I will
13:12 Naotoshi: fuk ur queue
13:12 PolkaMocha: but let me see if Im already busy or not so I can tell you when I can do it
13:12 PolkaMocha: yeah fuk my queue x)
13:13 Naotoshi: mod my 30 second anime meme map instead
13:13 Naotoshi: thanks
13:13 PolkaMocha: np memel○rd
13:33 Naotoshi: ok
13:33 Naotoshi: 2 mins
13:33 PolkaMocha: what
13:34 PolkaMocha: Also I have no mod q posts so Im good
13:37 Naotoshi: go go go
13:37 *Naotoshi is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1252652 Hanasaka Yui(CV: M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover [stwi's Normal]]
13:38 PolkaMocha: irc? o3o
13:38 PolkaMocha: ew
13:38 Naotoshi: sure
13:38 PolkaMocha: omfg ew
13:38 Naotoshi: i just need SP
13:38 Naotoshi: LOL
13:38 PolkaMocha: ok
13:38 PolkaMocha: CLOVERDOSE?!
13:38 PolkaMocha: I WANT TO DIE
13:38 Naotoshi: LOL
13:38 Naotoshi: it represents
13:38 PolkaMocha: Jesus fuck Im cringing
13:38 Naotoshi: how theres too many
13:38 Naotoshi: of them
13:38 PolkaMocha: so hard
13:38 Naotoshi: LOL
13:38 Naotoshi: dude
13:38 Naotoshi: the song is actually soo good
13:39 PolkaMocha: uh
13:39 PolkaMocha: anyway lets mod!
13:39 PolkaMocha: Advanced
13:39 Naotoshi: no do top diff first lz
13:39 PolkaMocha: 00:07:045 (3) - This thing shoots right through the hp bar its kinda ugly
13:40 PolkaMocha: 00:07:890 (1) - I dont like this landing on a downbeat. Perhaps ignore the triplet and go for a 1/2 pattern
13:40 PolkaMocha: 00:09:580 (1) - girrrrr
13:41 PolkaMocha: 00:11:270 (1) - Why are you like thiiiiis
13:41 PolkaMocha: 00:12:960 (1) - REEEEEEE
13:41 PolkaMocha: 00:27:327 (1,1) - remove ncs
13:41 Naotoshi: fuck hp bar
13:42 PolkaMocha: k cloverdope
13:42 Naotoshi: i cant do anything about the triple
13:42 Naotoshi: cuz i mapped them all the same way
13:42 PolkaMocha: I saw ;-;
13:42 Naotoshi: fixed blanket
13:42 PolkaMocha: uh
13:42 PolkaMocha: ok
13:43 PolkaMocha: so colveobodrse
13:43 PolkaMocha: 00:00:284 (1,2,3,4,5) - its a clover omf
13:43 PolkaMocha: 00:07:045 (3) - ctrl + g this for many flow
13:44 Naotoshi: ok
13:44 PolkaMocha: 00:28:382 (1) - unecessary nc imo
13:44 Naotoshi: i like nc at end of bursts
13:44 Naotoshi: cute
13:44 PolkaMocha: 00:27:538 (1) - here too :/ maybe just put one 00:27:960 (3) - ?
13:45 Naotoshi: no
13:45 PolkaMocha: cool thats it from me
13:45 Naotoshi: nice
13:46 Naotoshi: ok post


normol:
widescreen support checked y idk
00:19:932 (3,4,5) - this is hard for normal players actually. Why not make the first 1/2 slider repeat? so i can emphasize the triple that would be there if it was mapped in 1/4
00:27:327 (3) - 1/2 repeat fits bettermostly following lyrics there
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hi i wanna rank my first beatmap starter pack

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This isn't osu!catch
00:11:270 - i think you could make the movement to this a bit more intense since it's a pretty strong vocal here but the movement is exactly the same as the last notes, you could either make the angle a bit sharper, distance it a bit more or turn the sliders downward since i feel like that would work too... or whatever you come up with yourself xD
00:14:017 - i also think you could make the movement to this a bit sharper or standing out since the vocal here is pretty distinctive, moreso than the start of the drums at 00:14:228 - imo


Advanced
00:26:059 - i think you could make this 2 notes instead of a slider to add more emphasis on 00:26:481 -
00:26:481 (1,3,4) - nice clover lul


Normal
the overall usage of rythms and patterns in this diff is kind of repetitive, in the section from 00:01:341 - to 00:13:172 - and a few times after that too you are basically repeating the same rythm over and over and even using the same patterns the whole time, maybe try to make it slightly more varied by introducing some kind of 1 2 1 2 variation or something
00:27:960 - maybe make this some kind of 1/1 slider instead since the "ver" of clover is more of an exhaled tone, which would fit a slider end better and to cover the 1/4 sounds a bit more. Also the Advanced diff didn't have the last note as a clickable object so this would also be better for spread.

that's it... hope you enjoyed the honor of recieving my first standard mod ever, cyaaaaaa
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15:49 Naotoshi: you seem like the kinda guy who would love to mod a 30 second long meme map
15:50 Hobbes2: thinking emoji
15:50 Hobbes2: i wouldnt say love, but im not the kinda guy who wouldnt do it
15:50 Naotoshi: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/574967
15:50 Naotoshi: thanks
15:50 Hobbes2: why 
15:50 Hobbes2: wlel ok ill mod it
15:51 Hobbes2: did you see pishis map for it
15:51 Hobbes2: its pretty fun actually
15:51 Naotoshi: ya
15:51 Naotoshi: pishis map inspired me
15:51 Naotoshi: jk
15:51 Naotoshi: but his map is good
15:55 Hobbes2: doesnt icon ranked maps
15:55 Hobbes2: maps ranked maps
15:55 Hobbes2: thinking emoji
15:55 Naotoshi: im not iconning this
15:55 Hobbes2: lo
15:55 Hobbes2: fro grave?
15:55 Naotoshi: no
15:55 Hobbes2: wot
15:56 Hobbes2: oh
15:56 Naotoshi: i'm not iconning it
15:56 Naotoshi: someone else s
15:56 Hobbes2: 2/16
15:57 Hobbes2: k if you rank ill #1 with FLHDDT
15:57 Naotoshi: ok
15:57 Hobbes2: or not
15:57 Hobbes2: but yea ill mod ths i guess
15:57 Hobbes2: want an irc or
15:57 Hobbes2: just a forum
15:57 Naotoshi: up to you
15:58 Hobbes2: well its just 30 seconds
15:58 Hobbes2: so advanced
15:58 Hobbes2: yuck do combo colors
15:58 Naotoshi: oh
15:59 Naotoshi: right
15:59 Hobbes2: 00:09:580 (1) -  1/2 slider+ circle instead? theres a vocal on 00:09:580 (1) - 
15:59 Hobbes2: 00:10:003 - 
16:00 Hobbes2: same for 00:12:960 (1) - actually. depends on how dense you want your diff i guess
16:01 Naotoshi: hmm
16:01 Naotoshi: that slider end is pretty weak
16:01 Naotoshi: like if i was gonna make it 2 clicks there i'd do a circle+slider
16:02 Hobbes2: i guess
16:02 Hobbes2: well on another note this diff is just like a lot curved sliders and so the fact that you dont blanket some things is odd
16:02 Hobbes2: 00:12:960 (1,2) - , 00:15:707 (3,4) -  etc
16:02 Hobbes2: lots of potential blankets that i feel would clean up the diff a bit
16:03 Hobbes2: that's more of a general thing then "hur dur fix blanket"
16:03 Naotoshi: yea
16:04 Hobbes2: personally i dislike using a whole slew of different amounts of curve because it makes the map look less cohesive
16:04 Hobbes2: but thats a personal thingthing and not like
16:04 Hobbes2: an objective mapping thing
16:04 Hobbes2: so w/e
16:04 Naotoshi: mhm
16:05 Hobbes2: 00:09:580 (1,2,3) - this could be symmetrical
16:05 Hobbes2: would be a tilted axis of course
16:05 Hobbes2: requires some rotation math or whatever, but it would look nicer
16:05 Naotoshi: i just ctrl g'd it
16:06 Naotoshi: lol
16:06 Hobbes2: wut
16:06 Naotoshi: 00:09:580 (1,1) -
16:06 Naotoshi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7680778
16:07 Hobbes2: wut
16:07 Hobbes2: o
16:07 Naotoshi: what
16:07 Hobbes2: ok
16:07 Naotoshi: what dd you mean
16:07 Hobbes2: i meant 1 2 and 3 should be symmetrical but im not sure what you linked
16:07 Hobbes2: with 00:09:580 (1,1) - 
16:08 Naotoshi: what
16:08 Naotoshi: how can 1 2 and 3 be symmetrical
16:08 Hobbes2: well if 2 is a symmetrical curve
16:08 Naotoshi: it is
16:08 Hobbes2: then you should be able to place 1 and 3 so that all 3 of them form a symmetrical pattern
16:09 Naotoshi: what
16:09 Hobbes2: what
16:09 Naotoshi: i did do that
16:09 Naotoshi: ???
16:09 Hobbes2: but they're not tho
16:09 Naotoshi: it literally is
16:09 Hobbes2: if they were if you ctrl+g'd 2am i blind
16:09 Hobbes2: am i blind
16:10 Hobbes2: im like 9999% sure they're not
16:10 Hobbes2: wut
16:10 Naotoshi: what
16:10 Naotoshi: no
16:10 Hobbes2: well whatever
16:10 Naotoshi: http://puu.sh/v1v01/799a57c29f.jpg
16:10 Naotoshi: this is
16:10 Naotoshi: symmetrical
16:10 Hobbes2: as long as you intend them to be symmetrical im sure they are
16:10 Naotoshi: wtf
16:10 Naotoshi: how is that not symmetrical
16:11 Hobbes2: idk it doesnt look like it to me
16:11 Hobbes2: im probably blind
16:11 Naotoshi: wat
16:11 Naotoshi: ok forget it
16:11 Hobbes2: yea they're not symmetrical lol
16:12 Naotoshi: wtf
16:12 Hobbes2: gimme 2 secs for screenshot
16:13 Hobbes2: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7680820 compare with https://puu.sh/v1v9w/804f586096.jpg
16:13 Hobbes2: notice how the on on the left or right is higher than the other
16:13 Hobbes2: shouldnt be
16:13 Hobbes2: i rotated the pattern so that 2 is flat
16:13 Naotoshi: 3 is at the same y axis value as 1
16:13 Naotoshi: atm
16:14 Naotoshi: ok forget it
16:14 Hobbes2: well anyway this issue is too minor to stay on
16:14 Naotoshi: anything else
16:16 Hobbes2: meh
16:16 Hobbes2: seems fine
16:16 Naotoshi: k
16:16 Hobbes2: not a fan of the various 1/2 slider shapes because it looks messy but who cares l ul 
16:16 Hobbes2: cloverdose
16:16 Hobbes2: hm 
16:16 Hobbes2: 00:01:129 (5,2) - i see the hexagon but this overlap is aids
16:17 Naotoshi: hmm
16:18 Hobbes2: if you dont change that, at least blanket 00:01:763 (2,4) - 
16:18 Naotoshi: ok i ctrl g'd 4 5
16:18 Naotoshi: LOL
16:18 Naotoshi: no
16:18 Naotoshi: thats shit nvm
16:18 Hobbes2: then this flow becomes butt 00:01:129 (5,1) - 
16:19 Naotoshi: ok
16:19 Naotoshi: ill make it a pentagon
16:20 Hobbes2: sounds good
16:20 Naotoshi: ok
16:21 Hobbes2: 00:09:580 (6,7) - 
16:21 Hobbes2: this is what i was talking about 
16:21 Hobbes2: for the advanced
16:21 Naotoshi: yea but rhythm density =/
16:22 Hobbes2: shrug
16:22 Hobbes2: 00:07:890 (6,7,1) - looks kinda ugly
16:22 Hobbes2: cos the slider goes up a bit
16:22 Hobbes2: so like the triplet doesnt flow into the shape
16:23 Naotoshi: moved 7 down
16:23 Hobbes2: perfect
16:24 Hobbes2: flow-wise something like this makes more sense https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7680915
16:24 Hobbes2: feels like you're hitting the current shape from behind
16:24 Hobbes2: unless that was intentional?
16:25 Naotoshi: where
16:25 Hobbes2: oh yeah lol 00:16:129 (5) - 
16:25 Hobbes2: 00:15:284 (2,5) - blanket, by the way
16:26 Hobbes2: 00:18:136 (7) -  you have like a spacing change after the triplet here but you didnt have that for any of the other ones
16:26 Naotoshi: fixed fixed fixed
16:27 Hobbes2: 00:26:904 (2,4,3) - could make an equalilteral triangle out of this
16:27 Naotoshi: isnt it
16:27 Naotoshi: ok fixed
16:27 Hobbes2: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7680943
16:27 Hobbes2: no
16:27 Hobbes2: ok
16:28 Hobbes2: yea maps fine
16:28 Hobbes2: is this for april fools?
16:28 Naotoshi: can u look at normal for like 10 seconds
16:28 Hobbes2: yea sure
16:28 Naotoshi: and see if theres anything
16:29 Hobbes2: looks fine
16:29 Hobbes2: prob a bit on the denser side for an "easiest diff" but ive seen worse ranked
16:30 Hobbes2: lol your drain time is below 30 seconds
16:30 Naotoshi: really
16:30 Hobbes2: for the normal
16:30 Hobbes2: lemme check other diffs
16:30 Naotoshi: its 142 bpm
16:30 Naotoshi: wait what
16:30 Naotoshi: no it isnt
16:30 Hobbes2: yeah it is
16:30 Hobbes2: drain starts from the first object
16:30 Hobbes2: 00:01:341 -  00:30:284 - 
16:31 Hobbes2: thats not 30 seconds
16:31 Naotoshi: heck
16:31 Naotoshi: ok
16:31 Hobbes2: advanced as well
16:31 Hobbes2: cos you dont map before the instrumental starts
16:31 Naotoshi: 00:00:284 (1) -
16:31 Hobbes2: cloverdose is fine
16:31 Naotoshi: added slider
16:31 Hobbes2: cos then its exactly 30 seconds
16:31 Hobbes2: lol
16:32 Naotoshi: yea
16:32 Naotoshi: the audio is edited
16:32 Hobbes2: 00:03:035 (1) - 
16:32 Naotoshi: specially for that
16:32 Hobbes2: advanced
16:32 Hobbes2: not snapped
16:32 Naotoshi: what
16:32 Naotoshi: yes it is
16:32 Hobbes2: i got that from ai-mod /shrug
16:33 Naotoshi: oh i need to flip the bg
16:34 Hobbes2: why
16:34 Naotoshi: so that more girls show up
16:35 Hobbes2: nice
16:35 Hobbes2: well this mapset's something
16:35 Hobbes2: well pranked
16:36 Hobbes2: I was gonna map this for april fools - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LNKEcCna-ws but im too lazy
16:36 Hobbes2: i contacted the guy who made the remix and we had this cool prank metadata all setup which we technically could have done since he made the song
16:36 Hobbes2: but kwan said it wasnt allowed feelsbadman
16:37 Naotoshi: rip.
16:37 Hobbes2: like we were gonna have artist and song title just be the original metadata
16:37 Hobbes2: kwan said that it was technically allowed but she wouldnt allow it because of common sense
16:37 Hobbes2: :gun:
16:38 Hobbes2: guess i should post this for kedosu


summary - told him to add combo colors, fixed drain time on easier diffs, and misc. suggestions to improve quality
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hi i wanna rank my first beatmap starter pack i hav 2 already tho ?_?

also l00d BG :thinking:


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00:11:270 - i think you could make the movement to this a bit more intense since it's a pretty strong vocal here but the movement is exactly the same as the last notes, you could either make the angle a bit sharper, distance it a bit more or turn the sliders downward since i feel like that would work too... or whatever you come up with yourself xD yea
00:14:017 - i also think you could make the movement to this a bit sharper or standing out since the vocal here is pretty distinctive, moreso than the start of the drums at 00:14:228 - imo yea


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00:26:059 - i think you could make this 2 notes instead of a slider to add more emphasis on 00:26:481 - yea
00:26:481 (1,3,4) - nice clover lul


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the overall usage of rythms and patterns in this diff is kind of repetitive, in the section from 00:01:341 - to 00:13:172 - and a few times after that too you are basically repeating the same rythm over and over and even using the same patterns the whole time, maybe try to make it slightly more varied by introducing some kind of 1 2 1 2 variation or something
00:27:960 - maybe make this some kind of 1/1 slider instead since the "ver" of clover is more of an exhaled tone, which would fit a slider end better and to cover the 1/4 sounds a bit more. Also the Advanced diff didn't have the last note as a clickable object so this would also be better for spread.

that's it... hope you enjoyed the honor of recieving my first standard mod ever, cyaaaaaa
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hi i wanna rank my first beatmap starter pack



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the overall usage of rythms and patterns in this diff is kind of repetitive, in the section from 00:01:341 - to 00:13:172 - and a few times after that too you are basically repeating the same rythm over and over and even using the same patterns the whole time, maybe try to make it slightly more varied by introducing some kind of 1 2 1 2 variation or something its a normal its best that i make it straightforward to play
00:27:960 - maybe make this some kind of 1/1 slider instead since the "ver" of clover is more of an exhaled tone, which would fit a slider end better and to cover the 1/4 sounds a bit more. Also the Advanced diff didn't have the last note as a clickable object so this would also be better for spread.
color=#FF0000no thank you those are pretty intense beats that i believe i should emphasize

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that's it... hope you enjoyed the honor of recieving my first standard mod ever, cyaaaaaa
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Hej! Fick en förfrågan om mod, så här är jag. ^^

Klöverdos

00:02:186 (3,4) - Replace with notes for proper vocal emphasize like you did at 00:05:566 (3,4,5,6) -
00:08:946 (3,4,5) - Weak spacing compared to 00:10:636 (2,3,4) - when they're practically the same.
00:16:129 (5) - Replace with notes for same reason
00:17:608 (4) - Move to x120 y28 to complete this pattern (00:16:552 (1,2,3,4) - )
00:19:721 (6) - Inconsistent spacing to the same vocal sounds in previous part (00:06:200 (6) - )
00:22:045 (2,3,4,5) - Could probably do something more interesting here? (https://puu.sh/v1AjZ/bc74e191bf.jpg)

Also check for blanket mistakes n' stuff like that (00:26:059 (7,1) - for example), cause I saw a couple of them in there.


Advancerat

00:00:284 (1,2) - Current rhythm doesn't fit in cause nothing is really emphasized here. How about http://puu.sh/v1Azq/3a4450abce.jpg ?
00:02:186 (3) - Convert to notes for proper vocal emphasize
00:08:946 (4) - ^
00:10:636 (3) - ^
00:15:707 (3) - ^
00:19:087 (4) - ^
00:22:467 (3) - ^
00:24:158 (3) - ^
00:05:566 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+g for better rhythm
00:12:960 (1) - Replace repeat with note for good vocal rhythm
00:25:636 (3,4,5,1) - Diamond pattern is off
00:26:270 (5) - Missed a clap
00:07:045 (3) - HP bar overlaps on some skins. Including default


stwi's Normalt

00:14:017 (5) - HP bar will probably overlap this on a few skins (tried with WWW's skin and it was quite close https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7681544). idk its probably fine but im triggered.
00:04:721 (1) - ^

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disable widescreen

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00:13:172 (3,4,5,6,1) - try lower these object little they seem placed too high
00:16:341 (3,4) - same here too low but not sure might just point it out
00:24:791 (1) - remove nc since u nc after each 2 downbeats
00:28:383 (1) - same remove nc
00:23:418 - u can remove these unused green lines with 5% audio

Advanced

00:07:045 (3) - this is touching the health bar https://puu.sh/v1D0n/b0a017494f.jpg
00:12:960 (1) - i suggest 1/1 slider here wold fit better

clover dose

00:11:904 (2,4) - try smth like http://puu.sh/v1DqI/95c63ab9fa.jpg
i stacked these 00:11:059 (4,4) -
00:20:777 (5,1) - also can stack

clean map gl!
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my browser crashed when responding again but i applied almost everything and increased density in advanced

why does everyone care about fking hp bar overlapping lol

thanks david and lily
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Hej! Fick en förfrågan om mod, så här är jag. ^^


stwi's Normalt

00:14:017 (5) - HP bar will probably overlap this on a few skins (tried with WWW's skin and it was quite close https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7681544). idk its probably fine but im triggered. its ok it doesnt overlap on default and thats what matters
00:04:721 (1) - ^

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disable widescreen

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00:13:172 (3,4,5,6,1) - try lower these object little they seem placed too high they are good
00:16:341 (3,4) - same here too low but not sure might just point it out its ok
00:24:791 (1) - remove nc since u nc after each 2 downbeats ok
00:28:383 (1) - same remove nc ok
00:23:418 - u can remove these unused green lines with 5% audio ok


clean map gl!


thanks you
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its a guideline on new RC
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