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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, April 2, 2017 at 1:11:44 PM

Artist: Porter Robinson
Title: Goodbye To A World
Tags: avanna worlds Indie Pop synthpop edm vocaloid chromoxx
BPM: 128
Filesize: 12919kb
Play Time: 05:00
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#89 Mapset / Ranked #15
Porter Robinson - Goodbye To a World

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trying a new style :d

Pending on March 11, 2017
Image Bubbled on March 14, 2017 by OzzyOzrock
Image Bubble Popped on March 17, 2017 by Xinely
Image Bubbled on March 17, 2017 by Sc4v4ng3r
Image Bubble Popped on March 18, 2017 by Sc4v4ng3r
Image Bubbled on March 18, 2017 by OzzyOzrock
Image Bubbled on March 22, 2017 by Sc4v4ng3r
Image Approved on April 2, 2017 by - Magic Bomb -


Image Divergence : By Chromoxx
Image Farewell : By Ascendance
Image Hitsounds : By pkk
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M4M as requested.


General
  • Nice song
  • Looks like soft-slidertick3 isn't used cause in that one section that you used custom samples 3, you had no slider ticks. Remove it.


Farewell
  • The calm parts in the beginning are done so well that I really can't say anything about it, good job.
  • 01:10:339 (1,2,3) - The previous bunch of platewalks were fine, but because of the platewalks the distance here looked quite ambiguous for me. Since the song is louder here I would increase the distance to make the distance more clearer.
  • 01:19:402 (3) - Pretty sure you didn't make a dash in the previous part, and even if you did it feels weird to place it here cause this sound is basically a repetition from the previous sounds, just that it is louder. Reduce the distance here, it doesn't represent anything special to this tick(which doesn't exist anyway).
  • 01:25:027 (3) - Here too. If you want to make dashes, you can try to have them in all the last sound of the repetition(so for example 01:15:652 (3) - , 01:16:589 (3) - and etc., my english is limited) so that it remains consistent.(But if you want to do that you should only do it from 01:15:027 - until the section ends cause the song is a lot more louder) Otherwise just remove the dash.
  • 01:32:527 (3) - 01:33:464 (3) - Here as well. Just keep the dashes if you did add the dashes in the other similar sounds appropriately, otherwise remove them.
  • 01:41:589 (2) - I find it a little difficult to catch this by solely walking, and it seems like that was your intention here. Would try to reduce the distance slightly.
  • 02:53:464 (2) - 6.84x of hyperdash distance is 2x more than the previous hyperdash at 02:45:964 (2) - ; they are similar in strength and all, so I think they should be having a similar distance of hyper or something. Or rather, 6.84x of hyper is quite a far distance actually; you don't use this screenjumpy-ish distance of hyper until the kiai, so using it here feels quite off. Long story short I would reduce it anyway. i suck at explaining
  • 03:01:902 (1) - Both of the previous similar notes didn't require a dash(at 02:46:902 (1) - and 02:54:402 (1) - ), so having a dash here feels really off. Even if it wasn't intended, this distance is difficult to execute by just walking alone. Reduce the distance.
  • 03:03:777 (3) - Looks like you missed a NC here. And also the above point applies here as well, so reduce the distance here.
  • 03:18:777 (1) - The other similar notes afterwards all have dashes(for example, 03:22:527 (1) - ), so why not here? Add a dash.
  • I do like how you used the horizontal sliders in the kiai, but however they seem quite excessive tbh. I'll try to address my concerns down there.
  • 03:46:902 (3) - As cool as the concept might be, the slider will produce some... let's say 'weird' dashes in the middle. It does seem like it is walkable throughout the whole thing, and it is(I only got it 1 time), but however most of the time you will need to dash almost right before you catch the fruit, so the chance of not being able to reach the next fruit or just missing the first fruit is very high. I would try to make the slider slightly more vertical so that it is fully walkable. I wouldn't recommend you to make the current slider shape even more horizontal as it might just become an edge dash.
  • 03:50:652 (1) - Then this one is even more harder, as you need to be dashing right to the other direction after a hyper at 03:50:339 (4) - as soon as you catch it to catch the second fruit, which is only usually reserved for overdose plays. Hell, this doesn't even look like it is targeted at overdose players so this feels off. Again, like above, I will try to make this more vertical(note that it's not slightly but just more) so that you can easily walk to all the fruits. Also applies to notes like 03:51:589 (2) - and 04:11:277 (1) - and etc. where their previous note is a hyper, so if you do decide to apply my way, please do it for them as well.
  • Of course, if you do have a way to clear up/make the sliders more simpler to play while keeping the dashes, then go ahead. I just felt like the dashes between sliders were quite weird to play around with.
  • 04:18:777 (1) - 04:20:652 (1) - 04:22:527 (1) - 04:24:402 (1) - 04:26:277 (1) - They sound really weird considering there's only the kick in the downbeat, like, they sound reallllllllly off to me. I would remove the whistle on the head of these sliders.
  • 05:18:717 (1) - While this is simple and good enough, I feel like you could have done more here. Clearly you have been emphasizing on that sole sound, so not exactly following here defeats the purpose of the previous notes. Don't worry about the sounds not being 'exactly snapped', they are indeed very closely snapped to 1/6 - just try to make sharp curves using your red nodes on those sounds would be nice(so for example you could try to do a sharp curve at 05:19:264 - then followed by another at 05:19:576 - , etc etc).

Otherwise though, nice song and map. Maybe call me back after few more mods.(please actually get like at least 2 mods not 1)
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M4M as requested.


General
  • Nice song
  • Looks like soft-slidertick3 isn't used cause in that one section that you used custom samples 3, you had no slider ticks. Remove it.


Farewell
  • The calm parts in the beginning are done so well that I really can't say anything about it, good job. <3
  • 01:10:339 (1,2,3) - The previous bunch of platewalks were fine, but because of the platewalks the distance here looked quite ambiguous for me. Since the song is louder here I would increase the distance to make the distance more clearer. Yep, I've moved 01:10:652 (2) - over a bit.
  • 01:19:402 (3) - Pretty sure you didn't make a dash in the previous part, and even if you did it feels weird to place it here cause this sound is basically a repetition from the previous sounds, just that it is louder. Reduce the distance here, it doesn't represent anything special to this tick(which doesn't exist anyway). Instead, I moved 01:19:089 (2) - to be a bit more equalized. 3 needs to stay there to maintain the hdash.
  • 01:25:027 (3) - Here too. If you want to make dashes, you can try to have them in all the last sound of the repetition(so for example 01:15:652 (3) - , 01:16:589 (3) - and etc., my english is limited) so that it remains consistent.(But if you want to do that you should only do it from 01:15:027 - until the section ends cause the song is a lot more louder) Otherwise just remove the dash. The entire section is meant to be "tap-dashed" to the rhythm of the beats, but yeah I made distances consistent throughout, while still gradually building to the music.
  • 01:32:527 (3) - 01:33:464 (3) - Here as well. Just keep the dashes if you did add the dashes in the other similar sounds appropriately, otherwise remove them. Played around with distances
  • 01:41:589 (2) - I find it a little difficult to catch this by solely walking, and it seems like that was your intention here. Would try to reduce the distance slightly. Reduced
  • 02:53:464 (2) - 6.84x of hyperdash distance is 2x more than the previous hyperdash at 02:45:964 (2) - ; they are similar in strength and all, so I think they should be having a similar distance of hyper or something. Or rather, 6.84x of hyper is quite a far distance actually; you don't use this screenjumpy-ish distance of hyper until the kiai, so using it here feels quite off. Long story short I would reduce it anyway. i suck at explaining Yep, reduced by half the screen lul
  • 03:01:902 (1) - Both of the previous similar notes didn't require a dash(at 02:46:902 (1) - and 02:54:402 (1) - ), so having a dash here feels really off. Even if it wasn't intended, this distance is difficult to execute by just walking alone. Reduce the distance. Done
  • 03:03:777 (3) - Looks like you missed a NC here. And also the above point applies here as well, so reduce the distance here. Fixed both.
  • 03:18:777 (1) - The other similar notes afterwards all have dashes(for example, 03:22:527 (1) - ), so why not here? Add a dash. Sure
  • I do like how you used the horizontal sliders in the kiai, but however they seem quite excessive tbh. I'll try to address my concerns down there.
  • 03:46:902 (3) - As cool as the concept might be, the slider will produce some... let's say 'weird' dashes in the middle. It does seem like it is walkable throughout the whole thing, and it is(I only got it 1 time), but however most of the time you will need to dash almost right before you catch the fruit, so the chance of not being able to reach the next fruit or just missing the first fruit is very high. I would try to make the slider slightly more vertical so that it is fully walkable. I wouldn't recommend you to make the current slider shape even more horizontal as it might just become an edge dash. I made it curved to significantly weaken the amount of distance you have to move in between the repeats. Hopefully this is better!
  • 03:50:652 (1) - Then this one is even more harder, as you need to be dashing right to the other direction after a hyper at 03:50:339 (4) - as soon as you catch it to catch the second fruit, which is only usually reserved for overdose plays. Hell, this doesn't even look like it is targeted at overdose players so this feels off. Again, like above, I will try to make this more vertical(note that it's not slightly but just more) so that you can easily walk to all the fruits. Also applies to notes like 03:51:589 (2) - and 04:11:277 (1) - and etc. where their previous note is a hyper, so if you do decide to apply my way, please do it for them as well. I curved a lot of stuff.
  • Of course, if you do have a way to clear up/make the sliders more simpler to play while keeping the dashes, then go ahead. I just felt like the dashes between sliders were quite weird to play around with.
  • 04:18:777 (1) - 04:20:652 (1) - 04:22:527 (1) - 04:24:402 (1) - 04:26:277 (1) - They sound really weird considering there's only the kick in the downbeat, like, they sound reallllllllly off to me. I would remove the whistle on the head of these sliders. I think they fit quite well to be honest. If there's a way where we can come to a compromise about them then feel free to let me know, I'd like to keep them if I can.
  • 05:18:717 (1) - While this is simple and good enough, I feel like you could have done more here. Clearly you have been emphasizing on that sole sound, so not exactly following here defeats the purpose of the previous notes. Don't worry about the sounds not being 'exactly snapped', they are indeed very closely snapped to 1/6 - just try to make sharp curves using your red nodes on those sounds would be nice(so for example you could try to do a sharp curve at 05:19:264 - then followed by another at 05:19:576 - , etc etc). Not exactly a slider artist but I did my best!

Otherwise though, nice song and map. Maybe call me back after few more mods.(please actually get like at least 2 mods not 1)


Edit (March 13, 2017): I got some opinions from tasuke912 and Setomi but on my new pc I don't have logs saved so unfortunately I can't post them here. The final slider was changed again (zzz) and a couple slider patterns in the middle were changed so the distances are equalized.
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I am an English idiot

hope you don't mind :p


01:00:027 - 01:10:027 - I try to walk in this time . May be considered only in the third beat when dash. Like 01: 15: 027 (1,2,3,1) - but change hyperdash to dash. But this may make map seem a bit monotonous... just an idea :?

01:44:089 (3) - I tried to rotate the slider to the left https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7559860 feel more fit rhythm

03:15:027 - 03:36:120 - Although I think this part is specially made like this, but for me it sounds still not used to :o

edit: ctb diff :!:
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Summary: A few suggestions were applied.

IRC LOG
2017-03-14 00:43 magnomizer: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1240449 Porter Robinson - Goodbye To a World [Abschied]]
2017-03-14 00:43 magnomizer: ok you asked me to mod my map
2017-03-14 00:43 magnomizer: your map*
2017-03-14 00:43 magnomizer: w/e
2017-03-14 00:43 magnomizer: blah
2017-03-14 00:43 magnomizer: can't talk
2017-03-14 00:43 magnomizer: let's have a look
2017-03-14 00:43 Chromoxx: ayy
2017-03-14 00:44 magnomizer: 00:03:152 (4) -
2017-03-14 00:44 magnomizer: I think d better
2017-03-14 00:44 magnomizer: ddkd -> dkkdxxxxxxx w/e
2017-03-14 00:44 magnomizer: there's a kind of growth
2017-03-14 00:44 magnomizer: if that makes sense
2017-03-14 00:45 Chromoxx: hm, the k matches the pitches better imo
2017-03-14 00:45 Chromoxx: and since the second pattern is longer already that's enough growth for me
2017-03-14 00:45 magnomizer: OK fair enough
2017-03-14 00:46 magnomizer: 00:15:964 (21,22) -
2017-03-14 00:46 magnomizer: what about these two?
2017-03-14 00:46 Chromoxx: still pretty high pitch
2017-03-14 00:46 magnomizer: actually I suppose k fits better there
2017-03-14 00:46 magnomizer: it is kinda nitpicky
2017-03-14 00:46 Chromoxx: yea
2017-03-14 00:46 magnomizer: I am going for relative pitch here tho
2017-03-14 00:46 magnomizer: since it is "rising"
2017-03-14 00:47 magnomizer: 00:28:464 (54,55) -
2017-03-14 00:47 magnomizer: these notes necessary>
2017-03-14 00:47 magnomizer: ?
2017-03-14 00:48 magnomizer: I feel it would be better to get rid of them
2017-03-14 00:48 magnomizer: since it's rounds of the phrase a bit better
2017-03-14 00:48 Chromoxx: nah, it's building up from the last one
2017-03-14 00:48 magnomizer: ok again fair
2017-03-14 00:48 Chromoxx: and the kkkd is kinda less emphasized than dkkd and the other patterns
2017-03-14 00:51 magnomizer: optional removal
2017-03-14 00:51 magnomizer: 00:43:933 (110) -
2017-03-14 00:51 magnomizer: I mean I know it's buildup
2017-03-14 00:51 magnomizer: but oh well
2017-03-14 00:51 magnomizer: see what you think
2017-03-14 00:52 Chromoxx: keeping the buldup consistent is better imo
2017-03-14 00:53 magnomizer: ok that massive 1/2 stream is fine
2017-03-14 00:53 magnomizer: I particualrly like how you switch up patterns with soprano
2017-03-14 00:53 Chromoxx: ty
2017-03-14 00:55 magnomizer: 02:35:652 (528,529,530,531,532,533,534) -
2017-03-14 00:55 magnomizer: this
2017-03-14 00:55 magnomizer: I think better as dkkkdkd
2017-03-14 00:55 magnomizer: over ddkkddk
2017-03-14 00:55 magnomizer: the 234 are all k's imo
2017-03-14 00:56 Chromoxx: changed to dkkdddk
2017-03-14 00:56 Chromoxx: the k at the end is for the switch from d k d k d to k d k d k
2017-03-14 00:56 magnomizer: good idea
2017-03-14 00:56 magnomizer: didn't think of that
2017-03-14 00:57 magnomizer: I seriously think end should be a d tho
2017-03-14 00:57 magnomizer: dkkddkd fits very well
2017-03-14 00:57 magnomizer: pls consider
2017-03-14 00:57 Chromoxx: keeping the consistent switch from d k d k d to k d k d k
2017-03-14 00:57 Chromoxx: k at the end fits the section better structurally
2017-03-14 00:57 magnomizer: how about dkkkddk
2017-03-14 00:58 magnomizer: that works too I think
2017-03-14 00:58 Chromoxx: sure
2017-03-14 00:58 magnomizer: ayy suggestion accepted
2017-03-14 00:59 magnomizer: 02:49:480 -
2017-03-14 00:59 magnomizer: anwyay I've moved on to abt here
2017-03-14 00:59 magnomizer: so that's about 3/5 of the way through
2017-03-14 00:59 Chromoxx: ayy
2017-03-14 01:00 magnomizer: 02:49:714 (24,25,26,27) -
2017-03-14 01:00 magnomizer: all finishers?
2017-03-14 01:00 magnomizer: necessary?
2017-03-14 01:00 Chromoxx: yea
2017-03-14 01:00 magnomizer: 02:50:652 -
2017-03-14 01:00 magnomizer: this is must
2017-03-14 01:00 Chromoxx: i'm mapping the strong synth sounds as finishers in this section
2017-03-14 01:00 magnomizer: 02:49:714 -
2017-03-14 01:00 magnomizer: this as well
2017-03-14 01:01 magnomizer: 02:55:339 (48,49,50,51) -
2017-03-14 01:01 magnomizer: you know this would work so much better if it were
2017-03-14 01:01 magnomizer: KdkK
2017-03-14 01:01 magnomizer: the progression man
2017-03-14 01:01 Chromoxx: hits would lose emphasis
2017-03-14 01:01 Chromoxx: keeping the way i mapped the section consistent here
2017-03-14 01:02 magnomizer: but the buildup would be better io
2017-03-14 01:02 magnomizer: anyway
2017-03-14 01:02 magnomizer: I made my suggesiton moving on
2017-03-14 01:02 magnomizer: 02:56:589 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68) -
2017-03-14 01:02 magnomizer: confused
2017-03-14 01:02 magnomizer: pls explain how it fits lol
2017-03-14 01:03 Chromoxx: just carrying through how i mapped the section
2017-03-14 01:03 Chromoxx: with 1/3 patterns inbetween the finisheres
2017-03-14 01:03 Chromoxx: since the break between here is longer it's more optimal to fit a 5plet and a 3plet
2017-03-14 01:05 magnomizer: ok
2017-03-14 01:05 magnomizer: I just found the patterns to be a bit weriud
2017-03-14 01:06 Chromoxx: patterns flow pretty normally imo
2017-03-14 01:06 magnomizer: 02:56:589 (52,53,54,55,56) -
2017-03-14 01:06 magnomizer: it's just this that's bugging me a bit
2017-03-14 01:07 magnomizer: see how dkddk feels?
2017-03-14 01:07 Chromoxx: i can do ddkdk ddk
2017-03-14 01:08 magnomizer: thaht works much better than ddkkd kdk
2017-03-14 01:08 magnomizer: 02:57:839 (59) -
2017-03-14 01:08 magnomizer: ^ignore
2017-03-14 01:08 magnomizer: 03:11:589 -
2017-03-14 01:08 magnomizer: this here too?
2017-03-14 01:09 Chromoxx: ye
2017-03-14 01:10 magnomizer: 03:35:339 -
2017-03-14 01:10 magnomizer: I like the 2 space gap
2017-03-14 01:10 Chromoxx: i can add a note at 03:35:339 -
2017-03-14 01:10 magnomizer: bad idea I think
2017-03-14 01:11 Chromoxx: ah
2017-03-14 01:11 Chromoxx: you liked it xD
2017-03-14 01:11 magnomizer: 03:42:995 -
2017-03-14 01:12 magnomizer: anote?
2017-03-14 01:12 magnomizer: idk
2017-03-14 01:12 magnomizer: silence works
2017-03-14 01:12 Chromoxx: synth tunes out there
2017-03-14 01:12 Chromoxx: so i left the space
2017-03-14 01:15 magnomizer: ok just played kiai
2017-03-14 01:15 magnomizer: uhhh
2017-03-14 01:15 magnomizer: only problem I have is maybe it's too dense?
2017-03-14 01:15 magnomizer: in comparison to the reset of the song
2017-03-14 01:16 Chromoxx: well it's a lot more intense
2017-03-14 01:17 magnomizer: true but you also have to think about balance
2017-03-14 01:17 magnomizer: I don't have anything wrong with how it's mapped tho
2017-03-14 01:17 magnomizer: except for maybe the kkddkkddk
2017-03-14 01:17 magnomizer: which seems a bit too meh
2017-03-14 01:17 magnomizer: but I can't really offer a better suggestion
2017-03-14 01:17 Chromoxx: it's an approval map and it fits the intensity of the part
2017-03-14 01:17 magnomizer: fair enough
2017-03-14 01:17 Chromoxx: 04:11:667 (245) - i can delete this
2017-03-14 01:17 magnomizer: I suppose
2017-03-14 01:17 Chromoxx: kkddkkddk felt a bit weird to me too tbh
2017-03-14 01:18 magnomizer: let me suggest something
2017-03-14 01:18 Chromoxx: sure
2017-03-14 01:19 magnomizer: lol to me it sounds like a deathstream
2017-03-14 01:19 magnomizer: but obviously that's not suitable
2017-03-14 01:19 Chromoxx: lol pls
2017-03-14 01:20 magnomizer: ok I have an idea
2017-03-14 01:21 magnomizer: first tiem
2017-03-14 01:21 magnomizer: 03:56:277 -
2017-03-14 01:21 magnomizer: kkddk d k d
2017-03-14 01:21 magnomizer: change to
2017-03-14 01:21 magnomizer: cuz you want emphasis on that d
2017-03-14 01:21 Chromoxx: i'm changing them both to kkddk ddk
2017-03-14 01:21 magnomizer: 04:11:433 (240) -
2017-03-14 01:22 magnomizer: maybe second time increase it to kkkdk
2017-03-14 01:22 Chromoxx: nah it feels too weird
2017-03-14 01:22 magnomizer: have you tried?
2017-03-14 01:22 magnomizer: it fit
2017-03-14 01:22 magnomizer: I think
2017-03-14 01:22 magnomizer: kkkdk worked surprisingly well
2017-03-14 01:23 magnomizer: but yeah last suggestion
2017-03-14 01:23 magnomizer: everything else looks good to me
2017-03-14 01:23 Chromoxx: kkkdk just feels awkward to me
2017-03-14 01:23 Chromoxx: but yeah, thx man
2017-03-14 01:23 magnomizer: ok your choice
2017-03-14 01:23 magnomizer: :P
2017-03-14 01:23 Chromoxx: i'll send you the irc log so u can post it
2017-03-14 01:24 magnomizer: gonna play it once with NC
2017-03-14 01:24 magnomizer: waiting for you to update
2017-03-14 01:24 magnomizer: unless you have already?
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Just passing by, trying to up my mod knowledge :)


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  • 01:45:027 (478) - overlap on this note disgusts me, please change it or I will slap someone :)
  • 03:35:339 - you could add a note here, that break feels really weird in comparison to the rest.
  • 03:56:277 - I think that kkddkkddk sounds rather weird here, have a listen at this part again.
  • 04:11:277 - same as above, kkddkkddk sounds odd.

It's not much, but hopefully that will make you a better mapper :^)
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Abschied
  • 01:45:027 (478) - overlap on this note disgusts me, please change it or I will slap someone :) yea changed the SV on this one to 1.0 so it doesn't overlap with the finishers
  • 03:35:339 - you could add a note here, that break feels really weird in comparison to the rest. wanna keep this here for emphasis on 03:35:652 - where the sound is a bit stronger..
  • 03:56:277 - I think that kkddkkddk sounds rather weird here, have a listen at this part again. already mentioned by magno, changed to kkddk ddk
  • 04:11:277 - same as above, kkddkkddk sounds odd. ^

It's not much, but hopefully that will make you a better mapper :^)

thanks a lot for the mod man!
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Holy FUCK exactly 5:00 drain lmfao.
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please change diffname to "Chromoxx' Divergence"

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  • 01:01:277 (203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216,217,218) - I know you varied to not be the same as the next part but when no other pattern in this 1/2 part randomly changes then it's kinda weird. changed 01:01:120 - to k to make the pattern consistent until the next change in pitch at 01:03:777 -
  • 01:30:027 (385) - The big note loses all emphasis here and seems kind of useless to have really. ye removed
  • For the 1/8 bursts, I really think that 1/6 would be much better with how much more fitting it feels to play with the music and satisfying (based off of the medium tameness of the music and the kicks in the back fitting a swingy style) 4 same-finger hits is compared to 5 with 1/8. at this bpm 1/6 wouldn't be bursty enough and would lack emphasis imo since the entire section is mapped in 1/6, there are long enough breaks before and after the breaks to recover so i think it's fine
  • 04:00:495 (142,151,160) - You can tip the endings of these a different color to map to the "o" "e" etc xd it's kinda unfortunate, i'd like to do it but the sound at 04:00:495 - is lower than the one at 04:01:433 - and if i were to map the endings as a different color they would contradict eachother, i couldn't change the main color of the bursts around either because of the pitch of the main sound i'm mapping to :(
  • 04:02:839 (161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179) - This sounds really sour. I can hear you going for the melody but the ddk kkd kkddk is really noisy in comparison, esp when the d in the kkd is being used to map to it, which is really too '`subtle`'. Something like 04:03:620 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174) - being kkddd d to emphasize the lowness nicely would work, but all up to you. i think the current pattern is fine
  • 04:26:277 - Of all places to not ddkdkk :thinking: i feel like the dkkdkk adds a bit more crispness to the section and is more interesting to play going outwards, although both would work imo

Holy FUCK exactly 5:00 drain lmfao. ye, was pretty happy i didn't have to map the needless voice over nothing at the end lol

thx for modding man!
updated map
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passerby. o/


I am an English idiot

hope you don't mind :p Me too :3


01:00:027 - 01:10:027 - I try to walk in this time . May be considered only in the third beat when dash. Like 01: 15: 027 (1,2,3,1) - but change hyperdash to dash. But this may make map seem a bit monotonous... just an idea :? I like the feeling of gradual intensity building, but I've gone through and fixed a few patterns to make them a bit more obvious that it's a dash.

01:44:089 (3) - I tried to rotate the slider to the left https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7559860 feel more fit rhythm I think I'll keep it the way it is.
The difficulty is meant for lower level players, so I feel that leaving a more comfortable flowing pattern here is better!


03:15:027 - 03:36:120 - Although I think this part is specially made like this, but for me it sounds still not used to :o I focus heavily on instruments in this section rather than vocals. Maybe it's a bit weird? Just a stylistic thing ;w;

edit: ctb diff :!:


Thank you for modding!

edit: Disabled countdown
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Fair enough.

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uwu just a quick check before this gets ranked, I hope I'll help you at least a little biit

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  • 00:03:777 (1) - in the whole beggining section you've made 2/1 sliders like this one with at least some movement. so why not to make the same here? I think curve fitse here quite well.
  • 00:07:527 (1,2) - I think it's considered to be completed without using dash, just like all of your previous patterns. decrease a distance a little bit since it's pretty dense for a dash in beggining section. maybe x216?
  • 00:17:839 (2) - I think this deserves some movement since you were standing completely still before this reverse appears
  • 00:25:339 (3) - same for this one
  • 01:47:839 (1) - I think this curve should be more... curvy? liike again you were stanging still before this apperars and you still can catch this without moving
  • 02:48:777 (1,2) - ah, seems a little bit overspaced. yep, you have no problems with catching this using dash, but still seems pretty overspaced after pretty calm dashes. like here 02:54:402 (1,2) - you've made a nice one dash, so why not using the same distance?
  • 03:03:777 (1,2) - well well, just the same as above, but this one seems really overspaced, I even missed for the first time catching this uwu. also, it seems 03:05:339 (4,1) - there is missing dash, because for almost the same sound you've placed dash here 02:50:339 (4,1) -. so to fix two problems with 1 change I suggest moving 03:04:714 (2,3,4) - to x200, or whatever you'll decide to do with this xd
  • 03:14:558 (2,1) - maybe increase the distance a little bit?
  • 03:29:558 (5,1) - same as above, you even emphasized this with 2 finishes, so why not putting here a dash?
  • 03:41:589 (2,3) - 03:42:527 (2,3) - I don't quite understand why you used for the same sound different distances? welp I'd understand if you used bigger distance on simple flow pattern (the second one) but you used bigger distance on the first one, which is anti flow pattern. I suggest increasing the distance between 03:42:527 (2,3) -, or making this 03:41:589 (2,3) - less densier
  • 04:19:558 (6,7) - increase the distance just a liitle bit?
  • 04:25:183 (6,7) - same as above. this one doesn't require using dash at all uwu
  • 04:28:152 (1,2,3,4) - there's no actualy problem with these, but they look somehow odd. I think it's tottaly fine to increase the distance between 04:28:152 (1,2) - and 04:29:089 (3,4) - so they will look better
  • 04:44:870 (5,1) - I don't know if it's supposed to be a dash or not, but if it is, then I think you can increase the distance just a little bit
  • 04:51:589 (1) - aaaaa I don't understand why it starts where is starts. there's no big changes in this vocal sentence, so why you put the beggining here? I won't say it sounds awkward or something, I just see no particular reason to decrease the lenght of this slider, also I think it's the only slider you've shortened in this way in the whole beatmap uwu
  • 05:18:717 (1) - it seems you just randomly made this slider. I know you can do better on this, since there is vocal which can be clearly emphasized with stop or direction change movements. I suggest you to use 0.3x SV for this, so you'll have more space for making something better. you can pm me and I'll try to help you with this since I know pretty good ideas for this (just checked last mod and saw what you said you edited this, but still it's emphasize nothing :c)
ah, well that's it. hope this would help somehow ;-;
I knew that you'd have mapped this
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