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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 19 ตุลาคม 2560 at 0:46:53

Artist: So'Fly
Title: i BELIEVE~Hoshi ni Negai o
Tags: GIORGIO Cancemi 13 TOKO hiphop CDTV First Kiss サイン やりすぎコージー j-pop rnb r&b Inversal
BPM: 103
Filesize: 12237kb
Play Time: 03:44
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Remap :3 (75%)
Change Name Diff to ->> A Wish To The Stars // REDOWNLOAD PLS :3
Thx name diff from Paloch VeGa
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->> Collab with Inversal (at now only Inversal <3)
->> Storyboard by me (75%)
->> Thx Hitsound From Natsuki Nanaka (HSding by me) (100%)

->>> Not For Ranked <3 but I'll try to loved state
<Just let play for fun :3 Thx for play and love my map \o/>
Last edited by GalenTori on , edited 90 times in total.
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Please check all of inheret-timing, Its devious.
เส้นเขียวไม่ตรงไปปรับด้วย

Hitsounds ->> Here
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Natsuki Nanaka wrote:
Please check all of inheret-timing, Its devious.
เส้นเขียวไม่ตรงไปปรับด้วย >>Fixed

Hitsounds ->> Here >>Thx senpai ;w;
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ว้าว เพลงโปรดเลย เพราะมาก ;w;
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ความยาวเพลง: 4:57 นาที
Drain: 3:54 นาที
ดิฟเดียวได้หรอกำ ._.
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ยังไม่เสร็จเลยกำ
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Maybe I'm useful, maybe not
Since I'm not really good with spacings myself I won't question the way you did the spacings but I was from time to time a bit curious about the way how you spaced a few things..

00:16:091 (2,3,4,5,6) - I don't really like the spacings here between the patterns it looks ..random
00:53:664 (2,3,4,5,6) - same uwu..
01:05:751 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - same uwu.. why not something like this? http://puu.sh/uhH4j.jpg (01:06:042 (1) - stacked with 01:04:877 (1) - 01:06:625 (5) - Sliderend stacked with 01:07:499 (2) - it's just an idea but maybe you get what I mean. ^^')
( nitpicky ) 01:29:052 (4,1,3,4,5) - If you use a pattern like this maybe it would look better if you put the 4 a bit down like http://puu.sh/uhHxR.jpg beacause if you overlap the 4,5 with the ones above wou will see this http://puu.sh/uhHlv.jpg.. if you want you can stack the 4 then again with 01:29:052 (4) - like you did before..
01:33:712 (5,6,1,2,3) - maybe something more like a square would look nice
03:06:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too.. spaced..? o.o
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not finished map whupps
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On my part

Froschi wrote:
Maybe I'm useful, maybe not
Since I'm not really good with spacings myself I won't question the way you did the spacings but I was from time to time a bit curious about the way how you spaced a few things..

01:05:751 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - same uwu.. why not something like this? http://puu.sh/uhH4j.jpg (01:06:042 (1) - stacked with 01:04:877 (1) - 01:06:625 (5) - Sliderend stacked with 01:07:499 (2) - it's just an idea but maybe you get what I mean. ^^') I think I should keep the short spacing right here since it's not the kiai part.
( nitpicky ) 01:29:052 (4,1,3,4,5) - If you use a pattern like this maybe it would look better if you put the 4 a bit down like http://puu.sh/uhHxR.jpg beacause if you overlap the 4,5 with the ones above wou will see this http://puu.sh/uhHlv.jpg.. if you want you can stack the 4 then again with 01:29:052 (4) - like you did before.. Okay
01:33:712 (5,6,1,2,3) - maybe something more like a square would look nice Hmmmm I think not to change would be better
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not finished map whupps


Thanks for the mod!
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On my part ><

Froschi wrote:
Maybe I'm useful, maybe not
Since I'm not really good with spacings myself I won't question the way you did the spacings but I was from time to time a bit curious about the way how you spaced a few things..

00:16:091 (2,3,4,5,6) - I don't really like the spacings here between the patterns it looks ..random ok fixed =w=
00:53:664 (2,3,4,5,6) - same uwu.. I think in kiai time it not bad ;w;
01:05:751 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - same uwu.. why not something like this? http://puu.sh/uhH4j.jpg (01:06:042 (1) - stacked with 01:04:877 (1) - 01:06:625 (5) - Sliderend stacked with 01:07:499 (2) - it's just an idea but maybe you get what I mean. ^^')
( nitpicky ) 01:29:052 (4,1,3,4,5) - If you use a pattern like this maybe it would look better if you put the 4 a bit down like http://puu.sh/uhHxR.jpg beacause if you overlap the 4,5 with the ones above wou will see this http://puu.sh/uhHlv.jpg.. if you want you can stack the 4 then again with 01:29:052 (4) - like you did before..
01:33:712 (5,6,1,2,3) - maybe something more like a square would look nice
03:06:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too.. spaced..? o.o
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not finished map whupps hehe xD my map finshed because drafteris join collab (his part finish around 5 hrs... owo) but wait hs and sb coming soon ^^
Last edited by GalenTori on , edited 3 times in total.
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GaziloTFap wrote:
On my part ><

Froschi wrote:
Maybe I'm useful, maybe not
Since I'm not really good with spacings myself I won't question the way you did the spacings but I was from time to time a bit curious about the way how you spaced a few things..

00:16:091 (2,3,4,5,6) - I don't really like the spacings here between the patterns it looks ..random ok fixed =w=
00:53:664 (2,3,4,5,6) - same uwu.. I think in kiai time it not bad ;w;
01:05:751 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - same uwu.. why not something like this? http://puu.sh/uhH4j.jpg (01:06:042 (1) - stacked with 01:04:877 (1) - 01:06:625 (5) - Sliderend stacked with 01:07:499 (2) - it's just an idea but maybe you get what I mean. ^^')
( nitpicky ) 01:29:052 (4,1,3,4,5) - If you use a pattern like this maybe it would look better if you put the 4 a bit down like http://puu.sh/uhHxR.jpg beacause if you overlap the 4,5 with the ones above wou will see this http://puu.sh/uhHlv.jpg.. if you want you can stack the 4 then again with 01:29:052 (4) - like you did before..
01:33:712 (5,6,1,2,3) - maybe something more like a square would look nice
03:06:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too.. spaced..? o.o
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not finished map whupps
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[ Lost ] wrote:
ว้าว เพลงโปรดเลย เพราะมาก ;w;
ชอบเหมือนกัน =w=
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เมื่อไหร่จะ graveyard ค่ะ
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- Frontier - wrote:
เมื่อไหร่จะ graveyard ค่ะ

นิสัย!! พูดจาอะไร หยาบคายที่ฉุด!!!! ;w;
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- Frontier - wrote:
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ห้ะ "คะ" เขียนงี้พี่
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q m4m

is the beginning supposed to be following vocals จะบอกว่ามันไม่มี snap แน่นอน even 1/16 doesnt fit properly so basically its mapping to nothing atm just follow simple melody would be safer for rc

00:36:625 (5,2) - stack pls looks cleaner
00:39:246 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - spacing makes no sense rhythm wise cuz the sound is weak but u make spacing big af bigger than 00:37:935 (6,1) -
00:50:751 (4,1,2,3) - what exactly is this following
00:55:702 (1,2) - hi ik ur new mapper so u dont know much yet but can u try smhlike this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7614767

01:04:877 (1,2) - overlap looks a bit cluttered and messy if u care
01:09:537 (1,2) - if ur mapping vocals then pls change its on 1/8
if u mapping instruments pls change also 4 circles work better
01:18:858 (1,2) - this also doesnt rly fit tbh try just simplify to single 3/4 slider
01:35:168 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - why do u ppl like to make jumps following on no sounds lol literally n o s o u n d
01:51:770 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - alright this is cool i like this

01:54:974 (1) - nazi stack
02:20:605 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the vocals on first 2 notes are diffrent than 6 notes after it so can u consider to change it a bit just so its different and emphasize it better

02:48:566 - now this kiai is just a copy of the last and edited parts a bit, and its not even mapped by you wtf come on now its not hard to spot at all sure u can claim its a coincidence to let it slide but fucking seriously ไม่ก้ทำให้มันเนียน pls
02:53:809 (4,1) - overlap with previous head looks kinda cluttering n awkward but k iguess

03:22:353 (1,2,3,4) - now this vocals pretty high pitched which is good opportunity for bigger jumps but no No N O u just make it same so it lacks emphasis

04:13:615 (1,2) - blanket?
04:25:266 (1,2) - ?? ถ้าจะให้ stack ไปทางอื่นให้ใช้รัศมีประมาณ x +- 4 y +- 4 will blend in with normal autostack best since dat thing is x+4 y+4

04:38:955 - the sb just shut downs here cuz it follows piano but the map is following vocals seems unsyncronized and p weird tbh can u fade in black screen 1/2 tick later
05:10:411 (4) - rip emphasis on downbeat
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