1. 1.023 km/s - 4Key (3.7 stars, 2821 notes)
2. 11.186 km/s - 4Key (5.29 stars, 3561 notes)
3. 340.29 m/s - 4Key (2.09 stars, 1540 notes)
4. 463.89 m/s - 4Key (2.93 stars, 2290 notes)
5. 7.667 km/s - 4Key (4.63 stars, 3281 notes)
6. 9.8 m/s - 4Key (1.5 stars, 1039 notes)

JztCallMeRon wrote:

Hai just dropping by for the mod o/ Ninja'd by myself lol


1|2|3|4

340.29 m/s

Fun fact, I wasn't done making this diff lmao, so there might be some copy and paste stuff you can see

• 
  00:34:828 - pattern suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7416650 i thought it would be more appropriate to empphasize the drum roll with a two-hand trill like this, just in case I get what you mean, which is why I used repetition to represent the drums instead (using the 14 - 2 - 3 - 2 patterns). The thing with your screenshot is the fact that it doesn't really flow as linearly as I'd like it to since that's the theme of this stream is to be as comfortable and natural as possible.
  01:15:946 (75946|2,76122|3) - since you applied PR here, a suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7416670 cool, applied
  02:39:504 - shouldn't there be a note here? since you did 02:38:093 (158093|3,158181|2,158181|0,158181|1) (applicable to the higher diff too) Ah, true, applied in both diffs.
  03:04:122 (184122|1) - should be a double? since you did 03:05:534 (185534|0,185534|2) Yeah, got fixed with the keysounding stuff
  03:15:416 (195416|3) - ^ ^
  
  02:06:240 - 02:26:004 and 02:28:828 - 02:51:063 -- suggestion to put kiai times here xd Was debating it before since I didn't really think those sections were a climax of sorts, but yeah, guess you've got a point, applied.

11.186km/s

• 
  00:04:740 - suggesting to nerf the sv a little bit to 2.20x for readability :p It's 2.25x at the moment because it equals out to an average SV of 1 in this case.
  01:01:299 (61299|2,61299|1) - im just weirded out by these pitches (nvm they fit perfectly, didn't notice that that 1/1 measure had a really odd pitch in the song) Ah yeah, it's part of the keysounding lol. Sad I couldn't use hands to use the full chords, but jumps work fine
  01:03:063 (63063|2,63240|1) - pattern suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7416818 since you started c#7 at [4] might as well put it in the same place. idk Applied. I wasn't following pitch too closely when I mapped it. The keysounds kind of came as an afterthought and I think I'd make gameplay too bland if I followed it strictly.
  01:04:828 (64828|1,65004|3,65181|0) - same suggestion as above: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7416827 (feel free to reject it tho) Yeah, I'ma leave it for now since I went for a symmetrical kind of pattern here as opposed to PR
  01:06:593 (66593|0) - might as well put this in [3] since you did 01:06:240 (66240|2) cool stuff
  01:11:887 (71887|1,72063|2,72240|3) - pattern suggestion: 01:11:887 (71887|3,72063|1,72240|2) since g#7 is higher than f#7 Applied similarly, but I think you accidentally pasted the wrong link lol
  02:06:240 - 02:16:122 - I feel that this section is a little bit empty without some svs, but patterns are fine. I'll consider adding some SVs for the vocals here some time later, but I don't want to go completely overboard with it. I think of this kind of as a rest period in preparation for the section at 02:23:534 -
  02:39:504 - there should be a note here (like what I suggested at the lower diff) already applied from the other diff
  03:02:004 (182004|0) - shouldn't this LN start here 03:01:652 ? True, nice catch
  03:16:122 (196122|1) - should be at [1] bec PR hueeeeeee Applied

There goes my mod. HS volume is good, loved the svs, and overall good stuff sik map bruv Hope my mod helps. Best of luck! might hopefully finish my 7k ver of this xd You totally should, I'd be interested to see it!

1. BPM: OK
2. Offset: OK
3. AiMod: OK
4. Audio: The HS is really good!
5. Background: OK
6. Preview Point: OK

1. 00:07:387 (7387|1,7475|2,7563|0) - i think much better to use 2-3-2 pattern in this part. Just move this note 00:07:563 (7563|0) - to column 2.
2. 00:34:475 (34475|2,34475|3,34828|3,34828|0,35181|0,35181|3,35534|3,35534|0) - hmm.. i guess one note is enough in this part to emphasize the kick sound.
3. 01:06:416 (66416|0) - move this note to column 3. I think it's good to have this kind of pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7461210
4. 02:34:034 (154034|2) - move these notes to column 4 to emphasize the sound sync.

1. 01:47:269 (107269|3,107357|2,107446|3) - i think much better if you move these notes in columns 3-2-3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7461237
2. 02:12:240 (132240|2,132240|3,132328|1,132416|0,132504|2,132593|3,132593|1) - i give you some pattern like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7461259. Well if you accept my suggestion, you can apply also this pattern to the other parts of the first kia time.

I hope my mod can help. Best of luck

Shiro-neechan wrote:

Hai I'm also a ninja uwu uwu

[General]

1. BPM: OK
2. Offset: OK
3. AiMod: OK
4. Audio: The HS is really good!
5. Background: OK
6. Preview Point: OK

4k P A T T E R N - | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[340.29 m/s]

1. 00:07:387 (7387|1,7475|2,7563|0) - i think much better to use 2-3-2 pattern in this part. Just move this note 00:07:563 (7563|0) - to column 2. cool
2. 00:34:475 (34475|2,34475|3,34828|3,34828|0,35181|0,35181|3,35534|3,35534|0) - hmm.. i guess one note is enough in this part to emphasize the kick sound. Rather than reduce the density, I changed the hand movement instead so that it focuses more on trills whereas the previous measures were focused more on single directional rolls
3. 01:06:416 (66416|0) - move this note to column 3. I think it's good to have this kind of pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7461210 ok
4. 02:34:034 (154034|2) - move these notes to column 4 to emphasize the sound sync. I don't really hear a variation in the pitch here. I stacked them instead so that it would focus more on reading as the distances between notes are different, so it forces the player to pay attention to the music instead.

[11.186 ms/ (SV Map)]

1. 01:47:269 (107269|3,107357|2,107446|3) - i think much better if you move these notes in columns 3-2-3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7461237 They're in 4-3-4 right now because the way I've set up this section is that each hand is separate. So the 1/1 is only on one hand, and I separated the 1/2 onto the right hand only so the feel would be less connected between hands and more like doing a separate movement for each.
2. 02:12:240 (132240|2,132240|3,132328|1,132416|0,132504|2,132593|3,132593|1) - i give you some pattern like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7461259. Well if you accept my suggestion, you can apply also this pattern to the other parts of the first kia time. Interesting trill. I'll probably just leave it for this part though as I don't want to use too many trills in this section, but I may try a different pattern to make this part stand out a bit more.

I hope my mod can help. Best of luck

Allezard wrote:

no kudosu

01:20:710 -


and

01:32:004 -

Virtue- wrote:

epic mapset, baka creator, mod by baka modder

08:08 Virtue-: sheep
08:08 Virtue-: can we irc
08:08 Protastic101: baka
08:08 Virtue-: i'm really really lazy af rn
08:08 Protastic101: but :/
08:08 Protastic101: i am too
08:08 Virtue-: D:
08:09 Protastic101: ok
08:09 Virtue-: i'll nuke the SVs
08:09 Virtue-: :D
08:09 *Protastic101 prepares to get nuked
08:10 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/uKMJ0/4af51d668a.jpg
08:11 Virtue-: from 00:07:299 - until 00:07:652 - change it into 1.9x, 0.1x, and so on
08:11 Virtue-: if u want more impact on it :/
08:11 Protastic101: das a fancy timing panel
08:11 Virtue-: =w=)b
08:11 Protastic101: I'm trying to keep the SVs barely noticeable in this section since I don't want anything super heavy so soon already
08:11 Virtue-: D:
08:11 Protastic101: It's enough to where you notice something's different but you aren't able to tell what
08:12 Virtue-: but... but... there's no different when u put the SVs or not ._.
08:12 Virtue-: huehue
08:12 Protastic101: there is, it's just harder to see
08:13 Protastic101: I made them soft for that purpose D:
08:13 Virtue-: fine then -_-
08:14 Protastic101: D:
08:14 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/uKMYU/73dfc55fe2.jpg 
08:14 Virtue-: fck u :D
08:14 Protastic101: huehuehue
08:15 Protastic101: rearranged it a bit
08:15 Protastic101: should feel more natural to play now
08:15 Virtue-: from 00:34:475 - until 00:35:887 - same as the 00:07:299
08:15 Virtue-: can't feel any differeces
08:16 Virtue-: sht
08:16 Virtue-: typo
08:16 Protastic101: since the Svs are 1/8, it's much more noticeable here that there's a stutter. Any stronger and it wouldn't really give the player any reaction time to the notes as they come
08:16 Protastic101: it's more of a visual effect than anything to represent that dry snare
08:16 Virtue-: it's sooooooo smooth u baka :(
08:17 Virtue-: "optical illusion" that's what my friend said
08:18 Protastic101: but it's not. There's a clear visual stutter, even at 32 speed which is what I read with
08:18 Virtue-: from 00:38:710 - until 00:41:534 - 
08:18 Virtue-: same
08:18 Virtue-: it's soooo smooth u baka :( [2]
08:19 Protastic101: similar reasoning here. I started the beginning 00:38:710 - using a barely noticeable SV so it would better represent the 1/1 and then 1/2 dry snares
08:19 *Virtue- find a gun
08:19 *Virtue- find the ammo
08:20 *Virtue- prepare to shoot
08:20 Virtue-: 00:49:828 - miss here?
08:20 *Protastic101 shot
08:21 Protastic101: I started the 1/2 on the downbeat at 00:50:004 - instead since the sound really blends in with each other so it's hard to determine where exactly it begins
08:21 Virtue-: wait, my mom calls me
08:21 Virtue-: brb
08:22 Protastic101: you can do it
08:22 Protastic101: i believe in you
08:25 Virtue-: back
08:25 Protastic101: yay!
08:26 Virtue-: from 00:58:475 - until 01:20:357 - wall of LNs? 
08:26 Protastic101: huh, that would be interesting but I don't know how I'd do it tbh
08:28 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/uKNVg/528ecc9701.jpg
08:28 Virtue-: LOL
08:28 Protastic101: basically me lol
08:29 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/uKO16/b232dae084.jpg
08:29 Virtue-: good enough?
08:30 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7575785 would something like this for the LNs work?
08:30 Protastic101: o hey, das similar to my idea lol
08:31 Virtue-: ^
08:31 Virtue-: lol
08:31 Virtue-: yup that must be good 
08:31 Protastic101: alright, continue on with the mod, I'll start making the changes later
08:32 Virtue-: yey LNs >w<
08:32 Virtue-: 01:19:475 (79475|0,79828|0,80181|0) - well this...... 
08:33 Protastic101: there's 3 separate whooshes there that kind of fade in and out
08:40 Virtue-: brb again
08:41 Protastic101: ok
08:46 Virtue-: back [2]
08:46 Protastic101: yay!
08:47 Protastic101: I've finished redoing the first LN section
08:47 Virtue-: ^
08:47 Virtue-: can't wait to try :D
08:47 Protastic101: yeah, it's cancer but :D
08:49 Virtue-: from 02:48:593 - until 02:51:063 - those 1/3 kinda hard
08:50 Protastic101: I structured it so that the 1/3 jacks never exceed more than 6 notes long, so it's a matter of muscle control when hitting it
08:50 Protastic101: I also make the pattern easy to read so that the player focuses mostly on the execution of the notes as opposed to reading since it's just a lot of [13][24] alternations
08:51 Virtue-: well....
08:51 Virtue-: guess what
08:51 Virtue-: i can't play it :'D
08:51 Protastic101: it just takes a bit of practice and you'll be able to nail it perfectly
08:52 Protastic101: I did start and end the 1/3 with a [34] and [12] jack so that the starts and ends are focused only on one hand which is easier imo to coordinate
08:53 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/uKPBW/c142f47588.jpg and http://puu.sh/uKPCY/361530c6bf.jpg 
08:53 Virtue-: wanna try those?
08:53 Virtue-: quite easy 
08:54 Protastic101: I want to make the jack lengths in multiples of 3s though because that's most likely how the player is going to be subdividing in the rhythm while playing
08:54 Protastic101: jacking them in sets of two makes it a bit harder rhythm wise for that reason imo
08:55 Virtue-: D:
08:56 Virtue-: btw, make the SB pls
08:56 Virtue-: of this map i mean
08:56 Virtue-: it kinda cool 
08:57 Protastic101: im kind of bad with conceptualizing D:
08:57 Protastic101: I'd try but I don't know how to visualize the song
08:58 Virtue-: well... i think that's it, i don't see any wierd stuffs right here. well patterns, epic HS, with baka SVs =w=
08:58 Virtue-: hmmm
08:59 Protastic101: :thinking:
09:00 Virtue-: just give some small stuffs like u did it in my brand new world
09:00 Protastic101: brand new world is ugly af XD
09:00 Virtue-: ^
09:00 Virtue-: yup
09:00 Protastic101: Idk, I might add some triangles
09:00 Protastic101: and particles
09:00 Virtue-: that must be nice :/
09:00 Protastic101: but I dont think ill be doing anything fancy
09:01 Protastic101: time to fix the second section of noodles tho
09:01 Protastic101: lemme update so you can see them ~~and tell me how cancer it is~~
09:02 Virtue-: same here, don't like anything fancy
09:02 Virtue-: for me
09:02 Virtue-: "simple, but epic"
09:02 Protastic101: yeah!
09:03 Virtue-: done with the update?
09:03 Protastic101: yeah
09:03 Virtue-: time to try some sht
09:04 Protastic101: you can do it!
09:04 Protastic101: I believe in you!

don't forget to feed me
have some stars

Todestrieb wrote:

Quick look at the streamz. All of them are suggestion for a better flow and avoid anchors, feel free to reject (also sorry for the amount of screenshots, I find this far easier to show big suggestions).

|0|1|2|3|

kms

00:30:769 (30769|1) - Move to 0 (prevent the 4 notes anchor). ok
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7578318 - I don't see any reason to make this kind of trills heavy patterns. I highly recommend you to "break" it as much as you can (exemple: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7578334 ) (I will also help to accentuate the next suggestion). cool, applied
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7578363 - This is the part that would need some trilly patterns, that will help accentuate the "drum" sound (Exemples: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7578406 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7578355 ). Applied a bit differently but with a similar amount of trills
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7578413 - Too many trills (Suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7578434 ). rearranged pretty closely to your screenshot save for the end where I kept a small trill for direction change.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7578468 - Watch out for anchors (Suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7578459 ). thanks, plays a lot better now
02:03:328 (123328|2) - Move to 0 and CTRL+H the next part. Im keeping this as it'd create a jack with 02:03:240 (123240|0,123240|1) - . Instead, what I did was change the roll at 02:03:416 - a bit to something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7583096
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7578533 - Once again, suggest you to try your best avoiding those trilly streams when It's not necessary (Suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7578527 ). yeah, rearranged this and the next few measures a bit
02:23:004 (143004|2) - Move to 0. ok
03:56:093 (236093|1) - Move to 0 (Help the transition to the 1/8 and avoid the same jump twice). cool
03:56:181 (236181|1) - Move to 1 (^). Im going to say no to this one because I want to leave as much space as possible between notes in the 1/8 burst, and if I moved it to 1, then the space between that and 03:56:402 (236402|1) - is only 3/8, but if I keep it in 2 like it currently is, then the space between 03:56:181 (236181|1,236402|1) - is 5/8

There should be more of the same kind of patterns and should also be applicable the the "m/s" difficulty, but I think you got the general idea of my suggestions (and I lack of time ).

Litharrale wrote:

No kudosu

I like the diff names. The bottom one should be 9.8m/s² though.
http://i.imgur.com/wL0Bb04.png

No_sync wrote:

hi!

From my NM/M4M queue. <- *Sellout link*
As requested!

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3

General

MP3: PASS
BG: PASS
Video: PASS

1. Not needed.

BPM & Offset: MISS

1. This issue appear on AiMod, Screenshot: https://puu.sh/v3LvO.png I think this issue is for the BPM value (and sensitivity) that have certain difficulties:
   
   1. This is an screenshot from 9.8 m/s .osu file: https://puu.sh/v3M67.png <- The second highlighted sentence is the red line (the BPM one) Check the second number: "352.94116"
   2. This is an screenshot from 340.29 m/s .osu file: https://puu.sh/v3Mhg.png <- Now, Check the second number: "352.941176470588"
   3. This is an screenshot from 11.186 km/s .osu file: https://puu.sh/v3MA8.png <- Finally... the second number: "352.941176470588"
2. So you need to change the value from 9.8 m/s difficulty: "352.94116" to "352.941176470588". That will fix the issue. After that, resnap the notes and kiai in that difficulty.

Fml, what is osu even doing lol. Thanks for pointing it out, fixed.

Diff.Spread: FAIL

1. You need a normal difficulty. That's all here.

I technically don't since this is a marathon length song. I just made the easier difficulties so people around my level would have something to play too since I really enjoy this song and think others would too, but I'm too lazy to make a spread for the lower difficulties since that'd be like 3 more difficulties and I'd be rip trying to make it.

Diff.Name: PASS

1. Speed is everything!

HP & OD: PASS
Hitsound: PASS
Hitsound Volume: PASS
Kiai Time: PASS
Metadata: PASS

1. http://cametek.jp/planetshaper/ , https://soundcloud.com/kamelcamellia/ctcd-011-planetshaper-xfaded-demo and http://vgmdb.net/album/60678 vgmdb isn't considered an official source for metadata; you only use it if you can't find a better source anywhere else. Just commenting on that fact, but I also added "CTCD-011" to tags since it looks like that's part of the album or whatever that atomosphere is in

Widescreen Support: MISS

1. Uncheck Widescreen Support on 9.8 m/s and 340.29 m/s. So a fun fact here, widescreen support doesn't actually affect the map in any way unless a storyboard is present, which there isn't in this map, so leaving it checked is fine.

Preview Point: PASS
AiMod Things: MISS

1. "Uninherited timing points conflict with ..." Above said on BPM & Offset.
2. Extra: I don't know why but if you go to the start of the map (any diff on "Compose") you start on 00:02:004 but if you go to the timing window, the offset is set on 00:02:005. I think that this is some visual bug or something like that. (It happen to me before...)
3. Extra2: There are Storyboard Hitsounds (more info in "Mod!") but if they aren't intended, some hitsound files won't be useful anymore: These were intended since I didn't have enough notes to add both keysounds + the normal-hitclap (dry snare)
   
   1. normal-hitclap.wav
   2. normal-hitfinish.wav
   3. normal-hitwhistle.wav
4. Extra3: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7697489 <- You see that "50%" on the right upper corner? There a lot of these on 9.8 m/s and 340.29 m/s...

That's a result of the hitsound copier I used, but it doesn't actually affect the volume of anything since I deleted hitsounds applied to those notes. I could technically fix them in the .osu but I'm too lazy for that.

Mod!

[9.8 m/s]

Can you use 50% Volume from start? 100% is too much. lmfao, I didn't even notice that mistake, thanks for pointing it out.

00:45:769 (45769|0,45946|0,46122|0,46299|0,46475|0) - Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7697569 Or use something that you like. There's a few things about the screenshot I kind of dislike. Sure, the stacks are lowered to 3 or less, but the direction changes make the entire burst lean towards the right hand a bit too much, so the weight is uneven. Also, the flow isn't as linear as I'd like it to be for playability reasons (because this is a 1/4 dense jump burst in a diff going for index streams), and there's a [3][24][3] pattern in the start that I dislike immensely due to how it breaks momentum. I did rearrange the burst a little though

02:34:475 (154475|2) - I rather end this Longnote on 02:34:652. I tried it out and I think it's better to leave them as 1/1 long since I need to be consistent with the later section at 02:40:122 - when I actually use the 1/1 LNs to connect the jumps like 02:40:475 (160475|1,160475|3) -

03:57:240 (237240|0,237416|0,237593|0,237769|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7697606 If you like... I'd like to avoid that direction turn with [4][23][1][234] since it breaks the flow a bit due to the loss in momentum from the linear roll.

03:57:946 (237946|1,238034|2,238122|1,238210|2,238299|3,238299|0,238475|1,238563|2,238652|1,238740|2,238828|3,239181|1,239181|0,239181|2) - I rather do this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7697616 Less repetitive. After the Longnote, rearrange the next note to evade jack. ok,
flipped the trill

Storyboard Hitsounds (If aren't intended, erase them):

1:20:534 Eb7.wav@100%
1:20:887 F#7.wav@100%
3:24:769 Eb7.wav@100%
3:25:122 F#7.wav@100%
4:32:710 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
4:35:181 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
4:35:534 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
4:36:63 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
4:36:240 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
4:38:4 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
4:38:357 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
4:38:710 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
4:39:769 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
4:39:946 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
4:41:4 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
4:41:181 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
4:41:357 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
These are all intended since I gave priority to the keysounds and ended up being unable to fit in the normal-hitclap, but I also didn't want to have it not play when it's present in every other difficulty, so yeah, I just threw them to storyboard.

[340.29 m/s]

Can you use 50% Volume from start? 100% is too much. x2 aaaaaa, how did i miss this

02:48:946 to 02:51:063 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7697697 If you like. Yeah sure, applied, but I only put the third note in either 1 or 4 since putting it in the inner columns makes it a bit harder to execute imo due to the fact it's so close to the 1/3 jacks and not isolated from them.

04:29:887 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7697723 <- Is the Middle one. This should be a triple. lol, I'm dumb, thanks for pointing it out.

Everything else seems fine.

Storyboard Hitsounds:

1:20:357 D7.wav@100%
1:20:534 Eb7.wav@100%
1:20:710 F7.wav@100%
1:20:887 F#7.wav@100%
3:24:769 Eb7.wav@100%
3:25:122 F#7.wav@100%
4:35:181 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
4:36:63 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
4:38:4 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
4:38:710 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
see reason in the 9.8 section

[11.186 km/s]

00:45:769 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7697753 I don't mod too much "X" difficulties but these chords are really necessary (1/2 beat ones)? Skipping from now on... The reason why I added these is because the music gets much more intense compared to the normal 1/8 burst at 00:44:357 - ,
but the snap is indeterminate, and if I used 1/12, then the SR would be hella inflated (I tried before and it got to 5.68* lol) so I decided to represent the increase in musical intensity by increasing note density, which is why I added the 1/2 jumps.

00:47:181 (47181|3,47181|2) - Only two? (like the chords on the stream before) I rather add one more on |1| it's because I'm trying to avoid a 1/8 minitrill with the previous notes, and a 1/4 jack which would be really uncomfortable to hit and pretty much a guaranteed miss https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7711663

01:54:769 (114769|3,114857|0,114946|3,114946|1,114946|2) - Ctrl+H. I'd like to keep 01:54:681 (114681|1) - disconnected from the other notes to represent the more chaotic dry snare that's being played. I tried to contrast the hand movements here basically, so it goes from fluid flow to disconnected and choppy which helps to keep the player on their feet as it gives them an early forewarning to the sections to come.

02:35:799 (155799|2,155887|2,156063|1) - ^ I'm jacking notes in this section for the kicks + snares since I think it's a change in pace to how I've mapped everything before to be easy to play. This kind of makes the player focus more on control and making sure they hit the notes just right to be able to repress again only a moment later.

02:44:357 (164357|1,164357|0,164446|0,164534|3,164622|3,164710|1,164710|0,164710|2,164799|1,164887|3,164975|2,164975|3) - I rather: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7697802 The problem with that for me is https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7711702 . That uneven spacing between notes in the same column makes it really easy to screw up reading and miss, which is why I put it in 4 despite it being weighted unevenly on the right hand.

03:58:475 (238475|1,238563|3,238652|1,238740|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7697818 I wanted the trill to be complementary with 03:58:299 (238299|2,238299|0) - and avoid a 3 note stack in 1 if it's not necessary.

Those SV... GJ.

Storyboard Hitsounds:

1:20:887 F#7.wav@100%
3:25:122 F#7.wav@100%
4:35:181 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
4:38:4 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
4:38:710 normal-hitclap.wav@50%
Yeah, as mentioned in the previous two diffs

Those SV...x2 :3

Good Luck!

Rivals_7 wrote:

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will edit this owo Can I insta rank this can you please if that wouldn't be too much to ask *flees*

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[340.29]

some SVs element from your highest diff could be copied here. considering the diff itself still considerably Hard enough.

00:23:799 (23799|0,23843|1,23887|2,23931|3,23975|0,24019|1,24063|2,24107|3,24152|0,24196|1,24240|2,24284|3,24328|0,24372|1,24416|2,24460|3) - so here we have 4 roll to right lane while you have only 2 roll to the left lane - 00:23:181 (23181|3,23225|2,23269|1,23313|0,23357|3,23402|2,23446|1,23490|0) - . Since the pitch itself doesnt change significantly noticeable, would like to suggest balancing those roll. Just ctrl +g this notes - 00:23:622 (23622|0,23666|1,23799|0,23843|1) - and there you have 4 roll to the left and 3.75 roll to the right (lol). ok thats close but still. Nice lol, thanks

00:29:269 (29269|1,29357|3,29446|1) - quite dont understand why are you suddenly doing trill while the rest, well.... most of them are roll pattern that connects each other simultaneously. or if its intended, pretty sure some place else should have something that similar I was trying to make the stream a bit more varied but yeah, I get what you mean in that it's inconsistent to change the hand movement kind of randomly in the middle.

02:26:534 (146534|3,146534|2,146799|0,146799|1) - would like to see this ctrl+g tho. giving some bounce gimmicks as the song provide it nice idea, applied

02:40:475 (160475|3,160593|3,160740|3) - this jacks looks kinda jarring due to its spacing between each notes lol. my idea would be something like this

the last highlighted note is also placed where the pitch is kinda high so..... applied a little differently like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7741953

02:44:357 (164357|0,164357|1) - suggestion for this one
in 11.186 you use the jack concept, while 9.8 using simple roll patterning. in this diff, since the song kinda provide it, trill would be better imo. so its kind of "difficulty curve" progression (dunno how to rephrase it better aaaa) Oh, that's actually a really good point, nice!

02:51:063 (171063|3) - an LN here? both your highest and lowest diff do that. Ah true, added.

05:17:710 - intentionally missed synth? (Apparently this happen in all diff) Added, not entirely sure if this is consistent with the beginning though but they do sound different. I'd like to get your opinion on it. The similar sound is at 00:12:769 -

[9.8]

05:15:416 (315416|2,315593|3,315769|1,315946|0,316122|2,316299|3,316475|1,316652|0,316828|2,317004|3,317181|1,317357|0,317534|2) - think it would be better if its ctrl+h? shield at - 05:15:063 (315063|3,315593|3) - doesnt seem to be necessary tho cool, applied

Cant find something in your highest diff idk. everything seems decent enough :u
Sorry if this appear to be less helpful than you think ;w;

Ender-Kun wrote:

Oh my god this map is great. I really hope this gets ranked. c: