1. Chocological (4.6 stars, 1156 notes)

Viperial wrote:

Note: Everything in my mod is probably going to be bs, so if you reject everything I understand.

[General]
I think the sound in the beginning isn't loud enough, I had to turn up my volume to be able to hear it, compared to after the second BPM change. I'm aware of this and will eventually make volume changes x)
The Bitrate is fine as far as I'm concerned.
AR 9.5 is too fast, It should be AR 9.3 at most imo. Will check more opinions on this
Your OD is too low, at 4.5* the least should be 7 at most (least, most lel ) will fix
I'm not sure about the HP, but I think it should be at 6. I'm likely to be wrong on that though. song gets pretty techy/streamy idk I want a higher HP yet, plus the slow sections with mods such as HR will be hard to pass.
[Chocological]
I think the slider shapes should be the same for the same rhythm, such as 00:00:119 (1,3) - they are the same shape but placed differently, idk if that's okay or not but I think you should only have one style of slider for a rhythm (Ex you can have a slider with a red anchor, but it looks better if the red anchor is is in the same place, instead of random areas in a slider. just my opinion though removed all red points in this section
00:02:846 (5) - This slider has a red anchor even though the other sliders don't, why is that? removed
00:04:664 (2) - There isn't a noticeable sound here, but you but a circle anyway. is this section supposed to be overmapped? (You could make the last circle a slider I think and that would work) remapped
00:15:573 (4) - Same as above, no noticeable sound. this does have a sound, plus it's there for consistency
00:17:391 (2) - There is a small sound here but no circle? or maybe I deleted it earlier my bad. idk there's a circle for me lol
00:21:938 (1) - A lot of different slider shapes here, i'm not sure why but I guess that's your style. yep
00:29:210 (1,2) - This slider should start on the blue tick after the circle, as that's when the 1/4 beats start. feels too awkward rhythmically
00:29:665 (3) - That slider is confusing, it should only be 3 1/12 long, and starting on the blue tick. it is on a blue tick O_o
00:30:195 (4) - Same as before, should be 3 1/12 long (not 4, 2 reverses) and Theres a sound on the white tick before the slider. shifted all of these 1/6 further after listening at 50%
00:31:256 (1) - should be one reverse long, and start on 00:31:180 (1) - , and theres a sound on the white tick. idgi
00:32:013 (3) - It doesn't sound like it should be reversed at all, and just end on 00:32:165 (3) - (2 1/6 notes long) it needs to, for conistency
00:33:074 (1) - Should start on the blue tick before, should only be 3 notes long (1 reverse) and theres a note at the white tick before the slider. too tiny to make a difference I think
00:33:074 (1) - Should only be 2 notes long (ends on the red tick) (no reverse) and theres a note at the white tick before the slider. nah this is part of a pattern
00:34:778 (1) - Same as above ^
00:35:688 (3) - Should be 1/4 I think, without a reverse (This stuff is getting complicated maybe I'm getting this all wrong ) don't think so but I did shift this one like i shifted the others
00:36:028 (4,5) - There should be sounds here (white tick and blue) but I don't see any notes i don't hear anything on those
00:37:278 (4) - Isn't the end of this slider supposed to be the start of a slider like ^^ if you mean ctrl-g, i think it sortof breaks the flow
00:38:528 (1) - At the blue tick before this there is a sound, but it isn't mapped? I'm in 38 seconds and this is more of a mod then I did before! (I mean I only did 2 mods) yes, but it's barely audible, here i'm paying more attention to the bigger sounds
00:38:756 (2) - Isn't this the start of a huge note? idk, seems fine tho lol
00:40:915 (4) - Theres a visible sound at the white tick of this but I guess you aren't emphasizing that sound. correct, there are some instances where not every sound has to be clickable, this is more sort of pattterning
00:43:756 (1) - same like ^^ but its on a blue tick ^
00:45:801 (2) - ^^ ^
00:49:210 (1) - Why is there a spinner here? Theres no change in the Rhythm, just a new one. is the spinner supposed to be an introduction? exactly, plus it supports the growing woosh sound
00:53:642 (5) - ???? Weird slider shape :L those are like, my FAVORITE sliders!!
01:08:983 (4,5) - There isn't a main sound/chorus here, but its mapped anyway. is it emphasizing the background beat?? the xylophone(?) sounds are what this is mapped to, so yeah
01:13:642 (8) - I think there should be an NC (New Combo) Here agreed!
01:15:460 (5) - ????? Weird Slider Shape :)
01:15:915 (7) - There isn't a noticeable sound here. ah there is, the xylophone .. thingy,
01:20:915 (2) - I think it should start on a white tick, not end on one. doesn't match the drums if I do that tho :3

I got to go rn but if you see anything that might improve the map please comment about it then.

Viperial wrote:

okay back! imma try to continue whats left even though you denied everything and didn't give me kudosu :L
oh, one more thing after listening to the song again:
01:03:415 (7) - I think the spacing should be greater since it ends on a Higher pitched note. I like the spacing as it is, making it bigger would make it a little difficult to hit while playing
I was talking about this with the slider, not making it start on the top and going down.

01:28:642 (3) - Isn't this supposed to be reversing like the last one? (This problem is repeating, maybe its the reversing slider?) nah
01:31:028 (1) - Is a slider when 01:20:119 (1) - and 01:23:756 (1) - isn't, why is that? the one at 1:20 introduces the section so I think a single circle works best. the other two are sliders because there's usually a sound at the tails of them
02:21:824 (1) - Why the Slider velo changes? If you are changing 02:22:392 (2) - back to normal, it has to be an NC also afaik. seemed appropriate at the time lol, wanted to emphasize the vocals

Well I guess thats the end of it, Nice map even though I disagree with some things.

Bewww wrote:

Hi o/
General:
Try avoid overlapping so much pls. and focuse on distance between some objects in patterns. it could be just my point, but it seems ugly sometimes.
and change the rhythm it was a hard work, but try avoid us 1.
00:00:119 (1,2,3) - it what i start to talk about. + think about angles. Think about something like this http://puu.sh/vaLLJ/f017826250.jpg remapped everything in this section according to DS
00:02:391 (4,4) - you can make accent here with high spacing between 2 patterns of NC. it means you could place sliders after those notes a bit far. remapped everything in this section according to DS
00:11:028 (1,2,3,4) - pls try place it in another way seems prety ugly, as i said early thing about angles too, same as about curve. try experiment this one of ways you can make it http://puu.sh/vaM95/98aedaa5ea.jpg remapped everything in this section according to DS
00:16:028 (4) - same as early make accent here with high spacing. remapped everything in this section according to DS
00:22:392 (2) - x:216 y:252 and move sslider and on 1 point left. done
00:23:301 (1,2) - NC . try dont crumple objects in 1 place , if it not idea of your map or it dont follow the music move it like this. it save flow and make it uch beatiful for eyes. http://puu.sh/vaMuF/4b42e90c65.jpg moved slider
00:24:551 (2) - dont place it so close to prev sldier, seems ugly. mb try this x:292 y:352 done
00:25:119 (3) - rotate on 15(playfield centre, clockwise). done
00:25:460 (4) - x:384 y:288 done
00:28:188 (7,8) - it should be 1 slider without note. music dont change, so its weired. done
00:28:756 (9) - x:200 y:264 and make it parallel to 00:28:188 (7) - http://puu.sh/vaMZs/0c9f043c34.jpg yeah some reason i kept having a hard time making it parallel lol
00:29:210 (1,2,3,4,5) - do same spacing or accent part be spacing between reverse+slider and next same parts http://puu.sh/vaN7i/f8f1b19c7a.jpg , done
00:29:324 (2,3,4,5) - this rhythm weird.; this is how it should be with your objects http://puu.sh/vaNrx/e9340f87b4.jpg
This is how i hear this part http://puu.sh/vaNz0/e2604f0ef3.jpg nah this I went over with in detail w/ another modder and it is indeed this rhythm
00:30:688 (5,1,2) - pls us angles or different curve to make it beatiful. its not bad to copy -paste and rotate same parts. I wanna keep this simple
00:43:983 (2,4) - as i said early check overlapping oh oops thought i fixed that
00:53:301 (3,4) - next poin is us a same distance between objects, like this http://puu.sh/vaNS4/2acb33e832.jpg whoops thought I corrected all of those
00:53:983 (6,7,8) - - ^ http://puu.sh/vaNWK/96342b4d69.jpg
01:20:915 (2) - slider should start here 01:21:028 - nah it's right as it is
02:19:665 (7,8,9,1) - its seems and plays weird pls dont do spacing streams as a triplet triangles between slider and us same spacing on each stream, or us spacing on each patterns not only here, do it at all parts ,but make a angles , flow and spacing same( 02:26:938 (7,8,9) - seems atleast good. And this is not good 02:28:756 (3,4,5) - cause not same triangles triplet) fixed the order and made spacing between all of these the same
02:26:938 (7,8,9,1) - same^ done
03:47:847 (4,8) - pls check all sliders like this, different curve make it ugly 8 should be curve in same way as 4. fixed

I stop to focuse on each mistake cause they alll the same: overlapping, angles, spacing between object etc. And search for another problems

04:43:756 (1,2,3,4) - angles and distance between 1 and 3, 2 and 4 shoudld be same, if u curve 3 and 4 pls just copy past 4 from 3 and rotate, so they will be seems perfectly. fixed the curves

05:05:460 (1) - this overlappign is not bad and seem pretty n1 thx ^^
Afterwords
Not bad, rhythm is wrong some times or weird, but overall pretty good. Fix spacing and angles between paterns(+ overlapping and slider curve). and it will be pretty n1 to play.

1. 00:40:915 (4) - Circle on very quiet sound whereas the next white tick (right next to it) has a very strong sound.
2. 01:08:301 (1) - Slider start on no sound? Maybe extend the slider so that it starts on a blue tick (01:08:188 (6) ) and ends on the tick it already ends on.
3. 01:16:938 (3,4,5) - Rearrange these 3 so that there's better flow? Like for example:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:53:642 (4) - Slider starts and ends on a blue tick but the main sound is played on the white tick right between both of the blue ticks. Feels too early
5. 02:57:278 (1) - same^
6. 04:53:415 (4) - Kind of weird but, when playing, it feels like there needs to be a hitcircle after this so that there are 3. Keeps the rhythm the same, like here:
   04:51:483 (3,4,5)
7. 05:31:028 (1,2) - Make spacing a bit smaller so that it hints 1/4 gap
8. Same^ with these> 05:32:392 (1,2) | 05:33:755 (1,2)

LimePixel wrote:

Hi
NM request from queue

Chocological

1. 00:40:915 (4) - Circle on very quiet sound whereas the next white tick (right next to it) has a very strong sound. yes, this is because I'm mapping to instruments not drums
2. 01:08:301 (1) - Slider start on no sound? Maybe extend the slider so that it starts on a blue tick (01:08:188 (6) ) and ends on the tick it already ends on. good point, fixed this
3. 01:16:938 (3,4,5) - Rearrange these 3 so that there's better flow? Like for example: eh, I like the idea but I think i'll stick with this flow for now. i'll see if it comes up again tho
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:53:642 (4) - Slider starts and ends on a blue tick but the main sound is played on the white tick right between both of the blue ticks. Feels too early not sure what you mean lol, this directly corresponds to the music
5. 02:57:278 (1) - same^ same as above
6. 04:53:415 (4) - Kind of weird but, when playing, it feels like there needs to be a hitcircle after this so that there are 3. Keeps the rhythm the same, like here:
   04:51:483 (3,4,5) I think this is fine, there's a slightly different sound here which is what I mapped that to
7. 05:31:028 (1,2) - Make spacing a bit smaller so that it hints 1/4 gap fixed
8. Same^ with these> 05:32:392 (1,2) | 05:33:755 (1,2)

Hope this helps. Feel free to ignore if it isn't helpful (Had great fun while playing)

kookoo11 wrote:

from my nm q

onlydiff,needsboxthocuzitshugeee

00:00:119 (1,2) - crooked blanket fixed
00:02:846 (1) - use the same slider as 00:01:482 (3) - , it's also good for blanketing notes like 00:02:391 (4) - done
00:14:664 (2,3) - i don't think this is stacked properly fixed
00:29:438 (2,3,4,5) - ds isn't consistent changed up a little
00:33:074 (1,2) - bad blanket looks fine
00:45:460 (1,4) - should be same done
00:49:210 (1) - spinner has no purpose especially when you mapped the previous passage no, it's introducing the pattern following it,
and there's a sound it is emphasizing
00:51:483 (3,6) - bad stacking, not perfectly stacked don't see anything wrong here? O_o
00:56:938 (3,2) - should be similar to 00:56:028 (9,10) - , it's off by quite a margin not sure how I missed that lol
00:58:301 (1,2,3,4,5) - ds not consistent this stream has growing ds
01:06:028 (3,6) - bad blanket i barely see anything wrong with it
01:10:347 (8,10) - blanket is off again fixed
01:13:074 (3,4,5) - keep this part of the stream's ds consistent fixed
01:17:278 (6) - lol slider uh...
01:19:665 (1,2,3) - bad ds not really
01:30:915 (5,1) - wtf stack lol no, done on purpose, and this is a pattern throughout this section
01:35:915 (3) - either nc this or remove the sv change, i recommend removing it because nc'ing this would be ridiculous or I could just put nc on the next slider?
01:38:188 (8,1) - still not stacked properly, yes the 1 is also not perfectly stacked I think you mean 01:38:188 (5) - should be stacked,
if so I fixed. I don't see what's wrong on 1 neither would it matter playwise as it is very minute observation
01:42:733 (2) - sv change I realize that, that's on purpose
01:46:369 (2) - ^^ pretty sure there's more same as above
01:50:801 (6,2) - overlap fixed
01:51:710 (3,4,5) - move this away from 01:51:369 (2) - because it's 3/4 beat gap nah, I like these stacked
01:53:188 (2,4) - move 2 below 4's head or just move it in a different area in general fixed overlap
02:00:688 (2,4) - blanket a little off what do these selections have to do with blankets?
02:05:347 (7,2) - ^^ tiny but w/e
02:07:733 (2) - move this either right or top of 02:06:938 (7) - 's head moved
02:14:210 (7,1) - b l a n k e t fixed
02:18:188 (10,1) - why is there suddenly a large gap here? again, growing ds emphasis
02:19:097 (5) - move this a little away from 02:18:528 (2) - done
02:19:665 (7) - ^^ away from 02:19:097 (5) -, also fix blanket with 02:20:006 (1) - this would require restructuring my entire placement and blankets here which i'd rather not do just to fix a pixel overlap.
02:24:210 (3,4) - badblanket fixed
02:26:938 (7,1) - ^^^^^^^^^^ k
02:37:278 (6) - lul
02:37:619 (7,1) - touching fixed
02:40:801 (5,7) - wayyy too close moved it out a little
02:54:551 (1) - k e k ?
02:57:165 (7,1) - why ds change again patterns, happens to all sliders like this
02:59:665 (3,4) - make it a straight line instead of crooked it's already straight
03:05:119 (6) - blanket ifyousayso
03:32:847 (1,4) - sliders are different makes no difference
04:44:665 - passage starting here has many sv changes, consider nc'ing them no, because then there'd be way too many NC's and I want to reduce that, plus what good does NC'ing do when sv already puts enough emphasis on the sliders
03:48:301 (5) - nc better if I keep these every other beat
03:51:938 (4) - nc this especially doesn't make sense to me
03:52:392 (6,1) - stack fixed
03:55:574 (5) - nc nope
04:15:347 (4,2) - stack better oh ok
04:51:824 (6) - at least make these sliders same because they seem all different lengths same as what? that's the point. the only thing different about them is their shape. they all have same sv.
04:53:301 (3,4) - make the circles in line with 04:53:074 (2) - looks fine
04:56:028 (6,7,8,1) - ds feels off, nvm ds is off, also try making it either noticeably curved or straight, not a tiny curve fixed ds. where do you see a "tiny curve"? This is a normal wavy slider.
05:03:301 (3,4,5) - move this down a little so players can see the circle of 05:03:642 (1) - fully moved
05:05:119 (7,8,9) - ^^, or just make these sections into quads with consistent ds i think this is fine since the player is probably used to this pattern by now
05:09:665 (3,1) - BLANKET ok?
05:11:710 (5,4) - ugly overlap fixed
05:16:028 (3) - should be nc because you nc 05:17:392 (1) - and make sure to nc 05:18:755 (3) - , and then 05:22:846 (1,2,1,2,3) - is different than the ones before with nc?? either nc every 2 or keep them all consistent Or I could just remove 05:24:210 (1) - NC and there you go, consistency
05:36:483 (1) - should be way louder was because I couldn't find a good sound to put on this note, but finally found a suitable one so fixed