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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 20 augusti 2017 at 03:17:12

Artist: Intervals
Title: A Voice Within
Tags: mike semesky anup sastry progressive metal djent bergy
BPM: 230
Filesize: 14417kb
Play Time: 06:55
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  • Deity (6,69 stars, 1579 notes)

Download: Intervals - A Voice Within
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The space between the walls that surround us
Is only as confined as our hearts and our minds
In time we all will hear what resonates from within
The voice that we must find and embrace to guide us
Parts
00:00:00 - 02:25:6667 - Me
02:25:667 - 04:40:006 - Bergy
04:40:006 - 06:55:838 - Me
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Man I wanna map this so bad ;w; going for rank?
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Yeah. Will start focusing on this map after my ELISA map
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I tried to find more, but I can't seem to. :( Really good map!



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Possibly add the other two band members to the tags. Aaron Marshall and Lukas Guyader.


DavidEd

00:08:450 - 00:25:145 - The sliders here sound off to me, considering the slider heads seem to be changing what sound is being emphasized. For example, 00:08:450 (1,2) - starts on the white tick, on the snare, where 00:09:363 (1,2) - lands on the red tick, the bass drum. It sounds odd to me, so possibly move the sliders ahead 1/2 to the white tick, unless you're emphasizing the guitar or something. This goes on for most of the intro. Also happens at 01:06:363 up to the first kiai.


Bergy

02:39:493 (5) - It seems for most of the sliders you're offsetting the stack slightly, where this is a direct stack. I'm not sure if this is intentional or not.
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02:27:232 (3) - Same as above.

02:43:276 (4) - Possibly blanket slidertail with 2?

02:45:493 (1) - Possibly curve this slider to blanket with 2?
example
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02:52:276 (1) - You should end the slider on the white tick to emphasize the snare. Also goes for 03:00:623 (1)

03:21:493 (1,2,1) - Just praise here! The blanketing job is really nice, it looks really cool!

03:39:754 (4) - You should new-combo this because it is a drastically different SV, and some players might mess up.
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donacdum wrote:
I tried to find more, but I can't seem to. :( Really good map!



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Possibly add the other two band members to the tags. Aaron Marshall and Lukas Guyader. i agree!


Bergy

02:39:493 (5) - It seems for most of the sliders you're offsetting the stack slightly, where this is a direct stack. I'm not sure if this is intentional or not.
example
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02:27:232 (3) - Same as above.

02:43:276 (4) - Possibly blanket slidertail with 2?

02:45:493 (1) - Possibly curve this slider to blanket with 2?
example
Image


02:52:276 (1) - You should end the slider on the white tick to emphasize the snare. Also goes for 03:00:623 (1)

03:21:493 (1,2,1) - Just praise here! The blanketing job is really nice, it looks really cool! owo thank

03:39:754 (4) - You should new-combo this because it is a drastically different SV, and some players might mess up.


fixed all

uwu
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donacdum wrote:

Possibly add the other two band members to the tags. Aaron Marshall and Lukas Guyader. the reason i added mike and anup is cause theyre not in the band anymore, so they count more as a featuring artist. idk maybe i could?

00:08:450 - 00:25:145 - The sliders here sound off to me, considering the slider heads seem to be changing what sound is being emphasized. For example, 00:08:450 (1,2) - starts on the white tick, on the snare, where 00:09:363 (1,2) - lands on the red tick, the bass drum. It sounds odd to me, so possibly move the sliders ahead 1/2 to the white tick, unless you're emphasizing the guitar or something. This goes on for most of the intro. Also happens at 01:06:363 up to the first kiai. this part puts emphasize on both guitar and drums equally as the guitar has its strong beats and the drums with it's fills.


Thanks for the mod!
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Hello from our modding queue


Overall I think this is a pretty good map, plays well and looks good, that's why we chose it after all. Not much to mod really.
However I feel like some of the ideas could have been more defined and consistent, that's my only real problem with it.

Anyway that's all from me, good luck!
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did some self-modding and changed NC/overlap stuff from mod^
Code:
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  • would be a good idea to get a 1920x1200 bg, also i'm pretty sure i've already seen another map with this bg lol i could consider. but atm, the set is 12,7 mb so i want to keep that number a bit low for now
  • be careful with where you add NCs, for example: reworked nc of both of the chorus
    01:15:493 (1) - 03:24:363 (1) - and 01:32:188 (4) - 03:13:928 (4) - ,
    01:19:667 (3,1) - 03:18:102 (3,1) - and 01:28:015 (1,3) - , etc
    you should stay consistent with your choices
  • 05:00:283 - to be honest i don't really understand what you're following here, looks like a mix of guitar/drums but it's really inconsistent throughout, i believe this part could use being more structured, and more personally i'd like to see more emphasis on the guitar since this is the solo i guess i followed the general rhythm of the song. illl consider reworking some of the parts to maybe emphasize stuff better
  • 05:35:838 - same here I guess, I have no idea what warrants a 1/4 slider to be mapped or not same
  • 06:20:283 (6,1) - switch NC fix
  • 06:25:560 (5) - should be a slider for consistency fix

Overall I think this is a pretty good map, plays well and looks good, that's why we chose it after all. Not much to mod really.
However I feel like some of the ideas could have been more defined and consistent, that's my only real problem with it.

Anyway that's all from me, good luck!


Thanks for the mod!
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    amazing map

  • 00:10:536 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - From the start, you're focusing both drums and guitars because they have similar intensities, and so the player understands that....but at this moment the guitar have different intensities based on the tunes of the notes he used and the jumps aren't emphasizing them properly because of that first slider you put because the sliders should actually be placed on the red ticks (just like you did with 00:11:189 (5) - ) so the rythm gets a bit ''confused'' based on the structure you had, you can see that this will be more instinctive and loyal if you make 1 become a single note and make a 1/2 slider starting at 00:10:667 - the ''lick'' of the guitar sound represented by 00:10:928 (3) - will feel better on the gameplay
  • 00:11:449 (1) - for similar reasons as stated above, this will feel/sound better if you make it a single note and make a 1/2 slider at 00:11:580 - . all the guitar licks will feel better on the slider and intensity will fit perfectly on the jumpy single notes :3 (in case you agree with both opinions you could try something similar on the next sections with the same transitions as this one which I highly suggest since the guitar licks makes the rythm a bit confusing and ''hollow'' with the current notes....they have the proper intensity and the proper ''rythm'', but they don't really follow the guitar that well which causes trouble to ''feel'' it)
  • 00:30:884 (4) - I suggest you adjust to something like this (similar to other movements you made) because the current motion that this 4 gives feels kinda ''clustered'' and doesn't give a nice transition and intensity to 00:31:145 (5) - and also ''breaks'' a little the flow logic you used for all the other similar 1/2 sliders after 3/4
  • 01:16:015 (6) - Ctrl + G here and Ctrl + G 01:16:276 (7) - here ? these motions will feel better, you could either do that or change the slider shapes a bit to fit your structure better with these motions
  • 02:02:319 (5,6,1) - this feels too sudden in gameplay, I suggest placing 6 somewhere else to give proper feedback of motions for the slider 1

    Bergy

  • 02:51:102 (1) - they're fine but they're too hard to know how to play even if you memorize them, they're too unexpected, I'd suggest that on this particular moment you use really weak and cold combo colors for the slow slider and a strong and hot color for the fast ones for feedback
  • 03:50:710 (1) - This reverse doesn't feel good on the music because of the main riff sound, I suggest removing the reverse and make something clickable


incredible map and really fun, my only complain I would say...it's the last 2 minutes that literally plays the same, even though at some point a guitar starts, I know that the song is calm and don't really change much, but some variety could go well there, although it's technically fine the way it is :p


In case it was helpfull, feel free to always ask more mods in the future :D

peace :roll:
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  • 02:51:102 (1) - they're fine but they're too hard to know how to play even if you memorize them, they're too unexpected, I'd suggest that on this particular moment you use really weak and cold combo colors for the slow slider and a strong and hot color for the fast ones for feedback considering colorhaxing wasn't used in the rest of the song, it doesn't make sense to use it here. Plus, they have really weird slider shapes and new combos for a reason.
  • 03:50:710 (1) - This reverse doesn't feel good on the music because of the main riff sound, I suggest removing the reverse and make something clickable it's not rly emphasized in any way, reverse is fine here




did change some slider shape stuff a lil (code is too big for osu forums):
https://pastebin.com/4EhQRV2e
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Seto Kousuke wrote:
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    David


    amazing map

  • 00:10:536 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - From the start, you're focusing both drums and guitars because they have similar intensities, and so the player understands that....but at this moment the guitar have different intensities based on the tunes of the notes he used and the jumps aren't emphasizing them properly because of that first slider you put because the sliders should actually be placed on the red ticks (just like you did with 00:11:189 (5) - ) so the rythm gets a bit ''confused'' based on the structure you had, you can see that this will be more instinctive and loyal if you make 1 become a single note and make a 1/2 slider starting at 00:10:667 - the ''lick'' of the guitar sound represented by 00:10:928 (3) - will feel better on the gameplay made sure that the louder pitched guitar sounds got more emphasized (reworked rhythm in some parts)
  • 00:11:449 (1) - for similar reasons as stated above, this will feel/sound better if you make it a single note and make a 1/2 slider at 00:11:580 - . all the guitar licks will feel better on the slider and intensity will fit perfectly on the jumpy single notes :3 (in case you agree with both opinions you could try something similar on the next sections with the same transitions as this one which I highly suggest since the guitar licks makes the rythm a bit confusing and ''hollow'' with the current notes....they have the proper intensity and the proper ''rythm'', but they don't really follow the guitar that well which causes trouble to ''feel'' it) fixed
  • 00:30:884 (4) - I suggest you adjust to something like this (similar to other movements you made) because the current motion that this 4 gives feels kinda ''clustered'' and doesn't give a nice transition and intensity to 00:31:145 (5) - and also ''breaks'' a little the flow logic you used for all the other similar 1/2 sliders after 3/4 ill consider maybe increasing spacing of 4 (then making it the other parts consistent), but im really happy with the current movements
  • 01:16:015 (6) - Ctrl + G here and Ctrl + G 01:16:276 (7) - here ? these motions will feel better, you could either do that or change the slider shapes a bit to fit your structure better with these motions fixed
  • 02:02:319 (5,6,1) - this feels too sudden in gameplay, I suggest placing 6 somewhere else to give proper feedback of motions for the slider 1 i tried reducing spacing so the transition feels smoother


incredible map and really fun, my only complain I would say...it's the last 2 minutes that literally plays the same, even though at some point a guitar starts, I know that the song is calm and don't really change much, but some variety could go well there, although it's technically fine the way it is :p i'll probably rework the last kiai like i said in previous mods


Nice mod! Thank you <3
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00:13:797 - Up until here your slider emphasis is random. Just for an example, I'd switch these 00:12:102 (5,6) - so the slider is on the stronger note.
00:19:015 (2) - Slightly off from 1.
00:34:145 (3,1) - Since 1 is an extension of 3, wouldn't it look nicer for them to be perfectly parallel?
01:07:276 (6,1) - Same situation with the slider emphasis. It's more accurate to put the sliders on the held notes.
01:30:754 (1,2,3,4,5) - The pattern goes against the flow of the player. Try ctrl+g on 1 and 2 then the same on 3 and 4. Move 5 where 1 is.
02:00:623 (1) - Random whistle?
02:48:102 (1) - For the guitar and any other similar ones I'd shorten it to the 1/2 measure where it actually ends, because it doesn't extend as long as this slider does.
02:51:102 (1,2,3) - These are the only extended sliders that're supported by the music
03:52:667 (5) - Because of the temporary muscle memory you established here, this note was surprising because it wasn't under the head of the previous slider.
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- 00:30:884 (4) - that clap feels kinda off thou.. it sounds more on 00:30:901 - imo
- 00:55:928 (4) - ^ same situation
- 01:00:623 (1) - how about stacking this on 00:59:449 (4) - head? plays more intuitive!!!
- 01:53:319 (1,2,3,4) - this is like hajimete u doing 4 notes stacked and that makes it weird.. really prefer to change it with spacing use wwww
- 02:06:754 (8) - stack on 02:05:449 (8) - head? looks nice
- 02:12:623 (7) - feels off
- 02:42:232 - why you don't map this? aaa
- 02:49:015 (2) - try maybe ctrl G ? plays more funnier !!!
- 03:05:971 (7,8) - vs 01:15:884 (5,6) - compare spacing :thinking:
- 03:20:058 (4,5,6,1) - not really sure about this... looks really egdy to play dude xd
- 04:05:319 (1,2) - em reep flow..... 04:05:319 (1) - if you ctrl G this it would plays a lot of better than you have actually
- 04:12:623 (1,2) - 04:13:536 (2,3) - pls
- 06:03:060 (1) - remove nc, cause i don't see u using additional nc, only following to downbeat

somehow reminds me of https://osu.ppy.sh/s/412270 maybe cause patterns like 03:13:536 (2,3,4) -

good luck, cool map!
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