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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 5 июня 2017 г. at 11:39:25

Artist: Loki
Title: Birth of a Hero
Tags: featured artist Thaehan The Fall of a Hero marvollo m_a_r_v_o_l_l_o symphonic
BPM: 109,95
Filesize: 2866kb
Play Time: 01:29
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  • Basic (1,27 stars, 73 notes)
  • Origin (2,04 stars, 130 notes)

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Both difficulties are really solid, I don't see any issues with either of them.
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можно мне инс на 3 звезды сделать плз спасибо
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Go ahead vanucik
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Hi!,
From my modding queue
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I don't see anything wrong with the maps.
Maybe change the spinner at the end since the song ends in a beat.
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Hi!,
From my modding queue
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I don't see anything wrong with the maps.
Maybe change the spinner at the end since the song ends in a beat.

1 tact spinner would be too short imo
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why?

What do you want?
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why?

Because maybeeeeee tututuru tururu
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General
  • Хитсаунды вообще непонятно расставлены. На половине слайдеров они стоят сначала, на половине - в конце, в другой части вообще не стоят, етц. Последний спиннер заглушить, у тебя там почти пустота.
  • Думаю, повторный "Hero" с тэгов можно убрать.
  • В чём прикол ставить слайдерпоинты на слайдеры и не юзать их?

Microsoft Basic
  • В целом выглядит нормально, но после превью-поинта довольно грязно, в основном из-за большой плотности объектов и низкого СВ, из-за чего ты пытаешься курвить слайдеры 00:54:098 (2) - 00:58:464 (2) - 01:15:926 (2) , что их лучше не делает, им самое то быть либо прямыми, либо как 01:02:829 (3) , где курв есть, но не так сильно заметен, из-за чего выглядит приятно, tl;dr проблема лишь в маленьком св.
  • 01:16:472 (3) - странно, несколько секунд назад ты мапал этот же момент по-другому. Мне кажется, что данные паттерны нужно поменять местами, ибо ближе к концу трек становится всё сильнее и сильнее.

Melancholy
  • 00:31:724 (4,1) - бланкет
  • 00:37:181 (1) - не выделяешь гитару на половине пути (или там укулеле, хрен знает), так что слайдер можно закончить на 00:38:273 , как в изике.
  • 00:59:828 - и снова странности - в изике данный звук был вполне кликабельным.
  • 01:16:472 (1,2) - тоже самое, что описывал в изике, и выше.
  • 01:18:655 (1) - странно, почему ты оставляешь этот слайдер 3/2, если , во-первых, звуков там нет, во-вторых, это не сходится с концепцией следующего паттерна 01:20:837 (1) .
  • Насчёт шейпов - слайдеры типа 00:50:278 (1) - лучше выглядели в изике, т.е. через красную точку, здесь же они кривоваты.
Удачи!
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    General
  • Not very confident in timing, in some moments they are very huevie




    Basic
  • I really do not agree that these 00:54:098 (2,2,2) - sliders are too curved. They are not very neat visually.. Perhaps it's worth making them a little more straight.
    01:25:203 (3) - Probably it's better to avoid mapping it since it's so weak and finish the slider 01:26:295 -
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    Other neat and simple. Cool.


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Greetings.

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Image Basic
  • If you're not doing hard with mapset you could've done the great hitsounding.
    For instance, 00:00:346 - it has a piano sound on it, so it would be great if there was slidertick or maybe some kind of soft-sliderslide.
    On the other side, 00:02:802 - you do not have a sound on it but slidertick makes sound which makes zero sense so far.
    You can make slidertick rate 2 and make blanket soft-slidertick2.wav and put a greenline with the second soft sampleset on ticks here 00:02:529 - / 00:02:802 - / 00:03:075 - for making them inaudible.
    That's not what you necessarily must do but it's an idea which I personally would love to see here.
  • 00:08:259 - there's no piano sound on it so you may want to silent sliderend. Repeats several times, 00:25:722 - etc. Especially when starts this violin part after 00:52:461 - .
  • Generally it is fine rn but I personally do not like patterns you use here. They seem highly boring even for newbies tbh.


Image Melancholy
  • The same suggestiong for sliderends, ye.
  • 00:36:090 (3,1) - pretty minor but stack is kinda broken.


Decent mapset but before pushing it forwad you may want get more feedback.
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Lovely mod to Жмюклек

I will be very nazi bcs the map is already good

General:

Offset is 67-69 imo

Basic:

00:04:439 (1,2) - Blanket still can be better
00:06:622 (3) - Move it right and up a bit for smoother movement
00:30:633 (1,2,3) - It would be more logical, if you Ctrl C+V 00:30:633 (1,2) - , rotate them by 90 degrees and place 00:32:816 (3) - in the place of starting (3) (Watch pic to understand me) https://puu.sh/vfADn/2e84777e7e.jpg
00:32:816 (3,1) - Blanket maybe?
00:56:827 (1,2,3) - Flow can be smoother https://puu.sh/vfASl/5204025ce6.jpg
00:52:461 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Why your spacing is jumping from 1.07 to 1.13 in this part? Maybe fix it?
01:27:386 (1) - Fade slider volume or at least do a 5% volume greenline in the end...

00:32:816 (3) - Why no wistle?
00:41:547 (3) - ^
same goes for next sliders

I think you should do more hitsounds here, like use stronger wistle or finish on down beats or smth like that

Melancholy:

00:21:902 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved
00:32:270 (5,1) - ^
00:32:816 (1,2) - ^^
00:54:644 (1) - Ugly slider



Everything else seems fine to me

Зови БНов, удачи
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Melancholy

short map, short mod

gl
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oh, so many mods to check. well lemme start. if i didn't reply for sth it means that it repeats my previous answers or was fixed. Hitsounding was fully remade, all suggestions were seen

Dear 100bit:.

General
Думаю, повторный "Hero" с тэгов можно убрать. The Fall of a Hero is an album's name so it's fine to keep it
В чём прикол ставить слайдерпоинты на слайдеры и не юзать их? this is my own style, it doesn't make much sense, it's okay

Microsoft Basic
В целом выглядит нормально, но после превью-поинта довольно грязно, в основном из-за большой плотности объектов и низкого СВ, из-за чего ты пытаешься курвить слайдеры 00:54:098 (2) - 00:58:464 (2) - 01:15:926 (2) , что их лучше не делает, им самое то быть либо прямыми, либо как 01:02:829 (3) , где курв есть, но не так сильно заметен, из-за чего выглядит приятно, tl;dr проблема лишь в маленьком св. This is an Easy diff so I don't want to change sv anywhere

Melancholy
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thx


Dear wajinshu:

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Not very confident in timing, in some moments they are very huevie i'll ask BNG and QAT members later

Basic
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Melancholy
00:06:622 (1,2) - Better to remove the stack, You made a stack in the previous part where the break 1/1 and here in 1/2. Players can get confused and play like the previous moment.... I made stacks after every circle if there's more than 1 beat pause between objects
01:17:290 (1) - The sound is pretty good for emphasis it with a simple circle it sounds lingering so it's cool to get emphasised by a slider
01:19:200 (1) - Ignoring the white tick, you disappoint me. The rhythm should be the same as here 01:20:837 (1,2) - made contrariwise
01:29:501 - Spinner end here as I told above it will be too short, so no.
thx


Dear Namki:

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01:27:386 (1) - it's definitely should end at 01:29:569 - . But yours is standing on nothing. zzzz
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thx


Dear MashaSG

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As I told above I'll ask BNG and QAT members later

Basic
00:04:439 (1,2) - Blanket still can be better it is fine imo
00:30:633 (1,2,3) - It would be more logical, if you Ctrl C+V 00:30:633 (1,2) - , rotate them by 90 degrees and place 00:32:816 (3) - in the place of starting (3) (Watch pic to understand me) https://puu.sh/vfADn/2e84777e7e.jpg no no no no
00:32:816 (3,1) - Blanket maybe? i dont see any reasons to put it here
00:52:461 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Why your spacing is jumping from 1.07 to 1.13 in this part? Maybe fix it? lmao, it's still 1.1 so it's not a problem.

Melancholy
00:54:644 (1) - Ugly slider thx, you cant even gimme proper example what to make, please never mod like this.
thx


Dear Rizen:

Basic
01:27:386 (1) - end this 1/1 earlier as that's when the music completely stops? if not, gradually silence the spinner pls I told the reason why
i don't want to make it shorter above several times


Melancholy
00:18:627 (3,4) - circles as you have done at 00:22:993 (3,4,5,6) - , 00:27:359 (3,4,5,6) - , etc.? the piano sounds quiter here so it's why I putted sliders
thx
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Thank you Namki for helping me with the hitsounding! owo
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