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Intervals - A Voice Within

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Dilectus
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Dilectus
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 20 augusti 2017 at 03:17:12

Artist: Intervals
Title: A Voice Within
Tags: mike semesky anup sastry progressive metal djent bergy
BPM: 230
Filesize: 14417kb
Play Time: 06:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Deity (6,69 stars, 1579 notes)
Download: Intervals - A Voice Within
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The space between the walls that surround us
Is only as confined as our hearts and our minds
In time we all will hear what resonates from within
The voice that we must find and embrace to guide us
Parts
00:00:00 - 02:25:6667 - Me
02:25:667 - 04:40:006 - Bergy
04:40:006 - 06:55:838 - Me
Metadata: https://intervalsmusic.bandcamp.com/alb ... ice-within
Background: http://pocketfullofgrace.com/1519822-digital-art.html (not official)
Artist: http://www.intervalsmusic.net/
Last edited by Dilectus , edited 41 times in total.
-Visceral-
644 posts
Joined August 2012
-Visceral-
Man I wanna map this so bad ;w; going for rank?
Dilectus
1,727 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Dilectus
Yeah. Will start focusing on this map after my ELISA map
Est-
368 posts
Joined March 2016
Est-
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Last edited by Est- , edited 1 time in total.
donacdum
84 posts
Joined July 2016
donacdum
I tried to find more, but I can't seem to. :( Really good map!


[Metadata]
Possibly add the other two band members to the tags. Aaron Marshall and Lukas Guyader.

[DavidEd]

00:08:450 - 00:25:145 - The sliders here sound off to me, considering the slider heads seem to be changing what sound is being emphasized. For example, 00:08:450 (1,2) - starts on the white tick, on the snare, where 00:09:363 (1,2) - lands on the red tick, the bass drum. It sounds odd to me, so possibly move the sliders ahead 1/2 to the white tick, unless you're emphasizing the guitar or something. This goes on for most of the intro. Also happens at 01:06:363 up to the first kiai.

[Bergy]

02:39:493 (5) - It seems for most of the sliders you're offsetting the stack slightly, where this is a direct stack. I'm not sure if this is intentional or not.
example

02:27:232 (3) - Same as above.

02:43:276 (4) - Possibly blanket slidertail with 2?

02:45:493 (1) - Possibly curve this slider to blanket with 2?
example

02:52:276 (1) - You should end the slider on the white tick to emphasize the snare. Also goes for 03:00:623 (1)

03:21:493 (1,2,1) - Just praise here! The blanketing job is really nice, it looks really cool!

03:39:754 (4) - You should new-combo this because it is a drastically different SV, and some players might mess up.
Bergy
352 posts
Joined November 2015
Bergy

donacdum wrote:

I tried to find more, but I can't seem to. :( Really good map!


[Metadata]
Possibly add the other two band members to the tags. Aaron Marshall and Lukas Guyader. i agree!

[Bergy]

02:39:493 (5) - It seems for most of the sliders you're offsetting the stack slightly, where this is a direct stack. I'm not sure if this is intentional or not.
example

02:27:232 (3) - Same as above.

02:43:276 (4) - Possibly blanket slidertail with 2?

02:45:493 (1) - Possibly curve this slider to blanket with 2?
example

02:52:276 (1) - You should end the slider on the white tick to emphasize the snare. Also goes for 03:00:623 (1)

03:21:493 (1,2,1) - Just praise here! The blanketing job is really nice, it looks really cool! owo thank

03:39:754 (4) - You should new-combo this because it is a drastically different SV, and some players might mess up.
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Dilectus
1,727 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Dilectus

donacdum wrote:

Possibly add the other two band members to the tags. Aaron Marshall and Lukas Guyader. the reason i added mike and anup is cause theyre not in the band anymore, so they count more as a featuring artist. idk maybe i could?

00:08:450 - 00:25:145 - The sliders here sound off to me, considering the slider heads seem to be changing what sound is being emphasized. For example, 00:08:450 (1,2) - starts on the white tick, on the snare, where 00:09:363 (1,2) - lands on the red tick, the bass drum. It sounds odd to me, so possibly move the sliders ahead 1/2 to the white tick, unless you're emphasizing the guitar or something. This goes on for most of the intro. Also happens at 01:06:363 up to the first kiai. this part puts emphasize on both guitar and drums equally as the guitar has its strong beats and the drums with it's fills.
Thanks for the mod!
Alheak
910 posts
Joined November 2013
Alheak
Hello from our modding queue

  1. would be a good idea to get a 1920x1200 bg, also i'm pretty sure i've already seen another map with this bg lol
  2. be careful with where you add NCs, for example:
    01:15:493 (1) - 03:24:363 (1) - and 01:32:188 (4) - 03:13:928 (4) - ,
    01:19:667 (3,1) - 03:18:102 (3,1) - and 01:28:015 (1,3) - , etc
    you should stay consistent with your choices
  3. 03:08:189 (3,5) - overlap
  4. 05:00:283 - to be honest i don't really understand what you're following here, looks like a mix of guitar/drums but it's really inconsistent throughout, i believe this part could use being more structured, and more personally i'd like to see more emphasis on the guitar since this is the solo
  5. 05:35:838 - same here I guess, I have no idea what warrants a 1/4 slider to be mapped or not
  6. 06:20:283 (6,1) - switch NC
  7. 06:25:560 (5) - should be a slider for consistency
Overall I think this is a pretty good map, plays well and looks good, that's why we chose it after all. Not much to mod really.
However I feel like some of the ideas could have been more defined and consistent, that's my only real problem with it.

Anyway that's all from me, good luck!
Bergy
352 posts
Joined November 2015
Bergy
did some self-modding and changed NC/overlap stuff from mod^
osu file format v14

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Dilectus
1,727 posts
Joined April 2014
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Dilectus

Alheak wrote:

Hello from our modding queue

  1. would be a good idea to get a 1920x1200 bg, also i'm pretty sure i've already seen another map with this bg lol i could consider. but atm, the set is 12,7 mb so i want to keep that number a bit low for now
  2. be careful with where you add NCs, for example: reworked nc of both of the chorus
    01:15:493 (1) - 03:24:363 (1) - and 01:32:188 (4) - 03:13:928 (4) - ,
    01:19:667 (3,1) - 03:18:102 (3,1) - and 01:28:015 (1,3) - , etc
    you should stay consistent with your choices
  3. 05:00:283 - to be honest i don't really understand what you're following here, looks like a mix of guitar/drums but it's really inconsistent throughout, i believe this part could use being more structured, and more personally i'd like to see more emphasis on the guitar since this is the solo i guess i followed the general rhythm of the song. illl consider reworking some of the parts to maybe emphasize stuff better
  4. 05:35:838 - same here I guess, I have no idea what warrants a 1/4 slider to be mapped or not same
  5. 06:20:283 (6,1) - switch NC fix
  6. 06:25:560 (5) - should be a slider for consistency fix
Overall I think this is a pretty good map, plays well and looks good, that's why we chose it after all. Not much to mod really.
However I feel like some of the ideas could have been more defined and consistent, that's my only real problem with it.

Anyway that's all from me, good luck!
Thanks for the mod!
Seto Kousuke
osu! Alumni
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Seto Kousuke
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  • David


    amazing map
  1. 00:10:536 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - From the start, you're focusing both drums and guitars because they have similar intensities, and so the player understands that....but at this moment the guitar have different intensities based on the tunes of the notes he used and the jumps aren't emphasizing them properly because of that first slider you put because the sliders should actually be placed on the red ticks (just like you did with 00:11:189 (5) - ) so the rythm gets a bit ''confused'' based on the structure you had, you can see that this will be more instinctive and loyal if you make 1 become a single note and make a 1/2 slider starting at 00:10:667 - the ''lick'' of the guitar sound represented by 00:10:928 (3) - will feel better on the gameplay
  2. 00:11:449 (1) - for similar reasons as stated above, this will feel/sound better if you make it a single note and make a 1/2 slider at 00:11:580 - . all the guitar licks will feel better on the slider and intensity will fit perfectly on the jumpy single notes :3 (in case you agree with both opinions you could try something similar on the next sections with the same transitions as this one which I highly suggest since the guitar licks makes the rythm a bit confusing and ''hollow'' with the current notes....they have the proper intensity and the proper ''rythm'', but they don't really follow the guitar that well which causes trouble to ''feel'' it)
  3. 00:30:884 (4) - I suggest you adjust to something like this (similar to other movements you made) because the current motion that this 4 gives feels kinda ''clustered'' and doesn't give a nice transition and intensity to 00:31:145 (5) - and also ''breaks'' a little the flow logic you used for all the other similar 1/2 sliders after 3/4
  4. 01:16:015 (6) - Ctrl + G here and Ctrl + G 01:16:276 (7) - here ? these motions will feel better, you could either do that or change the slider shapes a bit to fit your structure better with these motions
  5. 02:02:319 (5,6,1) - this feels too sudden in gameplay, I suggest placing 6 somewhere else to give proper feedback of motions for the slider 1

    Bergy

  6. 02:51:102 (1) - they're fine but they're too hard to know how to play even if you memorize them, they're too unexpected, I'd suggest that on this particular moment you use really weak and cold combo colors for the slow slider and a strong and hot color for the fast ones for feedback
  7. 03:50:710 (1) - This reverse doesn't feel good on the music because of the main riff sound, I suggest removing the reverse and make something clickable

incredible map and really fun, my only complain I would say...it's the last 2 minutes that literally plays the same, even though at some point a guitar starts, I know that the song is calm and don't really change much, but some variety could go well there, although it's technically fine the way it is :p


In case it was helpfull, feel free to always ask more mods in the future :D

peace :roll:
Bergy
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Bergy

Seto Kousuke wrote:

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  • Bergy
  1. 02:51:102 (1) - they're fine but they're too hard to know how to play even if you memorize them, they're too unexpected, I'd suggest that on this particular moment you use really weak and cold combo colors for the slow slider and a strong and hot color for the fast ones for feedback considering colorhaxing wasn't used in the rest of the song, it doesn't make sense to use it here. Plus, they have really weird slider shapes and new combos for a reason.
  2. 03:50:710 (1) - This reverse doesn't feel good on the music because of the main riff sound, I suggest removing the reverse and make something clickable it's not rly emphasized in any way, reverse is fine here
did change some slider shape stuff a lil (code is too big for osu forums):
https://pastebin.com/4EhQRV2e
Dilectus
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Dilectus

Seto Kousuke wrote:

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  • David


    amazing map
  1. 00:10:536 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - From the start, you're focusing both drums and guitars because they have similar intensities, and so the player understands that....but at this moment the guitar have different intensities based on the tunes of the notes he used and the jumps aren't emphasizing them properly because of that first slider you put because the sliders should actually be placed on the red ticks (just like you did with 00:11:189 (5) - ) so the rythm gets a bit ''confused'' based on the structure you had, you can see that this will be more instinctive and loyal if you make 1 become a single note and make a 1/2 slider starting at 00:10:667 - the ''lick'' of the guitar sound represented by 00:10:928 (3) - will feel better on the gameplay made sure that the louder pitched guitar sounds got more emphasized (reworked rhythm in some parts)
  2. 00:11:449 (1) - for similar reasons as stated above, this will feel/sound better if you make it a single note and make a 1/2 slider at 00:11:580 - . all the guitar licks will feel better on the slider and intensity will fit perfectly on the jumpy single notes :3 (in case you agree with both opinions you could try something similar on the next sections with the same transitions as this one which I highly suggest since the guitar licks makes the rythm a bit confusing and ''hollow'' with the current notes....they have the proper intensity and the proper ''rythm'', but they don't really follow the guitar that well which causes trouble to ''feel'' it) fixed
  3. 00:30:884 (4) - I suggest you adjust to something like this (similar to other movements you made) because the current motion that this 4 gives feels kinda ''clustered'' and doesn't give a nice transition and intensity to 00:31:145 (5) - and also ''breaks'' a little the flow logic you used for all the other similar 1/2 sliders after 3/4 ill consider maybe increasing spacing of 4 (then making it the other parts consistent), but im really happy with the current movements
  4. 01:16:015 (6) - Ctrl + G here and Ctrl + G 01:16:276 (7) - here ? these motions will feel better, you could either do that or change the slider shapes a bit to fit your structure better with these motions fixed
  5. 02:02:319 (5,6,1) - this feels too sudden in gameplay, I suggest placing 6 somewhere else to give proper feedback of motions for the slider 1 i tried reducing spacing so the transition feels smoother

incredible map and really fun, my only complain I would say...it's the last 2 minutes that literally plays the same, even though at some point a guitar starts, I know that the song is calm and don't really change much, but some variety could go well there, although it's technically fine the way it is :p i'll probably rework the last kiai like i said in previous mods
Nice mod! Thank you <3
Hollow Delta
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Hollow Delta
From #modreqs doing m4m

General
soft-sliderslide.wav is unused

00:13:797 - Up until here your slider emphasis is random. Just for an example, I'd switch these 00:12:102 (5,6) - so the slider is on the stronger note.
00:19:015 (2) - Slightly off from 1.
00:34:145 (3,1) - Since 1 is an extension of 3, wouldn't it look nicer for them to be perfectly parallel?
01:07:276 (6,1) - Same situation with the slider emphasis. It's more accurate to put the sliders on the held notes.
01:30:754 (1,2,3,4,5) - The pattern goes against the flow of the player. Try ctrl+g on 1 and 2 then the same on 3 and 4. Move 5 where 1 is.
02:00:623 (1) - Random whistle?
02:48:102 (1) - For the guitar and any other similar ones I'd shorten it to the 1/2 measure where it actually ends, because it doesn't extend as long as this slider does.
02:51:102 (1,2,3) - These are the only extended sliders that're supported by the music
03:52:667 (5) - Because of the temporary muscle memory you established here, this note was surprising because it wasn't under the head of the previous slider.
Kalibe
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- 00:30:884 (4) - that clap feels kinda off thou.. it sounds more on 00:30:901 - imo
- 00:55:928 (4) - ^ same situation
- 01:00:623 (1) - how about stacking this on 00:59:449 (4) - head? plays more intuitive!!!
- 01:53:319 (1,2,3,4) - this is like hajimete u doing 4 notes stacked and that makes it weird.. really prefer to change it with spacing use wwww
- 02:06:754 (8) - stack on 02:05:449 (8) - head? looks nice
- 02:12:623 (7) - feels off
- 02:42:232 - why you don't map this? aaa
- 02:49:015 (2) - try maybe ctrl G ? plays more funnier !!!
- 03:05:971 (7,8) - vs 01:15:884 (5,6) - compare spacing :thinking:
- 03:20:058 (4,5,6,1) - not really sure about this... looks really egdy to play dude xd
- 04:05:319 (1,2) - em reep flow..... 04:05:319 (1) - if you ctrl G this it would plays a lot of better than you have actually
- 04:12:623 (1,2) - 04:13:536 (2,3) - pls
- 06:03:060 (1) - remove nc, cause i don't see u using additional nc, only following to downbeat

somehow reminds me of https://osu.ppy.sh/s/412270 maybe cause patterns like 03:13:536 (2,3,4) -

good luck, cool map!
Bergy
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Bergy

Bubblun wrote:

From #modreqs doing m4m
02:48:102 (1) - For the guitar and any other similar ones I'd shorten it to the 1/2 measure where it actually ends, because it doesn't extend as long as this slider does. i might remap this eventually, not quite sure yet :thinking:
02:51:102 (1,2,3) - These are the only extended sliders that're supported by the music
03:52:667 (5) - Because of the temporary muscle memory you established here, this note was surprising because it wasn't under the head of the previous slider. i mean i don't think so, this part of the music is different from the last section even though it's similar, i think the one at 03:52:666 (5,1) - is justified considering the gap in the music that seems much more prominent than any of the other gaps.

Kalibe wrote:

- 02:42:232 - why you don't map this? aaa just made it a slider xd
- 02:49:015 (2) - try maybe ctrl G ? plays more funnier !!!sure
- 03:05:971 (7,8) - vs 01:15:884 (5,6) - compare spacing :thinking: uhhhh its a collab and i mapped the part differently cause i am different mapper ? it's not like there's a massive diffspike in either of our parts, the difficulty seems to be quite consistent
- 03:20:058 (4,5,6,1) - not really sure about this... looks really egdy to play dude xd fixed up a little, moved 6 closer to the circle and 1 loser to 6
- 04:05:319 (1,2) - em reep flow..... 04:05:319 (1) - if you ctrl G this it would plays a lot of better than you have actually sure ctrl + g
- 04:12:623 (1,2) - 04:13:536 (2,3) - pls yeayea fixed spacing xDddd
thank 4 modz
https://pastebin.com/vaDfJLhn
Dilectus
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Dilectus
00:13:797 - Up until here your slider emphasis is random. Just for an example, I'd switch these 00:12:102 (5,6) - so the slider is on the stronger note. 00:12:623 (1) - is the start of the next section so i thought id emphasize that one instead. 00:12:493 (7) - is clickable anyways so theres no issue
00:19:015 (2) - Slightly off from 1. meant to form this triangle 00:18:493 (6,7,2) - also goes well with the other notes 00:18:363 (5,6,7,8,1,2) -
00:34:145 (3,1) - Since 1 is an extension of 3, wouldn't it look nicer for them to be perfectly parallel? they werent meant to correlate with each other
01:07:276 (6,1) - Same situation with the slider emphasis. It's more accurate to put the sliders on the held notes. changed
01:30:754 (1,2,3,4,5) - The pattern goes against the flow of the player. Try ctrl+g on 1 and 2 then the same on 3 and 4. Move 5 where 1 is. the zig zag movement was intentional. i think it fits well with the music
02:00:623 (1) - Random whistle? changed to clap

00:30:884 (4) - that clap feels kinda off thou.. it sounds more on 00:30:901 - imo asked bergy and apparently this is a so called "flam". http://puu.sh/veCgP/b4dacdd85f.jpg so ill keep it for now i guess
00:55:928 (4) - ^ same situation same
01:00:623 (1) - how about stacking this on 00:59:449 (4) - head? plays more intuitive!!! sure!!!!
01:53:319 (1,2,3,4) - this is like hajimete u doing 4 notes stacked and that makes it weird.. really prefer to change it with spacing use wwww fixed
02:06:754 (8) - stack on 02:05:449 (8) - head? looks nice fix
02:12:623 (7) - feels off same as before

Thanks guys!
MrKosiej
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MrKosiej
Sorry it took so long but i didn't have time and then i forgot XD

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00:16:276 (4,5,6,7) - these are not lined up, i'd correct it aestheticly wise
also you could move all thing down to stack 00:15:232 (6,6) - but it's not important cuz very far time distance

00:50:189 (1,2) - i'd correct that blanketish thing, it ain't perfect just sayin

01:00:102 (7,8,9,10) - are you making those on puropse, cuz if you don't then nevermind my previous comment about teh line

01:19:276 (2) - move up to fit blanket with 01:19:797 (4) -

01:20:449 (6,7,8) - its not a perfect line

02:29:841 (1,4) - stack and 02:31:406 (3,1) - stack with tail?
03:16:536 (6,2) - stack

03:21:884 (2,4) - fix blanket

Yeah, sorry it's so small but your map is great as it is xd so not much to add.
GL
Bergy
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Bergy

MrKOSIEJ wrote:

02:29:841 (1,4) - stack and 02:31:406 (3,1) - stack with tail?
03:16:536 (6,2) - stack no its my style thanks

03:21:884 (2,4) - fix blanket lol ok
literally just changed one slider
https://pastebin.com/ZY383qhM
Dilectus
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Dilectus
Fixed all. But I'll keep the straight line aestetics

Thank you!
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