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daniwell-P & La Roux - Ode to Jarby

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SapphireGhost
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SapphireGhost
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, September 18, 2011 at 9:53:15 AM

Artist: daniwell-P & La Roux
Title: Ode to Jarby
Tags: OzzyOzrock Tiger and Bunny Nyan Cat Nyanyanyanyanyanyanya Momone Momo UTAU Cover My Eyes
BPM: 142
Filesize: 6176kb
Play Time: 01:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Delicious (5 stars, 371 notes)
  2. Easy (1.86 stars, 83 notes)
  3. Hard (4.41 stars, 140 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 276 notes)
  5. Normal (3.32 stars, 109 notes)
  6. Ozzy's TaikOde (4.83 stars, 706 notes)
Download: daniwell-P & La Roux - Ode to Jarby
Download: daniwell-P & La Roux - Ode to Jarby (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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MAP 12 / RANK 6

This is fabulous and you know it. Also Jarby, I sincerely apologize for being late.
Bonus Difficulties
Click here for a bonus difficulty by the lovely NotShinta.
Click here for another bonus difficulty in the style of the magnificent RandomJibberish but actually made by me.
Last edited by SapphireGhost , edited 54 times in total.
OzzyOzrock
5,185 posts
Joined August 2010
OzzyOzrock
COOOOOOVER MY EYES
Verdisphena
4,240 posts
Joined June 2010
Verdisphena
Hi, star
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby


THIS IS FABULOUS AND I KNOW IT
NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta
I haven't a shit to give, so have this.

Download: Various Artists - Ode to Jarby (SapphireGhost) [iNiSHINTA'S CAPITAL LETTERS AND SEXUAL APPEAL].osu
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theowest
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6,891 posts
Joined January 2009
theowest
I didn't covered my eyes. x_x
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OzzyOzrock
5,185 posts
Joined August 2010
OzzyOzrock
SOMETHING INSIDE OF ME DIES

Download: Various Artists - Ode to Jarby (SapphireGhost) [Ozzy's TaikOde].osu
RobotoRaccoon
224 posts
Joined December 2010
RobotoRaccoon
What a lovely slider at the end :D
Becausethestupidthingwon'tletmepostunlessIaddlotsofmorewordsinandIactuallywanttostarthismap,ihavetodothis
ziin
2,632 posts
Joined January 2010
ziin
Should storyboard this SG...

http://puu.sh/3UqG

But I doubt you can make it smaller than 4 MB, so whatever.
friendok
127 posts
Joined September 2010
friendok
i just like sappy's maps : D
go go star get it ranked soon xD
Magical Pokie
358 posts
Joined August 2010
Magical Pokie
Love Jarby~
抱~
SPOILER
Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on. More details will follow soon.
OzzyOzrock
5,185 posts
Joined August 2010
OzzyOzrock
[Easy]
00:14:163 (2) - Whistle on this slider?
Wait, it doesn't follow a pattern... does it.

Ok ok, this is moe!.
[Normal]
00:43:951 (3) - why not stack!? Just kidding. But if you stacked it, it'd look the same, so...

00:53:036 (1) - Whistle on head! Wait.. it dowsn.t.t.t.
[Hard]
00:14:163 (1) - Why is not stack (3)?!?

Map moe!!! is !!I@!..1.15
[RJ]
00:35:712 (5) - Being that the approach circle for this blends with the slider blanket, it could be hard to tell whether or not it comes a 1/2 after or a 1/4 after which it more looks like.

but RJ diff moe! RJ moe! >///<
[Ozzy's Taikode]
oh... this diff!!! most moe!!!! this diff.. very moe!!!!!

0 0 i am very fan this diff! ><
[Delicious]
HOYL SCRAP

very kirby mix!!!
01:44:435 (1) - make delicious? slider ugly (LOLOLOLOLOLOLO)
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Overall:
- Your new combos are once again pretty inconsistent, sir.
- The difficulty spread is redundant, even though it's nice to see ENHI(Taikoshit), having a score spread of 300k, 400k, 800k, 5M is stupid. Create an Insane between Delicious and Hard, if you like.

Shiirn's Delicious:
The AR could be lowered by one. I know that this map must be insanely hard to fulfill Jarby's standards of hardness, but still.
01:05:184 - Add note.

TaikOde:
01:48:028 - Storyboard sample Ellie here.

Hard:
Could overall have a few more notes, it's more like a Normal Pwus.

Normal:
8=D

Easy:
01:42:746 (2) - CLOSER TO THE PREVIOUS NOTE
NotShinta
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Joined September 2009
NotShinta
General Earl:
- I suppose the metronome doesn't really fit the intro, so 5712 may be more appropriate in this case.
- OH (point being, SB slightly off)
- Yo, inconsistent break draggage with the first break. I mean, each difficulty has a 1/1 lead in to the break, but that results in different times. I think it'd be nice and natural if they were the same, like 00:36:134.

Christmas Tree:
- Too easy, please make harder diff
- This difficulty does seem a bit clusterfuckish at times, as is easily the problem with superhard things. You seem afraid of coming close to the sides and corners.
00:22:191 (1,2) - Moving this so this is in the centre of the previous circle would be much nicer and less baciktracky, kthx.
00:26:205 (2,3,4) - Yo offcentre if you care
01:18:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - You can totally make this a full circle with just a calculamator. SEE teehee 133711

Insane:
00:15:853 (1) - Sliders with repeats on a 1/4 which doesn't apparently follow anything what are you CDFA

Hard:
00:18:388 - Such a long pause mid-combo on a Hard for a song like this feels a bit forced and odd, so perhaps adding a hitcircle here is an option?
00:58:529 - Once again, I think a hitcircle could work here. Yes, you have to rearrange this pattern, but that's why you were hired, hired.

Normal:
00:49:656 (1,2) - Yes well done we know you can imitate WTF? where's my heart sliders

Easy:
- Cee Lo Green

Not as good as Aha?. I'M SORRY MS. JACKSON. Maybe I'll improve this mod but the map's just too cool for school and totally radical
Katsuri
1,075 posts
Joined February 2011
Katsuri
General

Remove 'La roux' from the tags of Ozzy's TaikOde.
Stop making perfect stuff.

Easy

The tick rate makes the player make a high combo on a easy difficulty, I suggest you to reduce it to 1.

Normal

00:44:163 (4) - Stack this note with (3)?

Hard

Perfect ~

Insane

00:31:487 (10) - New Combo? Look It's a new pattern and this como is going to (18)

Delicious

NO U
Zelos
1,111 posts
Joined May 2010
Zelos
/me floods place with Nutella

Folderrr:
clean here

Please note im running on 5 hours of sleep and not my usual 11 hour sleep of summer vacation.

General:
Shouldn't UTAU be in the artist as well?

Easy:
Nothing wrong here.

Normal:
Also very nice. nothing wrong here.

Hard:
Again nothing wrong here.

Insane:
There is one little overlap near the end of the nyancat part of the song I didnt like but it seemed you cant reallly do anything else.

Delicious Derps:
I could barely read that with the AR o.o
oh and nothing wrong here.

Oh well.
Your map like really has nothing wrong.
Good luck.
OzzyOzrock
5,185 posts
Joined August 2010
OzzyOzrock
GOOD LUCK RANK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
B r e e z e_old
140 posts
Joined January 2010
B r e e z e_old


Jarby's Picture LOL :oYour message is too short
Gonzvlo
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Gonzvlo
[General]
  1. Video: [Delicious] uses a different offset.
  2. Storyboard: I think you're missing the "HAPPY BIRTHDAY JARBY!" part.
  3. 01:44:314 - The ticks sound kinda nice during this part, I suggest to raise volume a bit more.
  4. Oh, just to be sure. Perhaps, add the song title to the thread's title? Nevermind it would be too long.
[Easy]]
  1. Amazing, just a minor suggesiton:
  2. 01:13:318 (1) - Perhaps, make this a bit rounder?
    SPOILER
    416,152,73318,6,0,B|316:20|108:136|104:248|136:348|256:383|376:348|408:248|404:136|196:20|96:152,1,895.999933242799,4|2
[Normal]
  1. 00:43:951 (3,4) - Is this stack intentional? Well, it looks almost the same if you stack it properly, feel free to ignore this.
[Hard]
  1. 00:52:191 (3,4,5) - This part doesn't play well, (4) feels a bit forced and it's a bit hard to hit it accurately. I suggest to remove (4) and then add a repeat to (3), that sounds and plays better imo.
  2. 01:16:275 (3) - I don't like how you mixed 2 different "rhythms?" in one single slider, it sounds/plays a bit weird. Perhaps, use 2 circles instead?
[Ozzy's TaikOde]
  1. 01:28:529 (1) - This spinner-end is not snapped correctly. You would need a another timing section to snap it, I suggest to remove this spinner and leave the blank. (I know it's a very unusual thing for Taiko but this is an usual song so~)
  2. Kiai please?
[Insane]
  1. Oh my god, I don't even have suggestions for this diff. Congratulations, it's been while since something like this happens, fantastic!
[Delicious]
  1. I can't believe that I'm going to say this but... I must suggest to increase "AR" 1 tick, the current AR is affecting the readability of some patterns, consider that please.
  2. 3 unsnapped BUNNIES.
  3. 00:10:360 (6) - Any special reason to stack this with (5)? It would make more sense if you stack it with (7) imo.
  4. 00:35:501 (1,2) - I don't like how this pattern flows, I'm not sure if it actually "flows" tho. Well, You should either flip (2) or stack this circle: 00:36:135 (1) - with (2).
  5. 01:44:419 (1) - Fantastic! Just wondering, would you like to improve the lower loops and define the heart-shape a bit more?
    SPOILER
    72,232,104419,6,0,B|204:208|264:296|200:380|96:368|68:276|160:184|256:184|256:184|280:152|260:144|364:144|380:48|312:4|268:36|256:48|256:48|244:36|200:4|132:48|148:144|252:144|232:152|256:184|256:184|352:184|444:276|416:368|312:380|248:296|308:208|440:232,1,1359.99995946884,2|4
SapphireGhost
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Topic Starter
SapphireGhost
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Responding in blue, because that's what I felt like using.

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]
  1. Video: [Delicious] uses a different offset. Oh my god, how did that happen? Oh well. Fixed!
  2. Storyboard: I think you're missing the "HAPPY BIRTHDAY JARBY!" part.
  3. 01:44:314 - The ticks sound kinda nice during this part, I suggest to raise volume a bit more.
  4. Oh, just to be sure. Perhaps, add the song title to the thread's title? Nevermind it would be too long.
okay ~

[Easy]]
  1. Amazing, just a minor suggesiton:
  2. 01:13:318 (1) - Perhaps, make this a bit rounder? Yes, that looks lovely.
    SPOILER
    416,152,73318,6,0,B|316:20|108:136|104:248|136:348|256:383|376:348|408:248|404:136|196:20|96:152,1,895.999933242799,4|2
[Normal]
  1. 00:43:951 (3,4) - Is this stack intentional? Well, it looks almost the same if you stack it properly, feel free to ignore this.
It is intentional so my blanket works and stuff.

[Hard]
  1. 00:52:191 (3,4,5) - This part doesn't play well, (4) feels a bit forced and it's a bit hard to hit it accurately. I suggest to remove (4) and then add a repeat to (3), that sounds and plays better imo. Indeed it does. Plus now there's some lovely clapping action.
  2. 01:16:275 (3) - I don't like how you mixed 2 different "rhythms?" in one single slider, it sounds/plays a bit weird. Perhaps, use 2 circles instead?
Good idea!

[Ozzy's TaikOde]
  1. 01:28:529 (1) - This spinner-end is not snapped correctly. You would need a another timing section to snap it, I suggest to remove this spinner and leave the blank. (I know it's a very unusual thing for Taiko but this is an usual song so~)
  2. Kiai please?
Will ask Ozzy about these.

[Insane]
  1. Oh my god, I don't even have suggestions for this diff. Congratulations, it's been while since something like this happens, fantastic!
I love you too!

[Delicious]
  1. I can't believe that I'm going to say this but... I must suggest to increase "AR" 1 tick, the current AR is affecting the readability of some patterns, consider that please. Making it horribly unreadable was actually the intent but yes, that's silly, it's up to eight now.
  2. 3 unsnapped BUNNIES. Oh looord, I have been sold.
  3. 00:10:360 (6) - Any special reason to stack this with (5)? It would make more sense if you stack it with (7) imo. Right you are.
  4. 00:35:501 (1,2) - I don't like how this pattern flows, I'm not sure if it actually "flows" tho. Well, You should either flip (2) or stack this circle: 00:36:135 (1) - with (2). I'm actually alright with the way it is now. Talk to me on IRC if this is important.
  5. 01:44:419 (1) - Fantastic! Just wondering, would you like to improve the lower loops and define the heart-shape a bit more? Less than three.
    SPOILER
    72,232,104419,6,0,B|204:208|264:296|200:380|96:368|68:276|160:184|256:184|256:184|280:152|260:144|364:144|380:48|312:4|268:36|256:48|256:48|244:36|200:4|132:48|148:144|252:144|232:152|256:184|256:184|352:184|444:276|416:368|312:380|248:296|308:208|440:232,1,1359.99995946884,2|4

Thank you!
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