1. End - 4Key (5.08 stars, 3606 notes)

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LordTimeWaste wrote:

Just to clarify this, if i say something about 1/2/3/4, i mean the 4 keys you are using for playing (1 = most left key, 4 = most right key).
Anyways, let's go!!!

Generell

Put more variaty in your map, mapping 10 notes stacked is not fun to play neighter considered as rankable. For example: If you map a stream, try to map it so it got nearly equal notes on 1/2/3/4 to make it better to play.
Do not put notes in your map where you can't hear a sound, neighter let go notes where you mapped notes before.
Listen closely while putting in notes and LNs, maybe consider turning the speed on 50% and listen to the parts again to make sure you did not miss something. An example: 01:56:920 (116920|3) This note is not mapped on a sound, which is quite hard to hear while listening on full speed, but on 50%, it is noticable.

Venus

00:00:297 (297|0,297|3,297|2,297|1,611|3,768|2,925|3,1239|3,1553|0,1553|3,1553|2,1867|3,2181|1,2181|2,2181|3,2496|3,2810|0,2810|2,2810|3,2967|2,3124|3,3281|2,3438|1,3438|3,3752|3,4066|0,4066|2,4066|3,4380|3,4694|3,4694|1,4694|2,5009|3) You mapped too much on 4, try to balance this better
00:04:694 (4694|1) Your LN is as long as the previous LNs, you cannot make it shorter just to be able to make a quad after id, that's not allowed
00:32:967 Do not stop using notes randomly, this part is in nothing different then the parts befor, so keep maping these single-notes
00:38:071 In a part like this, the sound on which you placed your stacked notes changes, which is a perfect opportunity for you to bring some variaty in your map. You could basically do something like higher note = placing notes more on the right side, lower note = placing notes more on the left side
00:40:506 You should not place notes where you can't hear a sound for it. On this quad, for example, is no sound that would indicate putting a quad in
01:14:433 (74433|1) If you are listening to the sound this LN should follow, you can hear that it should be only half as long as you mapped it, focus on things like this more

This can also be applied to the rest of your map, too

I whish you good luck and i hope i could help you a bit out with your mapping. Have a good day!

DustMoon wrote:

Hi~ from CanPoint modding queue[mania]
1|2|3|4|

Hard

00:00:297 (297|3) - delete
00:42:862 (42862|2) - delete because these a same drum00:42:862 (42862|3,42862|2,42862|0,43019|0,43019|3,43176|0,43176|3) -
00:43:647 (43647|3) - this LN should end00:43:962 -
00:49:145 (49145|0,49145|3,49171|2,49223|1,49276|0) - change
00:50:558 (50558|2) - change to single note
01:31:553 (91553|0) - move to 2
01:31:553 (91553|0,97365|0,97522|0) - change to one LN
02:08:935 (128935|1) - move to 3
02:36:108 (156108|1) - delete
03:17:338 (197338|3) - move to 3 03:17:260 (197260|1) - move to 4
03:32:653 (212653|1) - move to 1
04:39:249 (279249|1,279249|0,279249|2,279249|3) - change to LN

good luck!

Thanks a lot

Cokiiplay wrote:

hey sorry short mod

Venus

00:02:810 (2810|3,2810|2,2967|1,3124|3,3281|2,3438|3) - consider changing this into an trill
00:04:537 - missing note
00:34:223 (34223|3,34380|2,34537|3,34694|2) - ^^
00:43:988 (43988|3,44001|2,44040|1,44092|3,44119|2) - delete some of these notes
00:44:433 (44433|2,44433|1,44433|0,44433|3) - delete a note same sound
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7657070
00:47:260 (47260|0) - add a not for consistency
00:51:815 - until 01:16:946 - is very weird and inconsistent
i could add a wall of text here sry but a lot of sounds aren't mapped or have weird patterning you should remap some sections

no kds if it didn't help

good luck with your map

CrumpetFiddler wrote:

As requested in Crumpey's mod queue

Hard

Hard(mod)
00:02:967 (2967|2) - simple jack that can easily be avoided
00:29:825 (29825|0) - ^^
00:42:862 (42862|0,42862|3,43019|3,43019|0,43176|3,43176|0) - not the same beats?
00:43:490 (43490|3,43490|2,43490|1,43490|0) - remove a note
00:45:140 (45140|1) - place a note
00:45:925 (45925|1) - remove this
00:48:045 (48045|3) - why is this a single where the same beat after is a quad?
00:48:674 (48674|0) - ^^
00:49:302 (49302|1,49302|3) - same beat but its now a double?
00:51:815 (51815|0) - this slider section can have some notes beside it
01:00:611 (60611|3,60925|0,61239|3,61553|0) - you start mapping a different sound, then stop randomly
01:19:302 (79302|2,79302|0) - different beat to the chord below, probs best to change it
01:27:941 (87941|2) - missing notes on all the blue lines, i cant tell if its intentional to make it easier or not, id think you should add them though
01:36:579 (96579|2) - why is this a single
01:37:051 (97051|1,97129|2) - ^^
01:39:092 (99092|0) - ^^
01:39:564 (99564|0,99642|1) - ^^
01:52:129 (112129|1) - on this ln section, add notes besides the lns where you see fit, its pretty bland
01:55:113 (115113|2) - note here maybe
01:57:626 (117626|0) - move to 3rd col ( 1|2|3|4 )
01:58:883 (118883|0) - ^^
02:04:904 (124904|3,124904|0,125113|3,125113|2,125113|1,125323|2,125323|3,125323|0,125323|1,125532|3,125532|2,125532|0,125742|3,125742|0,125951|0,125951|3,125951|2,125951|1) - why are some triples and others are not?
02:05:742 (125742|0,125742|3) - Unsnapped notes
02:08:935 (128935|2) - note after ln
02:11:187 (131187|0,131187|1,131187|3) - more unsnapped notes
02:11:396 (131396|1,131396|3) - ^^
02:27:941 (147941|3) - make double
02:28:412 (148412|1,149040|1) - ^^
02:29:511 (149511|0,149511|2,149668|2,149668|0,149825|0,149825|2) - move these around a bit
02:33:752 (153752|1,153752|3,153752|0,153752|2,153988|3,153988|2,153988|1,153988|0) - remove a note from each of these, Perhaps make the second part go off into an Ln
02:39:249 (159249|0,159249|3,159249|1) - Sound gets softer here, replace triple with a double or a single
02:39:799 (159799|1) - make a double
02:41:448 (161448|1,161448|0,161448|2,161448|3) - make a single
02:50:558 (170558|0,170558|3,170558|1) - ^^
03:13:726 (193726|2) - missed a note
03:17:574 (197574|3) - put notes besides these lns in this section, its pretty boring here
03:43:962 (223962|0,223962|1,223962|2) - remove a note
04:03:752 (243752|3) - remove this
04:04:694 (244694|1,244694|3,244694|0) - Ln not triple
04:12:391 (252391|3) - note here
04:13:412 (253412|1) - ^^
04:14:040 (254040|2) - ^^
04:19:302 (259302|1,259302|3,259302|0) - make a double
04:19:537 (259537|0) - note here
04:19:694 (259694|3) - ^^
04:19:773 (259773|0,259930|2,259930|1) - remove 2 notes on ln, and extend the ln to where it should go (cough here 04:20:087 (260087|0) - )
04:21:265 (261265|1) - note here somewhere
04:21:736 (261736|3) - remove
04:22:443 (262443|1) - add notes at end of ln
04:23:229 (263229|1,263386|3,263386|2) - same deal as before remove notes on ln and extend it
04:23:857 (263857|1,263857|0,263857|3,263857|2) - delete 3 notes
04:24:721 (264721|2) - add note
04:25:349 (265349|2) - (maybe add a note)
04:26:370 (266370|1) - notes at the end of ln
04:27:312 (267312|0,267312|1) - make a triple
04:27:626 (267626|3) - make a double
04:27:862 (267862|2) - missed a note
04:28:098 (268098|3,268098|0,268098|1,268098|2) - this shouldnt be a quad if the note below is a chord
04:28:098 (268098|1,268098|0,268098|3,268098|2) - again, the section after the quads has aounds there yet you havent mapped anything?
04:29:040 (269040|0,269040|3,269197|3,269197|0,269197|1,269354|0,269354|3,269354|1,269354|2) - same beat yet doubles triples and quads?
04:29:825 (269825|0) - extend ln again
04:31:318 (271318|2) - missed a note
04:32:496 (272496|1) - 2 notes after this ln
04:33:516 (273516|1,274145|1) - add notes here
04:34:773 (274773|0,275401|0) - and here
04:36:422 (276422|1,276422|3) - possibly another ln after for the echo-like effect

I suggest someone else should also look at hard because theres probably some mistakes i didnt catch, all in all solid map

Etsu wrote:

could make diff NM? o:

DoNotMess wrote:

Hi, m4m as requested

Venus
00:01:553 (1553|0) - if u start ln here maybe u should 00:00:297 (297|3) - start from here because the instrument is also here
00:00:297 (297|3,1553|2,2181|2,2810|2) - (and so on) i would recommend 1 note because it's the same sound with 00:01:867 (1867|1,2496|2,2967|1) - but 00:05:323 (5323|0,5323|2) - this one is ok because it's different from the rest
00:06:579 (6579|0,9092|0,11605|2,12862|3,14119|3,17888|0) - ^
00:22:914 (22914|2) - ^
00:25:427 - add 3 for ^
i wouldnt mention the rest
00:43:647 - i think the sound here is 1/16 and u cant nerf the sound into 1/12, u can nerf the sound into 1/8 instead
00:43:844 - u should map the 1/8 here too, dont stop midway because this is the hardest diff
00:46:789 - add something for kick
00:46:946 - add something for kick
00:47:260 - the piano start here 00:47:103 - should start it from here
00:47:705 (47705|0,47705|3) - should be on the white line
00:47:731 (47731|2,47783|1,47810|0) - the sound is 1/6 in this section
00:47:862 (47862|3,47862|2) - should be on the red line
00:51:815 - u can map the audible percussion as 2 instead of putting them all as 2
01:11:291 - why stop here
01:22:679 - missing note
01:22:836 (82836|2) - ghost
01:31:003 - 01:31:318 - there are sound here also kick in the first
01:34:773 - kick here
01:36:108 - clap here
01:37:286 - kick here
01:39:799 -
01:40:506 - why not 4 notes
01:52:129 - kiai looks like 3* maps...this supposed to be 5*
02:41:134 - maybe 2 notes are enough because only piano
02:48:988 (168988|1) - move to 1 because it's different pitch from the rest
03:17:574 - again, looks like maps for 2* now...
04:12:391 - missing kick
04:18:045 - missing kick

i think this map needs more restructuring and the spread throughout the map is not really good but good ln idea, goodluck!

Aiseca wrote:

Can I GD 6k of this map ?

CAuse your song is good.

Moku_Hazushi wrote:

Hey there, you asked me for a mod and dont worry its coming im working on it :p
But i was wondering, is it possible to make an insane+ GD ? (something around 4.7*) the song is soooo cool <3

See ya soon for the mod owo)/

Moku_Hazushi wrote:

Legend is 0|1|2|3

Easy

00:10:977 - Add a note here to match with the organ (i'd create it at 2 and move 00:11:605 (11605|2) at 1)

00:10:349 (10349|0) - I'd add a double here to match with the piano, but dont add anything if it raises the difficulty too much

00:32:967 (32967|0,33595|1,34223|2,34852|3) - Make it from right to left because you did the same left to right just before

00:42:548 (42548|1,42705|2,42862|3) - What about the following pattern instead, it doesn't increase the difficulty and it adds some changes since you dont use this slider+note much in this diff



00:49:930 (49930|3,50244|2,50558|1) - Go for 0,1,2 to have a small jump for 00:49:616 (49616|2,49930|3) making it less monotonous

01:16:946 (76946|1,77574|2,78202|3,78831|2,79459|1,80715|2) - The same but mostly from right to left, before you insisted a lot with patterns going from left to right

01:38:935 (98935|1,99092|0,99564|1,99564|2) - This is 1 red tick late, it should start at 01:38:778 like the others before

01:45:846 (105846|1,106160|2,106475|3,106789|2) - The stairs are too monotonous, try making something else by moving 01:45:846 (105846|1) to 2

02:10:977 (130977|1,131213|2,131448|3,131605|2,131920|1,132234|0,132548|3,132548|1) - Really good kiai ending >w<)b

What i would do to keep those ln entertaining :

03:28:883 (208883|1) - At 2
03:30:140 (210140|3) - At 1
03:31:396 (211396|3) - At 3

Here is why, at 03:27:626 (207626|0) we are on the left, organ play a normal pitched note,
03:28:883 (208883|2) organ play a higher pitched note, we're moving to the right,
03:30:140 (210140|1) Again low pitched note, returning to the left,
03:31:396 (211396|3) - High pitched note, to the right

04:20:401 (260401|0) - At 3 (i think you have a tendency to often start pattern on the left xD)

Good difficulty, the kiai time are well done (especially the last one), good balance between easy part and more tricky part o3o

Etsu's Normal

00:32:967 (32967|1) - At 3, because last stairs was mostly left-oriented

00:38:935 (38935|3) - I dont know what musical event you tried to match with here, the introduction in really slow with accentuation on 1 and 1/2 of each measure so i think it more appropriate to start this ln at 00:39:249

01:11:605 (71605|3) - I would go for the following pattern here, you already used such pattern before (at 00:50:244 (50244|2) ) and i think it appropriate for the transition



01:21:972 - I would put a double note here to match with the piano and add variation

01:24:485 - Same comment as above, but of course dont feel like doing it if it increases the difficulty too much

01:26:998 - Same comment

03:11:291 (191291|0,191605|1) - I would switch 0 at 1 and 1 at 0

04:39:249 (279249|0) - Why not an ln, i was so frustrated when i played it T^T

As you can see, nothing much to say for the end, the kiais were great, AND THOSE SINGLE JACKS GIMMICK ARE SO AMAZING, maybe other modders will find something to criticize, but for me its really good >w<)b

I'll edit this post later on to add the modding for the insane and expert difficulties, but i already post this so you can see and maybe fix what is wrong ;3

See ya ~