1. Hard (2.18 stars, 63 notes)
2. Lively (2.74 stars, 67 notes)
3. Normal (1.49 stars, 40 notes)

1. Your key sounding too similiar with music and I think this one unrankable, because your key sounding blend too much with the music which make a bad feedback whether we hit or miss the note while we playing. Therefore we still need default soft-hitnormal as the basis of the key sounding, so we'll get a better feedback
2. Your comboing should be more consistent at least on whole diffs
3. Check aimod, any unsnaped slider end can be adjusted by manual edit the .osu in case you still find trouble to fix that
4. Use my bg pleaseee http://makosakata.s-ul.eu/X8B0Ibxu , as the song is quite and chill, I think that bg fit well the music
5. In case you are need custom combo colors:
   

   [Colours]
   
   Combo1: 249,206,238
   Combo2: 224,205,255
   Combo3: 193,240,251
   Combo4: 220,249,168
   Combo5: 255,235,175
   
   SliderBorder: 65,240,201
   SliderTrackOverride: 0,0,0

1. 00:08:570 (1) - Why nc? I think it shouldn't be nc'd to keep consistency with previous two 00:00:280 (1,2) - and 00:04:088 (1,2) - that one seems random to me lol
2. 00:09:741 (4,5) - I think the shape and flow could be improved on that one, something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7310205 more appealing imo than the current one
3. 00:14:183 - Your 100% volume on hitnormal S:C99 too loud imo and seems unreasonable to me
4. 00:15:120 - Same as above
5. 00:19:808 (1) - You can ctrl+g that for a better flow between 00:19:105 (5,1) -
6. 00:23:558 (1,2) - Maybe ctrl+g both for a better rhythm? due to music the 1/4 here 00:23:676 - doesn't make sense imo, it will be better if you ctrl+g those two so you can cover the violin sounds here 00:23:793 -
7. 00:29:665 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Omg your volume, that should be decreased gradually due to music

1. 00:00:280 (1) - How about ctrl+h on that one into https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7310261? it seems how we turn on (1,2) a bit too sharp and too harsh to play as the first note imo
2. 00:06:213 (3) - The shape seems random lol, maybe copy-paste the previous one 00:05:504 (2) - ? I think it could be more paralel or something on that one https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7310231
3. 00:14:183 - Your 100% volume on hitnormal S:C99 too loud imo and seems unreasonable to me
4. 00:15:120 - Same as above
5. 00:23:558 (1,2) - Maybe ctrl+g both for a better rhythm? due to music the 1/4 here 00:23:676 - doesn't make sense imo, it will be better if you ctrl+g those two so you can cover the violin sounds here 00:23:793 -
6. 00:26:371 (4) - You can flip that for better flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7310248 ? Otherwise it will be too repetitive on these three 00:25:902 (3,4,5) -
7. 00:27:543 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Random nc imo, yet the timing on that one still constant
8. 00:29:665 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Volume, that should be decreased gradually due to music

1. 00:04:090 (3) - Maybe ctrl+j for a better flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7310292 ?
2. 00:12:308 (7) - Both shape and flow not really appealing imo, how about replace into something like http://puu.sh/u0yNo/49c4da3859.jpg ? I think both visual and gameplay better like that
3. 00:14:183 - Your 100% volume on hitnormal S:C99 too loud imo and seems unreasonable to me
4. 00:15:120 - Same as above
5. 00:17:935 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - As you are not have Easy diff, I sugest you to tone down that part. Basically 1/2 beat on that part a bit too much imo, the notes density quite harsh on that one, try to delete some 1/2 or replace it by 1/1 slider instead
6. 00:17:935 (1,2,3,4) - The placement a bit too forced lol, maybe you can try another patterning? so at least the movement less redundant
7. 00:29:186 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Avoid unnecessary stacking on lower diff lol, as the guideline for stacking not finalized yet, but I think you should avoid any weird stacking as long as posible on lower diff like this, furthermore the timing on that one was changing lol it's even harder to distinguish its correct timing
8. 00:29:667 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Volume, that should be decreased gradually due to music

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello! Hello~
Some small sugestion,

General

1. Your key sounding too similiar with music and I think this one unrankable, because your key sounding blend too much with the music which make a bad feedback whether we hit or miss the note while we playing. Therefore we still need default soft-hitnormal as the basis of the key sounding, so we'll get a better feedback True, I'll add a default hitsound later :3
2. Your comboing should be more consistent at least on whole diffs Tried to.
3. Check aimod, any unsnaped slider end can be adjusted by manual edit the .osu in case you still find trouble to fix that Okay~
4. Use my bg pleaseee http://makosakata.s-ul.eu/X8B0Ibxu , as the song is quite and chill, I think that bg fit well the music Thanks for the BG! :3
5. In case you are need custom combo colors:
   

   [Colours]
   
   Combo1: 249,206,238
   Combo2: 224,205,255
   Combo3: 193,240,251
   Combo4: 220,249,168
   Combo5: 255,235,175
   
   SliderBorder: 65,240,201
   SliderTrackOverride: 0,0,0

   xD Thanks too for the colors.

Insane

1. 00:08:570 (1) - Why nc? I think it shouldn't be nc'd to keep consistency with previous two 00:00:280 (1,2) - and 00:04:088 (1,2) - that one seems random to me lol I put an NC since it's a new phase, a different section of music from before.
2. 00:09:741 (4,5) - I think the shape and flow could be improved on that one, something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7310205 more appealing imo than the current one Not a fan of that slider shape, but I rotated the flow anyways.
3. 00:14:183 - Your 100% volume on hitnormal S:C99 too loud imo and seems unreasonable to me Yeah xD I haven't work on that one lol
4. 00:15:120 - Same as above
5. 00:19:808 (1) - You can ctrl+g that for a better flow between 00:19:105 (5,1) - Sure.
6. 00:23:558 (1,2) - Maybe ctrl+g both for a better rhythm? due to music the 1/4 here 00:23:676 - doesn't make sense imo, it will be better if you ctrl+g those two so you can cover the violin sounds here 00:23:793 - Actually I liked the current one, on how the rhythm fits the guitars at 00:23:558 - and 00:23:676 - because from the beginning, my main focus of instrument is the guitar.
7. 00:29:665 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Omg your volume, that should be decreased gradually due to music xD yeah I noticed that, I'll fix those things when everything's done.

Hard

1. 00:00:280 (1) - How about ctrl+h on that one into https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7310261? it seems how we turn on (1,2) a bit too sharp and too harsh to play as the first note imo Okay~
2. 00:06:213 (3) - The shape seems random lol, maybe copy-paste the previous one 00:05:504 (2) - ? I think it could be more paralel or something on that one https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7310231 Actually the shape is pretty similar to 00:01:753 (3) - so it's not random imo. I changed the place anyways.
3. 00:14:183 - Your 100% volume on hitnormal S:C99 too loud imo and seems unreasonable to me Yup, I'll fix those.
4. 00:15:120 - Same as above
5. 00:23:558 (1,2) - Maybe ctrl+g both for a better rhythm? due to music the 1/4 here 00:23:676 - doesn't make sense imo, it will be better if you ctrl+g those two so you can cover the violin sounds here 00:23:793 - Nope, as I explained above.
6. 00:26:371 (4) - You can flip that for better flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7310248 ? Otherwise it will be too repetitive on these three 00:25:902 (3,4,5) - I wanted to make players notice that those sounds are similar, but fixed anyway. :3
7. 00:27:543 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Random nc imo, yet the timing on that one still constant Not random at all, if you can see that those two patterns, 00:27:543 (1,2) - and 00:28:246 (1,2) - is the same, so I think an NC would be good.
8. 00:29:665 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Volume, that should be decreased gradually due to music Yeah.

Normal

1. 00:04:090 (3) - Maybe ctrl+j for a better flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7310292 ? Okie~
2. 00:12:308 (7) - Both shape and flow not really appealing imo, how about replace into something like http://puu.sh/u0yNo/49c4da3859.jpg ? I think both visual and gameplay better like that Okay, Changed.
3. 00:14:183 - Your 100% volume on hitnormal S:C99 too loud imo and seems unreasonable to me
4. 00:15:120 - Same as above
5. 00:17:935 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - As you are not have Easy diff, I sugest you to tone down that part. Basically 1/2 beat on that part a bit too much imo, the notes density quite harsh on that one, try to delete some 1/2 or replace it by 1/1 slider instead Hmm I think no, because if you notice at Hard, I almost map all the 1/2s. If I lower the rhythm density there, the difficulty spread would be disturbed. And it's not as hard as you see because i put some reversed sliders.
6. 00:17:935 (1,2,3,4) - The placement a bit too forced lol, maybe you can try another patterning? so at least the movement less redundant Hmm may I know why's the placement looked forced? @_@ And the movement isn't that complex as I can see
7. 00:29:186 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Avoid unnecessary stacking on lower diff lol, as the guideline for stacking not finalized yet, but I think you should avoid any weird stacking as long as posible on lower diff like this, furthermore the timing on that one was changing lol it's even harder to distinguish its correct timing For this, it's a maybe yes maybe not imo. Because if you try unstacking those circles like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7319717 The movement will be another problem to Normal players, and also as you said the timing changes affects those notes. So it's better not to stack imo.
8. 00:29:667 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Volume, that should be decreased gradually due to music

Actually really neat, just make sure to polish some parts

Mark101 wrote:

Hello! M4M.

[General]

• You should search for a new wallpaper, add something related to HoneyWorks or this movie. Okay, but if I can't search any I'll still be using this :3
  Maybe use 00:07:360 - as preview point. I set the preview point now, it's at 00:15:120 -

[Insane]

[list:1337]
Nothing relevant to say about this difficulty
00:01:022 (2,3,4) - You should silence all sliderends. Done.
00:01:022 (2,3,4) - ^
00:04:796 (2,3,4) - ^
00:06:213 (4) - Move the last white point a bit more to left, the slidershape would be much cuter https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7322497 Done
00:11:148 (6) - Add a NC, the "mood" of the song changes here. Players may also confuse with the large spacing of the followpoint. Okay.
00:15:355 (6) - Would be much cuter if you change it like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7322528 Nope, I wanted to emphasize the guitars at 00:15:355 - and 00:15:472 - . There're like double guitars but actually it's one.
00:18:167 (5,6,7) - Feels pretty weird, the slider should be placed on 00:18:402 (6) - instead of 00:18:636 (7) -. Sliderends shouldn't end on a "strong" (in this case, there's only a piano note) sound. I'm pretty sure that this's fine because I made 00:22:386 (8,9,10) - 's piano unclickable in some places too. And actually the note is not as strong as 00:19:105 - and 00:19:339 - so I think it's fine. Will change if someone mod this again.
00:21:918 (6,7,8) - ^. Also, you should put a NC on 00:22:621 (after you fix what I said before.), there's a new sound section. I fixed the NC.
00:24:027 (3) - Pretty unncecessary, feels also very weird. Make 00:23:676 (2) - finish on 00:24:027 - No, this part's rhythm is actually similar to 00:16:527 (2) - the only difference is the guitars. imo making the slider longer is pretty weird for a sound like this. But will change if someone mod it again.
00:24:965 (6) - What about making a long slider? The sounds on 00:25:668 (7,8,9) - are so low that it feels you're tapping nothing. I actually realized this as someone said this. But making a long slider and just follow the strings aren't right too since it'd reduce the rhythm density much.

[Hard]

• 
  Silence the sliderends as I said for the Insane
  00:09:976 (4) - I don't really like this shape... Here are two alternatives: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7322619 | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7322626 xd why but it's a nice slider shape.
  The spacing you used for 00:17:230 (4,1) - etc. doesn't make sense, lol. The intensity of the sound is the same and dividing sections in this way isn't a good idea No I wasn't dividing sections, but I'm emphasizing the music as you can hear that 00:17:464 (1) - is a strong sound.
  00:23:676 (2,3) - As I said for the Insane, this feels horribly, especially on a hard diff. Make 00:23:676 (2) - longer. Will consider.
  00:24:965 (1) - Shape it like this owo: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7322653 Okay~
  00:28:012 (2,1) - The big spacing between these two objects doesn't make sense, you always used a low spacing. Actually not always but fixed~

[Normal]

• 
  Didn't really find anything for this tbh.
  00:04:090 (3) - Add a NC Fixed.
  00:11:150 (4) - ^. Explained the reason for this before. Yeah. Fixed.

RainbowChaos wrote:

Hi, M4M from my queue

Normal

Try to avoid making objects too close together since it can be very confusing for new players when combined with the low AR. After 00:17:933, the objects are very close to each other. Okay.

Hard

1. 00:04:088 (5) NC should start here Nope, it's not the downbeat.
2. 00:07:842 (4) ^
3. 00:21:918 (2,3,4) I think 2 and 3 should be removed since there is no sound for them. However there is a more significant sound where 3 ends so maybe place a circle stacked on top of 4 there There is a sound.
4. 00:29:665 (2,1) The movement from 2 to 1 is a little awkward. I don't think it's awkward but fixed anyway.
5. 00:32:292 (2) Maybe a spinner to end instead? Hmm... No here I think. As you see I'm following the guitars. Will look for more mods tho.

Insane

1. 00:15:355 (6) NC here Nope, as stated above.
2. 00:16:761 (3) I don't think this should be a reverse slider since nowhere else in the song does it use a reverse for that part. The reverse is actually for following the holding sound and the instrument at 00:16:995 - . So, no change here.
3. 00:25:668 (7) I think there should be an NC here so that the combo isn't so long and also there is a change in instrument mapped here. Okay.
4. 00:28:481 (2,3) Try swapping their positions for a bit more emphasis when the rotation changes direction No here, I like mine more :3 and I don't think an emphasis would work here as they sounded the same each other.

Such a nice and relaxing song. Hope this helps you out and good luck with the map!

Left wrote:

maybe it's pending state without keysound i think..? Yeah, I'll move it to the Pending state after the keysound is finished.

M4M

[Normal]
o fix unsnaps first.. I'll mod this after fixed all Fixed.

[Hard]
00:01:022 (2,3,4) - I found sounds of tail too loud.. this part is quiet, only that hitnormal sound is super big. can use default one. I didn't put any hitnormal?
00:04:088 (5) - NC is different with insane, make it consistent pls Removed NC in Insane.
00:07:842 (4) - NC Removed too
00:17:464 (1,2,3) - unnecessary DS change, for better look just use same DS pls Nope, the DS change is intended for emphasizing 00:17:464 - .

[Insane]
NC used fewer than Hard, just using NC like Hard is better i think Okay~

00:13:714 (3,4,5) - can make this two red line's length same? http://puu.sh/ua44Q/aabb038a08.jpg it will make better look Okay.
00:24:730 (5,6) - can improve blanket Okay.

map is too short and solid, nothing to pick lol
call me if normal is fixed

Janpai wrote:

IRC about keysounding =w=

log

2017-02-24 16:04 William K: Yo Janpa Senpai
2017-02-24 16:04 William K: may I ask for help xD
2017-02-24 16:06 Janpai: sure
2017-02-24 16:07 Janpai: btw hi xd
2017-02-24 16:07 William K: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1210572 HoneyWorks - Ohayou no Asa [Insane]]
2017-02-24 16:07 William K: xD
2017-02-24 16:07 William K: keysounding orz
2017-02-24 16:07 Janpai: xDD
2017-02-24 16:07 William K: 00:09:741 (4) - what's even in this sound, i can't figure that out lol
2017-02-24 16:08 William K: is it d5 or something
2017-02-24 16:08 Janpai: hmmm, idk i can't figure out keys in seconds lo x-x
2017-02-24 16:08 William K: xD
2017-02-24 16:08 Janpai: but 00:09:976 (5) - sounds weird lol
2017-02-24 16:09 William K: what yes
2017-02-24 16:09 William K: wait
2017-02-24 16:09 Janpai: shouldn't it be octave higher lol
2017-02-24 16:09 William K: is it B5S
2017-02-24 16:10 William K: okay~ changed
2017-02-24 16:11 Janpai: idk, I never knew the tone by numbers lol xd
2017-02-24 16:11 William K: xd it's hard
2017-02-24 16:12 Janpai: =w=
2017-02-24 16:12 Janpai: 00:15:355 (6) - slider is really weird
2017-02-24 16:12 Janpai: lol
2017-02-24 16:12 William K: xD
2017-02-24 16:13 William K: because there's some guitar
2017-02-24 16:13 William K: like
2017-02-24 16:13 William K: weird
2017-02-24 16:13 William K: lol
2017-02-24 16:13 Janpai: well atlest make it clear xd
2017-02-24 16:13 Janpai: atleast*
2017-02-24 16:13 Janpai: it looks really odd xd
2017-02-24 16:13 William K: okay lo
2017-02-24 16:13 William K: l
2017-02-24 16:14 William K: 00:09:741 (4) - omg I must ask a pianist lol
2017-02-24 16:14 William K: who
2017-02-24 16:14 Janpai: btw I think that note is close to 00:09:976 (5) - note before
2017-02-24 16:14 William K: should be lower than E5
2017-02-24 16:14 Janpai: what note is that 00:09:976 (5) - 
2017-02-24 16:14 William K: b5
2017-02-24 16:15 Janpai: try G5 or A5?\
2017-02-24 16:15 William K: A4 or G4 I think?
2017-02-24 16:15 Janpai: maybe
2017-02-24 16:16 William K: ACTION using those two notes :v and BN noticed
2017-02-24 16:16 William K: and bubble pop
2017-02-24 16:16 Janpai: XDDD
2017-02-24 16:16 William K: is it a4 ;w;
2017-02-24 16:17 Janpai: idk, I don't have keysets lol
2017-02-24 16:17 William K: whoa
2017-02-24 16:17 Janpai: but it's really near at the b4 note at 00:09:976 (5) - 
2017-02-24 16:17 William K: b5* lol
2017-02-24 16:17 Janpai: eh what was it before x-x
2017-02-24 16:18 William K: a4 or g4 which were close
2017-02-24 16:18 William K: 00:15:120 - and what is this xDDD
2017-02-24 16:19 Janpai: i think it's a E note
2017-02-24 16:19 Janpai: just find the number there xD
2017-02-24 16:20 William K: how did you get that xD
2017-02-24 16:20 William K: yeah e4s
2017-02-24 16:20 Janpai: I just get my guitar and played a string and it sound familiar lol
2017-02-24 16:21 William K: is it guitar or piano? :V
2017-02-24 16:21 Janpai: still piano
2017-02-24 16:22 William K: alright my ears are safe then lol
2017-02-24 16:22 Janpai: xD
2017-02-24 16:23 William K: 00:09:741 (4) - yes it's a4
2017-02-24 16:23 Janpai: oh yeah
2017-02-24 16:23 Janpai: finally done xD
2017-02-24 16:23 William K: moving to guitars lol
2017-02-24 16:24 thanks for the participation of keysounding let me call you once more if i have any questions *Janpa Senpai runs*
2017-02-24 16:24 Janpai: xDDD
2017-02-24 16:24 Janpai: 00:14:417 (4) - this sounds weird too xd
2017-02-24 16:24 Janpai: it's too low lool
2017-02-24 16:24 William K: yeah
2017-02-24 16:24 William K: i changed it
2017-02-24 16:24 William K: xD
2017-02-24 16:25 Janpai: oh okay
2017-02-24 16:25 William K: what octave am i
2017-02-24 16:25 William K: hmm
2017-02-24 16:26 Janpai: 00:15:823 - btw this also sounded weird xd
2017-02-24 16:26 Janpai: it should be B right xd
2017-02-24 16:27 William K: i tested on my piano tho
2017-02-24 16:27 William K: wait lemme try
2017-02-24 16:28 William K: is it xd
2017-02-24 16:28 Janpai: =w=
2017-02-24 16:29 William K: 00:17:464 - the one here should be B
2017-02-24 16:30 Janpai: but it sounds A
2017-02-24 16:30 Janpai: lol
2017-02-24 16:31 William K: rip my ears
2017-02-24 16:31 William K: 00:16:058 - this is C#
2017-02-24 16:31 William K: 00:16:761 - D
2017-02-24 16:32 William K: 00:17:464 - B? XD
2017-02-24 16:33 Janpai: it's A i think
2017-02-24 16:33 William K: orz
2017-02-24 16:34 Janpai: maybe B sounds alike the on the first press but it goes offkey on the time 00:17:699
2017-02-24 16:34 Janpai: 00:17:699 -
2017-02-24 16:34 William K: is it the
2017-02-24 16:34 William K: strings or something
2017-02-24 16:35 Janpai: both string and that violin sound
2017-02-24 16:35 William K: they both like
2017-02-24 16:35 William K: collides?
2017-02-24 16:36 Janpai: yep
2017-02-24 16:38 Janpai: maybe I can help you starting at this point 00:22:386 (1) - 
2017-02-24 16:38 Janpai: to figure out the keys if you don't mind xd
2017-02-24 16:38 William K: tricky one...
2017-02-24 16:39 William K: sure sure xDD
2017-02-24 16:39 William K: 00:17:464 - wth should i get b4 and a4 LOL
2017-02-24 16:39 Janpai: go for A4
2017-02-24 16:39 William K: 00:18:871 -
2017-02-24 16:39 William K: wait
2017-02-24 16:39 William K: is this
2017-02-24 16:39 William K: piano
2017-02-24 16:40 Janpai: nope, it's just a super low-sound violin xd
2017-02-24 16:40 William K: 00:18:871 - this? xd
2017-02-24 16:40 Janpai: yep
2017-02-24 16:40 William K: 00:19:105 - how about this? :v
2017-02-24 16:40 Janpai: it's not even included on the main beat
2017-02-24 16:40 William K: A4 I think?
2017-02-24 16:41 Janpai: yeye
2017-02-24 16:41 Janpai: btw congrats on supporter xd
2017-02-24 16:41 William K: 00:15:355 - same then
2017-02-24 16:41 William K: xD thanks Giveaway
2017-02-24 16:41 Janpai: yep
2017-02-24 16:43 William K: 00:19:574 -
2017-02-24 16:43 William K: actually is this B
2017-02-24 16:43 Janpai: it's D
2017-02-24 16:44 William K: wow wonderful I'm finally correct :v
2017-02-24 16:44 Janpai: xDD
2017-02-24 16:45 William K: 00:21:214 - this is A
2017-02-24 16:45 William K: A5
2017-02-24 16:46 Janpai: yep
2017-02-24 16:46 William K: 00:22:386 - unknown unknown :V
2017-02-24 16:47 Janpai: that's A
2017-02-24 16:47 William K: 00:22:386 - A4?
2017-02-24 16:47 Janpai: yep
2017-02-24 16:48 William K: 00:22:621 - xd
2017-02-24 16:48 Janpai: D
2017-02-24 16:48 Janpai: 00:22:855 (2) - E
2017-02-24 16:48 William K: C D F#?
2017-02-24 16:49 William K: oh yea
2017-02-24 16:49 William K: D
2017-02-24 16:49 William K: I used D
2017-02-24 16:49 William K: where is it
2017-02-24 16:49 Janpai: xd
2017-02-24 16:49 William K: hmm
2017-02-24 16:50 William K: 00:15:823 - ah is it this D
2017-02-24 16:51 Janpai: yep
2017-02-24 16:51 William K: 00:22:855 - is it E
2017-02-24 16:52 William K: where did i use
2017-02-24 16:52 William K: E
2017-02-24 16:52 Janpai: yep then F# and G
2017-02-24 16:54 William K: okayy done~
2017-02-24 16:55 William K: 00:23:558 - F# 00:23:676 - G?
2017-02-24 16:57 Janpai: 00:23:676 (2) - there's no note here, it's just a echo of a plucked string
2017-02-24 16:57 Janpai: and yeah 00:23:558 (1) - is F#
2017-02-24 16:58 William K: 00:23:676 - so what did i map... lol
2017-02-24 16:58 William K: that HoneyWorks...........
2017-02-24 16:58 William K: ACTION even tried on my piano lol
2017-02-24 16:58 Janpai: When I played that part, it's seems really weird tho
2017-02-24 16:59 William K: it's a Nice Accident...
2017-02-24 16:59 William K: nice HoneyWorks
2017-02-24 16:59 Janpai: the triggered sound can't be mapped at the editor :v
2017-02-24 17:00 Janpai: or you could just put 00:23:558 (1) - to the blue tick
2017-02-24 17:00 William K: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7409978 well some people told me that
2017-02-24 17:00 William K: but I kinda "what is it an accident"
2017-02-24 17:01 William K: 00:24:027 - 00:24:262 - D
2017-02-24 17:01 William K: am I right hehe :V
2017-02-24 17:01 Janpai: yeah
2017-02-24 17:02 William K: 00:24:730 - A4?
2017-02-24 17:02 Janpai: 00:24:730 (5) - it's A again here
2017-02-24 17:02 Janpai: yep
2017-02-24 17:02 Janpai: xD
2017-02-24 17:02 William K: GG I winss
2017-02-24 17:02 William K: xDDDDD
2017-02-24 17:02 Janpai: XDDDD
2017-02-24 17:02 William K: where did
2017-02-24 17:02 William K: i put
2017-02-24 17:02 William K: a
2017-02-24 17:03 William K: 00:24:965 - E
2017-02-24 17:03 William K: ?
2017-02-24 17:04 William K: 00:27:543 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - what're even these
2017-02-24 17:04 William K: lol
2017-02-24 17:05 Janpai: maybe  you could try D C# A
2017-02-24 17:05 Janpai: on 00:27:543 (1,2,3) - 
2017-02-24 17:06 William K: is it
2017-02-24 17:06 William K: guitar
2017-02-24 17:06 William K: i think piano?
2017-02-24 17:06 Janpai: it's guitar or piano either, it's a computer generated sound lol
2017-02-24 17:06 William K: nice
2017-02-24 17:07 William K: played
2017-02-24 17:07 William K: audio
2017-02-24 17:07 Janpai: but maybe guitar fits tho
2017-02-24 17:07 William K: hmmz
2017-02-24 17:07 William K: soft one
2017-02-24 17:08 William K: 00:27:543 - is it
2017-02-24 17:08 William K: octave 6
2017-02-24 17:09 Janpai: maybe
2017-02-24 17:09 William K: yes, it jumps out of nowhere
2017-02-24 17:10 William K: did i use
2017-02-24 17:10 William K: a5
2017-02-24 17:10 Janpai: 00:28:246 (1,2,3) - C E D 00:28:949 - A
2017-02-24 17:11 Janpai: idk lol
2017-02-24 17:11 Janpai: I'm just giving the key and idk what octave it is xD
2017-02-24 17:11 William K: 00:28:246 - E F# D?
2017-02-24 17:11 William K: 00:28:246 (1,2,3) - wait, try E F# D?
2017-02-24 17:12 William K: CED sounds false?
2017-02-24 17:12 Janpai: hmmm
2017-02-24 17:12 Janpai: it's a lower key tho
2017-02-24 17:13 Janpai: ah idk on this sound x-x
2017-02-24 17:13 William K: lol let me try my
2017-02-24 17:13 William K: feelings
2017-02-24 17:15 Janpai: oh yes E F# D is right xd
2017-02-24 17:16 Janpai: and I think 00:28:949 - deserves to be map in A key
2017-02-24 17:17 William K: xD
2017-02-24 17:17 William K: 00:28:949 - I don't hear any here? @_@
2017-02-24 17:17 William K: GG I winn :VVV
2017-02-24 17:17 William K: I just hope
2017-02-24 17:17 William K: I don't forget converting into wav not mp3
2017-02-24 17:18 Janpai: xDD
2017-02-24 17:19 Janpai: 00:29:665 (2,2,2,2) - these are all Ds
2017-02-24 17:19 Janpai: but those notes in the sliders are really tricky to find lol
2017-02-24 17:20 William K: hmm
2017-02-24 17:20 William K: wow what a coincidence
2017-02-24 17:20 William K: well it's higher than those Ds?
2017-02-24 17:20 William K: okay thx random notes
2017-02-24 17:20 William K: btw is it
2017-02-24 17:21 William K: piano
2017-02-24 17:21 Janpai: guitar
2017-02-24 17:21 Janpai: the pianos are only at the starts of the sliders xd
2017-02-24 17:22 William K: 00:29:184 - here?
2017-02-24 17:22 Janpai: 00:29:184 (1,1,1,1) - and I think these aren't higher than D
2017-02-24 17:22 William K: you mean
2017-02-24 17:22 Janpai: yep
2017-02-24 17:22 Janpai: I deserve a kudo on this jk
2017-02-24 17:22 William K: maybe xd
2017-02-24 17:22 William K: lol
2017-02-24 17:22 Janpai: XD
2017-02-24 17:22 William K: post it post it
2017-02-24 17:22 William K: but
2017-02-24 17:22 William K: that last sliders
2017-02-24 17:22 Janpai: but it's really long lol
2017-02-24 17:22 William K: timing + keysounding + tricky keysssss
2017-02-24 17:23 William K: nicely played, HoneyWorks
2017-02-24 17:23 Janpai: oh year 1 hour talking of keysounding xD
2017-02-24 17:24 William K: xD
2017-02-24 17:24 William K: took 2 hours
2017-02-24 17:24 William K: and it's not finished
2017-02-24 17:24 William K: the D is in octave
2017-02-24 17:24 William K: wait
2017-02-24 17:24 William K: 5]
2017-02-24 17:24 William K: D5
2017-02-24 17:25 William K: or D6
2017-02-24 17:25 Janpai: idk xD
2017-02-24 17:25 William K: oh yea D5 is correct
2017-02-24 17:25 Janpai: I guess i can't find those keys in that sliders
2017-02-24 17:26 William K: ACTION calling someone
2017-02-24 17:26 William K: wait who's someone
2017-02-24 17:26 Janpai: Low keys are really tricky x-x
2017-02-24 17:26 Janpai: xD
2017-02-24 17:27 William K: xD
2017-02-24 17:28 Janpai: 00:29:418 - I guess this is A (lower than D)
2017-02-24 17:29 Janpai: ACTION gonna be back// just gonna eat sth
2017-02-24 17:29 William K: lol
2017-02-24 17:29 William K: okay~
2017-02-24 17:39 Janpai: oh yeah partly back ( still gonna eat later xd)
2017-02-24 17:39 William K: that was
2017-02-24 17:40 William K: fast xD
2017-02-24 17:40 William K: oh
2017-02-24 17:40 William K: 00:29:418 - yeah it's A xD
2017-02-24 17:40 William K: 00:29:184 - is this really piano
2017-02-24 17:40 Janpai: and the rest of the slider tails are A too
2017-02-24 17:40 William K: lol what xD
2017-02-24 17:40 William K: octave?
2017-02-24 17:41 Janpai: dunno
2017-02-24 17:41 Janpai: maybe 3?
2017-02-24 17:41 Janpai: or 4
2017-02-24 17:41 William K: 4
2017-02-24 17:41 William K: xD
2017-02-24 17:41 Janpai: it's just the heads are really tricky
2017-02-24 17:41 Janpai: ACTION going to eat again BRB~
2017-02-24 17:42 William K: fyi I can't hear any hints for the heaadds :V
2017-02-24 17:46 Janpai: okay i'm back xd
2017-02-24 17:46 Janpai: same
2017-02-24 17:46 William K: wait
2017-02-24 17:46 William K: isn't
2017-02-24 17:46 William K: 00:29:184 - = 00:28:715 -
2017-02-24 17:47 William K: no
2017-02-24 17:47 William K: different lol
2017-02-24 17:47 William K: welcome back btw xD
2017-02-24 17:48 Janpai: xd you mean it's D too?
2017-02-24 17:48 William K: or probably it was D 00:29:184 -
2017-02-24 17:48 William K: how do you think xD
2017-02-24 17:50 Janpai: it don't match well tho
2017-02-24 17:50 Janpai: but it's kinda near
2017-02-24 17:50 William K: lol
2017-02-24 17:50 William K: *taki are you near&
2017-02-24 17:51 Janpai: xDDD
2017-02-24 17:51 William K: *mitsuha are you near*
2017-02-24 17:51 Janpai: maybe try the D with octave 3
2017-02-24 17:51 William K: I tried
2017-02-24 17:52 Janpai: maybe the guitarist uses different tuning :v
2017-02-24 17:52 Janpai: like wtf is this note xd
2017-02-24 17:52 William K: :v
2017-02-24 17:52 William K: yes true true
2017-02-24 17:52 William K: and honeyworks also uses an extraordinary piano
2017-02-24 17:53 Janpai: xDDD
2017-02-24 17:53 William K: 00:29:184 - is it D3
2017-02-24 17:53 William K: or A3
2017-02-24 17:53 William K: or bla
2017-02-24 17:53 William K: afff
2017-02-24 17:54 Janpai: gonna reDL the set lol
2017-02-24 17:54 Janpai: I wish i can lol
2017-02-24 17:54 William K: lol
2017-02-24 17:54 William K: xD
2017-02-24 17:55 William K: WTH
2017-02-24 17:55 William K: the 17 thousand kb
2017-02-24 17:55 Janpai: lol 11 mb
2017-02-24 17:55 William K: like 13 days ago it's just
2017-02-24 17:56 William K: 1000 kb
2017-02-24 17:56 Janpai: xDDDD
2017-02-24 17:56 Janpai: blame yourself for keysounding xD
2017-02-24 17:59 William K: 00:29:184 - is it C
2017-02-24 18:01 William K: hmmz hmmzzz :v
2017-02-24 18:06 Janpai: well maybe
2017-02-24 18:06 Janpai: :v
2017-02-24 18:06 William K: what's wrong xD
2017-02-24 18:06 William K: :v
2017-02-24 18:06 William K: C-D
2017-02-24 18:06 William K: hmm
2017-02-24 18:06 William K: CD
2017-02-24 18:06 William K: xD
2017-02-24 18:08 Janpai: we're almost there x-x
2017-02-24 18:08 Janpai: uggggghhhhhh
2017-02-24 18:08 William K: xD
2017-02-24 18:08 Janpai: btw 00:09:741 (4) - lower the volume here
2017-02-24 18:09 William K: 50%
2017-02-24 18:09 Janpai: it's covers up the sound of 00:09:976 (5) - 
2017-02-24 18:09 Janpai: and sounds like a offkey since 00:09:741 (4) - 's key seems a bit too long
2017-02-24 18:09 Janpai: I tried playing with 10% music and 70% effects so yeah xd
2017-02-24 18:15 Janpai: 00:29:184 (1) - Maybe C# ?
2017-02-24 18:17 Janpai: oh nope is it G?
2017-02-24 18:24 Janpai: are you still there?
2017-02-24 18:24 Janpai: I already found out what are the keysssssssssssssssssss William K!!!
2017-02-24 18:27 Janpai: 00:29:184 - G 00:29:917 - F# 00:30:724 - E 00:31:514 - A in the octave 2 or 3 I think
2017-02-24 18:29 Janpai: omg you're AFK ._.
2017-02-24 18:34 William K: omg
2017-02-24 18:35 William K: my bro
2017-02-24 18:35 William K: sorry ;w;
2017-02-24 18:36 William K: 00:09:741 - what key was this
2017-02-24 18:36 William K: again
2017-02-24 18:36 Janpai: xD
2017-02-24 18:36 William K: A
2017-02-24 18:36 Janpai: yep
2017-02-24 18:36 William K: I should make it
2017-02-24 18:36 William K: shorter right
2017-02-24 18:36 Janpai: yep
2017-02-24 18:37 Janpai: did you apply the keys on the last objects?
2017-02-24 18:37 William K: fixed fixed~
2017-02-24 18:37 William K: not yet
2017-02-24 18:37 William K: 00:29:184 (1) - C#
2017-02-24 18:37 William K: thanks xDD
2017-02-24 18:38 Janpai:  nope it's G
2017-02-24 18:38 Janpai: G3 sth
2017-02-24 18:38 Janpai: idk what octave
2017-02-24 18:38 William K: G
2017-02-24 18:38 Janpai: yeah
2017-02-24 18:39 Janpai: hurry so I can post this keysounding mod xD
2017-02-24 18:40 William K: xD
2017-02-24 18:40 William K: thanksss lol

Goodluck! and more HoneyWorks!

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

yo halo

normal
00:17:933 (1,2,3,4) - nerf it ~ terlalu dense imo,kasih circle aja (1) biar nggk terlalu dense Sebenarnya, ane suka yg ini xd soalnya dia lebih ke drumsnya. Hbs itu rhythm density 00:17:933 (1,2,3,4) - = 00:21:214 (1,2,3,1,2) - . Jadi harusnya gpp imo
00:22:152 (3) - ^ lbh baik cirlce aja di red tick (di tempat slidertailnya) Ane bakal pikir lagi deh ;w;
00:24:965 - gimana kalau di sini circle terus di 00:25:434 - 1/1 slider? biar rhythmnnya bervariasi ~ Nope, 00:24:965 (1) - itu slider buat menandakan guitar yg holding gitu.

hard
00:14:651 (5) - nc disini biar consistent Nope, justru kalo disitu NC bakal membingungkan sebenarnya, bakal inconsistent, juga gaada perubahan feeling musik.
00:26:371 - hmm mungkin disini 1/1 slider terus circle di 00:27:309 - agar ngedukung slider (1) Disini, ane bikin 3 slider itu mirip gara'' mereka suaranya mirip semua jadi 1/1 slider ga bakal cocok.
00:27:543 (1,2,1,2) - gw nggk suka nih pattern,nggk halus gitu flownya cukup halus imo, kan pergerakannya clockwise.
00:29:665 (2) - 352,227 biar nggk dempet2 amat dgn (1) Ane cari koordinat lain :3 Harusnya udh gk gitu dempet.
00:31:514 (1) - juahkan dikit? same as 00:30:427 (1,2) Nope, 00:30:724 (1) - dipake buat perbedaan timingnya, soalnya timingnya disitu keliatan banget kayak inconsistent. Juga, emphasis di 00:29:184 (1,1,1,1) - kerja kayak a-b-a-b harusnya oke.

insane
00:20:980 (2) - 247,66 biar flownya enak gitu hehe ane lbih suka punya ane xd clockwise gt

udh gitu aja
sori mod gw kek sampah (mapmu bagus banget sih x( )
GL ~

Returning M4M, Such a relaxing song

1. Keysounding is kind of awesome.
2. I actually think that kiai is definable in this song, starting at 00:16:060 (1) and ending at 00:27:309 .
3. You could add click-like hitsounds at spots like 00:18:402 (2)

1. CS3.2 would fit normal better.

1. 00:23:558 (1,2) - No beat on the slider end, make 1 and 2 into a full slider.

1. 00:14:417 (4) - nc?

[ Space ] wrote:

Returning M4M, Such a relaxing song

Give kds if you want, I don't think I did too well modding this :/

There's really not that much to say, this map is really close to being ready for rank.

[General]

1. Keysounding is kind of awesome. :D
2. I actually think that kiai is definable in this song, starting at 00:16:060 (1) and ending at 00:27:309 . I think no, as it'll be 1/2 of the song.
3. You could add click-like hitsounds at spots like 00:18:402 (2) I will consider this.

[ Normal (1.58★)]

1. CS3.2 would fit normal better. I think I'll just use 3.6, 3.2 feels crowded imo

[ Hard (2.19★)]

1. 00:23:558 (1,2) - No beat on the slider end, make 1 and 2 into a full slider. No it's an extended slider for following the guitar sound.

[ Insane (2.74★)]

1. 00:14:417 (4) - nc? Nope, will cause inconsistency through out the diff.

nextplay wrote:

Hi, from Q

can't find nothing lol

I just want to ask why the Normal Diff has some DS Changes?
I like the Keysounding <3

<Insert Star>

GL

Nokashi wrote:

From #modreqs

[ General]

1. Looking Sharp!

[ Easy]

1. 00:12:308 (1) - in my opinion it could be curved to the other side instead so it isnt so heavily overlapped with the previous slider Actually, if I CTRL+H the slider, it'll be offscreen and I think the current one is okay :3
2. 00:19:808 (1,2) - This is the only instance in this transition where the sliderend isnt pointing to the next sliderhead. Kinda nitpicky but its good to be consistent I liked this tho xd will change if someone mod this again.
3. 00:15:355 (4) - In order to be more consistent, shouldnt this sound follow the rhythm 00:19:105 (3,4) - these use? it will be more consistent and better reflect the music Both looks nice in terms of rhythm imo, and 00:15:355 (4) - is a reversed slider as it's still in the beginning and after that the music gets more intense. It's also for variation.

[ Hard]

1. 00:20:277 (2) - I dont think the 2 -> 3 jump deserves this much emphasis, doing something like this would play better and use more geometry No, i'm emphasizing the main guitars.
2. 00:23:558 (1,2) - You only use 3/4 snap here in the entirety of the map. You should remove this and use a rhythm thats more consistent with the rest of the map You're right. Fixed.
3. 00:22:386 - having this beat not be clickable doesnt reflect the music really well If I use 2 circles for 00:22:152 (3) - that'll just be 4 consecutive clicks that I don't do anywhere else. And also the guitar at the slider end doesn't seem loud compared to 00:22:621 - .

[ Insane]

1. 00:01:753 (2) - Overlap is off I can't understand this point.
2. 00:09:976 (5) - Maybe reduce this spacing? Feels like such a spike and doesnt reflect the music that well, since the song doesnt really spike in intesity there Okay reduced by a bit.
3. 00:13:714 (3) - Overlap between (3) sliderend and 00:13:011 (2) - slider start is off Okie~
4. 00:15:355 (6) - Having red anchors and giving a jagged shape on a slider that is expressing a mellow sound doesnt really bode well Okay~
5. 00:20:511 (3) - This could blanket the 4 for neatness Nice~

Really polished set, Good Luck~

Lumario wrote:

Hey it's me Luma o/

Insane:

00:15:355 (6) - There's a slider point in the middle but no real curve try to make it similar to this one 00:16:761 (3) - Yup, it's intentional for a slight curve slider.
00:01:022 (1) - Stick to curved and straight sliders for better visuals 00:06:213 (3) - The song feels pretty calm so I don't think that these fit that well But I think it's good for variation tho.
00:04:796 (1,2,3) - 00:12:308 (1,2,3) - These are in their gameplay pretty similar which isn't bad but they're placed at nearly the exact same place in the screen which makes them feel copied I don't think so here, because the entire slider is different and the place is just far from the first one.
Place this one 00:09:976 (5) - under here 00:07:842 (4) - for flow (and maybe visuals) Nope, for emphasis. And the flow is good enough imo.
00:20:277 (2,4) - these felt a bit close maybe Ds 1.1 like you used here: 00:18:167 (2,3) - Okay.
00:29:184 (1) - Try to make this one round like the rest at the end Nope, I like the current one. And also if I make a curve it'd be weird for the aesthetics as I'm not blanketing anything near.

SPOILER

maybe move some parts towards the top left othewise it feel a bit empty there Okay...

Hard:
Despite what I said in the first mod I like the sharp slider here 00:06:213 (3) - to emphasise (I still don't like them at places like here tho 00:01:753 (2)- :3) :3 As I said earlier too.
00:07:842 (4,1) - These two should have a similar curve (visuals) Why? The section is different each other so I think no.
tbh most of these 00:00:280 (1,4,5) - should have a similar curve so you have 2 types of shapes for the short sliders, the round ones with the same amount of curve and the straight ones. uhh can't understand this sorry ;w;
00:13:011 (2) - The round slider here fits this weird noise better than the straight one and it looks like a nice pattern xd I liked the aesthetics tho.

SPOILER

Normal should be fine :3