This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, January 07, 2012 at 11:05:26 PM

Artist: DEEN
Title: Eien no Ashita
Source: Tales of Hearts
Tags: ToH Yunacat Eternal Tomorrow
BPM: 122
Filesize: 3501kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2.74 stars, 132 notes)
2. Hard (4.9 stars, 246 notes)
3. Normal (4.29 stars, 194 notes)
4. Yuna's Relaxing Taiko (4.65 stars, 377 notes)

Download: DEEN - Eien no Ashita
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Tales of Hearts opening.

Enjoy!

Note: The heart sliders are meant to be asymmetrical

O:

Download: DEEN - Eien no Ashita (blissfulyoshi) [Yuna's Relaxing Taiko].osu

[Yuna's Relaxing Taiko]
00:41:875(1-6)-It should be snap in 1/4?
00:57:613(1-6)-Same.

No kuds plz.

Ooooo kanpakyin, thank you! It seems to work either way but I like your suggestion better! :3 ( and why no kudosu!? You made it sound 100x better!! D; )

Download: DEEN - Eien no Ashita (blissfulyoshi) [Yuna's Relaxing Taiko].osu

Okay updated the taiko diff, and since I was incredibly forgetful, I forgot to re-encode the mp3. As a result, the mp3 is updated now using a V3 encode, V2 was too big T_T. (Used foobar for the reencode, so the offset should be the same.)

Hello,


[Easy]

00:44:334 (5) - Extend this slider to the following white tick so that it would fit the lyrics properly.
00:49:744 (1) - Finish sound maybe? Sounds nice while playing.
00:57:613 (1) - I believe that the clap here sounds a bit awkward. Might as well remove it and it will sound better in my opinion.
01:24:498 (1) - Shouldn't this slider begin at the white tick? Would fit the lyrics better, and also might be easier for the "Easy" player to read.
01:49:744 (1) - For this spinner, I would suggest to place inherited timing sections that gradually lower the volume by 20% per section or so. The mp3 lowers its volume gradually, and the spinner is long enough to make a bit of noise at the end.


[Normal]

00:49:744 (1) - Finish the beginning too (?)
00:51:342 (5) - Oopsie! Move it 1/4 ahead, it begins too early!
00:53:555 (1) - Same here as above (?)
01:03:268 (8) - New combo so that another player grabs this part while playing tag (?) hehe
01:05:482 (1) - Finish the beginning (?) Sounds nice I believe.
01:19:990 (9) - New combo to fit the lyrics (?)
01:26:629 (6) - I feel that this ends a tad late. Take the snap divisor to 1/8 and take it back 1/8 to the yellow tick to make it end where it should.
01:49:744 (1) - The same suggestion here as the spinner on Easy.


[Hard]

01:49:744 (1) - Same suggestions here as the spinner on Easy and Normal.



Very nice map!

Sir Minelli wrote:

Hello,


[Easy]

00:44:334 (5) - Extend this slider to the following white tick so that it would fit the lyrics properly. Sure, sounds good to me.
00:49:744 (1) - Finish sound maybe? Sounds nice while playing. Sure.
00:57:613 (1) - I believe that the clap here sounds a bit awkward. Might as well remove it and it will sound better in my opinion. The clap does sound a bit weird, removed
01:24:498 (1) - Shouldn't this slider begin at the white tick? Would fit the lyrics better, and also might be easier for the "Easy" player to read. The lyrics sort of start at the current position, but I really need to care for people who play easier diffs, changed.
01:49:744 (1) - For this spinner, I would suggest to place inherited timing sections that gradually lower the volume by 20% per section or so. The mp3 lowers its volume gradually, and the spinner is long enough to make a bit of noise at the end. Fixed.


[Normal]

00:49:744 (1) - Finish the beginning too (?) Done.
00:51:342 (5) - Oopsie! Move it 1/4 ahead, it begins too early! Woops, nice catch.
00:53:555 (1) - Same here as above (?) I think this one fits the lyrics, so I am keeping it for now, but if more ppl ask, I will change.
01:03:268 (8) - New combo so that another player grabs this part while playing tag (?) hehe Done.
01:05:482 (1) - Finish the beginning (?) Sounds nice I believe. Done.
01:19:990 (9) - New combo to fit the lyrics (?) Done.
01:26:629 (6) - I feel that this ends a tad late. Take the snap divisor to 1/8 and take it back 1/8 to the yellow tick to make it end where it should. Okay moved to the eighth. It fits the lyrics now, but I think some ppl might complain....
01:49:744 (1) - The same suggestion here as the spinner on Easy. Fixed.


[Hard]

01:49:744 (1) - Same suggestions here as the spinner on Easy and Normal. Fixed.

Very nice map! Thanks!

Thanks for modding, you were a big help Minelli. I really need to learn to do hitsounds for songs like these.

Hello from #modreqs

General
Hummm, I guess you forgot about approachcircle.png ~
I think audio lead-in 1.5 will be better

Hard
HP+1, because you are using HP 5 in Normal, Hard might harder than Normal
00:11:383 (2) - imo, remove this note, there is no music in this place
00:13:350 (2) - ^
00:14:826 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - it will be cool if every note here will be louder than previous
00:38:678 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - claps instead of whistles + every note here will be louder than previous
01:49:744 (1) - Don't like hitsounds on this spinner
About hitsounds:
you make claps on red ticks, I suggest to map until kiai time without claps because it's not sounds good.
I totally disagree with your hitsounds at the start, so try my vision of start of this diff in attachments (~20sec)

Normal
As Hard, imo, diff is overwhistled) Follow for the piano with whistles ><
00:04:498 (1) - remove whistle from the end,remove sliderbody whistle. So, i don't hear whistles in right places, because claps are too loud. i suggest to map without claps until kiai.
00:05:236 (3) - remove whistle from the end,remove sliderbody whistle.
00:05:727 (4) - ^
00:09:170 (2) -
00:10:400 (1,2) - whittles need only at the start of sliders
00:12:367 (1,2) - ^
etc etc etc >, <
00:17:777 (1) - 1/2 shorter imo
00:28:104 (x) - add note, or make end of slider here
00:34:744 (4) - 1/2 longer
00:39:908 - finish must be at this point, not 1/2 later at the start of (5)
00:52:203 (6) - imo (timeline) : 00:53:555 (1) - from blue tick? Oo It start from white, 1/4 later
00:53:678 (1,2,3,4,5) - totally disagree, imo rhythm must be (timeline) : 01:49:744 (1) - Don't like hitsounds on this spinner

Easy
00:58:350 (3) - 1/2 longer
Spinner and claps as before

Download: DEEN - Eien no Ashita (blissfulyoshi) [Bla bla bla].osu

Aleks719 wrote:

Hello from #modreqs

General
Hummm, I guess you forgot about approachcircle.png ~ Oops, my mistake.
I think audio lead-in 1.5 will be better Sure.

Hard
HP+1, because you are using HP 5 in Normal, Hard might harder than Normal Done.
00:11:383 (2) - imo, remove this note, there is no music in this place There is a soft drum here that I followed fairly consistently, so I think it is fine imo, but if enough people ask, I'll change it.
00:13:350 (2) - ^ ^
00:14:826 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - it will be cool if every note here will be louder than previous Done.
00:38:678 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - claps instead of whistles + every note here will be louder than previous
01:49:744 (1) - Don't like hitsounds on this spinner Done.
About hitsounds:
you make claps on red ticks, I suggest to map until kiai time without claps because it's not sounds good.
I totally disagree with your hitsounds at the start, so try my vision of start of this diff in attachments (~20sec)

Normal
As Hard, imo, diff is overwhistled) Follow for the piano with whistles ><
00:04:498 (1) - remove whistle from the end,remove sliderbody whistle. So, i don't hear whistles in right places, because claps are too loud. i suggest to map without claps until kiai.
00:05:236 (3) - remove whistle from the end,remove sliderbody whistle.
00:05:727 (4) - ^
00:09:170 (2) -
00:10:400 (1,2) - whittles need only at the start of sliders
00:12:367 (1,2) - ^
etc etc etc >, < Okay, I tried my best to do this... I hope I basically got everything
00:17:777 (1) - 1/2 shorter imo Done.
00:28:104 (x) - add note, or make end of slider here Done.
00:34:744 (4) - 1/2 longer Done.
00:39:908 - finish must be at this point, not 1/2 later at the start of (5) Fixed.
00:52:203 (6) - imo (timeline) :

SPOILER

Personally, I think it fits the lyrics better now, so I am probably goign to keep this one.
00:53:555 (1) - from blue tick? Oo It start from white, 1/4 later Oops, forgot to change this one.
00:53:678 (1,2,3,4,5) - totally disagree, imo rhythm must be (timeline) :

SPOILER

Changed the pattern. Not the same as yours, but I think it fits better than before.
01:49:744 (1) - Don't like hitsounds on this spinner Done.

Easy
00:58:350 (3) - 1/2 longer Done.
Spinner and claps as before

Okay, tried to fix the hitsounds to the best of my ability xD (Not exactly motivated to reply to all of them above, let's just say that I did them xD). Besides that, thanks for the mod, especially the hitsounds. The hitsounds improved the map a great deal.

Hi,bliss!

Caught it in #modreqs

Folder is clean and everything else seems fine to me,as well.

[Easy]
I'm surprised to see that high velocity in Easy,cause yeah,sliders are pretty fast..

Also,I don't really like that almost every note has a whistle hitsound,yeah,it sounds pretty well,but just because default whistle perfectly fits the song.
So,we have "soft-hitnormal" for such purposes,right?
I'd suggest not to use 2 or more whistles in a row,and add them only to specific ticks(red or white),but it's up to you.

00:08:186 (1) - Rotating clockwise by 90 looks better to me.
00:08:924 (1) - Do you need new combo here?
00:10:891 - I was expecting a note here Maybe add it?
00:16:301 - I hear cymbals,add a finish?
00:24:170 (1) - ^
00:25:645 (1) - Remove NC?
00:30:809 (5) - I'm not sure if finish on a red tick is a good idea,cause they generally used to be on downbeats,anyway,if you want to leave this finish,I'd suggest you to add another to 00:30:072.
00:37:941 (1,2,3) - All these objects seem a little off to me
My suggestions are:

1. Remove 00:37:941 (1) and 00:38:678 (2).
2. Make 2 sliders(or any other patterns will come to your mind) using these notes: (00:37:941 - 00:38:678 & 00:38:924 - 00:39:662)

00:41:875 - Finish?
00:42:244 (1) - I wasn't expecting a blue tick here.I'd like you to keep blue ticks within sliders,cause hitting them may cause some troubles between novice players.And,oh,yeah,the spacing is wrong,it should be right between 00:40:154 (3) and 00:42:613 (2).
00:44:334 (5) - Shorten to previous red tick?
00:45:318 (1) - It starts a bit early :< I'd add a circle here,and start that slider from 00:45:809.
00:47:531 (3,4) - I'd re-arrange this,either.
How about this:

1. 00:47:531 (3,4) - Remove both.
2. 00:47:531 - Add a circle.
3. Start a reverse-slider from 00:47:777 with repeat at 00:48:514.

00:52:203 (4) - Shorten to previous white tick? Slider end feels a bit late.
00:53:678 (1) - Finish?
00:55:645 - ^
00:56:137 (5) - I'd suggest to start this slider from 00:56:383(also you could add a finish),and add a circle to the current time(00:56:137).
00:57:613 (1) - Finish?
00:57:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern plays a little weird.You're starting with using blue tick,and then there're sliders that end a bit late
Anyway,I'd suggest to start 00:58:350 (3) from 00:58:596 and a circle here instead,or better reverse-slider starting at 00:57:613 with a reverse at 00:57:982.
01:01:055 (1) - Again,I'd start this slider from the downbeat,cause I need something to click at 01:01:547.
01:06:219 (2) - Add a circle instead and start this slider from the next white tick?
01:07:203 (3) - ^ And maybe cut this slider at 01:08:186?
01:09:416 - I'dd add a note.
01:28:842 (5) - Note sure about this stack

[Normal]
00:08:924 (1) - Remove NC?
00:10:154 - Add a note?
00:16:301 (1) - Cymbals here,add finish.
00:29:580 (3) - It ends too late,shorten to 00:30:072.
00:32:039 (4) - Add finish?
00:41:875 - Remove clap/add finish.
00:52:203 (6) - How about adding a circle here and starting this slider at 00:52:449?
00:53:678 (1) - Change to a reverse-slider with the repeat at 00:54:047?
00:57:613 (1) - Remove clap/add finish.
00:59:580 (5,6) - I'd re-arrange it this way:

1. 00:59:580 (5,6) - Delete both objects.
2. Make a slider using these notes:(00:59:580 - 01:00:072)
3. Add a note to 01:00:318.

01:24:539 (1) - Why not to change to a single note at 01:24:662? It doesn't play so good :<
01:37:941 (1,2,3,4,5) - Jumps in normal?
01:40:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

[Yuna's Relaxing Taiko]
Sorry,I'm not enough confident to mod taiko,but it looks fine to me

[Hard]
00:16:301 (1) - Finish?
00:32:039 (4) - Finish and I'dd add a NC here.
00:41:875 (1) - Remove clap/add finish.
00:43:842 (5,6) - I'd re-arrange it this way:

1. 00:43:842 (5,6) - Remove both.
2. Make a slider using these notes: (00:43:842 - 00:44:334)
3. Complete the rhytm with 00:44:580.

00:57:613 (1) - Remove clap/add finish.
01:00:441 (3) - It might fit with lyrics somehow,but still plays a bit late,move it to previous red tick?
01:11:383 (3) - Finish?
01:17:285 (3) - Remove clap/add finish?
01:24:539 (1,2,3) - Looks a little weird to me I'd remove 01:24:908 (2) and moved 01:24:539 (1) to the next white tick.
01:26:629 (6) - New combo?
01:27:182 (8) - Place right above 01:26:875 (7) to make spacing consistent?

Phew,that's all I think
Sorry if I were too picky,it's just like how I feel..

This song is awesome!
And I liked the map,good luck with it.
Starring~

IceBeam wrote:

Hi,bliss!

Caught it in #modreqs

Folder is clean and everything else seems fine to me,as well.

[Easy]
I'm surprised to see that high velocity in Easy,cause yeah,sliders are pretty fast..

Also,I don't really like that almost every note has a whistle hitsound,yeah,it sounds pretty well,but just because default whistle perfectly fits the song.
So,we have "soft-hitnormal" for such purposes,right?
I'd suggest not to use 2 or more whistles in a row,and add them only to specific ticks(red or white),but it's up to you.

00:08:186 (1) - Rotating clockwise by 90 looks better to me. I actually like the current position better... 90 degrees turn seemed to have a strange flow imo.
00:08:924 (1) - Do you need new combo here? The previous note sounds sort of unique musically, but it can go either way.
00:10:891 - I was expecting a note here Maybe add it? Sure.
00:16:301 - I hear cymbals,add a finish? So soft, I can barely hear it. I don't think a finish hitsound fits it if it is that soft.
00:24:170 (1) - ^ ^
00:25:645 (1) - Remove NC? The previous combo seems to be one complete line in the lyrics, so I think the new combo is fine.
00:30:809 (5) - I'm not sure if finish on a red tick is a good idea,cause they generally used to be on downbeats,anyway,if you want to leave this finish,I'd suggest you to add another to 00:30:072. Fixed.
00:37:941 (1,2,3) - All these objects seem a little off to me Sounds okay to me.
My suggestions are:

1. Remove 00:37:941 (1) and 00:38:678 (2).
2. Make 2 sliders(or any other patterns will come to your mind) using these notes: (00:37:941 - 00:38:678 & 00:38:924 - 00:39:662)

I tried looking through this for slider patterns (circle patterns are too hard imo) that would fit the diff and the song, but I can't think of anything that fits that well. As a result, I am keeping it as is for now.
00:41:875 - Finish? Done.
00:42:244 (1) - I wasn't expecting a blue tick here.I'd like you to keep blue ticks within sliders,cause hitting them may cause some troubles between novice players.And,oh,yeah,the spacing is wrong,it should be right between 00:40:154 (3) and 00:42:613 (2).Fixed the spacing
00:44:334 (5) - Shorten to previous red tick? The vocals end on the white tick, so I think it is fine. Plus, it make a white difference between the next note.
00:45:318 (1) - It starts a bit early :< I'd add a circle here,and start that slider from 00:45:809. I don't think a circle will make this any easier. Sliders have a more lenient hit time, so it is probably better for this situation.
00:47:531 (3,4) - I'd re-arrange this,either.
How about this:

1. 00:47:531 (3,4) - Remove both.
2. 00:47:531 - Add a circle.
3. Start a reverse-slider from 00:47:777 with repeat at 00:48:514.

Changed it, but not in the way you suggested.
00:52:203 (4) - Shorten to previous white tick? Slider end feels a bit late. It feels fine to me.
00:53:678 (1) - Finish? Fine.
00:55:645 - ^ Changed, sounds a little weird though in the middle of a combo.
00:56:137 (5) - I'd suggest to start this slider from 00:56:383(also you could add a finish),and add a circle to the current time(00:56:137). I tried to single red tick differences in Easy, so no
00:57:613 (1) - Finish? Sure.
00:57:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern plays a little weird.You're starting with using blue tick,and then there're sliders that end a bit late
Anyway,I'd suggest to start 00:58:350 (3) from 00:58:596 and a circle here instead,or better reverse-slider starting at 00:57:613 with a reverse at 00:57:982. It does play a little weird, but I don't think your suggestion fits my style very well, so I'll keep it until I can think of a better solution
01:01:055 (1) - Again,I'd start this slider from the downbeat,cause I need something to click at 01:01:547. Sure.
01:06:219 (2) - Add a circle instead and start this slider from the next white tick? I think the 3/4 combined with the 1/2 interval will not be great for this diff. On top of that, the white tick is not that strong here imo.
01:07:203 (3) - ^ And maybe cut this slider at 01:08:186? It follows the lyrics, so it should be fine.
01:09:416 - I'dd add a note. Want to only keep lyrical snaps here, so no.
01:28:842 (5) - Note sure about this stack Yeah... not too sure either, but I don't like the look of stack leniency here.

[Normal]
00:08:924 (1) - Remove NC? Same as Easy.
00:10:154 - Add a note? I wanted to follow the piano holds only here, so no.
00:16:301 (1) - Cymbals here,add finish. Same as Easy.
00:29:580 (3) - It ends too late,shorten to 00:30:072. I thought about this, but the lyrics end on the red tick and not the white tick. If I wanted to follow where the lyrics start, then I need to end earlier than the white tick, which is something I don't want.
00:32:039 (4) - Add finish? Done.
00:41:875 - Remove clap/add finish. Done.
00:52:203 (6) - How about adding a circle here and starting this slider at 00:52:449? The second word starts on the blue tick so I made the slider such it bonces back on that blue tick. Also, don't like to do too many 3/4 differences in Normal... (probably did too many of them anyway)
00:53:678 (1) - Change to a reverse-slider with the repeat at 00:54:047? I don't think that line of lyrics is strong enough to justify a repeat imo.
00:57:613 (1) - Remove clap/add finish. Done.
00:59:580 (5,6) - I'd re-arrange it this way:

1. 00:59:580 (5,6) - Delete both objects.
2. Make a slider using these notes:(00:59:580 - 01:00:072)
3. Add a note to 01:00:318.

The ending of the lyrics is a little early, so since sliders are more lenient on timings, I rather have the slider ending.
01:24:539 (1) - Why not to change to a single note at 01:24:662? It doesn't play so good :< Changed the pattern a bit, but not the way you did it because I want to keep the lyrical snap I used so far.
01:37:941 (1,2,3,4,5) - Jumps in normal? Why not? I don't think they are that difficult
01:40:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^

[Yuna's Relaxing Taiko]
Sorry,I'm not enough confident to mod taiko,but it looks fine to me

[Hard]
00:16:301 (1) - Finish? Same as Easy.
00:32:039 (4) - Finish and I'dd add a NC here. Added a finish, and I think I don't need a NC here.
00:41:875 (1) - Remove clap/add finish. Done.
00:43:842 (5,6) - I'd re-arrange it this way:

1. 00:43:842 (5,6) - Remove both.
2. Make a slider using these notes: (00:43:842 - 00:44:334)
3. Complete the rhytm with 00:44:580.

This diff makes a lot of the lyrics have their own slider and end right before the next word starts. Doing this will not exactly fit the style so no.
00:57:613 (1) - Remove clap/add finish. Done.
01:00:441 (3) - It might fit with lyrics somehow,but still plays a bit late,move it to previous red tick? It feels late, but the red note does not help it T_T. Just tried making it a slider and it sort of works, so going to use that now.
01:11:383 (3) - Finish? Done.
01:17:285 (3) - Remove clap/add finish? Sure.
01:24:539 (1,2,3) - Looks a little weird to me I'd remove 01:24:908 (2) and moved 01:24:539 (1) to the next white tick. Same as 00:43:842 (5,6)
01:26:629 (6) - New combo? It sounds like one line of lyrics, so I think it is fine.
01:27:182 (8) - Place right above 01:26:875 (7) to make spacing consistent? Following distance snap here, so I think it is fine.

Phew,that's all I think
Sorry if I were too picky,it's just like how I feel..

This song is awesome!
And I liked the map,good luck with it.
Starring~

Sorry it is taking me so long to reply to these mod post. Thanks a lot for such a long post xD. Your ideas helped a fair bit. (Wow, that took a long time to type xD)

I never knew BAT's posted on #modreqs, too.

Easy:
00:07:203 (6,7) - I feel like the current position of these two after the slider impedes the flow, position on the other side or have it form an arc with (3)?
00:10:400 (3) - 1 grid up and 3 grids right? In order to have (2) wrap around (3), otherwise it looks uncomfortably close.
00:25:645 (1) - Have this be a copy of 00:24:170 (1) - , or make some other pattern- I can't tell how it fits in right now.
00:29:580 (3) - Made that symmetrical for you:

184,264,29580,2,0,B|112:272|128:176|56:184,1,160,2|6

00:45:318 (1) - I love the effect of the bounces occuring with the vocals, but perhaps make the first two bounces identical since they have the same length in time?
00:52:203 (4) - Make this a copy of (2)
00:53:678 (1) - I always get a sense of disconnect whenever an angular slider is placed in a section that is all curved sliders. (Whereas later with the 3 angular sliders they feel more natural)
01:19:990 (4) - Move this note 1/2 beat earlier? That's where I kept expecting it, at any rate.

Normal:
00:40:154 (5) - Move this 1/2 beat earlier- again, I keep expecting this to start on the white tick. Place a circle at 00:41:875, if you do this, to start off the next section.
00:43:842 (4,6) - Why use asymmetrical sliders here if they're not wrapping around anything?
00:53:186- Place a circle here?
01:01:547 (3) - Even though I normally can't do hitsounding, it sounds like this note is missing a clap- based on the patterns of claps every 2 beats.
01:16:055 (7) - Is there a particular reason for not putting this where (3) was, so that (6) will wrap around it?

Hard:
00:13:842 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - If you're doing the "increasing distance spacing" thing, the effect is cooler if the pattern between each set of distance spacing is kept the same because it becomes more pronounced.
00:34:006 (2,3,4) - Spent an hour making this symmetric for you:

316,280,34006,2,0,B|256:312|196:280,1,125,2|0
256,192,34498,1,2
160,220,34744,2,0,B|144:164|164:112|200:84|256:56|312:84|348:112|368:164|352:220,1,375,2|0

00:43:842 (5) - Curve this around (4) better?
00:56:137 (6,7,8,1) - Make into a perfect square, or at least a rhombus.
01:34:990 (5,7) - I don't like the shape of these arcs, perhaps a half-circle instead?

Nice song and maps, I really liked the sliders wrapping around each other. Though I don't think I would ever have to patience to make a map like that myself . Starred! And thanks for all the feedback on AIBat, it's really quite helpful.

I don't suppose you'd have time for mod4mod?

Hi.

Easy:
00:40:154 (3) - Probably make the slider start at 00:39:908 but extend it to where kiai starts? and then add a note at 00:41:875? I thought it sounds better because the slider is like the singer holding the note. :3
01:43:842 (6,1) - I don't know about you, but I don't think this should happen on easy. I see you spaced the previous combo with 1.2x but this is spaced about 1.5x.

Normal:
00:40:154 (5) - Same note as above.
01:20:236 (2) -

Hard:
00:08:186 (1,2,3) - Maybe make this triple touch each other in a triangle instead of having a space between?
00:40:154 (5) - NC?
01:28:104 (9) - I thought the slider beginning looked rather weird. I don't know how to explain it, but uh...Maybe move the second anchor one grid down and the first anchor 4 grid right?

Anyways It's a BAT map. Hard to find errors. I tried orz

akrolsmir wrote:

I never knew BAT's posted on #modreqs, too.

Easy:
00:07:203 (6,7) - I feel like the current position of these two after the slider impedes the flow, position on the other side or have it form an arc with (3)? I feel weird going off to the right, and that arc looks a little weird. I just spread them out a bit (not really liking how of any of these patterns look though)
00:10:400 (3) - 1 grid up and 3 grids right? In order to have (2) wrap around (3), otherwise it looks uncomfortably close. Sure.
00:25:645 (1) - Have this be a copy of 00:24:170 (1) - , or make some other pattern- I can't tell how it fits in right now. I don't think making it a copy will have a decent impact. I think just having it leading to the next note is fine.
00:29:580 (3) - Made that symmetrical for you: Thanks.

184,264,29580,2,0,B|112:272|128:176|56:184,1,160,2|6

00:45:318 (1) - I love the effect of the bounces occuring with the vocals, but perhaps make the first two bounces identical since they have the same length in time? Not exactly sure what you wanted here, so I changed the last little bit slghtly.
00:52:203 (4) - Make this a copy of (2) Okay.
00:53:678 (1) - I always get a sense of disconnect whenever an angular slider is placed in a section that is all curved sliders. (Whereas later with the 3 angular sliders they feel more natural) Done.
01:19:990 (4) - Move this note 1/2 beat earlier? That's where I kept expecting it, at any rate. I think people can follow the lyrics, so it should be fine.

Normal:
00:40:154 (5) - Move this 1/2 beat earlier- again, I keep expecting this to start on the white tick. Place a circle at 00:41:875, if you do this, to start off the next section. I follow the lyrical snap better, so I rather have it as the current pattern.
00:43:842 (4,6) - Why use asymmetrical sliders here if they're not wrapping around anything? Adds variety xD (I get tired of symmetrical sliders, and they are annoying to do at times xD)
00:53:186- Place a circle here? Since I am using a mostly lyrical snap, a note here doesn't fit that well imo.
01:01:547 (3) - Even though I normally can't do hitsounding, it sounds like this note is missing a clap- based on the patterns of claps every 2 beats. Fixed.
01:16:055 (7) - Is there a particular reason for not putting this where (3) was, so that (6) will wrap around it? I originally thought that the pattern just felt too stagnant if I kept it like that, but I guess I will change it.

Hard:
00:13:842 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - If you're doing the "increasing distance spacing" thing, the effect is cooler if the pattern between each set of distance spacing is kept the same because it becomes more pronounced. I wanted to only up the distance snap in segments, so I think the current pattern is fine.
00:34:006 (2,3,4) - Spent an hour making this symmetric for you:

316,280,34006,2,0,B|256:312|196:280,1,125,2|0
256,192,34498,1,2
160,220,34744,2,0,B|144:164|164:112|200:84|256:56|312:84|348:112|368:164|352:220,1,375,2|0

Yay, ty
00:43:842 (5) - Curve this around (4) better? I slightly improved it..........
00:56:137 (6,7,8,1) - Make into a perfect square, or at least a rhombus. T_T, failing. Made a rhombus now.
01:34:990 (5,7) - I don't like the shape of these arcs, perhaps a half-circle instead? Space constraints made me have to use arcs, and I don't think it looks that bad.

Nice song and maps, I really liked the sliders wrapping around each other. Though I don't think I would ever have to patience to make a map like that myself . Starred! And thanks for all the feedback on AIBat, it's really quite helpful. You're welcome

I don't suppose you'd have time for mod4mod? I don't really like doing mod4mod, sorry.

Thanks a lot for the mod akrolsmir, and I hope you keep developing AIBat

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi.

Easy:
00:40:154 (3) - Probably make the slider start at 00:39:908 but extend it to where kiai starts? and then add a note at 00:41:875? I thought it sounds better because the slider is like the singer holding the note. :3 From what I can hear, "-wer" starts on 00:40:154 and "pow" starts on 00:39:662, so changing to the pattern you suggested doesn't fit imo.
01:43:842 (6,1) - I don't know about you, but I don't think this should happen on easy. I see you spaced the previous combo with 1.2x but this is spaced about 1.5x. Since there is a fair amount of time between notes, I found it easy enough for a easy. Also, it fits the song fairly well imo.

Normal:
00:40:154 (5) - Same note as above. Same as above.
01:20:236 (2) - ?

Hard:
00:08:186 (1,2,3) - Maybe make this triple touch each other in a triangle instead of having a space between? The space is what makes it fun though.
00:40:154 (5) - NC? It feels like the same musical phrase as before, so I think it is okay.
01:28:104 (9) - I thought the slider beginning looked rather weird. I don't know how to explain it, but uh...Maybe move the second anchor one grid down and the first anchor 4 grid right? Looks pretty good, done.

Anyways It's a BAT map. Hard to find errors. I tried orz No map is perfect. There will always e something to find xD

Thanks for modding Raging Bull. I know it might be a little difficult to find errors, but you found something I used. In the end, thanks for trying (I advise you always keep trying and you will eventually get better)

My modding

Easy:
Perfect, No changes neccessary

Normal:
00:29:580 (3) - Don't really like the shape of that slider, may try making it sort of perfect-curve like 1 and 2. Perhaps also start it from a different starting point than where 1 started.
00:51:342 (5) - Perhaps starting from a different point
01:02:777 (7) - Make it a hit circle rather than a slider?
01:08:432 (8) - Suggestion : Make the slider end here
01:08:678 (+) - Carries on from ("01:08:432 suggestion" Start a new slider here?)
01:39:662 (1 and 2) - Not stacked?

Taiko :
Can't mod Taiko, sorry

Hard :
00:04:498 (1) - Maybe make it curve?
00:14:334 (1) - Make this a yellow 5, due to its position?
00:48:514 (3) - Not a big fan of the shape of this slider, maybe work your 'curvy magic' on it.
01:27:244 (8) - Distance different from 6 -> 7?

Hope this was of some help

Annie the Eagle wrote:

My modding

Easy:
Perfect, No changes neccessary

Normal:
00:29:580 (3) - Don't really like the shape of that slider, may try making it sort of perfect-curve like 1 and 2. Perhaps also start it from a different starting point than where 1 started. I personally wanted it to start on 1, and it follows 2's curve, so I think it is fine. I am open to another pattern if you propose one.
00:51:342 (5) - Perhaps starting from a different point Why? It looks fairly neat right now.
01:02:777 (7) - Make it a hit circle rather than a slider? His voice is held a bit here, so I think a slider fits better.
01:08:432 (8) - Suggestion : Make the slider end here
01:08:678 (+) - Carries on from ("01:08:432 suggestion" Start a new slider here?) I think the current one fits fine. The slider is made that the word changes when you exit the loop.
01:39:662 (1 and 2) - Not stacked? ? I guess you are seeing the stack leniency which I have to have.

Taiko :
Can't mod Taiko, sorry

Hard :
00:04:498 (1) - Maybe make it curve? I like the straight line fits with symmetry of the previous combo so I think it is fine.
00:14:334 (1) - Make this a yellow 5, due to its position? Combos follow the musical patterns not positions for the most part in this map, and since it is consistent with previous combos, it is fine.
00:48:514 (3) - Not a big fan of the shape of this slider, maybe work your 'curvy magic' on it. Okay, changed it.
01:27:244 (8) - Distance different from 6 -> 7? It is distance snapped, so it is fine.

Hope this was of some help

Thanks for modding Annie.

All got it from #modreps D:
That is why the red name make it special and the mod post seems that's many error. D:
BAT is not a good job XD

- Insane
00:04:498 (1,2,3) - I just think that is ugly D: Can 3 and 1 is the smae slider and Ctrl + < again and put it on the right space?
01:07:203 (6) - New combo
01:27:121 (8) - Just put it on 01:27:121 is okey I think. And check the spacing
00:02:285 (1) - Remove new combo and add it for 00:02:531 (2)

- Normal
00:40:154 (5) - New combo?
01:28:104 (8) - ^?

- All
That's a good song :3
Good luck STAR

KingsAL2 wrote:

All got it from #modreps D:
That is why the red name make it special and the mod post seems that's many error. D: xD T_T
BAT is not a good job XD

- Insane It is only hard T_T xD
00:04:498 (1,2,3) - I just think that is ugly D: Can 3 and 1 is the smae slider and Ctrl + < again and put it on the right space? What was I thinking here...? Made 1 wrap around 2 in a circular shape.
01:07:203 (6) - New combo Since I made my other lyrical combos follow changes in pitch like that, it is fine.
01:27:121 (8) - Just put it on 01:27:121 is okey I think. And check the spacing I guess I should give in and just use the slightly bad spacing. Placed on top of the 2 sliders.
00:02:285 (1) - Remove new combo and add it for 00:02:531 (2) I think it is okay for not being on the downbeat.

- Normal
00:40:154 (5) - New combo? Nah, I think the current combo fits together as one lyrical phrase.
01:28:104 (8) - ^? ^ (thinking if I want red color hearts though...., maybe another time)

- All
That's a good song :3
Good luck STAR

Thanks for modding KingsAL2

Love the song.

[Easy]
00:40:154 (3) - This sounds and feels weird starting on that red tick. Personally I'd bring it back half a beat and make it go for a full bar.
01:49:744 (1) - That's a killer long spinner for Easy!

Normal
00:16:301 (1) - One left maybe? The gap between that and the previous (3) is pretty squishy.
00:40:154 (5) - Same suggestion for the slider in Easy. I can imagine it would be pretty painful remapping that heart though...

[Hard]
00:07:449 (4) - Maybe move this down and right a bit to be symmetrical with the start of slider [00:06:465 (2)].
00:52:203 (8,9) - I'd end the (8) on the blue tick at 00:52:572 and start (9) on the white tick at 00:52:695.
01:16:793 (1) - One right to line up with the (3) slider of the same combo.
01:28:104 (9) - I know you said they aren't meant to be symmetrical, but the start of this heart really kicks out at a weird angle. It's nothing like the hearts in the other diffs.

<3

Samah wrote:

Love the song.

[Easy]
00:40:154 (3) - This sounds and feels weird starting on that red tick. Personally I'd bring it back half a beat and make it go for a full bar. It fits the lyrics and it is a white tick distance from the previous note, so I think it is fine.
01:49:744 (1) - That's a killer long spinner for Easy! I thought Easy diffs are supposed to have longer sliders...

Normal
00:16:301 (1) - One left maybe? The gap between that and the previous (3) is pretty squishy. Fixed.
00:40:154 (5) - Same suggestion for the slider in Easy. I can imagine it would be pretty painful remapping that heart though... Same as Easy.

[Hard]
00:07:449 (4) - Maybe move this down and right a bit to be symmetrical with the start of slider [00:06:465 (2)]. Wanted 3,4 to point toward the center of 2's slider, so I am fine with the current pattern.
00:52:203 (8,9) - I'd end the (8) on the blue tick at 00:52:572 and start (9) on the white tick at 00:52:695. I really want it to follow the lyrics, but I do hear the piano. Since the thing was setup to be a lyrical snap, I'll keep it for now, but with this many people wanting it, I'm willing to change it if 1-2 more ppl ask.
01:16:793 (1) - One right to line up with the (3) slider of the same combo. Oops, nice catch.
01:28:104 (9) - I know you said they aren't meant to be symmetrical, but the start of this heart really kicks out at a weird angle. It's nothing like the hearts in the other diffs. Not exactly sure how to fix this, if you have a suggestion, I am willing to change it, but I do agree that it does look slightly strange.

<3

Thanks for modding Samah